mainhiathao
sarNie Granny
omg you gotta update asap, its getting more and more interesting. hope everything will b alright. 
If In Love Like Them
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theebby01
sarNie Hatchling
Chapter 13
Nadech was watching a sleeping Min,when Peung walked in
Peung:Is her condition getting better?
Nadech:The doctor said it depends on what going to happen these upcoming days first.
Peung:Nadech,can I talk to you outside?
Nadech nod and left with Peung
Peung turn to face Nadech
Peung:I'm leaving,and don't worry,I won't come back.
Nadech:What are you saying?
Peung:There's nothing here for me anyways
Peung smile
Peung:I thought you should just know,so you won't come yelling at me later.
Nadech smile
Nadecheung,I'll miss you.
Peungon't make my heart soft or else I won't ever let you go.
Peung laugh and hug Nadech
Peung:let's stay like this for awhile
Nadech let Peung hug him
Fang went to check up on Min
Fang:How do you feel today,Min?
Min:If you let me go home,I'll feel much better.
Fang:This well be better for you.
Min took off her mask
Min:I feel like I'm stuck in a cage and I can't breath.
Fang:Min,your making me feel like I didn't fulfill my promise to your father,let me just do this.
Min:You already did a great job,I won't survive these past years without you.
Fang:If you want to go home we have to check your condition tomorrow,if your better first,okay?
Min nod
Min:My baby how many months have it been?
Fang:Two,its two months now,and your going to have twins.
Min:Twins.
She touch her belly and smile.
Fang:Now go back and rest.
She put the oxygen mask back on,and left.
Tik went home and meet Donut
Tikonut,am I bad luck or something,why whenever she's with me she'll always get hurt?Is god really punishing me?Is this the answer that I'm given?
Donut took Tik in his arms and hug him
Donut:It'll be okay Tik,it'll be okay.
Nadech saw everything and went back to the hospital.
Nadech was speaking to a sleeping Min
Nadech:You better be okay,you better not die,for everyone around you and yourself.You can't leave yet,you still have too much things in this world to do.
Min had a fallen tear on her face and Nadech was about to wipe it but pulled back.
Nadech:Live on.
Nadech went and sat in a chair in the room
The next day,Fang came back for a check-up.
Fang:Min you still want to go back home?
Min:Of course,who wants to stay in a hospital,right?
Fang:If you want to go you have to promise to check every two weeks okay?
Tik:I well make her come,don't worry.
Fang smile at them
Fang:Okay,I'll see you in two weeks.
Tik took Min home.
Min:Your taking me back to Fang's house right?
Tik:No,your going to be living with me,who in the right mind well let their wife sleep elsewhere?
Min:But we're not even marry yet?
Tik:We're going to though.
Min look at Tik shock
Tikon't give me that face,I have all the papers prepare already.
Min:You still want to marry a person like me?
Tik stop the car and took Min's hands.
Tik:Your the whole world to me,the yesterday,today and even tomorrow,so that say those kind of words again especially in front of our babies.
Tik smile at her and she smile back.
Back at Tik's house both of them sigh marriage license with Donut and Nadech witnessing the marriage,and afterward Tik gave Min a light peck on the cheeks.
Tik:I love you Min.
Min smile and said the same thing back.
Tik took Min out after getting married
Tik:We're going to go to the beach and I'll return you back every two weeks to check-up okay?
Min smile and agree
Min and Tik spent their time by the beach coming home once in a while
Min:Let's go home,Tik.
Tik:You don't like staying here?
Min:I love it here.But it been so long since I saw everyone,come on.
Tik laugh
Tik:It haven't even been two weeks.It's okay,I was going to ask you to go home too,since I have a meeting at the hotel it's urgent and big.
Min smile:I told you.
Tik walk Min back to their house and pack their stuff and left to the city.
When they came back Nadech was outside waving his hand at them.
Nadechid you guys miss me that much,you guys came home earlier.
Tik:I have an urgent meeting to go too, and Min wanted to visit you guys so we came home.Nadech,take Min inside the house while I go out,I should be back before dinner.
Nadech:Okay,let's go Miss,Big Belly.How are my cousins doing?
Min hit Nadech
Min:You look like a weirdo doing that.
Tik laugh
Tik:Go inside the house.
Minon't worry,you better go,your going to be late,Nadech and I well head inside.
Tik left and Min and Nadech started walking up the stairs inside the house,and Min drop her bag and she was reaching for it,before she knew it blood was coming down her legs.
Min:Nadech!Help.
Nadech turn to see,and was calling for Donut
Nadech:MOM!Min's bleeding.
Min fainted and Nadech carried her.
Donut:We have to go now.
Tik was driving and he saw a car coming out of the house but thought it was nothing.
AUTHOR'S NOTE
I'm think of a sequel,but I want to know your opinions first.Thank You for reading this far,you guys are my support!-Luna
Nadech was watching a sleeping Min,when Peung walked in
Peung:Is her condition getting better?
Nadech:The doctor said it depends on what going to happen these upcoming days first.
Peung:Nadech,can I talk to you outside?
Nadech nod and left with Peung
Peung turn to face Nadech
Peung:I'm leaving,and don't worry,I won't come back.
Nadech:What are you saying?
Peung:There's nothing here for me anyways
Peung smile
Peung:I thought you should just know,so you won't come yelling at me later.
Nadech smile
Nadech
eung,I'll miss you.Peung
on't make my heart soft or else I won't ever let you go.Peung laugh and hug Nadech
Peung:let's stay like this for awhile
Nadech let Peung hug him
Fang went to check up on Min
Fang:How do you feel today,Min?
Min:If you let me go home,I'll feel much better.
Fang:This well be better for you.
Min took off her mask
Min:I feel like I'm stuck in a cage and I can't breath.
Fang:Min,your making me feel like I didn't fulfill my promise to your father,let me just do this.
Min:You already did a great job,I won't survive these past years without you.
Fang:If you want to go home we have to check your condition tomorrow,if your better first,okay?
Min nod
Min:My baby how many months have it been?
Fang:Two,its two months now,and your going to have twins.
Min:Twins.
She touch her belly and smile.
Fang:Now go back and rest.
She put the oxygen mask back on,and left.
Tik went home and meet Donut
Tik
onut,am I bad luck or something,why whenever she's with me she'll always get hurt?Is god really punishing me?Is this the answer that I'm given?Donut took Tik in his arms and hug him
Donut:It'll be okay Tik,it'll be okay.
Nadech saw everything and went back to the hospital.
Nadech was speaking to a sleeping Min
Nadech:You better be okay,you better not die,for everyone around you and yourself.You can't leave yet,you still have too much things in this world to do.
Min had a fallen tear on her face and Nadech was about to wipe it but pulled back.
Nadech:Live on.
Nadech went and sat in a chair in the room
The next day,Fang came back for a check-up.
Fang:Min you still want to go back home?
Min:Of course,who wants to stay in a hospital,right?
Fang:If you want to go you have to promise to check every two weeks okay?
Tik:I well make her come,don't worry.
Fang smile at them
Fang:Okay,I'll see you in two weeks.
Tik took Min home.
Min:Your taking me back to Fang's house right?
Tik:No,your going to be living with me,who in the right mind well let their wife sleep elsewhere?
Min:But we're not even marry yet?
Tik:We're going to though.
Min look at Tik shock
Tik
on't give me that face,I have all the papers prepare already.Min:You still want to marry a person like me?
Tik stop the car and took Min's hands.
Tik:Your the whole world to me,the yesterday,today and even tomorrow,so that say those kind of words again especially in front of our babies.
Tik smile at her and she smile back.
Back at Tik's house both of them sigh marriage license with Donut and Nadech witnessing the marriage,and afterward Tik gave Min a light peck on the cheeks.
Tik:I love you Min.
Min smile and said the same thing back.
Tik took Min out after getting married
Tik:We're going to go to the beach and I'll return you back every two weeks to check-up okay?
Min smile and agree
Min and Tik spent their time by the beach coming home once in a while
Min:Let's go home,Tik.
Tik:You don't like staying here?
Min:I love it here.But it been so long since I saw everyone,come on.
Tik laugh
Tik:It haven't even been two weeks.It's okay,I was going to ask you to go home too,since I have a meeting at the hotel it's urgent and big.
Min smile:I told you.
Tik walk Min back to their house and pack their stuff and left to the city.
When they came back Nadech was outside waving his hand at them.
Nadech
id you guys miss me that much,you guys came home earlier.Tik:I have an urgent meeting to go too, and Min wanted to visit you guys so we came home.Nadech,take Min inside the house while I go out,I should be back before dinner.
Nadech:Okay,let's go Miss,Big Belly.How are my cousins doing?
Min hit Nadech
Min:You look like a weirdo doing that.
Tik laugh
Tik:Go inside the house.
Min
on't worry,you better go,your going to be late,Nadech and I well head inside.Tik left and Min and Nadech started walking up the stairs inside the house,and Min drop her bag and she was reaching for it,before she knew it blood was coming down her legs.
Min:Nadech!Help.
Nadech turn to see,and was calling for Donut
Nadech:MOM!Min's bleeding.
Min fainted and Nadech carried her.
Donut:We have to go now.
Tik was driving and he saw a car coming out of the house but thought it was nothing.
AUTHOR'S NOTE
I'm think of a sequel,but I want to know your opinions first.Thank You for reading this far,you guys are my support!
-Lunaoh my, another sad disaster ! its so sad :-( tik min happiness is short lived but then again true love conquers all ! its so sweet of tik 2 mari min, great & stable character, like tat alot. hope nothing serious happens 2 min & its just a scare. absolutely hoping 4 a tik min hapi ending. thk u luna 4 yr dedication & great writing...loving it so much
mainhiathao
sarNie Granny
so cute, i love it, nadech is adorable n so is tik. i just hope nothing horrible happens to min, i wish for a happy ending between the two.
theebby01
sarNie Hatchling
Chapter 14
Min was being haul into the emergency room,while Donut and Nadech stood outside waiting,Donut called Tik, who wasn't picking up his phone.Meanwhile Tik was still riving and notice that his cell phone wasn't on him and was at home,so he drove back to get it.When he got back to the house a maid was cleaning up something in the front.
Tik:What are you doing?
Maid:Sir,why are you still here?
Tik laugh
Tik:I came back to get my phone.
Maid:So is Min better now?
Tik:Min?What happen?Isn't she inside the house?
Maid:Sir,she was bleeding alot so Nadech and Donut took her to the hospital right after you left.
Tik shocked drove to the hospital.
In the hospital,Min was losing alot of blood,and was in critical condition.Fang came out to talk with Nadech and Donut.
Fang:Min has to give birth right now.
Donut:But it's not even nine months yet?Fang:We know,but it's either we save her babies or they won't make it.
Nadech:What about her?
Fang:That's up to how strong her body can take it.
Nadech:So she won't survive.
Fang:They're a strong risk,her body wasn't healthy even before she got pregnant,so this might even effect her babies and the damage is already done so we'll try to help her as good as possible.
Fang walk back in as Tik came in.
Tik:Min?!Min?!
Donut pulled Tik away.
Tik:What's going on?She was perfectly fine when I left,what happen?
Nadech stood without breath
Nadech:I don't know,all a sudden everything happen so fast.
Nadech looked at Tik
Nadech:I'm sorry,I didn't take good care of her.
Tik:It's alright.
Tik tried to calm himself down.
A nurse came out to call them in.
Nurse:The patient just gave birth,but her condition isn't really good right now.You guys can come and she the babies.
They walked in and the babies were given to them to hold.
Fang:Congratulation Tik,your a dad,it's a boy and a girl.The boy is older.
Donut smile at the girl that she was holding
Donut:Your so beautiful.
Nadech:What about Min?
Fang:She's in the other room,her condition's unstable right now.
Tik handed the baby boy to Nadech
Fang:After giving birth,she doesn't have the energy she needs.
Tik was trying to walk over to the other room,but a nurse came rushing in and Tik could hear the lifeline of the heart go straight,he fall to the ground as the doctors rush in.
"Don't be sad about our goodbye,it's just a farewell until we can meet again,and you and I will meet again,when we're least expecting it,one day in some far off place."
A couple days later,Tik and Donut took the babies and went to a gravestone
Donut:Someone was here even before us.
Tik:He misses her even more.
Tik smiles
Far away a person drove off
Tik places flowers next to the gravestone
Tik:I miss you too though.
Donut:Are you ready to go now?
Tik:Here.
He handed the baby boy to Donut.
Tik:I'm going to stay here for awhile,she needs company.
Donut walk off to the car leaving Tik there.
Flashbacks of memories appear,and Tik smile again.
Tik:Wait for me,I'm coming.
The End
Author's Notes
Thank You for reading this fanfiction,I'm so happy that you guys are enjoyed this,it means alot for me.Also if your wondering,I'm making a sequel to this,so stay tune for that.Thanks again.-Luna
Min was being haul into the emergency room,while Donut and Nadech stood outside waiting,Donut called Tik, who wasn't picking up his phone.Meanwhile Tik was still riving and notice that his cell phone wasn't on him and was at home,so he drove back to get it.When he got back to the house a maid was cleaning up something in the front.
Tik:What are you doing?
Maid:Sir,why are you still here?
Tik laugh
Tik:I came back to get my phone.
Maid:So is Min better now?
Tik:Min?What happen?Isn't she inside the house?
Maid:Sir,she was bleeding alot so Nadech and Donut took her to the hospital right after you left.
Tik shocked drove to the hospital.
In the hospital,Min was losing alot of blood,and was in critical condition.Fang came out to talk with Nadech and Donut.
Fang:Min has to give birth right now.
Donut:But it's not even nine months yet?Fang:We know,but it's either we save her babies or they won't make it.
Nadech:What about her?
Fang:That's up to how strong her body can take it.
Nadech:So she won't survive.
Fang:They're a strong risk,her body wasn't healthy even before she got pregnant,so this might even effect her babies and the damage is already done so we'll try to help her as good as possible.
Fang walk back in as Tik came in.
Tik:Min?!Min?!
Donut pulled Tik away.
Tik:What's going on?She was perfectly fine when I left,what happen?
Nadech stood without breath
Nadech:I don't know,all a sudden everything happen so fast.
Nadech looked at Tik
Nadech:I'm sorry,I didn't take good care of her.
Tik:It's alright.
Tik tried to calm himself down.
A nurse came out to call them in.
Nurse:The patient just gave birth,but her condition isn't really good right now.You guys can come and she the babies.
They walked in and the babies were given to them to hold.
Fang:Congratulation Tik,your a dad,it's a boy and a girl.The boy is older.
Donut smile at the girl that she was holding
Donut:Your so beautiful.
Nadech:What about Min?
Fang:She's in the other room,her condition's unstable right now.
Tik handed the baby boy to Nadech
Fang:After giving birth,she doesn't have the energy she needs.
Tik was trying to walk over to the other room,but a nurse came rushing in and Tik could hear the lifeline of the heart go straight,he fall to the ground as the doctors rush in.
"Don't be sad about our goodbye,it's just a farewell until we can meet again,and you and I will meet again,when we're least expecting it,one day in some far off place."
A couple days later,Tik and Donut took the babies and went to a gravestone
Donut:Someone was here even before us.
Tik:He misses her even more.
Tik smiles
Far away a person drove off
Tik places flowers next to the gravestone
Tik:I miss you too though.
Donut:Are you ready to go now?
Tik:Here.
He handed the baby boy to Donut.
Tik:I'm going to stay here for awhile,she needs company.
Donut walk off to the car leaving Tik there.
Flashbacks of memories appear,and Tik smile again.
Tik:Wait for me,I'm coming.
The End
Author's Notes
Thank You for reading this fanfiction,I'm so happy that you guys are enjoyed this,it means alot for me.Also if your wondering,I'm making a sequel to this,so stay tune for that.Thanks again.-Luna
mainhiathao
sarNie Granny
r u serious, that was a sad ending :cry1: omg... that was so sad, well at least the babies are safe. Its a good thing u'll b having a sequel, can't wait for it. Btw this was an amazing fanfic, and i enjoyed it a lot. :bravo:
Btw this was an amazing fanfic, and i enjoyed it a lot. :bravo:hi luna, u had me in tears in da end :-( its so sad, tik didnt even have a last chance 2 c min, oh my, its sadness 2 da max !!! i hope yr sequel will b da reverse, full of da opposite & wit. tyvm 4 all yr hard work & great story line + writing skills. Its a thoroughly great story and I've njoyed it so much...SIT TC