Retribution (FFM&M)
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YinGgyTASTIC
sarNie Adult
Ha ha, coca okayy, ill.update it by tonightt 
YinGgyTASTIC
sarNie Adult
S:: I want to marry Nit.
Nit couldn’t believe what he was saying? Was he for real?
N: Khun San...
SM: I am glad you kids have accept each other feelings.
San mother smile to San. San grab Nit hand. Nit awkwardly smiled back.
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That night San had something plan out. As Nit came back from San’s mother room came upon a box in front of her in San’s room. She was confuse and was very itch to open the box. On the cover it said ‘ To Nit”......ONLY. - San
For some odd reason Nit smiled and yet gave a little laugh after the smiled.
Nit open to box and sees a white peachy maxi dress. She pull it out and damn was it beautiful. She couldn’t stop staring at it. Inside the box was also a letter. Nit grab the letter and read
N: Nit, You better get dress. I .m waiting outside for you at the fruit farm.
- San
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San was walking back and forth, looking at his watch to see if Nit was coming. Then finally he sees Nit coming down the path with the dress he had her wear. For the first he gave her the best glare ever.
San thinking in his mind. “ Wow, she is very “
Nit look at San and wave at him. Still San didn’t move so she poke San on the shoulder.
San grab the finger that was poking him and put it to his heart.
N: Let go! People will see us.
S: But people sees us doing exciting things all the time.
Nit pushes SAn away and break through from San.
N: If there nothing important I am going back to the room.
S: Stop!
Nit stop whiling San claps his hands three times.
Everything around her was bright. Oh wow was it beautiful. There was some like christmas lights around. Nit eyes open wide with excitment.
Nit turn around and stared at him.
N: What are you trying to do?
S: If you don’t mind first of all let go sit over there by the bonfire.
N: Uhm... sure. But i think it’s weird of you to do this?
S: Trust me.
San pulit to put her hand on top on his hand. He grab her hand and show her to the bonfire.
They sat down whiling San was sweating.
Nit can tell something weird was going to happen?
Right before San open his mouth Nit put her finger between San lips.
N: Before you say anything I would like to tell you first?
San nodded.
N: If you are just doing this because of that one night? It’s ok. I don’t want to know about it anymore. Let just move on.
S: Its not because of that night. But because of that I realize a lot of things.
N: Why are you acting so werid right now? I can’t get use to this kindness.
San laughed.
N: What are you are you laughing about?
S: Nothing.
N: ALso I don’t want you to marry because you think its the right thing?
S: It is the right thing. You are my women right?
Nit punch San shoulder.
N: Your such a prev.
San laughed once more.
S: Ayyyy, What I mean is...
San grab Nit hands.
S: I love you. I didn’t know how when but when I’m with you I don’t know if my heart has bubbles or my stomach. I am sorry for all the things I have out you into. I really hope you can really forgive me and start over?
N: Honestly, I have forgive you a long time ago? I always knew you would forgive me?
San smiled.
S: This time I need to stop living in the past and start moving forward. So would you accpet my heart?
N: NO.
San heat drop and he stop moving.
S: Why?
N: Will, I’ll accept it after I beat you up?
Nit starts pitching San.
S: Ouch, Ouch! you better stop!
N: Watch me!
S: Ouch Ouch!
S: Ok, it’s your fault.
San grab both of her hand and pull her close to him.
Nit stop and sees that San was trying to make a move.
She smiled and following.
It was the very first kiss without forcing.
At the window San;s mother and Jouy was looking out.
J: Madame, it’s so cheesy.
SM: Heyy, I am going to have a daughter in law soon . That is all.
Jouy giggles.
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The very next day...
Ran was rushing to Boy office.
Ran open the door with a packet.
R: I know where Mrs.Lida is at.
B: Where?
R: Rememeber Mr. Printhip?
B: Yes?
R: This call was from the line in his fruit farm.
B: How is that possible?
R: ANother thing, You won’t believe what I found out?
B: What is that?
R: Remeber that car accident Mrs. Lida had?
B: Yea.....
R: The husband of the women that was ran over was Mr. Printhip...
Nit couldn’t believe what he was saying? Was he for real?
N: Khun San...
SM: I am glad you kids have accept each other feelings.
San mother smile to San. San grab Nit hand. Nit awkwardly smiled back.
----
That night San had something plan out. As Nit came back from San’s mother room came upon a box in front of her in San’s room. She was confuse and was very itch to open the box. On the cover it said ‘ To Nit”......ONLY. - San
For some odd reason Nit smiled and yet gave a little laugh after the smiled.
Nit open to box and sees a white peachy maxi dress. She pull it out and damn was it beautiful. She couldn’t stop staring at it. Inside the box was also a letter. Nit grab the letter and read
N: Nit, You better get dress. I .m waiting outside for you at the fruit farm.
- San
-----
San was walking back and forth, looking at his watch to see if Nit was coming. Then finally he sees Nit coming down the path with the dress he had her wear. For the first he gave her the best glare ever.
San thinking in his mind. “ Wow, she is very “
Nit look at San and wave at him. Still San didn’t move so she poke San on the shoulder.
San grab the finger that was poking him and put it to his heart.
N: Let go! People will see us.
S: But people sees us doing exciting things all the time.
Nit pushes SAn away and break through from San.
N: If there nothing important I am going back to the room.
S: Stop!
Nit stop whiling San claps his hands three times.
Everything around her was bright. Oh wow was it beautiful. There was some like christmas lights around. Nit eyes open wide with excitment.
Nit turn around and stared at him.
N: What are you trying to do?
S: If you don’t mind first of all let go sit over there by the bonfire.
N: Uhm... sure. But i think it’s weird of you to do this?
S: Trust me.
San pulit to put her hand on top on his hand. He grab her hand and show her to the bonfire.
They sat down whiling San was sweating.
Nit can tell something weird was going to happen?
Right before San open his mouth Nit put her finger between San lips.
N: Before you say anything I would like to tell you first?
San nodded.
N: If you are just doing this because of that one night? It’s ok. I don’t want to know about it anymore. Let just move on.
S: Its not because of that night. But because of that I realize a lot of things.
N: Why are you acting so werid right now? I can’t get use to this kindness.
San laughed.
N: What are you are you laughing about?
S: Nothing.
N: ALso I don’t want you to marry because you think its the right thing?
S: It is the right thing. You are my women right?
Nit punch San shoulder.
N: Your such a prev.
San laughed once more.
S: Ayyyy, What I mean is...
San grab Nit hands.
S: I love you. I didn’t know how when but when I’m with you I don’t know if my heart has bubbles or my stomach. I am sorry for all the things I have out you into. I really hope you can really forgive me and start over?
N: Honestly, I have forgive you a long time ago? I always knew you would forgive me?
San smiled.
S: This time I need to stop living in the past and start moving forward. So would you accpet my heart?
N: NO.
San heat drop and he stop moving.
S: Why?
N: Will, I’ll accept it after I beat you up?
Nit starts pitching San.
S: Ouch, Ouch! you better stop!
N: Watch me!
S: Ouch Ouch!
S: Ok, it’s your fault.
San grab both of her hand and pull her close to him.
Nit stop and sees that San was trying to make a move.
She smiled and following.
It was the very first kiss without forcing.
At the window San;s mother and Jouy was looking out.
J: Madame, it’s so cheesy.
SM: Heyy, I am going to have a daughter in law soon . That is all.
Jouy giggles.
-------------
The very next day...
Ran was rushing to Boy office.
Ran open the door with a packet.
R: I know where Mrs.Lida is at.
B: Where?
R: Rememeber Mr. Printhip?
B: Yes?
R: This call was from the line in his fruit farm.
B: How is that possible?
R: ANother thing, You won’t believe what I found out?
B: What is that?
R: Remeber that car accident Mrs. Lida had?
B: Yea.....
R: The husband of the women that was ran over was Mr. Printhip...
Chalidaluvprin
sarNie Adult
Update soon I love the storyline !!!
nklue1
sarNie Adult
@YinGgyTASTIC
not wanting to rush u but when are u going to update
I come back here just to read this ff and others
but mainly because of this one
im so sorry if I sound mean or demanding or whatever
please update soon butplease take ur time but
just want to know if u are going to continue
because I really really love this ff
^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ :heart:
not wanting to rush u but when are u going to update
I come back here just to read this ff and others
but mainly because of this one
im so sorry if I sound mean or demanding or whatever
please update soon butplease take ur time but
just want to know if u are going to continue
because I really really love this ff
^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
:heart:YinGgyTASTIC
sarNie Adult
Definely soon.