Ruk Nai Roy Glied (Love In The Shadow of Hate)

ohitsnoyyy

Mama Noy ♥️
awee ... it was getting good too! lol. can you drop us hints on who's gonna get with who?? :lol: I hope monthai & Bpie gets together in the end.
 

g3mini00

sarNie Juvenile
Now i don't dare to predict anything about this story, tina is so amazing :clap: , there are so many mysteries.
Bpie had three guys, Mon had three girls, LOL, who will know what will happen next.
GOD i need more
 

KhoOnxNouxWanxJai

Staff member
Chapter 9: Reunion, Love, Friends, Lust!

Viyada was now sitting in a hotel room on a bed as Tardsapong changed. He had spilled some wine on himself. The atmosphere was a little awkward seeing how she and Tardsapong just met and this was their second encounter with one another. She feared that she would let her heart loose to soon. She felt herself falling for Tardsapong, but she knew it was to soon. She couldn't possibly be falling for someone that she just met. Her heart pounded and skipped beats everything he said her name. Now she was sitting in a hotel room with him. What if he wanted to take things further. Would she have the courage to just turn away? She sat nervously as Tardsapong changed. Her heart was dancing to the rhythm of his humming voice. She stood up on her feet quickly as Tardsapong made his way back out of the bathroom.

"All done, I'm sorry about that Khun Viyada. I can be such a clutz from time to time."
"It's fine, you don't need to apologize for anything." Viyada said with a smile.
"Ok very well then.. shall we go back down to the ballroom?" Tardsapong said handing out his arm. Viyada held onto Tardsapong arm with a slight blush. She tried her best to remain calm and collective when in reality her heart was nearly jumping out of her body. She was completely fascinated by Tardsapong. He was the first man she ever felt any sparks with other than Monthai Mahatada. As they were walking out the door Viyada hit a dresser standing close to the door and nearly fell to the floor when Tardsapong caught her. The two then sat tumbled against the wall. Tardsapong had Viyada on his lap looking down at him. The more he looked at her the more he was tempted to touch more. They sat there starring into one another's eyes for a few minutes as they looked into one another's eyes. Tardsapong slowly grabbed Viyada by the chin and leaned in slowly for a kiss. Before their lip's met Viyada stopped herself. She wanted to kiss Tardsapong, but realized that if they kissed she would be inviting him to more than just a kiss, but her body.

"I'm sorry." Tardsapong said turning his head away.
"It's ok, I'm sorry. Are you ok?" Viyada said getting up.
"I'm fine.. are you ok?" Tardsapong said getting up after Viyada.
"I'm fine... thank you.. we should head back downstairs now." Viyada said turning to leave. As she started walking towards the door She felt Tardsapong's hands around her waist. He turned her around and pushed her against the wall. Her hands pinned up against the wall Viyada was to shocked to respond. She looked at him and blinked. Tardsapong looked down at the young woman and leaned in to kiss her. She was playing games with his mind, she was inside his head, she was seducing him silently, Tardsapong thought to himself. Their lips touched and Tardsapong continued to kiss. He trailed down from his lips to her neck. Viyada struggled a little and lightly shoved him.
"Please .. don't." Viyada said blushing.
"... I'm sorry..." Tardsapong said feeling awkward.. "Please .. don't be angry with me.. it's just... you're so beautiful.. and I was so tempted." Tardsapong added.
"... Khun Tardsapong if you want to see me, then we must do it in the public's eye and not like this. I don't wish to be a secret mistress or secret girlfriend. I am a woman with a high social status. If anyone were to know about this my reputation could be ruined; not to mention my family's name." Viyada said a little angry.
"... I know, I know, I promise that it won't happen again." He said letting her go. He grabbed her hands and gave it a light kiss. " I don't know what it is about you that makes me like this. I promise you I will do things the right way to prove to you that I see you more than just a mistress or secret girlfriend."
"... I don't know what to say, but we just met.. we should be taking things slowly.."
"Yes I agree. You will be working with me .. we'll let our relationship develop over time." Tardsapong replied. He grabbed her hand and led her out of the hotel room. They joined the others in the ballroom where the crowd had fixed their attention on something. The two made their way to see it was Wiparwarn and Anucha. They had captivated the entire's crowd attention by dancing in the center of the ballroom. The two stopped and starred on as Pah and Nucha danced. Weit and Wimon who despised Nucha and his poor social status stood annoyed and frustrated because they dared not make a big scene. Although Anucha was not the son of Khun Ying Tap Tim he is still the son of Jao Khun Mahat who has a very high social standing. If they were to show any disgust of him in public the media would surely have their meal with it. So they had no choice but to watch the two dance in happiness.

As they watched Wiparwarn and Anucha dance Kiranyar was pulled aside by her parents.
"Kiranyar my dear we would like to introduce you to someone." Her mother said proudly. Kiranyar looked at the man her parents had planned on introducing her to and she recongized him immediately. It was Tawan Manatanakarn a man that she once admired and adore heavily, but her affection for him faded when she found that he was to be engaged to her best friend Sonya Apinan.
"Khun Tawan ka, this is my daughter Kiranyar and Kinranyar this is Khun Tawan..."
"Wow, I would have never realized that you are Khun Pah and Khun Ah's daughter." Tawan said surprised.
".. P' Tawan.." Kiranyar muttered under her breath.
"You two know each other?" Mrs. Yarnsaneewaet asked.
"We went to the same school in America." Tawan responded to Mrs. Yarnsaneewaet's question.
"He was engaged to Sonya ... you two remember her don't you mother father.." Kiranyar said attempting to throw the ball away from herself.
"Yes.. I was briefly, but she left me for a different man. She left me for Khun Kietchai Danart." Tawan said. He couldn't help but stare at Kiranyar. She was much more beautiful than she was when they were in the prime stages of their courtship. Had she had looked this wonderful back then he wouldn't have changed his feelings from her to Sonya. The wretched woman who betrayed him in the most painful way.
"Kiranyar you know Tawan's parents have become very well respected individuals." Mrs Yarnsandeewaet said. As her mother spoked Kiranyar recalled the conversation that she had with her brother about Weit waiting to hand his daughter on a platter to her brother and her mind snapped. Her parents were the same way. Kiranyar refused to be a puppet being controlled by her parents.
"Mother.. you know I'm not feeling to well. I think I'm going to excuse myself and make my way home now. No need to worry about me. I came separately." Kiranyar said walking away. She was feeling sick to her stomache. Sick to her stomache that the man her parents have intended to pair her with was Tawan. As she walked towards the exit of the ballroom she felt herself crush against a strong tall figure. She squirmed a bit after her head hit the figure in front of her. She looked up to see a handsome man.
"I'm sorry ..." Kiranyar said standing up tall.
"It's ok .. I should have been watching where I was going." The man said.
"... It's fine... I'm sorry again." Kiranyar said as she proceeded to walk away.
"Ms are you ok?" the man asked concerned. He had seen the blank stare in Kiranyar's face before she bumped into him.
"I'm fine, thank you." She said walking away. The man stared at her as she walked away. He thought she was glamorous and attractive. Her face was familiar to him, but he couldn't quite recall where he had recognize her from.

"Hey.. Ardsawin.." called a man from behind him. He turned his attention from the then departed Kiranyar to his friend.
"...Nai Guer." Ardsawin said with a smile.
"Was that Kiranyar that you were just speaking too?"
"Kiranyar?"
"Yeah she was a old classmate. She went to the same school with us."
"I don't think I remember her.."
"She wasn't this attractive back then. She was plain looking, but now she's .. how can I say this .. gorgeous."
"She is pretty attractive."
"Yeah... have you heard?"
"Heard what?"
"That her parents want to hook her up with .. Nai Tawan."
"Huy.. no kidding."
"I'm serious."
"... what a small world... anyways.. speaking of Tawan is he here tonight?"
"Yeah he is.." Guer responded.
"... hey have you seen .. "
"seen who?"
"My cousin's yet?"
"Yeah, i've seen Viyada, Wiparwarn, and Bpeeyachat."
"Oh... how are they doing tonight do you know?"
"They are doing pretty decent I guess. Pah already found her dance partner for the night. Viyada is hanging around with that Tardsapong Yarnsaneewaet fellow, and Bpeeyachat I saw her with Pong In."
"What?!"
"What?! You don't have to scream."
"Nothing... " Ardsawin said as he started to look around. He wanted to find Bpeeyachat in the crowd and see if she was really with Pong In. Just then he saw Bpeeyachat reappear through the entrance of the ballroom.
"Hey .. Ardsawin.. Guer."
"Tawan." Ardsawin and Guer said to the approaching Tawan.
"Huy... Tawan so .. tell me how was meeting Kiranyar again for the first time after you picked her best friend over her?" Guer asked
".. it was .. magical... she's beautiful. I would have never imagined that the geeky Kiranyar back then would turn out to be the beautiful Kiranyar I met today. Not only that I hear she is very sharp business wise."
"... huy... Tawan you are truly a casanova." Ardsawin responded to his comment about Kiranyar.
"What can I say? I love beautiful women." Tawan remarked.
"The more beautiful the harder they break your heart.. look at Sonya.."
"AYEEE, don't even mention her name in front of me again!" Tawan interuppted Guer.
"Ok, ok." Guer said. Ardsawin and Guer started to laugh at Tawan as they saw how disturbed he was by Sonya's name.
 

KhoOnxNouxWanxJai

Staff member
Chapter 10: Reminiscence

That night the ball ended with so many loose ends and ties. Everyone seem to have had an encounter that would change their lives forever. Monthai's head landed on the pillow and all he could see was flashbacks of Bpeeyachat and that guy. He couldn't get out of his head Viyada leaving the ballroom with that guy. His head was confused. Why was he so affected by Bpeeyachat and Viyada. Out of both women he found himself questioning Bpeeyachat more than Viyada. As much as Viyada angered him nothing could have prepared him to see Bpeeyachat with another man. Anger boiled inside him; as he was about to explode he remembered that he was engaged to Maenward. He couldn't possibly break her heart.. He couldn't possibly be letting himself be so affected by other women. He tried to clear his mind by closing his eyes hoping that he would quickly fall asleep, but as he tried to sleep he kept seeing more and more images of Bpeeyachat. He tossed and turned in his bed.. why wasn't he able to get her off his mind?

Bpeeyachat lay in her bed thinking about Pong In and her last words to him. She had admired and adored Pong In so much, but she knew their love was impossible because her father would never approve of him. His parents wouldn't even approve of them together. Bpeeyachat thought about the times she spent with Pong In and felt her heart sink even more. She was hurt from their break up, but had no choice. She was obligated to her family to do the right thing. As she lay in bed images of Monthai flashed in her mind. She panted and sat up straight. She was being haunted by the same face and same last conversation again. Her dreams and images of Monthai had been more frequent lately. She tried her best to keep them hidden, but eventually her sisters would begin to notice if she doesn't do something about it. She knew that she had done something wrong.. She knew that her love for Monthai was wrong and that is why they are no longer apart of her. Her love for him tore her family apart. Tore her family apart to where she is now no longer living with her birth parents. She had to despise him. She had to hate him. She had to forget him. He lied to her... he tricked her .. he broke her heart.. he tore her family apart. She hated Monthai Mahatada.

Back at the Yarnsaneewaet's Estate

"Sis, you're looking a little drifty after you got home from the party.. anything wrong?" Tardsapong asked concerned for his sister.
"Not at all dear brother. I'm just thinking..."
"thinking? now what is it that has my dear sister thinking? Surely it must be something extravagant to have Kiranyar Yarnsaneewaet thinking."
".. mother and father have found the man they want me to marry."
"Oh? Is he a decent guy."
"Tawan Manatanagarn"
"What? That's obscure. I will not accept that bastard as a brother in law."
"The choice is neither yours nor mines to make. It's mother's and father's."
"Not if I have a say in it. You are my sister. I will not watch you be given to a bastard like Tawan Manatanagarn. My deep hatred for that bastard is incurable."
"What can we do.. mother and father have already set their sights on him. He is coming over for lunch tommorrow afternoon. Will you be present?"
"I'm sorry dear sister, but I have a meeting out of town. I must leave for my trip in the morning. I'm afraid I won't make it to lunch."
"Very well. I must face that bastard alone. I must be strong."
"Nonsense you are Kiranyar Yarnsaneewaet; you must be strong." Tardsapong said patting his sister on the back. "Now get some sleep. You need plenty of rest." He said walking off the gazebo.

At the Hiranyawat's estate Weit and Wimon's bedroom

"Khun P' Ka." Wimon said as her husband stepped into the bedroom.
"What is it?" asked Weit.
"What do you think we should do about Pah?"
"I think if she wants to be with Nucha we should let her be.. After all Nucha isn't so bad.. he is a Mahatada afterall."
".. I know, but his mother... Noun..."
"I don't think that Wiparwarn is our main problem right now."
"What?"
"Ardsawin.. he is getting close to Look Bpeee again."
"... oh no.. we must stop it before things go any further."
"exactly, but what should we do."
"Don't ask me .. he is your son afterall.. don't you have any control over him?" Wimon said sarcastically. Deep down inside her harboured a deep resentment towards her husband for betraying her.
"Wimon.. is that sarcasm I sense?"
".. Oh dear, you know I don't dare sass you with sarcasm." Wimon said rolling her eyes.
"I think I need to hurry up and find Ardsawin a wife so that he can leave Bpeeyachat alone."
"That sounds like a great idea, but who would you find that is willing to marry your son?"
"... The Yarnsaneewaet's have a daughter don't they?"
"... Nou Kiranyar? That is a marvelous idea, but yet so far fetchced. Nou Kiranyar is a very well known individual. Her parents are highly respect people in the society. To get their daughter as your daughter in law may be a little difficult."
"There are many young women in the society we can pair with Ardsawin. It's just a matter of finding the right one."
"Ohh how about Nou Parinyarnan Amiritsargarn, I hear she just returned from oversea's studies. She is very wealthy not to mention brilliant."
"Wimon, I need you to help me, we must find Ardsawin a good woman. We cannot continue to let him love Bpeeyachat."
"Ka, ka.. yes dear husband." Wimon said pulling the blanket to cover herself. She was down right annoyed of her step son. She believed that Ardsawin was nothing but trouble, but at the same time she cared for him as her own. Although she had a rough time expressing her concerns for him. She didn't care for him any less than she cared for her real children. She wanted to find him a suitable woman and in her head had Kiranyar, but she knew that was nearly impossible and the only woman close to Kiranyar in status was Parinyarnan. Weit looked at his wife who had just settled herself into bed. He felt a ounce of guild keeping her awake to discuss his son with another woman. He had betrayed her by having an affair with a close friends of hers, but he had tried every way possible to make up for the betrayl. The only thing he could do was to take good care of her and their children together; including Bpeeyachat their adoptive daughter.

At the Amiritsargarn Estates

Parinyarnarn set foot inside her family's estate after being gone for so many years. She had to leave after the tragic events that took place in her house. Her mother had attempted suicide causing her to be mentally instable. Her father to hide the news from embarrassing their family had sent her mother of of Australia to be cared for by the countrie's top specialist. Parinyarnarn had trouble setting foot inside the house. Not only did her mother's insanity haunt her, but her brothers death in the house also haunted her gravely. She had always been afraid to return home, but she realized as she was studying that her father was aging and she must return to care for her father. She didn't trust her father in the care of her new step mother Natradee. Although part of her resented her father for remarrying without being fully divorced from her mother; Parinyarnarn came to terms with it and learned to accept. She knew that her step mother was not her only obstacle, but her step-sister Suwarnarn Pongniwarn was also an obstacle. Suwarnarn came down the stairs and noticed that her younger step sister had made it home safely. Although apart of her was dissapointed she forced a smile upon herself and walked down the steps.

"Nong Rin, you're home." Suwarnarn with a semi welcoming tone.
"Sawatdee ka, P' Narn ..." Parinyarnnarn said politely. Although the two shared a common dislike of each other they still made it a point to be polite. That way neither seems like an evil step sister. Image was a really important feature when it came to the Amiritsargarn family. They were of very high position in the society. They extended from a long line of royalty. Parinyarnarn was one of the most talked about bachelorette. She stood to inherit everything that her father owned in the event of his passing. Suwarnarn herself a child from Nartradee's previous marriage. Suwarnarn was later legally adopted by Grongpope Amiritsargarn and stood to inherit at least 10 percent of his asset in the events of his passing. Although Suwarnarn was not his own flesh and blood Grongpope treated her as one and spoiled her lavishly. Suwarnarn knew that having her way was to be threathened by the return of her sister; the legal heir to the Amiritsagargarn Estates and fortune.
"Tired?" Suwarnarn asked as she took a seat on the elegant victorian couch.
"A little, but I'll manage." Parinyarnarn said attempting to walk through the guest area to the stairwell leading to the bedrooms.
"Aren't you going to let father know you're back already?"
"It's late, I'll inform him in the morning." She said walking up towards her bedroom. She knew that her bedroom would be in the same place it always had been. Her father promised her that he would not touch her bedroom regardless of any reason. She turned the knob slowly and the door creaked open. She push lightly on the door and it slowly swung open. Her bedroom was the way it was just before she left. She smiled and walked towards her bed locking the door behind her. She was finally truly home.
 

KhoOnxNouxWanxJai

Staff member
Chapter 11: Control My Fate

Monthai had just gotten home and he felt that there was so many things that he didn't miss. He didn't miss seeing Bpeeyachat with another man that was for sure. He sat on the balcony sipping his coffee and thinking of the scene where he saw Bpeeyachat with Pong In. He was heavily disturbed. He couldn't get Bpeeyachat out of his mind. As he thought of Bpeeyachat he heard a knock on his bedroom door. He quickly went to answer it. He saw that it was the housekeeper Sa Ard who was in charge of the household while Pah Jian was gone.

"Is there something wrong P' Ard?" asked Monthai in curiousity.
"Monthai, your mother wishe's to speak to you."
"Ok, I'll be there in just a second." Monthai said shutting the door. Sa Ard left back to continue her housework as Monthai got fully dressed and went to see his mother. She was sitting on the patio outside of the house.

"Sawadee torn chao (good morning) mother." Monthai said as he walked towards his mother.
"Wadee ja look mae (morning my son)." Tap Tim responded to the good morning wish's.
"You wanted to speak to me?"
"Yes in a matter of fact I did. I wanted to ask you about your personal life."
"My personal life?"
"Yes are you involved with anyone right now?"
".. Mother I thought you knew I was engaged to Maenward."
".. Son.. I .. Very well. Are you sure that you won't regret your mistake.. I mean choice."
"Mother.. I assure you Maenward is a very wonderful woman. She will make you a great daughter in law."
"Monthai.. I am your mother and I can tell you what is best for you. I don't feel that Maenward is a great choice, but it's your life I will let you choose your wife on your own terms, but she must be able to accept that you will not be inheriting anything from me until she bares you two children."
"Mother that's absurd.. you called me this morning to discuss this? Mother .. I expected you to be more understanding than father, but you are behaving just as father did when he found that I was engaged to Maenward. I assumed that I was coming home to a mother whom loved me, but apparently I had a misconception of ideas."
"Monthai! How dare you speak to me in that manor; you are speaking back to your mother in a degrading tone over a woman who is not worth honoring."
"Mother..!" Monthai said standing up. He slammed his hands against the table and looked at his mother in the most hurtful way. He was upset that he had been home less than 3 days and she was already attempting to decide his fate. Monthai turned away and attempted to walk away, but his mother's voice echoed in his head one final sentence.

"I've already found you a suitable wife. I expect you to be present when she pay's a visit this afternoon."

Monthai in annoyance stormed off without a word to his mother. Tap Tim starred in despair as her son had learned to resent her over this. She knew what she was doing was hurting him, but she knew it was the right thing in the long run. This was the only way to correct the mistakes she made towards him years ago. She could not let her son marry a girl like Maenward. Maenward was interested in nothing but his money. She was interested in nothing but a name in the society. Tap Tim took a sip of her tea and sat back in her chair.

"Monthai, you will marry the woman I choose for you."



The Hiranyarwat's Estate

Viyada sat in her family's guest area awaiting the car to arrive so she could head off to work. She was starting her position at the bank today and didn't want to be late. As she sat there waiting Bpeeyachat walked by to see her tapping her heels on the floor.

"P' Vi? are you ok? You look a little anxious."
"I'm fine Nong Bpee.. I'm waiting for Sayan to bring the car up so I can go to work."
"Oh yeah today is your first day at the bank. You'll be fine.. don't be so nervous P' Vi." Bpeeyachat said grabbing her sister's hand. She felt Viyada's shaking cold and smiled. "Wow you seem very nervous P' Vi. I've never seen you so nervous about anything. This must be more than just a job to you." Bpeeyachat joked. Viyada smiled at her younger sister's nonsense and pulled her hands away. She then gestured to give Bpeeyachat a playful hit when she heard the car roaring up to the front of the house.

"Ok ok, no time to play with you Nong Bpee, I must leave for work now. I'll see you when I get home. I'll tell you everything." Viyada said walking out the door. She took a deep breath and got into the car. She was nervous .. this was her first time stepping out into the world as a working woman. Working women in this day and age were idolized and visualized as perfect. Viyada didn't want to interrupt that image with any clumsy gestures. She thought to herself of her interaction with Tardsapong and how she would react. Things will be different she knew because he isn't a friend, but her boss.


At The Yarsaneewaet's Bank Headquarters.

Tardsapong was preparing Viyada's office and making sure everything was in order before she arrived. Gossip filled the cubics of the large bank. Who was this new woman. Why was she getting her own office. Many questions filed their way into the ears of Tardsapong. He didn't care to respond because he wanted Viyada to feel special. She is a very well respected woman after all. Tardsapong smiled as he saw his sister walking by.

"Kiranyar."
"Ka, P' Tard?"
".. where are you going?"
"I have to meet a client to sign some contracts outside of the office.. why is there something you need me to do?"
"no not at all, be on your way.. "
"ok then," Kiranyar said continuing to walk. She had never seen her brother behave so strangely. She hoped that he wasn't taking his game serious. Her challenge to him was only of a small joke. She would completely punish herself if her brother took any serious actions towards her comments and remarks. As she stepped out of the elevators the doors slowly slid open and she was standing face to face with Tawan. All the air had been sucked out of her. She didn't know how to respond so she walked off the elevators and continued to walk like she had not acknowledge him. Tawan felt awkward about the whole incident so he too went about pretending he did not see her.


At the Mahataweit's Estate

Monthai entered the guest living room with a grin on his face. He couldn't have been anymore upset to be meeting this doll that his mother plan to set him up with. All Monthai could think of was why would any parents try to pair their children up. This was a new day and age and people were finding their own partners, but he had not the luxury. Monthai sat down as he watch his mother pace back and forth awaiting her friends who were over an hour late.

"Mother.. you said they were good people. What kind of good people makes their host wait over an hour for them."
"Monthai.. hush, maybe they encountered some problems on their way here."
"Mother you and I both know that, that's nonsense. This time of day not many people are driving around on the streets. Also if they were running late they would have sent a messenger or had the decency to call already."
"Monthai why must you be so rude and intolerant."
"Because mother I disagree with this entire meeting. I have a woman which I love very much and you are still attempting to force me into an unwanted marriage arrangement."
"Monthai, you will not regret this. This woman is a great woman and she.."
"She matches you in status? Is that it mother? Her family must have a well known name in order for me to take her into consideration."
"Yes," Tap Tim said taking a seat beside her son. Just as she sat down a servant rushed into the room.

"Khun Ying Ka, Khun Ying Ka, they are here." Nat the servant announced anxiously.
"Ok, good. Get the tea ready. I will have them out on the gazebo after they come in."
"yes ma'am." The servant said with a nod as she ran out of the room to complete her task. Tap Tim stood up as Sa Ard brought in her guests. Monthai gave an annoying smirk and stood up along side his mother slouching.

"I'm so sorry Ka, P' Ying.. we had a little problem upon arrival." The voice said entering the room.
"It's ok Ja, Where is your daughter?"
"... She's right here."
"Ok let me introduce... Monthai remember Ah' Natradee and Ah' Grongpope? This is their daughter Nou Suwarnarn. Nou Narn Ja, this is P' Monthai" Tap Tim introduced.
"Sawatdee Ka, P' Monthai." Suwarnarn said giving him the Wai (hand greeting gesture) Monthai manage to force a polite gesture in return
"Sawatdee Krup, Khun Narn."
"Ok, now lets go have some tea in the gazebo." Tap Tim said inviting them out.
 

KhoOnxNouxWanxJai

Staff member
This Is for those who have read Ch. 11

I was originally going to make it be Bpeeyachat that get's brought to meet Monthai and not Suwarnarn then I realize I cant because it'll be to easy :loool:

a little writer block for those 3 chapters >.< but i tried lol but I'll make the next set better lols
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
ahhhhhhhh..........i'm so excited.... 3 new chapters!!!!!! but.....i'll have to be back later to read...gotta go to bed. :(
 

g3mini00

sarNie Juvenile
This Is for those who have read Ch. 11

I was originally going to make it be Bpeeyachat that get's brought to meet Monthai and not Suwarnarn then I realize I cant because it'll be to easy :loool:

a little writer block for those 3 chapters >.< but i tried lol but I'll make the next set better lols
i thought you will do like this, finally i found more characters, now i have to try memorizing more names(i have to say those name is so long like names of characters in Russian novels), and figure out the relationship with them, it's a big work.
 

KhoOnxNouxWanxJai

Staff member
Lol kellyyy the character isn't that hard if you think about it.. once you get use to reading the story than you'll start to remember who is who.. thats what happened to me when I started writing.. I was like do I have to many characters?! then as I started writing more and more it got easier and easier to remember who is who and etc... o__^

Writing..more..hopefully i can get 3 more chapters up by tonight so I can start writing the intresting hot action stuffs lols not those love scene girls :p thats for later later
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
lol.. okay girl.. thanks for all the updates.. it was a great read.. can't wait to see what this new nang'rai will do... I just hope Bpeeyachat has a backbone in this fic! Sadly, in the lakorn, she was wayy too nice.....
 

ohitsnoyyy

Mama Noy ♥️
ahhh tina. another trick. :lol: i was thinking bpee was gonna be the one showing up at monthai's house! darn it! hurry up & update tina! i'm dying to know who will end up with who. so many characters & so many interesting stories. hehe.
 

KhoOnxNouxWanxJai

Staff member
Hehehe I have 3 chapters written already going to post them tmr when I finish up the other half of Chapter 15 so it can be 4.. gosh I can't wait til the ending.. I already see how the ending is going to be .. already started writing the ending too lmao :p .. you girls might def be shocked to see what I have plan for the ending
 

KhoOnxNouxWanxJai

Staff member
The ending is no where close girl :p period stories are semi-long I just hope you girls have the drive to read so many chapters.. I predict at least 30 for this one :loool:
 

sajenna

sarNie Oldmaid
excited!!!! just borrowed my aunt "ngao asoke" dubbed in khmer!!! watch and reading your fiction at the same time!!! i'm a lucky girl ^_^
 
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