narkrakdin24^^
sarNie Adult
Oho!! Is this rated r? Just asking cuz so far, seems like it. Damn.. I want M&M to accept lakorn together with this plot. Hot tee soot. Can't wait for more.
Retribution (FFM&M)
- Thread starter YinGgyTASTIC
- Start date
YinGgyTASTIC
sarNie Adult
I am debating haha. I know me too. I wish M&m one day play in a lakron that once mark is aggressive.narkrakdin24^^ said:
YinGgyTASTIC
sarNie Adult
ahaha I have too.l want it to me temting to my readers hahahnklue1 said:
narkrakdin24^^
sarNie Adult
Lol P'Mark would have no problem playing that. Tae P'Mint? She would seem to me like she would blush from time to time secretly. Oho yes. Almost all authors stop at the best part. Please update when you have time.
YinGgyTASTIC
sarNie Adult
lol i never thought of that and i am the author. haha yes. she is sercetly or just doeant know it. like i say i want to keep u us entertain
YinGgyTASTIC
sarNie Adult
Ep 3.b
S: San
N: Nit
San took off his shirt. Nit look to her right closing her
eyes.
N: Why are you talking off your shirt? I am a woman.
S: Indeed you are a woman but every woman has a secret. That
secret is… they love it when a sexy me like me take off their clothes… Especially in front of them.
Nit’s face still faced to the right. She opens her eyes and
stared right back at San. This time she sees that San has nothing on but his
boxer. She panic to get loose from the handcuffs.
Nit think to herself
N: urgh no use!
San laughed . He went closer to Nit with his half smile,
haunting her with 98.5 percent of his naked body.
S: Were going to take a shower together.
San lift up his right eyebrows.
N: No! Get away from me! You pervert!
San laughed without remembering why he was mad at her in the
first place. It’s like he slowing forgetting someone else and paying more attention
to Nit. He loves to tease her. He loves to say mean things to her. He is
enjoying every aspect of what he was doing.
San looks at Nit clothes. Nit look at what San was staring
and indeed he was look at Nit chest aka shirt.
N: What are you looking at!
S: Oh! Your clothes have been old for days now. I was wondering
if you want to take it off?
N: NO! NO!
San reach out to rip off her shirt but it was only until Nit
turn to her right where he stared at Nit’s little scar He start to remember why
he was teasing her, bullying her.
San stop what he was doing. He stood up and went to go grab the
bowl from under the bathroom sink, fill it up with cold water.
Nit still closing her eyes because of the nightmare San was
giving her with his 98.5 percent naked body.
San walks back to Nit. He lift the bowl fill of cold water
and held it 3 inches from the top of Nit head. Nit opens her eyes. Right when she open her eyes San pour the
bowl of cold water on to Nit.
Nit gave San the death glare. San smiled evilly and said.
S: I told you we were going to take a shower together!
San went to go grab the towel from the sink and walks back
to Nit. He kneels down to her.
S: If you think I was into you. You wish! No one will ever
love a killer like you.
San threw the towel to Nit.
S: Please wipe my bathroom. You’re making it wet.
San gave another towel from the sink and went out of the
bathroom and lock the bathroom door. San stood outside of the bathroom for a
bit. His face turn until a unsatisfied face.
Nit cried in tears.
N: Nit, your so stupid, why didn’t you stood up for
yourself. You let a man like him to punish you like this?
Nit wiped her tears and looks
around the bathroom. She tried to moves
her handcuffs but again no use. She was stuck. She can’t stand she can’t move
but sit there useless.
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S: San
It was getting dark and San sitting in his bed thinking
about the kiss at the waterfall.
S: Why did I kiss that killer? I
should of let her die in the water?
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N: Nit
Nit kept coughing. She still was wearing her clothes from
this morning where she almost drown in the waterfall; still have gotten more
water pour on her.
She was getting cold. She look at the bathroom window and
realize the window was open. She stares at the moon and thought about the kiss
by the waterfall.
She touched her lips.
N: You say you hate
me? By kissing me is what you call hatred? If so I would rather die.
Nit coughed again. She wanted
to hug herself but she couldn’t because the handcuffs. She let down some tears.
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S: San
By mid night, San remember that Nit was in the bathroom.an
walk to the bathroom and pen up the door. Nit was just sleeping with one of her
hand lain flat on the bathroom floor . San went closer to Nit and was debating
if he should uncuff her. But he keeps shaking his head no. Then Nit move a
little bit to where her hand feels San forehead to his lips. San move back a
bit and fell her hand.
S: She hot? Is she having a fever?
San went to feel her forehead and indeed she was having a
fever.
S: It’s the clothes she was wearing this morning.
San uncuff her and carried her to his bed. He laid her in
his bed. He look at the clothes that she was wearing. He looks at the time and
it was very late. He would call Juoy but it would be weird if she sees him like
this.
San starts unbutton her shirt, slowly. He swallow his saliva…
still slowly unbuttoning her shirt.
P.S So sorry for all the teasing hehe
I got stuck at him unbuttoning her shirt.
S: San
N: Nit
San took off his shirt. Nit look to her right closing her
eyes.
N: Why are you talking off your shirt? I am a woman.
S: Indeed you are a woman but every woman has a secret. That
secret is… they love it when a sexy me like me take off their clothes… Especially in front of them.
Nit’s face still faced to the right. She opens her eyes and
stared right back at San. This time she sees that San has nothing on but his
boxer. She panic to get loose from the handcuffs.
Nit think to herself
N: urgh no use!
San laughed . He went closer to Nit with his half smile,
haunting her with 98.5 percent of his naked body.
S: Were going to take a shower together.
San lift up his right eyebrows.
N: No! Get away from me! You pervert!
San laughed without remembering why he was mad at her in the
first place. It’s like he slowing forgetting someone else and paying more attention
to Nit. He loves to tease her. He loves to say mean things to her. He is
enjoying every aspect of what he was doing.
San looks at Nit clothes. Nit look at what San was staring
and indeed he was look at Nit chest aka shirt.
N: What are you looking at!
S: Oh! Your clothes have been old for days now. I was wondering
if you want to take it off?
N: NO! NO!
San reach out to rip off her shirt but it was only until Nit
turn to her right where he stared at Nit’s little scar He start to remember why
he was teasing her, bullying her.
San stop what he was doing. He stood up and went to go grab the
bowl from under the bathroom sink, fill it up with cold water.
Nit still closing her eyes because of the nightmare San was
giving her with his 98.5 percent naked body.
San walks back to Nit. He lift the bowl fill of cold water
and held it 3 inches from the top of Nit head. Nit opens her eyes. Right when she open her eyes San pour the
bowl of cold water on to Nit.
Nit gave San the death glare. San smiled evilly and said.
S: I told you we were going to take a shower together!
San went to go grab the towel from the sink and walks back
to Nit. He kneels down to her.
S: If you think I was into you. You wish! No one will ever
love a killer like you.
San threw the towel to Nit.
S: Please wipe my bathroom. You’re making it wet.
San gave another towel from the sink and went out of the
bathroom and lock the bathroom door. San stood outside of the bathroom for a
bit. His face turn until a unsatisfied face.
Nit cried in tears.
N: Nit, your so stupid, why didn’t you stood up for
yourself. You let a man like him to punish you like this?
Nit wiped her tears and looks
around the bathroom. She tried to moves
her handcuffs but again no use. She was stuck. She can’t stand she can’t move
but sit there useless.
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S: San
It was getting dark and San sitting in his bed thinking
about the kiss at the waterfall.
S: Why did I kiss that killer? I
should of let her die in the water?
--------------
N: Nit
Nit kept coughing. She still was wearing her clothes from
this morning where she almost drown in the waterfall; still have gotten more
water pour on her.
She was getting cold. She look at the bathroom window and
realize the window was open. She stares at the moon and thought about the kiss
by the waterfall.
She touched her lips.
N: You say you hate
me? By kissing me is what you call hatred? If so I would rather die.
Nit coughed again. She wanted
to hug herself but she couldn’t because the handcuffs. She let down some tears.
------------------------
S: San
By mid night, San remember that Nit was in the bathroom.an
walk to the bathroom and pen up the door. Nit was just sleeping with one of her
hand lain flat on the bathroom floor . San went closer to Nit and was debating
if he should uncuff her. But he keeps shaking his head no. Then Nit move a
little bit to where her hand feels San forehead to his lips. San move back a
bit and fell her hand.
S: She hot? Is she having a fever?
San went to feel her forehead and indeed she was having a
fever.
S: It’s the clothes she was wearing this morning.
San uncuff her and carried her to his bed. He laid her in
his bed. He look at the clothes that she was wearing. He looks at the time and
it was very late. He would call Juoy but it would be weird if she sees him like
this.
San starts unbutton her shirt, slowly. He swallow his saliva…
still slowly unbuttoning her shirt.
P.S So sorry for all the teasing hehe
I got stuck at him unbuttoning her shirt. 
YinGgyTASTIC
sarNie Adult
lol. it leave me wondering also and i am the writer. lol
narkrakdin24^^
sarNie Adult
Oho!!! Now there's Sawan Biang involved!! Hottt!! Roy Ruk Haeng Adeed, Jam Loey Ruk, A pinch of Borusat Bambut Kaen, and Sawan Biang!! *nosebleed* One of the Best Author, story, and plot ever!!!
Oui. Why do you like to tease us? Jai rai ah. Jk. It's great. Please Update.
P.S.
I realized just now that I've been saying Oho a lot. I can't help it. It's the first thing that popped up when I saw you updated.
Oui. Why do you like to tease us? Jai rai ah. Jk. It's great. Please Update.
P.S.
I realized just now that I've been saying Oho a lot. I can't help it. It's the first thing that popped up when I saw you updated.
YinGgyTASTIC
sarNie Adult
Aha. Nosebleed* I didn't realize I was using sawan bieng but sinc eyou said it. lol. hah aIm such a tease. keke anyway I got a writers block at the moment he was unbuttoning her shirt. so dont worry hahanarkrakdin24^^ said:
nklue1 said:
Lol writeers block. haha srry but i promise not to leave you guys hanging
YinGgyTASTIC
sarNie Adult
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YinGgyTASTIC
sarNie Adult
Ep 4A
B: Boy
S: Service boy
Knock!Knock!Knock!
B: Come in.
The doors open.
B: What is it?
S: Mr. P Lida krup, sorry to inform you but the fruits you
have order had already rotten.
Boy looks at the service boy.
B: How can that be?
S: I don’t know sir.
B: No. No. this won’t work .
Boy stood up from his chair walking back and forth.
B: Tell manager Kia to investigate the rotten fruits.
The service boy left.
Boy picks up his cellphone and call Rin.
B: Rin, hurry and give me that
fruit farm number that your auntie was talking about.
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N: Nit
S: San
Nit wakes up from the warm of the blankets she was hugging.
She stretches her arms. She stops and realizes she wasn’t in the bathroom,
handcuffs to the bar. She looks around
the room.
N: Isn’t this San room?
She got off bed and walk around the room. She walks pass the
mirror and she stops. She walked backward and looked in the mirror.
N: This is not my clothes?!!!
Nit felted herself. She opens up the shirt and sees that she wasn’t
wearing her bra. She feels her boobs.
Nit screamed.
N: AHHHHHHHHHH!
San came rushing to his room.
S: Whats…wrong!
San sees the image of a girl holding on to her boobs.
Nit looks at San and screamed even louder.
N: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
San cover his ears up and shook his head.
S: SHUT UP!!
N: You baster! You raped me!
San went to Nit and cover her mouth with his hand.
S: Can you please be quite!
Nit nodded yes. San
let go off his hand.
Nit screamed again.
N: AHHHHH!
San carry Nit and threw her to the bed. San got on top of her and pinned her down.
S: SHUUUUTTT UPPP!!!!!!!
Nit zipped her mouth.
S: I did not rape you yesterday! Or did you wanted me too?
Nit opened her eyes.
Flash back.
San slowly unbutton Nit shirt. He closed his eyes and faced
to the right forcing his hands to take off her shirt. But then when he try to
take off her shirt Nit moved to her left, making San to accidently bumping Nit boobs
with his hand. He opens his eyes.
S: OMG!OMG!OMG!
San can feel his nose bleeding.
S: Stop it! Stop it San! She is your enemy. Hurry and change her up!
San faced back to his right and pulled Nit up.
S: Why am I the one always taking off your clothes….
San quickly unclip her bra and quickly grab the blanket from
the other side and cover Nit’s body. San shrived with fear. He went to his
closet and grabbed his clothes. Once again he faces to his right, putting the
shirt on Nit. Then he let her go, making her bounce on the bed.
End of
flashback.
N: Get of me!!
San got off Nit, where Nit went quickly under the blanket.
S: Time to work!
N: Work??
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S: San
N: Nit
San pull Nit all the way to his fruits farm. San let go of
Nit. Nit touched her clothes, making her very unconformable.
S: Pick all these grapes from this side!
N: But there is like thousands. Where are the other workers?
San picked up a rope from the ground and tied Nit ankle.
S: I told them they can have a day off.
Nit gave San the mad face.
N: Why are you tying me with this rope?
S: So I can pull you back if your far.
San went closer to Nit.
S: Plus someone might want to run away.
San turns around and sits on the ground, holding on to the
rope. Nit stomps the ground.
S: HURRY! The grapes aren’t going to pick themselves up.
Nit angrily grabs the buckets and started touring down the hills
picking up the grapes.
S: Don’t forget those apples over there. I love apples!
Nit looked at the grape. Nit gave up a big yuck.
N: He thinks he king or something. Shit just waits when you
go to sleep. I’m going to stab you.
San smiled looking at Nit, being very entertained.
S: What! Did you say something?
N: Oh, nothing!
S: Hurry! Those grapes! Those apples! Those oranges! Those....
San laughed.
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B: Boy
N: Nit
S: San
W: Worker
N: Urghh! Its so HOT!! Can I please sit down and rest..
S: What it has been only 3 hours?! Keep going!
Then San cellphone starts to ring. He picked it up while
holding to the rope.
S: Hello?
B: Is this the owner of the Printhip’s Fruits Farm?
S: Will, yes it is.
San look over at Nit.
B: I was wondering if we can do business together.
S: That find with me? But I can’t guarantee until I set up
an arrangement to meet up with you?
B: When are you available?
S: Tomorrow?
Nit looked over at San. She sees that he is too distracted by
his phone call. She took the time to use the little knife that she had use to
cut the grapes and starts to cut the rope. It was a success.
Nit slowly walks away. Then Nit started running as fast as
she can to the front of the house. She sees a black car. She went to the car
and sees that the car door was wide open. She looks inside and sees that the keys
were also in the car.
S: Ok. Tomorrow..
San hung up on the phone and realize it was really quite. He
pulls the ropes. But it feels like it was not heavy at all. He pull and pull
until the end of the ropes. He hears a
car engine starting. He drop the rope and rush running to the car.
San ran to the front of the house. He sees one of his workers.
S: What happen?
W: I was using your car to pack up some fruits to the stores
and someone stole your car.
S: NIT!
San started running.
Nit tried to drive the car since it was is manual use. She
didn’t know how to drive it so the car was going by itself.
Luckily for San, he had already reached up near the car. Nit
look at the rear mirror and sees that San was chasing her in foot. She panic!
San run even faster getting a bit close to the car. He made a big jump and got
on to the car. Nit move the wheel left and right, making San losing his grips
on the car.
N: AH! Get off!!
S: STOPP! THE CARR!!!!!!
San jumps to the top of the car. Nit let out a small scream.
San made another jump making him almost getting hit off the car. He quickly
grab the front window and pound on the window. Nit still freaking out.
S: STOP THE CAR OR YOUR GOING TO KILL BOTH OF US!!!
Nit hit the break. San got push off the car making him roll
to the ground, hitting his head on the cement ground. Nit got out of the car. She
walks to San and look down on San.
N: Khun San?
Nit kicked San. San was knocking out cold, will as what Nit
was suspecting. Nit knelt down to San. She look back at the car and stood up
trying to ran back to the car. But then San grab her ankle, making Nit knelt
down again. San grab her arms pulling her down on him, making both of them
rolling on the cement ground.
San got up and grab Nit arms.
N: Let me go!
San push her to the car and drove back to the farm. San
carry Nit back to his bedroom. He once again drop her on his bed.
S: You really wanted it that way? First you killed my wife
and now your trying to kill me!!!
N: I wasn’t trying too!
S: Fine, if that how you wanted, don’t tell me I didn’t warn
you.
San quickly got on top Nit, pinning her down. San pushing
down her hands and kissing her neck and cheeks.
N: Stop it! Let go of me! PLEASE!
San pull his head up.
S: Since I can’t kill you, I’m going to make you mine!
N: Let me goo….
Nit cried with tears. San continues to kiss Nit on her neck
and cheeks until he kissed her lips. Nit had stopped moving, making San
tempting to open his eyes and look at Nit. He stares in Nit’s eyes. He can feel
her pain.
N: Please, stop….Please……
Nit still shredded more tears.
The head wound San was having was coming back to haunt him.
The blood dripped to Nit left cheeks. San look at her left cheeks. He starts to
feel very dizzy and he slowly close his eyes and fainted on top of Nit.
N: Khun! Khun!
B: Boy
S: Service boy
Knock!Knock!Knock!
B: Come in.
The doors open.
B: What is it?
S: Mr. P Lida krup, sorry to inform you but the fruits you
have order had already rotten.
Boy looks at the service boy.
B: How can that be?
S: I don’t know sir.
B: No. No. this won’t work .
Boy stood up from his chair walking back and forth.
B: Tell manager Kia to investigate the rotten fruits.
The service boy left.
Boy picks up his cellphone and call Rin.
B: Rin, hurry and give me that
fruit farm number that your auntie was talking about.
------------------------------------
N: Nit
S: San
Nit wakes up from the warm of the blankets she was hugging.
She stretches her arms. She stops and realizes she wasn’t in the bathroom,
handcuffs to the bar. She looks around
the room.
N: Isn’t this San room?
She got off bed and walk around the room. She walks pass the
mirror and she stops. She walked backward and looked in the mirror.
N: This is not my clothes?!!!
Nit felted herself. She opens up the shirt and sees that she wasn’t
wearing her bra. She feels her boobs.
Nit screamed.
N: AHHHHHHHHHH!
San came rushing to his room.
S: Whats…wrong!
San sees the image of a girl holding on to her boobs.
Nit looks at San and screamed even louder.
N: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
San cover his ears up and shook his head.
S: SHUT UP!!
N: You baster! You raped me!
San went to Nit and cover her mouth with his hand.
S: Can you please be quite!
Nit nodded yes. San
let go off his hand.
Nit screamed again.
N: AHHHHH!
San carry Nit and threw her to the bed. San got on top of her and pinned her down.
S: SHUUUUTTT UPPP!!!!!!!
Nit zipped her mouth.
S: I did not rape you yesterday! Or did you wanted me too?
Nit opened her eyes.
Flash back.
San slowly unbutton Nit shirt. He closed his eyes and faced
to the right forcing his hands to take off her shirt. But then when he try to
take off her shirt Nit moved to her left, making San to accidently bumping Nit boobs
with his hand. He opens his eyes.
S: OMG!OMG!OMG!
San can feel his nose bleeding.
S: Stop it! Stop it San! She is your enemy. Hurry and change her up!
San faced back to his right and pulled Nit up.
S: Why am I the one always taking off your clothes….
San quickly unclip her bra and quickly grab the blanket from
the other side and cover Nit’s body. San shrived with fear. He went to his
closet and grabbed his clothes. Once again he faces to his right, putting the
shirt on Nit. Then he let her go, making her bounce on the bed.
End of
flashback.
N: Get of me!!
San got off Nit, where Nit went quickly under the blanket.
S: Time to work!
N: Work??
--------------------------------
S: San
N: Nit
San pull Nit all the way to his fruits farm. San let go of
Nit. Nit touched her clothes, making her very unconformable.
S: Pick all these grapes from this side!
N: But there is like thousands. Where are the other workers?
San picked up a rope from the ground and tied Nit ankle.
S: I told them they can have a day off.
Nit gave San the mad face.
N: Why are you tying me with this rope?
S: So I can pull you back if your far.
San went closer to Nit.
S: Plus someone might want to run away.
San turns around and sits on the ground, holding on to the
rope. Nit stomps the ground.
S: HURRY! The grapes aren’t going to pick themselves up.
Nit angrily grabs the buckets and started touring down the hills
picking up the grapes.
S: Don’t forget those apples over there. I love apples!
Nit looked at the grape. Nit gave up a big yuck.
N: He thinks he king or something. Shit just waits when you
go to sleep. I’m going to stab you.
San smiled looking at Nit, being very entertained.
S: What! Did you say something?
N: Oh, nothing!
S: Hurry! Those grapes! Those apples! Those oranges! Those....
San laughed.
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B: Boy
N: Nit
S: San
W: Worker
N: Urghh! Its so HOT!! Can I please sit down and rest..
S: What it has been only 3 hours?! Keep going!
Then San cellphone starts to ring. He picked it up while
holding to the rope.
S: Hello?
B: Is this the owner of the Printhip’s Fruits Farm?
S: Will, yes it is.
San look over at Nit.
B: I was wondering if we can do business together.
S: That find with me? But I can’t guarantee until I set up
an arrangement to meet up with you?
B: When are you available?
S: Tomorrow?
Nit looked over at San. She sees that he is too distracted by
his phone call. She took the time to use the little knife that she had use to
cut the grapes and starts to cut the rope. It was a success.
Nit slowly walks away. Then Nit started running as fast as
she can to the front of the house. She sees a black car. She went to the car
and sees that the car door was wide open. She looks inside and sees that the keys
were also in the car.
S: Ok. Tomorrow..
San hung up on the phone and realize it was really quite. He
pulls the ropes. But it feels like it was not heavy at all. He pull and pull
until the end of the ropes. He hears a
car engine starting. He drop the rope and rush running to the car.
San ran to the front of the house. He sees one of his workers.
S: What happen?
W: I was using your car to pack up some fruits to the stores
and someone stole your car.
S: NIT!
San started running.
Nit tried to drive the car since it was is manual use. She
didn’t know how to drive it so the car was going by itself.
Luckily for San, he had already reached up near the car. Nit
look at the rear mirror and sees that San was chasing her in foot. She panic!
San run even faster getting a bit close to the car. He made a big jump and got
on to the car. Nit move the wheel left and right, making San losing his grips
on the car.
N: AH! Get off!!
S: STOPP! THE CARR!!!!!!
San jumps to the top of the car. Nit let out a small scream.
San made another jump making him almost getting hit off the car. He quickly
grab the front window and pound on the window. Nit still freaking out.
S: STOP THE CAR OR YOUR GOING TO KILL BOTH OF US!!!
Nit hit the break. San got push off the car making him roll
to the ground, hitting his head on the cement ground. Nit got out of the car. She
walks to San and look down on San.
N: Khun San?
Nit kicked San. San was knocking out cold, will as what Nit
was suspecting. Nit knelt down to San. She look back at the car and stood up
trying to ran back to the car. But then San grab her ankle, making Nit knelt
down again. San grab her arms pulling her down on him, making both of them
rolling on the cement ground.
San got up and grab Nit arms.
N: Let me go!
San push her to the car and drove back to the farm. San
carry Nit back to his bedroom. He once again drop her on his bed.
S: You really wanted it that way? First you killed my wife
and now your trying to kill me!!!
N: I wasn’t trying too!
S: Fine, if that how you wanted, don’t tell me I didn’t warn
you.
San quickly got on top Nit, pinning her down. San pushing
down her hands and kissing her neck and cheeks.
N: Stop it! Let go of me! PLEASE!
San pull his head up.
S: Since I can’t kill you, I’m going to make you mine!
N: Let me goo….
Nit cried with tears. San continues to kiss Nit on her neck
and cheeks until he kissed her lips. Nit had stopped moving, making San
tempting to open his eyes and look at Nit. He stares in Nit’s eyes. He can feel
her pain.
N: Please, stop….Please……
Nit still shredded more tears.
The head wound San was having was coming back to haunt him.
The blood dripped to Nit left cheeks. San look at her left cheeks. He starts to
feel very dizzy and he slowly close his eyes and fainted on top of Nit.
N: Khun! Khun!
narkrakdin24^^
sarNie Adult
*sigh* Satisfaction then more teasing. I love this chapter! I love every chapter!! I JUST WISH WITH ALL MY HEART that MTEAm will pair up in a lakorn like this.