[Ch3] Game Rai Game Ruk (Lakorn Thai)

qazx

sarNie Egg
Thank you so much for the spoilers but I cannot help getting frustrated over the fact that Fah just give in to Prae ( let Prae have Charles) even though she knows that Charles is her Saichon ( her husband ). The poor man waited for her for years and to Fah he is not as important as her sister. If I was Charles, I would go crazy. :) ..k..enough venting.. ;)
 

d2balways

sarNie Juvenile
Thank you so much for the spoilers but I cannot help getting frustrated over the fact that Fah just give in to Prae ( let Prae have Charles) even though she knows that Charles is her Saichon ( her husband ). The poor man waited for her for years and to Fah he is not as important as her sister. If I was Charles, I would go crazy. :) ..k..enough venting.. ;)
it's a n'ek thing to do :/
 

d2balways

sarNie Juvenile
What do you think happened to the villagers on the island?? i mean... mami returns in futher on in the story.. but.. ): .. yasa said that the village is destroyed? should we believe him.. or just continue with the hunt to kill him? :scratchhead2: :scratchchin:
really? then how will saichon & nangfah go back to koh min? isnt there a part he takes her back?? :(
 

ceda_lee

sarNie OldFart
Thank you so much for the spoilers but I cannot help getting frustrated over the fact that Fah just give in to Prae ( let Prae have Charles) even though she knows that Charles is her Saichon ( her husband ). The poor man waited for her for years and to Fah he is not as important as her sister. If I was Charles, I would go crazy. :) ..k..enough venting.. ;)
Seriously right? I’m thinking Prae knows Charles is Fah’s husband and she still wants him? Or does she even know by then? But how could Fah pass on her loving husband like that? I’d be so hurt if I were Saichon. That is NOT okay. But the thing I love about Saichon is he’s so determine. I know Fah loves Prae unconditionally, but she’s gotta learn how to protect what is lawfully hers. Saichon is Nangfah’s love!

I know some of you felt sorry for Prae from the beginning. Their parents favored Fah over her and they basically gave Fah everything. How I see it is Prae has NO RIGHT to be upset over that. First of all, she should be grateful for what they’ve done for her. They gave her a home and a better life. She got greedy and wanted more.
 

d2balways

sarNie Juvenile
Seriously right? I’m thinking Prae knows Charles is Fah’s husband and she still wants him? Or does she even know by then? But how could Fah pass on her loving husband like that? I’d be so hurt if I were Saichon. That is NOT okay. But the thing I love about Saichon is he’s so determine. I know Fah loves Prae unconditionally, but she’s gotta learn how to protect what is lawfully hers. Saichon is Nangfah’s love!

I know some of you felt sorry for Prae from the beginning. Their parents favored Fah over her and they basically gave Fah everything. How I see it is Prae has NO RIGHT to be upset over that. First of all, she should be grateful for what they’ve done for her. They gave her a home and a better life. She got greedy and wanted more.
but fah only wanted basic things in life... she doesnt want big company that prae is working for, she doesnt want the large house that prae wants... she wont even take charles because prae wants charles. look at fah's car. lol her birthday gift was an old mini and she loves it. she's good with moderate things in life. Prae just keeps wanting more and more. especially things/people she cant or shouldn't have :/
 

jjinxx

Is your "nom" Fai-approved?
SweetCherimoya, thanks for sharing the details! There's so much to look forward to. In the midst of the Game Rai, we can still have faith that Charles's love has not faded by his anger.

Hm...I honestly like willings better but a lot of the time, the storylines are good enough to keep watching, despite there being an r. Still, not giving rapes any excuses...That's why I kinda like this tame version of GRGR, where their only love scene obviously became willing.
I seriously can't wait for all the people to find out the TRUTH!

:dance2: Yay for siamdara poll! Seriously, GRGR is kicking butt...imo.

Soooo...
This is in no way intended to...offend the script writers. It's just that I thought it'd be fun to write this so, here is a fanfiction version of Charles and Fahlada love scene!
Fah stared unsmiling at Charles after he had unreasonably yelled at her for deciding to return to America, and after he had once again spoken heatedly to her as if she had committed a great crime against him. She didn’t want to have to deal with his accusations when she had no idea what he was getting so worked up over and so she demanded, “I have to leave tomorrow. We’re done here and you can let yourself out.”

With that, she stomped up the stairs to her bedroom where she slammed the door. Fah was not usually so temperamental but Charles’s words had been unnecessarily hurtful. She wished he hadn’t tainted her image of him. Did he still see her as the girl from his past after all? He can’t accept that she’s not the one he’s looking for?

Whipping around at the sound of her door, Fah’s jaw dropped. “What are you doing up here?”
Charles, jaw clenched, closed the door just as hard as she had and replied, “You really think you can fool me?” He didn’t want to believe it but here was the truth. Nangfah had betrayed him, just as Yasa said. Well, Charles thought, after all these years of yearning, he had reached his limit. If love was going to evade him, then he would make sure the person who hurt him would never forget what she’d done. “You want a new life that much? No, I’ll never let you.” He advanced towards her.
“I really don’t understand what you’re talking about!” Fah tried not to let her voice quiver as she backed away from him in vain.
Charles didn’t miss a beat, striding towards her with a cold anger, “It doesn’t matter if you don’t understand. I’ll make you understand.”

He roughly forced her body into his arms and buried his face in her hair, and Fah twisted in his hateful embrace. She managed to push him away, for the first time, enraged by the fear he was instilling in her and his unreasonable claims of something that was too crazy to believe. This led her to exclaiming, “I hate you!”
Before her was a man completely different from the gentleman who had taken care of her when they went to the seashore. There was no trace of the questionable love that she had heard her coworkers gossiping of either. What he was doing to her was unacceptable.
She stared into his incredulous face. “Did you hear me? I hate you!”

For a split second, her words stopped him, froze his mind and froze his heart that she had no clue kept beating only due to her existence. In a matter of moments the heart that had never healed properly over the past three years was shattered all over again.
Something in Fah faltered at the pain in his eyes, but once the second was gone, she was once more trying to fight his tight grasp. His fingers wrapped around her upper arm painfully.
“Let go! Let me go!” But at the same moment she demanded to be released, a thrilling sensation ran down her spine when his lips silenced her. Somewhere deep in her, a different voice was crying to be held by him.

And though her eyes had closed, incredibly, she looked up to see the outline of him.

Her eyes flew open wide. Fah was aware of having clutched onto Charles’s shirt. Her hands let go and fisted against his chest when he powerfully brought her lips back to his. She beat his chest, with the disgusted thought of him kissing her. Yet, this very same thought seemed to draw all of her senses to the tingling of his lips and…

His lips. The way they smiled at her, the way they twisted when deep in thought, the way they frowned when she had been naughty, the way they kissed her when he forgave her, every time…and kissed her just for being her…

Charles couldn’t comprehend it when Fah responded to his kiss. He merely kissed harder and finally having his wife back in his arms where she belonged awakened all of his desires for life and love…and for her. Always, he had been faithful to her.
He backed her into the bed and fell on top of her. A small yelp was heard as Fah came to her senses and realized what had happened. “Get off! Let me go you psycho!”
He pinned her hands above her head. Peering down at her soft features, he recognized every contour of her eyes, nose and lips that were tensed in anger. Charles reminded himself that this woman had hurt him.
Fah’s breath caught when the corner of his lips curved into a slow humorless smirk. Those eyes of his glittered with intent, and came closer. She turned away just as he tried to kiss her, so that the tips of their noses brushed against each other…

“I love you very very very very oh so much!”

His lips grazed her cheek.

“This cheek is mine…And these lips are mine…”

“Stop!” she gasped. With a tremendous effort, Fah pulled herself to the present, as his breath trailed down her neck. “If you do this, I’ll never forgive you!”
“And why should I forgive you?” he retorted, breathing hard. He shook his head, eyes piercing through her, merciless. “A vow should never be broken. But you…you’ve undone everything. There’s no room for forgiveness.”
He shrugged his shirt off his shoulders, never breaking eye contact with her, then ducked back down and covered himself with her scent, becoming familiarized once more with all of her.
Fah was just about to resist again, but Charles had become replaced by him in an instant, and instead, she arched towards his surprisingly gentle kisses and nibbles. The melody of waves breaking against a shore—home, she thought—echoed in the background. She sensed the coolness of salty air as he opened up the front of her shirt. The strongest urge to embrace him surged through her.

“Do you hear the sound of my heart?”

The body, the warmth, and the touch that Fah felt were so well-known. Her palm stopped trying to push him away and she moaned as her lips were caught in his again and he caressed her face. Nothing had ever been more right than this.

“You are the best thing in my life…”
“We’ll stay together here…I promise.”


“Didn’t we promise each other?” Charles whispered. She pressed the side of her face against his, arousing all of those distant memories of peaceful nights with only the two of them.
She was disoriented with images of a wide open sky, glistening waters, a rocky cave…She fought against these, but even more tempting was the man, the one she knew she belonged to. Why had she been fighting him? She knew everything would be alright as long as she had him--his tender touch right now was proof.
Soon, there was nothing between their pulsing souls except skin, and Fah’s skin prickled and thrived with joy to be reunited with him. Her hand traced along the line of his waist, then ran across his shoulder blades and lower back. She knew every single inch of him.

Love, undeniable, irresistible and possessive, love crept from Fah’s heart and urgently directed her to kiss him back, to hold him, to never let go. Completely yielding, she obeyed her instincts.
The air had condensed substantially around them from their mingling breaths. Just before they shared their wedding night once more, Charles lifted his forehead against hers, and her arms hugged his neck, exactly the way he remembered, bringing their hearts so close that the beating merged in harmony. Fah looked into the eyes of the man of her dreams, which was her greatest pleasure of all.

“…We’re going to become one, right?”


[cue camera moves over to some miscellaneous object on the bedside table lol]
 

Murni

sarNie Egg
Seriously right? I’m thinking Prae knows Charles is Fah’s husband and she still wants him? Or does she even know by then? But how could Fah pass on her loving husband like that? I’d be so hurt if I were Saichon. That is NOT okay. But the thing I love about Saichon is he’s so determine. I know Fah loves Prae unconditionally, but she’s gotta learn how to protect what is lawfully hers. Saichon is Nangfah’s love!

I know some of you felt sorry for Prae from the beginning. Their parents favored Fah over her and they basically gave Fah everything. How I see it is Prae has NO RIGHT to be upset over that. First of all, she should be grateful for what they’ve done for her. They gave her a home and a better life. She got greedy and wanted more.

Couldnt agree more. Prae is GREEDY.. and greed will cause a bigger problem after that because she want more and more which is not hers to begin with
 

lakorn watcher

sarNie Adult
I don't think ken p looks like nadech at all but he's not bad looking himself. it's just that I haven't felt that magic charm from yet like I have from nadech. maybe bc I haven't seen anything from him yet
 

Kizukami

sarNie Adult
Does Asianfuse have something like an award for most talked about lakorn?

lol I think GRGR deserves one for this yea lol

166 pages already lmao
 

LakornGods

sarNie Hatchling
SweetCherimoya, thanks for sharing the details! There's so much to look forward to. In the midst of the Game Rai, we can still have faith that Charles's love has not faded by his anger.

Hm...I honestly like willings better but a lot of the time, the storylines are good enough to keep watching, despite there being an r. Still, not giving rapes any excuses...That's why I kinda like this tame version of GRGR, where their only love scene obviously became willing.
I seriously can't wait for all the people to find out the TRUTH!

:dance2: Yay for siamdara poll! Seriously, GRGR is kicking butt...imo.

Soooo...
This is in no way intended to...offend the script writers. It's just that I thought it'd be fun to write this so, here is a fanfiction version of Charles and Fahlada love scene!
Fah stared unsmiling at Charles after he had unreasonably yelled at her for deciding to return to America, and after he had once again spoken heatedly to her as if she had committed a great crime against him. She didn’t want to have to deal with his accusations when she had no idea what he was getting so worked up over and so she demanded, “I have to leave tomorrow. We’re done here and you can let yourself out.”

With that, she stomped up the stairs to her bedroom where she slammed the door. Fah was not usually so temperamental but Charles’s words had been unnecessarily hurtful. She wished he hadn’t tainted her image of him. Did he still see her as the girl from his past after all? He can’t accept that she’s not the one he’s looking for?

Whipping around at the sound of her door, Fah’s jaw dropped. “What are you doing up here?”
Charles, jaw clenched, closed the door just as hard as she had and replied, “You really think you can fool me?” He didn’t want to believe it but here was the truth. Nangfah had betrayed him, just as Yasa said. Well, Charles thought, after all these years of yearning, he had reached his limit. If love was going to evade him, then he would make sure the person who hurt him would never forget what she’d done. “You want a new life that much? No, I’ll never let you.” He advanced towards her.
“I really don’t understand what you’re talking about!” Fah tried not to let her voice quiver as she backed away from him in vain.
Charles didn’t miss a beat, striding towards her with a cold anger, “It doesn’t matter if you don’t understand. I’ll make you understand.”

He roughly forced her body into his arms and buried his face in her hair, and Fah twisted in his hateful embrace. She managed to push him away, for the first time, enraged by the fear he was instilling in her and his unreasonable claims of something that was too crazy to believe. This led her to exclaiming, “I hate you!”
Before her was a man completely different from the gentleman who had taken care of her when they went to the seashore. There was no trace of the questionable love that she had heard her coworkers gossiping of either. What he was doing to her was unacceptable.
She stared into his incredulous face. “Did you hear me? I hate you!”

For a split second, her words stopped him, froze his mind and froze his heart that she had no clue kept beating only due to her existence. In a matter of moments the heart that had never healed properly over the past three years was shattered all over again.
Something in Fah faltered at the pain in his eyes, but once the second was gone, she was once more trying to fight his tight grasp. His fingers wrapped around her upper arm painfully.
“Let go! Let me go!” But at the same moment she demanded to be released, a thrilling sensation ran down her spine when his lips silenced her. Somewhere deep in her, a different voice was crying to be held by him.

And though her eyes had closed, incredibly, she looked up to see the outline of him.

Her eyes flew open wide. Fah was aware of having clutched onto Charles’s shirt. Her hands let go and fisted against his chest when he powerfully brought her lips back to his. She beat his chest, with the disgusted thought of him kissing her. Yet, this very same thought seemed to draw all of her senses to the tingling of his lips and…

His lips. The way they smiled at her, the way they twisted when deep in thought, the way they frowned when she had been naughty, the way they kissed her when he forgave her, every time…and kissed her just for being her…

Charles couldn’t comprehend it when Fah responded to his kiss. He merely kissed harder and finally having his wife back in his arms where she belonged awakened all of his desires for life and love…and for her. Always, he had been faithful to her.
He backed her into the bed and fell on top of her. A small yelp was heard as Fah came to her senses and realized what had happened. “Get off! Let me go you psycho!”
He pinned her hands above her head. Peering down at her soft features, he recognized every contour of her eyes, nose and lips that were tensed in anger. Charles reminded himself that this woman had hurt him.
Fah’s breath caught when the corner of his lips curved into a slow humorless smirk. Those eyes of his glittered with intent, and came closer. She turned away just as he tried to kiss her, so that the tips of their noses brushed against each other…

“I love you very very very very oh so much!”

His lips grazed her cheek.

“This cheek is mine…And these lips are mine…”

“Stop!” she gasped. With a tremendous effort, Fah pulled herself to the present, as his breath trailed down her neck. “If you do this, I’ll never forgive you!”
“And why should I forgive you?” he retorted, breathing hard. He shook his head, eyes piercing through her, merciless. “A vow should never be broken. But you…you’ve undone everything. There’s no room for forgiveness.”
He shrugged his shirt off his shoulders, never breaking eye contact with her, then ducked back down and covered himself with her scent, becoming familiarized once more with all of her.
Fah was just about to resist again, but Charles had become replaced by him in an instant, and instead, she arched towards his surprisingly gentle kisses and nibbles. The melody of waves breaking against a shore—home, she thought—echoed in the background. She sensed the coolness of salty air as he opened up the front of her shirt. The strongest urge to embrace him surged through her.

“Do you hear the sound of my heart?”

The body, the warmth, and the touch that Fah felt were so well-known. Her palm stopped trying to push him away and she moaned as her lips were caught in his again and he caressed her face. Nothing had ever been more right than this.

“You are the best thing in my life…”
“We’ll stay together here…I promise.”


“Didn’t we promise each other?” Charles whispered. She pressed the side of her face against his, arousing all of those distant memories of peaceful nights with only the two of them.
She was disoriented with images of a wide open sky, glistening waters, a rocky cave…She fought against these, but even more tempting was the man, the one she knew she belonged to. Why had she been fighting him? She knew everything would be alright as long as she had him--his tender touch right now was proof.
Soon, there was nothing between their pulsing souls except skin, and Fah’s skin prickled and thrived with joy to be reunited with him. Her hand traced along the line of his waist, then ran across his shoulder blades and lower back. She knew every single inch of him.

Love, undeniable, irresistible and possessive, love crept from Fah’s heart and urgently directed her to kiss him back, to hold him, to never let go. Completely yielding, she obeyed her instincts.
The air had condensed substantially around them from their mingling breaths. Just before they shared their wedding night once more, Charles lifted his forehead against hers, and her arms hugged his neck, exactly the way he remembered, bringing their hearts so close that the beating merged in harmony. Fah looked into the eyes of the man of her dreams, which was her greatest pleasure of all.

“…We’re going to become one, right?”


[cue camera moves over to some miscellaneous object on the bedside table lol]
cue camera moves over to some miscellaneous object on the bedside table...im loling with you.
 

zazoured

sarNie Juvenile
SweetCherimoya, thanks for sharing the details! There's so much to look forward to. In the midst of the Game Rai, we can still have faith that Charles's love has not faded by his anger.

Hm...I honestly like willings better but a lot of the time, the storylines are good enough to keep watching, despite there being an r. Still, not giving rapes any excuses...That's why I kinda like this tame version of GRGR, where their only love scene obviously became willing.
I seriously can't wait for all the people to find out the TRUTH!

:dance2: Yay for siamdara poll! Seriously, GRGR is kicking butt...imo.

Soooo...
This is in no way intended to...offend the script writers. It's just that I thought it'd be fun to write this so, here is a fanfiction version of Charles and Fahlada love scene!
Fah stared unsmiling at Charles after he had unreasonably yelled at her for deciding to return to America, and after he had once again spoken heatedly to her as if she had committed a great crime against him. She didn’t want to have to deal with his accusations when she had no idea what he was getting so worked up over and so she demanded, “I have to leave tomorrow. We’re done here and you can let yourself out.”

With that, she stomped up the stairs to her bedroom where she slammed the door. Fah was not usually so temperamental but Charles’s words had been unnecessarily hurtful. She wished he hadn’t tainted her image of him. Did he still see her as the girl from his past after all? He can’t accept that she’s not the one he’s looking for?

Whipping around at the sound of her door, Fah’s jaw dropped. “What are you doing up here?”
Charles, jaw clenched, closed the door just as hard as she had and replied, “You really think you can fool me?” He didn’t want to believe it but here was the truth. Nangfah had betrayed him, just as Yasa said. Well, Charles thought, after all these years of yearning, he had reached his limit. If love was going to evade him, then he would make sure the person who hurt him would never forget what she’d done. “You want a new life that much? No, I’ll never let you.” He advanced towards her.
“I really don’t understand what you’re talking about!” Fah tried not to let her voice quiver as she backed away from him in vain.
Charles didn’t miss a beat, striding towards her with a cold anger, “It doesn’t matter if you don’t understand. I’ll make you understand.”

He roughly forced her body into his arms and buried his face in her hair, and Fah twisted in his hateful embrace. She managed to push him away, for the first time, enraged by the fear he was instilling in her and his unreasonable claims of something that was too crazy to believe. This led her to exclaiming, “I hate you!”
Before her was a man completely different from the gentleman who had taken care of her when they went to the seashore. There was no trace of the questionable love that she had heard her coworkers gossiping of either. What he was doing to her was unacceptable.
She stared into his incredulous face. “Did you hear me? I hate you!”

For a split second, her words stopped him, froze his mind and froze his heart that she had no clue kept beating only due to her existence. In a matter of moments the heart that had never healed properly over the past three years was shattered all over again.
Something in Fah faltered at the pain in his eyes, but once the second was gone, she was once more trying to fight his tight grasp. His fingers wrapped around her upper arm painfully.
“Let go! Let me go!” But at the same moment she demanded to be released, a thrilling sensation ran down her spine when his lips silenced her. Somewhere deep in her, a different voice was crying to be held by him.

And though her eyes had closed, incredibly, she looked up to see the outline of him.

Her eyes flew open wide. Fah was aware of having clutched onto Charles’s shirt. Her hands let go and fisted against his chest when he powerfully brought her lips back to his. She beat his chest, with the disgusted thought of him kissing her. Yet, this very same thought seemed to draw all of her senses to the tingling of his lips and…

His lips. The way they smiled at her, the way they twisted when deep in thought, the way they frowned when she had been naughty, the way they kissed her when he forgave her, every time…and kissed her just for being her…

Charles couldn’t comprehend it when Fah responded to his kiss. He merely kissed harder and finally having his wife back in his arms where she belonged awakened all of his desires for life and love…and for her. Always, he had been faithful to her.
He backed her into the bed and fell on top of her. A small yelp was heard as Fah came to her senses and realized what had happened. “Get off! Let me go you psycho!”
He pinned her hands above her head. Peering down at her soft features, he recognized every contour of her eyes, nose and lips that were tensed in anger. Charles reminded himself that this woman had hurt him.
Fah’s breath caught when the corner of his lips curved into a slow humorless smirk. Those eyes of his glittered with intent, and came closer. She turned away just as he tried to kiss her, so that the tips of their noses brushed against each other…

“I love you very very very very oh so much!”

His lips grazed her cheek.

“This cheek is mine…And these lips are mine…”

“Stop!” she gasped. With a tremendous effort, Fah pulled herself to the present, as his breath trailed down her neck. “If you do this, I’ll never forgive you!”
“And why should I forgive you?” he retorted, breathing hard. He shook his head, eyes piercing through her, merciless. “A vow should never be broken. But you…you’ve undone everything. There’s no room for forgiveness.”
He shrugged his shirt off his shoulders, never breaking eye contact with her, then ducked back down and covered himself with her scent, becoming familiarized once more with all of her.
Fah was just about to resist again, but Charles had become replaced by him in an instant, and instead, she arched towards his surprisingly gentle kisses and nibbles. The melody of waves breaking against a shore—home, she thought—echoed in the background. She sensed the coolness of salty air as he opened up the front of her shirt. The strongest urge to embrace him surged through her.

“Do you hear the sound of my heart?”

The body, the warmth, and the touch that Fah felt were so well-known. Her palm stopped trying to push him away and she moaned as her lips were caught in his again and he caressed her face. Nothing had ever been more right than this.

“You are the best thing in my life…”
“We’ll stay together here…I promise.”


“Didn’t we promise each other?” Charles whispered. She pressed the side of her face against his, arousing all of those distant memories of peaceful nights with only the two of them.
She was disoriented with images of a wide open sky, glistening waters, a rocky cave…She fought against these, but even more tempting was the man, the one she knew she belonged to. Why had she been fighting him? She knew everything would be alright as long as she had him--his tender touch right now was proof.
Soon, there was nothing between their pulsing souls except skin, and Fah’s skin prickled and thrived with joy to be reunited with him. Her hand traced along the line of his waist, then ran across his shoulder blades and lower back. She knew every single inch of him.

Love, undeniable, irresistible and possessive, love crept from Fah’s heart and urgently directed her to kiss him back, to hold him, to never let go. Completely yielding, she obeyed her instincts.
The air had condensed substantially around them from their mingling breaths. Just before they shared their wedding night once more, Charles lifted his forehead against hers, and her arms hugged his neck, exactly the way he remembered, bringing their hearts so close that the beating merged in harmony. Fah looked into the eyes of the man of her dreams, which was her greatest pleasure of all.

“…We’re going to become one, right?”


[cue camera moves over to some miscellaneous object on the bedside table lol]
. Wow !!! It is getting HOT in here Jjinkk ... How I so wish your version of events could have been executed in the R scene turn willing of last week !!! Now I really feel like have been missing on something Lol !!!! I like your style girl !!! You are quite talented you know !!! maybe you should become a script writer on the next lakorn that Yadech are going to be into !!! I know I wouldn't be disappointed LOL !!
 

ceda_lee

sarNie OldFart
jjinxx...thaaaat was AWESOME! I especially loved this line "For a split second, her words stopped him, froze his mind and froze his heart that she had no clue kept beating only due to her existence." I can picture everything in my head. I can see it LOL! I"m reading it over and over again. I freaking love your version! :thumbsup:
 

d2balways

sarNie Juvenile
jjinxx...thaaaat was AWESOME! I especially loved this line "For a split second, her words stopped him, froze his mind and froze his heart that she had no clue kept beating only due to her existence." I can picture everything in my head. I can see it LOL! I"m reading it over and over again. I freaking love your version! :thumbsup:
ditto! jjinxx is awesome that way. lol i can picture it now.... crap, i'm late for work. LOL see y'all Charlie's Angels later. peace!! \\// :)
 

ceda_lee

sarNie OldFart
ditto! jjinxx is awesome that way. lol i can picture it now.... crap, i'm late for work. LOL see y'all Charlie's Angels later. peace!! \\// :)
LOL! Don’t get fired now because of GRGR. I’m at work and a lot of people are already off for Thanksgiving weekend so I’m just snooping around in here.

Jjinxx...you should write a fan fiction starting Yadech. I’d totally follow your work.
 

shengvang

sarNie Adult
SweetCherimoya, thanks for sharing the details! There's so much to look forward to. In the midst of the Game Rai, we can still have faith that Charles's love has not faded by his anger.

Hm...I honestly like willings better but a lot of the time, the storylines are good enough to keep watching, despite there being an r. Still, not giving rapes any excuses...That's why I kinda like this tame version of GRGR, where their only love scene obviously became willing.
I seriously can't wait for all the people to find out the TRUTH!

:dance2: Yay for siamdara poll! Seriously, GRGR is kicking butt...imo.

Soooo...
This is in no way intended to...offend the script writers. It's just that I thought it'd be fun to write this so, here is a fanfiction version of Charles and Fahlada love scene!
Fah stared unsmiling at Charles after he had unreasonably yelled at her for deciding to return to America, and after he had once again spoken heatedly to her as if she had committed a great crime against him. She didn’t want to have to deal with his accusations when she had no idea what he was getting so worked up over and so she demanded, “I have to leave tomorrow. We’re done here and you can let yourself out.”

With that, she stomped up the stairs to her bedroom where she slammed the door. Fah was not usually so temperamental but Charles’s words had been unnecessarily hurtful. She wished he hadn’t tainted her image of him. Did he still see her as the girl from his past after all? He can’t accept that she’s not the one he’s looking for?

Whipping around at the sound of her door, Fah’s jaw dropped. “What are you doing up here?”
Charles, jaw clenched, closed the door just as hard as she had and replied, “You really think you can fool me?” He didn’t want to believe it but here was the truth. Nangfah had betrayed him, just as Yasa said. Well, Charles thought, after all these years of yearning, he had reached his limit. If love was going to evade him, then he would make sure the person who hurt him would never forget what she’d done. “You want a new life that much? No, I’ll never let you.” He advanced towards her.
“I really don’t understand what you’re talking about!” Fah tried not to let her voice quiver as she backed away from him in vain.
Charles didn’t miss a beat, striding towards her with a cold anger, “It doesn’t matter if you don’t understand. I’ll make you understand.”

He roughly forced her body into his arms and buried his face in her hair, and Fah twisted in his hateful embrace. She managed to push him away, for the first time, enraged by the fear he was instilling in her and his unreasonable claims of something that was too crazy to believe. This led her to exclaiming, “I hate you!”
Before her was a man completely different from the gentleman who had taken care of her when they went to the seashore. There was no trace of the questionable love that she had heard her coworkers gossiping of either. What he was doing to her was unacceptable.
She stared into his incredulous face. “Did you hear me? I hate you!”

For a split second, her words stopped him, froze his mind and froze his heart that she had no clue kept beating only due to her existence. In a matter of moments the heart that had never healed properly over the past three years was shattered all over again.
Something in Fah faltered at the pain in his eyes, but once the second was gone, she was once more trying to fight his tight grasp. His fingers wrapped around her upper arm painfully.
“Let go! Let me go!” But at the same moment she demanded to be released, a thrilling sensation ran down her spine when his lips silenced her. Somewhere deep in her, a different voice was crying to be held by him.

And though her eyes had closed, incredibly, she looked up to see the outline of him.

Her eyes flew open wide. Fah was aware of having clutched onto Charles’s shirt. Her hands let go and fisted against his chest when he powerfully brought her lips back to his. She beat his chest, with the disgusted thought of him kissing her. Yet, this very same thought seemed to draw all of her senses to the tingling of his lips and…

His lips. The way they smiled at her, the way they twisted when deep in thought, the way they frowned when she had been naughty, the way they kissed her when he forgave her, every time…and kissed her just for being her…

Charles couldn’t comprehend it when Fah responded to his kiss. He merely kissed harder and finally having his wife back in his arms where she belonged awakened all of his desires for life and love…and for her. Always, he had been faithful to her.
He backed her into the bed and fell on top of her. A small yelp was heard as Fah came to her senses and realized what had happened. “Get off! Let me go you psycho!”
He pinned her hands above her head. Peering down at her soft features, he recognized every contour of her eyes, nose and lips that were tensed in anger. Charles reminded himself that this woman had hurt him.
Fah’s breath caught when the corner of his lips curved into a slow humorless smirk. Those eyes of his glittered with intent, and came closer. She turned away just as he tried to kiss her, so that the tips of their noses brushed against each other…

“I love you very very very very oh so much!”

His lips grazed her cheek.

“This cheek is mine…And these lips are mine…”

“Stop!” she gasped. With a tremendous effort, Fah pulled herself to the present, as his breath trailed down her neck. “If you do this, I’ll never forgive you!”
“And why should I forgive you?” he retorted, breathing hard. He shook his head, eyes piercing through her, merciless. “A vow should never be broken. But you…you’ve undone everything. There’s no room for forgiveness.”
He shrugged his shirt off his shoulders, never breaking eye contact with her, then ducked back down and covered himself with her scent, becoming familiarized once more with all of her.
Fah was just about to resist again, but Charles had become replaced by him in an instant, and instead, she arched towards his surprisingly gentle kisses and nibbles. The melody of waves breaking against a shore—home, she thought—echoed in the background. She sensed the coolness of salty air as he opened up the front of her shirt. The strongest urge to embrace him surged through her.

“Do you hear the sound of my heart?”

The body, the warmth, and the touch that Fah felt were so well-known. Her palm stopped trying to push him away and she moaned as her lips were caught in his again and he caressed her face. Nothing had ever been more right than this.

“You are the best thing in my life…”
“We’ll stay together here…I promise.”


“Didn’t we promise each other?” Charles whispered. She pressed the side of her face against his, arousing all of those distant memories of peaceful nights with only the two of them.
She was disoriented with images of a wide open sky, glistening waters, a rocky cave…She fought against these, but even more tempting was the man, the one she knew she belonged to. Why had she been fighting him? She knew everything would be alright as long as she had him--his tender touch right now was proof.
Soon, there was nothing between their pulsing souls except skin, and Fah’s skin prickled and thrived with joy to be reunited with him. Her hand traced along the line of his waist, then ran across his shoulder blades and lower back. She knew every single inch of him.

Love, undeniable, irresistible and possessive, love crept from Fah’s heart and urgently directed her to kiss him back, to hold him, to never let go. Completely yielding, she obeyed her instincts.
The air had condensed substantially around them from their mingling breaths. Just before they shared their wedding night once more, Charles lifted his forehead against hers, and her arms hugged his neck, exactly the way he remembered, bringing their hearts so close that the beating merged in harmony. Fah looked into the eyes of the man of her dreams, which was her greatest pleasure of all.

“…We’re going to become one, right?”


[cue camera moves over to some miscellaneous object on the bedside table lol]
JJINXX I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU! I new I can count on you on giving us a better version of that scene... Man seriously I felt like I'm in seang duet leh fon again. Every word, every sentence was nicely written and I can tell you, when I read your ff I can imagine everything in my head. Its just like me watching it but instead I'm reading it. You are so awesome! Thank you so much na ja.
 

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LOL! Don’t get fired now because of GRGR. I’m at work and a lot of people are already off for Thanksgiving weekend so I’m just snooping around in here.

Jjinxx...you should write a fan fiction starting Yadech. I’d totally follow your work.
JJinxx has two ff for yadech and both are my favorite! One is jao hua jai and the other one is seang duet leh fon! Both of them are amazingly written. You should try it! And I don't mind for another one!
 
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