tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
she will be...maybe heehee
~IN WONDERLAND~ ::AUM/AFF::
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sarNie Granny
no...i'll give you a spoiler heehee
pat loves soriya very much..but it's love that cause trouble heehee
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sarNie Granny
Chapter 3: Harit's World Collapses (Beginning)
--Nursery--
harit sees his mother holding onto harin, his baby brother. harin is only 8 months old. his mother looks so happy, smiling at her son, singing a lullaby. harit walks in softly, not wanting to wake up his baby brother. as he comes into the room, he notices that his mother still looks as beautiful as he remembered her 12 years ago. he has seen photos, but in person, he notices that she still looks as if she was 30.
harit: mother. (he whispers, and his mother looks up. she sees her son, and begins to cry)
mother: my baby. oh, you're finally home.
harit: yes. to stay.
mother: you don't know how happy i am to see you, my handsome boy, you have grown so much. you don't know how much i have missed you. i wish i would have visited you in America. how was it over there? have you eaten? if not, i'll have mae ask cook too? oh, how was the trip home? are you tired, if so you can----
harit: mother, i'm okay. we can discuss about this later, we have a long time too. right now, i just want to be here with my mother and brother. (he goes and hugs his mother)
mother: i'm sorry your father is not here, he went--
harit: i know. (he is angered every time his father is not there, not only for him, but for his mother and brother) i'm going to go take a shower now, and then go to the company. i want to start as soon as possible. i'll see you tonight.
his mother nods and he leaves, but before he leaves, he looks back and see his mother rocking in the rocking chair, holding his baby brother. as he leaves to his room, he smiles. as harit walks down the hall to his room, he passes his father's office. he goes in there, just to get a feel of his father, since it has been 12 years without hearing for him. as harit creeps into the room, being on his guard as if someone will catch him.
he is in the office, his father's smell comes back to him, brings back so much memories and this brings harit into tears. he wonder around in the office a bit and passes his father's chair. THE chair, the one harit always sees his father in when he was younger, the one that made his father looks so powerful, the one that his father was in the last time harit saw him. he slowly sits down in it. it felt wonderful, so powerful and awesome. he wanted to be like his father, so he randomly grabbed a book off the bookshelf. as he opens the book, a photo falls out along with a key. harit goes to pick the items that fell, he looks at the photo. right away, he recognize his father, but WHO WAS THE LADY NEXT TO HIM? his father was happy, more than harit ever saw before. he then looked at the key, he wonders where it goes, then suddenly he thought of a cabinet in the office he saw his father open before when he was younger and hiding from his teacher.
--TBC--
spoiler:
harit learns of his father's past, his father comes home early, harit plots something, he meets soriya....all coming soon in the next few chapter^^
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
sorry if my writing is bad.....i'm working on it^^
gosh...i am in like a fanfic mode.....i'll update more later^O^.....wow^^
gosh...i am in like a fanfic mode.....i'll update more later^O^.....wow^^
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
awww thank you so much^^ i feel really happy heeheegreat~! finally, im updated....by the way, while browsing i saw Donna greeting you "happy birthday", i didnt know its your birthday today... so i just wanna greet you too...
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
Don't change! I love the simplicity of your writing!
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
aww thank you! then i will continue with it
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
hehe... each person has their own style of writing... so don't worry about it.
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
you're too nice^^ heehee thanks for the motivationhehe... each person has their own style of writing... so don't worry about it.
off topic...LOL you are post 69 here...sorry but this reminds me of my JLR sister GP LO
hahaha rr u def will keke but dang how can u catch up on all the fics keke theres like new and updated ones 24/7 kekekeke.. n im a slow reader too kekeke.. lmao..
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
LOL...well i am behind on lakorns and the JLR thread...but i WILL catch up hopefully^O^ or else i will be sad---miss it all heehee.....fanfics and my JLR sisters are my FIRST priority...gosh both are so addicting :loool: ^^ aww....don't worry, you will get the hang of it...just like spamming^^ talk to you later!
kekeke.. i'll try to read super fast on the otha fics xp lol.. keke so i can start my JLR marathon xp lol. ... hahha..
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
Chapter 4: The Secret Love Letters
Harit rushes to the cabinet. Carefully puts the key inside the keyhole, it fits. He slowly turns it, click, it opens. His heart starts pounding. don't be afraid, there's nothing scary in here, it's only father's cabinet. he looks in, and BAM! nothing. no gun, no drugs, no hidden money, nothing except some letters. he started to relax and at first, harit was going to blow it off, but he had an urge to read the letters. sitting there on the floor of his father's office, deciding which one to read first. he then picked up the one on the top of the stack, he began to read it to himself:
August 4, 1983
Dear My Sweet Mam:
Do you still remember who I am? It is I, once your lover, Tom. Are you happy now? I still think of you day and night. Your lovely smiles, gentle kisses, those dark seductive eyes, and the smell of peaches that reminds me of our summer days on the country farm. God, every day is like turtore without you. I miss you like crazy.
And I want to tell you that I still LOVE you, and only you until the day I die, you will be the only lady in my heart. My father was horrible to split us apart and forcing me to marry Pim. I don't love her, I never will, even though she is carrying my child now, it still makes no difference. No matter how long it takes, I will wait for you. I will give up everything for you, my riches, my estates, my family, and even my life.
I do not care if you married my best friend and having his child. We can help raise your child as our own. If you can find it in your heart to forgive me and take me back, you will make me the happiest man alive. Nothing in this world means more to me than YOU. Just to see you once more would mean the world to me, I even moved to Malaysia just to be near you.
Love Always and Forever Yours,
Tom.
Harit heart sank. His father never loved him nor his mother. He drops the letter to the ground. A bit of sadness ran through him, but it quickly turned to rage and anger. All his life spent pleasing his father, no more, whoever this Mam is and her family will surely pay, pay for all those years he spent never having his father's love nor his respect, pay for the lies and the endless torture of how Harit feels, pay for everything! Many things started running through in Harit's mind, where to begin, and suddenly click, he must find out where they live, and start from there. Yes, he will not let them go even if it's the last thing he does.
A smile crawled onto Harit's face, he then began laughing madly. Harit picks himself off from the ground, and grabbed the letters. He closed the cabinet door, but took the letters with him to his room, he wanted to learn of his father's past.
---TBC later---
Harit rushes to the cabinet. Carefully puts the key inside the keyhole, it fits. He slowly turns it, click, it opens. His heart starts pounding. don't be afraid, there's nothing scary in here, it's only father's cabinet. he looks in, and BAM! nothing. no gun, no drugs, no hidden money, nothing except some letters. he started to relax and at first, harit was going to blow it off, but he had an urge to read the letters. sitting there on the floor of his father's office, deciding which one to read first. he then picked up the one on the top of the stack, he began to read it to himself:
August 4, 1983
Dear My Sweet Mam:
Do you still remember who I am? It is I, once your lover, Tom. Are you happy now? I still think of you day and night. Your lovely smiles, gentle kisses, those dark seductive eyes, and the smell of peaches that reminds me of our summer days on the country farm. God, every day is like turtore without you. I miss you like crazy.
And I want to tell you that I still LOVE you, and only you until the day I die, you will be the only lady in my heart. My father was horrible to split us apart and forcing me to marry Pim. I don't love her, I never will, even though she is carrying my child now, it still makes no difference. No matter how long it takes, I will wait for you. I will give up everything for you, my riches, my estates, my family, and even my life.
I do not care if you married my best friend and having his child. We can help raise your child as our own. If you can find it in your heart to forgive me and take me back, you will make me the happiest man alive. Nothing in this world means more to me than YOU. Just to see you once more would mean the world to me, I even moved to Malaysia just to be near you.
Love Always and Forever Yours,
Tom.
Harit heart sank. His father never loved him nor his mother. He drops the letter to the ground. A bit of sadness ran through him, but it quickly turned to rage and anger. All his life spent pleasing his father, no more, whoever this Mam is and her family will surely pay, pay for all those years he spent never having his father's love nor his respect, pay for the lies and the endless torture of how Harit feels, pay for everything! Many things started running through in Harit's mind, where to begin, and suddenly click, he must find out where they live, and start from there. Yes, he will not let them go even if it's the last thing he does.
A smile crawled onto Harit's face, he then began laughing madly. Harit picks himself off from the ground, and grabbed the letters. He closed the cabinet door, but took the letters with him to his room, he wanted to learn of his father's past.
---TBC later---
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
Aww poor Harit... The letter was a shocker...
I really loved the essence of the letter by the way.. it tells a lot about the dad.
I really loved the essence of the letter by the way.. it tells a lot about the dad.
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
thanks^^
lol i was thinking of a name...and i suddenly thought of my cousin tommy...he always like this one girl at school...even though there are others..tom will come home :loool: tom and pim, tom and mam :loool:Tom???? why its sounds to me that its a gay relationship.... peace~! cant wait for the next chappiii.....
you all will find out who mam is soon