Shadow of Silence (Revenge) - Chapter 11 (10/27)

kulyia

kulyia

RUK
Lol at aikoden haha! i was like "WOW im not even scrolling down and the chapter is done already haha. dont worry julie, take your time.
 
aikoden

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
omg.. i didn't realize this when my laptop turned off on me.. i was like writing my chapter out.. noooo!! argh!! imma have to write it all over again darn laptop.. i dont like you anymore!! >______________<

sorry everyone.. i will try to have it up soon.. that's if i remember what i wrote before it died on me argh!!

edit: ugh.. im still disappointed that i couldn't save it!! aiyah.. will try to get it up soon.. >_<
 
n_naruk

n_naruk

TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
Awesome posters! I'm absolutely loving that pic of Mark. He looks hot & sexy & so yummy :DD hahaha
 
TubbyTinker

TubbyTinker

You're Average Person :)
oooh the one of Bie and Peung is nice...love the blending on that one!

awww Julie, that sucks...that happened to me once....
 
kulyia

kulyia

RUK
i seriously cant wait for ch 3 :thumbsup: i check here more than 10 times a day! lol But take your time julie, please? cause i know having people rush u makes everything that much harder. take your time julie =)
 
mainhiathao

mainhiathao

sarNie Granny
kulyia said:
i seriously cant wait for ch 3 :thumbsup: i check here more than 10 times a day! lol But take your time julie, please? cause i know having people rush u makes everything that much harder. take your time julie =)
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me 2 i log on 2 see this topic more than 10+ a day! :coverlaf: just can't wait for the update! :popcorn:
btw chapter two was awesome!!! :clap2: can't wait for ch. 3 :cheer:
 
aikoden

aikoden

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Chapter 3​

Boy repeatedly honked his car horns as he roughly stepped on the car brakes. "GOD DAMN IT!" He shouts as his head hits the dashboard making him swerve to the right side of the road. The car rapidly spun in circles leaving tire tracks as it slowly drifts. "YOUR DRIVING SUCKS!" shouted the lady in the passenger seat as she fixes her smeared make up. Annoyed, Boy took out some money and threw it at her. "LEAVE!"

"Oh I will alright." She gave a snicker as she picked up the fallen money. "Don't think you're a big shot just because you're on all the channels." She quickly snatched up the money and walked out the car as if her life depended on it when she saw Boy's seriously pissed off stare. "Yeah you better get out of my car!" exclaimed Boy as he honks at her.

Annoyed, Boy got out of his car and walked over to the other car. The car head lights were bickering on and off as he got closer and closer. "What the heck is this? I can't see a thing?" Boy took out his phone and tried to shine inside. To his surprise, his plan worked. He wasn't really satisfied with the outcome picture though. He wouldn't be surprised that the people inside would be unconscious, what he was surprised to see was the man on top of the woman, in a kissing-like position unconscious.

He let out a little laugh as he straightened into a serious face. "FREAKING KISSING ON THE ROAD!!! DARN THESE IMBECILE!! MAKING OUT INSTEAD OF PAYING ATTENTION ON THE ROAD!! BET THEY'RE TEENAGERS!!" Boy tried to open the car door but it was locked. "Damn it! All these high-tech cars now. Crap!" Getting more annoyed, he pounded heavily on the car window and kicked the tires. "Crap! They're too knocked-out!" Boy stopped what he was doing and stood still quietly as he touched his forehead. "Crap! I didn't even know my head was bleeding. Hmm.." He thought as he stared at the car window with a joke-ster idea in his mind. "I've got the perfect idea!"

Boy touched his forehead as he tries to get as much blood as he can onto his hands. "I'll write my number on your car with blood to stain and scare you when you wake up!" After doing so, he smirked at his wonderful masterpiece. "Perfect." As he said that, he felt tiny droplets of water on his face. As he stared up upon the dark sky, the tiny droplets of water soon became a heavy rainstorm within seconds. "Crap! What a great night it is!!!" He ran over to his car and sped off. "Darn lousy weather!! You can never trust the weather!!"

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Boy walked into the hospital with a pair of stunners and a cap trying to hide his identity even thought he knew this get up was useless. He even made fun of that get up on the various programs he hosted. He walks over to the counter and whispered to the nurse. "Can I meet up with the doctor?" The nurse gave him a look of disbelief. "You serious?" She then points to the line of patients waiting to meet with the doctors. "Come on.." he pleaded as he took off his cap. "My head is bleeding." The nurse shook her head. "Why didn't you tell me it was an emergency?!" She then lead him to the doctors in the emergency room. "Thank you." he smiled. The nurse continued shaking her head. "Daras sure are stupid these days.."

After getting his head checked and bandaged, he got inside the elevator. While he waited for his stop, he thought back at what the doctor told him.

"Even though you only hit your head, your body also received some minor injuries." said the doctor.
"What kind of injuries?" asked Boy.
"Well, some of your organs may have shifted slightly from their original area due to the fast last minute swerving."
"Is that bad?"
"No, not really. They'll move back to their original place after some time."
"I see. Is that all then?"
"No, I have another thing to ask you."
"Well, what is it?"
"For example, have you been drinking or taking some drugs?"
"No."
"You sure?"
"Wait.. yes I have.."
"What have you done?"
"Well, I drink on a major base when I go out."
"How often do you go out?"
"About every 4-5 hours."
"Meaning everyday?"
"I suppose so."
"I see. I must warn you that partying may be the only thing on your mind.. but you really have to take care of yourself. If not you may have liver cancer, failures, and such caused by the alcohol consumptions."
"Am I going to die Doctor?"
"Yes, but that's only if you don't stop this habit of yours."
"I see."
"You may not think it, but the liver is very important to the body."
"Fine, fine, fine.. I'll stop this act of mines. But is it ok if I drink once in a while?"
"That'll be much better."

Boy rubbed his head in disbelief. "What kind of doctor tells you, you're going to die! UNBELIEVABLE!!" *Ding* The elevator door came to his stop. "I guess I'll just stop with my playboy acts now.." sighed Boy as he walked over to his car. "Damn it!! I still want to party!!"

A ball rolls over to Boy's feet giving him a shock. "What the heck is this?" He gently picked up the ball as he looked around for the owner. A little boy comes up to him poking his leg. "What do you want?"

The little boy slowly backed away. "I j-just w-wanted my b-ball back..." answered the little boy with watery eyes.

"Ahh, I see. Here you go." Boy handed the ball back to the little boy. "What's your name? And why are you alone?"

The boy smiled with joy as received his ball back. "My name's Asanee.. and my mommy's over there.." He points to the lady holding the man's hand.

"M-m-margie?" Boy froze there in shock while still staring at Margie in disbelief.

"You know my mommy?" asked Asanee. Boy was motionless. The little boy grew impatient of not getting his answer and ran over to his mother.

"Hey little guy!" smiled Mark as he rubs Asanee's head.

"Hey, hey, hey.. Don't touch him with that hand." lectured Margie.

"What? It was just a small paper cut?" laughed Mark.

"Paper cut my butt! If I wasn't there to help you, your whole hand would be cut off.."

"Fine, fine.. it was my fault.. Happy now?"

"Daddy.." Margie pinched Asanee's arm. ".. oops.. I mean uncle.." Asanee smiled brightly at his mother.

"Lol.. It's ok little fella. What is it?"

Asanee points over to Boy from afar. "Do you know that guy. I think he knows mommy."

"Who?" asked Mark and Margie as they turned to look.

"Nope, I don't know who he is." answered Mark.

Margie stood still silently and gave a slight cough. "Come on, let's get going now. Nothing to see.." She begins shoving them into the car.

"Hey, hey.. did you forget that I'm a patient?" smiled Mark.

"Get in quickly before I really make you a patient.."

"Oi, fine fine.. Come on Asanee." said Mark as they nicely got inside the car. Margie let out a deep sigh and sped off.

Boy unfroze and dragged himself into the car. He sat still motionless as memories of him and Margie flashed back. Even though he was a major playboy, he actually loved Margie best out of all the other girls. He was just too conceited to admit that and keep his playboy streak. "Damn! What an idiot I was!!" Feeling so regretful, he punched the car horns repetitively making a huge ruckus that soon he had to be escorted out of the parking lot area.

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END OF CHAPTER 3
 
aikoden

aikoden

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whoo.. i finally finished.. im not as satisfied as my first one i wrote but.. hope it's readable and understandable ahaha.. i made my characters meet earlier than expected because i didn't know what to write hehe.. and sorry noy if i didnt make mark act like your character since im still unsure lol..

anyways.. can't wait to read the next chapter.. XD..
also please excuse any errors i made and such from this chapter.. la la la..

and hmm.. im not being picky and such Iya.. but i realized that you forgot to change the bottom pic of peung when you changed pics.. hehe..

edit: and.. oh.. my medical knowledge is not correct.. i was just randomly writing along.. so do not believe it! lol..

edit again.. I realized I made "crap" boy's fav word ahaha anyways.. Oops.. I think I'm leaning toward comedy aiyah.. I'll do a better job the next chap when I know how things fall into place..
 
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