oh, why!!!! no...totally agree with ur sis on the end. omg, such...omg i can feel the heart ache. awh, so sad how best decided to let bie go then crossed him at their workplace. omg they went through so much hardship and all they need to say to one another to have their "happing ending" was just the words i love you. awwh, great work! love this fanfic, very sweeet, romantic and touching, hope u'll write more short stories in the future, hopefuly with an ending that's happy. ^_-