Master of the Sun

cecilia

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Omg...this is so intense but I love it. I was so mad at the whole big brother r scene but after finish reading the rest of the chapter I feel okay b/c something tells me that this big mean aggressive brother is none other than aum.-- suck that he's married .. makes me questionable about his identity as well (well, let's pray that I'm right)

I really want to see how aum get his revenge on her. In a way, I feel bad for aff b/c with her sad life, she does not deserve to get hurt physically and mentally like this. I'm super anticipating aum's remorse later in your fic.

Anyway, I love your writting style. So descriptive and captivating. Love your fiction cover. Beautifully made b/c of the message it's trying to convey to the audience.

I'm super addictive to this ATM. I'm glad I decide to read this. Please write some more. Can't wait for more.
 
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