BLOODY REVENGE

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
Chapter 4

There was silence in the room. The gaurd carefully got up as he searched for Takeshi. As he searched the room, he spotted Takeshi on the hard cement by the metal door.

"Well, well, well.. Seems like luck is on my side." smiled the guard.

"DIE NOW YOU FUCKEN BITCH!!!"

There was such a horrid of evil intent coming from the guard. He picked up his club and ran toward Takeshi. As he got near him, he raised his club and began smacking Takeshi.

Takeshi suddenly woke up and caught the club. "Ain't this lovely?"

The guard's eyes widened in fear as he knew that he would not make it out alive. He let go of the club and began punching Takeshi.

Takeshi let him attack him. He only sighed when he got attacked.

The guard began breathing heavily as he slowly stops punching.

"You tired?" asked Takeshi as he pets him on the head.

"NOW IT'S MY TURN!!"

An evil bloody aura was strongly released as he picked the guard up.

"I WARNED YOU MANY TIMES ALREADY. BUT YOU JUST HAPPENED TO BE ONE ANNOYING ASSHOLE."

He threw the guard unto the hard cement ground and began attacking him, punches after one another.

"It's more fun making the person in pain and then killing, than killing the person right away."

The guard's eyes widened when he heard that. He began struggling for his life, but was unable to move since he lost all his strength already. The evil horrid look on Takeshi's face was so intense that it paralyzed him with even more fear.

There was heavy breathing in the air once again. Takeshi stood up and grabbed the gun out of the guard's pocket.

"This won't be long.." he whispered.

The guard knew what was coming ahead and began crying and begging.

"PLEASE.. PLEASE.. DON'T!! I BEG OF YOU.. PLEASE!! DON'T KILL ME!!"

"Why should I?" he questioned.

"B... B.. "

"B WHAT?"

He pointed the gun at his face.

"B... BECAUSE THIS WAS ALL PLANNED!!"

"Really.. Like this was how you were supposed to die?"

"NO!!!"

He cocked the gun.

"Now tell me.. Who was behind this?"

"I CAN'T TELL YOU!!"

"THEN YOU'LL HAVE TO DIE!!"

"ONE, TWO.."

"WAIT!!! WAIT!! FINE I'LL TELL YOU!!!"

"GO ON.."

"HE'S.. HE'S.."

(**BAM** There was another person in the room and shot the guard.)

............................. TO BE CONTINUED........................

Enjoy this update... lol.. i kinda forgot my plot lol...
 

n_naruk

TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
Ah, Julie, you are such a big cliffhanger!!!
Hahaha, RR, I feel you! I got the shivers when I was readying it. Lol.

Thanks for the update Julie! CLIFFHANGER! ^_^
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
Chapter 5

The lights flickered on and off as the cold breeze entered the room.

Takeshi stared at the guard and then to his side.

"So.. how does it feel?"

"Feel what?" asked Takeshi.

"Look at me.."

"Why should I..?"

"JUST LOOK DAMMIT!!"

Takeshi stared up at the man. The gun suddenly dropped to the ground. As it fell to the ground, the gun triggered off.

"WHO ARE YOU!?"

"Just what do I look like to you?"

Takeshi started moving his hands up, down, and to the side as he tried to search for a mirror.

"There is no mirror.."

"Then what is it then.."

"REALITY!!!"

"WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?!"

"Listen to this name carefully..."

"WHAT?"

"Yasahiro.."

"Yasa - what??"

"DAMN BASTARD!! YOU'RE EXACTLY THE SAME SINCE THEN."

"WHAT WOULD YOU KNOW?"

"WHY WOULD SOMEONE WHO LOOKS JUST LIKE YOU BE RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU?"

"Let me guess... You're my long lost brother.. no.. my "LOST" twin brother.."

"Why.. you're quite smart for a dumbass.."

"Why should I care.. I don't need any more family."

"There's only one reason why I --" (he was cut off as there was gun shots in the room.)

"PUT YOUR HANDS ON YOUR HEAD NOW!!!" shouted backup.

"GREAT.. I'VE BEEN INTERRUPTED.."

"CONTINUE.."

"DOES IT LOOK LIKE I WANNA CONTINUE WITH ALL THIS DAMN RUCKUS GOING ON! JUST REMEMBER MY NAME YASAHIRO!"

Yasahiro grabbed another gun out of his pocket and began firing shots one after the other.

He smiled at Takeshi.

"I'll get you next time.."

............................. TO BE CONTINUED........................

ENJOY THIS UPDATE... AS YOU CAN SEE.. IM JUST WRITING RANDOM LOL.. IVE FORGOTTEN MY MAIN PLOT.. LOL.. BUT DO ENJOY ^_^
 

n_naruk

TOOMTAM :: CHALiDA
Err, so many gunshots going on. Hmmm, what is Yasahiro
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
Chapter 6

The guards all came rushing into the room with guns pointed at Takeshi's head.

"LOCK HIM UP GOOD!"

"This fella is too dangerous."

"Throw him in with the dogs."

Takeshi stared at them. "Am I an animal to you?"

"SHUT UP! WE CAN DO WHATEVER WE WANT."

"WE CAN KILL YOU NOW IF WE WANTED!"

Takeshi smiled. "Then kill me now then. SHOOT!!!"

"That'll be too easy."

One of the guard cocked the gun.

Another guard cocked his gun.

"Don't you even dare."

"The guard gulped as he moved the gun away from Takeshi's head.

"What did I say? you have no guts."

"Killing you is a breeze. We don't have time to be messing with you."

"Then set me free." asked Takeshi.

"Knock him out. He's too noisy."

"You're gonna regret this if you do." said Takeshi.

"It's the opposite around here. NOW!!"

The guard hit the back of Takeshi knocking him out.

"Such a fool. Lock him up now. We must search for evidence of his friend."

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"DAMMIT!! I WAS SO CLOSE YET I COULDN'T GET HIM!!

"BOSS.. CHILL."

"YOU EXPECT ME TO CHILL WHEN I FAILED?!"

He started beating up his worker.

"DAMN YOU FUCKER!!"

"I YASAHIRO WILL GET YOU NEXT TIME!"

"B--B--OSS.. WE BELIEVE IN YOU!!!"

.....................................................TO BE CONTINUED ........................................................

I hope you readers enjoy this lil update.... couldn't think much... but enjoy ^_^.. hehe.. xp..
 

orihime303

sarNie Hatchling
Woah! This is sooo interesting! :dude: Why is this one in the incomplete?! Plz come back to this and continue!!! :worthy: It's such a gr8 story sooo far!!! :bravo:
 
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