[Rated R] Bitter Sweet PART 4

Discussion in 'Incomplete Fiction' started by Saifah, Feb 28, 2011.

  1. Saifah

    Saifah bite me x___

    NOTE: SiNCE i'VE BEEN SiCK, i'VE BEEN WATCHiNG A LOT OF TORTURE PORN FLiCKS SUCH AS WRONG TURN, THE HiLLS HAVE EYES, SAW, CAPTiViTY, HOSTAGE, CHAiN LETTER, AND ARE YOU SCARED. DON'T ASK LOL. i JUST FiND iT INTERESTiNG BECAUSE THE MORE YOU WATCH iT, THE FAKER iT SEEMS TO GET. ANYWAYS iM SUPER PSYCHED TO BE WRiTiNG MY FiRST YADECH FF. JUST BECAUSE THE TiTLE iS BiTTER SWEET DOESN'T MEAN iT'LL BE A SWEET STORY. THiS HAS NO SWEET iN iT AT ALL SO PREPARE YOURSELF.

    WARNING: THiS iS A RATED R FF AND iF YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE ABUSED, CUSSiNG, RAPED AND NUDITY, THEN YOU SHOULD NOT READ THiS FF.


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    INTRODUCTION:

    Following up on a local teenager, Amber Lynne Jacobs, who went missing last weekend while attending a sporting event at the school

    gymnasium.


    Amber Lynne is described as an Asian female 5’5” tall, 115LBS, Brown hair, and dark brown eyes.

    She was last seen wearing a white Abercrombie hoodie, blue jeans, and white Nike sneakers.

    Further information indicates Amber Lynne never made it back home. The case remains under investigation by the Rosewood Police/Sheriff’s

    office.

    If anyone has any information about this case, please call the Rosewood County Sheriff Department. We will be paying close attention to

    this case as well.



    Turning the television off, the man turn around and stared coldly at Amber who was chained up and duck tape over her mouth. The man walks

    over to her and she stared blankly at him with tears in her eyes and fear written all over her face. He smirks at her before leaving the

    room. Amber sobbed as she gazed around the dark, dirty room. Afraid and terrified, she rested her head against the steel cage she was

    sitting in.​
     
  2. Katerine

    Katerine Butterfly123

    hahaha :rofl: this made me Lool hahaha
    all those horror films scared me to death the first time i watch them lol but after awhile the become cheesey.

    i'm looking forward to this! will there be scary bits to??
     
  3. aikoden

    aikoden ♥DREAMER♥ Staff Member

    omg.. i dont know if i can take this.. esp. with yadech .. ahaha oh fah.. lol..

    anyways sounds interesting.. i realized i dont get scared from those movies anymore since i feel like theyre repetetive ahahaha..
     
  4. n_naruk

    n_naruk TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA

    The only :r-scene-pop-corn: that I can handle very well is the raped & nudity :blush:
    I can't handle horror, scary movies at all unless if I was watching it with friends but then again, this is just a story. I should be able to handle this since I was able to watch throughout the ghost scenes in Wayupak Montra
     
  5. Cupid Candy

    Cupid Candy sarNie Coma

    Now this is my cup of tea, I love creepy and disturbing things. LOL
     
  6. Joy

    Joy sarNie Hatchling

    i like sick and twisted things to,
    for 4 years in a row now, every october, all month long i drag my friends state to state, going to haunted attractions.

    but i wouldn't consider the movies you listed as porn though.
     
  7. maichi

    maichi sarNie Hatchling

    Oh that there will be more than this!! LOL!
    :p :)
     
  8. chubbycheeks

    chubbycheeks imma kick ur-ass-aya !

    lol Fah you crack me up, esp at your warnings. No matter what, I'm reading this for my Yadech and plus im curious about the storyline =]
     
  9. Saifah

    Saifah bite me x___

    PART ONE:


    “Somebody, anybody help meeeeeeeeeeee!” Amber screams from the top of her lungs but she knew better that nobody can save her now.

    “Hey!” The man growls. “Kept it down. Nobody can hear you anyways.” He spat at her, getting closer to the cage she was locked in.

    “Fuck you!” she fired back at him and spat on his face. The man was furious with how she retaliated towards. He opens the cage and knocked

    her out.


    Amber Lynne woke up hours later, tied up on a chair, staring at her own reflection in front of her. She then noticed something, she

    couldn’t move her mouth. She stared closely at the huge mirror in front of her.


    She screamed but nothing came out. It was more of a muffle. Her kidnapper had stitched her mouth shut.

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    She finally felt the pain afterwards. She heard footsteps coming closer and finally, he was before her with a smirk on his face.


    “This is what you get when you don’t listen to me.” he spoke to her in a soft voice. Amber Lynne continues to shake her head and tears

    rushing down her face. “Oh, this isn’t torture yet dear, you must feel the pain she felt before I let you die."


    He smashed her fingers with a wrench before pulling a piece of her nails off.

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    Amber tried to scream but she couldn’t. Her body shook.


    "Killing you is too easy.” He mention, before slamming the hammer down on the nails to Amber’s feet.

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    She screamed, once again, nothing came out. The pain, the agony, Amber just wanted to die. She stared at the blood gushing from the nails

    that soon formed a puddle around the chair. The pain in her eyes.

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  10. Katerine

    Katerine Butterfly123

    YAY update!!! LOVE ITT!!
    the second gif made me cringe the other two gifs where fine lol but the who pulling a nail out made me cringe haha
     
  11. maichi

    maichi sarNie Hatchling

    Ahhhhh scary!! Lol thanks fir the update! Please update soon!! :)
     
  12. chubbycheeks

    chubbycheeks imma kick ur-ass-aya !

    omg the gifs really set the mood for this ff. eek iunno if i can handle it lol. but thanks for the update fah!
     
  13. Cupid Candy

    Cupid Candy sarNie Coma

    Those GIFS were freaky as hell. I almost swallowed my mouthwash when looking at them.
     
  14. roselovesice

    roselovesice KAteam, BieNa, SeanEst, M&M, ZaYa, Arshi

    omg! That was horrific! lol so scary! I wonder what happened!
    Was the last gif from the movie "The Centipede?"
    anyways, can't wait to read more. keep it up :D
     
  15. Saifah

    Saifah bite me x___

    PART TWO:


    Amber sat in her cage, whimpering from the worst pain she had ever felt in her eighteen years of existence. She slowly unstitched her

    mouth, yelping and shook as she did. Her right hand was throbbing from the pain and worst, her feet.


    “Time to play again.” She heard her kidnapper’s voice, but before she could retaliate, he had already placed a wet towel splatter with

    chloroforms over her nose and mouth.


    She banged on the door. “Let me out!” she shrieked.


    She fell backwards onto something and screamed in pain. She was lying down on top of something. She opened her eyes and came face to face


    with a corpse. White eyeball, the corpse was blue and black.


    She quickly gets up and backed away from it. “No! This cannot be happening!”


    *FLASHBACK*


    “Just get in there!!” Amber ordered the sixteen year old.


    Hanna is a sweet sixteen year old girl that had always wanted to be popular. She had her eye on one particular senior, Amber Lynne. She

    began dressing like Amber, doing everything that Amber told her to do. Basically, she was Amber’s monkey.


    Amber and her friends prank Hanna. They lied to her, if she wanted to hang out with them and become one of them; she had to do everything

    that Amber says to do.


    Hanna crawled into the dark hole, and there lies someone’s corpse. She had to stay the night with it. Amber knew that Hanna has asthma and

    how this will affect her health in a horrible way. Did she care? No.


    “No, no, no, please don’t do this to me you guys.” Hanna cried but they shook their head.

    “IF you want to be one of us, you’ll have to do exactly what we tell you to do.” Amber replies in her most sarcastic voice. “Shut the

    door!” she orders one of her guy friends. Hanna pounded her hands against the door frantically, but they left her there.


    *END OF FLASHBACK*

    Amber cringe. Holding onto her knees, she rocked back and forth, staring fearfully at the corpse. All she can think about at that moment

    was Hanna. ​
     
  16. Katerine

    Katerine Butterfly123

    Yay update!! wow Amber was a bully at school! :nono1:
    i think i'm pleased that she thinking about Hannah felt! even though she had no torture like Amber...
    now i'm thinking is Hannah the torturer?
     
  17. Cupid Candy

    Cupid Candy sarNie Coma

    I think the person torturing Amber is someone who knows Hanna very well and cares for her so that person might be having revenge on Amber for Hanna.
     
  18. Saifah

    Saifah bite me x___

    PART THREE:


    It’s been nearly three months and there hasn’t been any follow up with Amber Lynne’s case. Police has now called off the search.


    Amber’s mother shook her head, burying her face into her husband’s chest. “She’s alive. I know she is.” Amber’s mom mumbles.

    “I know.” Her father replies.


    ----


    Amber kicked the door again.


    “Fuck you mother fucker!” She shrieks. “You’re a fuckin pussy!” she roars, giving another hard kick to the door.

    Her kidnapper watched her with joy in his eyes.

    “Anything else you’d like to add?” he asks.

    “Fuck you!” she spat. “Just fuckin kill me you fuckin pussy!” Amber demanded with tears in her eyes.

    He chuckles, unlocking the door, “Amber Lynne, popular high school girl. You had everything you ever wanted and yet you took an innocent

    life away.” He stated.

    “I didn’t do anything!” she replies.

    “Let’s go!” he grab a hold of her hair and dragged her to another room.


    [Pretend the room is white and dirty with a huge mirror in front of Amber and a tv.]
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    The exact room she was nailed down to a month ago. The blood was still visible. He sat her down in the exact same chair and tied her up.

    He left.

    Hours later, Amber woke up still tied to the chair. A clown sat in front of her. She was startled to see it. Her deepest fear was clown.

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    “Watch.” The man told her. He flips the television. It brought tears to Amber when she saw Hanna pop up on the screen.

    Television:

    School journalism: so Hanna, what’s the best thing you like about high school so far?

    Hanna smiles and replies “everything. I’m not a negative person.. I love my friends, I love my teachers, I love coming to school

    everyday.”

    School’s journalism: what/who keeps you motivated to come to school everyday.

    Without hesitation, Hanna replies “Amber Lynne. She’s the sweetest person on campus. I don’t even know but I absolutely adore her.”

    School journalism: Amber, what’s the best thing you like about high school so far?

    “Because I’m a goddess here and everyone is my bitch.” Amber replies with a smirk.

    School journalism: what/who keeps you motivated to come to school everyday?

    Amber replies, “Fuck school. I hate high school and every single one of you. I hope you all die and burn in hell.”



    “Tsk, tsk, tsk,…” he walks around her and stood behind her.

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    “What did Hanna see in you?”

    “Please,” Amber pleaded, “I’m scared.”

    “You should be because I have more sick twisted thing to torture you with.” He scolded and she wince. “But you’re well aware of that aren’t

    you?” He left Amber in the torture room, or at least that’s what she calls it.​
     
  19. chubbycheeks

    chubbycheeks imma kick ur-ass-aya !

    sank q for the update fah!
     
  20. Katerine

    Katerine Butterfly123

    OMGGG!!! love it so far!!
    wow Ambers really big headed...
    now i'm thinking this has got to be hanna's brother or someone who loved her... coz i would do that for someone i loved (i know i got a sick mind LOOL)
     

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