Promise of Remebrance

IMFANCY

IMFANCY

sarNie Egg


Prologue


A little boy and a little girl who became friends when they were both 4years old.They became friends for so long but one day the little girls father pass away in a car accident, so they had to move away to a different town and before she moved away they made a promise to each other that they will find each other.They made an exchange of items for remembrance of each other, so she kept his necklace ring and he kept her butterfly hair clip...the pra'ek and nang'ek are Kao Jirayu Laongmanee and Pattie Ungsumalynn Sirapatsakmetha and as they grew up the new pra'ek and nang'ek are Om Akkaphan Namart and Toey Jarinporn Jookiat.Stay tune to see how the story is going to be like
 
duaxiong

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So interesting, reminds me of my Fanfiction "The Promise." I gotta come back to writing too, btw are you new? How come i dont see any posts of the story?
 
IMFANCY

IMFANCY

sarNie Egg
Episode1

Pattie mom: pattie come inside its almost time for you to go to school.
Pattie: okay mommy.

(car comes)

Pattie mom: pattie the car is here.
Pattie:eek:kay I'm coming

(shes in the car then to school she goes)

Pattie: wow! My new school is so big.

(kao pops up)

Kao:hi! my name is kao whats your name. Are you new here.
Pattie:hhhi! Ummm my name is pattie. Yes I'm new here.
Kao: cool! I can show you around.
Pattie: okay

(walking around showing her the school)

Kao:did u just moved here.
Pattie:yes, unfortunately
Kao: why! you don't want to be here.
Pattie: no not really.
Kao: well guess what
Pattie: what
Kao: i will make you have so much fun here and you will never want to leave.
Pattie: hopefully
Kao: its almost time for lunch do you want to eat something.
Pattie: yes but i pack my own food to school
Kao: its okay. Do you want ice cream.

(pattie looks at kao happily)

Pattie:yes yes yes, i LOVE ice cream
Kao: okay let go get ice cream

( both walking to go get ice cream, after getting ice cream the bell ring to go home)

Kao: that's the go home bell
Pattie: already
Kao: you don't want to go. I told you i was
Going to make you have lots of fun here.
Pattie: smiles.. Okay bye, my ride is here. Do you need a ride.
Kao: no i will take the bus.
Pattie: okay then i will see you tomorrow
Kao: okay

(the car drives)
Preview:
Met at school again.
She fell he piggyback her.
They were stuck in a library.
 
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sarNie Egg
Episode 2

(They both met up at school again)

Kao: Hi Pattie.
Pattie: Hi Kao
Kao: you want to go somewhere
Pattie: but we're going to be late for school.
kao: no we'll make it in time.
Pattie:Okay.

(They walk through an aisle of falling leaves)

Pattie: wow! so beautiful

(Pattie spins around as leaves continued to falls, Kao just stares and smile. while Pattie was spinning she almost fall)

Kao: are you okay.

(Kao catch her)

Pattie: ummm I'm fine...Thanks.
Kao: c'mon I have another place to show you.
Pattie: okay

(They continue to walk)

Kao: okay we're here.

(They walk in a little small house)

Pattie: wow! This is so nice. Did you collect all of this in here.
Kao: yes.
Pattie: so is this a place to put your collection in.
Kao: yes, i don't tell or show people about this because they think this is gay.
Pattie: well I don't think its gay I think its nice.

(Kao Smile)

Kao: c'mon we have to go so we can make it in time for school.
Pattie: okay lets go.

(While walking back to school they were chase by some big people)

Kao: Pattie lets run their chasing after us.
Pattie: okay.
Kao: let me hold your hand, so we can run faster.

(Pattie give her hand to Kao, They started to run)

Kao: are you okay?
Pattie: yes I;m okay.
Kao: I'm sorry
Pattie: It's not your fault.

(Pattie fell down)

Kao: Pattie are you hurt?
Pattie: no
Kao: your knee is bleeding.
Pattie: its okay
Kao: here get on my back.

(Pattie gets on Kao's back)

Kao: Hold on tight I'm going to run.
Pattie: okay.

(They finally got to school but was still being chase)

Kao: Lets go in the library cause you're hurt.
Pattie: okay! You could put me down now.

(Kao put her down in the library)

Kao: we are going to have to stay here.
Pattie: b..but!
Kao: but your hurt.

(the librarian left so they were lock in there for 30 minutes)

Preview:

They got in trouble.
They had to serve detention.
There parents were very angry.
 
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Episode 3

Pattie: kao are we going to get in trouble.
Kao: I don't know, maybe or maybe not.

(the teachers have a meeting in the library, so the went inside the library and saw Pattie head laying down on Kao shoulder and kao holding onto her waist and they were sleeping.)

Teacher: umm. hello! wakeup!

(they got up)

Teacher: where are you two supposed to be at right now.
Kao: in the classroom>
Teacher: doing what.
Pattie: listening to the teacher and do work.
Teacher: why did you guys come here.
Kao: we were lock in here.
Teacher: sure, you guys want to tell this story to the principal? C'mon lets go.

(They went to the principal office)


Principal: well you guys were ditching right.
Pattie: no we were lock in the library.
Principal: well the ditching story sounds better. let me call both you parnets and tell them that you guys are serving detention, right afterschool.
Pattie: no you can't.
Principal: will I am. and it was unappropiate for you two to touch each other like that.

(The principal call their parent and they got into troube)

Preview

your dad past away.
I'm moving
i will find you.
 
mainhiathao

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sarNie Granny
Kao is such a gentleman. :D so nice. Love this so far, its going pretty quick can't wait for next ch. hopefully they won't get in that much trouble.
 
IMFANCY

IMFANCY

sarNie Egg
Episode 4

Pattie mom: You never skip school like this before. is it because of you're with that kid huh?
Pattie: no mommy. Mommy I'm sorry.

(she hug her mom).

Pattie Mom: Sorry doesn't help anything you got detention already. Now you're going to explain this to your daddy when he come home. go to your room, to study now.

(At Kao house)

Kao dad: tell me why you ditch school like this and with some girl.
Kao: she is just my friend and I took her to go see something.
Kao dad: It better be because I am not ready to be a grandpa.

(Kao grandpa overhear them and he grab the stick and grab Kao and start to hit him from the back.

Kao dad: dad stop he is my kid i will take care of it.
Kao grandpa: what you're going to take care like I did. I am not going to let him be like you.
Kao: grandpa: if you want to hit me then go ahead. I can handle it.
Kao grandpa: good

(he begin to hit Kao for 15 second)

Kao grandpa: you are not to eat dinner today.
Kao dad: come here. Let me get you some medicine.
Kao: thanks daddy.

(In Pattie house)

Pattie dad: I heard you have to serve detention and you skip school today. Is that correct.
Pattie: I'm sorry daddy but I won't do it again.
Pattie dad: answer me.
Pattie: yes.
Pattie dad: I will forgive you this time because you have been an honor roll student but I banned you to be with that bad boy okay. I do not want you to be with him at all understand.
Pattie: yes I understand.

(the next day they serve detention for the rest of the day until they go home)
(In the detention room)

Kao: did you get in trouble
Pattie: no you.
Kao: no.
Pattie: you look so pale today.
Kao: I'm okay.

(after school Pattie ran to catch up with kao and she touch hi from the back and Kao say ouch:

Pattie: I'm sorry did I hurt you.
Kao: no you didn't.
Pattie: Oh its bleeding. are you sure I did not hurt you.
Kao: I'm okay I need to go to the bathroom.

(he went to the bathroom and Pattie follow him.)

Pattie: can you please show me your back.
Kao: I can't do that. Don't worry about me.
Pattie: If you don't let me see then I don't think I can be your friend.

(kao show her his back and she gave Kao a medicine to cure his back)

(After One years)

Pattie Mom: Pattie sweetheart be strong okay.
Pattie: what mommy.
Pattie: your dad pass away.

(Pattie start to cry with her mom)

Pattie mom: we are doing his funeral tomorrow.
Pattie: mommy where are we going to live at then.
Pattie mom: I don't know yet lets finished your dad funeral.

(On the day of Pattie dads funeral)

(Kao went and give Pattie a hug)

Kao: I'm sorry for your lost.
Pattie: Thank you Kao.
Kao: No problem. I will always be there for you.
Pattie and kao: I have something to tell you.

(They said it the same time)

Kao: go ahead.
Pattie: no you go first.
Kao: okay. I have a flower to give it to your dad and I want to tell you that i made it to the final. If I win this time, I'm going to go study abroad for free. I'm taking the test tomorrow.
Pattie: That's good. I'm happy food you. wish you luck.
Kao: what are you going to say.
Pattie: I forgot

(she don't want to tell Kao because he don't want him to be stress)

(The next day Pattie and her mom is moving out of town and she had told kao friend to tell him that he is living. Kao ran to the train station and found Pattie)

Kao: Pattie!
Pattie: what are you doing here aren't you suppose to be at school taking you test.

(Kao hug Pattie)

Kao: why are you here?
Pattie: I'm sorry but I'm moving.
Kao: where?
Pattie: out of town.
Kao: can you stay with me I will support you. I promise.
Pattie: I trust you but i can't leave my mom.
Kao: okay then here is my necklace ring for you to keep.
Pattie: here's my butterfly hair clip.
Kao: remember me.
Pattie: you too.
Kao: remember that I love you very much.

(he kiss her on the cheek. Before Pattie kiss Kao on the cheek she say she love him too.)

Kao: I will find you.

(Pattie left and Kao watch while pattie and Kao tears start to come.)

Preview
You are late for your first job.
you look familair
Where are you.
If you were here you will not let anyone treat me this way.


P
 
IMFANCY

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Episode 5

(It have been 10 years)

Supervisor Ni: You are late for your first job.
Toey: I'm sorry.
Supervisor Ni: why?
Toey: for being late.
Supervisor Ni: why were you late?
Toey: There were traffic.
Supervisor Ni: alright today the Boss is going to be here. I expected you guys to be on your best behavior.

(they walk and Toey didn't pay attention so she bump into someone)

Toey: ouch! who bump into me?
Om: who is this little girl?

(Toey got up)

Toey: first, I'm not a little girl and second, you owe me an apologies.

(Om look at Toey really strange like he knew her before)

Supervisor Ni: I'm sorry boss. She is a new person that I'm showing her around.

(Toey was surprise that he is the boss.)

Toey: look I'm sorry. Please don't fired me.
Om: (he smile) I'm not but next time be more carful. Do I know you from somewhere?
Toey: No. I never seen you before.
Om: Alright. See you guys later.
Supervisor Ni: okay by bye. (She turn to look at Toey) You need to be more careful.
Toey: sorry.

(Later that day, the new employees was invite to be in the meeting.)

One of the employee: boss om, you need an secretary or a personal assisstance to be able to go to the meeting.
Om: what happen to Sara my Personal assisstance.
The employee: she left back to her country and she say that she is sorry.
Om: alright. I guess we just have to pick someone then.

(Om was looking around and look at the new employee to see which one fit.)

Om: okay I know who can be my personal assisstance.
The Employee: who.
Om: Her.

(He point to Toey)

Toey: wait are pointing at me or them.
Om: you.
Toey: no! I meant no becauce I'm not highly educated to be your personal assisstance or secretary.
Supervisor Ni: You don't have to be highly educated to be his personal assisstance.
Toey: but I refused to be his personl assisstance because I don't like that position.
Om: In here you don't get to choose your position.
Supervisor Ni: Think of your life and your mom.
Toey: alright I do it.
Om: good. Supervisor Ni can you do something with that girl cause she do not look like my personal assisstance.
supervisor Ni: okay.

(Supervisor Ni take Toey to the store to find some clothes for her and put nice make-up on her.)

Supervisor Ni: You are all set up.
Toey: I think this is too short and fancy.
Supervisor Ni: Its fine. Look you need to act professional okay.
Toey: I can't. I'm not highly educated.
Supervisor Ni: Its okay. Just beleive in yourself that you can do this okay. I will talk to your mom about you coming home late today okay.
Toey: alright.
Om: Is my assisstance ready now.
Supervisor: yes.

(It remind him of Pattie when he saw Toey looking all good. He say to himself. Where are you)

Om: You look familar.
Toey: really.

(At the meeting people were being rude to Toey)
(If you were here you will not let anyone treat me this way. she said to herself.)

Preview
You don't have to work so hard.
why you look at me like that?
I miss you so much.
 
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Episode 6

Om: so how you like being my assisstance so far.
Toey: it suck.
Om: will I'm going to make it fun for you. Here this is my schedule, when people call and they want to talk to me give then you give them the time that I'm availabe or make an appointment for them.
Toey: that is to difficult.
Om: it's okay tou will learn.
Toey: all by myself.
Om: yeah, that's what I did.
Toey: but you have to understand that we have different education.
Om: it don't matter. Where is your house.
Toey: stop right herw.
Om: no thank you
Toey: no, it's not my fault that you want me to go.
Om: so rude.

(Toey went inside)

Toey: mom I'm home.
Toey mom: you work so hard.
Toey: not really, but I am tired.
Toey mom: go eat and take a shower.
Auntie Ni: you're home. Where is your clo...
Toey: yea I'm home. Can you go with me to thwe kitchen.

(They went to the kitchen)

Toey: don't tell momwhat I wear or do because I'm afraid her illness mightg occur again.
Auntie Ni: okay.

(The next morning. Toey went to work and she was sitting in Om office and start staring at him.)

Om: why you look at me like that?
Toey: nothing, you nlook like someone I know.
Om: alright get ready we are going somewhere.
Toey: where.
Om: just go and you will know.

(They got to a school that they both use to attend)

Om: why are you standing there. C'mon let's go.
Toey: coming.
Om: This school is really important and special to me.
Toey: can I ask why?
Om: you won't understand.

(I miss you Kao say to herself)

Preview
You guys use to go here.
Are you that girl
Why you lie to me
 
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