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Hello everyone! This is my first fan-fiction :fanfic: , so I'll still need improvement on my fan-fics. I think I'll have lot's of grammar mistakes, but I'll try to fix them as the story goes on. Thank you and enjoy this fan-fiction from me! :thanks:
Note: This is 100% fiction and nothing out of this fiction is real. Will post character descriptions later and I don’t know how long I want the series of this story yet. I will post a legend later to differentiate when it’s in a character’s points of view or when they are talking. (I’m still looking for names to call my characters as will, so that is why I don’t have everything up and ready yet.) Just to tell you although this is set in ancient Thailand, this isn't a Thai boran lakorn setting because I'm sort of going for a Ayutthaya setting with fantasy in it. (don't know if this even makes since, but oh will)
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Title: Phoenix Goddess
Genre: Romance, Drama, Historical, Gender-Bender, Fantasy
Categories: Modern, Time-Travel, Action
Short Summary:
She is a princess of a god, a queen of Mythical creatures, and a girl whose heart burns for the one she loves. This is a story of the fallen goddess past, present and future.
On September 2, 2012
Ch 0: That Night
[-A stranger whispered-
“Upon the night of the purple moon, the phoenix goddess will awaken…”
*flashes to next scene*
*swords are clashing* ”AHHHHH!”]
« Ratana Pradchaphet POV »
*Gasp* I opened my eyes with unsteady breathing. Then, I sat up straight to open the lamp next to me. “What the heck? Thank goodness that was only a dream.” I got out of bed and walk towards the windows. As I looked straight at that moon, gleaming down at the lake with the silver reflection of the night, I felt uneasy because of the dream. I thought the dream would have gone away after a couple of weeks, but it still kept repeating for these pass 2 months now. I started seeing these weird dreams when I turned 16 years old this year. On the day of my birthday that night, two guys appeared in my dreamed.
**Beginning of Dream 1**
*Flashes to scene*
They both were wearing some Thai traditional royal armor on and looked as if they were mesmerized at someone. As I looked at them, they were smiling like the bright sun. One of them had a traditional Thai crown with a golden hair pin going through his hair. The other one had a golden crown and a bow with arrows at his side. But the weird thing was, I was not myself. The girl that was reflected in the water was me, but I couldn't move. For some reason, she moved on her own and I realized I'm just in her mind seeing all of this. The girl had only a white cloth covering her top and a short white skirt to her knee length. Her hair was long and silky. Her skin was a pale light tan or peach color. Her facial features was what made her stood out with the sun gleaming at her. When she notice they were looking at her she ran to get the cloth hanging on a tree branch and her sword. After putting her cloth to cover her body, she quickly transformed into a phoenix and flew into the sky. Both men were shocked, but it seemed like there hearts were already stolen at first sight to the maiden.
**End of Dream 1**
Ch 0: That Night
[-A stranger whispered-
“Upon the night of the purple moon, the phoenix goddess will awaken…”
*flashes to next scene*
*swords are clashing* ”AHHHHH!”]
« Ratana Pradchaphet POV »
*Gasp* I opened my eyes with unsteady breathing. Then, I sat up straight to open the lamp next to me. “What the heck? Thank goodness that was only a dream.” I got out of bed and walk towards the windows. As I looked straight at that moon, gleaming down at the lake with the silver reflection of the night, I felt uneasy because of the dream. I thought the dream would have gone away after a couple of weeks, but it still kept repeating for these pass 2 months now. I started seeing these weird dreams when I turned 16 years old this year. On the day of my birthday that night, two guys appeared in my dreamed.
**Beginning of Dream 1**
*Flashes to scene*
They both were wearing some Thai traditional royal armor on and looked as if they were mesmerized at someone. As I looked at them, they were smiling like the bright sun. One of them had a traditional Thai crown with a golden hair pin going through his hair. The other one had a golden crown and a bow with arrows at his side. But the weird thing was, I was not myself. The girl that was reflected in the water was me, but I couldn't move. For some reason, she moved on her own and I realized I'm just in her mind seeing all of this. The girl had only a white cloth covering her top and a short white skirt to her knee length. Her hair was long and silky. Her skin was a pale light tan or peach color. Her facial features was what made her stood out with the sun gleaming at her. When she notice they were looking at her she ran to get the cloth hanging on a tree branch and her sword. After putting her cloth to cover her body, she quickly transformed into a phoenix and flew into the sky. Both men were shocked, but it seemed like there hearts were already stolen at first sight to the maiden.
**End of Dream 1**
**Beginning of Dream 2**
*Flashes to scene*
Nanny Somsri: "Jao Faa Ying Sasithorn Rattanakosin, where are you hiding now?"*Flashes to scene*
Sasithorn Rattanakosin: "Khaa, Phi Liang Somsri." *jumps down the tree*
Nanny Somsri: "Why were up there? You’re the royal princess and a girl at that! You can’t go climbing on the trees like that! You should be studying right now! What if your parents or anyone saw you?”
Sasithorn Rattanakosin: "Don’t worry so much Phi Liang Somsri. You’re such a worry wart.” *chuckles and hugs*
Nanny Somsri: *
hew:* “What can I do without you, huh?” *grins and laughs back* “Come on; let’s get you washed up for the ceremony.”*Both going to the crystal cave*
I guess I'm seeing these things through Sasithorn Ratannakosin point of view. The location of this crystal cave was behind a water fall. At the entrance of the waterfall, there were huge roses at the side to prevent strangers from coming in. They don't look very kind. *flute playing* Oh, look! It looks like their falling asleep. It seems if you play music on them, they fall asleep. *thorn vines unlocking from the huge petal doors*
Sasithorn Rattanakosin: "Phi Liang Somsri, did you tell the guards to watch the waterfall entrance yet?"
Nanny Somsri: "Khaa, Jao Faa Ying. Now, let's wash you up."
*both walks into the cave*
As they enter into the cave, I thought this cave looked magnificent and enchanted at the same time. The water was glowing because of the reflection of the crystals. I've notice their were pixies flying around. Some of them were holding the scented oil and pouring them into the water.
Sasithorn Rattanakosin: "Thank you." *Takes her clothes off and goes into the water*
Nanny Somsri: *scrubs sasithorn's hair hair with soap*
Sasithorn Rattanakosin: *grabs a sponge leaf and pours some scented oil on it. starts to scrub body.* *humming*
*bubbles flying around*
One of the pixies sort of got caught in a bubble.
Sasithorn Rattanakosin: *giggles* "You silly pixie." *pokes the bubble and catches the pixie that was going to fall into the water*
«Pixie Language» Pixie 1: *phew* "Thank you." *smiles*
Sasithorn Rattanakosin: "Your welcome. Be careful next time, okay?"
«Pixie Language» Pixie 1: "Okay." *smiles*
[still writing and editing]
**End of Dream 2**
