A hmong story
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kanoey&&mengo
sarNie Egg
Ello..well iono if I'm doing this rite cus I'm new to this..anywho..I've been waiting forever to read this story but mite as well write this myself..srry if I ruin this story..here it goes my first time..
As Pheng and Ka were walking out from the restaurant after the incident into their car. Pheng lock the doors and calmly ask Ka, "what did lee meant by I'll find out the truth someday and he'll make sure of it sweetie?"
"uuhh....ummmm..I..I..,"said Ka nervously.
While Pheng was interrogating Ka, his phone ring. "hello, ok...uhhuh..is that it..ok then..bye.."said Pheng," mom said for us to be back home within 15 min cus our precious baby is looking for it's mommy."
AT PHENG'S HOUSE AFTER 30 MIN
"Sweetie I can't find the bottle..where is it?"said Pheng
"It's on kitchen counter Hun" said Ka," hurry please she's crying and need her bottle"
"Oh..no milk..imma run to the store and go get some ok..b rite back ok" said pheng.
IN THE STORE AT THE DAIRY SECTION
Looking for the rite milk brand..Pheng accidently bumped into an asain gurl.
"sorry ma'am" said Pheng. "ggeeshh..guys these days are so blind..how annoying" said Ying Ya
Goshers..it's getting late ya..I'm using the iPhone to type this so it's really hard to write down what I want cus on the pc I can type faster and put down my thought more clearly..I'll add more tomorrow or sum other days cus this iPhone starting to annoy me too..I'm srry my part of story was really short but I really want Pheng and Ying Ya to meet..keke..this isn't the best but it's for now....
As Pheng and Ka were walking out from the restaurant after the incident into their car. Pheng lock the doors and calmly ask Ka, "what did lee meant by I'll find out the truth someday and he'll make sure of it sweetie?"
"uuhh....ummmm..I..I..,"said Ka nervously.
While Pheng was interrogating Ka, his phone ring. "hello, ok...uhhuh..is that it..ok then..bye.."said Pheng," mom said for us to be back home within 15 min cus our precious baby is looking for it's mommy."
AT PHENG'S HOUSE AFTER 30 MIN
"Sweetie I can't find the bottle..where is it?"said Pheng
"It's on kitchen counter Hun" said Ka," hurry please she's crying and need her bottle"
"Oh..no milk..imma run to the store and go get some ok..b rite back ok" said pheng.
IN THE STORE AT THE DAIRY SECTION
Looking for the rite milk brand..Pheng accidently bumped into an asain gurl.
"sorry ma'am" said Pheng. "ggeeshh..guys these days are so blind..how annoying" said Ying Ya
Goshers..it's getting late ya..I'm using the iPhone to type this so it's really hard to write down what I want cus on the pc I can type faster and put down my thought more clearly..I'll add more tomorrow or sum other days cus this iPhone starting to annoy me too..I'm srry my part of story was really short but I really want Pheng and Ying Ya to meet..keke..this isn't the best but it's for now....
kanoey&&mengo
sarNie Egg
continuing...keke... 
..srry if there's any mistakes...but still doing my best..here it goes..
Ying Ya turn to look who this man was as she turned to look at him, she notice that it was Pheng.
"Ying Ya..." said Pheng with anxiety.
" Dammit... why now...i'm already packed up at home to leave soon..why Pheng...why do i have to leave seeing him again..." said Ying Ya to herself while walking away from him.
" Ying Ya wait.....i got some matters to talk to you about" said Pheng.
Holding Ying Ya's risk to keep her from walking away, Pheng said,"I dont know why ur alwase running away from me but this is not about us, its about Lee, do u noe about that guy?"
"Lee...humm....where have i heard that name b4.." said Ying Ya to herself.
"Hello?...u still there?.."asked Pheng," anywase,well not to long ago, like earlier today Lee was harassing my wife at the restaruant. Do you think u mite noe wats going on?"
Turning around to face Pheng with her heart beating so fast, Ying Ya anxiously said" No, or mabe i do, but y should i tell you, go ask ur wife and by the way ur a married man u should stop holding my risk too."
Letting go of her risk, Ying Ya added, " Lee use to secretly like ur wife, i noe that cus back then we all use to go to the same grade skool, Lee is alwase beating up all her bullies. But now, iono anymore, u should go and clear things with ur wife, it seems like u dont trust ur wife enough to come and ask me."
"I have to go now, its getting late and i mite not make it to the airport in time' said Ying Ya, " i gotta go and cook my last dinner for my family, srry but please excuse me."
Walking away from him, Ying Ya felt as if a piece of her heart had stay behind with him.
"Airport?.." said Pheng.
AT YING YA'S HOUSE
"im home, who's ready to cook these eggs?" said Ying Ya with her fake smile.
"sure aint me" said Pao, Ying Ya's brother.
"C'mon Pao, dont you want eggs in ur sweet meat, I noe you do.." giggled Ying Ya.
"ok, fine gimme the eggs then," said Pao,"oh lets invite Chue too, oh wait i've already did...hahaha"
"Pao, koj..... ... ...its okay, one more person wouldnt be so harsh" said Ying Ya
Thinking to herself about wat had happen at the store Ying Ya said," gosh i wish i could've just slap Pheng's face for being so adorable and then kiss it. I dont noe why Im still not at peace with this."
Srry ya..i goota go..ill update this another time...i noe it isnt the best but if anyone wants to update this.. feel free to... ..
..srry if there's any mistakes...but still doing my best..here it goes..Ying Ya turn to look who this man was as she turned to look at him, she notice that it was Pheng.
"Ying Ya..." said Pheng with anxiety.
" Dammit... why now...i'm already packed up at home to leave soon..why Pheng...why do i have to leave seeing him again..." said Ying Ya to herself while walking away from him.
" Ying Ya wait.....i got some matters to talk to you about" said Pheng.
Holding Ying Ya's risk to keep her from walking away, Pheng said,"I dont know why ur alwase running away from me but this is not about us, its about Lee, do u noe about that guy?"
"Lee...humm....where have i heard that name b4.." said Ying Ya to herself.
"Hello?...u still there?.."asked Pheng," anywase,well not to long ago, like earlier today Lee was harassing my wife at the restaruant. Do you think u mite noe wats going on?"
Turning around to face Pheng with her heart beating so fast, Ying Ya anxiously said" No, or mabe i do, but y should i tell you, go ask ur wife and by the way ur a married man u should stop holding my risk too."
Letting go of her risk, Ying Ya added, " Lee use to secretly like ur wife, i noe that cus back then we all use to go to the same grade skool, Lee is alwase beating up all her bullies. But now, iono anymore, u should go and clear things with ur wife, it seems like u dont trust ur wife enough to come and ask me."
"I have to go now, its getting late and i mite not make it to the airport in time' said Ying Ya, " i gotta go and cook my last dinner for my family, srry but please excuse me."
Walking away from him, Ying Ya felt as if a piece of her heart had stay behind with him.
"Airport?.." said Pheng.
AT YING YA'S HOUSE
"im home, who's ready to cook these eggs?" said Ying Ya with her fake smile.
"sure aint me" said Pao, Ying Ya's brother.
"C'mon Pao, dont you want eggs in ur sweet meat, I noe you do.." giggled Ying Ya.
"ok, fine gimme the eggs then," said Pao,"oh lets invite Chue too, oh wait i've already did...hahaha"
"Pao, koj..... ... ...its okay, one more person wouldnt be so harsh" said Ying Ya
Thinking to herself about wat had happen at the store Ying Ya said," gosh i wish i could've just slap Pheng's face for being so adorable and then kiss it. I dont noe why Im still not at peace with this."
Srry ya..i goota go..ill update this another time...i noe it isnt the best but if anyone wants to update this.. feel free to...
..wow....we have some pretty talented sarnies on there.....just recently discovered this thread....i love to write stories as well, but then part way through I loose interest and creativity and usually end up quiting...LOL....i think for now i'll just sit back and read what you talented writer have to share....maybe i'll try dipping my hands into the story at a later point......keep up the good work girls....
YM_gurl
sarNie Oldmaid
Which one did you like?
I think there is a total of 3 stories but 1 never finish. lol
Omg, I'm not even done with the first one. I was like,"Holy Crap!
You guys are not making this story 17 pages long!" 3 different
stories? I got a lot of reading to do during break then.
After feeding Sheng, Pheng asked Ka about Lee again.
After interrogating her for an hour, she felt guilty
and told him the truth.
"No, no. It can't be. Why did you wait till now to
tell me!?" screamed Pheng
Ka said sadly,"Because I love you. I've been loving you
for a long time. That night, you were so upset. I wanted
to be the girl that you love. It hurts me just to see you
in pain like that."
"Get out of here!! We're over!" screamed Pheng
Ka knew that she lost. She packed up her stuff along with
her daughter Sheng's stuff and left the house. She felt
anger and hatred towards Lee.
In her thoughts,"I'm so going to kill you Lee!"
After the crying, Pheng remembered what Ying Ya said to
him at the store about leaving for the airport. He was
scared of losing her that night so he drove over to her
house as fast as possible. He was in Ying Ya's driveway
when he saw Ying Ya in front of the house. Pheng quickly
picked a flower in their yard and ran up behind her.
Putting the flower in front of her face as he did when
he first asked her out,"Ying Ya, will you forever be mines?"
Ying Ya was surprised to see him. "What are you doing here!?
You have a beautiful wife and daughter! Don't look for me
anymore."
"I love you Ying Ya. I can't live without you. Me and Ka
are over." said Pheng as tears streamed down his face.
Ying Ya hugged him hard, afraid of losing him again. She
canceled her flight and stayed with her parents until
Pheng and Ka's divorce was over. Pheng's parents hated
Ying Ya but after a few years, they grew fond of her,
and glad that their son has a wife who he actually loves.
Lee and Ka were at the lake, watching the beautiful
sunset with their daughter asleep next to them.
Lee held Ka close and said,"You know, I've always
loved you. But you never saw it. I did everything in
my power to show you my love but you didn't realize it.
I saw the hatred in your eyes towards me. But, I
still loved you. I knew that one day, I'd have you
next to me like this."
"I'm sorry Lee. I never knew you loved me like this.
I've always hated you for what you did to me. But I
realize your love for me now. I wish I knew that you
loved me before so I didn't have to go through all that
hard stuff. I love you." And Ka held Lee tight, afraid
of losing him.
The end
Sorry if you guys don't like it, but I just HAD to end
it. I couldn't leave the story hanging like this.
Sorry if the ending is like any typical ending.
After interrogating her for an hour, she felt guilty
and told him the truth.
"No, no. It can't be. Why did you wait till now to
tell me!?" screamed Pheng
Ka said sadly,"Because I love you. I've been loving you
for a long time. That night, you were so upset. I wanted
to be the girl that you love. It hurts me just to see you
in pain like that."
"Get out of here!! We're over!" screamed Pheng
Ka knew that she lost. She packed up her stuff along with
her daughter Sheng's stuff and left the house. She felt
anger and hatred towards Lee.
In her thoughts,"I'm so going to kill you Lee!"
After the crying, Pheng remembered what Ying Ya said to
him at the store about leaving for the airport. He was
scared of losing her that night so he drove over to her
house as fast as possible. He was in Ying Ya's driveway
when he saw Ying Ya in front of the house. Pheng quickly
picked a flower in their yard and ran up behind her.
Putting the flower in front of her face as he did when
he first asked her out,"Ying Ya, will you forever be mines?"
Ying Ya was surprised to see him. "What are you doing here!?
You have a beautiful wife and daughter! Don't look for me
anymore."
"I love you Ying Ya. I can't live without you. Me and Ka
are over." said Pheng as tears streamed down his face.
Ying Ya hugged him hard, afraid of losing him again. She
canceled her flight and stayed with her parents until
Pheng and Ka's divorce was over. Pheng's parents hated
Ying Ya but after a few years, they grew fond of her,
and glad that their son has a wife who he actually loves.
Lee and Ka were at the lake, watching the beautiful
sunset with their daughter asleep next to them.
Lee held Ka close and said,"You know, I've always
loved you. But you never saw it. I did everything in
my power to show you my love but you didn't realize it.
I saw the hatred in your eyes towards me. But, I
still loved you. I knew that one day, I'd have you
next to me like this."
"I'm sorry Lee. I never knew you loved me like this.
I've always hated you for what you did to me. But I
realize your love for me now. I wish I knew that you
loved me before so I didn't have to go through all that
hard stuff. I love you." And Ka held Lee tight, afraid
of losing him.
The end
Sorry if you guys don't like it, but I just HAD to end
it. I couldn't leave the story hanging like this.
Sorry if the ending is like any typical ending.
YM_gurl
sarNie Oldmaid
i took part in the first story so i remember it, as for the second story.
i did a little but stop and it's been too long ago. I don't remember nothing of it lol
thanks for finishing the story though.
Lol. It's okay. Sorry if I ended it like any other typical story.i took part in the first story so i remember it, as for the second story.
i did a little but stop and it's been too long ago. I don't remember nothing of it lol
thanks for finishing the story though.
YM_gurl
sarNie Oldmaid
Yep, I also really like the 1st story too. The girl's did a great job on it.
However, they all disappeared in here. Don't really see any of them in here no more.
I think I'm one of the oldest member in here that still comes around haha
By the way, which hmong production is the best? hmm... :scratchhead2: hehe
I can tell. Everyone's gone.
Hrmm. I don't know. If we can't find any good Hmong
production, we're gonna need Americans. Lol
queeny_bee
sarNie Juvenile
I went back to read the second story... some of the entries are missing. Actually a huge chunk of it is missing. If I recall, Meng raped Mai..?? haha sounds pretty bad but yeah that's what happend. its like a thai lakorn. he raped her when he was drunk but then she still loved him even after that too. Then Meng was had an arranged marriage with Mai's sister Sheng. That's all I can recall... of the beginning since I took part in it.
Kyocera09 I didn't realize that you are YM_GURL since you changed your name. lol
I remember you and I took a great deal in starting the first story. I'm still in here.. just not active anymore. I occasionally drop in sometimes.
Yeah, that's what I thought to. But they kinda explained it later on.