My Enemy

amikrazie

sarNie Oldmaid
wth..rahut youre pretty good with the banner/wally/siggy too..shoot ..now you can show me how to use PS!! *since you stay up just as late as me if not later.. :lol:
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
me good? wth...no....i'm a beginneer...not good at all....but i try^^ i will try to help you too lol....hey you are on later than me....i do have to dream of aum.....so i do need my rest :loool:
 

sarN

sarNie Granny
The following week Patta appear before the judge and was put to the stand while the prosecutor cross examine him. There was no lawyer on the defenses side beside Mr.Tia , the probation officer that was appointed to handle his case. Mr.Taksorn and Aff was the only family member that came to court , Patta was touch but at the same time sad because they have to hear his confession .

"why did you kill your mother .." said the prosecutor while pacing himself back and fore

"no reason"

The prosecutor smirked and turn toward the jury to justify what been said by the defenses, "there we have it , a man with no reason but to kill his own mother by poisoning her , according to the lab result he repeatedly poison her for several week ! He could easily stop but he ..didn't!!! His intention is to make his mother suffer !!!"?

A throbbing pain coming from inside Patta's chest was bursting in tear after hearing the prosecutor's statement!!! He suddenly have flash back into his childhood memory , when Rosa was holding him in her arm and swinging him in the air. The laughter and smile from her was so real he could almost feel her presence before his eye , it sadden him so so deeply that tears begin to form . He no longer hear what the prosecutor was saying or shouting because his mind is lingering in the past , when he was love and care by Rosa . She was the shelter he run too when he was depress , she was more than just a mother she was the only warmth he ever known. He ended her life ..he kill her , even though she forgive him but it doesn't erase the guilt that tormented his mind and soul .

"im guilty . Please , do not question me anymore "? he bang his fist onto the bench handle to silent the prosecutor and bitterly bit his lip to stop it from trembling , tear begin to flow down his face . The jury was scar by his action and have a positive impression , the man is insane ! But when they saw the tear and hear his soft cries , they begin to have sympathize toward the young man . Mr.Taksorn and Aff couldn't bear to see him in grief , they know Patta is hurt by all the question and assumption made by the prosecutor but there nothing they can do but witness all his pain in the court room .

"young man , calm down . I will not have this in my court.." said the Judge and then waited for several sec "if you plead guilty . The punishment could be a death sentence or life. Is there anything you want to say to the jury ? This is your last chance"

"I..I"? he look toward the people stand and saw the love of his life smiling at him . O' how it felt so wonderful to see those smile in a time when he most needed. He can see the tear glittering in her eye but yet she continue to smile , as if she understand and willing to accept what ever decision he made . Patta turn to face the jury and said "Please give me a fair sentence . I had committed a sin by killing the woman that loved me more anything in this world . A person like me doesn't deserve to be happy or forgiven by anyone. I'm a monster. Put me out of my miserable"? he finish by closing his eye and imagine himself embracing his real mother one last time.

Aff was overwhelm by his speech and quickly rise from her seat to exit out the door , she walk away with tear stain on her face . Yes. This must be the end. She want to hate him but she can't because she love him and the tear that shredding , is for herself . She is stupid for loving such a selfish person! Foolish to want something so forbidden so sinful yet her heart yearn for him . Love is painful, from the moment she decided to wait for him and no matter what's the outcome is , there no turning back with this feeling .
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
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I hope something takes a turn... Patta cannot be sentenced to death! NO!
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
stalker moh...hmmm maybe you can be a stalker in my lakorn lmao....gn moh....talk to you later^^ sweet dreams of se7en and chakrit.....bye
 

amikrazie

sarNie Oldmaid
awww ...where the heck is that nana..or aka saipoon!!!!???? she needs to dragged her behind out here and confess that shes the puppeteer behind it all...


i no longer feel sorry for her doing...bout time she does something right for the sake of her son ...or her grand child i should say.. <_<
 

amikrazie

sarNie Oldmaid
sighh... I wish I can go visit Patta in jail.. it must be so cold in there.

LMAO lome...as i was just being sad..your comments cracks me up!!!!

btw thank you SarN for the update..that i was a bit behind to read...i fell asleep again last night..kickboxing wearing me out..or is it cause im too out of shape!!...gonna do the new moves i learn today and drop kick that sick lady saipoon...
 

sarN

sarNie Granny
The court was dismissed and the final hearing will be next week. Patta was escorted by two officer, they return him back into the dark cell and slide the bar door shut. Mr.Taksorn came out the court room and search for his daughter, he found her sitting outside on the bench crying.

"darling , lets goes home"

"is it really over for him?"

Mr.Taksorn sigh , "we won't know till next week"

"daddy, ¦I..I.."? she look up into her fathe's eye and continue "I love him .."

"u realize what you're saying ? "

"yes , does it seen like im desperate ? Scorn at me. Hate me. I have sinned"

"how can I? You're my daughter and I love you dearly. But---"

"you disapprove of us , right ? ."

Mr.Taksorn move to sit beside her and reach out to take her hand in his "what if I say ...i disapprove ?"

"then forgive me for going against you"

"even after all he had done , you still want this man "

"I forgive him"

Mr.Taksorn laugh softly , "Rosa, me and now you , he is very lucky to have such forgiveness from us " he sigh "do what ever your heart desire. You have my blessing. Everyone is hurt enough and if I can untie a little happiness into my family , im willing to risk it all"

"thank you .."? she smile and embrace her father

"I always spoil you the most " Mr.Taksorn held his daughter , though his approve is immoral but he is happy with his decision. He doesn't want to destroy any more life with his selfishness like in the past. He had already knew that his daughter and Patta love each other from the way they look at each other . Full with such longing and hurt , love should be a wonderful feeling and either of them should be hurt because of it . Yes. Its a sin and forbidden but rule are meant to be broken or at least for this couple, he can only hope for the best and give his blessing to his children.

The following day at Bankok correction center , Patta was brought up to the main office to sign a release paper . He was puzzle and ask the officer lady "who bond me out ?"

"me .."said Mr.Taksorn and sign below his son signature

"father , why ? "

"just for 2 days , come on "

"but you put up so much money"€?

"I believe in you , it's not like you going to escape . Beside, it just money but you're my son .."he smile and waited till the officer unlock the handcuff . Patta's hand was free , he immediately put it together and bow his head toward his father . Thanking him.

"where are you taking me ? "

"home but you must change first"

Patta change into a suit and tie , before he left the men restroom he caught his own reflection in the mirror . He look wore out and there was facial hair all around his chin . They left the police station and went into the car that was waiting for them outside. During the whole trip back to the residence , Patta couldn't help but wonder why all the sudden his father is willing to bond him out when he particularly request no help from anyone ? But on the other thought , he was happy because this mean he will get to see little Aff before the court hearing . The car stop at Taksorn's residence.

He got out of the car and stood there gazing at the house where he once live with ..Rosa, sweet memory washes over and all he can see was smile from the woman that rise him with love and warmth. He held his breath and walk across the lawn , following behind his father , all the way to the back yard . He froze and said "what is all this ? " he turn to his father to search for answer

"i spoil her to much"

Patta turn his attention back to the scenery before him , amaze at how it was arrange with flower of all type displaying its beauty along the sidewalk, it trail all the way to the center where a heart shape pillars stood and on it was decorated with hundred of red roses wrapping it's vine all around the gap and on the grass was thousand of white roses scattering on the ground like heavenly cloud . The scene was beautiful and his heart was racing once he realize the whole picture. This can't be true . It must be a dream and he is about to wake up any minute . Suddenly , in the mist of his wondering she appear before his eye , in a white bridal dress and holding a bouquet . He must be in ..heaven .

"little aff "

"this is unlady like but will your marry me ? "? she blush like rose bush and held out her hand

"I..I can't ..you will have no future with me and we ..can't ..it a sin ..it..it "

"you have my blessing "said Mr.Taksorn

Patta was in tear as the words echo in his ear , never in his life would he imagine such happiness and gratitude . "a person like me doesn't deserve such ..love from you ittle aff "? his forehead frown and his eye soften as he reach out to hold her hand .

"but my heart have room for a person like you "? she smile with tear of happiness and if god permit , she wish time will stop right now

"if you marry me ..people will gossip and your reputation will be tarnish"

"I had thought about the consequences over and over but at the end , my heart rule over moral . I admire your love for Rosa , it touches me and it made me understand you more than ever "

"but im a monster in your eye"

"yes , you were and I hated you"

"little aff " his eye was sad and full of shame

"but it difference now because you prove yourself and im willing to accept your decision at all cost but you must accept mine"

"I love you ..so much " tear stream down his face , a man as weak as him shouldn't be walking around with such beauty -- but he couldn't hold the tear of joy and let it flow down slowly

"stop it . that my role .."? she laugh softly while wiping her own

"sorry , im so happy"

"Rosa was right , no wonder you love flower . You so delicate " ? she smile sweetly in to his gaze , despite the pain and hardship they had endure in the past but today she will be happy for him .

The ceremony begins with exchange of ring between the bride and the groom as the soft music play in the background. They dance on the grass that cover with white roses and it was like walking on cloud , as their body sway swiftly to the music . Kaping and Palin was watching them from up the window , they were happy for the couple and refuse to attend the ceremony because they were embarrass and doesn't want the awkwardness to ruin the atmosphere .
 

cecilia

Staff member
okay. i skip and read the update .. so patta and aff are BLOOD sister/brother? :lmao:
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
sighh.. that was painfully beautiful. The tears in my eyes are glistening away.. I'm happy for them.. eventhough their love is sinful... yet, it's very innocent. They are bonded by half a blood, but .... they didn't grew up as bro and sister, so they are practically strangers. Well... I'm happy for both of them for now... I just hope Saipoon turns herself in and soon!
 

nikki1786

LizQuen
gosh... im so behind... its like i enroll a subject and only present for two weeks only... then after that i didnt go to class anymore... lol

but anyway.... IM BACK~! "bellefire!"..... "present!" :lmao:

mwuahahahahahha.... told yah INCEST love story... :D i might print this out and let my friend read this... because her boyfriend is her first cousin.... lol
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
I heard that this is ending today?? Ahhh... I'm happy and sad, but mostly sad cause I'll miss reading this great fic.
 

sarN

sarNie Granny
Later that evening Sorna and Lilly came over to graduate the couple , their father had explain everything on the phone and they fully understand the situation .The newly wed went to change their clothes and came down stair holding hand. They went into the dinning room to have dinner with Mr.Taksorn , Sorna and Lilly.

"Hey! P'Patta! Why is there tear on your face !! Your soup is over flowing " Sorna said jokily

"you were alway the girly one in the family .." Lilly laughed and was please to see Patta smiling back .

"you two never change , always teasing me .." he sigh , "thank you for coming it really mean a lot to me"

Sorna and Lilly was contented, Patta was their big brother even though they were from difference mother but they had grow up together as close sibling and regardless of his past deed there was no room for hate or judgment in their heart because everything is already decided by fate and they only wish for everyone to be happy and everything else to fall into it place in the future .

After dinner, the couple say good bye to Sorna and Lilly because the two sister have to return back home to their husband and family. The sibling embrace each other one last time before departing.

"hey , little Aff ! Your child better be a girl !" said Lilly

"wait !! We both have girls already ! The family need a boy !!" said Sorna

Patta turn to his wife to search for the answer but she shyly look away and continue to wave good bye to the arguing sister , who was heading toward their car and drove off . Afterward , they went back into the house and walk up the stair into the hall way . They split away heading toward their own room but suddenly they stop and turn around , they stood there smiling at each other

"little aff, which room ? "

"I..I don't know" her face reddens and felt her heart pounding

"I..don't know either" he scratch his head while chuckling, the awkwardness between them was utterly sweet and he couldn't help but tease her a bit more “ …well, last time you came into my room

"P'Patta !.." she quickly search the area for any sign of life , luckily for him there was nobody around to heard the comment ! This is crazy . Why is she blushing like a child and if his teasing continue surely it will burn her cheek! He approach her and grab her hand, he lead the way to her room . Once they got inside he turn around to close the door.

"you want to shower first ?"

"you go on first . I'll goes get your clothes in the other room" Aff didn't wait for a reply and quickly brush pass him but his hand caught her wrist and pull her back.

"wait . we can shower and change in the morning but for now we don't need any clothes"

"P'Patta " she blush and lower head to escapes his eye but he reach out to cup both her cheek and draw them upward

"sorry for being impatient . there so little time for us to be together like this . my heart is about to explode"

"mine too " her cheek burn against his hand and she close her eye to spare the sweet embarrassment

"I love you .."he lean forward to kiss her soft lip , those cherry brim that taste so sweet yet so inviting , the feeling he been longing for . The willingness from her , the yearning he been dreaming about since the first time he laid eye on her . He never thought this day was possible , to hold her in his arm and care her body as if she was his . But happiness doesn't last forever because his fate will be decided in a couple more days and right now time is to precious to be waste , he lift her up into his arm and carry her to bed . They laid side by side , he begin to unbutton her dress and slip it off her shoulder , then he slide it down the length of her body . His eye width .

"don't stare at me ..I'm big "

"no , you're beautiful and the small mount is..adorable .."he bend down to kiss her stomach and whisper "daddy will be gently don't worry.."he smile , thinking how silly he sound and then turn his gaze toward his wife , she blush before his eye .

"I heard ..that ."

" ...it was intend for our child to hear , you eavesdropping ? ..."

" ...i have too , it also concern me ..."

He laugh , there no other magic as powerful as this and he no longer can hold back his love , within matter of moment he strip away all his clothes and join her with the nakedness under the cover . Their body intertwine as one , sealing their passion with a kiss good night ...and she cuddle close into his arm , secretly crying herself to sleep because she know their time will end when the sun rise . She love him .
 
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