~IN WONDERLAND~ ::AUM/AFF::

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
Miss RR.. to me the sex scene was naughty, but.... I think what's naughtier is that they are pratically strangers!

Wheww........ so hot in here.
do you need a fan? lol

hahah or else she'll give u a MOH SLAP.. kekek lol.. the reason im up early is because i ahvent been able to use the comp durin the day time thats y xp kekek.. lol.. hahaha.. and i had a super long sleep yesterday too keke.. so im basically awake xp kekee.. but imma sleep again in abit lol. hahaha..
awwww....shhh i'm hiding from moh don't tell her...

kekeke.. lol.. haha.. u r indeed naughty keke.. xp..
what *blush*

lmao.. my o my kekeke.. lol.. hahah she wants more.. xp kekeke..
lol i think she did...(probably like the rest of us)

OMG RR!!!!! I can't believe SORIYA wants more!!!

update soon! ^_^
me either....i'll try to update today

more..more...more...i'm waiting..
:loool: okay...but i don't think it will be as dirty as before

i have to go read it again ...dang ...now i know why ppl short ur sn

RR = RATED R :lol:
lol....maybe...

lmao.. hahaha sarn keke.. keke.. thats one of the reason keke .. i call her that lol..
uh...no comment lol

^^ hehe.. That's funny.. I never thought it like that before. Or RR could be "really R-rated."

Just teasing Miss RR. Where are ya?? It's so quiet here in the Fanfiction thread without you.
lol...sorry my interent was out for 2 days...aww..i'll spam more here now that i'm back^^

rr......gosh i didnt see the willing scene coming....lolz.....girl update soon.....

like i said im finally back to read all of these fanfics.....
YAY pze.....i'll try to....i have lots of surprises up my sleeves i think lol
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
:D :D
love it!!! hehehe
hope to see the updates soon hehe i cant wait to read how their next meet is goin to be like :D :D
and i very much like the naughty scenes hahaha :D
you did a good job!
PROPS! ;)

thanks...lol...you make me blush...OMG my naughty scenes..tsk tsk tsk....
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
do you need a fan? lol
awwww....shhh i'm hiding from moh don't tell her...
what *blush*
lol i think she did...(probably like the rest of us)
me either....i'll try to update today
:loool: okay...but i don't think it will be as dirty as before
lol....maybe...
uh...no comment lol
lol...sorry my interent was out for 2 days...aww..i'll spam more here now that i'm back^^
YAY pze.....i'll try to....i have lots of surprises up my sleeves i think lol
cough cough.. wait till she sees the pix u posted on jlr thread lmao.. ahah keke..
keke we crave lmao.. hahaha.. **blushing** keke..
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
cough cough.. wait till she sees the pix u posted on jlr thread lmao.. ahah keke..
keke we crave lmao.. hahaha.. **blushing** keke..
sorry...lol...gosh i'll probably be hiding if moh saw what i posted lol

hahaha.. U R SUPER NAUGHTY KEKE.. love u lotz..
WHAT?! no....lol...love you lots too

no update yet? aiya.. RR.. where are you??
sorry..reading other fanfics..and spending time with arisa before she had to leave for THAILAND^^
promise i will soon
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
ohh.. take your time than sweetie. tell arisa to bring back some aumdelicious with her. hehe
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
Chapter 10: All In One Day...Lives Will Change
(this chapter is more about pat and poo)

-Morning-
Both were sleeping together, in each other's arms. Soriya felt safe with a stranger. WITH A STRANGER! OH NO! She was feeling a bit regretful. What did she do? Slowly moving off the bed, putting on her clothes. She was getting out hte door, then she felt guilty, she didn't want to leave this guy without saying good-bye. With no pen or paper, she saw his labtop. turns it on and saw a folder pop up read: love letters. she didn't want to pry to then she started typing her letter, which read:


Dear Harit,

Although I just met you, and what we did last night was something I would never think of doing with a stranger, it was amazing. It was lovely meeting you, and I hope to see you again. Sorry if you do not see me when you wake up, I had to go home. My parents are probably worried about me. Good-bye!

With Love,

Soriya


Soriya saved it, and then left for her house. She was walking home until her legs gave in. As she was falling, someone's arms caught her. She turned around and saw it was HARIT.

soriya: Harit! (her eyes lite up)

harit: hello sweetie!

soriya: i'm not your sweetie! but how did you find me?

harit: well, after you left, 10 minutes later I woke up to find you gone. I saw your letter on my labtop. Then i went to look for you.

soriya: i see.

harit: and now i found you. Let's go.

soriya: go where?

harit: to your house silly.

soriya: what, you are going with me?

harit: yes, i want to meet my wife's parents.

soriya: No. You're a stranger. my parents canNOT find out.

harit: come on.....fine, let's say that i am your boyfriend.

soriya: (boyfriend? she never had one ever, but it was better than saying he was her husband) okay then.

harit: Yes! now get on my back, you're tired........after last night. let me carry you there, but hold onto my labtop.

soriya: (knowing that she can't win) okay. whatever you say.

harit: that's a good wife.

soriya: i'm not your-----(harit kiss her before she could say anything else)

harit: let's go now honey.

soriya smiled as she got harit's back.

----MEANWHILE.....YESTERDAY (Poo-after leaving soriya)-------

Poo: Oh shoot! i'm going to be late. of all day, it has to be the day the new boss is going to arrive. Argggg....YES! 5 minutes to spare. Okay. Stay cool Poo. oh no! where's my ID card? (while looking through her purse, she bumps into someone) AHHHHHHHH! Watch where you are going?

man: i'm truely sorry miss.

poo: (she looks up and was disgusted) you think since you're good-looking and rich, "sorry" makes everything better. Let me tell you, you're nothing to me, just being here looking at you, talking to you, i just want to gag. EXCUSE ME, but i'm late for work. Ugh.

the man stood there, smiling.

willy: sir, welcome. we're so happy to meet you. come, i'll introduce you to the people you will be working with.

man: i look forward to be working here.

willy: Everyone, gather around. Meet your new boss, Mr. Yamnarm.

man: Please call me Chakrit. And it's pleasure to meet you all.

willy: Ann, where is Poo?

Poo: i'm here. Here! sorry, i ran a little late because of-----(she saw him) YOU!

willy: You met Mr. Yamnarm already Poo?

chakrit: briefly, nice to meet you Poo. (holding out his had)

poo: well it's nice to meet you too...........NOT! I'm sorry Willy, but i simply cannot work with this man. Hmph. (walking away)

willy: i'm sorry chakrit. poo is like this, but she IS our best employee.

chakrit: that's okay. i love a challenge. i have to use the bathroom, please excuse me.

---------

poo: ugh. Why does this have to happen to me? What did i do to deserve this?

chakrit: you slapped and insulted me.

poo: hey i may have insulted you, but i did not slap you.

chakrit: yes you did. think back, all the way to high school. does the name "so-farts-a-lot" ring a bell?

poo: oh, now i do. you deserved that too. that was ages ago, why are you here now?

chakrit: to get even with you. i don't forgive and forget easily.

poo: arg. (steps on chakrit's foot with her heel to vent out her anger)

chakrit: ouch! (as she turned the corner) get ready poo. What i have in store for you will be out of this world. (smiles) It's good to be back. now where is the bathroom?

(around the corner)
poo: the nerve of that man. i will not lose to him. GRRRRRRR! Hi-ya. (knocks over some paper) Breathe poo, stay strong. control yourself. breathe in and out. better now poo.

------MEANWHILE.....YESTERDAY (pat----meeting friends @ CLUB 183)------

fang: come on pat, one more drink.

bie: yeah. you're not going anywhere tonight.

pat: one more, that's it. i have to go before my parents get worried.

fang: just tell them that you're spending the night with me.

pat: i'll call them and see if they will let me. be right back then. (leave the booth to go outside)

bie: fang, sweetheart, did you call nat?

fang: i did. but i'm worried, what if he----i mean her parents didnt' even want her to hang out with her, she doesn't either. and she listens to her parents.

bie: i know, but leave it to this (pulls out a small pill and puts it into pat's drink. it dissolves quickly)

fang: bie are you sure pat will be okay?

bie: trust me honey. pat's a big girl, she'll be fine.

pat: BACK! my parents said YES.

bie: that's good. here's your drink.

pat: thanks. so what are we talking about?

bie: nothing much. umm...nat might be coming.

pat: what, no, he can't. not after what he did.

fang: pat, it's okay. we're here to protect you.

pat: i'm still not sure.

bie: pat, we're your friends. we will be here for you. don't worry about a thing.


*flashback after school @ the parking lot*

pat: hey nat!

nat: there's my girlfriend. so what are we going to do tonight sweetie?

pat: well...bie and fang invited us to Club Rox.

nat: not another club. (pulls pat closer) pat, let's do something else tonight. (starts kissing her neck)

pat: no nat. i can't. i told you already, i'm waiting until i'm married.

nat: marriage? pat, i've spent 5 months with you. i believe i should get something for that. (keeps kissing her)

pat: stop nat! NO! STOP! help anyone help me! (pushes him away and slaps him hard)

nat: you'll pay for that you bitch. (coming closer)

pepper: Let go of pat or i'll call the police.

nat: stay out of this pepper.

pepper: no, pat is my friend.

they start fighting. pat is crying and cannot believe what is happening. then a security guard come by.

guard: (whistles) you two kids, stop it.

nat: this isn't over pat. (drives off)

pat: pepper, let's go before we get into trouble. (run to pepper's car)

guard: (out of breath) da-rn ki-ds. i'm getting too old.

*end of flashback*


pat: i think i should leave before anything happens. (she gets up, but she feels dizzy and falls back to the seat) what's happening?

fang: i'm so sorry pat. (nat arrives)

nat: hello everyone. Pat. you look more beautiful than the last time i saw you.

pat: ugh. i have to go. (trying to get up again, but fails)

nat: did you give her the "stuff"?

bie: yeah, now your end of the bargain.

nat: here it is, cash like you said. don't spend it all in one place. (bie and fang leave with a brown envelope with cash inside)

pat: fang! bie! (her friends sold her out, she wished that pepper was here. she starts crying.)

nat: aww pat. don't cry. shhhh. i'm sorry babe. i love you. forgive me please.

pat: leave me alone or i will call the cops on you. (blacks out)

nat: i can't baby. pat? pat? (shaking her, then smiles) i guess it worked. tonight is going to be special. (someone taps nat on the shoulder) WHAT?!

BAM! nat is knocked out. the person goes over to pat and carries her out of the club.


----TBC-----

next chapter will also be about pat and poo
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
sorry...lol...gosh i'll probably be hiding if moh saw what i posted lol
WHAT?! no....lol...love you lots too
sorry..reading other fanfics..and spending time with arisa before she had to leave for THAILAND^^
promise i will soon
hahaha hide well kekeke. hide well muahahaha..
kekeke love u super more xp..
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
damn rr damn .. i want more more more keke lmao.. hahaha.. hmmm who punched him eh?? omg bie n fang r so evil lmao hahaha.. xp..
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
Chapter 11: Is This Really Happening To Me?
(pat and poo again)

---MORNING---
Pat: hmm...ugh...What happened? Where am i? (gasp) NAT?!

man: no, not nat. Por.

pat: what happened?

por: i helped you last night. i saw him forcing him on you so i came and punched him.

pat: thank you por. why am i here?

por: why, i don't know where you live. let's talk later. here, drink this first and have some breakfast. you need your energy.

pat: thank you. oh my god, what happened to your hand?

por: oh, nothing much, just nat's face.

pat: i'll clean it up for you after we eat.

they ate breakfast quietly. pat bandages up por's hand. as she looked at him, she realizes that HE saved her, the knight-in-shining-armor pat had always wanted. por looked at pat, she was young and naive. she reminded him of someone from his past.

por: thank you. umm.. ahem...let's go send you back home.

pat: uhhh...can i stay here a little bit longer...........with you? to get to know you. PLEASE?

por: okay then.

they talked about each other's lives. the whole morning. pat found out that por came here from thailand, but moved to malaysia for his mother's treatment. he didn't even finish school because he had to take care of his sick mother. he's 25, while pat is only 17. his friends wanted him to relax and not be so stressed so they took him to club 183, where he met pat. he works as a mechanic. to pat, he was amazing, with a heart of gold. he was the one she has been waiting for. but sadly he had to go back down south in a week. he came up here for his best friend's wedding.

por: it's almost noon, your family must be worried. i'll take you back.

pat: oh. i guess they are. okay then. (disappointed)

---in front of pat's house---
pat: thank you so much por for everything. i'll see you around i hope. (kiss por on his cheek and left the car, por drove away and smiled)

mom: where have you been missy? it's already noon, we were so worried.

pat: me and fang lost track of time mom. i'm so sorry.

dad: that's okay sweetie. you should of informed us. even your sister is not back yet.

pat: SO is not back yet? that's the first.

mom: well she went to go meet poo and then it started raining heavily so she went to go find shelter.

pat: i see. don't worry. soriya is old enough, she'll be fine.

------------Poo's Workplace------------------

poo: YES! i can finally leave this place. i am so sick of seeing THAT guy. ugh.

ann: umm. poo?

poo: WHAT?!

ann: uh uh um...chakrit asked to see you.

poo: noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! why? darn it. (pounding her head to the wall..softly) fine! thank you ann.......you needed to see me?

chakrit: yes. i read your profile, the best this company has. that's good. well, i need you to do these. (points to the three feet stack of paper) TONIGHT in my office so i can keep an eye on you.

poo: are you serious? (he nods yes) you don't expect me to stay HERE and finish THOSE all tonight.

chakrit: i'm sorry, i asked everyone but no one wanted to do it. (he didn't ask anyone else heehee) well you could do that...or go...on....a.....dinner......DATE......with me.

poo: arrrg....i will never go on a dinner date with you. i choose the paperwork. (gets the paper and about to carry it out the door)

chakrit: where are you going? remember, you have to do it here.

poo: whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat! FINE! *under her breath-->* crazy loser.

chakrit just kept smiling to himself. this is so much fun

--8 HOURS LATER--

chakrit: poo? poo? tsk tsk tsk. asleep on the job. wow, she finished them all. (chuckles) poo? i'm going to take you to my house? is that okay with you? if you don't answer, then i will take it as a yes. 5....4....3.....2.....1......0....alright poo, you're coming back to my place.

he carries poo to his car, she is not the lightest person. once he reached his house, he noticed that someone else's car is in his driveway.

chakrit: oh shit. mom's here? oh my god.

he quickly got poo out of the car and went to the back of the house. he slowly carried up the stairs. poo being a heavy sleeper was also snoring. he had to act quick. so then he placed her hair in her mouth. finally reaching his room, he places poo gently on the bed. exhausted from all that heavy lifting, chakrit was too tired to move and slept next to poo. in his mind he was going to let poo sleep in one of the guest rooms, but since he mother came, he didn't want his mother to find out that he brought home a girl. sleeping soundly, in the middle of the night, poo rolled over to chakrit and wrapped her arms around him, thinking he was her stuff animal. closer and closer they got.


---TBC---

next will be soriya/harit i think^^
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
shoot.. I wanna read the update, but gotta go store real quick.. be back in a bit!!
how was the store? there's no need to rush^^ lol

hahaha hide well kekeke. hide well muahahaha..
kekeke love u super more xp..
i'll try my best^^

damn rr damn .. i want more more more keke lmao.. hahaha.. hmmm who punched him eh?? omg bie n fang r so evil lmao hahaha.. xp..
wth...lol...read and find out...yeah bie and fang are semi-evil

hmm..I see Soriya is already starting to like this stranger....... good update girl...
thanks^^ liking a stranger..yep
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
Chapter 12: Taking Responsibility

--harit/soriya--

harit: are we there yet?

soriya: no.

harit: hunny, i'm tired and sweaty and ugh.

soriya: you were the one who wanted to carry me. now you're complaining. let me down then.

harit: NO. i like carrying my wife.

soriya: stop calling me that.........ahem...harit, tell me about yourself.

harit: i'm rich.

soriya: not that. tell me about your family.

--TBC a little later---
i'll update soon going to sleep for a while^^
 
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