1Promise2Lie [Updated Chapter 5: Only the Beginning]

[kutefirstlove]

Eyes of the Dead 1Promise2Lie
Starring: Noon Woranuch and Choi Minho (SHINee)

Noon Woranuch as Suy and Ta
Choi Minho as Choi

NOTE: Yes yes yes, I know I haven't finish much of my fanfic at all. But then like everyone else, I just got this idea stuck in my head,
that I just have to write it... teehee...I'll try my best to finish off my unfinish fanfic...
such as; "I Do"&&"Vampire Reincarnate"&&"When Music Calls for Love"...
&&maybe this one?...l0lz...
I have so many ideas, but the only problem is...
"How do I end them?"...
Anyways, this fanfic, "Eyes of the Dead 1Promise2Lie" is not a ghost fanfic.
It's is about two sister, Suy and Ta. Even though they were born on different days,
different years, they have the same face. The only difference was that Ta had huge eyes.
And because of Ta's huge eyes, she was treated differently from Suy. Ta was known as
"the girl with ghost eyes." And even though Ta was treated badly,
Ta never once thought she would hate herself, until when the person who she had a crush on lied to her.
Everything in Ta's life change...

***I'll be adding new characters throughout the story...
&&Feel free to still make a poster for me... ​

 

[maichi]

Sound good. Hope that u update it soon!!
Please finish this!

 

[kutefirstlove]

1Promise 2Lie
***new character: Sa and Ting (Suy&&Ta's parents)

Chapter One: Suy and Ta
NOTE: each chapter are going to be real short...

Ting: "Doctor, how is my wife?"
Doctor: "She's safe."
Ting: "What about my child?"
Doctor: "Your child is safe as well."
Ting: "Thank you, Doctor. Thank you." Ting walks into Sa's room. "Sa," Ting walk over to her.
Sa: "Ting, look, look at our child." Ting grab the daugher into his arms. "What should we name her, Ting?"
Ting: "She's as beautiful as you, Sa." He paused for a few minutes. "Let's name her Suy, is that good?" Sa smile, and nod her head yes.

The three of them became a real happy family. Sa and Ting would buy Suy anything she wants.
Even after the birth of their second child, Ta, they still don't treat Suy any difference.

Suy (age of 7): "Mommy, I want some ice cream."
Sa: "Sure, come with Mommy."
Ta (age of 6): "Mommy, I want some ice cream too." Sa look at Ta.
Sa: "You can't, Ta. Mommy don't have enough money for two. Mommy will buy you one next time, okay?"
Ta: "But I want one too." Ta's eye started watery. Sa look at Ting, and walk off with Suy to go buy ice cream. Ting bent down and pick up Ta into his arms.
Ting: "Why are you crying my litte girl?" Ta started sobbing. "Don't cry. Don't cry. Be a good girl, so Mommy will buy you one next time, okay?"
Ta: "If I be a good girl," sob Ta. "Mommy will buy me an ice cream?"
Ting: "That's right. Now come on, wipe off those tears. Daddy'll buy you something, okay?" Ta wipe off her tears quikly.
Ta: "I want a teddy bear."
Ting: "Okay. Off we go."

After Ting bought a teddy bear for Ta, they came back to Sa and Suy. Suy just finish eating her ice cream when she realize Ta's white teddy bear.

Suy: "Mommy, I want a teddy bear like Ta too." Sa look at Ta, and then to Ting.
Sa: "Ta, give the teddy bear to Suy." Ta hold tight to the teddy bear.
Ta: "But Daddy bought this for me."
Sa: "Ta, are you being bad?" Ta started crying. "Give the teddy bear to Suy." Ting bent down to Ta.
Ting: "Give it to your sister, okay, Ta? Be a good girl." Ta wipe off her tears, and slowly walk over to Suy, and handed the teddy bear to Suy.
Sa: "Let's go back home, Suy. It's really hot now." Sa walk off holding onto Suy's hand. Ting walk over to Ta.
Ting: "Let's go too, Ta." He held out his hand to Ta. She look up at her Daddy, and slowly walk off. :lmao:

[Ta's point of view]
Ever since I realize I exist, P' Suy was always the lucky one. Mommy and Daddy would always give her attention.
No matter what I did, I was never notice. Everything I want is always something P' Suy want.
And because of always having to give up on everything for P' Suy, I learn to do things P' Suy wouldn't be interesting such as reading, painting, and many boring stuff.
Ever since then, P' Suy and I grew farther and farther apart. It was like we weren't relative at all.
Every year Mommy and Daddy would celebrate P' Suy's birthday. As for me, every year on my birthday, everyone is always busy doing their own work.

As time past by, I am now 17 years old. P' Suy and I go to the same high school. While P' Suy was popular with everyone, I was just my normal self. :weep:
Even though I don't have any friends, it wasn't like I wasn't notice...in school, I was known as "the girl with ghost eyes"...
When I was born the doctor said I won't be able to survive because I have huge eyes. And because of my huge eyes, Mommy hated me.
Mommy would always said that it was me who bring bad luck to the family.
Even though I was being hate by everyone because of my huge eyes, I never once thought of hating myself. :arrg:

end of chapter one: Suy&&Ta... hew:
***chapter two will be up soon, I hope...

 

[mainhiathao]

cute cover.

 

[kab hnub]

OMG Choi Minho...fricken adore him lol
cool poster!

I pity little Ta. What kind of parents are they anyway?! :annoyed:
Update ME!

 

[kutefirstlove]

1Promise2Lie
***new character: Toey Jarinporn Joonklat as Toey (most popular girl in school/friend with both Suy&&Ta)
&&Choi Minho as Choi

Chapter Two: Toey and Choi
NOTE: Friend CM = Friends of Choi Minho

Suy: "Ma, I'll be home a little late today."
Sa: "Is that so? Just give Mom a call first okay?" Suy smile and nod her head yes. She kiss Sa on the cheek and step out of the car. Sa turn back to look at Ta.
"Aren't you going?" Ta look at Sa, and slowly step out too. "Don't be home late, there's a lot of work to be done today."
Ta: "Yes, Mom." Sa drove the car off, as Ta slowly walk into the school campus.

Student 1: "Ah, isn't that her?"
Student 2: "Yeah, that's her."
Student 1: "Her eyes are really huge like the rumors. Are they really ghost eyes?"
Student 3: "No one know. I never seem anyone talk to her, not even her sister talks to her, I think."
Student 2: "Eh, really? Who's her sister?"
Student 1: "Her name is Suy, you know that one popular girl who hangs out with Toey."
Student 2: "I heard Toey talks to her too, no?"
Student 3: "It's true, just watch Toey's talking to her right now. I heard they're really close."

Toey: "Are you really fine with them talking to you that way?" Ta look at the girls who were talking about her.
Ta: "I'm fine. I'm use to it anyway." Toey look at the girls too. "Don't you feel embrrassed talking to me, Toey?"
Toey: "Why should I? We're friends, aren't we?"
Ta: "But you'll be hate, you know?"
Toey: "But I can't just leave you alone, I..."
Ta: "It's fine, if I'm alone. I'm use to it."
Suy: "Hey, Toey hurry up. They're leaving already." Toey turn to look at Suy and the others.
Ta: "You should go. I'll be fine like always."
Toey: "I'll see you during break then. Later." Toey rush off over to Suy and the others.
Suy: "Why are you talking to Ta?" Toey look at Suy.
Toey: "Why not? She's a friend, Suy. Ta's also your sister."
Suy: "Mom said she's not." :thumbdown:

As Ta was walking, she walk into a crowd of people. They started pushing her around.
Choi: "What are you guys doing?" Choi rush into the crowd trying to protect Ta from being push around. "Stop it." Choi and Ta were push onto the ground as they just rush off.
"Ouch, my butt. That really hurts." Ta turn to look at Choi. Choi realize her huge eyes. "You're...You're that one girl."
Ta slowly got up, Choi rush after her. "Are..are you okay? Are you hurt anywhere?" Ta look at Choi.
Ta: "I'm fine." Choi stared at her for a few seconcds. :spin:
Choi: "You're...you're not going to hit me or yell at me?"
Ta: "No." Ta started walking off. He follow her.
Choi: "Why not? That's what the rumors said though, right?" Ta stop walking and look at Choi.
"Are you going to use your magic eye? What do you plan to turn me into? An animal? Make my nose bigger? Something?"
Friend CM 1: "Hey Choi, hurry up. You'll be late for class." Choi turn to look at his friend.
Choi: "I'll be there." He turn back around and Ta was gone. "Eh, where did she go?" :nailbiter:

Friend CM 1: "Who were you talking to over there?"
Choi: "The girl with ghost eyes."
Friend CM 2: "What? Really? Aren't you scared? Did she do any magic on you?" Choi laugh.
Choi: "No, she didn't. It seems like the rumors aren't true at all."
Friend CM 1: "No lies, Choi. I heard that she'll do anything to make you like her, and then kill you afterwards."
Choi: "No worries, did you guys forgot who I am." He gave them an evil smile. "I am the #1 most famous player in the school. Of course I won't let her trick me so easily.
Getting to know her and trying to be nice to her is just the first part of my plan."

end of chapter two: Toey and Choi... :dance2:
***chapter three will be up sometime soon?...

 

[mainhiathao]

Love the update!

 

[kab hnub]

great update. Choi better not be an a**. argh...that hate guys like that :numchuck:
please update soon!

 

[kutefirstlove]

1Promise2Lie
***new character: Chana (Choi's Mom) :whistle:

Chapter Three: 1st PLAN: Become her "CLOSE FRIEND"

Sa: "You're home late again, Ta." Ta look up at her mom with fear in her eyes. "Don't look at me with those eyes of yours, Ta." She higher her voice at Ta. Ta look down right away. :nailbiter:
Ta: "I'm sorry, Mom. Uh...I'm only a minute late though."
Sa: "Every minute is important to me." She walk over to Ta. "Suy will be home late today, and so is your father. I'll be going out to a party very soon too."
Ta: "I'll watch the house good, Mom."
Sa: "You're coming with me." Ta look up at her mom.
Ta: "Real--really? I can go to a party today?"
Sa: "That's right, so behave yourself." Ta smile, and nod her head yes happily.

{PARTY}
Choi: "What's with this party anyway, Mom? Everyone here is old."
Choi's Mom: "Behave yourself, Choi. This isn't any other party, it's a special party here." Choi look around.
Choi: "I don't see anything special here, Mom."
Choi's Mom: "I can't help it, Choi. Your dad has work today, if not he'll be coming with me."
Choi: "Since when does Dad has work?" He whispered to himself. Just then he notice Ta walking in with her Mom. Ta was wearing a white dress. He stared at her. "Mom,--"
Choi's Mom: "Oh, here comes Sa and her daughter." Choi's Mom walk over towards Ta and Sa. "Greetings, Sa."
Sa: "Ah, Chana, long time." They gave each other hugs as Ta and Choi look at each other. Choi walk next to Ta.
Choi: "I never thought I would meet you here tonight, Khun Ta." Ta look at Choi. Sa turn to look at Ta.
Sa: "Ta, know your manner, come and greet the elders first." Ta walk over to Sa and Chana. She gave her salute to Chana, and she realize Ta's huge eyes, and got shock.
Choi's Mom: "What's with those eyes, Sa?" Sa look at Ta.
Sa: "Kids these days, Chana. Putting on contact."
Choi' Mom: "My, my...this is bad for your eyes, dear." Choi look at Ta.
Choi: "Mom, they aren't contacts." His mom look at him. "Ta was born like this, Mom."
Choi' Mom: "Is that so, Sa?"
Sa: "Ah, I thought Ta put on contacts. My, my...usually her eyes are smaller than this that's why I thought these were contacts. My mistake Chana."
Choi's Mom: "Let's go have a seat and chat. Choi company Khun Ta, okay?"
Choi: "Yes, mom." Sa and Chana walk away. Choi walk over next to Ta. "Are you hungry?" Ta didn't answer him.
"What about a drink?" Still Ta doesn't answer him. :whaha: "Dance?" Ta turn to look away. :lmao3: "Ah, I forgot. You don't know me yet, huh? Ahem.." He clear his throat.
"My name is Minho. Choi Minho. You can just call me Choi." He held his hand out to her. Ta just look at his hand and look away. :shrug:
"Umm...I heard many things about you, and I thought you would be like the rumors." Ta look at him. "But I guess not, right? You don't talk much at all, you're also really shy. You can't even used magic." :rofl:
"When I heard the rumors about you being like this and that. I thought you were the type of person who I shouldn't know, but then because I wanted to know if the rumors were true,
I wanted to at least met you in person first, and after knowing only you not even for a day yet, I came to like you, Ta." :heart: "Can we start out being friends?"
He held out his hand to Ta again. Ta look at his hand, and then up at him.
Ta: "Friends, eh?"
Choi: "Please said "yes"."
Ta: "But why--why friends with me? I'm--"
Choi: "I don't care about the rumors, Ta. They aren't true, aren't they? So why should I bother to care about them, and lose a friend like you?
Let's become friends, Ta. Close friends. You can trust me on anything."

[Ta's point of view]
Because I was stupid I accept him into my circle. :cry1: Because I allow him to understand me, know about me, care for me, and treat me this way.
That's why I was punish. Punish for knowing him. Punish for trusting him. Punish for falling in love with him.


end of chapter three: 1st PLAN: Become her "CLOSE FRIEND"... :scratchhead2:
***chapter four will be up?...

 

[kutefirstlove]

​

1Promise2Lie
***new character: Lee Junho (Suy's boyfriend) :nono1:

Chapter Four: Junho: "Yo."

Sa: "You seem to have a really good relation with Khun Choi, am I right?" Ta look at her mom.
Ta: "That's not it, Mom. I--I don't know anything about Choi."
Sa: "Calling him Choi like you guys are so close to each other already?"
Ta: "That's not it, Mom." Ta look away trying not to make any eye contact with her mom. "Choi--uh, Khun Choi ask me to just call him Choi."
Sa: "Whatever your relationship is with him, I don't care." She walk up close to Ta. "Just don't get involve with him, I'm saving him for Suy, am I clear?"
Ta nod her head. "Your Father just call me about an emergency meeting. I'll be leaving." She walk to the stairs, and then look back down at Ta. "If Suy comes back home, give me a call."
Ta: "Yes, Mom." Sa walk up stairs to her room.

[1 o'clock in the morning]
Ta was still up doing her hwk, when she heard the door bell. She then rush over to open the door.
Ta: "P' Suy?" There were a guy with Suy. He was tall, skinny, and has blonde hair.
Suy: "I heard Mom and Dad are away in a meeting, so I brought Junho in."
Junho: "Yo."
Suy: "By the way, he's my boyfriend, Ta." Suy grab Junho inside the house.
Ta: "P' Suy, but--"
Suy: "There is no but, Ta. Just do whatever you're doing. Junho and I won't bother you. We're having our own fun too." Suy turn to Junho.
"Junho, let's go to my room." Suy rush up the stairs. As Junho was about to rush up, he turn back to look at Ta.
Junho: "Don't worrid, I won't do anything stupid." He then rush up.

[3 o'clock]
Junho walk down the stairs. Ta stood up from her chair and look at Junho. Junho smile at her, and walk towards her.
Junho: "Suy, she's asleep, and I got bored." Ta just look at him. "Ah, don't worried, Suy and I didn't do anything. We only chat."
Ta whispered: "I don't need to know."
Junho: "Did you said something?" Ta look up at him.
Ta: "It's not like I can do anything about it, is it?"
Junho: "Ahaha, I was afraid you be like the rumors." He sigh. "I'm one lucky person then, I guess."
Ta: "If you have nothing to do, please leave. I don't want Mom and Dad to see you here."
Junho: "Is this call worried?" Ta look at Junho. He laugh. "I'll do it for you then. Later." :heart: Junho walk to the door. "I'll see you again tomorrow in school."
Junho open the door, as Ting and Sa arrive at the door. "This is bad." Junho thought to himself. Ting and Sa look at Junho, and then to Ta.

Ting: "What is this, Ta?"
Ta: "Dad, it's not like that. Khun Junho, he--"
Ting: "My main question here is who is he? What is he doing in this house this late?" Ta look at Junho.
Suy: "What's going on?" Suy walk down the stairs. "What's with the noise, Ta?" She then realize her parents, Junho too. "Junho?"
Sa: "Suy, you know him?"
Suy: "Uh, I don't know him, Mom, but he's just a classmate in school." Suy walk over to her mom.
Ta: "P' Suy." Suy look at Ta.
Suy: "Ta, why did you bring someone into the house so late like this?" Junho look at Suy.
Sa: "How are you going to explain this, Ta?"
Ta: "Mom, I--I--"
Junho: "Ta didn't do anything wrong, auntie. I was wrong. I sneak in here without permission. Ta force me to leave already, but I wouldn't."
Sa: "And why would you sneak into our house?"
Junho: "I--I just wanted to see Ta."
Suy&&Ta: "What?" Junho look at Suy.
Suy: "I mean, why would you do something like this sneaking into someone's house at night? You can still see her at school tomorrow too."
Junho: "I'm really sorry about what happen, auntie, and unlce. Please don't blame Ta for this."
Ting: "I'll let you off this time, don't let things like this happen again, alright?"
Junho: "Yes, I understand."
Ting: "Ta you too, okay?"
Ta: "Yes, Dad."
Ting: "You can leave now." Ta send Junho off to the door.
Ta: "Junho about what happen, I--"
Junho: "It's not your fault, Ta. It's okay."
Ta: "But what about you and P' Suy?"
Junho: "I'll talk it out with Suy tomorrow, later." Junho walk off.

end of chapter four: Junho: "Yo."...
***hope chatper five will be up soon too...

 

[mainhiathao]

Nice update. btw love the walls u made.

 

[maichi]

Aww this is such a ineresting FF! Please update sooN!

 

[kutefirstlove]

1Promise 2Lie

Chapter Five: Only the Beginning

[school]
Suy and Ta walk out of car, realizing Junho in front of the school gate waiting. Suy turn to look at her parents in the car.
Suy: "Ta, it looks like Junho's waiting for you over there already." Ta look at Suy. "Mom, Dad, we'll be going now." Suy walk towards Junho as her parent drove off. Ta follow her. Suy hug Junho.
"Sorry about yesterday, Junho. I didn't want my parents to think bad about me." Suy look at Ta. "Go on, Ta. We don't need you here." Ta look at Suy and Junho and then walk inside the gate.
Junho: "Ta, wait." Junho rush after Ta. He grab her arm as Minho arrive with his friends. Minho stared at Junho and Ta.
Suy: "What are you doing Junho? I'm your girlfriend." Junho look at Suy.
Junho: "Not today Suy," Junho turn to look at Ta. "because I'm dumping you today, and right now."
Suy: "What? Junho, did you said something wrong?"
Junho: "I didn't said anything wrong at all, Suy. I love you, it's true, but from what happen last night I truly know what kind of person you are."
Suy: "What are you talking about, Junho? I didn't do anything wrong. I just didn't want my parents to think badly about me."
Junho: "So you blame it on Ta? You didn't want your parents to think bad about you, what about Ta? Do you think she want that too?"
Suy: "It's always like that. Ta will always be blame even if I was caught being with you or not."
Junho: "Even if it's not way, I'm sorry, I can't date you any longer." Junho sigh. "Because I've fallen in love with someone else."
Suy: "Wh--who?" Suy look at Ta, and laugh. "You're telling me that girl is Ta? That's unbelievable. Who would choose Ta over me?"
Junho: "I should still thank you, Suy because of what you did yesterday, I found the girl of my dream." Choi rush over and grab Ta into his arms. Junho turn to look at Choi.
Choi: "Ta has an owner already."
Ta: "Choi?"
Suy: "What is this, huh? What is this? You guys are choosing Ta over me? It's not possible. No one has never choose Ta over me." Choi look at Suy.
Choi: "You are real pretty, Suy, but you're not my type." Choi walk off pulling Ta along with him. Junho just stared as they walk off.
Suy: "So what now, Junho? Your so call dream girl just got taken away."
Junho: "I'll get her back." Junho rush off.
Suy: "Junho! Junho! JUNHO!" :coverlaf:

Ta: "What are you doing, Choi?" Ta ask pulling her arm away from Choi. Choi look at Ta.
Choi: "I'm sorry, Ta. I just wanted to help you. You were in trouble, and since we are friends, I must help you no matter what happens." Ta sigh.
"I'm really sorry about what I said earlier too, Ta." Ta look at Choi. "But I really can't let others take you away from me." Choi grab Ta's left hand into his hand. "I am serious, Ta."
Junho: "I'm also serious" Junho walk over to them.
Ta: "Junho?" Ta remove her hand away from Choi.
Choi: "We'll see who wins then."
Junho: "The fun is only getting started. Ta, I promise, I'll make you fall in love with me, and become mine."
Choi: "I too promise that I'll make Ta fall in love with me, and become mine."

end of chapter five: Only the Beginning'
***hope yah like it so far?'
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[maichi]

Ohhh A love triangle! I wonder who going to win!
Please update soon! Thanks for the update!

 

[kutefirstlove]

i'll try to finish this fanfic after i finish "The Curse Prince"