My Enemy

pze

sarNie Adult
yes....but didnt sarn say affs mom lust for younger man....wouldnt that mean not just patta
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
that old cow, Kapin probably had sex with one of the younger servants or gardener or something.. and it produced Aff!
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
and if that is true, then I can't wait for Mr. Taksorn to find out that his precious daughter isn't really his! That will be the best revenge for taking away a child from its mother.
 

sarN

sarNie Granny
He force kiss her passionately and demanding for more, as if putting his weeks of frustration in one sweet yet tormenting moment! She struggle with all her strength but was powerless in his hand , then when she thought it was over as his head started to pull back his lip took a detour and came crushing down her neck line. Disgusted she push against his chest and slap him again ! She turn away and run into the house . Patta was left empty of her presence and curse at himself for taking advantage of her again!

When Aff reach her room she close the door and angrily wipe her lip . How can he crudely take advantage of her in such a provocative way , there was a little cut on her bottom lip and it must be because she was struggling for release but he keep her still by applying more pressure. He know how much she hate him but yet he decided to use this method to insult her !! Just ..then ..she saw her mother standing beside the window

"mom"

"my angel daughter, ha!"

"is there something wrong ?"

"yes !! Stay away from Patta !!"

"what do you mean ..?"

"I saw the kissing in the garden "

"he force it upon me ! I swear ..it wasn't my willing"

"well, it sure doesn't look like it ! I saw he was running after you and then hugged you !"?

"he my brother ..i wouldn't dare to think"

"he might be your brother but he was gone for 14 years , so both of you is completely a stranger to each other "

"mom !"

"it incest ! your father will have a heart attack if he found out ! Tell me the truth, did you and him ..slept together "

"I..I."

"tell me this instant !..tell me, slut !"? Kaping immediately cover her mouth , she didn't mean to use such word!! It was jealous !

"mom .."tear roll down her eye , how could her mom even think she that type of girl ?

"this is a serious matter little aff and you must tell me the truth "

"yes.." Aff being to sob while lowering her head in shame and added "he rape me . I couldn't tell anyone because of this. Mom , you have to believe me . He not what you think he is . He seduced mother Palin , I saw it with my own eye and I confronted him !"

"y..you telling me the truth ? He seduce Palin ? " Kaping stagger to sit down on the bed . She know Palin was seeking the young man affection but she didn't know the two had slept together! Then all those sweet talk about he loving her and only her --was a lie !?!

"yes "

"and he rape you ?"

"yes"

Kaping was shaken all over and doesn't know who to believe anymore but what she witness in the garden was real !!! Rape ? Is it possible ? Why would Patta do such a thing to his own sister ? Patta is very special to her and through out the years she had always long for younger lover to satisfy her fantasy and now there a young man , who is remarkably handsome wanting her at this age!! Kaping felt so complete and loved with around Patta ...because he have this wonderful charm that make an old woman like her goes crazy over lust for him !!!!!!! He must be an expert in this field ! None the less , she will not lost him to anyone --- not even to her daughter !!!
"I have fell madly in love with him and I believe he love me too"

"mom !! he rape me ! im not lying !"

"I understand you are hurt because im cheating behind your father back and I forgive you for coming up with such a lie for me to hate Patta"

Aff was speechless as tear flooded her face , how could her mom love that bastard so blindly and refuse to believe her ? Did he case a love spell ? Hurt and disappointed she wipe the tear from her cheek "then explain the kiss in the garden"

"well, I only saw the scene but I didn't hear the conversation , it could be a misunderstanding"

"no mater what I say you still wouldn't believe me ...isn't that right ?" there nothing more Aff wanted to tell her because obviously her mom would remain on his side .

"well, honey then just try to stay away from Patta ...for me . Ok ?" Kaping know she was being unfair and taking Patta side while pushing everything Aff said to the side but she believe Patta had seduce Palin, just not the part where her daughter was rape by Patta !! It ridiculous!! Surely, it a lie her daughter just make up so she will hate him !

"fine , let say I lie about the rape "she was choking in tear but manage to continue "he is your step-son ..my brother , if both of you are together ...then you are committing a sin toward father . how can you bear to be label like this ? Mom, please don't let lust cloud your judgment"

Kaping was furious at the thought of incest could stop her from loving this young man !!! She doesn't care if the world look at her as a devil !!! "im your mother !!! don't lecture me ! I warn you . Don't let your father found out about this affair !" she storm out the room leaving Aff to cry uncontrollably by herself .

The door was left open when Kaping went out and Nana had been listening to the whole argument. She smile wickedly, loving every minute of it and soon all this secret will be expose ! When that day come she will get the last laugh !!! Everything happen as she planed but she didn't expect Kaping to choose a lover over her own daughter! It was too good to be true . Her son done a tremendous work on the girls in this house and all thank to his job as an escort .
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
and as for saipoon, I'm shaking my head in disgust. How can she sleep at night, knowing that she using her son as a pawn....
 

pze

sarNie Adult
kaping is blinded from lust.....even thinking aff made up stories....now shes crazy.....really crazy.....

sarn great update keep it coming.....fighting....
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
the only person that saipoon is hurting is her own son!! Ughh....... I hate her! I hope her and her plastic face get it soon.
 

pze

sarNie Adult
^^^i agree with u.....she needs to get it soon....shes making everything miserable....n more plastic surgery aint gonna help....cause shes making herself really ugly....
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
I just hope that Patta will keep on feeling the difference between the motherly love from Rosa and the psychotic love from Saipoon. Hopefully, one day he will realize that his real mother is a crazy bitch.
 

cikna

sarNie Adult
that old cow, Kapin probably had sex with one of the younger servants or gardener or something.. and it produced Aff!

yes thats wat im thinking too....
i was thinking about the same thing too!! all this incest is to much too bear! anyways, just started reading this fanfic today. the plot is unbelievable!! i want to believe that aff and patta are not half siblings!
 

sarN

sarNie Granny
"little Aff, you reading the same story again"? said Rosa while pushing herself upward on the bed and aff reach out to help .

"sorry"

"did you and patta resolve your differences ?"

"no"

"o'my, no wonder I haven't seen him around lately"

"he busy"

"busy? o'yes , I heard the servant mention he and Kaping been going out lots to buy rare spices of flower " Rosa laugh softly and continue "I didn't know your mother was into flower"

"she do now " she mummer

"you look awfully pale lately . you should get a check up"

"it normal"

"normal ?...my girl , only ghost walk around with white face ..cheer up"? Rosa smile

Aff felt relief because of mother Rosa light humor .She glad there at least one person she can turn to when she is stress, "I want to get marry "

"o'my "Rosa was shock but after closely examine the young girl face , she giggle

"what so funnie ? im serious "

"your heart is not in it . I can tell"

"its the only way out of my problem"

"you and patta are so much alike"

"why ?"

"both of you like to keep secret"

"I..I..have something to tell you "tear fill her eye

"what is it little aff, i promise to keep it a secret if that what it take for you to tell me"

"thank you"

"now ..tell me . o' my , don't cry darling"Rosa reach out and wipe the tear that imprinted on the young lady cheek .

"im pregnant and i..i don't know what to do , beside getting marry"

"that's not the reason why you are sad , you are sad because the father of the child is not the man you want to get marry , is im right ? "

"yes"she was relief how much mother rosa can read her .

"o'my ...your father will die if he found out . You know how much he love you "

"and I love him dearly that I can't bear to tell him anything at all"

"then ..tell me , who is the father of your child"

"I can't , you must think im some kind of slut "

"of course not , you value your body very dearly . the man that done this to you is probable someone you love ..but if that the case why are you marring another man ? unless you are pregnant ---by force !!" Rosa gasp at the possibly and was confirmed when she saw the tear coming out of Aff's eye.

"what should I do mother rosa"? she leap on the bed and embrace the old lady .

"if he doesn't want to take the responsible, you shouldn't cry over it "Rosa smoothen the back of Aff's hair .

"i just want to die"

"don' say that darling . you have to think about the child that growing in your stomach , he or she is innocent "

"marriage is the only solution"

"to someone you doesn't love ?"

"I have no choice"

"o'my , no wonder you seen so stress out lately . I can only imagine the pain you gone thur"

Patta knock at the door before entering the room and Aff quickly move off the bed while cleaning her face with her hand . Patta smile at Rosa while holding a flower pot "i brought this for you " he place it on the small table beside the bed

"i thought u forgotten about me already this past couple days"

"sorry mom ..i was busy"

"dear boy , it only because I miss you . Now give me a hug"? Rosa open her arm to receive a warm embrace from her son and then she kiss him on the head before releasing him.

Patta turn his attention to Aff , who stood quietly against the wall "want me to walk you home "?

" i know my way "? she avoid his eye and excuse herself .

Patta stare at the wide open door where she left and feel empty again . Rosa was aware of her son sudden sadden and begin to wonder .

Later that week Brook's bring his elder to meet Mr. Taksorn and his wives. They came to ask for little Aff's hand in marriage , Mr. Taksorn was shock at the sudden announcement and want to ask his daughter first before making any decision .

"yes"

"but sweetie ..didn' you say you want to finish college ?"

"i want to start a year late and after marriage I can still attend college"

Kaping was please with her daughter decision and urges Mr. Taksorn to agreed by putting good words about Brook . Mr. Taksorn hesitated because his daughter is to young and he love her to much to see her goes live somewhere else but his daughter already agreed to marry this young man , so as a father he should respect her wishes .

"alright then . what our children engagement date? "

Brook's elder was thrill to have a beautiful daughter in law and they decided to have a small engagement just within the family next week . Kaping clap her hand happily and hug her daughter for such a good choice, other than that Kaping was also glad her daughter is not a threat to her relationship with Patta.

News travel fast and reaches Patta while working at the plantation . He wanted to drop everything and run home to ask if the rumor was true. Later that day , Mr. Taksorn return to work and Patta rushes to his father's office

" is little aff getting marry ?"

"not yet , today the family came over to ask your sister hand in marriage and I agreed . So, next week is their engagement"

Patta was torn inside and excuse himself . She was serious ! She must of love that boy very much to get marry at such a young age ! The rest of the day he couldn't focus on his work and often tune himself out, thinking about her . He return home late that night and decided to visit the Little house , Rosa was about to goes to sleep until she heard a knock on the door . Patta enter the room , his expression was sad and lonesome as he kneel beside the bed and fold his arm on the mattress to make a nest for his head. Rosa reach out to smoothen the back of his hair , her eye was soften and worry about her son sudden change in emotion .

"what the matter "

"nothing"

"ever since you were a kid , you always like to hide your feeling inside, sometime its not good to bottle it up"?

"does it show that much ?"

"i can see it in your eye"

Patta sigh and bury his head into his arm, wanting to hide this cruel face that pushes his sister away in such a cold way . She getting marry soon, leaving this house with the man she love! And he can't stop her beside how can he force her to stay ? He can only imagine what she gone through having to witness his constant affair with her mother and Palin . Its probable for the best she leave and wouldn't have to see the truth reveal when all this revenge is over but the thought of her with another man is killing him softly inside . He can't fight the feeling --it unbearable to breath when thinking of her and he doesn’t know what to do beside coming here

"then I wish I was blind to keep those secret in my heart"

"if you are blind , I still can tell"

"how so "

"because im your mother"

"mom "? Patta lift his face upward to look into the warmth of her eye . Those words touches him so deeply , it make him realize how much Rosa mean to him. After all she was his mother of 16 years and during those time was probable the most happiest moment of his life being ....her son

"right now your eye is telling me"

"yes ?"

"that you love me so much" Rose smile and playfully pinch his nose

"mom "? he leap up to embrace her
 

pze

sarNie Adult
this is too sad....shes really gonna get married to brook.....makes me depressed.....
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
OMG she's actually getting married...i hope patta reveals the secret^^ OOoOoo i can't wait to find out what's going to happen....awwww rosa...a mother-son bonding^^
 

sarN

sarNie Granny
Patta return back to the main house and went upstairs to his room

"I been waiting "said Palin

Patta turn around and saw his father's wife laying on the bed in her sexy lingerie . She bend her finger to invite him but Patta wasn't in the mood and shook his head while removing his suit . Palin was disappointed and jump out the bed to hug him from behind , then kisses his shoulder and back .

"Ms. Palin, I'm tire "

"a young man like you..tire ? " Palin continue her assault by grabbing one of his butt cheek firmly in her hand while the other free hand came around his waist to fondle with his belt .

"im serious , not in the mood"

"is it because of Kaping !!"? she immediately step back , angrily she pull the bed sheet and throw it to the floor .

"of course not . it been a long day at work"

"you not lying ?"

"no"

Palin relax herself and smile seductively at her young lover , happy with the answer she left the room and close the door . She hurry across the hall and Aff happen to saw her stem mom coming out of Patta 's room . Aff was disgusted by the late night visit and thought about her mom loving that man whore , was beyond her understanding ! She felt guilt from hiding this incest affair from her father and she can't imagine what will happen if he found out. She love her father so dearly and pity him very much to have such sinful wives and son ! As for her is no difference even though it was against her will but the damage is done and now she is carrying a child from incest. She wonder if this will effect the child growth? She read child born from incest will have high risk of diseases and conditions that may be harmful because their genes are not different enough to off-set these conditions. Aff gasp at the thought and hug her stomach . Tear-stain her eye as she silently curse at the bastard for causing her heart aches and perhaps their child too. Now, she not sure if she want to keep the child or not ? She doesn't want him/her to born retarded or disable. What should she do ?

The next couple days Patta continue to come home very late and when he came home he wouldn't goes straight to his room -- instead sit outside on the bench for hours ...starring into the night sky. He remember the last time he sit outside and stare into the distance sky like this , was 14 years ago when he was living in the slum with his mom. Till this days he never told his mom why he often cry at night back then and the reason were because he misses mother Rosa and right now he is missing something in his heart . His eye wonder through the million star that scatter in the dark sky , searching and searching for something he can't have -- even if he found it. Suddenly , as if he was dreaming the stars shape it self into a face...a face he wanted to hold and kiss, it was little Aff . O' how he wish to be one of the star that shape her smile but he know it will never happen because in reality he a bastard in her eye. He is getting weaker and weaker to this forbidden bond ….if only his mother didn't drug him that day , then perhaps today he wouldn't be hurting so much . He no longer want to deceive Kaping, its the one thing he can do for his sister. Patta sigh and return back to his room unaware he been watch from up above.

Aff been watching him for the pass couple days , the first time she happen to saw him while opening the window for some fresh air and ever since she been seeing him night after night. She wonder why the hell he would sit outside for hours ? A person like him doesn't seem to have any problem or stress ..beside worrying about the next old woman he should sleep with !!! Disgusted , she close the window and climb into bed. Tomorrow is her engagement. Aff sigh. She wish tomorrow will never com.
 

pze

sarNie Adult
ahhhh.....im crossing my fingers patta kidnaps her or something....i just dont want to engagement to go through......i feel so sad for her n patta already.....sarn ur making me cry......this is too depressing....


shes starting to see the other side of patta that she doesnt see often....
 
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