Mai Kid Wah Ja Ruk Tur|Completed-22 Chapters Total
- Thread starter n_naruk
- Start date
transcend89
sarNie Adult
???? i wonder if the nearby house is where aff,aum,ken,ann,rita, and rome are staying that would be quite interesting can't wait...
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
don't give up Rome 
lol Dan seems like a stalker, although it was all coincidence
lol Dan seems like a stalker, although it was all coincidence 
n_naruk
TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
Chapter 20 Part 1
Ann, Aff, Ken, Aum, Rome and Rita were having dinner. Then all of a sudden they heard someone shouting from outside of the house.
Ken: Who the heck is out there shouting so loud?
Dan: Hello?! Anyone home?!
Ann: (looks at Ken) you should go check.
Ken was about to get up.
Aum: It’s fine…I’ll go…
With that said, Aum went outside to see who the shouting was from.
Aum: (by a surprised) Dan…Vicky? (runs down to Vicky and Dan) What happened to Vicky?
Dan: She stepped on a broken glass while walking by the beach.
Aum: Let’s get her in the house.
Dan follow Aum into the house and into the living room, still carrying Vicky. Dan sat Vicky down on the sofa.
Aum: Wait here. I’ll go get the first aid kit for you.
With that said Aum went to get the first aid kit.
Dan: Does it still hurt?
Vicky: A little bit.
Aum: (Aum comes back with the first aid kit and hands it to Dan) Here you go.
Dan: (takes the first aid kit from Aum) Thanks.
Vicky: I can clean it up myself.
Dan: It’s ok. I’ll do it.
Vicky: Are you sure?
Dan: Yea…
Vicky: (In Vicky’s mind, she would hope that Aum would be the one helping her not Dan) Where is everyone else? (Dan wet the cotton bud with the peroxide alcohol and wipes it on the cut on Vicky’s foot.) OWWW!!!!
Dan: Sorry!
Rita: Who was that screaming?
Rita and the others came out, all except Ann and Ken who were in the dining room cleaning up the dining table.
Dan&Vicky: Hey everyone.
Rome: How did you two get here?
Dan: I ran into Vicky at the beach and found her like this.
Aff: Vicky, I didn’t know you were coming here.
Vicky: Me either. It was a last minute thing. Just wanted to come out and relax.
Aum: What about you Dan?
Dan: Yea, same here. But I didn’t you all were going to be here.
Aum: Well, originally, it was supposed to be P’Ken, P’Ann, Aff and I but Rome wanted to come along to reconcile with Rita.
Right when Aum said that, Rome and Rita look at each other. Then Rita just turn away from here.
Vicky: Rome reconcile with Rita? Why what happened?
Rita: NOTHING HAPPENED!
With that said Rita got up and left to outside. Rome was about to follow Rita but Aff stop him.
Aff: I suggest you leave her alone for now or else it’s going to get worst.
Dan: I’m confused. So what exactly happened?
Rome: I don’t want to talk about it.
With that said, Rome got up and left, following Rita.
Aff: Well, anyways, where are you two staying at?
Vicky: At the nearby resort.
Aum: What about you Dan?
Dan: The same resort as Vicky.
Aff: Why won’t you both come and stay here with us? We have some room open don’t we Aum?
Vicky: I don’t think I’ll bother you guys.
Dan: Yea, me too. Plus I already check in at the resort.
Aum: Oh come on. It’ll be fun. Plus we can spend more time together. Just like the old days.
Vicky: I don’t know.
Aff: Please, Vicky!? Stay here with us. I haven’t seen you in years. I missed you.
Vicky: Alright. I’ll stay.
Aum: Dan?
Dan: Sure why not. (puts the bandage on Vicky’s cut on her foot)
Vicky: Thanks.
Dan: No problem.
Ann: (comes out with Ken) Hey guys.
Aff: P’Ann, is it ok if Dan and Vicky stays here with us?
Ann: I don’t know. You have to ask Ken since this is his house.
Aum: It’s my house too! And I already said they can stay. So yea…
Ken: I didn’t say you can’t decide brother.
Aum: Wait a minute, why is everyone all out here? Are you guys done with dinner already?
Ken: Yea…
Aum: What?! What about me?
Ken: (shrugs his shoulders) I don’t know. Starve I guess.
Ann: (hits Ken on the arm) Don’t tease him like that.
Ken: (rubs his arm) That hurts you know.
Ann: I don’t care.
Aum: P’Ken, you’re lame!
Ken: Dude, just relax. There’s still some left on the table for you. You’re such a kid.
Aum: Well, look who’s talking.
Ken: You are. Hahaha.
Ann: Stop it you two. You’re both acting like kids.
Aff: Aum, if you still wants to eat, go finish your plate.
Aum: Come with me sunshine?
AnnKenDan: Sunshine?
Aum: Why you all have to say it at once?
Ken: I think it’s just weird hearing you call Aff that.
Aff: Tell me about it.
Aum: (puts his arm around Aff) You know you like me calling you that, SUNSHINE.
Aff: Whatever.
Aum: Come back to the dining room with me please?
Aff: Why won’t you just go by yourself? I want to stay here.
Aum: (pouts his face) Please?
Aff: (There was no way that Aff can say no to that face) Oh fine…we’ll be back in a bit guys.
With that said, Aff and Aum left and went back to the dining room so Aum can finish his dinner.
Ann: So, where are you guys’ stuff?
Vicky: It’s still back at the resort. I’ll go get them in a little bit.
Dan: No! You stay here and I’ll get yours when I go get mines.
Vicky: I said I can go get mines.
Dan: You can’t. your foot is injured.
Ann: What happened to your foot Vicky?
Vicky: I step on a broken glass while I was walking by the beach.
Ann: Are you alright?
Vicky: Yea I’m fine now.
Ann: Well, then you just stay put. Have Dan go get your things. And I’ll have Ken go along with him to help.
Ken: I will?
Ann: Yes you will! (gave Ken a hard look) RIGHT KEN?
Ken: Right!
P.S. I will have the rest of Chapter 20 up tomorrow. Got distracted so couldn't type much. Lol. And I need to get some sleep now. Early up in the morning for work. ^_^
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
So it was Ken and Aum's house.
transcend89
sarNie Adult
hehehe my suspicions has been confirmed...awaiting pt2
n_naruk
TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
This FF is hekka dragging! I find the beginning of this part 2 somewhat lame and nam nao Lol. It's more focus on Rteam. Enjoy ^_^
Chapter 20 Part 2
Ken went with Dan to the resort to help him get his belongings, along with Vicky’s belongings. Aff, Aum, Ann and Vicky are in the house, watching television and chit chatting. While Rita is elsewhere on the beach and Rome as well. It’s quite dark outside. Rita took a far walk in from the house. Not realizing how far she had gone. Just a little bit off to the side were two guys walking there.
Guy 1: Hey dude. Look! (pointed to Rita)
Guy 2: (smirks at the other guy) Are you thinking what I’m thinking?
Guy 1: (nods) Let’s go.
They follow up to Rita.
Guy 1: (jumps in front of Rita) Hi there pretty girl.
Rita startled and ignore the guy. She turns around and the second guy block her.
Guy 2: Where are you going pretty girl?
Rita: Get out of my way. (tried to walk away but was block by both of them)
Guy 2: Where are you in a hurry to pretty girl. (touched Rita’s face but she slapped his hand away)
Guy 1: You should hang around with us for a little while.
Guy 1: Yea, it’ll be fun.
Rita: I said get out of my way! Or else!
Guy 2: Or else what?! What’s a petite girl like you is going to do to us?!
Both of the guys started laughing.
Rita: You won’t get out of my way huh? Alright, you asks for it!
Rita knee the second guy in his private.
Guy 2: (fell to the ground) OW! My baby!
Rita: I warned you didn’t I? (Rita was going to leave right when she kicked the guy to the ground without realizing there was two of them.)
Guy 1: (grabs Rita on the arm) And where do you think you’re going?
Rita: Let go of me!
Guy 1: If I let you go, then I’m stupid.
The guy tries to pull Rita closer to him and started to harass on her. So Rita gave him a kick on his private as well.
Rita: You don’t mess with me stupid idiots! (turns to go back to the house)
Guy 1: Dude, get her!
Guy 2: (punch Rita in the stomach right when she turn around) and you think you can get away from us!
Rita’s body got weak after being punch in the stomach. She fell to the ground. She could barely walk. The guys starts to go up closer to Rita.
Rita: (tries to pull herself back from them) Get away from me!! (starts to scream for help) HELP!!!!
Guy 1: (chuckles) You think anyone’s going to hear you?
Guy 2: There’s no one out here this late to save you pretty girl.
Rita: (she knew that there’s no way she can get away from those two guys. She screams as loud as she can) HELP! SOMEONE HELP ME!
Guy 1: Keep on screaming. No one’s around here except us two!
Rita: HELP!
Rome: (he was just walking and all of a sudden he heard a girl scream) Who the heck is screaming so loud?
Rita: HELP!!
Rome: (he recognize the voice) RITA! (he runs after the voice)
Guy 1: (kneel down to Rita and touch her on the chin) Come on, just give in on us already.
Rita: (slaps the guy’s hand away from her chin) NEVER!…Someone help me!!
Guy 2: Just keep on screaming and see if anyone would actually hear you!
Rome: (not too far from them) Rita! (runs to help Rita) You bastard! (he nailed guy 1 on the back of the head.)
Guy 1: Ow! (fell to the ground) What the heck.
Rita: (sees Rome) ROME!
Rome: Let the girl go!
Guy 2: And who are you to tell me what to do?!
Rome: I’m her boyfriend (didn’t hesitate to say that) And you need to get away from my girlfriend.
Guy 2: Over my dead body! I found her and now she’s going to be mine!
Rome: Not unless I’m here! (he punch the guy in the face)
Therefore, Rome and guy 2 started to fight each other. Rome got hit a few times. At last he was able to knock the guy down. But just when he was turning to go to Rita, guy 1 got up and punch Rome on the face! Rome fell to the ground.
Rita: ROME!
Guy 1 was fierce angry! He reach into his pocket and took out a pocket knife. He opens the knife up and walk closer to Rome as he was pulling himself away from the guy.
Rita: (thinking in her head) Shoot…Rita do something…(she looks around and found a big wood stick nearby. She hurries to get it)
Rita grab the wood stick and going back to help Rome. When she got closer to them she saw guy 1 was ready to get up to go help his buddy. So she hit him with the wood stick a few times until he pass out.
Rome: Rita watch out!
Rita saw guy 2 going towards her with the knife in his hand still. She immediately hit his hand and the knife fell to the ground.
Guy 2: You think you can stop me with that huh?
Rome: (gets up) She can’t but I can (he knock guy 2 on the back of the head with all the energy that he’s got)
Guy 2 fell to the ground and Rita started hitting him and hitting him until he pass out. Yet she was still hitting him until Rome stops her.
Rome: That’s enough (grab the wood stick from Rita) He’s out!
Rita: Thanks for helping me…
Rome: What are you doing out this far anyways?
Rita: I just came out for a walk that’s all. But I didn’t realized that I came this far.
Rome: Next time you should pay more attention to where you’re going. Did you not learn your lesson from the last time we were here?!
Rita: Well, sorry! I didn’t know!…again, thanks for helping…but then again, no thanks!
With that said Rita walks off, heading back to the house. Same with Rome.
----------
Dan and Ken just got back from the resort.
Dan: we got all your belongings from the resort.
Vicky: Thanks…and thank you two P’Ken.
Ken: Oh, it’s no problem…so did Rita and Rome come back yet?
Ann: Nope!
Just then Rome and Rita enter the living room to join the rest of them. Everyone saw Rome’s face with some bruises.
Aum: What happen to you?
Rome: Why don’t you ask her?! (meaning to Rita)
Rita: I said I was sorry. What else do you want me to do? Plus I didn’t ask you to come and help me anyways!
Rome: Really?! So who was it that I hear screaming “HELP HELP HELP” huh?!
Rita became silence.
Rome: That’s what I thought!
Rita: You’re a fucking shit face! (with that said, Rita got up and left to her room)
Aff: I’m going to go talk to her (with that said, Aff got up and went to Rita’s room)
Ken: This is only our first night here. And there’s so many troubles going on already.
Vicky: Maybe I should go back to the resort.
Ann: No need to.
Vicky: I don’t know…I feel like I’m really bothering you guys.
Aum: You’re not.
Ann: Just don’t listen to Ken.
Dan: I’m going to go put my stuff away now and yours too Vicky.
Vicky: It’s ok. I can do it myself…P’Ann, can you help me to the room I’m staying at?
Ann: Sure thing…Ken, help Dan with the stuff.
Ken: Yes mother!
Ann: Hey! ( gave a cold look at Ken)
Ken: I love you!
Ann help Vicky to her room. Ken help Dan with carrying the stuff.
Aum: So, I’m guessing things aren’t going too well huh?
Rome: I think I just screwed up by yelling at her! I’m so stupid!
Aum: Stop talking to yourself like that! Aff’s talking to her right now. She’ll come back out.
----------
Rita told Aff what happened outside earlier.
Aff: I don’t think you should go off on him like that.
Rita: He got me mad.
Aff: But still. You need to control your temper a bit. If it wasn’t for him, you’ll be done by those jerks!
Rita: But---
Aff: No buts! You need to go back out there and apologize to him---
Rita: But---
Aff: And thank him for helping you and most importantly. Don’t ignore him! Let him talk to you and say what he needs to say! And no BUTS!
Rita: I hate you right now!
Aff: I know!
----------
Rome: I wish that Rita is more like Aff.
Aum: Dude, what are you talking about?! I say Rita wasn’t as worst as how Rita is right now! Aff was ten times worst!
Aff: What about Aff?
Aum: (mumbles) Yikes.
Aff: (sat down next to Aum) So what were you saying about me?!
Aum: How much I love you!
Aff: Liar!
Aum: I do though.
Rome and Rita were both silence.
Aff: Well, you two should talk now. And remember what I told you Rita!
Aum: (pats Rome on the shoulder) Cheer up dude!
Aff: And don’t forget to care him too with all those bruises on his face.
With that said, Aff and Aum left to go out to the porch outside from the living room. Rita look at Rome and he was looking away from her. Rita walk off.
Rome: Just as I thought.
He then lay down on the sofa, closing his eyes. Then minutes later he startled by the coldness on his face.
Rome: (opens his eyes) Rita…I thought you left…
Rita: I did…to go get this (sticks out the ice pack to Rome’s eyes)
Rome: Oh…
Rita: Don’t move (continues to rub the ice pack on the bruise spots on Rome’s face)
There was a moment of silence.
Rome: (grabs Rita’s hand and sat up) Look, I’m sorry about earlier.
Rita: I’m sorry. You helped me yet I ended up yelling at you.
Rome: You only did that was because I yelled at you first.
Rita: But still…I’m sorry…
Rome: It’s alright…now, can we go back and be the way we were before? Forget what happened…well, I take that back…but you know what I mean.
Rita was silence.
Rome: Well?
Rita: Can I ask you something?
Rome: Anything
Rita: Promise you have to tell me the truth.
Rome: Promise.
Rita: Aum said that you love me…is that true?
Rome: You think I would lie? Aum is my best friend. I tell him everything.
Rita: That’s not the answer I want to know…so is it true?
Rome: Yes! I’m not going to lie. I started liking you since high school. And then as the time went by, I realized that I’ve falling in love with you.
Rita: And why didn’t you ask me out since then?
Rome: I don’t know?…I guess I was scared that you’d reject me.
Rita: You don’t know that.
Rome: So you do like me too then?
Rita: (smiles) I guess!
Rome: (pulls Rita closer to him) You like me! Just admit it already!
Rita: Sure!
Rome: Ruk na! (gave a peck kiss on Rita’s cheek)
Rita: (hits Rome) There you go again with that.
Rome: (smirks) Only because I love you or else I wouldn’t do that!
Chapter 20 Part 3 Teaser: Expect the unexpected!
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
yay Rteam is together now. Rome to the rescue, although Rita could fight for herself too
n_naruk
TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
Chapter 20 Part 3
An hour has gone by. Everyone was doing their own thing. Ann and Ken are in their room. Vicky and Dan are resting in their own rooms. Rome and Rita stayed in the living room and got all cozy up with each other. Aff and Aum are sitting on the bench chair out in the porch enjoying the beach breeze and viewing the stars in the dark sky. It started to get chilly outside.
Aum: Why won’t you go inside now. It’s getting cold.
Aff: Yea I think I will. Are you coming in too?
Aum: No, you just go. I’m going to stay out here for a little bit more.
Aff: Alright. Don’t be out too long. Or else you’re going to get sick from the chill breeze.
Aum: (salutes at Aff) Krub pom.
Aff: (rolls her eyes) Loser!
Aum: You love me!
Aff: Sure I do…
Aum: (peck a kiss on Aff’s cheek) I’ll be in in a little bit.
Aff: Ja.
With that said, Aff went inside and found Rome sleeping his head on Rita’s lap. While Rita fell her head back on the sofa, asleep as well.
Aff: (taps on Rome and Rita) Hey you two! Wake up!
Rome and Rita didn’t wake up.
Aff: (hits Rita) Wake up!
Rita: Huh…who…where’s the burglar?
Aff: There’s no burglar here. Wake up and go sleep in your room. Rome too!
Rita: Oh shoot. I didn’t even know I fell asleep.
Aff: (yawns) Well, I’m going to bed now.
Rita: Where’s Aum?
Aff: Still out in the porch…I’ll see you in the morning.
Rita: Alright…good night.
Aff: Good night. (with that said, Aff went to her room)
Rita: Rome, wake up (tries to wake up Rome but he wouldn’t wake up) Rome! Damn you shit face! (she slammed her hand down on the bruised spot on his face)
Rome: (wakes up immediately) OWWWW!!!
Rita: Oh, sorry! I didn’t mean too. Are you alright?
Rome: It hurts.
Rita: I’m sorry! But get up now and go sleep in your room.
Rome: No, I’m comfortable here.
Rita: Either do get up or die!
Rome: (gets up from Rita’s laps) You’re mean.
Rita: That’s what I do best. I’ll see you in the morning. (she stood up)
Rome: No good night kiss?
Rita: Nope! Since you didn’t want to listen to me earlier.
Rome: No fair! (he pouted his face)
Rita: It’ fair. See you in the morning.
With that said, Rita left to her room and Rome left to his room as well. Sometimes later, Aum who didn’t even notice that he’d falling asleep on the bench chair. Vicky couldn’t sleep. So she decided that she wanted to go out to the porch for some fresh air, still limping on her injured foot. She opened the slide door to the porch. There she saw Aum, who’s sleeping on the bench chair. She left the slide door open.
Vicky: (thinking to herself) Why is he out here alone? Did he and Aff get into an argument? (she walks up to Aum and found him sleeping. She was silence for a moment) If I hadn’t left to go study in New York. We’d have still be together right now. Better yet, married…you and I…not you and Aff (she then touch Aum on the face)
Aum: (startled by the touch on his face. He woke up) Vicky.
Vicky: Sorry, I didn’t mean to wake you up.
Aum: It’s ok…but thanks though. I didn’t even know that I fell asleep.
Vicky: Why are you sleeping out here anyways? Are you and Aff ok?
Aum: Yea, we’re fine. I told Aff to head in because it was getting chilly out.
Vicky: Oh…I see.
Aum: What are you doing out here? Isn’t your foot still hurting.
Vicky: Yea, just a little bit. I couldn’t sleep so I wanted to come out for some fresh air. Didn’t expect to find you out here.
Aum: Oh…well, I’m going to head in now. (gets up)
Vicky: Aum?…
Aum: Yea…
Vicky: Can we talk?
Aum: Sure. What about?
Vicky: Us…
Aum: Vicky…there’s no us anymore, ever since you left to New York.
Vicky: So, if I didn’t go. You would still be with me and married me instead of Aff right?
Aum: Vicky, why are you talking to me about this? We’re done!
----------
Aff is in her room, watching television and waiting for Aum. She realized that it’s been a while already and he still hasn’t come back inside yet. She decided to go get Aum.
----------
Vicky: Please, give me another chance. (she grabbed and nagged on Aum’s arms)
Aum: What chance? There’s no chance. I’m married now Vicky. Don’t you understand?
Vicky: Don’t you love me anymore?
Aum: Before, when we were still together. But now, Aff’s the one I love, always and forever. For you and I, I only love you as a friend. And if you would, please not talk about that anymore. There’s no point of it.
With that said, Aum shook Vicky’s hands of from his arms and walk back inside the house. Then all of a sudden he heard a hard hit on the porch. He turn back and saw Vicky down on the porch. He rush back to Vicky.
Aum: Are you alright?
Vicky: Yea, I’m fine. It’s just my foot.
Aum: Well, here I’ll help you up.
Aum help Vicky up by grabbing her on her upper arms. Vicky too, grab onto Aum’s arms as he was helping her up.
Aum: Can you walk back to your room?
Vicky: I think so (took a couple of steps, and tending to fall but was help by Aum)
Aum: I’ll walk you to your room.
Just as Aum was going to walk Vicky inside the house. She stops him.
Vicky: Aum, wait (she hug him)
Aum: Vicky, what are you doing? Let go of me before someone sees us.
Vicky: (hugs onto Aum really tight) Please Aum, just one last hug…
Since Vicky said just one last hug Aum just let it be.
But what he doesn’t know was that Aff saw Vicky hugging him. Aff became angry but instead of going out to break Vicky and Aum apart. She just turn to go back to her room. But once she turn around, she saw Dan, who saw Vicky hugging Aum as well. Dan can tell that Aff is very angry of the scene that they both just saw. Aff didn’t say anything to Dan. She just went back to her room.
Dan: (looks out to the porch and still see Vicky hugging Aum) Vicky, what are you trying to do? He’s your friend’s husband.
----------
Aum walk Vicky back to her room.
Vicky: Thanks for walking me back.
Aum: No problem. Good night now.
Vicky: Good night.
Aum left. Vicky close her door. Aum headed back to Aff. He reached the room and the door was closed. He turn on the door knob but it wouldn’t turn.
Aum: Why is the door lock? (knocks on the door) Sunshine, open the door for me. (there was no answer) Sunshine, are you still awake?
there was still no answer. He became worried. So he went to get the spare key so he can unlock the door. He got the door unlock and open it. Just right when he opened the door, Aff threw a blanket and a pillow straight at him.
Aum: What’s with this?
Aff: You can sleep out on the sofa.
Aum: What? Why?
Aff: (gave Aum a harsh, cold stare) And don’t even think of trying to unlock the door again. (she then shut the door on him)
Aum: Sunshine! What the heck just happened?
Aum didn’t bother to have Aff open the door for him. He just went and slept on the sofa for the rest of the night…leaving himself confused to why Aff kicked him out from sleeping in the room with her.
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
gasp I can't believe Vicky did that. Poor Aum, Aff misjudged the situation.
transcend89
sarNie Adult
ah aff its just a little misunderstanding don't be so mad and JEALOUS lol poor dan he really likes vicky
n_naruk
TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
Chapter 21
I'm so sorry for the slow update. I've been slacking on this FF since it's coming to an end. Thought I update the next chapter now. Hahaha. Gosh, it's so nam nao! Hahaha
The next morning. Ann and Ken were the first to come out from their room. Ann wanted to go down to the kitchen to help with breakfast and she wanted to drag Ken along with her. Ken and Ann walk out to the living room and see a big pile of blanket on the sofa.
Ann: Who slept out here?
Ken: [shrug] I don’t know.
Ann: Check and see.
Ken: [pulls the blanket] Aum?
Aum woke up by the sound of Ken calling pulling the blanket off.
Ann: What are you doing sleeping out here?
Aum: [sits up] Aff locked me out last night.
Ken: Why?
Aum: I don’t know. I was going back into the room and all of a sudden she threw a pillow and blanket at me.
Ken: What did you do?
Aum: I don’t know. I didn’t do anything.
Ann: I’ll go talk to her.
Aum: It’s ok P’Ann.
Ann: Are you sure?
Aum: Yea…
Rome and Rita came out together.
Rome/Rita: Good morning everyone.
Rita: So what’s going on?
Rome: Aum, are you alright?
Ann: Ken and I are going down to the kitchen.
Everyone nods. Ann and Ken left. Rome and Rita sat down.
Rita: What’s with the blanket here?
Aum: I slept out here last night.
Rome: What why?
Aum: Aff locked me out.
Rita/Rome: Why?
Aum: I don’t know. [gets up] I’m going to go get wash up now. [leaves]
Rita: Something happened last night.
Rome: But what?
----------
Aum: [knocking on the door] Sunshine, can you open the door for me? Sunshine! [there was no answer] if you’re not going to open the door, I’m going to break it down----
Aff: [opens the door] What do you want?
Aum: Can I go in to wash up and change?
Aff move out of the way and let Aum in. right when Aum got in the room, Aff sees Vicky walking out. Vicky shot a smile at Aff. Aff didn’t bother to care. She just slam the door close.
Vicky: [mumbles] What’s wrong with her.
Dan: [came up behind Vicky] You should know!
Vicky: [turns to Dan] What are you talking about?
Dan gave Vicky and harsh look and walk out to the leaving room. Dan sure did go into the living room at the wrong time. There, Rome and Rita were having some sweet, cuddling, kissing moments.
Dan: Oh please! Get a room.
Rome and Rita startled and stop whatever they were doing.
Rome: Dan, I didn’t know you were here.
Dan: How can you when you two were so busy making love.
Rita: [blush] Shut up.
Dan: It’s true.
Vicky came out to the living room. She said hi to Rome and Rita. She look over at Dan and he gave her a cold look.
Rita: Vicky, where are you going?
Vicky: Out for a walk. I’ll see you guys later. [leaves]
Rome: Dan, what’s with the look you have for Vicky?
Dan told Rome and Rita of he saw the night before with Vicky and Dan.
----------
Vicky is out walking on the beach, having something thoughts and thinking going through her mind. Then all of a sudden, she felt a hand grab onto her arm and pull her back.
Vicky: [turn to see who it was] Dan…what are you doing out here?
Dan: Why did you do that last night?
Vicky: What are you talking about?
Dan: [grabs Vicky really tight on the arm] You know exactly what I’m talking about.
Vicky: Ow! Let go of me. [trying to pull Dan’s hand off from her arm] You’re hurting me.
Dan: I bet Aff is way more hurt from what she saw last night than me holding onto your arm.
Vicky: [mumbles] That’s why she was like that towards me earlier.
Dan: You think?
Vicky: Do you even know what I’m talking about?
Dan: YES!…Aff saw you hugging Aum last night.
Vicky: I didn’t mean to do that. I don’t know what has gotten into me. I just don’t know [tears]
Dan: [let go of Vicky’s arm] If you know what you did was wrong. Then you should go and apologize to Aff. She’s really mad at you at the moment. And when she’s mad. She’ll be mad for a while. Or until you apologize since you’re the one at fault. And not only that she’s mad at you. She’s mad at Aum as well.
Vicky: I know…
Dan: [wipes off the wet tears on Vicky’s cheek]
Vicky: Why do you care so much of what I do?
Dan: Because I do…
Vicky: Why?
Dan: Because…I like you…
Vicky: [eyes widen]
Dan: And I don’t want you do be doing the wrong thing towards them. Aum loves Aff and Aff loves him too.
Vicky: I know…after last night…I’ve realized that.
Dan: Well, now you have to solve the problem.
----------
Aum just got done getting dress. Aff is sitting in front of the mirror dresser, beautiting herself with facial cream and lotioning her arms. Aum comes up behind her and peck kiss her on the cheek. Aff gets up and walk away from him.
Aum: [mad] What is wrong with you? Since last night.
Aff: You should know.
Aum: Well, I don’t because you’re not telling me anything.
Aff: Gin yooh gub pbak, yak yooh gub tong [ate with your mouth, hungry with your stomach --- err, that’s the best I can translate that. Hope it makes sense? Lol]
With that said, Aff left the room.
Aum: Aff! [ran after Aff] Would you just listen to me?! [grab Aff on the arm]
Rome and Rita heard Aum shouting for Aff.
Aff: [turn to Aum] Let go of me.
Aum: Not until you tell me what’s wrong with you.
Aff: Nothing’s wrong with me.
Aum: You’re lying.
Aff: Don’t believe me then.
Aum: I don’t.
Aff: What ever. [shook her arm off from Aum’s hand. She sees Vicky walking in] Why won’t you go talk to someone that actually wants to talk to you. [leaves to go join Rome and Rita]
Rita: Are you two ok?
Aff: yea…
Vicky: Hey guys.
Aff: I’m going out for some fresh air. [gets up]
Vicky: [stops Aff from leaving] Please don’t.
Aff: MOVE!
Vicky: NO!
Dan: Aff, listen to her.
Aff: No reason to.
Vicky: Please, let me explain.
Aff: Explain what?
Vicky: I know you know about what I did last night. I’m sorry.
Aff: How could you Vicky? [holding in her tears]
Vicky: [tears] I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to do that. I went through my mind. I guess I was just upset and jealous of you being with Aum. And every time I see you two together, I miss the old times that Aum and I used to share with each other.
Aum: [walks up to Aff and Vicky] But you know that that’s the past. It’s over already.
Vicky: [turn to Aum] I know and I should have let that go [turns to Aff] I’m sorry for making you misunderstand Aum. And the hug last was nothing more than just us being friends.
Aff: How do I know that?
Aum: Take my words. Aff, I love you and I’ll never do anything to hurt you like that.
Aff: You both are full of crap!
Vicky: Aff, it’s the truth. I swear. I was stupid enough not to realized that Aum really does love you. And I’m sorry for my wrong doing.
Dan: Aff, Vicky is telling you the truth.
Aff: [looks over at Dan. She knows that Dan would never ever say a lie to her]
Vicky: And I too know that you too love Aum very much. [takes Aff and Aum’s hand and let them hold hands and walks by Dan] Thanks Dan.
Dan smiles at Vicky.
Aum: Now, are you still mad at me?
Aff: [mumbles] No.
Aum: I love you sunshine.
Aff: I know.
Aum: What just that? No I love you back to me?
Rita: Yea, Aff. I’ve never heard you tell Aum that you love him before.
Aff: I don’t like to say it.
Rome: Why not?
Aff: I don’t know?
Aum: Not even one time sunshine?
Dan: Come on Aff. You know you love Aum too. So just say it.
Vicky: Don’t be shy now.
Aff started to blush.
Rome/Rita/Dan/Vicky: Say it! Say it!
Ann and Ken came back into the living room from the kitchen.
Ken: Did we miss something?
Rome: Sure did!
Ann: Which is what?
Rita: A whole big misuderstanding between Aff and Aum to why Aum was sleeping out here last night.
Dan: And now, we’re just waiting for Aff to tell Aum that she loves Aum.
Ann: Yea, Aff, when will we hear you say that to Aum?
Aff: P’Ann, you’re on it with them too?
Ann: I guess? If you do love the guy. Why be so shy about saying it?
Ken: That’s right. Ann says it to me all the time.
Aum: Everyone is waiting.
Aff: Fine…I love you too Aum.
Rome/Rita/Ann/Ken/Dan/Vicky: AWWWS!
Aum: [tease] Are you just saying that because everyone told you too?
Aff: NO! I really do love you. If I don’t I wouldn’t even bother getting marry to you.
Aum: Really? You love me since then?
Aff: No…
Aum: Since when then?
Aff: I don’t know…
Rita: Oh just tell him Aff! If you don’t I will!
Aum: Since when Rita?
Rita: Since Fresh---
Aff: Rita, quiet!
Aum: Tell me then.
Aff: Since Freshman year college.
Aum: Really? Well, I loved you since the first time I met you.
Aff: Who asked?
Aum: Just thought I’d tell you.
Ann: Ok, enough with the sweetness. Breakfast is ready.
Rome: Sweet! I’m starving.
Rita: Me too!
Dan: I’m with you on that!
Ann and Ken left to the dining room first.
Ken: I love you.
Ann: Love you too butt face!
Then it was Rome and Rita.
Rome: I love you my aggressive girlfriend.
Rita: Sure you do.
Rome: Don’t believe me?
Rita: [shrug] Should I?
Rome: Of course. And don’t you love me?
Rita: I don’t know.
Rome: You’re lame. [pouts his face]
Rita: I was just kidding. Of course I love you shit face!
Dan took Vicky’s hand and left to the dining room.
Dan: I like you.
Vicky: [smiles]
Dan: You don’t have to say that you like me at this moment. I’ll give you some more time.
Vicky: I like you too?
Dan: You do?
Vicky: Yes…you’ve made me realized earlier that I should put my feelings towards someone who truly cares for me and that person is you.
Aum: So we’re all good now?
Aff: No!…we’re great! I love you! [peck kiss Aum on the cheek]
Aum: And I love you! [peck kiss Aff on the cheek]
NOTE: So I've decided that next chapter is the ending + an epilogue
I'm so sorry for the slow update. I've been slacking on this FF since it's coming to an end. Thought I update the next chapter now. Hahaha. Gosh, it's so nam nao! Hahaha
The next morning. Ann and Ken were the first to come out from their room. Ann wanted to go down to the kitchen to help with breakfast and she wanted to drag Ken along with her. Ken and Ann walk out to the living room and see a big pile of blanket on the sofa.
Ann: Who slept out here?
Ken: [shrug] I don’t know.
Ann: Check and see.
Ken: [pulls the blanket] Aum?
Aum woke up by the sound of Ken calling pulling the blanket off.
Ann: What are you doing sleeping out here?
Aum: [sits up] Aff locked me out last night.
Ken: Why?
Aum: I don’t know. I was going back into the room and all of a sudden she threw a pillow and blanket at me.
Ken: What did you do?
Aum: I don’t know. I didn’t do anything.
Ann: I’ll go talk to her.
Aum: It’s ok P’Ann.
Ann: Are you sure?
Aum: Yea…
Rome and Rita came out together.
Rome/Rita: Good morning everyone.
Rita: So what’s going on?
Rome: Aum, are you alright?
Ann: Ken and I are going down to the kitchen.
Everyone nods. Ann and Ken left. Rome and Rita sat down.
Rita: What’s with the blanket here?
Aum: I slept out here last night.
Rome: What why?
Aum: Aff locked me out.
Rita/Rome: Why?
Aum: I don’t know. [gets up] I’m going to go get wash up now. [leaves]
Rita: Something happened last night.
Rome: But what?
----------
Aum: [knocking on the door] Sunshine, can you open the door for me? Sunshine! [there was no answer] if you’re not going to open the door, I’m going to break it down----
Aff: [opens the door] What do you want?
Aum: Can I go in to wash up and change?
Aff move out of the way and let Aum in. right when Aum got in the room, Aff sees Vicky walking out. Vicky shot a smile at Aff. Aff didn’t bother to care. She just slam the door close.
Vicky: [mumbles] What’s wrong with her.
Dan: [came up behind Vicky] You should know!
Vicky: [turns to Dan] What are you talking about?
Dan gave Vicky and harsh look and walk out to the leaving room. Dan sure did go into the living room at the wrong time. There, Rome and Rita were having some sweet, cuddling, kissing moments.
Dan: Oh please! Get a room.
Rome and Rita startled and stop whatever they were doing.
Rome: Dan, I didn’t know you were here.
Dan: How can you when you two were so busy making love.
Rita: [blush] Shut up.
Dan: It’s true.
Vicky came out to the living room. She said hi to Rome and Rita. She look over at Dan and he gave her a cold look.
Rita: Vicky, where are you going?
Vicky: Out for a walk. I’ll see you guys later. [leaves]
Rome: Dan, what’s with the look you have for Vicky?
Dan told Rome and Rita of he saw the night before with Vicky and Dan.
----------
Vicky is out walking on the beach, having something thoughts and thinking going through her mind. Then all of a sudden, she felt a hand grab onto her arm and pull her back.
Vicky: [turn to see who it was] Dan…what are you doing out here?
Dan: Why did you do that last night?
Vicky: What are you talking about?
Dan: [grabs Vicky really tight on the arm] You know exactly what I’m talking about.
Vicky: Ow! Let go of me. [trying to pull Dan’s hand off from her arm] You’re hurting me.
Dan: I bet Aff is way more hurt from what she saw last night than me holding onto your arm.
Vicky: [mumbles] That’s why she was like that towards me earlier.
Dan: You think?
Vicky: Do you even know what I’m talking about?
Dan: YES!…Aff saw you hugging Aum last night.
Vicky: I didn’t mean to do that. I don’t know what has gotten into me. I just don’t know [tears]
Dan: [let go of Vicky’s arm] If you know what you did was wrong. Then you should go and apologize to Aff. She’s really mad at you at the moment. And when she’s mad. She’ll be mad for a while. Or until you apologize since you’re the one at fault. And not only that she’s mad at you. She’s mad at Aum as well.
Vicky: I know…
Dan: [wipes off the wet tears on Vicky’s cheek]
Vicky: Why do you care so much of what I do?
Dan: Because I do…
Vicky: Why?
Dan: Because…I like you…
Vicky: [eyes widen]
Dan: And I don’t want you do be doing the wrong thing towards them. Aum loves Aff and Aff loves him too.
Vicky: I know…after last night…I’ve realized that.
Dan: Well, now you have to solve the problem.
----------
Aum just got done getting dress. Aff is sitting in front of the mirror dresser, beautiting herself with facial cream and lotioning her arms. Aum comes up behind her and peck kiss her on the cheek. Aff gets up and walk away from him.
Aum: [mad] What is wrong with you? Since last night.
Aff: You should know.
Aum: Well, I don’t because you’re not telling me anything.
Aff: Gin yooh gub pbak, yak yooh gub tong [ate with your mouth, hungry with your stomach --- err, that’s the best I can translate that. Hope it makes sense? Lol]
With that said, Aff left the room.
Aum: Aff! [ran after Aff] Would you just listen to me?! [grab Aff on the arm]
Rome and Rita heard Aum shouting for Aff.
Aff: [turn to Aum] Let go of me.
Aum: Not until you tell me what’s wrong with you.
Aff: Nothing’s wrong with me.
Aum: You’re lying.
Aff: Don’t believe me then.
Aum: I don’t.
Aff: What ever. [shook her arm off from Aum’s hand. She sees Vicky walking in] Why won’t you go talk to someone that actually wants to talk to you. [leaves to go join Rome and Rita]
Rita: Are you two ok?
Aff: yea…
Vicky: Hey guys.
Aff: I’m going out for some fresh air. [gets up]
Vicky: [stops Aff from leaving] Please don’t.
Aff: MOVE!
Vicky: NO!
Dan: Aff, listen to her.
Aff: No reason to.
Vicky: Please, let me explain.
Aff: Explain what?
Vicky: I know you know about what I did last night. I’m sorry.
Aff: How could you Vicky? [holding in her tears]
Vicky: [tears] I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to do that. I went through my mind. I guess I was just upset and jealous of you being with Aum. And every time I see you two together, I miss the old times that Aum and I used to share with each other.
Aum: [walks up to Aff and Vicky] But you know that that’s the past. It’s over already.
Vicky: [turn to Aum] I know and I should have let that go [turns to Aff] I’m sorry for making you misunderstand Aum. And the hug last was nothing more than just us being friends.
Aff: How do I know that?
Aum: Take my words. Aff, I love you and I’ll never do anything to hurt you like that.
Aff: You both are full of crap!
Vicky: Aff, it’s the truth. I swear. I was stupid enough not to realized that Aum really does love you. And I’m sorry for my wrong doing.
Dan: Aff, Vicky is telling you the truth.
Aff: [looks over at Dan. She knows that Dan would never ever say a lie to her]
Vicky: And I too know that you too love Aum very much. [takes Aff and Aum’s hand and let them hold hands and walks by Dan] Thanks Dan.
Dan smiles at Vicky.
Aum: Now, are you still mad at me?
Aff: [mumbles] No.
Aum: I love you sunshine.
Aff: I know.
Aum: What just that? No I love you back to me?
Rita: Yea, Aff. I’ve never heard you tell Aum that you love him before.
Aff: I don’t like to say it.
Rome: Why not?
Aff: I don’t know?
Aum: Not even one time sunshine?
Dan: Come on Aff. You know you love Aum too. So just say it.
Vicky: Don’t be shy now.
Aff started to blush.
Rome/Rita/Dan/Vicky: Say it! Say it!
Ann and Ken came back into the living room from the kitchen.
Ken: Did we miss something?
Rome: Sure did!
Ann: Which is what?
Rita: A whole big misuderstanding between Aff and Aum to why Aum was sleeping out here last night.
Dan: And now, we’re just waiting for Aff to tell Aum that she loves Aum.
Ann: Yea, Aff, when will we hear you say that to Aum?
Aff: P’Ann, you’re on it with them too?
Ann: I guess? If you do love the guy. Why be so shy about saying it?
Ken: That’s right. Ann says it to me all the time.
Aum: Everyone is waiting.
Aff: Fine…I love you too Aum.
Rome/Rita/Ann/Ken/Dan/Vicky: AWWWS!
Aum: [tease] Are you just saying that because everyone told you too?
Aff: NO! I really do love you. If I don’t I wouldn’t even bother getting marry to you.
Aum: Really? You love me since then?
Aff: No…
Aum: Since when then?
Aff: I don’t know…
Rita: Oh just tell him Aff! If you don’t I will!
Aum: Since when Rita?
Rita: Since Fresh---
Aff: Rita, quiet!
Aum: Tell me then.
Aff: Since Freshman year college.
Aum: Really? Well, I loved you since the first time I met you.
Aff: Who asked?
Aum: Just thought I’d tell you.
Ann: Ok, enough with the sweetness. Breakfast is ready.
Rome: Sweet! I’m starving.
Rita: Me too!
Dan: I’m with you on that!
Ann and Ken left to the dining room first.
Ken: I love you.
Ann: Love you too butt face!
Then it was Rome and Rita.
Rome: I love you my aggressive girlfriend.
Rita: Sure you do.
Rome: Don’t believe me?
Rita: [shrug] Should I?
Rome: Of course. And don’t you love me?
Rita: I don’t know.
Rome: You’re lame. [pouts his face]
Rita: I was just kidding. Of course I love you shit face!
Dan took Vicky’s hand and left to the dining room.
Dan: I like you.
Vicky: [smiles]
Dan: You don’t have to say that you like me at this moment. I’ll give you some more time.
Vicky: I like you too?
Dan: You do?
Vicky: Yes…you’ve made me realized earlier that I should put my feelings towards someone who truly cares for me and that person is you.
Aum: So we’re all good now?
Aff: No!…we’re great! I love you! [peck kiss Aum on the cheek]
Aum: And I love you! [peck kiss Aff on the cheek]
NOTE: So I've decided that next chapter is the ending + an epilogue
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
YAY aff and aum came back together. i love how they all said 'i love you' to their significant other. the next one is going to be the last chapter awww.
transcend89
sarNie Adult
lol i love how they made aff say i love you and everyone except dan and vicky said i like you the end is near and the sequel is almost up can't wait
n_naruk
TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
Chapter 22: The End.
Seven months later…
Aff’s baby is nearly due…
The four couples decided to have a BBQ cook out in the back of Aum and Aff’s house. The girls are messing around with the beef/steak/chicken teriyaki sticks on the grill while the guys are just relaxing and chit chatting at the tables and having some drinks.
Ann: Aff, you should go sit down. Your stomach is too big to be standing around like this.
Vicky: P’Ann is right Aff. Go rest yourself.
Aff: Please don’t start on that with me again. I’ve been staying home for the past, what 7 months doing nothing because of that dude over there [motioned to Aum]
Aum: I heard that.
Aff: GOOD! You guys have no idea of how painful it is.
Aum: I only did that because I love you and don’t want you to work.
Aff: Whatever…
Aum: [talks to the guys] So when are you guys planning on having a baby?
Ken: You know me. Been working on that since the wedding night! 7 months ago. Yet, there’s still nothing.
Rome: To, it’s up to my hunny.
Dan: Same here. I won’t have it until she’s ready.
Rita: You know guys [turns to the guys] we’re standing right here.
Vicky: Yea, don’t think that we can’t hear you.
Dan: We know…
Ann: Yet, you’re still talking about us…
Ken: I love you!
Ann strike a look at Ken.
Rita: You guys are so lame.
Rome: You love me.
Rita: Shit face.
Aff: Believe me. I don’t think you girls want to be in my situation yet. It’s nothing but pain. Pain in the back!
Aum: I have pain too…not just you. I get knock off the bed with your big tummy almost every morning.
Aff: That’s not my fault is it?
Then within the next few moments. Aff’s face started to sorrow up.
Rome: Is the food done yet? I’m hungry.
Rita: Chill your horses would you.
Rome: Well, hurry up.
Rita: Try be the one to grill then. Shit face.
Vicky: [notice the look on Aff’s face] Aff, are you ok?
Aff: [holding onto her stomach] I don’t know.
Ann: [looks down to the floor] I think your water broke.
Aff: WHAT?!
Aum: What’s wrong sunshine?
Rita: Your wife is about to give birth idiot.
Aum: WHAT?!
Vicky: Don’t just sit there and be all shock. Take her to the hospital.
Aff: OWW!!! Fucking shit!!
Rita: Aum, hurry before she gives birth here!
With that said, Aum quickly got up and pick up Aff and carry her to the car.
Aff: OMG! My fucking shit! [yanking onto Aum’s hair]
Aum: Ouch. Sunshine, you’re hurting me!
Aff: Shut the fuck up! AHHH!! RITA!!!
Vicky: I think she wants you.
Ann: Go hold her in the back seat and we’ll be right over.
Rita: Ok…[pulls Rome with her]
Rome: Where are you taking me?
Rita: You’re coming with me.
Rome: o….k…
Rome and Rita went with Aum and Aff.
Vicky: After seeing Aff like that. I’m scared to have a baby now.
Ann: [shivering] Yea, me too.
Ken: I want kids!
Ann: Knock your socks off Ken.
Dan: I want kids too.
Vicky: It’s not going to be in a while hunny. I love you but you have to wait.
Dan: We’ll see about that.
Ken: [wines] I want to have kids!
Ann: Have it yourself. I am so not ready for that after seeing my sister in such pain.
Ken: Just because Aff is like that, doesn’t mean you’re going to be the same way.
Ann: I think I know…
Vicky: Let’s stop arguing and head out to the hospital.
With that said, they put all the BBQ stuff back inside the house and killed the fired on the grill and head their way out to the hospital.
Aff: [screaming] OW!! OMG! Are we there yet?!
Rita: [holding onto Aff] Calm down. We’re almost there.
Aff: Calm down? You want me to calm down? My baby is about to shoot out in my vagina and you want me to calm down?! [sat up and yank onto Aum’s driver seat] Why are you driving so slow?!
Aum: [startled by Aff yanking on the seat] I’m going as fast as I could. I don’t want to get pull over.
Aff: Dude [yank on Aum’s shoulder] If you’re not going any faster than this. I swear the back seat of your car is going to be full of bloody waters!
Aum: Ok, hold on…just lay back down would you? You’re hurting me.
Aff: I don’t care…I’m hurting way more than you are right now. I so hate you right now Aum!
Aum: What I do?
Rita: [pulls Aff back] Lay back down!
Rome: Aff look so scary right now.
Aum: I know…
Aff: I heard that…Aum, shut up and drive!
Aum: Yes sunshine.
Aff: HURRRRYYYYY UPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
----------
Aff was rush into the labor ER room for birth labor. Aum went in with Aff as well. Just a little bit later, Ann, Ken, Vicky and Dan arrived at the hospital and met up with Rome and Rita in front of the ER room.
Ann: Did she give birth yet?
Rita: No. they just took her in now.
Ken: Where’s Aum?
Rome: In there with her.
Dan: I’ll be scared to go in there watching a woman giving birth.
Vicky: [smacks Dan] That’s exactly what you’re going to do when I give birth. Stuck in the labor room with me.
Ken laugh at Dan.
Ann: Same goes to you Ken.
Ken shuts up after Ann said that to him.
Two hours later…they heard a big scream and a baby crying from inside the ER room…
Ann: She gave birth!
Rome: Sounds like it’s a boy.
Rita: Idiot! It is a boy.
Rome: How do you know?
Rita: I just know.
Aum came back out from the ER room, looking exhausted.
Ken: Is it a boy or girl?
Aum: It’s a boy.
Rita: [hits Rome] See I told you.
Rome strike Rita a look.
Vicky: How are they doing?
Aum: Fine…
Dan: Dude, are you ok?
Aum: Huh…yea…[faints]
Ken: He’s definitely not fine.
They got a nurse to come and took Aum to a patient’s room to rest up. Aff’s baby is being in care of by the nurses at the moment. Aff was put into a patient room after a bit later.
Ann, Rita, Vicky went to see Aff while Ken, Rome and Dan went to see Dan.
Rita: Hello newly mother.
Aff: Hi everyone.
Ann: How are you feeling?
Aff: Tired. Never knew giving birth would be so much pain.
Vicky: Well, now you do.
Aff: Ahahaha yea…
Ann: So, where’s our nephew?
Aff: The nurse will bring him here in a bit [looks around] Where’s Aum and the guys?
Rita: Well, your husband passed out after being in a critical situation with you and the guys are with him.
Aff: What an idiot.
Aum: Who are you calling an idiot? [comes in the room with Ken, Rome and Dan]
Aff: You…who else? Passed out for nothing.
Aum: Oh believe me. It was something alright. Only if you saw what I saw.
Rita: Ok, too much info now. I don’t think we want to know that.
Rome: You’re telling us.
Dan: We had to listen to him talking about it all!
Ken: Well, at least you know what you’ll expect when it’s your turn to be in that situation.
Dan: Like I said, I’m not going to bother with that. She can just be in labor without me.
Vicky: [strike Dan a look] HEY!
Dan: I’m being serious.
Nurse: [comes in the room with Aff and Aum’s baby] Excuse me. Here’s nong for you Ms. Taksaorn. [handed Aff’s baby to her] In a while. We’ll need you to fill out some informations for nong’s birth certificate na ka.
Aff: [nods] Ka. Thank you.
The nurse left the room.
Ann: So, do you know what you’re going to name him?
Aum: Ask his mom.
Aff: [nods] Sukrit…Bie for his nickname.
Vicky: Aws, I like it.
Aum: Bie Sukrit…
7 months later…
The four couples decided to have another BBQ cook out at Aff and Aum’s backyard. This time, no one is in need of giving birth. Good news is that Rita, Ann and Vicky are now 4 months pregnant. They got pregnant around the same time.
Aff: [holding onto Nong Bie] So, you girls know yet if you’re having a boy or girl?
Ann: Just got back from the doctor this morning. And result is that I’m having a baby boy.
Ken: Just as I wanted.
Vicky: I’m having a baby girl.
Dan: I wish it was a boy though.
Vicky: [strike Dan a look] Be happy that I’m giving you a baby.
Dan: Yes hunny…
Aum: What about you two, Rome and Rita.
Rita: I don’t know.
Aff: What do you mean you don’t know?
Rome: She doesn’t want to know yet. She just want to wait until she gives birth to find out.
Ken: Why wait?
Rita: Just want it to be a surprise.
Aff: Oh Rita, remember our deal when we were still back in high school? If one of us have a son and a daughter, we would engage them?
Rita: Hahaha yea.
Rome: Are you guys still on with that?
Rita: Well, sort of. That’s one reason why I don’t want to know if our baby is going to a boy or girl.
Dan: I don’t think that you guys should do that.
Rita: Well, I did say sort of. that doesn’t mean we’re actually going to engage them.
Ann: I hope you guys don’t. just incase they find someone else that they actually wants to be with you know.
Aff: I know…
Ken: But from what I’m seeing. I think Rita, you’re going to have a girl. Look at Rome’s face. It’s full of mustache, just like Dan. His face is full of mustache as well and Vicky is having a girl.
Rita: We’ll just wait and see.
Ok, that's the end of this FF. The sequel will be up soon once I gather more informations and plot for it. Thank you gals for reading. Overall I've rated this FF to be so nam nao. Hahaha. The casts to the sequel will be reveal when it's ready to be post up ^_^
RR, can you make me the poster to the sequel version to this FF?
Seven months later…
Aff’s baby is nearly due…
The four couples decided to have a BBQ cook out in the back of Aum and Aff’s house. The girls are messing around with the beef/steak/chicken teriyaki sticks on the grill while the guys are just relaxing and chit chatting at the tables and having some drinks.
Ann: Aff, you should go sit down. Your stomach is too big to be standing around like this.
Vicky: P’Ann is right Aff. Go rest yourself.
Aff: Please don’t start on that with me again. I’ve been staying home for the past, what 7 months doing nothing because of that dude over there [motioned to Aum]
Aum: I heard that.
Aff: GOOD! You guys have no idea of how painful it is.
Aum: I only did that because I love you and don’t want you to work.
Aff: Whatever…
Aum: [talks to the guys] So when are you guys planning on having a baby?
Ken: You know me. Been working on that since the wedding night! 7 months ago. Yet, there’s still nothing.
Rome: To, it’s up to my hunny.
Dan: Same here. I won’t have it until she’s ready.
Rita: You know guys [turns to the guys] we’re standing right here.
Vicky: Yea, don’t think that we can’t hear you.
Dan: We know…
Ann: Yet, you’re still talking about us…
Ken: I love you!
Ann strike a look at Ken.
Rita: You guys are so lame.
Rome: You love me.
Rita: Shit face.
Aff: Believe me. I don’t think you girls want to be in my situation yet. It’s nothing but pain. Pain in the back!
Aum: I have pain too…not just you. I get knock off the bed with your big tummy almost every morning.
Aff: That’s not my fault is it?
Then within the next few moments. Aff’s face started to sorrow up.
Rome: Is the food done yet? I’m hungry.
Rita: Chill your horses would you.
Rome: Well, hurry up.
Rita: Try be the one to grill then. Shit face.
Vicky: [notice the look on Aff’s face] Aff, are you ok?
Aff: [holding onto her stomach] I don’t know.
Ann: [looks down to the floor] I think your water broke.
Aff: WHAT?!
Aum: What’s wrong sunshine?
Rita: Your wife is about to give birth idiot.
Aum: WHAT?!
Vicky: Don’t just sit there and be all shock. Take her to the hospital.
Aff: OWW!!! Fucking shit!!
Rita: Aum, hurry before she gives birth here!
With that said, Aum quickly got up and pick up Aff and carry her to the car.
Aff: OMG! My fucking shit! [yanking onto Aum’s hair]
Aum: Ouch. Sunshine, you’re hurting me!
Aff: Shut the fuck up! AHHH!! RITA!!!
Vicky: I think she wants you.
Ann: Go hold her in the back seat and we’ll be right over.
Rita: Ok…[pulls Rome with her]
Rome: Where are you taking me?
Rita: You’re coming with me.
Rome: o….k…
Rome and Rita went with Aum and Aff.
Vicky: After seeing Aff like that. I’m scared to have a baby now.
Ann: [shivering] Yea, me too.
Ken: I want kids!
Ann: Knock your socks off Ken.
Dan: I want kids too.
Vicky: It’s not going to be in a while hunny. I love you but you have to wait.
Dan: We’ll see about that.
Ken: [wines] I want to have kids!
Ann: Have it yourself. I am so not ready for that after seeing my sister in such pain.
Ken: Just because Aff is like that, doesn’t mean you’re going to be the same way.
Ann: I think I know…
Vicky: Let’s stop arguing and head out to the hospital.
With that said, they put all the BBQ stuff back inside the house and killed the fired on the grill and head their way out to the hospital.
Aff: [screaming] OW!! OMG! Are we there yet?!
Rita: [holding onto Aff] Calm down. We’re almost there.
Aff: Calm down? You want me to calm down? My baby is about to shoot out in my vagina and you want me to calm down?! [sat up and yank onto Aum’s driver seat] Why are you driving so slow?!
Aum: [startled by Aff yanking on the seat] I’m going as fast as I could. I don’t want to get pull over.
Aff: Dude [yank on Aum’s shoulder] If you’re not going any faster than this. I swear the back seat of your car is going to be full of bloody waters!
Aum: Ok, hold on…just lay back down would you? You’re hurting me.
Aff: I don’t care…I’m hurting way more than you are right now. I so hate you right now Aum!
Aum: What I do?
Rita: [pulls Aff back] Lay back down!
Rome: Aff look so scary right now.
Aum: I know…
Aff: I heard that…Aum, shut up and drive!
Aum: Yes sunshine.
Aff: HURRRRYYYYY UPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
----------
Aff was rush into the labor ER room for birth labor. Aum went in with Aff as well. Just a little bit later, Ann, Ken, Vicky and Dan arrived at the hospital and met up with Rome and Rita in front of the ER room.
Ann: Did she give birth yet?
Rita: No. they just took her in now.
Ken: Where’s Aum?
Rome: In there with her.
Dan: I’ll be scared to go in there watching a woman giving birth.
Vicky: [smacks Dan] That’s exactly what you’re going to do when I give birth. Stuck in the labor room with me.
Ken laugh at Dan.
Ann: Same goes to you Ken.
Ken shuts up after Ann said that to him.
Two hours later…they heard a big scream and a baby crying from inside the ER room…
Ann: She gave birth!
Rome: Sounds like it’s a boy.
Rita: Idiot! It is a boy.
Rome: How do you know?
Rita: I just know.
Aum came back out from the ER room, looking exhausted.
Ken: Is it a boy or girl?
Aum: It’s a boy.
Rita: [hits Rome] See I told you.
Rome strike Rita a look.
Vicky: How are they doing?
Aum: Fine…
Dan: Dude, are you ok?
Aum: Huh…yea…[faints]
Ken: He’s definitely not fine.
They got a nurse to come and took Aum to a patient’s room to rest up. Aff’s baby is being in care of by the nurses at the moment. Aff was put into a patient room after a bit later.
Ann, Rita, Vicky went to see Aff while Ken, Rome and Dan went to see Dan.
Rita: Hello newly mother.
Aff: Hi everyone.
Ann: How are you feeling?
Aff: Tired. Never knew giving birth would be so much pain.
Vicky: Well, now you do.
Aff: Ahahaha yea…
Ann: So, where’s our nephew?
Aff: The nurse will bring him here in a bit [looks around] Where’s Aum and the guys?
Rita: Well, your husband passed out after being in a critical situation with you and the guys are with him.
Aff: What an idiot.
Aum: Who are you calling an idiot? [comes in the room with Ken, Rome and Dan]
Aff: You…who else? Passed out for nothing.
Aum: Oh believe me. It was something alright. Only if you saw what I saw.
Rita: Ok, too much info now. I don’t think we want to know that.
Rome: You’re telling us.
Dan: We had to listen to him talking about it all!
Ken: Well, at least you know what you’ll expect when it’s your turn to be in that situation.
Dan: Like I said, I’m not going to bother with that. She can just be in labor without me.
Vicky: [strike Dan a look] HEY!
Dan: I’m being serious.
Nurse: [comes in the room with Aff and Aum’s baby] Excuse me. Here’s nong for you Ms. Taksaorn. [handed Aff’s baby to her] In a while. We’ll need you to fill out some informations for nong’s birth certificate na ka.
Aff: [nods] Ka. Thank you.
The nurse left the room.
Ann: So, do you know what you’re going to name him?
Aum: Ask his mom.
Aff: [nods] Sukrit…Bie for his nickname.
Vicky: Aws, I like it.
Aum: Bie Sukrit…
7 months later…
The four couples decided to have another BBQ cook out at Aff and Aum’s backyard. This time, no one is in need of giving birth. Good news is that Rita, Ann and Vicky are now 4 months pregnant. They got pregnant around the same time.
Aff: [holding onto Nong Bie] So, you girls know yet if you’re having a boy or girl?
Ann: Just got back from the doctor this morning. And result is that I’m having a baby boy.
Ken: Just as I wanted.
Vicky: I’m having a baby girl.
Dan: I wish it was a boy though.
Vicky: [strike Dan a look] Be happy that I’m giving you a baby.
Dan: Yes hunny…
Aum: What about you two, Rome and Rita.
Rita: I don’t know.
Aff: What do you mean you don’t know?
Rome: She doesn’t want to know yet. She just want to wait until she gives birth to find out.
Ken: Why wait?
Rita: Just want it to be a surprise.
Aff: Oh Rita, remember our deal when we were still back in high school? If one of us have a son and a daughter, we would engage them?
Rita: Hahaha yea.
Rome: Are you guys still on with that?
Rita: Well, sort of. That’s one reason why I don’t want to know if our baby is going to a boy or girl.
Dan: I don’t think that you guys should do that.
Rita: Well, I did say sort of. that doesn’t mean we’re actually going to engage them.
Ann: I hope you guys don’t. just incase they find someone else that they actually wants to be with you know.
Aff: I know…
Ken: But from what I’m seeing. I think Rita, you’re going to have a girl. Look at Rome’s face. It’s full of mustache, just like Dan. His face is full of mustache as well and Vicky is having a girl.
Rita: We’ll just wait and see.
Ok, that's the end of this FF. The sequel will be up soon once I gather more informations and plot for it. Thank you gals for reading. Overall I've rated this FF to be so nam nao. Hahaha. The casts to the sequel will be reveal when it's ready to be post up ^_^
RR, can you make me the poster to the sequel version to this FF?