The Undying Love :: Aum/Aff

chenling

sarNie Adult
Whoa..that was soo intense, damn lome you really kicked this off with a bang...so much drama already!!!!!!! Its soo sad!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
oh no....i hope they both will be okay too...i also hope that he will be able reach the hospital before his wife gives birth...
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
ahhh lome..ask your baby bro to help...gonna miss you when youre away...for a week too!!!...


my sister had cesarean too..with both of her kids..and i know someone else that had it with all five of her kids.. yep dang is right! :p
the owner hasn't cut off her cable yet... but I'm not sure if it will work with my modem.. but if not then.. I'll see you guys in a week. :(


Whoa..that was soo intense, damn lome you really kicked this off with a bang...so much drama already!!!!!!! Its soo sad!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!
thanks sweetie.. always glad to see that you like it.

intense... I hope the mother and the baby will be okay...
I hope so too.. :(


oh no....i hope they both will be okay too...i also hope that he will be able reach the hospital before his wife gives birth...
that traffic jam is just a pain in the ass.... it seems like most of my fics has those.. lol...
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
This fic will have about 5-10 parts, depending on how much I can squeeze in. I wanted to do a really short story that ends in 1 setting, but I don't think it's possible for what I've got planned.
 

amikrazie

sarNie Oldmaid
lome, as long as you write..im always here to read... :p

love all of your writings!!!

awww...we're gonna super miss you ..in the next wk :(
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
Oh wow, Lome, I can't wait for part 2!
Love the re-write.
thanks girl!! lol... I feel better about part I now.


lome, as long as you write..im always here to read... :p

love all of your writings!!!

awww...we're gonna super miss you ..in the next wk :(
I'm going to miss you guys dearly too.

whao , it short but so intense ...yipe..c-section :eek:
wait till you read more.. lol... korean drama here... (not that I've seen one yet)

well, you guys have a goodnight,,,,,,,,, see you in the morning, then I'm off to new house.... take care!
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
Part II

Ten minutes later, Thanatorn finally arrived at the hospital. Even before his car came into a full park, he grabbed the 2 dozen roses, swung open the door, and dodged out, not caring that the pouring rain was getting him wet. Thanatorn headed straight to the reception to ask where the maternity floor was located.

As he ran into an elevator, some of the rose petals had fallen along the way. Thanatorn pressed on the buttons nervously as the elevator door closed and took him to his destination. His heart was beating a mile a minute as the elevator's dings each floor that he reached. When he got to the maternity warrd, he dodged out of the elevator, running down the hallway towards the ward, leaving a trail of rose petals. When he got to the end of the hallway, immediately he spotted Arrisa sitting in the waiting room, and biting her fingernails and looking as if she was the one about to give birth.

Arrisa - P'Torn!!

Arrisa leaped over and hugged her brother and held on tight for a few minutes.

Torn - Where's Sayla? Did she give birth yet? Where's her room? Take me to her!

Arrisa - P'Torn.. she's she's...

Torn - She's what?? Gave birth already? Where's my baby girl?! How's the baby?? How's Sayla?

Torn grinned widely, still holding on to the roses thinking his wife already gave birth, not caring if he had missed it or not as long as his wife and daughter were doing fine.

Arrisa - Uhh... P'Torn, she didn't give birth yet.

Torn - Aow.. okay.. okay, that's good then. I made it in time. What room is Sayla in? And why are you sitting out here, Arrisa? I thought I told you to stay with Sayla the whole time??

Arrisa bit her lip and looked down to the floor.

Arrisa - P'Torn, err...

Torn - What is it???

Arrisa - P'Say is in surgery right now.

Torn - Why?? I thought the doctor said she's going to deliver naturally?!

Arrisa - Uhh.. she's in the emergen--

That's when a nurse walked by and Torn flagged her down.

Torn - Excuse me nurse, my wife checked in here a few hours ago.. Saylanee Thamadeth is her name.

Nurse - Oh. Mrs. Thamadeth, she's still in the Emergency Surgery room, sir. The doctors are still working on her right now.

Torn - Huh???? What did you say, nurse???? Emergency Surgery?? Are they delivering the baby right now?

He glanced over to Arrisa in confusion, searching his sister's face and the nurse's face for answers. Arrisa looked down and bit her lip.

Nurse - Yes, Mr. Thamadeth. Your wife had to have an emergency c-section.

Torn - What do you mean emergency c-section??

Nurse - That means, the doctors feel that it is crucial to take the baby out of her by c-section. There are some complications.

Torn - What kind of complications?? How's my wife? Is she okay? How's my baby!!???? What the hell is going on here?!!!

He shot a glare at Arrisa as the nurse tried to explain to him the situation.

Torn - Arrisa, why didn't you tell me this??

Arrisa - P'Torn, I..I.. didn't want you to be up--

Torn - You should have called me!!! I would have gotten out of that goddamn traffic on foot!!! Where is my wife??? Take me to her!

Nurse - I'm sorry sir, as of now I do not have those answers. Please wait for the doctors--as soon as they are done with surgery they will inform you.

Torn - No, no, no! Nurse, take me to the surgery room! I have to be there for my wife and my baby!

Nurse - Sir, i'm afraid you can't go into the emergency surgery room. Wait here okay, as soon as I know something, I'll come back and update you. You'll have to excuse me, I've got to go.

Torn - Wait!!! Nurse!! Nurse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Come back!!! God damn it!!

It was no use, the nurse had already disappeared down the hallway.

Arrisa - P'Torn, I'm sorry. I tried to stay with her, but the doctors took her away quickly and they wouldn't let me stay with her. I...I.. didn't call you, because.. I didn't want you to get upset on the road.

Thanatorn just sood there with his back turned towards his sister, not answering, but only cupping his head in a panick. The rose petals fell down one by one as he flinched his eyes, trying his hardest not to lose it. All the unanswered questions were killing him. What is going on in that surgery room? Why won't they let him see her? What will he do if he loses his precious Saylanee? And what about his baby girl? What if he loses both of the two girls he loves? All these thoughts made his legs weak, making him stagger towards a chair. He dropped the flowers onto another chair and sat down. He bent foward, and held onto his head, trying to hide his face, so no one, not including his sister could see the tears dripping down from his eyes.

Arrisa approached her brother slowly, sat next to him, and rubbed his back as he weeped silently while she cried out herself. Five years ago, Arrisa and Thanatorn were sitting exactly like this at a hospital waiting to hear the fate of their parents whom just got into a car accident, only to hear of their death after that. It was dejavu all over again, and this time it was too much to bear. Thanatorn's heart was beating fast and loud, even Arrisa could hear it.

Twenty minutes later, a doctor appeared from the hallway. Thanatorn saw him, grabbed the roses, and stood up from his seat, not wasting anytime , he ran towards the doctor.

Torn - How is she????????

Doctor Sompun - Are you Mr. Thamadeth?

Torn - Yes!! I'm her husband.

Doctor Sompun - We have successfully delivered your very healthy baby girl. She's being prepped right now in the nursery.

Torn immediately smiled and was relieved. He couldn't believe that he's finally a father.

Torn - Sayla must be really happy.

Arrisa - Hehe.. see, P'Torn.. I knew everything will be fine. And we were worried for nothing.

The doctor cleared his throat and interrupted the siblings as they reassured eachother.

Doctor Sompun - The baby is doing very well, however.... Mrs. Thamadeth is still in ICU.

That's when Thanatorn's face did a complete 360 and turned upside down. Arrisa gasps and covered her mouth with a hand.

Torn - I'm sorry, doctor, but you said they were healthy?!!

Doctor Sompun - The baby is healthy, but I'm afraid your wife will need to be seen by a cardiologist. The emergency c-section was performed, because Mrs. Thamdeth was in danger when we found that heart wasn't beating at a normal rate. It was very irratic. If we hadn't performed the surgery, the results could have been fatal for both mother and baby. Dr. Yeerman, our resident cardiologist is on his way right now. Once dr. Yeerman sees her, we'll get a definite answer as what's wrong with Mrs. Thamadeth.

Thanatorn dropped the roses and staggered back, not wanting to believe what he just heard. The doctor apologized and excused himself, leaving the siblings in shock. Arrisa quickly grabbed onto her brother and embraced him as he cried onto her shoulders. I'm sure she'll be okay, Arrisa reassured, not only Thanatorn, but herself as well. They could only wonder as to what uncertanty was ahead of them.

*Part III coming up soon*

 

hanjieun30

sarNie OldFart
so sad... hope saylanee will be fine... :(

will saylanee die? I have a feeling that she'll die and thanatorn will be mentally ill after that... then they'll put him on an asylum and there he will meet someone who looks like exactly like saylanee... probably his doctor or something... and he'll fall in love with her... :lol: I remembered the tagline of this story... love makes you do crazy things... that's why I came with an idea that he'll be crazy... ^_^
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
so sad... hope saylanee will be fine... :(

will saylanee die? I have a feeling that she'll die and thanatorn will be mentally ill after that... then they'll put him on an asylum and there he will meet someone who looks like exactly like saylanee... probably his doctor or something... and he'll fall in love with her... :lol: I remembered the tagline of this story... love makes you do crazy things... that's why I came with an idea that he'll be crazy... ^_^
lol.. donna... sweetie, you are too funny, you pretty much just wrote your own story. very good insight, though. lol.. But........ you'll just have to wait and see.... all I can say is that the tagline "crazy" wasn't meant to be literal. :D
 

hanjieun30

sarNie OldFart
lol.. donna... sweetie, you are too funny, you pretty much just wrote your own story. very good insight, though. lol.. But........ you'll just have to wait and see.... all I can say is that the tagline "crazy" wasn't meant to be literal. :D
:loool: I took the "crazy" word literally... it's a good thing that he'll not be literally crazy here... ^_^
 

amikrazie

sarNie Oldmaid
awww sooo sad...

yep sayla will surely dtai..but the love for her wont ....awwwwww!...hes gonna love his lil girl..and most likely spoil her...

i wanna see how p'ek will come bout in this story!...i so cant wait!!!

thanks lome!..wahhh tomorrow is coming soon :(
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
I want to cry now..omg..lome...wow...great emotional chapter..can't wait for more...
there's going to be more crying along the way.. :(

awww sooo sad...

yep sayla will surely dtai..but the love for her wont ....awwwwww!...hes gonna love his lil girl..and most likely spoil her...

i wanna see how p'ek will come bout in this story!...i so cant wait!!!

thanks lome!..wahhh tomorrow is coming soon :(
hopefully, Dr. Yeerman will be able to save Sayla. :(

and I'm going to try and get my baby bro to hook me up, so I may still be here tomorrow, but if not.. I'll see you gals in a week or less.
 
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