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sarNie Hatchling
Hi I'm new to this forum and I love all the good fanfic that everyone wrote in here, so I've just wanted to try writting one of my own. I don't know if it's good or not but please give me feed back if I did not do a good job so I'll try to improve my writting thank you. Sorry if I makes lots of mistakes and grammer. i hope everyone like it.
Sense of White Jasmine
Starring:
Mos, Noon, Aum, Donut, Kwarm, Oil, Aump
Chapter 1
"Hua Hin" It was 6 p.m., as Mos was on his way home from work. He decided to stop at the beach to look at the sun set. As he know not many people will be out on the beach at this time. Standing on the beach shore, he stared up toward the beautiful sky. The sun was setting upon the yellow, orange, blue, and reddish horizen, welcoming the darkness of the night. Some stars has already beginning to appared. The cold winds is blowing hard and the waves crashing up and down, back and forward in the dark blue sea. The abstacts from the setting sun is looming all over the waters. It's such a beautiful scene, he though to himself. As he looked to his where about. To the left of him, Mos saw a woman, wearing a white knees cut dress with long black hair walking bare footed toward the water. Wow, Mos mubble, it's getting dark already, so why would someone still want to go for a swim when it's so cold and windy during this time of the yaers. Then focusing his attention back to the setting sun that almost disappare upon the horizen. Taking one more glance at the girl, she looked amazing from where he is standing. Her long black hairs waving back and forth like the waves that's crushing in the sea. Her white dress dancing along with the howling winds while she was walking on the water. He try to get a better view of her face but, he couldn't cause she was probaly about maybe 300 ft. away from where he was standing. Plus it was getting too dark to see anything. Then to his horrified, she seem to vanish in the blink of an eyes. He feel the hair on the back of his neck standing a little and a sudden cold gust of wind coming pass him like an ocean breezes. Mos was stund and was taking aback a little. This is strange, said Mos. He don't understand why he's not scared of it. Maybe it's just an illusion that he has just seen. Mos some how sense a wonderful fragances that was left behide from the sudden breezes. At first he couldn't come up to an answer of what this fragance is, but now he realizes what this sense belongs to. It's the sense of the white jasmine.
Sense of White Jasmine
Starring:
Mos, Noon, Aum, Donut, Kwarm, Oil, Aump
Chapter 1
"Hua Hin" It was 6 p.m., as Mos was on his way home from work. He decided to stop at the beach to look at the sun set. As he know not many people will be out on the beach at this time. Standing on the beach shore, he stared up toward the beautiful sky. The sun was setting upon the yellow, orange, blue, and reddish horizen, welcoming the darkness of the night. Some stars has already beginning to appared. The cold winds is blowing hard and the waves crashing up and down, back and forward in the dark blue sea. The abstacts from the setting sun is looming all over the waters. It's such a beautiful scene, he though to himself. As he looked to his where about. To the left of him, Mos saw a woman, wearing a white knees cut dress with long black hair walking bare footed toward the water. Wow, Mos mubble, it's getting dark already, so why would someone still want to go for a swim when it's so cold and windy during this time of the yaers. Then focusing his attention back to the setting sun that almost disappare upon the horizen. Taking one more glance at the girl, she looked amazing from where he is standing. Her long black hairs waving back and forth like the waves that's crushing in the sea. Her white dress dancing along with the howling winds while she was walking on the water. He try to get a better view of her face but, he couldn't cause she was probaly about maybe 300 ft. away from where he was standing. Plus it was getting too dark to see anything. Then to his horrified, she seem to vanish in the blink of an eyes. He feel the hair on the back of his neck standing a little and a sudden cold gust of wind coming pass him like an ocean breezes. Mos was stund and was taking aback a little. This is strange, said Mos. He don't understand why he's not scared of it. Maybe it's just an illusion that he has just seen. Mos some how sense a wonderful fragances that was left behide from the sudden breezes. At first he couldn't come up to an answer of what this fragance is, but now he realizes what this sense belongs to. It's the sense of the white jasmine.
