tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
OMG she leaped onto him three times...whoa....
My Enemy
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lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
^^ she's quit the leaper.. hehe
but... I'm still shocked.. my guess is.. she thinks they already commited a sin.. so why not?? It's deeper than what she is claiming, "seal the deal."
but... I'm still shocked.. my guess is.. she thinks they already commited a sin.. so why not?? It's deeper than what she is claiming, "seal the deal."
sarN
sarNie Granny
She clutch onto his t-shirt from either side of his hip and press her body against his hard chest, lord the thin shirt does him no justice! Those womanly figure shape it self to fit warmly in his arm and she kiss him on the lip with such clumsiness, he nearly took control but restrain his mouth from assaulting her!
Patta slide his hand downward to knock her finger from tagging on to his shirt but she resist to remove those shaking hand of her . He was weaken by each passing minute this is wrong so wrong so forbidden and yet feel so good , he beak the kiss by jolting his head away . He stare into her watery eye and knew she was forcing herself , he admire the courage and loyalty that she obtain . If she was a stranger , dear lord ..he probable taken her already but this -- is his sister !
"we can't" his voice was soft while reach up to care her face , wiping the drop of tear with his thump. Then he spread his hand on her cheek , lightly pat it.
She was shock by his sudden change of behavior , he was gentle with his finger and his eye seen so warm . But it still doesn't change the fact he is lying about the ordeal ! He clearly stated when they were at the diamond shop , he willing to give up Kaping and Palin in exchange for her ! If he doesn''t sleep with her that mean he have no reason to keep his side of the bargain ! NO! She cant' let that be ! She know it a sin a terrible mistake but moral is the last thing on her mind! All she want is her mom to be free from this monster !
"you started this game. And you must finish it "
"little aff"? he sigh and run his thump across her lip ..
She held her breath and kiss him again , demanding and scratching against his rib ! Urging him to seal the deal while her body trembling with tear , she was mad at him and hating herself for being a dang whore and the man not even responding ! WhY! Why !! Bastard!! O' how she felt so humiliated and hurt , not knowing what to do but cry into his shoulder .
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Patta was sadden , having to see how determine she is and couldn't resist embracing her tightly within his arm and felt her body shudder, there nothing more to say but listen to what sound as if two heart beating off rhythm. No more tear was shred and no more cry was heard , nothing but silent exchange of their pulses. He roll her to the side , with her back on the mattress and he was hovering over her . They stare into each other eye , fully aware what will come and his last attempt to save themselves from committing another sin was a simple question
"why is it have to be you ?" he sigh and watch her eye close to receive his kiss ..a sinful kiss that will lead them to a world of passion , that he try so hard to deny but no longer can restrain . His lip became passionate and his hand eagerly explores her sweet body as if the sensation was new to him. She was breathless beneath him and was nervous by his sudden surge of desire , she was trembling all over and protest against his assault ! He clearly understand why because their first time wasn't sweet nor willingly, its normal for her to be afraid of him !
"little Aff . I won't hurt you this time "? he whisper into her ear and smoothen her worry with his light kiss along her eye and cheek .
She nodded her head in respond while burying her claw into his back , she want to hurt him or at least give him pain . She still hate this man and the only reason she willing to sink this low and cast this sin upon herself was for ..her mother . The world probable going hate them and disgusted by their sinful relationship ! With that in mind , she felt a tightness in her chest and started to cry because the next morning she will live with another guilt ! Her child is one and now him!
Patta slide his hand downward to knock her finger from tagging on to his shirt but she resist to remove those shaking hand of her . He was weaken by each passing minute this is wrong so wrong so forbidden and yet feel so good , he beak the kiss by jolting his head away . He stare into her watery eye and knew she was forcing herself , he admire the courage and loyalty that she obtain . If she was a stranger , dear lord ..he probable taken her already but this -- is his sister !
"we can't" his voice was soft while reach up to care her face , wiping the drop of tear with his thump. Then he spread his hand on her cheek , lightly pat it.
She was shock by his sudden change of behavior , he was gentle with his finger and his eye seen so warm . But it still doesn't change the fact he is lying about the ordeal ! He clearly stated when they were at the diamond shop , he willing to give up Kaping and Palin in exchange for her ! If he doesn''t sleep with her that mean he have no reason to keep his side of the bargain ! NO! She cant' let that be ! She know it a sin a terrible mistake but moral is the last thing on her mind! All she want is her mom to be free from this monster !
"you started this game. And you must finish it "
"little aff"? he sigh and run his thump across her lip ..
She held her breath and kiss him again , demanding and scratching against his rib ! Urging him to seal the deal while her body trembling with tear , she was mad at him and hating herself for being a dang whore and the man not even responding ! WhY! Why !! Bastard!! O' how she felt so humiliated and hurt , not knowing what to do but cry into his shoulder .
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Patta was sadden , having to see how determine she is and couldn't resist embracing her tightly within his arm and felt her body shudder, there nothing more to say but listen to what sound as if two heart beating off rhythm. No more tear was shred and no more cry was heard , nothing but silent exchange of their pulses. He roll her to the side , with her back on the mattress and he was hovering over her . They stare into each other eye , fully aware what will come and his last attempt to save themselves from committing another sin was a simple question
"why is it have to be you ?" he sigh and watch her eye close to receive his kiss ..a sinful kiss that will lead them to a world of passion , that he try so hard to deny but no longer can restrain . His lip became passionate and his hand eagerly explores her sweet body as if the sensation was new to him. She was breathless beneath him and was nervous by his sudden surge of desire , she was trembling all over and protest against his assault ! He clearly understand why because their first time wasn't sweet nor willingly, its normal for her to be afraid of him !
"little Aff . I won't hurt you this time "? he whisper into her ear and smoothen her worry with his light kiss along her eye and cheek .
She nodded her head in respond while burying her claw into his back , she want to hurt him or at least give him pain . She still hate this man and the only reason she willing to sink this low and cast this sin upon herself was for ..her mother . The world probable going hate them and disgusted by their sinful relationship ! With that in mind , she felt a tightness in her chest and started to cry because the next morning she will live with another guilt ! Her child is one and now him!
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
I find this scene really sad and somewhat heartbreaking... and oddly romantic. Damn.. sarN.. you making me feel all kinds of emotions there, girl!!
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
ow...you're killing me slowly yet painfully sarn....each minute closer to making sin....COME ON!...jk...lol.... 
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lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
^^ I feel you miss RR.
amikrazie
sarNie Oldmaid
Oh my dear lord!!!..that was such a brilliant fic SarN....i cant wait to read more...YES i am finally caught up ..
i forgot to ask you something the other night ...i will wait ..i think i can!
thinking outloud to myself: i just cant see how they can be together at the end...the incest thingy.. without being marked as the outcast in their society, from the sins they have fallen into!
i forgot to ask you something the other night
...i will wait ..i think i can!thinking outloud to myself: i just cant see how they can be together at the end...the incest thingy.. without being marked as the outcast in their society, from the sins they have fallen into!
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
what a tragic love..
I would hate to be in love with someone I can't be with.. poor souls. I hope something gives at the end.
I would hate to be in love with someone I can't be with.. poor souls. I hope something gives at the end.
amikrazie
sarNie Oldmaid
back to stalking the thread....again!
gosh..we are so used to the typical guy meets girl, flirts, slap & kiss, r, baby, happy ending storyline..this one just got us off guard..doesnt it???!!!
i like how SarN likes to throw obstacles or twist i might say..into this one..i just cant wait to see what it will turn out to be ...will the baby survive..to see daylight? will the parents get to be together without being hated & digusted by their society? will they come together as a normal family again..or will this family end up in misery or death (s) even..??? so many questions ...so little answers!
hahah and most importantly will patta lose his control & forget all bout the sins hes bout to commit ...AGAIN!??!!
gosh..we are so used to the typical guy meets girl, flirts, slap & kiss, r, baby, happy ending storyline..this one just got us off guard..doesnt it???!!!
i like how SarN likes to throw obstacles or twist i might say..into this one..i just cant wait to see what it will turn out to be ...will the baby survive..to see daylight? will the parents get to be together without being hated & digusted by their society? will they come together as a normal family again..or will this family end up in misery or death (s) even..??? so many questions ...so little answers!
hahah and most importantly will patta lose his control & forget all bout the sins hes bout to commit ...AGAIN!??!!
sarN
sarNie Granny
The next morning they woke up side by side in his huge bed with just a thin sheet cover their nakedness from the sin they created last night. They remain silent , aware of each other presence and dare not turn to the side , knowing they will see one another.
He remain motionless and stare into the ceiling as guilt roam his mind to an endless journey of regret, he know clearly this is wrong but yet he give in to desire. He a monster ! He wonder whats going on in her mind? Patta sigh , he broke the silent as his eye fix on the ceiling "little Aff... are you ok"? he waited for a response and prepare his heart .
She draw both hand to the center of her chest and cling the sheet against her bosom , as she search for words . Her eye travel downward to the bare feet that was visible and then she saw his bare feet, realizing the intimacy she allow to happen .Regardless how much she hate this man , right now she felt embarrass and want to bury her face under the sheet. She dismiss the thought and said "..i...want to leave .."
"yes, you must while it still early and everyone is a sleep"
The words knock her senses together , he is right but when she recollect his word again she felt left out in the cold . Of course! It only serve her right to be treated as one of his slut, now that he finish with her body she must leave before someone see her! "yes, u are right . i only come for the pleasure and must leave when its over "
The sarcasm ring into his ear and he turn to the side to catch those tear rolling down her cheek. O' why his hand aches to gather her into his arm and kiss all those tear away and make promises to her but he restrain himself from scooping close . Instead watch her slip out of the bed and grab the night grown off the floor , dress her self and hurry out the door .
He scramble to sit up and stare at the wide open door where she run out. Now , he is left with another problem on hand ! How can he balance 3 women at the same time ? Stupid ! Stupid! Last night was a mistake and he knew the outcome will destroy him at the end because now his heart is drowning ..drowning in a pool of sin , he want her and it show how much when he hold her that night. His head is swamp with images of her , those sweet lip and wonderful woman scent that fill his nasal. Before it was only wishful thinking but now that he fully had her in a willingly way -- without being drug by his mother, it felt complete! Dear lord --he is trap!!
Aff went into her room and take a long shower , washing every spot of her body that remind her of that monster ! Afterward , she went down to have breakfast with the family and while eating her meal , she avoid eye contact with everyone at the table. Patta come down the stair several moment later and walk pass the dinning room , he catch a glance of her but decided to skip breakfast . He not ready to face her yet and left to work early .
Later that evening , Brook came over and had an argument with Aff . He was furious at her sudden announcement to cancel the wedding and ask her what had he done wrong ?
"im not ready to settle down yet "
"but I love you ! You can't just stop everything like this ! People will wonder and talk about us for years to come ! Is it because you have someone else in mind ?"
"no , no , this is my decision only"
Brook violently throw his hand in the air and shake his head in disbelief "listen , I don't have time for your childish game , who is the guy !!"? his voice became loud and threaten , only because he is jealous and suspicious of foul play .
"I told you im not ready ! im sorry " tear fill her eye , how can she tell him the reason was because she slept with her own brother , for the sake of saving everyone in the house .
The answer only angry him more ! Brook launch at her and grab both end of her shoulder, shaking her while shouting into her face "tell me , truth !!"
Patta return from work and heard loud voices coming from the living room , he follow the sound and saw Brook "hey ! let her go !" he shouted and run across the room , yanking Brook's arm away
"this is none of your business !! between me and my fiancée only !!"? Brook shouted back
Patta avoid the bastard and turn his attention to Aff , cupping her cheek and draw them toward his eye "are you ok ? is he hurting you ? little aff" his eye was soften and searches her face for pain . He sigh in relief once she stare back into his eye, there was a moment of communion and for the first time ever ..she saw his smile.
"hey !! I was talking to her !!"? shouted Brook from the background
Patta turn around and loosen his tie "listen , if my sister say she not ready she not ready ..accept her decision she only 18 , give her time"
Brook was going crazy , pacing back and fore "no , this have nothing to do with age . It someone else isn't it !!"
Patta look to the side where Aff was standing and saw her teary eye , he knew it was because of him that causes her to break up with the man she love . Patta felt responsible and want to clear her name by stepping in front of her , hiding her face with his back and said "trust me , my sister isn't those type of girl . she not seeing anyone . she need time . she still young and exploring life"
Brook calm down and begin to understand, he then sigh and said "I...I'm sorry I over reacted . I should leave now and tell my elder" Brook lower his head in shame for barging into the house and act like a manic. He turn away and left the house .
Aff step out from behind Patta and watch Brook sadly walk away. Then she turn away to face the monster with teary eye "you a good lair"
"little Aff "? his hand reach out to wipe those tear drop , if only she know how much he care
She push his hand away and run up stair to her room , once inside she panic and felt strange inside as if her body is about to explode . Not understanding herself , she went into the bathroom and stare at her reflection in the mirror, then lightly touching her cheek , tracing back his invisible hand print with her finger ....
Meanwhile , Patta was left standing in the living room with his eye trailing the stair way unaware of Kaping presence , hiding herself in the background . She had stood there the whole time and saw everything that happen . She grow suspicious of Patta and her daughter relationship ! Surely, there must be something between the two ? Why does her daughter act so sensitive when Patta touches her ? Kaping was a bit jealous at the thought her daughter might have some spacial feeling toward Patta ! She want to get to the bottom of this ! She must know the truth behind Patta action , he must be hiding a secret from her and Kaping is determine to know what it is !
He remain motionless and stare into the ceiling as guilt roam his mind to an endless journey of regret, he know clearly this is wrong but yet he give in to desire. He a monster ! He wonder whats going on in her mind? Patta sigh , he broke the silent as his eye fix on the ceiling "little Aff... are you ok"? he waited for a response and prepare his heart .
She draw both hand to the center of her chest and cling the sheet against her bosom , as she search for words . Her eye travel downward to the bare feet that was visible and then she saw his bare feet, realizing the intimacy she allow to happen .Regardless how much she hate this man , right now she felt embarrass and want to bury her face under the sheet. She dismiss the thought and said "..i...want to leave .."
"yes, you must while it still early and everyone is a sleep"
The words knock her senses together , he is right but when she recollect his word again she felt left out in the cold . Of course! It only serve her right to be treated as one of his slut, now that he finish with her body she must leave before someone see her! "yes, u are right . i only come for the pleasure and must leave when its over "
The sarcasm ring into his ear and he turn to the side to catch those tear rolling down her cheek. O' why his hand aches to gather her into his arm and kiss all those tear away and make promises to her but he restrain himself from scooping close . Instead watch her slip out of the bed and grab the night grown off the floor , dress her self and hurry out the door .
He scramble to sit up and stare at the wide open door where she run out. Now , he is left with another problem on hand ! How can he balance 3 women at the same time ? Stupid ! Stupid! Last night was a mistake and he knew the outcome will destroy him at the end because now his heart is drowning ..drowning in a pool of sin , he want her and it show how much when he hold her that night. His head is swamp with images of her , those sweet lip and wonderful woman scent that fill his nasal. Before it was only wishful thinking but now that he fully had her in a willingly way -- without being drug by his mother, it felt complete! Dear lord --he is trap!!
Aff went into her room and take a long shower , washing every spot of her body that remind her of that monster ! Afterward , she went down to have breakfast with the family and while eating her meal , she avoid eye contact with everyone at the table. Patta come down the stair several moment later and walk pass the dinning room , he catch a glance of her but decided to skip breakfast . He not ready to face her yet and left to work early .
Later that evening , Brook came over and had an argument with Aff . He was furious at her sudden announcement to cancel the wedding and ask her what had he done wrong ?
"im not ready to settle down yet "
"but I love you ! You can't just stop everything like this ! People will wonder and talk about us for years to come ! Is it because you have someone else in mind ?"
"no , no , this is my decision only"
Brook violently throw his hand in the air and shake his head in disbelief "listen , I don't have time for your childish game , who is the guy !!"? his voice became loud and threaten , only because he is jealous and suspicious of foul play .
"I told you im not ready ! im sorry " tear fill her eye , how can she tell him the reason was because she slept with her own brother , for the sake of saving everyone in the house .
The answer only angry him more ! Brook launch at her and grab both end of her shoulder, shaking her while shouting into her face "tell me , truth !!"
Patta return from work and heard loud voices coming from the living room , he follow the sound and saw Brook "hey ! let her go !" he shouted and run across the room , yanking Brook's arm away
"this is none of your business !! between me and my fiancée only !!"? Brook shouted back
Patta avoid the bastard and turn his attention to Aff , cupping her cheek and draw them toward his eye "are you ok ? is he hurting you ? little aff" his eye was soften and searches her face for pain . He sigh in relief once she stare back into his eye, there was a moment of communion and for the first time ever ..she saw his smile.
"hey !! I was talking to her !!"? shouted Brook from the background
Patta turn around and loosen his tie "listen , if my sister say she not ready she not ready ..accept her decision she only 18 , give her time"
Brook was going crazy , pacing back and fore "no , this have nothing to do with age . It someone else isn't it !!"
Patta look to the side where Aff was standing and saw her teary eye , he knew it was because of him that causes her to break up with the man she love . Patta felt responsible and want to clear her name by stepping in front of her , hiding her face with his back and said "trust me , my sister isn't those type of girl . she not seeing anyone . she need time . she still young and exploring life"
Brook calm down and begin to understand, he then sigh and said "I...I'm sorry I over reacted . I should leave now and tell my elder" Brook lower his head in shame for barging into the house and act like a manic. He turn away and left the house .
Aff step out from behind Patta and watch Brook sadly walk away. Then she turn away to face the monster with teary eye "you a good lair"
"little Aff "? his hand reach out to wipe those tear drop , if only she know how much he care
She push his hand away and run up stair to her room , once inside she panic and felt strange inside as if her body is about to explode . Not understanding herself , she went into the bathroom and stare at her reflection in the mirror, then lightly touching her cheek , tracing back his invisible hand print with her finger ....
Meanwhile , Patta was left standing in the living room with his eye trailing the stair way unaware of Kaping presence , hiding herself in the background . She had stood there the whole time and saw everything that happen . She grow suspicious of Patta and her daughter relationship ! Surely, there must be something between the two ? Why does her daughter act so sensitive when Patta touches her ? Kaping was a bit jealous at the thought her daughter might have some spacial feeling toward Patta ! She want to get to the bottom of this ! She must know the truth behind Patta action , he must be hiding a secret from her and Kaping is determine to know what it is !
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
i'll be back to finish this! I've got some rented movies to watch with the boyfriend. can't wait to read this!
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
ok I'm back.. he decided to watch movies later..
Good update, sarN.
I can't believe Kapin.. that woman is crazy to be jealous of her own daughter... it's like she don't even care about what her daughter may be going through.
Good update, sarN.
I can't believe Kapin.. that woman is crazy to be jealous of her own daughter... it's like she don't even care about what her daughter may be going through.
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
kaping is always suspicious lol....patta DO whatever you can do to get aff....win her over...FIGHTIN'