Messy Circle of Love Part 1&2 *COMPLETE*

bobby101

sarNie Egg
Falada, I love your FF can't wait for more update and thanking for sharing your story. I love yadech so much. I hope they end up together.
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
keylargo said:
 
hi falada i 1 2 say this...love yr new signature poster ! yadech sooooo in love !!! nadech cant get enough, stealing kisses non-stop on his girl, they're so cute !
Thanks, key! :D And yes, he have too steal kisses, and I agree.
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
vorleak said:
Thank you falada,,, I like this chapter, nadech soo sweet
 
Your welcome, Vorlek. :D
 
bobby101 said:
Falada, I love your FF can't wait for more update and thanking for sharing your story. I love yadech so much. I hope they end up together.
 
Thanks and your welcome, bobby101. :D I love Yadech, too. <3
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
hi falada, ure back, welcome back ! hope u had a great time ! i miz u sooo much here n in rs!!! im v happy, just 2 c u n feel yr presence is v assuring n warm !!!
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
LOL I am. And I did have a great time. It was very fun. :D I miss you so much, too. I wish that you were there with me, too. I'm very happy to be back, too. There's so much update to read. :D
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Chapter 11
"I have to go to my friend's wedding," say Boy
"Oh, for how many days?" ask Marie
"2-3 days," say Boy
"Oh," say Marie
"Don't worry, Marie. I'll come back," say Boy
"I know. But I'm just sad that I can't go with you," say Marie
"It's ok. If it's for a friend than you should do it," say Boy
"Yes," say Marie
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"Where are we going?" ask Yaya
"You'll know when we get there," say Nadech, dragging Yaya to the car.
When they got there, Yaya look around. Than she look at Nadech.
"Why are we here?" ask Yaya
"To register our marriage," say Nadech, happily
"Why?" ask Yaya
"Because we are getting marry," say Nadech
"Ok," say Yaya
"Come on, let's go," say Nadech, dragging her out of the car.
They went in, and register their marriage. When they got outside, news reporter were waiting for the. The reporters saw them, and start taking pictures and asking questions. Nadech smile and happily answer their questions. Yaya stand there. She was confuse about this.
When they got back to the car, Yaya question Nadech.
"What is all this about?" ask Yaya
"It's like what you saw. I'm telling them about our marriage," say Nadech
"But I don't need you to tell the whole world," say Yaya
"But we have too," say Nadech
"Why?" ask Yaya
"Because I love you, and I want the whole world to know it," say Nadech
"Hey, you know I'm shy," say Yaya
"Yes, I know, but I really want everyone to know. Forgive me ok," say Nadech, putting his hands together, and begging her.
"Yes," say Yaya
"Thanks," say Nadech, and he kiss Yaya on the cheek
They both smile, and Nadech drove her back.
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"What is this?" yell Nadech's father, throwing the newspaper at him.
Nadech pick it up, and smile.
"Me and Yaya are getting marry," say Nadech
"I refuse to let you marry her," say his mother
"But this is a choice that I make on my own, and this is my life," say Nadech
"You dare talk back," shouted his father
"I'm sorry than," say Nadech, than he left
His parents were furious than ever.
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"Huh? Boy's leaving to go to his friend's wedding?!" say Kim, surpised
"Yes," say Marie
Kim stare at Marie's face. 
"Why do you look so stress about it?" ask Kim
"I have a feeling that nothing will be the same again if he go," say Marie
"Why?" ask Kim
"I'm scared, Kim, that he might change his heart," say Marie
"It's going to be ok, Marie. You just have to keep being on the positive side, ok," say Kim
"Yes," say Marie
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"Happy Birthday," say Bie and Mark
"Thanks," say Noona
"Here's the cake," say Mark, putting the cake in front of her face, so she can blow the candles.
"Thanks," say Noona. Than she made her wish. Her wish was that she'll be strong enough to tell Mark her feelings for him. And than she blow the candles.
"Come on, let's slice the cake," say Noona, feeling happy
"Yes," say Bie and Mark
They all walk to the table and Bie handed the knife to Noona.
Noona carefully slice the cake, and put it in a plate for Mark and Bie.
All three of them were having fun, and laughing.
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"Good bye," say Marie
"Good bye," say Boy, as he walk away.
Marie look at him. She was sad to see him leave.
Boy walk for a bit, than went back to Marie. He forgot to give her the present that he have brought for her. He got back to her, and pull out a necklace that have two hearts hanging together.
"Marie, this is for you," say Boy
Marie look at the necklace silently.
"Thanks," say Marie, looking up at Boy
"Though it's just another necklace, I promise that one day, it will be a ring instead," say Boy
"Yes," say Marie
Boy smile and give her a hug. Marie hug him tightly. She wants time to freeze and let them be together like that forever.
"Um, Marie, I have to go now," say Boy, but Marie was lost in her thoughts, and kept on hugging him.
Boy kept saying it for a few times, and the 6th time finally woke Marie from her thoughts.
"Good bye, Boy, I miss you so much," say Marie
" Good bye. I'll miss you, too," say Boy. Than he left. Marie stare after him. She started crying. Kim came and pick Marie up. And when they go back home, Marie was still sad.
In her head questions kept on popping up in her head. "Why didn't she stop him? Or talk him out if it? Why did he have to go to that wedding anyway?"
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"Good bye," say Mark and Bie
"Good bye," say Noona
Bie and Mark went to the door and open it.
"Um, Mark, may I speak with you?" ask Noona
"Yes," say Mark
"Do you want me to stay, too?" ask Bie, hoping that she'll say yes
"No thanks, I just have something to tell Mark," say Noona
Bie was disappointed, but he left. Mark walk back to the couch and sat down. Noona happily walk after him.
"What do you want to tell me?" ask Mark
"I...um, I," say Noona, but she couldn't get the words out. This was her moment, isn't it? She was suppose to tell him what her feelings are for him, right?
"What is it?" ask Mark
Noona stand there and study his face for a long time.
Bie was in his car by now. He look for his keys, but couldn't find it. He went back to Noona's apartment. When he reach the door, he decided to knock, but didn't want to disturb his friends, so he silently open the door. He heard Mark's voice than Noona.
"I like you," say Noona
"What?!" say Mark in surprise
"I really like. I have like you ever since when we were young, and it have never change," say Noona
"Noona, I," say Mark, trying to find the right words.
His head was now confuse, and he wanted to leave the place as soon as possible.
"I have to go now," say Mark, walking to the door
"Wait," say Noona
Mark ignore, and walk on. Noona run over to him, and hug him tightly.
"Please don't go. Don't leave me," say Noona, her tears spilling out
Mark took her hands off him, and turn to her.
"I'm sorry, but you're not my type," say Mark
Bie watch the scene. His heart melting. The person he loves, love another man. And that man is hurting her right now. He slowly walk away, not wanting to look at the scene anymore. His heart aching.
"I understand, sorry for causing this scene, I'll be stay out of your life from now on," say Noona, wiping her tears. She knew this was a bad idea from the first place.
"Thanks for understanding," say Mark, walking off, leaving her alone.
Noona cry again over and over again. She still can't accept the truth.
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Enjoy! Srry that it doesn't have much about Yadech, but their wedding is going to be next Chapter. :D
I don't think I can update tomorrow, but I'll try. 
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
hi falada thank u so much ! ure hard at work after yr trip ! pls have time 4 yrself b4 updaing 4 our pleasure ! i do appreciate your dedication a lottttt ! im happiest - nadech brought yaya 2 register their marriage - hes v in love ! u make me love yaya so much, shes so cool n calm, v steady ! looking forward 2 read more of their love ! v sad 4 n-m-b situation, esp n-b ! dun worry take yr time updating, ill wait patiently ! wif much appreciation, falada, thank u :x
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Coca said:
Update continue ... Update jame & mint
 
I will. Sorry for not updating them. I kept on forgetting.
 
keylargo said:
hi falada thank u so much ! ure hard at work after yr trip ! pls have time 4 yrself b4 updaing 4 our pleasure ! i do appreciate your dedication a lottttt ! im happiest - nadech brought yaya 2 register their marriage - hes v in love ! u make me love yaya so much, shes so cool n calm, v steady ! looking forward 2 read more of their love ! v sad 4 n-m-b situation, esp n-b ! dun worry take yr time updating, ill wait patiently ! wif much appreciation, falada, thank u :x
 Your welcome, Key. Thanks, I will. LOL I like Nang'ek that stays cool and is calm. :D
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
Falada said:
 
I will. Sorry for not updating them. I kept on forgetting.
 

 Your welcome, Key. Thanks, I will. LOL I like Nang'ek that stays cool and is calm. :D
hi falada tells me u r a cool and steady girl 2, keep it up ! good nite, talk 2 u tmr falada !
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Thanks, Key. Good night. Sweet Dreams. I talk to you later. :D
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Chapter 12
"What is it?" ask Yaya, happily
"You'll see," say Nadech, as he turn the steering wheel to the right
"Yes," say Yaya
Nadech drove for a little while, than make a stop.
"Here we are," say Nadech happily
Yaya stare at the great big house. It look so beautiful and neat. She got out, and stand next to Nadech.
"Do you like it?" ask Nadech
"Yes, alot," say Yaya
"That's good," say Nadech
"Whose house is this?" ask Yaya
"Our house," say Nadech
"What?!" say Yaya, still not believing what Nadech have just say
"Our house, you and me," say Nadech
"Really?!" say Yaya, looking at the big house
"Yes, it's my present to you," say Nadech
"But, I couldn't possibly live in such a big house like this," say Yaya
"Why not? I'm going to live with you here, and we are going to make a family together," say Nadech, happily
"But your parents," say Yaya, sadly
"Don't worry about them. They know that they can't stop us from making our family," say Nadech
Yaya brighten up, and smile.
"Let's go inside," say Nadech
"Yes," say Yaya
Nadech hold Yaya's hands, and guide her inside. He wants her to see all the beautiful stuffs.
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"Noona," say Bie, opening Noona's apartment door. He went in, and look around. The room was full of silence. Everything was still in place though.
He call her names a lot of times, and decided to go to her bedroom. He open the door, and look at her room. There was a paper on the table next to her bed. Bie walk over, and grab the paper. He read the message to himself.
The letter says:
Dear Bie and Mark,
Thanks for everything. Good Bye.
Love, Noona.
After that, Bie walk over to her closet, and open it. It was empty. Bie's heart start to pour, and the hurt like the day before. This was all because of Mark. He went back to his car, and drove as fast as he can to Mark's place. 
Mark was eating breakfast with his grandparents, when Bie walk in, and grab him and punch him in the face. Mark was confuse.
"Why did you punch me?" ask Mark
"You should answer it yourself. You hurt Noona," say Bie
"What is this about?" ask Mark's grandmother
"I don't know either," say Mark
"It's all your fault," say Bie
"Ok, calm down, Bie, and we can talk about this matter," say Mark's grandfather
"Go outside and talk with me," say Bie, walking out
Mark follow behind him.
"What is it?" ask Mark
"Noona," say Bie
"What about her?" ask Mark, getting concern
"She went away," say Bie
"And?" ask Mark
"I don't know where she went," say Bie
"Why?" ask Mark
"Stop asking question! Ask yourself," say Bie, mad
"Ok," say Mark
"From now on, let's stop seeing each other," say Bie
"But we're friends," say Mark
"No, we're not, not anymore," say Bie, shaking his head, and walking away. He was done being friends with a guy like Mark. He never wanted to see him again.
Mark stand there, still confuse. He hadn't yet understand the whole thing.
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"Do you want to go to the airport with me to go pick up my friend tomorrow?" ask Nadech
"It's ok," say Yaya
"Come on, I want my friend to see you," say Nadech
"I'm still nervous about it, though," say Yaya
"No need, we are going to be wife and husband soon, you need to know all the people I know" say Nadech
"Ok, but may I take Margie along," say Yaya
"Of course," say Nadech
"Thanks," say Yaya
"Your welcome," say Nadech
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"Huh?! Go to with you and Nadech to go pick up his friend," say Margie
"Yes," say Yaya
"Why?" ask Margie
"I'm too nervous to go alone. Please, go be my friend, ok," say Yaya
"Fine," say Margie
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Boy look around the airport for Nadech. He have been looking for a while and still haven't find him. He was so thirsty, he went to one of the little shop to see if there was any drinks. He spotted one, and went in and order a drink. He got the water, and open it. He accidentally trip, and fall on a Margie. They landed on the floor with his lips on her cheek. Margie was furious him. She push him off, and got up. She slap him, and yell at him before he can apologize.
Boy stand there, and let her insult him. After she walk away, he walk back, and waited at the same spot that he waited at.
Than he heard someone call his name. He turn around, and there was Nadech. He walk over to his friend.
"How are you Nadech?" ask Boy
"I'm fine, and you?" ask Nadech. Boy look at the two girls next to Nadech side. The second girl was the one that was the one that he met awhile ago. And she did not look happy seeing him again.
"I'm also good, too. And these are?" ask Boy, looking at Yaya, who have a smiling face on, and Margie, who have an annoyed/mad face on.
"This is Yaya, my bride, and the other one is Margie, her friend," say Nadech
"Hello," say Yaya
"Hello," say Boy, looking at Margie with her hands cross together.
"Let's get going," say Nadech, helping Boy with his stuffs.
"Yes," say Boy
Yaya walk with Nadech. And Margie follow her. Boy follow Nadech.
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"James, let's go to my friend's party tonight, ok," say Chailda
"I don't want to go," say James
"Please, go with me, my friend want to see us together," say Chailda
James turn to Chailda, and hold her hands.
"Chailda you need to understand me. I have a lot of works, and business," say James
"I understand," say Chailda, turning the other way
James turn the same way as Chailda, and give her a hug.
"I love you," say Chailda
"Me, too," say James
They both smile, and hold on each other for a while.
"Ok, since I will not be going to your friend's party, I'll treat you to dinner, ok," say James
"Ok," say Chailda smiling.
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"We're here," say Nadech, as he get out of the car
Boy, Yaya, and Margie also got out of the car. Nadech and Boy unload his stuffs, and they all went inside the house.
"Margie, may you go show Boy his room, please," say Yaya
"But," say Margie
"It's ok," say Boy
"It's ok, Margie will help you," say Yaya
Yaya nudged Margie, and Margie walk to Boy and carry one of his bag.
Nadech and Yaya disappear immediately. Boy follow Margie.
When they got there, Margie threw Boy's bag on the ground. She didn't want to stay with him anymore.
Boy notices.
"Hey, if you don't want to do it, than don't," say Boy
"I'm just doing it for my friend's sake," say Margie, walking out
Boy stare after her. She was one girl.
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"What? He won't go to the party with you?!" say Natwara
"No, he's busy," say Chailda
"What kind of boyfriend put work in front of their girlfriend," say Natwara
"Don't say that. James is really busy," say Chailda
"Why do you still believe him? Do you not know that he lies to you every single day that he's busy," say Natwara
"How do you know?" ask Chailda, getting angry
"Because the day before yesterday, I saw him with a girl," say Natwara
"That's not true," say Chalida
"Come on, Chalida, open up your eyes. You know that he's a playboy. And what's so good about keeping a guy like that?!" say Natwara
"It's not true! I don't believe you. James is a nice person, and he loves me!" Chailda shouted madly at Natwara. She ran out of the room. She doesn't want to believe in Natwara's words. Never want to listen to it again, or forever.
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"Please go give this clothes to Boy, and tell him to come to down to dinner," say Yaya
"No I don't want to. Why does he have to stay here with us? He have his only house, and it's in BangKok, too," Margie complained
"Well, Nadech want him to stay with us," say Yaya
"But I don't," say Margie
"Come on, Margie," say Yaya
"Yes," say Margie, dragging herself to his room
She walk in his room, and sees him looking at a picture. 
"What are you looking at?" ask Margie
"My girlfriend's picture," say Boy
"What?! A guy like you have a girlfriend. I bet that that girl will be so unlucky to have a weak boyfriend like you," say Margie, laughing her head off
"Hey, I'm not weak," say Boy
"Yes you are," say Margie
"What are you here for?" ask Boy
"Here's your clothes for the wedding, and go down to dinner," say Margie
"Thanks," say Boy, putting the stuffs away
Margie walk out without saying anything.
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Marie hold the pictures of Boy and her tightly. She miss Boy so much.
Kim trys her best to cheer her friend up, but Marie would just sit still, and look at the pictures of her and Boy.
"Is she ok?" ask Grandma On
"Yes, she just miss Boy," say Kim
"Well, if she miss him than, why don't she go see him?" ask Grandma On
"She can't. Boy went to Thailand to attend his friend's wedding," say Kim
"And why didn't she go with him?" ask Grandma On
"Because she wants to stay and help me study," say Kim
"Oh," say Grandma On
Grandma On walk to Marie. She wanted to cheer her up.
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"How's the beautifulest bride in the world doing?!" say Margie, walking into Yaya's dressing room
"Good," say Yaya
"That's good," say Margie, walking over to Yaya who is sitting in front of the mirror staring at herself.
"Are you ready?" ask Margie
"Yes," say Yaya
"You know something?!" say Margie
"What?" ask Yaya
"You have were really never confient in yourself like today. I'm proud of you," say Margie
"Thanks," say Yaya
"Yes," say Margie, as she open the door
She walk with her for a bit, than went into the wedding room, to go to her spot. Yaya stand outside the door. She was still nervous, but confident.
Her fake dad came, and told her it was time. She put her right arm on his left. She put a smile on, and try to not look nervous. The door open and everyone was staring at her. She start to feel nervous again, but she try to focus on Nadech's smiling face staring at her. She walk to Nadech and stand next to him. After making the vows, Nadech give her a kiss on the cheek, and she did the same thing.
Next was the flower tossing. Yaya stand her back facing the audience, and throw the flower bouquet. Margie caught it, and everyone clapped. 
Nadech and Yaya were having so much fun. It was their best moment.
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Enjoy! :D
 

Ann Taylor

sarNie Hatchling
Thanks SOOO MUCH!!! Man small word huh?! These lakorn are so I CANT EXPLAIN!!!! Hahahaha thanks for the update  :pervie:  :thumbsup:
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
Hi falada thank u 4 a v long chap12! nadech is a v decisive man, i like unlike mark whos rather slow! Poor n, took off! Yeah yadech finally got married, even if k was back nadech is a married man! b-m r so cute!! I look forward 2 read yr story development! Thank u 4 yr time falada, wif appreciation! O
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
Your welcome. :D
 
 
LOL Srry I just have ask these questions: There's too much mysteries. Don't you guys wonder why Noona left? And if Kim come back what will she do? And what about Marie/Boy/Margie? Will they end up like Kim/Nadech/Yaya? And what will Nadech do with Kim when he still have Yaya? And Yaya, will she be able to reach Nadech's parents exceptions? Why Nadech's did parents have turn cold and choose his future for him? Why did Mark not want to date Noona? Will Bie, Noona, and Mark meet each other again? What will they do if they meet again? Why is James hurting Chailda? Will Chailda do what her friend want? Will James know that he did wrong? And Kim, is she going to do the wrong or right thing? Will Tah understand Nadech's true intention? What about Sara? What happen to the promises? How hurt will everyone be when all the problems meet together and get into one big pile of mess? Will there be war between these people? Does everything connects?
 
Sorry. I know that you guys don't really know, but I just want you guys to ponder/study these questions. :D
 

keylargo

sarNie Oldmaid
ure a v intelligent girl 2 come up wif a plot like this! Simply love MCOL,will ponder n hopefully provide some cmns! Thank u falada !
 

Falada

sarNie Adult
LOL Your welcome and Thanks so much, Key. You always give me the support. :D I'm very happy to hear that from you. And I'm also happy that you like the questions/plot.
 
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