Missunderstanding of my mom's friend

SmileBo

sarNie Juvenile
Ch.6

Duang:He is police.
Ern:police?(Look at Warit)
Warit:Yes,girl.(Smile)

At police station.
Warit:How do you know Ern Jarijinda?
Ern:I say i am a friend of her,don't you understand?
Warit:So you know where she live?
Ern:Yes but not now b/c after her parents be murder i can't contact her anymore.(Look down)
Warit:How do you know that Ern's mother was at that hospital?
Ern:I'm not blind.There was news about that.
Warit:Ok,if Ern call you can you pls say to me?(Look at Ern)
Ern:Yes,will be.Can i go now?(Stand up to go)
Warit:Wait,Pin.You fallow me at the market first.
Ern:I don't want to go,i want to go home now.
Warit:You have to fallow with me.(Took her hand and go)

He take her to the vase shop.There was a lot of pretty vase.
Warit:Take the one you want.
Ern:Why did you take me here?
Warit:Duang do your vase broke, so i will buy a new for you.
Ern:The one who have to buy me is your girlfriend not you.
Warit:Duang is not my girlfriend.(Look at Ern)
Ern:I don't care.(Shy b/c Warit look at her)
Warit:May i choose one for you?(Smile)
Ern:Yes,you can.

When Warit go choose the vase she go outside the market and call to Bank.Warit come back with a vase.
Warit:Here you are.(Handed the vase to Ern)
Ern:Thanks.
Warit:Come,i will drive you home.
Ern:I have already call my friend,he will come soon.
Warit:It's dark outside here.It's dangerous for a girl,i will wait you till he come.
Ern:Do you worry about me?
Warit:Who's say?(Look at her)
Ern:None.(Look at the other way)
Warit smile and say maybe Bank doesn't come.
Ern:I thinks he'll come.
Warit:I think i have to drive you home.(After a few minute)

When they are about to go Ern heard a motorcicle come.That was Bank.
Bank:Where are you going to take my girlfriend?(Look at Warit)
Ern:What did you say.Bank?
Bank:Don't ask so much,Darling.(Come)
Ern:I'm not your darling or girlfriend.(Say when she saw Warit was looking at her)
Bank:Don't be shy,Pin.
Ern:I'm not.(Go to the motorcicle)Anyway,thanks for the vase.(Smile and wave at Warit)
Warit:Why did he come,now i can't know where she live.(Wave at Ern and touch his head)

At home.
Bank:Why did you say you are not my girlfriend?(Look at Ern)
Ern:B/c it's true.
Bank:But you know that i love...(He be discontinued of Ern )
Ern:I love you like a brother and that can't be more then that.
Rin come and hear what they talking about and feel sad.When Ern go to her room Rin was standing infront of her door.Ern look at Rin.
Rin:Can you give me a little time of yours?
Ern nod to yes and go in to her room.Rin fallow after her.
Ern:About what?(Look at Rin)
Rin:Why did you say you don't love Bank?(Look sad)
Ern:So you heard what we talked?
Rin:Yes,sorry.I don't mean to do that.
Ern:That's ok.About the quesstion you know already the answer.Anymore?
Rin:No,thanks for the answer.
Ern:If you have something in your heart just say it.
Rin:What's you mean?
Ern:You know what i mean,Don't you?(Smile)

At night.
When Rin go to Bank's room he was drinking alcohol.He looked at her when she come inside.
Bank:What do you want?
Rin:I just want to say you that you don't have to be sad b/c of one girl.
Bank:What do you mean?
Rin:If you want a girlfriend,i can be yours.(Look at Bank)
Bank look at her and laugh hard,Rin feel sad.
Bank:Stupid girl,are you trying to say me that you love me.We can't be more then friend.You know that i love Ern.
Rin:I just want you to be happy,i just kidding with you.(Laugh and sad at the same time)
Bank:Thank you for make me happy but i want to sleep now.Good night.
Rin:Have a good dream.(Go)

When she was at her room she think about what Bank said and cry.
Flashback
We can't be more then friend.You know that i love Ern...You know that i love Ern.
End flashback.

Enjoy!!
 

SmileBo

sarNie Juvenile
Ch.7

Flashback
We can't be more then friend..You know that i love Ern...You know that i love Ern.
End flashback.

In the morning when Bank come out from his room all was eating breakfast.He said morning to all and they said back.Then he go to Rin and thanked her for last night.He said to them that they will go to the sea and all was happy.He look at Ern and saw Ern was a bit unsure.
Bank:Ern,don't you want to go?
Ern:Hum?oh,i was just woder i be safe there.(Fake a smile)
Rin:Of course it safe.
Ern:Why not.(Said when she saw all want to go)

At the sea.
When they stepped out of the boat someone was pull Ern t-shirt.She turn and saw Warit.
Ern:Get off.
Warit:Are you come alone?
Ern:No,with my friends.And you?
Warit look at her and just about to answer when Ern saw Duang and say that you are not alone.
Warit:Yes.(Smile and look behind him)
Duang:Hi!(Look at Ern)
Ern:Hi!
Someone was calling Ern and when she look back it was Bank and the other.
Bank:Are you comming?
Ern:I'm leaving.(Go to her friends)

When Ern come back after the rest all was sitting and eat.
Dan:There you are.Come eat with us.
Bank:This is super good.(With full mouth)
When she come and sitt,Rin ask to Ern that she will fallow with them to the concert at the night.I'll probly there said Ern.

At the night.
They go to the concert and it was full of people,Ern waswodering if Warit comming too.
Rin:pin,can you fallow me to buy ice-cream?
Ern:Ok.
Rin:Can you guys go first?I and Pin will come later.(Look at her friends)
Bank:Ok,come fast.There is so many people.

They go and buy ice-cream and when Ern look around she saw Warit and Duang.Ern said to the man if he can do faster.Rin look at her and ask what wrong with her,But when Ern turn at Warit way she saw Akarat was talking with them and look at her.She get afraid and run from there but Rin doesn't know that Ern was gone.Warit saw Ern run.
Warit:Duang,i have something to do.Will come back.(Run)
Mr Akarat look at Warit when he run.
Duang:What's wrong,dad?
Mr Akarat:Nothing,i just thinks that you bf run after the girl.
Duang:Who?Don't make a joke,dad.Warit will never run after another girl when he have me.

When Ern was out of the people she look back,there was none after her.She take a deep breath and smile,She stop smile when she heard breath after her.The one behind her call her Pin,she say to herself that none know her name withought her friends and the name Akarat know is Ern so it will probly not him.She turn back and saw Warit was standing and starr at her.
Ern:Oh,you make me scared.
Warit:Sorry,but why are you run when you saw me?Are my face like a ghost?
Ern:Maybe.(Mumbled)
Warit:Huh?
Ern:Ohh,nothing.I don't run away from you.I just...(She stoped)
She look at Warit she can't say that the one she run away was Akarat who talking with Duang and him.Warit pull her into him when a motorcicle was comming.
Warit:Look around when you drive.(Yell at the man)
Ern look at Warit and Warit look down at her and in accidently kiss her on forehead.They look at each other when they heard someone was screaming.That was Duang.She come and slap Ern,Warit pull her back.
Warit:What are you doing?(Look at Duang)
Duang:You whore,why are you kissing with him when you know i am his gf.
Ern:I'm not.
Are you sure said a voice behind her and is was Akarat.I am said Ern.
Warit:We are not kissing.It's just...(Stop and look at Ern)
Duang:It's just what?(Yell)
Warit:It's just an aciddent.(He saw that Ern look at him)
Duang:Do you heard that,it's was just accident.So don't thinks too much.
Ern:That was i who have to say that,by the way i will never take when they have a owner.(Look at Warit and go)
Akarat:Wait!
Ern heart was about to stop,she thinks that Akarat remember her.She fake a smile and turn back.
Ern:Yes?
Akarat:What's your name?(Ern doesn't say her name and turn back and go)
Warit:Her name is Pin Ployjon.(Look at Ern as she go)
Akarat:pin Ployjon!(Grin)

Rin go to the other that Ern was gone.Bank was angry at Rin b/c she doesn't look at Ern.
Dom:Where did she go withought saying anything?
Bank:That was not Ern's fualt,it's was her.(Starr at Rin)
Dan:We have to go and saerch her.

When Duang and Akarat was at hotel,he said to Duang that he will go and sleep.When he was in his room he thinks about Ern.How can your name turn to be Pin.That why Warit doesn't apprehend you,b/c he doesn't know you was Ern Jarujinda.Even none know you but i can.It's good that none know you so i can kill you by myself before you get me in trouble.(Laugh)

Ern throw stones to the water,you say it's was just accident.She was angry and it was dark.She heard step behind her and get afraid.Why are you standing like a stone said a voice and she remember the voice,she's sure the voice was Warit's.She turn and saw him.
Warit:Sorry.(When she was about to go)
Ern:For what?
Warit:That accident.(Smile)
Ern:Accident?(Yell)
Warit:Why are you yelling?Want me to say...like we are kissing?(Smile when he saw Ern was shying)Hueeyy,want really?
Ern:Are you crazy?
Warit:B/c of you,maybe.(Smile)
Ern:You bastard!(Shouted)
Warit:Do you know why i am not angry at you when you yell and shout like that to me..B/c i lov...(Ern go in)
Ern:Duang is waiting for you.(Go)

When she was at hotel she heard Bank's voice.
Bank:Now we don't know where she is.And how will we do if she was in trouble?All was your fault,Rin.
Ern:That wasn't her fault.
Bank run and hug Ern and Ern saw that Rin was sad.
Dan:Why did you say to her where you go?
Ern:Forgive me,Rin.I saw Mr Akarat.
Dom:Do yo mean?
Ern:Yes,the one who kill my father and do my mother to lay at the hospital.
Bank:Where did you see him?(Worry)
Ern:He talked with Duang and Warit when we go and buy the ice-cream.
Rin:That why you was gone?
Ern:Yes,i want to sleep now.Good night.(Go)

At her room.
How can you say you love me when you have Duang.(Think)

Flashback
B/c of you,maybe.(Smile)
B/c i lov...
B/c of you.
End flashback.



Hope u guys enjoy it..
 

SmileBo

sarNie Juvenile
Ch.8 :blush:

Flashback
B/c of you,maybe.(Smile)
B/ci lov...
B/c of you.
End flashback.

A week later.
Ern and Rin talked with each other and walked.They meet Warit and Duang at the way.
Warit:When will you guy return to Bangkok?(Smile)
Rin:This sunday.(When Ern doesn't say)
Duang:We have to go now.Dad is waiting.
Warit:Excuse me.I'll leave,Pin.
Rin:Oh,today we have a party.Will you come,Warit?
Warit:Of course.Don't you think to invite me,Pin?(Look at Ern)
Ern:You'll come too,right Duang?(Smile at Duang)
Duang:If Warit go,i'll probly be there.(Fake a smile)
Warit:What's wrong with you?(Angry and shouted at Ern b/c she doesn't talk with him)
Ern:I want ice-cream,Rin.(Look at Rin)
Rin:Do you want me to fallow?
Ern:No.(Go)
Duang:Warit,my father is waiting.
Warit:You go first.(Go)

At ice-cream shop.
Ern was just about to say what she want when someone say a banana ice-cream for this lady,pls.
Warit:I know that you love that.(Smile)
Ern:I want...(Stopped of Warit)
Warit:Banana ice-cream,pls and i juice for me,thanks.
Ern go from there and Warit fallow after her and give the ice-cream.
Warit:Take is,pls.(Handed ice-cream)
Ern:I don't want.
Warit:Are you angry at me?
Ern:For what?(Look at him)
Warit:Don't know.Maybe you can say it to me.
Ern:Give my ice-cream.
Warit:Why are you doesn't talk with me?(Handed ice-cream)
Ern:How can i talk with you when Duang was there,what will she think.(Mumbled)
Warit:What did you know?
Ern:Nothing.(Smile)
They heard a voice say is that what you say you don't think the people who have owner.
Warit:Duang!(Turn and saw her)
Duang come and slap Ern and Ern slap back.Somone come and pull Ern back and ask why Ern slap his dughter.
Ern:Didn't you say that your doughter slap me first?
Warit:Uncle,forgive me.That was my fault.
Akarat:That not your fault,that was her.You know that my doughter and Warit was together and you still fallow him.Are you don't shy when you fallow who have a owner?
Ern:I am not like that.

Flashback
She kill her parents b/c of money.
She kill her parents...
Kill her parents b/cof money..
End flashback.

Ern:The one who fallow was your doughter not me.Your doughter do that b/c you learn that to her,you murder.(Yell)
Warit:pin,Stop!(Shouted)
Akarat:What did you say?(Look around)
Ern:You are a murder..(Yell)
Warit:Enough now,Pin.
Ern:I'm not!(Shouted at Warit)
Warit come and slap Ern and she look at her.
Warit:pin,i...(He can't believe that he slap her)
Ern run from there and Akarat and Duang smile.
 

SmileBo

sarNie Juvenile
Hope u guys enjoy this...
I just want to say that i want to take a break from this ff,b/c i planning to make a new one.
I'll uploud again more than u guys doesn't have to wait... :wub:

Hope u guys understand me...
 

maichi

sarNie Hatchling
Ahhhhhhh!!! Dont leave me
hanging like that!! PLZ
PLZ PLZ update it
soonnnnn! Thank you! :p

I feel bad for Ern!!
 

maichi

sarNie Hatchling
Ahhhhhhh!!! Dont leave me
hanging like that!! PLZ
PLZ PLZ update it
soonnnnn! Thank you! :p

I feel bad for Ern!!
 

SmileBo

sarNie Juvenile
After all i was thinking to post this to the end,so that i can write the other one easy...So here is ch.9



Ern run from there,Akarat and Duang smile.

At the night.
Ern was crying at her room when she heard a knock at the door.She asked who that is and it's was Bank.Bank ask her if she dress yet b/c they are late.You guy go first,i will fallow later said Ern.Meet you at the party then said Bank and go.

At the party.
There was many people,they sing song and dance with each other.When Warit doesn't saw Ern he to Rin to ask where Ern is.
Rin:She is at home.
Warit:Will she be here?
Rin:Ahm,i thinks....(She heard that Bank call her)Sorry,i have to go.
Warit:Thanks.(Fake a smile)

When he turn back he saw Ern,he was about to call her but she doesn't look at his way and go to Bank and Rin.
Bank:You are comming.The dance will start soon.
Rin:Why are you late?
Ern:Something come up.(Smile)

Now is dance time said the microphone.The people take their patner and dance.
Bank:May i have this dance with you?(Give hand and look at Ern)
Ern:Rin is better than me.(Smile and nod at Rin)

Bank take Rin and go dance,all was dancing.Warit saw that Ern was sitting so he said to Duang to go dance with her father.Ern was sitting and think about that Warit slap her when she heard someone ask her to dance with.She looked up and it's was Warit.Ern look around and the people look at them and smile,a old woman nod at her.She look at Warit who smile at her,he take his hand and go dance without saying a word.Duang saw them dancing.
Duang:Look at Warit,dad.He left me with you b/c he want to go dance with her.I hate her so much.
Akarat:I won't let someone who get my doughter hurt free.We go near them and then you take Warit's hand so he can dance with you.
Duang:What about Pin?
Akarat:Do like i say!

When Warit was about to say sorry to Ern,Duand and her father go near them and Duang do like what her father said to her.Akarat took Ern and go away from Duang and Warit.
Akarat:Do you know why Warit slaped you yesterday?
Ern:I don't want to know.(Look at another way)
Akarat:B/c he love my doughter.Do you know when we go back home,he ask me to get Duang and him to merry.
Ern:sorry,i don't want to dance more.(Go from him)

Ern cry and think about what Pong said to her when she heard many step behind her.She turn back and saw several men.She be screed and about to run when the man push her so she fall down.They take her to a car and she scream so much she can to get help.When she was inside the car she heard someone say to the men to get off her.It's was Warit,then he fight with the men.Warit come and take Ern out of the car.
Warit:pin,are you ok?
Ern:Yes.(Cry and huge him)

She scream when she saw a man point the gun at them and Warit kick the man,he took Ern's hand and run.The man fallow after them and shoot.They was near the sea when Warit got shoot,they jumped to the water and when the man look down he saw blood.

At the morning.
Bank wake up and go do the breakfast and then come Rin and Dom in.
Rin:Morning,Bank.
Bank:Morning.(Smile)
Dom:Where is Dan,didn't he wake up yet?(Look around)
Bank:Finish with breakfast.Wait at the table i will go and call Dan and Ern.

At Dan's room.
Bank:Dan,time to eat.(Knock)
Dan:Comming.(Yell)
He go to Ern's room and call her but none answer.He scream and call Rin to come.
Rin:Why are you screamming?This is early in the morning.(Shouted)
Bank:Sorry,but i can't call Ern.Can you go and see if something wrong?
Rin go in but she didn't saw Ern.She isn't here said Rin to Bank.
Bank:What you mean?(Worry)
Rin:Maybe she is outside and take a walk.
Bank:It can't be.I will go and see.(Go)

After a few minute.
Did you find her ask Bank to Dan.Nopp said Dan and smile.
Bank:Don't smile,i am serious now.You,Rin?
Rin:Don't saw her.
Dom:Maybe she meet her friends and go with them.
Bank:She have no friends,Dom.Don't forgot that she is Pin not Ern.
Dom:Oh yes,i almost forgot that.
Dan:Maybe she is with the police.
Rin:police?!(Scream)
Dan:I mean the one she dance with yesterday.
Bank:Do you know which hotel he stay at?
Rin:I know.(Smile)

They go to the hotel where Warit live.They meet Akarat and Duang.
Duang:What are you guys doing here?
Bank:We come and saerch Warit.
Akarat:Why?(Look at his doughter)
Rin:B/c Pin is gone and we think she is with Warit.
Duang:It's can't be.Warit will never take Pin to his room.
Bank:We have to see first.
They knock the door but none answer.
Duang:Dad,do you think something happen with Warit?(Worry)
Akarat:No,darling.(Smile)
Bank:I will go and call the door guard to come open the door.(Run)

Enjoys.....:)
 

maichi

sarNie Hatchling
AAHHHH!!where the rest!! i wanted to know what happen to them!! Awwww.... i still feel bad for Pin(Ern). ihope that she can kept up and know that Warit love him even though he doesnt know that!!

Thanks for the update!! I hope that u have time to update it again cause we r waiting for the rest of this fanfic!! :p :D :) :wub:
 

dancy

sarNie Oldmaid
Aww so sad you going to end this story so soon. I love it. I hope you update soon. Can't wait to the rest of the story.
 

SmileBo

sarNie Juvenile
See that everyone was waiting...

Ch.10

Bank:I will go and call the door guard to come open the door.(Run)

The phone call on Akarat.He keeep it and look,that was from the man who shoot Ern and Warit.
Akarat:Hello,why are you calling me now?
The man:I just want to say that...(Stop)
Akarat:Say what?(Go away from Duang)Don't say that you can't finish your job.(Yell)
The man:We have but Warit come and help her.
Akarat:What?(Shouted)
The man:But they got shoot and jumped to the water.
Akarat:How do you guy do the job.(Hung up)
When he turn back Duang was standing behind him.
Duang:Who's that?
Akarat:Oh,my workmate.(Smile)
Duang:The guard open the door now,come.(Took her dad's hand)

They didn't saw Warit,Duang call to Warit's phone but Warit phone was laying on his bed.
Duang:He didn't take his phone with him.
Bank:Something is wrong,we have to stay and saerch them.
Rin:Did you mean that we have to stay untill Pin come?(Look at Bank)
Bank:Yes,i'm not leaving her.(Go)

Ern wake up and look around,she saw a old man who take a look at the one who is laying.Where am i ask she.You are in my house said the old man kindly.She ask how she get here and the old man said that he saw Ern and Warit beside the sea,they was fainthing so he took them to his home.Ern look around the house and is was broken here and there.
Ern:Will he be fine?(Pointed at Warit)
Old man:Yes,but he is sick and have lose so much of his blood.We have to get him some medicine before is late.
Ern:Do you mean that if we can't get the medicine he will...
Old man:I don't mean like that,my child.He will be more sick if we can't get the medicine.
Ern:Where can i go take the medicine than?
Old man:You don't know the way here,by the way is take one day to go.I will go and you look at him.
Ern:Thanks.
Old man:Feel like your home.(Go)

At the night.
Ern look at Warit and cry.
Ern:Don't be someting.You have to wake up,Warit.I have to say thanks to you for helping me.Wake up.(Shouted)Why are you slepping,i say you to wake up.

At the hotel.
Bank:Where did you go.Why didn't you take your phone with you,Ern.
Rin:I think Ern is in danger.
Dom:Don't say like that.We are worry about her.

At the old man house.
Ern was sitting and look at Warit all the night,when the old man come Ern was sleeping beside Waritand hold his hand.The old man wake her up.
Ern:Do you have the medicine?
Old man:Yes,i will give it to him,by the way what is your name?(Look at Ern)
Ern:My name is Er...(Stopped)

Flashback.
From now on your name is Pin not Ern..
Pin not Ern.
End flashback.

Ern:That's right,i have almost forgot that.
Old man:What do you say?(Look at Ern)
Ern:Do you have mirror?
Old man:No,but i have a little bit of the mirror over there.

Ern go and take a look at herself.He will probly remember Ern like this.She have no black on her eyes,she look around and saw a saucepan and she took the blask of the saucepan and put is on hers eyes.
Old man:What are you doing with your face?
Ern:I like to do like this.(Smile)
Old man:Name?
Ern:pin.

After a few minute.
Why didn't he wake up said Ern to the old man.He will said him back.They wait more than a hours but Warit didn't wake up.Ern go to Warit.

Ern:Warit,wake up.Can you hear me,i say wait up,Warit.(Cry and scream)
Old man:Take easy.You are tired now,go and take a rest.

Ern run from the house.She go and sitt under the tree beside water wall.She cry.
Ern:That was my fault that you been like this.If we haven't meet,maybe is good for you.
No sais a voice.She turn and saw Warit and run to Warit and hug him.
Warit:My life was more vivad the day i have meet you.(He look down and saw that Ern was crying)The uncle say that you was worry about me.Thanks for that.
Ern:The one who have to say thanks was me.Glad that you is wake up.(Hug harder)That you for helped me that night,i don't know how my life will be if you don't come and help.
Warit:Don't thinks about it more,ok.(Hug her)

Warit look at Ern and they was about to kiss when the old man come,they be shy when they saw the old man.
Old man:Sorry,you guy can go eat now.So you have energy.
Ern:Thank you for helped us.
Old man:It's ok.(Smile)You guy seen to love each other very much,have you guy merry?
No said Warit and Ern.
Old man:What are you guy waiting?When i saw you guy like this,i miss my wife.
Warit:Where is she?
Old man:Heaven.
Ern:Sorry about that.(Feel pity for him)

Enjoy!!:)
 

SmileBo

sarNie Juvenile
AAHHHH!!where the rest!! i wanted to know what happen to them!! Awwww.... i still feel bad for Pin(Ern). ihope that she can kept up and know that Warit love him even though he doesnt know that!!

Thanks for the update!! I hope that u have time to update it again cause we r waiting for the rest of this fanfic!! :p :D :) :wub:

Suck that Warit doesn't know he love her... :rolleyes:
 
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