BAD BLOOD : Mad Love - CHAPTER 1 : A ROCKY START - UPDATED!

ImmaSingaholic

ImmaSingaholic

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[SIZE=12pt]“BAD BLOOD” [/SIZE]- 'YADECH' FAN FICTION by ImmaSingaholic
 

 
 
Posters made by myself :) Hope you guys like it!
 
 
Characters :
Barry Nadech Kugimiya as Derek / Tawan Patsucherak
Yaya Urassaya Sperbund as Nutcharin Patsaporn (Rin)
Kimberly Ann Voltemas as Patcharee Patsaporn (Pat)
James Jirayu Tangsrisuk as Warit Patsucherak (Rit)
Mark Prin Suparat as Harin Sutisak
Mint Chalida Vijitvongthong as Naree Sirirat
Ken Phupoom as Decha Akkarat
Bella Ranee Campen as Danielle Porter
 
 
Synopsis :
 
Nutcharin Patsaporn always considered herself as a lucky woman, although she didn't have everything that she wanted in life, she had what she needed. She has a sister who loves her, great friends who always stood by her side and a pack of candy sweets that she carries around wherever she goes. She often gives the sweets away to people around her whenever she senses negative energy. She uses these sweets to make people feel better, so that they can take away the bitterness from their hearts, even just for a little while. One day, a mysterious young man named Tawan Patsucherak, unexpectedly entered her life and turned her whole world upside down. He was perfect in every aspect, possessing every trait of the dream guy that all the women in the world would die for. Behind closed doors, he was a man of many secrets, who also brilliantly learned to conceal his past before he became the man he is today. He has only one goal, to teach Patcharee Patsaporn a painful lesson that she will never forget. While he has successfully waltzed into every woman’s heart effortlessly, Nucharin is the only woman who failed to fall for his charms. Perhaps he was too good to be true, almost like he was wearing a mask to shield his true self. From the very beginning, bad blood is inevitable. Will Rin ever uncover the truth and the secret that he buried away so long ago? Will Tawan ever get his revenge or did he have to go through an agonizing pathway to find true love?
 
 
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OMG, I'm finally back writing FFs! I don't know if you guys remember my old FF 'The Game Plan", if you do, I'm sorry for abandoning that FF, because at that time I was very busy, didn't have time to continue and truthfully there are many elements in that FF I wasn't comfortable writing about or wasn't satisfied about. So I have decided to change the story, characters and rewrite the whole thing to make it better. Hence, 'BAD BLOOD' is born. I changed the names and casting slightly but mostly I kept it the same as 'The Game Plan'. And yes, I totally stole this title and quote from Taylor Swift's new song 'Bad Blood' XD, I am really bad with titles, so I'll just use this because I think it sounds pretty badass. I hope you all can support my new FF and feel free to comment anything you want! :) My grammar is not that good and I'm not a very good writer, but I really want to write something， so please bear with me and forgive me if there's any error/mistakes in my sentences. Chapter 1 will be up soon, hope you all enjoy! :dance1:  :dance1:
 
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soso68 said:
I remember your ff. Sad you can't continue this

Waiting for this one
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Awwww, don't be sad na! Basically its a re-write, I'll keep some stuff from the old FF and put in some new things :) Thank youu for the support!!
 
Bieluvr

Bieluvr

XiaojuXiyou
Will follow. I'm going to make a poster if that's okay with you. :)
 
040156

040156

sarNie Adult
Kyaaaaaaah!!! The poster is intriguing! I'm so excited for this. The most surprising part is James. Hahahahaha (you know what I am here for. Hehehe for James Ji...... Nah! I'm just kidding, I'm here for you too! Seriously! #sorry #notsorry) i like the casting. I wanna see Yaya, Kim and mint together even though I feel that it would be the most awkward thing ever in real life.
 
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ImmaSingaholic

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Bieluvr said:
Will follow. I'm going to make a poster if that's okay with you. :)
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Yeahhh sure, and please share it here if you like! Would love to see it! :)
 
Step said:
OMG I love the synopsis. Even the cast. Kim with James?? Wow
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Thank youu!!!! I will add more people to the casting hopefully. I still haven't figured out all the details yet, but Kim will be N'Rai in this and James is going to be Nadech's rival. But things might change...hehehehe.
 
040156 said:
Kyaaaaaaah!!! The poster is intriguing! I'm so excited for this. The most surprising part is James. Hahahahaha (you know what I am here for. Hehehe for James Ji...... Nah! I'm just kidding, I'm here for you too! Seriously! #sorry #notsorry) i like the casting. I wanna see Yaya, Kim and mint together even though I feel that it would be the most awkward thing ever in real life.
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Thanks dearr!! Hahahahaah I know you're here for meeeeeeeeee. LOL don't worry, I always write and ship the impossible things heheheheehe
 
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*WARNING : YOU MIGHT FIND SOME INAPPROPRIATE LANGUAGE, OR SOME RUDE LANGUAGE AND WORDS.**
 
 
CHAPTER 1 : A ROCKY START
 
“Oh my God, Pat! How is it that you look so insanely gorgeous in every single one of these photos?”
 
“Come on Racha, it’s not like you don’t know she’s the most popular AND the prettiest girl back in high school. Homecoming Queen, Prom Queen, Head Cheerleader, anything important just name it and Pat’s in it. And there’s only one word to describe her, P-E-R-F-E-C-T! If she ever tries out for Miss Thailand, she’s going to win no doubt! I mean, just look at all those amateurs! I can’t stand those bitches.”
 
“I know right! Even we could easily beat them, but no one is a match for Pat’s charms! You know you do annoy me so much sometimes Pat! I’m so jealous of your perfect life. I’d do anything to be you.”
 
“Okay okay… Stop teasing me you guys! One of the reasons why my life is perfect, is because the both of you are a part of it! Happy?” Pat giggled as she said to the two of her best friends since high school, Racha and Marie. The three women are looking at some old pictures from high school and university.
 
Indeed, they were right about her. Patcharee Patsaporn’s life was perfect. She was the perfect dream girl for every guy since her high school years. She has everything that a woman would want -- beauty, intelligence, grace, talent, charisma and popularity. She was always naturally great with people since a very young age. She was the most beautiful girl in school, the top scorer in her academics, a brilliant pianist and most of all she’s the most popular girl in high school and the university. Everyone who knows Pat practically loves and worships her like a Goddess. Fame was no stranger to her, growing up in a wealthy family is also a contributing factor. Two years ago after her father’s death, she is the huge benefactor who is currently running her father’s company. At the age of 26, she is a young heiress and the CEO of her father’s prestigious company, Patsaporn Empire. She was often featured in magazines and local news as one of the youngest female CEO’s in the country. On top of that, she was engaged to Decha Akkarat, who also came from a rich family like her. He too, was the most popular jock back then in high school and they both got engaged after graduating from university. They’re often referred as the ‘Golden couple’ because they’re perfect for each other. However, due to her father’s death, Pat who was just a fresh graduate, had to take care of the company all alone and also had to look after her younger sister, hence the wedding date had to be pushed back because the timing wasn’t right. But truthfully, Pat is having problems in her relationship with Decha, but she never mentioned it to anyone, not her friends, and not even her sister.
 
Suddenly, there was a loud knock on the door. Pat opened the door only to see her maid, Malee.
 
“Khun Pat! There’s been a huge trouble in the kitchen!! You have to help me!”
 
“What’s the matter, Aunt Malee?”
 
“It’s Khun Rin and Nam again ka. But this time, it’s in the kitchen! I told them to stop but they just won’t listen. They are ruining all of the food! My head hurts. You have to stop them ka!”
 
“Is your sister making a fuss again, Pat? What a troublemaker.”
 
“Please don’t talk like that, you know I don’t like it when you speak of her that way. I’ll be back in just a minute okay? You girls carry on.” Racha and Marie rolled their eyes while Pat hurried downstairs with Aunt Malee.
 
*******************************In the kitchen***********************************
 
“Hahahahahahaha!! You can’t catch me!! JUST GIVE UP!“
 
“NEVER!! Come here you little rascal! Don’t think I will have mercy on you because you’re a kid! You need to finish your homework before you dad comes to pick you up!!”
 
“I don’t care! I hate homework!!! If you want me to do it, you’ll have to catch me first, slowpoke!!”
 
“Slowpoke, am I?” She looked around on the table and grabs the chili bottle, revealing a grin on her face teasing the boy to frighten him. Alarmed of what she’s about to do, he snatched the bag of flour, dipped his hand and before she knew it the flour powder are all on her face.
 
“OH MY GOD! You’re SO not getting away with this!!” She claimed as she ran to catch the boy and they were both running in circles around the kitchen, both attacking each other with anything they could find in the place. As they were running they were both laughing before she finally caught him from the back with her arms on his shoulder with a tight grip, not letting him go.
 
“Not fair!! You’re so much bigger than I am!!! Let me go so we can have a fair fight!!!”
 
“You wish! Not a chance!” She lets out an evil laugh and then she heard footsteps from the kitchen door. She lifted her head up and there Pat was, giving her the stern look.
 
“What is going on in here?? Nucharin Patsaporn! Nam Worawut! Why are you two so naughty?!” All of them scanned the whole kitchen, Rin was surprised after seeing the mess they made. The entire kitchen was all dirty and contaminated with flour powder, oil and sauce stains.
 
“Oops… I’m sorry na P’Pat… It’s all because of this little devil! He wouldn’t do his homework and I chased him down here. We were chasing and running and he threw the flour at me and I…”
 
“And you threw the flour back didn’t you? Rin, I don’t blame Nam ‘cause he is still a kid, but you Rin! You’re a 24-year-old grown woman and you’re supposed to stop him and not join in the game! Look at all the mess you made around here! Don’t you feel sorry for Aunt Malee? Now she has to clean up all this!”
 
“I’m sorry na Aunt Malee, I really don’t mean it. Please don’t be angry na, P’Pat… I won’t do this again na, and Nam too! I promise you he won’t do this again! Right, little guy??” Rin made her cute puppy face and nagged Nam to apologize too. Nam was a little bit intimidated by Pat, so he apologized.
 
Pat’s phone rang abruptly. She looked at the phone screen and Rin knew it must be an important call.
 
“I need to take this. Rin, come upstairs and wait for me in my room now. No excuses.” Pat said to Rin before she threw her a fierce glare and exited the kitchen.
 
“She looks kinda angry P’Rin for what we did. Are you going to be okay?”
 
“Of course I'm going to be fine, silly! Don’t worry, my sister is not a lion, she’s not gonna eat me or you up! Now you go take a nice warm bath okay? I’ll be down here as soon as I can. No more tricks, promise?”
 
“Urgh. Fine. Promise.” Rin and Nam did a pinky swear and out of the blue they heard someone’s screaming. They turned and saw Racha and Marie, laughing uncontrollably.
 
“Waaiiii! Look at her! She’s so filthy!!” Rin holds Nam’s hand tight and tried to walk away but the two women stopped them.
 
“I feel sorry that Pat has to take care of you. I have no idea why she loves you so much. You’re not even her real sister.”
 
“Don’t you know? She thinks she’s Cinderella now, a servant girl trying to be a Princess. Well I think she’s just a shameless whore who’s desperate for attention! Can you imagine what other people would think seeing her like this? She is going to ruin Patsaporn’s reputation and embarrass Pat!” Racha and Marie stared at Rin from head to toe in disgust and then laughed harder.
 
“HEY! Watch your language!! Don’t you see there’s a kid around here?? Please be considerate and think of others before you say anything ill-mannered, especially foul language. I’m pretty sure that the both of you know that it’s inappropriate to speak like that in front of a child!”
 
“Ai, who are you to talk back to us?! Don’t think because you have Pat’s protection you can be rude to us! You’re just a country bumpkin, a low-class nobody, how dare you talk to us like that!”
 
“At least I’m not the one without manners here.”
 
“AI HOW DARE YOU –“ Racha raised her hand wanting to slap Rin but Rin swiftly stopped her.
 
“Slap me if you dare! But you can be damn sure I’ll return the ‘favour’ to you. But I am sure you know how my sister would react to you both if I tell her the truth on what happened, with Nam here as my eye-witness.”
 
Racha and Marie exchanged looks and then scowled at Rin.
 
“FINE!! YOU WIN THIS TIME! But don’t be too happy, this isn’t over yet. You better watch out. Let’s go Marie!” Racha and Marie stormed off the house with Rin breathing a sigh of relief after they left.
 
“P’Rin!! Why did you let them walk away like that?? Why don’t you fight back?? If I’m old enough I’ll totally smack those meanies in the face and see if they would dare to talk to you like that again!”
 
“Oh Nam!! Thanks but NO! You must always remember, violence is never the solution to any problem! When someone is being mean to us, and if we don’t fight back, it doesn’t mean that we are weak! It only means that we are strong enough to endure it. I only say that to scare them off, I wasn’t actually going to return the ‘favour’. What they’re doing is wrong, and we musn’t get back at them by doing the wrong thing. You must always do what is right and think about the consequences of your actions. Got it?”
 
“Got it. You're way too soft. Those meanies got lucky that they bump into you and me. Okay, I really need to take a bath. See you later p’Rin! And…THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING!!!” Nam sprinted away from the room as he felt a bit embarrassed but he meant every word.
 
“Hahaha. YOU’RE WELCOME!” Rin uttered loudly so that he could hear before his shadow disappeared.
 
Rin has done some babysitting before but Nam is different than the other kids. This boy is special to her. Rin felt that she could relate to him because they had similar circumstances and were going through the same thing. They both lost their mother at a very young age. Maybe that’s why she cared for him so much and wanted to be a big sister and teach him the right thing, give him the love that he deserves. This is not the first time that she was taunted by people who looked down on her, Racha and Marie are just one of the worst people she had to deal because they are also Pat’s best friends. She hated the times that they pretended to nice to her in front of Pat but secretly mock her whenever they had the chance behind her sister’s back. But she didn’t mind any of, because despite that she wasn’t originally born in the Patsaporn family, she has a cousin who loves her like she was her own sister, and her uncle who treats her no lesser like a daughter of his own. She often wished that she would someday find a man who will love her with all of his heart, and maybe one day, she could finally have a family of her own that is complete.
 
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OMG I FINALLY FINISHED WRITING CHAPTER 1! THIS IS INDEED A ROCKY START HAHAHAHA. And I also made a new poster!!!
 
Hope you all like this chapter! I hope it's not too boring. 
 
I need to ask, do you guys think this chapter is too short??? I felt that it's pretty short though.
 
Gonna continue writing soon so stay tuned! Thank you for all the support!! Love you all!!  
 
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soso68 said:
It's a little bit short but so intéresting

Don't worry i ' m waiting for the next chapter
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Ahh thank you for the feedback! I'll make the new chapters longer
Glad that you thought it was interesting :) thanks for reading  :dance1:
 
040156

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Nong! Read it on my way to work. Heeey! It is a good start. I like the difference in the characters of Kim and Yaya's characters. I thought Kim was gonna be a biatch, but hey,it's just chapt 1 so things can change I suppose

Kyaaaah!! I'm so excited you included Bella!!! JIRANEE! Please please please make it Jiranee!
 
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040156 said:
Nong! Read it on my way to work. Heeey! It is a good start. I like the difference in the characters of Kim and Yaya's characters. I thought Kim was gonna be a biatch, but hey,it's just chapt 1 so things can change I supposeKyaaaah!! I'm so excited you included Bella!!! JIRANEE! Please please please make it Jiranee!
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Thanks I'm glad you're excited! I'm trying to create dynamic characters and make everyone interesting. yes yes Jiranee IS HAPPENING. But I ain't gonna spill anymore hehehehehehe, I am going to update soon.
 
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