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I like this!Yea, Yasa should have just shot Prae. Yasa goes to jail. Prae dies and everyone else moves on, including P'Mor. That would have been a cherry on top.![]()
I like this!Yea, Yasa should have just shot Prae. Yasa goes to jail. Prae dies and everyone else moves on, including P'Mor. That would have been a cherry on top.![]()
That was awesome! You did a great job!Ok...so here it is. Keep in mind I have never written a fan fic before and have NEVER even attempt to. I'm pretty nervous because I've never done anything like this. If it's bad, just pretend like you never even read it ok?
Ceda's version
Fah, now pinned to the wall of the panel room divider (I think that's what it's call) and fearing that Charles will very well carry out his threats, turns her head to the side, fear of what Charles might do to her. Charles touches her face and slowly brings his hands down to her chest. He starts undoing the drawstrings, his eyes still on her face, then proceeds to undo the top button. Then onto the second. His eyes now on her chest. Her breath is heavy. Her eyes now wondering around looking for a solution out, hoping someone will pop right in and interrupt the insanity that's about to occur. Her eyes found their way back to meet Charles eyes. Charles who is amused licks his lips an he firmly press his body on hers and goes for her lips.
Then suddenly, "Khun Charles...Khun Charles kah..." The voice coming closer and closer.
Fah: "P'Prae!!! Khun Charles, let go! As she struggles to get away from his embrace.
Charles grabs her hands "Stay still!" as he drags her to the back side of the divider and pushed her against it. He whispered in Fah's ear "Shh!!! Do you want Prae to see you with me and your shirt undone like this? What will she think happened?"
Fah is helpless, once again stuck in his embrace. Charles realizes the situation and takes full advantage of the moment to get even closer to his Nangfah. He brings his hands up to her waist and wraps them around her waist pulling her close. She struggles and he shhh'ed her again. She feels him breathing in her ear, warm and tingly.
The doors opened "Khun Charles Kah..." Prae sees no one in sight. She lets out an annoyed sigh "where is he?" and continues to look around.
Fah is forced to completely let Charles have his way with her. She is too focus on Prae's upset voice coming from just the other side of the divider. She didn't want to be seen like this or even be heard. Then she felt a warm sensation on her back and that brings her back to Charles. His right hand is now under her shirt, caressing her bare back. She tries to push away, but that only brings them back together since he's already gotten a hold of her. His left hand cups her face as he tried to kiss her lips. She turns away just in time, but his lips landed on her cheek. He gives her one soft peck after another and eventually worked his way down to her neck. His left hand still cupping her face and his right hand holding her close and still caressing her back. He breathes heavily on her neck as she closes her eyes tighter, holding her breath. He moves from one side of her neck to the other while she stands there helpless. A strange feeling overcomes her as if she knows this feeling...another deja vu episode. Her body is fighting the feeling, but her heart forced her hands up his arms and around him. Her touch excites him bringing his eyes back to hers. He eyes now caring and gentle. He kissed her forehead down to her nose...his lips touching gently and never leaving her face. He then pulls away, just an inch away...enough to see her gazing at him confused and unease. His lips met hers. They shared a long passionate kiss.
Prae's phone rings and Charles finally pulls away first. He leans to the side and sees Prae answered her phone and then leaves. His attention back on Fah as she stood there lifeless...completely dazed, not sure what really just happened.
Charles: "Fahlada...oh you're good. You can really put on an act. Your mouth keeps denying me, but your body can't help but want me too, right? But it's ok...I'm all yours. Anytime...anywhere. Poo Ying Jai ngai yeun khun...yun nyai koh nee chun mai rok lok (An easy woman like you, no matter what, you can't stay away from me."
Smacked! She slaps him and runs for the door.
:coverlaf: :coverlaf: There you go! Charles is totally molesting Fah in my version. Sorry, I was in a perverted mood when I was writing this.
They can totally make it work and still make it PG. They just need to hire me as their love scene director LOL!@ceda. So like I've read it like ten times and is still blushing! I could imagine it in my head. Lol...
only if they would do those kind of a scene, then this would be the best lakorn of Thai lakorn history!
But I doubt Thai people would ever do scenes like that! Scene like this, only us fans would imagine it. Oh I feel so perverted just saying this! Lol...
Lmao!!!! If they were to hire "us" as there love scene director I'm sure it will be the best lakorn ever! Even though they are unwilling to do some scenes, I will make them do it! Hahaha....lol...They can totally make it work and still make it PG. They just need to hire me as their love scene director LOL!
Ok...so here it is. Keep in mind I have never written a fan fic before and have NEVER even attempt to. I'm pretty nervous because I've never done anything like this. If it's bad, just pretend like you never even read it ok?
Ceda's version
Fah, now pinned to the wall of the panel room divider (I think that's what it's call) and fearing that Charles will very well carry out his threats, turns her head to the side, fear of what Charles might do to her. Charles touches her face and slowly brings his hands down to her chest. He starts undoing the drawstrings, his eyes still on her face, then proceeds to undo the top button. Then onto the second. His eyes now on her chest. Her breath is heavy. Her eyes now wondering around looking for a solution out, hoping someone will pop right in and interrupt the insanity that's about to occur. Her eyes found their way back to meet Charles eyes. Charles who is amused licks his lips an he firmly press his body on hers and goes for her lips.
Then suddenly, "Khun Charles...Khun Charles kah..." The voice coming closer and closer.
Fah: "P'Prae!!! Khun Charles, let go! As she struggles to get away from his embrace.
Charles grabs her hands "Stay still!" as he drags her to the back side of the divider and pushed her against it. He whispered in Fah's ear "Shh!!! Do you want Prae to see you with me and your shirt undone like this? What will she think happened?"
Fah is helpless, once again stuck in his embrace. Charles realizes the situation and takes full advantage of the moment to get even closer to his Nangfah. He brings his hands up to her waist and wraps them around her waist pulling her close. She struggles and he shhh'ed her again. She feels him breathing in her ear, warm and tingly.
The doors opened "Khun Charles Kah..." Prae sees no one in sight. She lets out an annoyed sigh "where is he?" and continues to look around.
Fah is forced to completely let Charles have his way with her. She is too focus on Prae's upset voice coming from just the other side of the divider. She didn't want to be seen like this or even be heard. Then she felt a warm sensation on her back and that brings her back to Charles. His right hand is now under her shirt, caressing her bare back. She tries to push away, but that only brings them back together since he's already gotten a hold of her. His left hand cups her face as he tried to kiss her lips. She turns away just in time, but his lips landed on her cheek. He gives her one soft peck after another and eventually worked his way down to her neck. His left hand still cupping her face and his right hand holding her close and still caressing her back. He breathes heavily on her neck as she closes her eyes tighter, holding her breath. He moves from one side of her neck to the other while she stands there helpless. A strange feeling overcomes her as if she knows this feeling...another deja vu episode. Her body is fighting the feeling, but her heart forced her hands up his arms and around him. Her touch excites him bringing his eyes back to hers. He eyes now caring and gentle. He kissed her forehead down to her nose...his lips touching gently and never leaving her face. He then pulls away, just an inch away...enough to see her gazing at him confused and unease. His lips met hers. They shared a long passionate kiss.
Prae's phone rings and Charles finally pulls away first. He leans to the side and sees Prae answered her phone and then leaves. His attention back on Fah as she stood there lifeless...completely dazed, not sure what really just happened.
Charles: "Fahlada...oh you're good. You can really put on an act. Your mouth keeps denying me, but your body can't help but want me too, right? But it's ok...I'm all yours. Anytime...anywhere. Poo Ying Jai ngai yeun khun...yun nyai koh nee chun mai rok lok (An easy woman like you, no matter what, you can't stay away from me."
Smacked! She slaps him and runs for the door.
:coverlaf: :coverlaf: There you go! Charles is totally molesting Fah in my version. Sorry, I was in a perverted mood when I was writing this.
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who's fainting right now? LOL :coverlaf:
Team Jacob?? NOOOOOO! His cuter than Edward would ever be, but he gets on my nerves. He's like the 2nd lead in Asian dramas where he just doesn't get it. Hello!!! The girl does not love you! He's like James in here hahaha! It's ok though. He imprinted on Bella's daughter.@ ceda. oh no, I do like Edward but unfortunately I'm team Jacob! And I love Seth in breaking dawn. He is so cute in there! But Nadech has got to be my top!
Usually in Thai lakorn that is always how it is! It take a persons life in order for the rai to change them self and realize there mistakes!
Yup it sure did for you! Man only if my stupid computer did not brake on me! I would be doing the same thing. I think its about time for me to get myself a lap top. I'm just using my phone and it is getting very annoying!
Omg, how I wish that was nadech kissing yaya! It would be awesome if that was them! Lol.. so passionate!I want Yadech to kiss for reals. Whenever I look at their faces, it mash up so well together. Look at their features. She has full lips, so does he. size of their noses...... Yup, I see a perfect mashup.... that's why it really kills me to see the fake kisses between them.
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Here is one of my fav. kissing scenes. It's Yamapi in Buzzer beat.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Cf5P3Z2MXo&feature=channel_video_title
(kissing is around 5:50 but it's worth watching from start of this vid because it sets it up well)
I want Nadech to kiss Yaya passionately like that. OMGeeeeeeee I get crazy just thinking about that! ha.
Yeah Jacob was annoying but I still love him though. But the book was so much better.Team Jacob?? NOOOOOO! His cuter than Edward would ever be, but he gets on my nerves. He's like the 2nd lead in Asian dramas where he just doesn't get it. Hello!!! The girl does not love you! He's like James in here hahaha! It's ok though. He imprinted on Bella's daughter.
I alternate between my computer and my phone. I stay on the computer til someone yells at me for hogging it (which makes no sense cuz the computer is mine). Then it's back to my phone.
I remember when my college computer broke on me during JLR, then SB! There were no smartphones then...well, I didn't have a smartphone then. I was going crazy so I know how you feel.
I saw this earlier and they were all so cuuuuute! Especially my nadech.Here is some Nadech eye-candy while we un-patiently wait for Friday (this vid has extra bonuses. My bonus eye-candy will be Mario. hehe).
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wGdmhBw-q-8&feature=channel_video_title
I'll post in the Ch.3 calendar link too but I thought it's better here since we can all get Nadech fix here.
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cr: NadechYaya FB
pics of Nadech filming CF yesterday
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cr: Barry.Ya at facebook
Be careful girl! My gosh he looks so buff in that sweater!You know, I almost got into an accident today because of THIS PIC. I was checking AF while stuck on 101 in Cali and when I saw the dimples, my being just went into a state of happiness and forgot that I was actually behind a wheel in the moving car.
Never say never! If not - I can always have them do THAT in my dreams. hahahaKiki...it'd be 10000000 years from now til we get a kiss scene like that in Thai lakorns.