[R] 50 Shades (New MV and Ch.21: Let's Play!)

[lakornkiki]

Chapter 11: Body2Body


Christian slowly walked towards Ana. Confident, sexy … full of desire…

Christian: “Let’s get this off, shall we?” as he slides off Ana’s summer sweater.
Ana can feel the heat in her belly. Unable to move.

Christian: “Do you have any idea how much I want you, Ana Sperbund?” he whispers as he touches her chin with his fingers. Bringing her eyes to meet with his.

Christian: “Do you have any idea what I’m going to do to you?” he adds as he bring her face closer to his. He leans in and kisses her. It was demanding, firm yet slow and soft. Fireworks exploded.

He is slowly removing her shirt while planting kisses on her…he leans back and admired her.

Christian: “Oh, Ana, you are so beautiful…. I want to kiss you….every inch of you”....and that he did.

Ana is breathless as he held her and moves her towards the bed. She thinks he is going to lay her down on the bed as she stood next to it but he releases her and dropped to his knees. He grabbed her hips with both hands and run his tongue across her belly from hipbone to hipbone. She can’t help but let out a quiet moan.

He gazed up at her through his long beautiful lashes as he undoes her pants, slowly removing them. Ana can’t take her eyes off him as he smelled her scent. She is on edge, in pain, full of desire. He then gently pushed her down on the bed.

Still on his knees, he removed her shoes without taking his eyes off hers. He kissed her toes and went up leaving a trail of kisses…..

Christian: “Keep still” as he is kissing in between her thighs and heading back up….
Ana can’t keep still. She is hot , she is cold …she can't decide ... but her body feels too hot.

Christian: “We’re going to have to work on keeping you still, baby” he whispers as he lies down next to her…. his hands exploring her body.

Christian: “You fit my hand perfectly, Anastasia” as he gently yanked down her bra, freeing her breasts…but the underwire and fabric force it upwards. “very nice” as his fingers played with her now very hard nipples. He played with them ... with his fingers…with his tongue... with his teeth.

Christian: “Let’s see if we can make you come like this” he whispers as he continued.
She is begging inside. She is in agony….and he doesn’t stop. He continued his sweet torture.

Christian: in soft whispers, he commands “Let go, baby” and he bit down on one nipple and his thumb and finger pulled hard on the other. She fell into pieces.

He kisses her deeply, his tongue in her mouth absorbing her cries.
He is now looking down at her in his arms, satisfied smile on his face…..
Christian: “You are very responsive” he whispers “it’s going to be so much fun teaching you how to control that” …and kisses her passionately again.

His hands continued to explore her body and with kisses. His fingers touched her core. He felt her wetness… she is so ready for him.

Chrisian: “Gosh, I want you. You are so wet.” He reached over and put protection on himself. He moves between her legs as he looks into her eyes.

Christian: “Do you really want to do this?” he asks softly.
Ana: “please” ….. he can’t stop now.
He entered her. She cried out as he rips through her virginity. He is breathing hard, eyes fixed on her.
Christian: “Are you ok?” ... “...you are so tight” he murmurs as she feels him inside her.
She nods. Adjusting to his size….
Christian: “I am going to move now” his voice tight.
Ana cries out the second time….
Christian: “More?” he whispers… his voice raw.
Ana: “yes” …she moans as she answers…he thrusts into her…
Christian: “Again?”
Ana: “yes”
And he moves. In and out. In and out…. Without stopping now. He speeds up and she tries to keep up. Sweet sensation building up inside her again…..

He grabs her face and kisses her hard, biting her lips…. She didn’t know it could feel as good as this. She is on sensory over drive…..

Christian: whispers breathlessly “Come for me, Ana”.
and his words did it. She climaxed and heard him calls out her name as he did right after.

She opened her eyes as her breath slow down and felt his forehead pressed against hers….his eyes closed, breathing ragged.

Then he opened his eyes, looked softly into hers and asked
Christian: “Are you ok? Did I hurt you?”
Ana smiled and shakes her head….

She can’t believe it…. Her first time and she had two orgasms with this beautiful man….. she can’t stop herself from smiling shyly….

Christian: “you are biting your lip again…..do you know what it does to me?”
Ana looks up at him and he takes her lips again….still hungry for more.

Ana: she knew he wants more….. “I’d like to do it again”….she whispers and he moans….
Christian: “demanding little thing aren’t you?” he seems pleased and relieved as his kisses her deeply, exploring every inch of her mouth.

He takes her slow. Trailing kisses everywhere, whispering “You are mine." "Only mine." "Don’t forget it.” his words are intoxicating.
He then messaged her most sensitive part, inserting his fingers in her. “Do you like this?” and she moans….

Christian: “you are so wet. So quickly. For me.” he whispers “I like that. I like that a lot”….
He pulled his fingers out.
Christian: “open your mouth” and put his finger in her mouth… “that’s how you taste”….
It seems so wrong but it's so erotic as she tastes the saltines on his fingers.

She is breathing hard, anticipation builds as she heard him put on protection…
Christian: “We are going to go real slow this time, Anastasia” he breaths as he slowly moves into her… circles his hips, pulls back, pauses a beat then eases back in. He repeats again and again… over and over, with slow thrusts and teasing.

Christian: “you feel so good” he moans…. She is ready to release and he feels her tensing around him… “no… not yet, baby. Not yet” he pulls back…. and wait.

Ana: “oh, please” she begs……

Christian continued his slow torture…. Backwards. Forwards. In and out. In and out.

Christian: “I want you sore baby” he breaths. “Every time you move tomorrow, I want you to be reminded that I’ve been here. Only me.”

Ana: “Please Christian” ….
Christian: “What do you want Anastasia? Tell me”…. He whispers
Ana: “You”….”Please”…..

He increases his speed then and whispers “you are so sweet”.... “I want you so much”. She moans louder. His words spins her head.

Christian: softly whispers “You. Are. Mine” and he took her higher….
“Come for me, baby” he groans and like a good student, she let go.
He followed and collapsed on top of her. “Naughty, Sweet Ana…..”he murmurs as she falls into an exhausted sleep.


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so what do you think?
Christian is not so scary, right? On the contrary, I think he is very accommodating....very sensitive lover. LOL.
How can she not fall for that???? How can she not want for more????

BUT, nothing is perfect. This beautiful amazing man comes with a very sad past. It'll be introduced to you in the next chapter ka. So stay tuned.

 

[MrscChum]

Like it a lot na......sweet and passionate love making!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Thanks Kiki!!

 

[loveangel]

O.M.G it is winter here but how come i feel opposite :spicy: :spicy: :bhehe: :bhehe: . please update soon Kiki want to know about Chris past. thanks Kiki for this mind blowing chapter.

 

[zazoured]

Wow that was an intense first time for Ana for sure... Christian is quite sweet here and definetly not scary, yet i also know that he made their love making appropriate for Ana's first time, so i am wondering if Christian has many tricks in his bag lol !...
I am glad that you are going to touch Christian's past in the next chapter, I am really curious to find out what this man is hiding. Lucky Ana got 3 orgasms on her first time, Christian is definetly THE MAN !!!

I am glad, you have had a great time at the concert but i have been missing you lol !...Really liked this chapter , cannot wait for what is Next ....

 

[Sary101]

Making her first time(s) M.E.M.O.R.A.B.L.E.

Thanks Kiki. I love 50 Shades...

 

[Kiachue1]

But Kiki I don't get It....what was his dark past about it didn't tell in the first book it kinda left me hanging thinking about it and doesn't tell me anything through the second book I'm currently on chapter 10!!!????

 

[shengvang]

Wow, that was some pretty good frist romance for Ana. Christain sure do do know how to make her
feel all that pleasure. lol...Great update kiki. I'm very curious about his past, now that you have mention it.

Thanks for the update na ja! You should think about being a FF writer here kiki. Your doing a very good job,
and I bet if you were to come up with your own story, you would take us all to cloud 9 for sure.

 

[nikki1786]

just wanna share what my favorite Filipino author of romance novels Miss Eve Montelibano, she read the 50 Shades of Grey and i just wowed to what she can say about the novel.


"50 SHADES EF'D: Okay pardon me but I will discuss 50 again. Bored here at the office while waiting for some paperwork. I think, what sets women off in this book is the BDSM content, that is the master and slave fantasy. BUT, have they forgotten that it's ROLE-PLAYING? It's not a real set-up. It's an imaginary contract and Ana can walk out anytime she feels like it. It's actually an invitation by Christian to explore a new dimension of sexual pleasure with Ana. I think, a lot of readers miss this. They think Christian is abusing Ana. Errr...How can you abuse someone who goes into a set up willingly?

The BDSM angle on this book is just metaphor for the centuries-old male-over-female set up. The patriarchal and even biblical concept of society, that women must always SUBMIT to their husbands. See, the thing that probably triggers negative reactions on women is the fact that this book illustrates the "degrading and demeaning" acts a woman commits in order to please her man, or in order to please herself. Human nature. And it's painful to read, especially if you have done exactly those things in the past, and worse. Nobody wants to be reminded that she had been a doormat sometime ago. I know the feeling.

Yes, who among us mature, experienced women had not at one point traded some of our ideals and principles for good ol love or lust? Love and lust, very thin line between them. If you have experienced it, you know what I mean. For a man to totally enslave a woman sexually, he must have at least some degree of "love" for him. Agree or disagree, girls? Very few would probably stand up and say "that's BS", and mostly, innocents who'd never really known what all-consuming passion is all about. But the ones who'd been there and done that, shut up, you know damn well what I'm saying.

50 is a raw, no holds-barred story of a woman full of ideals about love and happy ending (haven't we been all at one point?) which quickly get shattered when she falls in love with an absolute cynic with the most warped view on relationships. Minus the opulent setting that Christian's wealth provides in the story, it's a common scenario actually. No surprise there. I can very well empathize with Ana in so many ways. When you meet this kind of emotional force, you'd better be prepared. Wear a chastity belt Coz, you'd most likely give in to the temptation. Unless you have the self-control and principles of a...God?

Anyways, Ana wanted to keep her man and so she sacrificed "some" of her principles. She compromised herself. She gave up some of her self-respect. Aha, self-respect! What a big word. Apply that to real life...We don't really learn the hard lessons of loving until we are there in the middle of it, bleeding and crawling, naked and losing self-respect. And that's when self-love really matters most. To those who are saying that Ana is weak...she did walk away from Christian, right? You cannot really test the level of your self-respect unless you go to the "battle of respect". You can't say I respect myself and so I will not subject myself to those degrading situations. If you have experienced that kind of pain before, then please understand that Ana is "still experiencing hers". Let her have her own trip and just do the i-told-you-so act LATER, ok? Maybe Ana's story will have a different ending than yours? Maybe she'd get her man in the end and still walk tall with her self-respect intact? My point is, I think one must need to really live before he/she can say anything about self-respect. Frankly, I have more respect for women who have survived shitty relationships and gained their self-respect back than women who shout self-respect from the tower of Rapunzel without experiencing real passion or making wild hot love with a man they really dig.

I know. As a modern woman who is an advocate of women empowerment... and liking 50?...errrr this may sound like an oxymoron. Or an irony. But I don't see it that way. I do not think this book is degrading for women. This book is an honest account of a woman's journey into finding herself, her own woman. She had to test the limits of her emotional endurance before she decided that hey, I love myself more. She had to find out for herself what loving and losing is all about and in so doing found herself a better, stronger woman in the aftermath. This is a common story among us, survivors of failed relationships.

And besides...gosh...were you actually READING, 50 haters? If somebody as gorgeous as Christian Grey would desire me and want me for his own alone and pamper me like a queen...spanking gets really really hot. By all means, tie me to the fuckin' bed and please me, over and over! And this guy actually wasn't mastering Ana. Ana was mastering him. He fell into his own trap and married the girl! She conquered Christian. Dominated him. She wasn't left in the end wallowing in depression and zero self-esteem. She won at love. Now, how is that losing self-respect? How is that even degrading to women? We all go through all kinds of sacrifices to win the battles of life. And when we win, that is a cause for exultation. That is the reason why MORE women love 50. They feel it, the celebration of their womanhood in the true sense of the word.

Hell, this book is a celebration of the power of women over men. Just because it was written with a lot of kinky stuff does not diminish its true message. Many women have a version of Christian Grey in their lives and if they happen to conquer him---okay, excuse me, guys,--if they happen to win him, then congratulations. You are THE supahwoman, girl!

My advise to the 50 haters, READ again and understand the dynamics of man-woman struggle for domination. Better yet, get yourselves real hunks for BFs and experience real passion yourselves. Oh bugger that, just watch Mr. and Mrs. Smith.

Christian and Ana live in every relationship today--what you hate and what you love about your relationship. Self-respect? It lives somewhere there in between the good and the bad. But in the end...it is only you who can truly define what it means. Not Christian, not Ana, and certainly not EL. You. Look inside yourself. Judging 50 as a worthless book? Baby, you have yet to live your life.

Lastly...love, lust, desire, hate, pain, forgiveness, acceptance, survival, happiness, peace. That's what life truly is. Until you have run the gamut of those emotions, you haven't really lived fully. YET. But every passing moment is a chance to change all that."

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Miss Eve liked the fact that EL starting to open up these kind of womanhood power to another level... specifically in sensual topic. but anyways, i'm still glad she read the 50 shades novel, i bet she'll compose another erothic story that she'll pile up with her Lothario book series.

she's one of my fave because she's not scared of writing sensual scenes. most of her female heroines in her novels are bitchy or girl fighter. fair enough to be a dominant in bed

 

[lakornkiki]

^ Nikki!!! Thank you so much for posting the review.... Here is my fav. part...
"If somebody as gorgeous as Christian Grey would desire me and want me for his own alone and pamper me like a queen...spanking gets really really hot. By all means, tie me to the fuckin' bed and please me, over and over! And this guy actually wasn't mastering Ana. Ana was mastering him. He fell into his own trap and married the girl! She conquered Christian. Dominated him. She wasn't left in the end wallowing in depression and zero self-esteem. She won at love. "

She is right on.... If you read all the books, you'll know that in the end, it was Christian who changed his ways for Ana....and not just she won... he won at love too because it was his choice. She didn't force him naka. I agree too that readers get blinded by the BDSM part of the story but really, it's about all relationships and how we compromise. Ana is smart and Christian fell for her ... not just her looks but her wit, her brain, her love. It's a great love story to read naka.

 

[lakornkiki]

Chapter 12: Several Shades of Christian


Ana stirred on the bed and noticed that she is there by herself. It’s still dark outside and she hears music. Piano.

She walked to the hall where the piano sat. Quietly she watched Christian played the piano, lost in his own world. His expression is mixed of sadness and loneliness. She is mesmerized by his skill on the piano and the sad melody.

He sensed her there and glanced up.
Ana: “Sorry” she whispers, “I didn’t mean to disturb you”.
Christian: “I should be the one saying that to you” he says quietly. “You should be in bed”.
Ana: “I woke and you weren’t there”
Christian: “I couldn’t sleep. I am not used to sleeping with anyone”. He walked towards her gently, wrapping his arms around her as he walks her back to the bedroom.

Ana: “How long have you been playing? You were amazing.”
Christian: “Since I was six. And thank you.”

They reached the bedroom and he turned on the lights by the nightstand.
Christian: “How are you feeling?”
Ana: “I am good” responds shyly.

They looked at the bed at the same time and noticed the red spot. Evidence of her lost innocence. Ana is blushing red all over now.

Christian staring warmly at her and commented…
Christian: “well, Khun Mae Baan will have something to think about” and smiled.

He is standing bare-chested before her and she reached out to touch the hair on his chest. Immediately, he stepped back.

Christian: “Bed” he orders. “I’ll come and like down with you” and he went to grab a tee shirt from the drawers and put it on.
Ana climbs in as he pulls her into his embrace… spooning her as she is facing away from him. He kisses her hair and takes in her scent.
Christian: “Sleep, sweet Anastasia”.
Ana closed her eyes yet she didn’t fall asleep right away. She felt a sad feeling form in her. Christian Kugimiya is a mystery. Why won't he let her touch him? He seems to have a lonely and sad side.

…

When she woke up, to her delightful surprise, she was starring to Christian’s beautiful face. He is still asleep looking very peaceful….she can stare at him forever.

Then Ana remembers Mint. Christ! She must be worry… Ana never stays overnight, anywhere. She went to search for her phone in the living room and called Mint. She didn’t answer so she left a message as well as text her.

Ana realized that she was hungry. Very hungry from last evening’s activities. She put on her headphones and decided to make breakfast for them. Something easy, eggs, bacon and pancakes.

She moved to her music as she looked for pots and pans to make breakfast in…smiling foolishly as she thought of Christian. His words, his body, his lovemaking….

As she turned, she finds Christian sitting on a barstool at the breakfast bar looking rather entertained. She jumped.
Ana: Surprised, she asked “when did you get here? Are you hungry?”
Christian: “Very” … oh that tone…. Is he talking about food? Does he think of anything else?

Christian: “I’ll set the table while you cook” he grabs the tablemats from a drawer.
He is beside her, moving around her .... then he reached over and tugged at her pigtails.
She had put her hair in pigtails, while cooking.

Christian: “I love these” he whispers… “they won’t protect you” he teases. One track of mind.

Ana blushed as they sat and start eating breakfast. Ana winced as she sat down and he asked.
Christian: “Are you really sore?”
Ana: “ah….. what kind of a question is that?” she can’t help but continue “I have nothing to compare to…. Care to offer some advice?” says smartly.

Christian is amused. His eyes twinkle now….
Christian: “Just wondering if we should continue with your training” and smirks.
Ana: Stopped breathing. Appetite lost. “oh” Her body recalls their passionate night.

Christian: “Can you stay another night?”
Ana: “I can’t. I work tomorrow”…”I can stay the day but I have to be home tonight”.

He is not pleased but he doesn’t argue.
Christian: “Ok, this evening”… “Now, eat your breakfast” he orders.
Ana: “I am not that hungry”.
Christian: “Eat, Anastasia. You didn’t eat last night”.
She is disturbed now. She doesn’t want to be forced.
Ana: “what is it with you and food?”
Christian: “I have issues with wasted food. That’s all. Now… EAT”

They finished breakfast and he helped her clean the table. Ana now remembers the NDA…..

Ana: “umm…. Does the NDA covers everything?” she blurted out.
Christian: “why” as he looked over her direction in the kitchen.
Ana: “um…. You know…. Um…. “ she gathers her guts “I have questions about sex….and I’d like to ask Mint”.
Christian: “You can ask me.”

Ana: “It’s not the same Christian”…. “I won’t mention the Red Room of Pain”
His one eyebrow shot up and he is amused.
Christian: “Red Room of Pain? No Anastasia…. It’s about pleasure. Believe me”.
Then he continued… “Besides, Mint is being intimate with Mark and I don’t want him to get into my personal life”

Ana: “Does your family know?”
Christian: “No. It’s none of their business” he firmly stated as he walks towards her. He reached for her chin, making her look at him in the eye and asked softly … “what do you want to know?”
Ana: “nothing specific now …” she is having a hard time thinking as she is looking at him…
Christian: “How about… How was last night for you?”
Ana: “Good” she whispers.
Christian: “me too” he murmurs…. “I never had vanilla sex before. It was amazing … maybe because it’s with you”. He runs his thumb on her lower lips.
Ana is breathless.

Christian: “Come. Let’s have a bath” he whispers as he leaned down and kisses her.


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[MrscChum]

Thanks Kiki!! Sweet chapter, looking forward to know about his past....can't wait!!

 

[Mollyy]

Hi Kiki! i know i said in my ff page that i wouldn't come to read your ff just yet cos i didn't want to get distracted from school but i couldn't stand it... my intention was to read only 2 chapters during my break time but then you got me addicted and i've read everything!! lol this is soooo HOT!! first i was kinda nervous bc i thought Christian would be scary but then i didn't find him like that at all.. it's only the other way around. i can't wait to read more to find out more about this 50 shades sexy-as-hell man!!
and i saw this pic... and you know wat, all i can see in this picture is Christian and Ana!!! :woot2: :wub:

Credits pic to VOLUME

 

[Kiachue1]

Hi Kiki! i know i said in my ff page that i wouldn't come to read your ff just yet cos i didn't want to get distracted from school but i couldn't stand it... my intention was to read only 2 chapters during my break time but then you got me addicted and i've read everything!! lol this is soooo HOT!! first i was kinda nervous bc i thought Christian would be scary but then i didn't find him like that at all.. it's only the other way around. i can't wait to read more to find out more about this 50 shades sexy-as-hell man!!
and i saw this pic... and you know wat, all i can see in this picture is Christian and Ana!!! :woot2: :wub:

Credits pic to VOLUME

I know when I saw the photos I immediately thought of Christian and Ana haha!

 

[Kiachue1]

just wanna share what my favorite Filipino author of romance novels Miss Eve Montelibano, she read the 50 Shades of Grey and i just wowed to what she can say about the novel.


"50 SHADES EF'D: Okay pardon me but I will discuss 50 again. Bored here at the office while waiting for some paperwork. I think, what sets women off in this book is the BDSM content, that is the master and slave fantasy. BUT, have they forgotten that it's ROLE-PLAYING? It's not a real set-up. It's an imaginary contract and Ana can walk out anytime she feels like it. It's actually an invitation by Christian to explore a new dimension of sexual pleasure with Ana. I think, a lot of readers miss this. They think Christian is abusing Ana. Errr...How can you abuse someone who goes into a set up willingly?

The BDSM angle on this book is just metaphor for the centuries-old male-over-female set up. The patriarchal and even biblical concept of society, that women must always SUBMIT to their husbands. See, the thing that probably triggers negative reactions on women is the fact that this book illustrates the "degrading and demeaning" acts a woman commits in order to please her man, or in order to please herself. Human nature. And it's painful to read, especially if you have done exactly those things in the past, and worse. Nobody wants to be reminded that she had been a doormat sometime ago. I know the feeling.

Yes, who among us mature, experienced women had not at one point traded some of our ideals and principles for good ol love or lust? Love and lust, very thin line between them. If you have experienced it, you know what I mean. For a man to totally enslave a woman sexually, he must have at least some degree of "love" for him. Agree or disagree, girls? Very few would probably stand up and say "that's BS", and mostly, innocents who'd never really known what all-consuming passion is all about. But the ones who'd been there and done that, shut up, you know damn well what I'm saying.

50 is a raw, no holds-barred story of a woman full of ideals about love and happy ending (haven't we been all at one point?) which quickly get shattered when she falls in love with an absolute cynic with the most warped view on relationships. Minus the opulent setting that Christian's wealth provides in the story, it's a common scenario actually. No surprise there. I can very well empathize with Ana in so many ways. When you meet this kind of emotional force, you'd better be prepared. Wear a chastity belt Coz, you'd most likely give in to the temptation. Unless you have the self-control and principles of a...God?

Anyways, Ana wanted to keep her man and so she sacrificed "some" of her principles. She compromised herself. She gave up some of her self-respect. Aha, self-respect! What a big word. Apply that to real life...We don't really learn the hard lessons of loving until we are there in the middle of it, bleeding and crawling, naked and losing self-respect. And that's when self-love really matters most. To those who are saying that Ana is weak...she did walk away from Christian, right? You cannot really test the level of your self-respect unless you go to the "battle of respect". You can't say I respect myself and so I will not subject myself to those degrading situations. If you have experienced that kind of pain before, then please understand that Ana is "still experiencing hers". Let her have her own trip and just do the i-told-you-so act LATER, ok? Maybe Ana's story will have a different ending than yours? Maybe she'd get her man in the end and still walk tall with her self-respect intact? My point is, I think one must need to really live before he/she can say anything about self-respect. Frankly, I have more respect for women who have survived shitty relationships and gained their self-respect back than women who shout self-respect from the tower of Rapunzel without experiencing real passion or making wild hot love with a man they really dig.

I know. As a modern woman who is an advocate of women empowerment... and liking 50?...errrr this may sound like an oxymoron. Or an irony. But I don't see it that way. I do not think this book is degrading for women. This book is an honest account of a woman's journey into finding herself, her own woman. She had to test the limits of her emotional endurance before she decided that hey, I love myself more. She had to find out for herself what loving and losing is all about and in so doing found herself a better, stronger woman in the aftermath. This is a common story among us, survivors of failed relationships.

And besides...gosh...were you actually READING, 50 haters? If somebody as gorgeous as Christian Grey would desire me and want me for his own alone and pamper me like a queen...spanking gets really really hot. By all means, tie me to the fuckin' bed and please me, over and over! And this guy actually wasn't mastering Ana. Ana was mastering him. He fell into his own trap and married the girl! She conquered Christian. Dominated him. She wasn't left in the end wallowing in depression and zero self-esteem. She won at love. Now, how is that losing self-respect? How is that even degrading to women? We all go through all kinds of sacrifices to win the battles of life. And when we win, that is a cause for exultation. That is the reason why MORE women love 50. They feel it, the celebration of their womanhood in the true sense of the word.

Hell, this book is a celebration of the power of women over men. Just because it was written with a lot of kinky stuff does not diminish its true message. Many women have a version of Christian Grey in their lives and if they happen to conquer him---okay, excuse me, guys,--if they happen to win him, then congratulations. You are THE supahwoman, girl!

My advise to the 50 haters, READ again and understand the dynamics of man-woman struggle for domination. Better yet, get yourselves real hunks for BFs and experience real passion yourselves. Oh bugger that, just watch Mr. and Mrs. Smith.

Christian and Ana live in every relationship today--what you hate and what you love about your relationship. Self-respect? It lives somewhere there in between the good and the bad. But in the end...it is only you who can truly define what it means. Not Christian, not Ana, and certainly not EL. You. Look inside yourself. Judging 50 as a worthless book? Baby, you have yet to live your life.

Lastly...love, lust, desire, hate, pain, forgiveness, acceptance, survival, happiness, peace. That's what life truly is. Until you have run the gamut of those emotions, you haven't really lived fully. YET. But every passing moment is a chance to change all that."

---
Miss Eve liked the fact that EL starting to open up these kind of womanhood power to another level... specifically in sensual topic. but anyways, i'm still glad she read the 50 shades novel, i bet she'll compose another erothic story that she'll pile up with her Lothario book series.

she's one of my fave because she's not scared of writing sensual scenes. most of her female heroines in her novels are bitchy or girl fighter. fair enough to be a dominant in bed

I agree I've notice so many thought it was a disappointment but I actually liked the book. I guess its because we looked at it more deeply and differently then other people!!

 

[shengvang]

Thanks kiki for the update!

So I just recieved my copy of 50 shades, and 1 question, should I start reading it or should I wait until I dont have nothing to do.
I work 10 hrs a day, and I'm afraid that if i get started on this, I won't be able to put the book down. lol...just like how I look forward
to your version everyday! :coverlaf:

 

[lakornkiki]

I'm on cloud9 with the Volume pics. I see only Christian & Ana....but a real life version. lol.
The pic in the library is sensational.... love their chemistry oozing out from the pic..... agggh... I better put a library scene in here.

The other pics are great too... I changed the color to B&W and it's looks amazing. Now I have pics for another MV. Man, I am one busy fan.
Look at this (I posted in TNNKK thread too but I think it really belongs here...)

Intimate moment for Christian and Ana

@Kenann -- I would say that you won't be able to put down first two books so you'll need a good weekend (or 2 days) to read through... on your days off maybe??? Then take a break... a week/2 weeks ... let their story sink in... then get into the last book. All have it's own twists but we find out about him a little by little.... and you'll be in completely in love with him by the end of 3rd book. At least, I was and I am..... If I picture Nadech as Christian.... I am completely D.O.N.E. That's one crazy sexy control freak man to love.

 

[shengvang]

Seriously, good thing I have not start on it yet. My hands just want to grab on to the book and start reading it. I'm like
slaping my hand every minute here. From what Sary told me, I might need a good weekend too! lol...
For sure it's gonna be a rough/crazy weekend for me then. I don't know about you, but as of right now, all the things that I
do or read "other FF" that is not starring yadech, Yadech seem to always be in the picture, and it make me just want to
smack myself in the head. lol...I just can't take Yadech off my mind....It's pretty crazy, don't you think so! hehehe, I'll
trust your words on loving christain as I keep reading. thanks for the advice ja!

 

[lakornkiki]

Chapter 13: Say Yes


They spent the day exploring each other. Ana learning more things about herself as he took her through the erotic journey, slowly and gently. He was a good teacher with many rules and she was an extraordinary student. She learned many ways to have pleasure as well as giving him pleasure, using her mouth, her hands and her body.

In the middle of their passionate day, he pulls her in to his arms and asked her…
Christian: “Say Yes” he whispers.
Ana: “To what?” she doesn’t know what he is asking of her.
Christian: “To our arrangement.” “To being mine.” “Please, Ana.” He pleads between kisses. Ana felt so wanted.

He also introduced her that neckties are fun and not just for tying around the neck. He tied her up with a silver grey tie, her hands above her head while he kissed her – all over. It makes her needy and begging for Christian. She wanted to touch him but she can’t. The restriction made her body heats up. He was ruthless… he tortured her with sweet sensations until she couldn’t hold anymore… he made her see the stars over and over. They rode the wave of passion together. Coming down together.

Christian: “See how good we are together?” he whispers as he strokes his nose against hers.

Then they heard some noises outside his bedroom door. It’s a woman’s voice and P’Boy’s.
“but he never sleeps in… he must be ill”
“Mrs. Kugimiya please”
“Boy – you cannot keep me from my son!”
“Um…… he is not alone”
“Oh” disbelief in her voice.

Christian: “Shit!” It’s my mother”.
He got out of the bed and put on his clothes.
Christian: “Come. Get dressed….that’s if you want to meet my mother”.
Ana: “Christian, I can’t move”… and that made him smile. He undoes the tie.
Christian: “Another first”. He is satisfied. Amused.
Ana: “Perhaps, I can just stay here. I have no clean clothes”…she is nervous about meeting his mother.
Christian: “Don’t worry. Wear something of mine. I’d like you to meet my mother” he continued “I’ll go and see her first…I will expect you in the living room in 5 min”… with that he went out of the room.

…

Mrs. Kugimiya was a beautiful woman with warm eyes.
Christian: “Mother, this is Ana Sperbund. Ana, this is Mam Jintara Kugimiya”
Mrs. Kugimiya: “Nice to meet you”
Ana: “like wise ,Mrs. Kugimiya” she says quietly. She is embarrassed.

Mrs. Kugimiya looked at Christian and asked
Mrs. Kugimiya: “so how did you two meet?”
Christian: “Ana interviewed me for a student paper at Chula” “I am an honorary guest at the graduation this week”.

Mrs. Kugimiya: “You are graduating this week?”
Ana: “Yes”
Her phone rings and she thinks it’s Mint. Mint must be worry about her.
Ana: “Excuse me, please”

Christian is listening to his mother as she talked about her trip to Pattaya. His eyes never leaving Ana… watching her on the phone.
Ana: “Hello? Mint?”
Pope: “Hi Ana! I’ve been trying to call you… to say sorry about Friday. I had a little too much to drink”.
Ana: “ah, P’Pope… it’s not a good time to talk right now. “ she can feel his eyes.
Pope: “Where are you?”
Ana: “Pattaya”
Pope: “What are you doing in Pattaya? Are you with him?”
Ana: “I’ll call you later… I have to go now. Bye” she hangs up and walked back to the mother and son.

Mrs. Kugimiya: “I thought we might have lunch together in Pattaya but I see you have other plans” she gets ready to leave. “I’ll see you back in Bangkok”. She leans in and give her cheeks to him. He kisses her sweetly on both cheeks briefly. She doesn’t touch him.

Mrs. Kugimiya: “It was a pleasure Anastasia. I do hope we meet again” her voice is warm but authoritative. She then left with Boy who escorted the lady to her car.

Christian glared at Ana.
Chrisitian: “so the photographer called?” how does he know? He must have heard her even though she tried to be as quiet as possible. “what does he want?”
Ana: “To apologize for Friday”.

They got interrupted by work calls. He then disappeared for a minute and returned with a manila envelope.
Christian: “This is the contract. Read it and do some research. We can talk about it in details next week”.
Ana: “Research?”
Christian: “you’ll be amazed by what you can find on the internet.”
Ana’s eye widen as she thought of doing this kind of (topic) research on school, work and/or Mint’s computer. She doesn’t have her own yet. Her mother promised one for her for graduation.

Christian: “what is it?”
Ana: “oh, the research… I usually use computer at schools and Mint’s computer at home. I don't know about doing this research.... um, maybe I'll see if I can use Mint's....”
Christian: “no. no. I am sure I can...um, lend you one”.. “get ready… we will drive back to Bangkok after lunch in town”. He hands her the envelope.
She wanted to hear Mint’s voice now as they are speaking about her. She doesn’t want her friend to worry. Maybe she can try calling her again.

Ana: “I’ll make a quick call…”
Christian: “the photographer?” his voice is cold, stern. “I don’t like to share, Ms. Sperbund. Remember that!” with that warning, he walked away to get ready to get back to Bangkok.

Ana wanted to tell him that she was just calling her best friend but his behavior stopped her. He was cold and aloof.
Gone was the beautiful, relaxed man who was just making love to her earlier.

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[Sary101]

Bellefire. Thank you so very much for the article. Said Author is so correct. Here Here to "our" INNER GODDESS. Yes sums up what probably 50 Shades Trilogy fans believe in. Haters are more cynical than they let on. One question: Do you believe in LOVE? Most especially Unconditional Love?

You do what you must for the person you love and in the end, you cannot change anyone unless they want to change themselves. Ana is my heroine. <3.

Thanks again Kiki for 50 Shades: Yadech Version.

 

[MrscChum]

Agree with u Sary! Can't change no one unless they want to change themself.

I'm soo hook on this ff, I really want to go buy the other two book but I just dnt want to spoil myself before Kiki ff! Thanks Kiki for the update na!!!