Recent content by yoshi

Sorry I tried to use indent to separate my paragraphs but the indent notation is not working for me. If anyone know how to use it please let me know. I am very new at this, and I am still learning on how to use all the functions on here. I love to hear critique on my work so feel free to give...

"Hey, what is so interesting out there that you can't seem to take your eyes off of it?" she gently asked. "Oh, sorry just can't seem to take my eyes off the crowd, is it not busy today or what?" he replied. " I think it all in your head, it like this everyday" she teased. "You never answer my...

Sitting on the leather seat as car stream by her window only made her more unaware of what laid ahead, maybe if she had just finish her story,she had time,didn't she..."did you want me to stop by a store and grabbed some chocolate?" he asked. Why is it that the most unlikely person to care about...

"My life story huh? Well there not really a lot to tell. I was born in small town, which I don't even seem to remember because we move before I was even 5 years old..." why did you move? "why did we move...?,that a good question...there many reasons why someone moves,new job,new husband,new...