I don't like Metta Lae Mahaniyom produced lakorns, they're too bleak and there is too much focus on action. I prefer Nok Sinjai's work over Nok Chatchai's work, like Pope Rak was a decent watch but Kom Faek and this one missed the mark. You can tell how much Nok Chatchai loves action lakorns because his lakorns have barely any development on the romance but the action is so well developed. If it wasn't for Mark I wouldn't have watched this and even with him in it, I kept this lakorn in the background as I browsed the web. They also really wasted Mark in this lakorn, he barely got any scenes and his scenes were lacklustre. Too much Taew being mopey in this lakorn too.
The first two episodes were good but unfortunately most of the character development and relationship development happened in those two episodes. The characters in this lakorn were either one dimensional or poorly developed. Take the n'ek, there was nothing going for her except for getting revenge and her family, once she got her revenge and her sister abandoned her, she was just an empty shell of a person until the very end. She had no personality, no motivations, she simply existed to work undercover for Nok Sinjai's character, and for what? She didn't seem particular passionate about anything, even her so called love for Non felt terribly shallow. Non was also simply a good guy, he also just existed. We know nothing about his background and he had no personality except a devotion to the Jane. Non and Jane had a handful of good scenes (all at the very beginning of the lakorn) and all of a sudden Jane confesses her love despite not showing any indication of it. Care, respect and trust for Non, yes, but they barely knew each other long enough to develop any love. Then all of the sudden they're having sex only for them to not interact until the last two episodes. I haven't seen a love story this badly developed since Kah Mah Kon Diew from ch7's DaraVDO. Don't even get me started about Mawin and Lisa. Out of nowhere Mawin starts falling in love with Lisa. The only decently developed relationship was between Mawin and his niece.
The bad guys were so one dimensional. The story moved around in circles with nothing really happening, each episode felt like an eternity. The soundtrack was also really annoying, this is a freaking lakorn, use Thai lyrics. AND THEN THE ENDING, THE FREAKING ENDING. I don't like it when lakorns try to be edgy by throwing a surprise in the very last moment, it was stupid and it cheapened an already irritating lakorn. The viewers can't even take a breath of relief at the very end. Trying to set up for a part 2, please don't, don't waste my Mark Prin on another garbage lakorn. I beg Metta Lae Mahaniyom to never hire him again.