Retribution (FFM&M)

YinGgyTASTIC

sarNie Adult
This Trailer is the part when San realize what he is doing is wrong.​
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Retribution
- Punishment that is considered to be morally right and fully deserved
Starring : Mark Prin - San Printhip​
Mint Chalida - Nit Lida​
Guests : Noona Sopon - Pa Sopon ( Mark's Girlfriend )​
Boy P. - Boy P. Lida ( Mint's P'chai)​
 ​
A little piece to the story : San Printhip was the happiest man alive. He was going to marry his beloved Fiance, Pa Sopon. But on the day before his
wedding
everything changed. It
was getting dark and San was waiting for Pa to get her dress. San was
getting tired because he was waiting in his car. So he decide to adjust
his car seat. Right when he is adjusting his car seat he heard someone
shouting his name. San looked up and saw Pa walking toward San car. San
waved. Pa heard a car braking and looked at her left. The car that was
braking hit Pa  and stop at the corner of the street. San was
devastated. He quickly got out of his car and ran toward Pa. San went to
hug her, calling for help, crying. Until he hears footsteps coming
towards him. He looked up and that was the first time he met Nit.
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Summary : Nit was the driver of course. San blamed Nit for the lost of his love so he plot to punish Nit. ​
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Do you want to know why Nit hit Pa? Do you want to know what cruel things San did to Nit?​
Do you want to know what happen over in San cabin deep in the woods? and why is Boy P part of this fan fiction? --- > LOL​
And importantly why is there cops involved? Hint* Someone try to kill and its between the main characters.  KEKE​
 

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sarNie Adult
Lol yupp.. What the people above said. But I can't wait to read it when I have time. I also have to write mine's too. :) Update soon.
 

YinGgyTASTIC

sarNie Adult
Ep. 1
 
S: San
P: Pa
 
As waiting patiently for his fiancé to get out of the fitting
room he walked to the wide tall mirror in front of him.  He made a sexy twirl and pointed at the
mirror.

S : Oh! Dam who this sexy man?

All he thinks about was how nice he looked in his white
suit. He went closer to the mirror and retouches his sky blue bow tie. He smiled
with his teeth, showing the mirror how sexy he was.


 
P : Ayy San, how do I look?

 
San look in the mirror and see his bride walking out wearing
her white puffy long dress holding a case of white flowers with an orange
string attach around the white flowers. She titled her head a bit to the right and gave San the biggest smiled she ever had.


 
He turns around and stared at her for minutes.
He smiled with satisfies as like his eyes and mouth drooling all over her. 

She looked at San and walked closer to him. She
waved in front of his face.

 
P : San? San?
 
She laughed and wiped the drools that were coming out of San
mouth. San snap out of his weird stage and grab the hand that was wiping his
drools.

 
S : Pa, I am the luckiest man alive. You are so beautiful.
 
Pa smiled and looked up the cellar and gently hit San on the
head.

 
P : Your crazy!
 
S: Ouch! Ouch! Please don’t hurt me? (San giving Pa the puppy
eyes.)

 
 
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N: Nit
B : Boy
C : Crew



There were cameras everywhere shooting at a men walking out
of the black Mercedes. He smiled at the cameras where the workers were telling
him to go inside the hotel. He looked at the boy standing near his car and
threw him his keys.  



B : Ay, please park my car in the back please.


The boy nodded. Then he went inside the hotel. The boy drove
his car half way and parked his car. The boy looked at his right and left and
signaled some guys to come closer to him.



The guys knocked on the window. The boy scrolls down the
window and whisper something to the guys. The guys nodded and the boy gave the
guys the keys. The boy got out of the car and the guy drove it away. Something
was fishy about this boy.



As the worker was leading a path for him to walk he realize
that a young lady running over to him, yelling for him.



N : P’ Boy! P’ Boy.


Boy smiled. The young lady hugged him.


B : Nit!! You shouldn’t be running in the hotel like this. You
are the assistant CEO here.



N : Will I’m sorry for missing my grumpy big brother.

Boy and Nit smiled at each other

and started walking up to the office.
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S: San

P: Pa
 
Pa walked out of the fitting room and carried her wedding
dress where San flipping through magazine. San noticed Pa walking out so he
laid the magazine and walked to Pa.



S : Let me grab that for you love!


P : Aha, silly you don’t have too.


S : Ay, I just want what best for my wife.


Pa smiled and watched San walking to the cashier.


San walked back towards Pa.


S : I’ll be back later to pick you up ok.  You wait for our photos to be ready.


San pinched Pa cheeks and kissed her right cheek.


P: Hurry ok!


San smiled right back at Pa and ran outside giving Pa the
thumbs up.



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B: Boy
N: Nit
Bb: The mysteries boy
 
 
N : Brother its getting late, we should go home?
 
B: Its fine you go on ahead?
 
N : But P’ , I didn’t drive my car today. I told nanny to
drop me off work today because I wanted to ride back home with you?

 
Boy went to his little sister and poked her left shoulder.
 
B : Ay, who fault is it?
 
N: Hey, you’re so mean!
 
Boy laughed.
 
B: Nit, P’ is very sorry but he have a lot of work to do.
But P’ when let you drive his car?



N : But how you going to come home later?
 
B: Don’t worry about me. I have an extra car.
 
N : Which car than?
 
Boy search in his pocket and grabbed his keys to the black Mercedes.
Nit grabbed the key and left Boy office.



Nit went to find Boy car in the back. She looked everywhere
for the car until she went to the near end to see her brother car. She un lock
the car and started the engine. She putted on her seat belt and drove off. By
the corner the boy from earlier walked up. He grabs his cellphone.

 
Bb: Boss, he didn’t get in the car but his little sister
did? What should we do? OK. Ok. I understand.


 

The boy hung up the phone and
walked away.


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S: San
P: Pa
N: Nit


San parked his car far away from the shop. He can see his finance
clearly. He adjusts his seat because he was getting very tired. But then he realizes
Pa was walking out of the shop. He quickly stood back up and waved at Pa. He
smiled with happiness.



Nit was driving her by and saw a women just standing in the middle
of the road. She pushes her horns and tried to brake. She realizes that her brake
wasn’t working. No matter how hard she steps on the brakes, the car won’t stop.



Pa hears the car horns and looked to her left. San also
looking to his right and realize the car also. San got out of his car and
yelled.



S: PA! Get out of the way!!!!


But when Pa look back at San and had taken 1 step the car
ran over her.



The car went to hit the light pole be hide Pa and San.


San came rushing to Pa. San feel the puddles of bloods
around Pa and cried his heart out. San hugged Pa with her blood everywhere.



S: Pa,your going to be ok. Please! Please! Don’t leave me. I
love you na! I love you!



Pa looked up at San touching San right cheeks. Pa slowly
closed her eyes and San watched her hand dropping down to the ground. All the
sounds around him stop. All he can hear is his heart, beating,beating.



S: PAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don’t leave me!


Nit came back from the hit on her head. She opens the car
door and walked out. She heard a loud manly cried. Nit touching,  feeling her injury head and turned to the guy
that was crying. At first her eyes sight was very blurry. Then she regains her
vision back. She sees a man hugging something. Then she took a closer look and
see that a hand was hanging out with blood dripping.



Nit walk to the guy.


N: This can be. This can be!


San heard a lady voice. San looked up and see a head injury
lady. San stares at her with anger and yelled at her.



S: MOVE!!!!!! AWAY!!!!!!!! LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Nit looked down at him, moved her hair out of her face. San
study her face.



N: I’m sorry! I didn’t mean too!


San open his eyes wide open and from that point on he knows
that that lady was the one that killed his wife.



Then Nit head started hurting again and her vision become
blurry again. San can see that the lady was going to faint. He looks at her and
watched her faint in front of him. He didn’t care for her and went back to Pa.



S: PA! PA!PA!

 

 
 

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EP 2.
 
S: San
P: Pa
F1: One of the movers
F2: Second of the of the movers


Before the accidents …………


S : I’ll be back later to pick you up ok.  You wait for our photos to be ready.


San pinched Pa cheeks and kissed her right cheek.


P: Hurry ok!


San smiled right back at Pa and ran outside giving Pa the
thumbs up.


San went inside his car and drove off to theirs’ place; San
rushed to his car trunk, grabbing all the white and skied blue balloons. He
closes his car trunk and went inside. He decorated the living room with the
balloons he bought. Then he hears the doorbell ring. He smiled.


S: It must be the decorators.


He went to open the door. Someone pushed him to the wall.


F2: Ay, stay back! Stay back!


San looked surprises at how much things was coming in. All
he was doing is moving his eyes back and forth, looking at the furniture that
was coming in.


S: Set of romantic table? The dozens of roses? Whooow, did I
order that much?


San checked his watch.


S: Oh dam, it have been this long already? I need to go pick
up Pa.


San look at the guys.


S: Ay, I have to go pick up my wife. You guys better be gone
when I get back! I want…..


F1: SEXY TIME!


Whiling blurting that, the guy was hugging himself and
making kisses noises.


San and the second guys looked at each with their noises
twitching up.


S: Okay, please be gone be….fore I I come back.


San slowly walked out and drove his car.


The second guys look at the first guy. The first guy was
still kissing himself. The second got disgusted and hit the first guy on the
head.


F1: Ouch! Why you hit my head!


F2: Idiot! We’re hired to make this place to romantic not to
make it haunted!


F1: But he said…




F2: Yea..Yea.. Let’s finish and
go before boss cut our tips!

 


S: San


N: Nit


San parked his car far away from the shop. He can see his
finance clearly. He adjusts his seat because he was getting very tired. But
then he realizes Pa was walking out of the shop. He quickly stood back up and
waved at Pa. He smiled with happiness.


Nit was driving by and sees a women just standing in the
middle of the road. She pushes her horns and tried to brake. She realizes that
her brake wasn’t working. No matter how hard she steps on the brakes, the car
won’t stop. She tried to turn. But her turn was too late. She hit her with her
car right before she hit the light pole be hide.


San came rushing to Pa. He stopped, froze for a spit second
and stepped on the puddles of blood that was coming from Pa. He knell down to
the puddles of blood and hugged Pa.


S: PAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PA! PA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


All the sounds around him stop. All he can hear was his
heart, beating.


Thump! Thump! Thump!


 Nit came back from
the hit on her head. She opens the car door and walked out. Nit sees a guy
hugging someone that was supposedly down in the ground. She moves her head
right to left and notice her vision blurry in and back. She got closer to the
guy.


San looked up and see a head injury lady. San stares at her
with anger and yelled at her.


S: MOVE!!!!!! AWAY!!!!!!!! LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Then Nit head started hurting again and her vision become
blurry again. Nit fainted in front of San.




S: PA! PA! PA!


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S: San
 
NU: Nurses-


S: Pa! Your going to be ok! Please! Please!


San rushed to the ER, holding Pa hand. One of the nurses
turned back and pulled him from going inside the ER.


N: I’m sorry sir but you can’t enter the ER.


S: SHE IS MY WIFE!!


San said with anger and sadness.  The nurse still pulled him back.


N: I understand. I will come back and tell you the details.




San watched the nurse enter the
ER. He walked to the ER door and punched the door and holding his head, moving
left and right.

 
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NU: Nurses
B: Boy


Boy running to the ER and sees that there was a nurse coming
out of the ER!


B: Nurse! Is my little sister going to be ok?


Nu: At this moment the doctor is stitching up her head
wounds. But she is in good condition just that she will feel dizzy because she
bumped her head pretty hard.


B: Thank you!


Boy looking at the ER door whiling the nurse walking away.


B: Nit! Stay strong!




Then Boy hears footsteps coming
be hide his back. He turned back and was shock at what was in front of him or
should I say whom.

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S: San
D: Doctor


San sits in the chair and sees the ER door open. San rush to
the doctor.


The doctor looks at San with sorrow.


D: I am sorry, today I wasn’t able to revive your wife back
to you. She had left us.


San couldn’t believe these words.


S: Doc, your just playing around right! Please tell me she
still here!


San shakes the doctor. The doctor nodded his head no and
walked pass San.




San look at the ER door and ran
inside.

 
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B: Boy
P: Police
N: Nit


R: Rin ( Boy’s laywer)


Boy looking the police with disbelief.


B:  Someone cut the
brake in my car?


P: Yes, that is why your sister had this accident.


Then a guy with a work bag rushed running toward Boy.


The guy went into the conversation.


R: Hi! I am Mr.  And
Ms. P. Lida lawyer.


Boy turns to Rin.


P : Also the victim that your sister ran over had passed
away.


Boy : This can’t be right? Will she be charge?


P : We went through and sees that it was an accident. She
won’t be charge but you will have to talk to the husband.


Boy looked relief.


B: Ok. Thank you.


The police walked away.


Boy turns to Rin.


B: Please go talk to the husband. I am very sorry about his
lost. Tell him I am willing to pay for anything.


R: Krup!


Rin walks away from Boy.


Boy turns back and went inside the ER.


He walks in front of Nit. Boy patted her head. Nit feels it
and opens her eyes.


N: P’ Boy!


Nit started crying.


N : I didn’t mean to kill someone! I didn’t mean to kill
her! I didn’t mean too!


Boy hugged Nit and patted her back.


B: It’s ok! It’s ok! I know you didn’t mean too. Your safe
and that is all that matters to me.




Nit crying to Boy while Boy
confronting her.

 
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R: Rin
S: San


San walked out of the ER and sees a men coming toward him.


R: Excuse me sir? Are you Mr. Printhip?


S: Yes, why would you ask?


R: I am Ms. Lida lawyer and I have requests from her older
brother.


San look at Rin with hatred.


S: GO away! I don’t want to do anything with those people!


R: But Mr. Lida is willing to pay for your lost!


S: Can he bring my wife back to life!!! HUH!!!!


Rin looked down.


R: No but Ms…


S: Please! Take your money elsewhere.




San pushes Rin out of his way
and walked to the doctors and nurses.

 
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S: San
N: Nurses
B: Boy
N: Nit

 
S: Nurse! Can I please see the papers?

 
The nurses look up at San and replied.


N: Yes.


San writing down on the papers and hears some of the nurses
gossiping about their patients.


N1: Did you today I saw a very tall handsome guy. Sadly he
had a girlfriend that had a head injury.


N2: No, he is her older brother! She was driving his car and
accidently hit a woman in the street.


N1: Really!


N2: Yes, I know this because I heard the cops talking about
it myself.


San handled back the papers to one of the nurse and slowly
walking away.


N1: Oh, I have a call going back to her room.


The nurse stood up and started walking San way. San decided
to follow the nurse. He followed the nurse all the way until she enters the ER.


He looks and stares. Then the ER doors open and he hide be
hide the walls. Boy walked out and grab his cellphone.


B: Nay, please bring a car to the hospital. I would like Nit
to stay at our house for treatment. I don’t her being here alone.


Then Boy walked away.


San didn’t get to see Boy face because he was hiding behide
the walls. All he sees is Boy’s back.


San walk out. The ER door opens again. San went back to the
walls. Nit was sitting in a wheel chair and was pushed by the nurse. San peek
out and see Nit. He glared at Nit. Then Nit was long gone away from him. He steps
out.


S: So you “ Accidently” run over Pa.?

 
It wasn’t a friendly said. It was more like evil said.




1 week later

 
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M: Mai ( Nit Friend)
N: Nit
B: Boy

 
M: Ay you should be feeling better! I will be back from Rome
soon. I promise when I came back to Thailand I will visit you at the beach
house.


Nit smiled whiling tiny chatting with Mai.


N: I’m ok, don’t worry. I do miss my best friend though.


M: Ok, I got to go now! KISS.


N: Bye.


Nit phone was ringing. She picked up her cell phone and
answered.


N: Yes, P’Boy?


B: If you go be safe ok! If any men dare touch you call big
brother right away!!!!


N: OK! Don’t worry! Bye.


Nit hung up the phone and touched her tiny scratch mark in
her right top head.




N: Nit stop! You need to stop
thinking about that day! It been weeks now! Let it go! Nit,  breathe in and breathe out.


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S: San
 
J: Jouy ( San maid)


A: Person in the phone call


San grab another bottle of his beer cans and drink. He
stared at PA pictures.


S: Why! Why you have you left me? Why? Was I a bad person?


J: Khun San! Khun San!


Someone running to San….


J : Wow, so much beer cans. Khun San, you have a phone call.


S: Tell them to stop calling me! Can’t you see I’m busy!!!


J: But its about her.


San stood up.


S: What about her?


San went to talk on the phone.


S: Hello? Who this?


A:  Khun San, She is
doing better you can bring her back home.


S: Thank you, I’ll pick her up today.


San hung up on the phone.


S: Jouy!!


Jouy run to the living room.


J: Yes?




S: Please go get her room ready
for her. She is coming back. She is finally coming back.

 
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N: Nit

 
Nit runs to her cabin. She can smell the pine trees and
dandelions.


N: It’s good to be back. Oh, I can hear the water fall. I’m
going over there!!


Nit grabs her back pack and went to the waterfall.


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S: San


D: Driver


S: Please take her back to my cabin ok. She all I have left!
If something happen to her I will kill you!


D: OK, boss. But you’re not going home yet?


S: No, I want to go to the water fall.


D: Why?


S: I want to go pick up Pa’s favorite flowers.


D: Oh yea, I forgot she loved those flowers.


S: Yea, I was thinking of going to see her today.


D: Ok, boss, please come back home safe ok.


San gave the driver a slightly smile.




The driver drove off. San
started walking to the waterfall.

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S: San
N: Nit


N: Wow, the flowers here are so pretty!


Nit grabs all the flowers and walked deeper to the
waterfall.


San went to the waterfall and looked everywhere for the
flowers. He sees none.


S: That weird, it like someone picked them up already.


San hears a giggle laugh from deeper in the water fall.


Nit was trying to catch the butterflies flying around the
waterfall. San can see a lady running around the waterfall.


S: That weird?


Then Nit turns her face to San views. San eyes got bigger.


S: It can’t be!


San having flash back about Pa death. He starts to hear his
heart beats again, nothing else but his heart beat.


San let down some tears and crunched his fists together. HE
didn’t think of anything and went down his pocket and found a handkerchief. He
remembers that morning that when he was drinking he was also wiping Pa’s
pictures with rubbing alcohol.  


San walk closer behide Nit.


Nit still unaware of what was happening was still reaching
for the butterflies. Then San cover her mouth with his handkerchief and Nit
started to fight back. Nit didn’t elbow back and hit San on the stomach. Nit
turns back to look at who it is. Nit eyes open wide and realize it was the guy
from that night.


N: Khun..




Said Nit,  whiling slowly knocking out. San grab her and
carried her to his cabin.

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S: San
N: Nit
J: Jouy


San carried Nit all the way to his cabin, took her to his
room and yelled out….


S: JOUY~!!!


J: Yessss……


Jouy came inside and sees that San was with another woman in
his room.


J: Oh, Khun San, why didn’t you tell me you are doing..


S: Stop it! GO get me my keys for the long handcuff keys.


J: But!


S: GO GET IT NOW!!


J: OK ok!


Jouy walk out of his room.


J: Why would boss tell me to get his keys for the leg cuffs?


San thinking to himself.


S: Why did I do this? Why did I bring this woman to my house?
My bed, just for my pleasure? Stop it! Stop it! You should not feel bad for a
person like her. She tried to bid you with her money and she killed PA! I
should not give her sympathy.


Then Nit started moving, Nit open her eyes and sees that San
was looking down at her.


Nit kicked San down on the floor and tried to run away. San
quickly grabs Nit left ankle, making Nit to 
trip. San went quickly on top of her, holding her down. Nit tries to
move but she couldn’t. She was a women and he was a men. Nit can sees that San
was using his all to pin her down. She sees his veins popping out of his necks
and his biceps. Nit got scare.


N: Let me go! What are you doing to ME!!


S: I am not letting you anymore!!!


N: Anymore?!!!


Jouy walked in and see San holding down Nit hands to the
floor, pining her down. San saw Jouy and let go of Nit, stood up and carried
her to his bed.


S: Hurry give it to me!


J: Khun San,, but. HURRY!!!!


Jouy gave San the key and the cuffs. San quickly cuff Nit’s
hand  to the top of the bed, between the
bars. 


S: Jouy go get me the other cuff also. GO!!


Jouy ran out, confused.


N: What are you doing to me! I don’t deserve this! Lwt me
go!


San fiercely pushed Nit to the bed. He then pin her down
again. San got on top of Nit.


N: What. What are you doing?


Said Nit, looking to her right.


S: On that day you decided you destiny. Retribution!


N: Retribution?


Nit was confused.


 S: From this day on
you is my pleasure!! You are my slave and that! is what you own me when you
killed my wife.


N: IT was an accident.


San pushes Nit harder to his bed.


S: STOP!!!!! IT was not an accident!! You did it on purpose!


Nit started crying and San stops and stared at her tears. He
can feel that his heart is aching.


San got up and look at Nit lying in bed, useless. San went
outside and lock his room.


San froze for a bit and thought to himself.


S: She deserves it!


Jouy run back to San and sees that he was outside of his
room.


J: Khun San, Is there something wrong?


San looked up a Jouy with a surprise.


S: Jouy, don’t let this women out!


J: Why?


S: Because.. hum because…. Just do what I say ok!


J: Okai, boss.


San walking away where Jouy listening to the room.


J: Is she alive or dead?


Nit cried  to herself,
 lying in San’s bed. Then she hears a loud
thump from the other room. She sit up and tried to listen to the next room. But
she could use her left hand because it was cuffed.  All she hears was


Thump!Thump!Thump!


 
 

narkrakdin24^^

sarNie Adult
San: "You is my pleasure!" Oho! Yes, she will be. When you start to love her, she's your heart's pleasure and desire ja. Lol!! Thx for updating. Hmm.. So also a mix of Jam Loey Ruk?
 

nklue1

sarNie Adult
Thanks for updating, cant wait to see wat happens next
 

YinGgyTASTIC

sarNie Adult
narkrakdin24^^ said:
San: "You is my pleasure!" Oho! Yes, she will be. When you start to love her, she's your heart's pleasure and desire ja. Lol!! Thx for updating. Hmm.. So also a mix of Jam Loey Ruk?
 
Aha I know! I keep rereading that part. I didn't know I was that awesome keke. Yes it will be a  mix of Jam Loey ruk.
 
nklue1 said:
Thanks for updating, cant wait to see wat happens next
I am glad you are reading it. I will keep it up :)
 
YaMaMiKi said:
Liking This Fan Fic ALOTTTT
Update Soon
 
lol I will soon :D
Bieluvr said:
Smae here, Liking this ff a lot. Mark is so... you know, agressive? Ooh his words. :)
 
lol I have alayies wish he played an aggresive role. lol
thatsouthernasianchick said:
If Roy Adeed Haeng Rak was to be remade, I'm submitting a request for Mint C. and Mark Prin. ;)
 
ahaha me too! They would be perfect haha
 
 

YinGgyTASTIC

sarNie Adult
EP 3
 
S: San
N: Nit


The sun was rising up and birds were singing. Nit smiled in
her sleep. She hasn’t accepts that truth that she was held capture locked in San
room. Nit sleeping on the left side of her body, dreaming.



In Nit
dream….



N: Wow, this waterfall is so pretty.


Nit ran to the waterfall and picked the water with her hands
and flipping them to the air.  Then Nit
decided to walk to the fall. For some reason she couldn’t resist herself to go
under the water. It’s like the water was pulling her in.



Back to
reality…..



San walked towards Nit, unlock her from the handcuff carry
her outside to the yard.



In Nit
dream….



N: My left hand feels very light.


Back to
reality……..



San carried Nit all the way to the waterfall. He looks at
her.



S: This is easier than I thought.


Nit
dream….



 N: I’m going  to go swim now.


Then Nit went into the water and started swimming.


Back to
reality…..



San now was at the edge part of the fall. He carry Nit to
the pond and threw her into the water.



In Nit
dream…



Nit still swimming in her dream, than she thought to herself
,



N: WAIT!!! I can’t SWIM!!!


Back to
Reality…



Nit woke up from her sleep and realizes she was indeed under
the water. She tried to push herself up.



San just looked at her moving around in the water. IT didn’t
come to San that Nit didn’t know how to swim.



S: Aha this will never make you want to sleep every again.


Nit was losing oxygen. She finally made up to the top of the
pond. San laughed.



S: Aha you’re finally awake!


Nit struggles to stay up and yelled for help.


N: Help! Help!


San put his hands on his hips.


S: Oh don’t play a fool like that in front of me.


But then San started to look a bit worry.


N: Help! Help! Help! I can’t swim! Help!


San look at Nit struggling to breathe air.


S: Aha, ok! You supposedly don’t know how to swim fine I
guess my work is done. I’m going to let you died here.



San walked away from Nit. Nit can see that San was walking
away from her. No matter how much she yelled for his help he didn’t care about
her. Nit finally gave up and slowly sunk down to the bottom of the pond.



Nit
saying things in her head….



P’boy, farewell…..


Right when Nit eyes was about to close she feel the vibe of
the water differently. It like someone had added more weight to the waterfall
pond. But she couldn’t hold her breathe anymore so she faded.



San swim toward Nit and grabbed Nit’s shoulders, moving her
back and forth. San grab Nit head and started giving her oxygen. San put his
lips against Nit’s lips, breathing in and out between both of their mouths. Nit
open her eyes and realize it was San that was giving her mouth to mouth under
water. Nit pushes San away but San shook his head no and put his arms around
Nit body, swimming up to get air.





Finally both reach air and San
swimming to the edge of the waterfall pond and dragging Nit to the ground. San
took a long breath. Nit also took a long breath.


 
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N: Nit


S: San


T: Touirst


Nit look at San and walked towards San.


N:  What were you
thinking? Throwing me into the pond like that! You know I don’t know how to
swim!



San look up at Nit.


S: So what! I wanted you to die anyway!


Nit looked fierce at San.


N: If you wanted me to died that much than why didn’t you
let me drown! Why didn’t you hand cuff something heavy under my feet and let me
drown! Huh! Huh!



San rubbed his teeth together like he was going to bite
someone.



Nit look at San and looked be hide San.  Nit see tourist and yelled,


N: HELP! HELP! I’m HELD CAPTURE! HELP!


San look be hide him and sees some of the tourist coming their
way.  San had to think of a quick plan if
he still wants Nit lock at his place.



The tourist came closer and closer.


San look at Nit.


N: Help! Help! Help na!


The tourist ran toward San and Nit.


San quickly grab Nit body and went to grab her head. He put
his lips on Nit lips once more. Nit eyes open wide open and tried to escape
from San. But San wouldn’t let her move. The tourist came to them.



T: Is everything ok?


San let go of Nit and turn around to the tourist.


S: Oh! Nothing wrong sir! My wife and I was just fooling
around here.



The tourist smiled.


T: Will be careful.


Nit just stands there, still and stiff. She slowly went to
touch her lips.



The tourist looks over Nit and walked back to the group and
walked away. One of the tourists was taking pictures of the view of the
waterfall.



Sans turns back around to Nit and stare at her.


S: Aha, what the problem? Can’t get enough of my kisses?


San went closer to Nit. Nit drops her hand and moved her
other hand to slap San in the face.



San feel the pain from Nit slap on his left cheeks.


S: YOU ARE PUSHING IT!!!!


N: I’m going to tell you right now! I WILL NEVER! NEVER BE
YOUR TOY! I would rather die than be a mistress to you! Even if you had my
body, you will never GET my heart!!



San grab Nit arms.


S: Oh really? WHAT ABOUT ME THAN! HUH? You think you can
just give my money for the loss of my wife. You think money is going to make me
feel better! HUH!! HUH!!!



Said San. He went closer to Nit face. Nit can feel the saliva
that San was spitting out when he yell. Nits close her eyes.



S: SO are you willing to say that I can do whatever to your
body! FINE!!!



Nit open her eyes with anger.


N: I didn’t mean it like that!


San hold grip on Nit arm and pulled her .


N: Let go of me! Let go of me!


San struggle to pull Nit back to his place.


S: NO!


N: Let me go!


S: NO!


San push Nit to his bed and hand cuffed Nit again.


S: You’re mines forever! and you will never go back.


Nit screamed.


San cover his ears and yelled back.


S: QUITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Nit shut up and stares at San.


San arm Nit wrist.


S: Don’t think there will be a day that I will love you. Everything
that I do for you is just for my desire and lust.



San threw Nit hand to the bed bar.


N: OUCH!


San stood up and walked out. Nit saw a little vase, grabbed
it and threw it at the door. Tears starts coming down Nit eyes.





N: Mom,,,,,Dad,,,,,help me!!
Please! P’ Boy…..


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B:Boy


R: Rin


U: Uncle


Boy looking at his papers at his desk. He get a phone call
from his secretary.



B: Yes, let him in.


Then someone open the door and walked in.


R: Boss.


Boy look up.


B: What is it?


R: I went today to settle Ms. Lida accidents report and one
of the detective told me something that you should know.



B: And what is that?


R: They found out that way how your car brake was cut is
happen related to your parent death?



Boy stood off his chair.


B: How is that possible?


R: I’m guessing this time the target is you sir.


B: It had to be a insider because how did they know that was
my car?



Then Boy and Rin heard “ KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK!”


A men walk inside the room. Boy lok at him.


B: Sawdee , uncle.


U: Sawdee! How has it been?


Boy  smiled.


B: Rin you can go, I’ll call you later.


Rin nodded and left the room.


Boy set back down.


B: Why are you here uncle?


The uncle walks to the window with his hands in his pocket.


U: I have a plan for the hotel.


B: I’m going to disagree. All your plans is not relative to
my projects. Please uncle I can handle this myself. My parent had lft me in
charge and I am doing pretty fine.



The uncle looks fierce and replied..


U: Is that what you think of me? Your uncle?


B: Please!  Get out.
The uncle walked to the door.



U: Soon, just soon.


Boy looks at his uncle walking out of the door.




Boy looked stress.

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N: Nit


Nit looks around San room. She sees bottle of cans, his room
was dark and it smelled very death. Then she hears a loud noise coming from the
other room.



THUMPTHUMPTHUMPP!




N: I wonder what he is hiding
over there? I been hearing this noise since yesterday?


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S: San


M: Mom


J: Jouy


S: Mom, please eat. Please eat.


M: No!No! I want my son. I want my son!


S: Mom, I am your son.


The mom look down at him. She shakes her head no.


M: No! No! I want my son.


San look at Jouy and gave her the foods.


S: Jouy, just put them back.


J: Krap, what about Nit? She haven’t eaten?


S: People let her don’t get hungry Jouy.


Then San tuck his mom to bed. The mom was sleeping.


San started crying to her.


S: Mom, did you know Pa had passed away. Remember her? I was
going to finally marry her.  The person I
love had left me hanging mom. But the person that caused is here mom. I had her
held capture in my room. Please don’t be angry at me for doing this thing mom.  I am doing the right thing. She took Pa from
me. She took Pa from me mom.



San cried in front of her sleeping mom. San wipes his tears
and walks to the door, turn off the lights and closed the door. There her mother
opens her eyes.



San walk pass his room and listen to the door.




S: You must me hungry. 

 
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S: San


N: Nit


Nit listens to the other room to hear the noise. She couldn’t
hear it anymore. She hears the door open and quickly went back to sit down.



San hand Nit a bowl of rice pudding. Nit looks at San with
disgrace. San hand to bowl to Nit. Nit grab it and look down at it. Nit throws
the bowl at San.



San wipes the pudding of his shirt. Nit look at him with a
anger face.



S: Oh, your strong huh! You think you tough huh!


San grab Nit chin.


S: Listen up, since you threw that food at me, you will not
get any more foods. The only time you will get it is when you satisfies me.
Until then you are eating NOTHING!!!



Nit spit at San. San close his eyes and open his eyes again.


S: No matter what you can never get enough of me huh? Ok,
You did it yourself. San unlock the hand cuff takes the handcuffs and grabs Nit
arms.



N: Where are you taking me!


San open the bathroom door and pulled Nit to the
shower.  San handcuff Nit to the bar next
to the sink. San takes off his clothes in front of Nit.



N: What! What! Are you doing!!


S: You scare?


N: No. no. But what are you doing!


San takes of his pant also. All he is wearing is his
boxer.  Nit closes her eyes.



San went closer to Nit.


S: We’re going to take a shower together!


 
 

nklue1

sarNie Adult
"S: We're going to take a shower together!", HOT!!!! you had to stop at the best part didnt you
please update soon
loving it so far ^_^  
 
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