Double the Charm - Chapter 28- The End

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Chapter 8

Fahsai was almost done with all the stunts. She had 5 more to go in less than 5 minutes. She was exhausted but she wasn’t going to let Arthit win this game.By the time she got to the last stunt, time was up.

Arthit: times up. And you didn’t finish the stunts.

Fahsai: that’s…[paused] because [paused] you…..[faints]

Arthit caught her in time before she fell to the floor.

Arthit: hey you, what’s wrong? [gentle tapped her face] Fahsai?

He called her so many times but she didn’t wake up that he got worried and took her back to her house.

[At the house]

He gently carries her out of the car and gently layed her on the couch.

Arthit: [talks to himself] It’s been awhile and you still haven’t woke up yet. You starting to make me worried now.and I don’t wanna feel that way.

Arthit then got up from the couch and walked to the kitchen. When Arthit was out of sight, Fahsai slowly opened her eyes to see if Arthit was gone and she let out a big smile.

Fahsai: who’s controlling the game now, buttface [chuckles]

Fahsai spotted Arthit coming back from the kitchen and she closed her eyes again. Arthit wet the towel and gently washed Fahsai’s face with it. Lt. Chatree just got back from Nakhon Sawan. He walked in the house and saw Arthit wiping Fahsai’s face

Arthit: hello sir Back so soon

Lt. Chatree: oh I just came back to get some things and I’ll be going back but what’s wrong with Fahsai?

Arthit: uh…..she fainted

Lt. Chatree: huh? What happened? Fahsai is never like that. I never seen her faint before

Arthit: I guess she couldn’t handle the training

Lt. Chatree: [chuckles] probably but hey it’s good that you’re here. I need to talk to you [sits down on the couch]

Arthit: what is it?

Lt. Chatree: I’m going to move you to Krung Thep

Arthit: how come?

Lt. Chatree: there’s a case I want you to do for me

Arthit: what case?

Lt. Chatree: my spies told me that Mr. Worawit is coming back to Thailand

Arthit: Worawit?….[thinks]…..isn’t he the one that done those illegal drugs and weapons and you caught him but he escaped?

Lt. Chatree: [nods] yeah, that’s the guy but they said he changed his profile

Arthit: so that means his name isn’t Worawit anymore then?

Lt. Chatree: [nods]

Arthit: then how are we suppose to know who’s who? He’s one of the biggest mafias out there. He’s not going to go out and walk in public for the police to catch him again

Lt. Chatree: that’s why I want you and the other team to go down to Krung Thep and solve this case

Arthit: okay….but what about Fahsai’s training

Lt. Chatree: I was thinking that you take her with you

As soon as Fahsai heard this, she quickly got up from the couch

Fahsai: no way am I going to Krung Thep with him! Where am I going to stay?

Lt. Chatree: feeling better now?

Arthit: you didn’t even faint huh? You just pretended

Fahsai: [ignores Arthit] daddy, you can’t do this to me. With him being my trainer is bogus already, now I have to go to Krung Thep with him….oh my gosh…..

Arthit: yeah if I bring Fahsai with me, where is she going to stay?

Lt. Chatree: at your house of course

Arthit+Fahsai: no way!

Lt. Chatree: [laughs] just kidding

Arthit: I know, she can stay at my condo

Fahsai: where are you going to stay?

Arthit: I have a house, duh!

Lt. Chatree: okay then that’ll do….[looks at Fahsai] what about you Fah?

Fahsai: [thinks] fine…….

Lt. Chatree: alrighty…you guys can take off tomorrow morning

The next morning, Arthit came to pick up Fahsai and like usual, she woke up late. 30 minutes later, Fahsai came down stairs with her bags.

Fahsai: ahem! Aren’t you going t help me with these bags

Arthit then got up from the couch and walked up to Fahsai.

Arthit: no [walks out the door]

Fahsai: idiot!

Arthit: hurry up, I don’t have all day

Fahsai: [walks out the door] if you’d help me with my bags​
 
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Chapter 9

Duenram and her mother sat at the restaurant. A few minutes later, khun ying Rattana and Tawan came into the same restaurant as well.

Rada: oh what a coincident. Rattana, you brought Tawan to eat with you?

Rattana: why yes I did

Tawan: hello aunty, hey Duen

Duen: [smiles]

Rada: well since you guys came, why don’t you two have a seat with us?

Rattana: we’d love to

Rada: here’s the menu

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Arthit remembered that tonight was Dao’s birthday party so he stopped at the mall to buy her a gift.

Fahsai: what are we doing here?

Arthit: I have to buy something for Dao

Fahsai: Dao?……oh your girlfriend…..

Arthit: are you going to wait here or come with me?

Fahsai: I’ll go down too, I forgot I have to buy something too

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Duen, Tawan and their mom were having a good breakfast when their mom decided to leave Tawan and Duen by themselves.

Rada: oh, I just remembered that I have to meet up with the counseling committee. Rattana, you have to go to don’t you?

Rattana: oh that’s right. Well, we better get going then

Tawan: I’ll go drop you guys off

Rattana: oh it’s okay, Rada and I can take the taxi, you stay here with Duen

Tawan: okay then

Rada: oh Tawan, if you don’t mind, could you please drop Duen at the house after you’re done. We might be at the committee for awhile

Tawan: sure thing

Rada: come on Rattana, let’s go

[the moms leave]

Duen: that was weird

Tawan: seems like they want us to be alone

[phone rings]

Tawan: hey Dao, what’s up?

Dao: I just want you to remind me of my birthday party tonight

Tawan: oh right…

Dao: you forgot didn’t you

Tawan: just a little but

Dao: nice to know that my own brother forgot his sister’s birthday

Tawan: sorry but look, I’ll make sure I buy you the best present than everyone else okay?

Dao: okay but you can’t beat Arthit though

Tawan: Arthit’s coming?

Dao: of course, but look, I have to go…see you at the party

Tawan: bye

Duen: Dao’s birthday today?

Tawan: yeah, I still need to buy a present for her though

Duen: you could go look for it now

Tawan: what about you?

Duen: it’s okay. I can take the taxi home

Tawan: no you can’t. I told your mom that I take you home so if you don’t mind, want to go help me pick a present for Dao then?

Duen: uh…I guess

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Fahsai met up with Arthit who just got done paying for Dao’s present

Arthit: you’re done

Fahsai: [nods]

Arthit: what did you buy?

Fahsai: something personal. What did you get your girlfriend?

Arthit: something……

Fahsai: see, you don’t want to tell me either

Arthit: [changes subject] come on, let’s get back

Fahsai: uh…could you wait, I have to use the restroom

Arthit: [sighs] hurry up then. I’ll go wait in the car

Fahsai then runs off to use the restroom. Duen who happens to be in the same mall as Fahsai and Arthit had to use the restroom as well.

Duen: Tawan, if you excuse me, I’m going to use the restroom real quick

Tawan: sure, I’ll just wait around here

Duen: okay

Duen rushed off to the restroom, the same restroom Fahsai went into. A few minutes later, Fahsai came out and was trying to find the way out of the mall. Tawan saw her and mistaken her for Duenram.

Tawan: Duen, I’m over here

Fahsai just kept on walking.

Tawan: Duen?…..what’s wrong with her?

He then walks up to her

Tawan: Duen, you didn’t hear me call you?

Fahsai: who are you and what did you call me?

Tawan: uh….I’m Tawan and isn’t your name Duen?

Fahsai: Duen……[thinks] um……I’m sorry but I don’t know you

Tawan: what’s wrong with you? Did you bump your head or something? You want to go see the doctor?

Fahsai: [thinks to herself] Duen, who is he talking about?…wait….Duen…p’Duen…..he must’ve mistaken me for p’Duen

Tawan: Duen?…are you okay?

Fahsai: oh yeah…I’m okay….I was just playing with you

Tawan: okay….then let’s go

Fahsai: go where?

Tawan: go look for a present for Dao

Fahsai: oh right…[chuckles]

Fahsai didn’t know what to do so she just went along with Tawan. Besides, she wanted to get away from Arthit too.​
 
n_naruk

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I see Duen and Win's mom making an arrangement marriage for the two?! I just can't get enough of Fahsai and Arthit. They're just too hilarious! buttface! Lmao! Arthit is not such a gentlemen. Letting Fahsai carrying her own bags. Hahahaha.​
 
TubbyTinker

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Chapter 10

Duenram got out from the restroom and was looking for Tawan but couldn’t find him. She was walking around until a man grab her by the arms. It was Arthit who thought Duenram was Fahsai.

Arthit: what took you so long, I’ve been waiting for you in the car

Duen: uh…..

Arthit: come on…[pulls her away] I don’t have all day with you

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Tawan was choosing outfits for Dao and Fahsai was getting annoyed because he kept asking her questions.

Tawan: hey Duen, do you think Dao would like this? [pulls out a dress]

Fahsai: man dude, just pick whatever for her….she’ll like anything her boyfriend gives her

Tawan: Dao’s my sister, not my girlfriend…..

Fahsai: …..right…I was just testing you [chuckles nervously]

Tawan: nah…I think I should just get her that new phone that she wanted [turns to Fahsai], you think that’s good?

Fahsai: I guess….I don’t know…..

Tawan: are you okay? You seem annoyed or something

Fahsai: [talks to herself] ya think?…[talks to Tawan] no, it’s just that I’m not very good at picking out presents…that’s all

Tawan: oh….well…I guess I’m going to have to buy that phone then…..

Fahsai: better than nothing right?

Tawan: [nods] yeah….c’mon let’s go buy that phone and go home

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[Arthit and Duenram are in the car]

Duen: where are you taking me?

Arthit: back to my condo, duh!

Duen: condo? Why?

Arthit: hello, I’m suppose to train you but since your dad gave me a case to solve here in Krung Thep, I had to bring you along…what’s wrong with you Fahsai, you’re not even old and you have short term memories already?

Duen: [talks to herself] dad? Fahsai?….this guy must think I’m Fahsai…but wait…if I’m here and he thinks I’m Fahsai, then where’s the real Fahsai?….

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Fahsai: hey you, where are you taking me?

Tawan: back to your house…remember your mom told me to drop you off

Fahsai: mom?…..how is she by the way?

Tawan: um….good….you just saw her this morning….are you sure you didn’t bump your head on the way back from the restroom?

Fahsai: no, I’m fine….I’m just not used to being away from my mom like this

Tawan: then what about when you were in England for 4 years, how did you deal with it?

Fahsai: England, I was in L.A.

Tawan: what? I thought your mom said you went to England to get a degree in Fashion design

Fahsai: oh….right….just kidding…I was just testing you

Tawan: okay….we’re here….

Fahsai: [flashbacks to all the memories she used to live here with her sister and both parents]

Tawan: Duen? Duen?

Fahsai: huh? What?…what did you say?

Tawan: are you okay?

Fahsai: no I’m fine…thanks for the ride [gets out the car]

When Fahsai walked into the house, everything just came back to her. All the good times, she spent here living a happy family with her mom and dad, and her sister, Duenram. She saw a picture of her mom and she picked up the frame and looked at it.

Fahsai: mom, you’re still pretty as before [smiles]

Maid: [walks up behind her] back already khun noo?

Fahsai: [turns around] yeah

Maid: where’s khun ying?

Fahsai: mom?…..uh….I don’t know

Maid: [looks at Fahsai up and down] khun noo, when you left this morning, you weren’t wearing this outfit

Fahsai: [look at herself] yes I was….you’re probably getting old that’s why you don’t remember

Maid: hmmm..probably

Fahsai: hey what’s there to eat, I’m starving

Maid: oh I made your favorite chicken curry

Fahsai: chicken curry? That’s not my favorite

Maid: oh I thought you love chicken curry, you always tell me to make it for you

Fahsai: oh right…geesh, I was just testing you

Eventhough Fahsai didn’t like the chicken curry, she ate it anyways because she was tsraving.

Fahsai: [eating] I wonder what that buttface is doing right now…….​
 
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Stardust said:
Omg it's hilarious that they switched.
So Fahsai knows the truth but Deunram doesn't?
Haha I'm so confused...
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no Duen knows that they accidentally switch...when she was saying where's the real Fahsai, she meant her sister...cuz they know they're twins
 
TubbyTinker

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Chapter 11

Duenram was scared when Arthit brought her to his condo because she was scared that he might do something to her. Arthit opened the door to go in but Duenram just stayed outside

Arthit: what are you waiting for? Come in, I’m not going to do anything to you…….I don’t want to

Duen came in and looked around the place.

Duen: Nice condo

Arthit: yeah, come on, I’ll show you your room where you’ll be sleeping

Duen followed Arthit to the room

Arthit: [turns on the light] you’ll be sleeping here in my room since this is a one room condo

Duen: I’m sleeping in here with you?!

Arthit: no, I’ll be sleeping in the living room

Duen: oh…that’s a relief, thanks by the way

Arthit: [shocked] what did you say?

Duen: I said thanks…..

Arthit: ever since I know you, you were never polite by saying please and thank you…..that was just weird

Duen: um, where’s your bathroom?

Arthit: next door to this room

Duen: thanks [walks to the bathroom]

Duen had to call Fahsai and she was positive that Fahsai had to go back home

Maid: hello?

Duen: hi, I’m one of Duenram’s friend from England and I was wondering if she’s home or not

Maid: yes she is

Duen: could you put her on the phone please

Maid: yes, please hold on [walks to the kitchen] khun noo, one of your friend called from England

Fahsai: England? I don’t have any friends from England…..

Maid: but she said she’s your friend

Fahsai: [remembers that she’s supposedly Duenram] oh right…I forgot haha….[gets up] hello?

Duen: Fahsai?

Fahsai: p’Duen, where are you?

Duen: I’m at your boyfriend’s condo

Fahsai: [fakes choke] Ew! That Sarawat dude is not my boyfriend and he will never be….look you made me have goosebumps now

Duen: oh he’s a Sarawat?

Fahsai: sadly yes

Duen: then what are you doing with him?

Fahsai: man it’s all dady’s fault. Daddy told him to be my trainer and I have to train with him for 3 months

Duen: so?

Fahsai: so then daddy happened to have this one case for him to solve and since the case is here in Krung Thep, I had to come along with him so he can train me and solve his case at the same time

Duen: oh….where’s dad then?

Fahsai: he’s in Nakhon Sawan doing his work

Duen: but look, we need to switch back

Fahsai: aww, why?

Duen: because I don’t belong here and you need to do your training

Fahsai: aww can’t we just switch for a week or something. You’ll pretend to be me and I’ll pretend to be you

Duen: it’s not going to work out. Eventhough we look alike, we are totally opposites

Fahsai: oh it’s not that hard being you, even a little kid can imitate you and I’m not that bad of a person

Duen: I don’t know……

Fahsai: please….and besides I want to spend time with mom…..

Duen: [thinks]….fine then but only for a week

Fahsai: yes!

Duen:: hey what’s the Sarawat name by the way so I can call him by his correct name instead hey you?

Fahsai: [roll eyes] Arthit, but I usually call him buttface

Duen: butt face? Why?

Fahsai: cuz he calls me alien face

Duen: alien face? [laughs]

Fahsai: hey don’t be laughing, you got the same face like me so that means you’re an alien face too [laugh]

Duen: hey…..

Arthit knocks on the bathroom door

Duen: [whispers] Fah, I have to go…bye [hangs up] [opens the bathroom door] yes?

Arthit: were you talking to someone?

Duen: sort of….not really….I don’t know

Arthit: [confused look] well anyways, I’m going to head off to Dao’s party right now so just stay here and don’t go anywhere else…I’ll be back later…and if you’re hungry, there’s some food in the fridge I think

Duen: Dao? Tawan’s sister?

Arthit: [nods] yeah, how do you know Tawan?

Duen: ……uh…..I saw him on the news

Arthit: ……right…..anyways I’m gonna take off

Duen: okay

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Khun ying Rada cam back home and Fahsai was so happy to see her mom again since she was 3 years old.

Fahsai: [runs to hug her mom] I miss you so much

Rada: already? But it’s only been 3-4 hours that I left the restaurant

Fahsai: well to me it’s seems forever

Rada: awww [smiles] but hey, how did it go with Tawan?

Fahsai: [confused look] who?

Rada: Tawan

Fahsai: [thinks] oh him….it was okay….[paused,confused look]… I guess

Rada: so what id you guys do after we left?

Fahsai: we went shopping

Rada: really? What did he buy you?

Fahsai: oh no, he didn’t buy me anything but he bought a new phone for…[paused] I think her name is Dao or Dog, I don’t know..one of those…

Rada: oh right, today’s Dao’s birthday…..what else did you guys do?

Fahsai: that’s it…..can we not talk about other people…can we talk about you?

Rada: me? Why me?

Fahsai: I just want to know how was your day today, that’s all…[smiles]

Rada: it was fun…come on, I’ll tell you uptairs in your room

Fahsai: okay..[walks upstairs]​
 
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stardust_magic

P.I.N.K.Y
LOL I mean the parents have got nothing on their daughters if Fahsai really wanted to stay with her mom shhe could just cometo the house, no? 555+

Thanks for uploading!
 
tastesweetlove

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
awww Fahsai wants to spend time with her mother. hmmm at first i was think Duen was going to end up with Tawan, and Fahsai with Arthit...but i'm not sure anymore.
 
n_naruk

n_naruk

TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
After reading more chapters of this fic...

Like RR said
hmmm at first i was think Duen was going to end up with Tawan, and Fahsai with Arthit...but i'm not sure anymore.
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I've been thinking that too. This fic reminds me of the lakorn Puk Boong Gub Groong Nang with Jui(being a twin) along with Note and Vee. Vee was the sarawat and Note was the city, wealthy guy. With that lakorn, I thought Puk Boong(slum girl) was going to end up with VVee and Note with Groong Nang(koon noo) But it was the opposite​
 
TubbyTinker

TubbyTinker

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haha snaps...forgot about that lakorn...well that I mention it...I'll try not to let it be similar to that lakorn lol

but to be honest, I have no clue as to right now who gets with who...like seriously....I'm deciding as I write
 
TubbyTinker

TubbyTinker

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poster is up...credits Mannie...I love it

sorry guys I havent been here in awhile but I've been busy...yup that's right...Thip is finally busy....I'll get back to this around spring break
 
n_naruk

n_naruk

TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
OMB! Me lovers the poster! Son and Pinky does look cute together!
yup that's right...Thip is finally busy
The way you said that made me laugh for some reason. Lol. But hey everyone has their busy moments you know!
Update when you can!​
 
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