This is my version of Pah Loke Bunterng with Boy (Sia) and Mint (Kunthong) as the main couple. I feel that they have amazing chemistry. Kunthong is already in love with him, but she is in denial. However, he is clueless about his emotions. He thinks that he is in love with Nampeung. Blah blah blah. The story starts right after their embrace at the temple.
Surprised, both gazed deeply into each other eyes. Lost in the moment, Sia is thinking to himself. "She doesn't look too bad from this angle. Hey, she feels kind of soft and cuddly in my arms. Why didn't I notice that she's not a little kid before? Get a hold of yourself." Kunthong thought "I feel butterflies in my stomach. What is this feeling? Is it telling me that I like being in his arms? Ewww, did I just think that?" :blink:
Startled, both quickly pulled away. Kunthong is dusting herself off as to undo the embrace. "Ewww. I can feel my skin crawling!" Sia-"What the hell is wrong with you?" Impulsively, she punched him and continued dusting herself off. "Do you think you're made of gold or something Kunthong? I wouldn't touch you if I had a choice. You are way beneath me. Gosh, I hate the smell of poor people!" With that he stomped off. Her face instantly dropped and she was on the verge of tears. "That stupid jerk stole my first embrace and even have the nerve to degrade me. Even if he's the last man on the face of the Earth, I wouldn't look at him. I rather die an old maid!" Her hurt turned into anger.
A month has passed. They have less than a month to pay off the debt. She kept busy working but it feels like they can never get a break. Unless a miracle happened, they could be homeless. Lost in her thoughts walking through the marketplace, she bumped into Satang, who kept her from falling. "Kunthong, are you daydreaming? You should be more careful next time." "Thank you for saving me P'Satang." At a distance, Sia witnessed the incident.
Jealousy reared its ugly green eyes. "She couldn't bear me touching her, but she's grinning from ear to ear with that bastard!" He felt like punching Satang's face in. Like a hawk watching its prey, his eyes never left her. He waited until she was walking alone to approach her. As soon as she saw him, she turned the other way. He ran to block off her path.
Sia-"Kun, where do you think you're going?"
Kunthong-"It's Kunthong, ya. And it's none of your business. Get out of my way."
Sia stepped closer to her-"Why don't you make me?"
Kunthong backed away until she hit a post-"Sia, why do you bother me when you're not the least bit attracted to me? Or do you find me incredibly irresistible that you can't stay away?"He held a few strands of her her and sniffed it.
Sia-"Kunthong ja, I've just realized how womanly you became. Why don't we work out the debt between me and you? Nobody has to know about it."
Kunthong-"I rather sell my body to a beast than you a scum like you."
Sia-"Take that back."
Kunthong-"Never."
Sia-"You leave me with no choice." He held her face still with his hands and punished her with a kiss. She tried to resist him, but she was shocked. He coaxed her to respond to him and the kiss turned passionate. When he finally pulled away, they were both breathless. Embarassed, she slapped him across the face.
He pulled her in closer. Sia warned her,"I'd be careful if I were you."
Kunthong-"Alright you win. Just let me go." She pulled away.
Surprised, both gazed deeply into each other eyes. Lost in the moment, Sia is thinking to himself. "She doesn't look too bad from this angle. Hey, she feels kind of soft and cuddly in my arms. Why didn't I notice that she's not a little kid before? Get a hold of yourself." Kunthong thought "I feel butterflies in my stomach. What is this feeling? Is it telling me that I like being in his arms? Ewww, did I just think that?" :blink:
Startled, both quickly pulled away. Kunthong is dusting herself off as to undo the embrace. "Ewww. I can feel my skin crawling!" Sia-"What the hell is wrong with you?" Impulsively, she punched him and continued dusting herself off. "Do you think you're made of gold or something Kunthong? I wouldn't touch you if I had a choice. You are way beneath me. Gosh, I hate the smell of poor people!" With that he stomped off. Her face instantly dropped and she was on the verge of tears. "That stupid jerk stole my first embrace and even have the nerve to degrade me. Even if he's the last man on the face of the Earth, I wouldn't look at him. I rather die an old maid!" Her hurt turned into anger.
A month has passed. They have less than a month to pay off the debt. She kept busy working but it feels like they can never get a break. Unless a miracle happened, they could be homeless. Lost in her thoughts walking through the marketplace, she bumped into Satang, who kept her from falling. "Kunthong, are you daydreaming? You should be more careful next time." "Thank you for saving me P'Satang." At a distance, Sia witnessed the incident.
Jealousy reared its ugly green eyes. "She couldn't bear me touching her, but she's grinning from ear to ear with that bastard!" He felt like punching Satang's face in. Like a hawk watching its prey, his eyes never left her. He waited until she was walking alone to approach her. As soon as she saw him, she turned the other way. He ran to block off her path.
Sia-"Kun, where do you think you're going?"
Kunthong-"It's Kunthong, ya. And it's none of your business. Get out of my way."
Sia stepped closer to her-"Why don't you make me?"
Kunthong backed away until she hit a post-"Sia, why do you bother me when you're not the least bit attracted to me? Or do you find me incredibly irresistible that you can't stay away?"He held a few strands of her her and sniffed it.
Sia-"Kunthong ja, I've just realized how womanly you became. Why don't we work out the debt between me and you? Nobody has to know about it."
Kunthong-"I rather sell my body to a beast than you a scum like you."
Sia-"Take that back."
Kunthong-"Never."
Sia-"You leave me with no choice." He held her face still with his hands and punished her with a kiss. She tried to resist him, but she was shocked. He coaxed her to respond to him and the kiss turned passionate. When he finally pulled away, they were both breathless. Embarassed, she slapped him across the face.
He pulled her in closer. Sia warned her,"I'd be careful if I were you."
Kunthong-"Alright you win. Just let me go." She pulled away.
