Retribution (FFM&M)
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sarNie Adult
Aha I miss you guys srrt for the long wait. Exams are finally done lol
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sarNie Adult
Finally an update 
Ep 7 b
The night was getting dark. Nit can feel the warm
breeze winding with her hair whiling she look up in the sky. Of course she was
happy. It’s the very first night she was free out of that room.
N: The stars do look brighter in the country sides.
Nit looks around to find something hard to sit on.
She walks toward the big stone and sit on it. At that very moment San was
walking up behind her.
S: You must feel happy that you get the feel the
wind.
Nit heard San’s voice and stood up on the rock. She turns
around to see San walking her way. She got worry because she was afraid he was
going to do something to her. She quickly turn to step down but it didn’t goes
as she planned. She turns around to quick, making her slip on her toe shoe. San
reach his arms to catch her.
Nit screamed.
San catches Nit. San look inside Nit eyes. She can
feel the sparkly affection they were having. San smiled. Nit can’t believe San
smiled at her. Her muscles around her mouth couldn’t help but smile back.
S: Idiot! Why are you smiling?! Get off, you are
heavy as heck!!!
Nit smiled completely melted away.
San tip toe and drop Nit to the ground.
N: Ay!
San went to grab Nit arm.
N: Ouch, it hurt.
S: I don’t care. Here, follow me.
N: How can I follow you when you are pulling me?
San gave Nit the death glare.
Nit covers her mouth.
San let go of her arm and went to carry her.
N: Ay what are you doing? Ay?
S: Shhh! You better shut your mouth.
Nit zip her mouth and stare at San eyes.
If you look closer San’s mother was staring out her
room to see the actions San and Nit was having.
J: Madame, Should I do something?
SM: Aha, don’t. It’s very entertaining.
San carry Nit all the way to his room. He drop Nit to his bed.
S: Go to sleep!
N: But I don’t want to yet?
S: So you want to see me strip in front of you?
N: Eww, what human being does that?
San pointed at himself.
S: This human being!
Nit rolled her eyes at San and started smart talking
to San.
N: Don’y you dare strip!
San slowly unbutton his shirt half way, showing his
shoulder.
N: What the heck are you doing?
S: Do women get excited when a men is willing to
strip in front of her?
Nit grabbed the pillow and started biting on the
corner of the pillow.
San went to his other shoulder and slowly lift down
his shirt.
Nit could handle it nomore and threw the pillow at
San.
N: Eww, you pervert!!!!
Nit lay down and close her eyes.
San seduced face turn into a laughing face. It’s
like he is enjoying it. He feel something melting in his chest.
The next morning Boy was walking to his office. He
open the door and sees Rin sitting in his office waiting for him already.
B: Why are you here so early?
R: Sir, I think I found out where Nit is?
B: Where?
Rin open his case and grab a picture out. He shows it to Boy.
B: This is Nit? And that waterfall? I recognize it?
R: Yes, that the waterfall near the cabin. I got
this picture from the tourist. They thought at first it was two couple fighting
but when they got closer to the couple they was only kissing. The tourist didn’t
think of anything because many couples that go out there does a lot of romantic
things there also.
B: But that guy? Who
is the guy? All I see is his back?
R: I can’t tell you that at the moment but I’m for
sure Nit is still around that area.
B: Ok, please go find out who this man is? Ask those
tourist to him us draw a picture of him.
R: Yes, yes.
The sun was shining in front of San face. He open
his eyes and realize Nit wasn’t there anymore. He got up quick to put on his
shirt. When he grab his shirt a posted note fell off to the ground. He step on
it.
He can feel the stiff of the posted note on his
foot. He sit back down on his bed and read the note.
N: Ay MEANYY!! Your mother asked for help in the
fruit garden. So I went ahead and help her. I made you some apple pies. I heard
it’s your favorite pie. J
San smiled.
S: This girl is really crazy. I kidnap her and
torture her and still she is willing to help my mother garden the fruits?
San put the noted to the table and smiled again.
Then he thought.
S: San, keep calm. Why are you smiling to this women?
Then Jouy came rushing in to his room.
S: Khun San ka, there is something wrong with the
wires around the fruits garden. It’s not working.
S: What???
Nit was holding the basket for San’s mother. She was
picking the ripe grapes.
SM: You know I would love a daughter in law like
you?
Nit blushed.
N: Oh, it’s fine.
SM: Why is that?
San’s mother laughed.
Nit thinks I her head.
N: Ugh, that man is terrible! He stink like alcohol
and it feel like he never..
SM: Is everything ok, Nit?
N: Yea.
Nit smiled while holding on the bag.
One of his workers came upon San.
W: Khun Printhip, We try putting the botts together
and making them connect. It won’t spark.
San went down to his knees and look inside the big machines.
S: Give me that botts there.
W: Krup.
San’s Mother was cutting down so much grapes that
the basket Nit was holding was getting very heavy.
N: San’s mother, it’s getting really heavy, Don’t
you think this is enough?
SM: Nit, It’s never enough.
Nit smiled with a urging face to drop the basket. It
was getting so heavy on Nit that when she walks she feels like tripping. Then
San’s mother stands up and looks at Nit.
SM: Haha, its ok if you let it down. I don’t want
you to hold it all day ling. That would be so tiring. San’s mother gave Nit a
hand slowly letting down the big basket.
San asked the worker to check if the wire work. So
the worker grabs a stick and threw it to the wire. The wires shock the stick
and gave the stick some smokes.
W: Yes, it work!\
N: Madame, be careful cause I don’t want to push you
to those wire over there.
SM: It’s ok, Jouy told me they were dead.
Right when San’s mother was giving Nit a hand with
the basket of grapes Nit slips on her shoes causing San’ mother to fall back ,
making her hand touch the wire behide her. San’s mother hand was shocked by the
wire that made San’s mother shaking. Nit quickly drops the basket to the
ground. All the grapes were roling down to San’s mother. Nit grabs San’s mother hand which making the electricity
shock go through her also. But she manage to pull San’s mother out of the wire.
N: Madame! Madame are you ok? Madame!!!!
Then Jouy came back to the garden with another big
basket. Jouy sees that Madame had fainted.
N: Jouy! Go get help!! Please!!!
J: Ka, Ka!
Jouy rush toward San way.
S: Ok, next time don’t stick these two botts together,
they do not match ok!
W: Ok. Sorry ,boss.
Then San sees Jouy running towards him with the worst
face ever.
Jouy stop trying to catch her breath.
S: Is there something wrong?
J: Madame, she..
S: She what?
J: Madame, she been shock with the wires.
San heart drop, he pushes Jouy to the side and ran
toward a scream.
He stop and listen.
S: That Nit voice?
N: Anybody please! Help me! Please!!!
San rush toward Nit. He sees Nit holding on to his
mother. San drop tears. Nit look scare because the image San is seeing was not
what he was thinking.
S: GET OF MY MOTHER YOU MURDER!!
San grab both of Nit’s arms and push her near the
fruit trunk, making her hit her head on a rock.
N: Ouch!
Nit touches her head again. It was at the same exact
place when she ran over Pa.
She turns around and sees that San went to carry her
mother away. San turn his back and sees that Nit was also hurt. He stop and
walked a bit close to her but then his mother made a movement. San stop once
more and turn the other way, looking at Nit with the evil face.
Nit watches San and the other people walk away from
her, giving her the death glare.
Nit still sits by the fruit trunk crying to herself.
N: Why is he giving me that look again? Does he hate
me that much? Now everyone going to think I’m a killer! But I’m not! I’m not!!!
Ep 7 b
The night was getting dark. Nit can feel the warm
breeze winding with her hair whiling she look up in the sky. Of course she was
happy. It’s the very first night she was free out of that room.
N: The stars do look brighter in the country sides.
Nit looks around to find something hard to sit on.
She walks toward the big stone and sit on it. At that very moment San was
walking up behind her.
S: You must feel happy that you get the feel the
wind.
Nit heard San’s voice and stood up on the rock. She turns
around to see San walking her way. She got worry because she was afraid he was
going to do something to her. She quickly turn to step down but it didn’t goes
as she planned. She turns around to quick, making her slip on her toe shoe. San
reach his arms to catch her.
Nit screamed.
San catches Nit. San look inside Nit eyes. She can
feel the sparkly affection they were having. San smiled. Nit can’t believe San
smiled at her. Her muscles around her mouth couldn’t help but smile back.
S: Idiot! Why are you smiling?! Get off, you are
heavy as heck!!!
Nit smiled completely melted away.
San tip toe and drop Nit to the ground.
N: Ay!
San went to grab Nit arm.
N: Ouch, it hurt.
S: I don’t care. Here, follow me.
N: How can I follow you when you are pulling me?
San gave Nit the death glare.
Nit covers her mouth.
San let go of her arm and went to carry her.
N: Ay what are you doing? Ay?
S: Shhh! You better shut your mouth.
Nit zip her mouth and stare at San eyes.
If you look closer San’s mother was staring out her
room to see the actions San and Nit was having.
J: Madame, Should I do something?
SM: Aha, don’t. It’s very entertaining.
San carry Nit all the way to his room. He drop Nit to his bed.
S: Go to sleep!
N: But I don’t want to yet?
S: So you want to see me strip in front of you?
N: Eww, what human being does that?
San pointed at himself.
S: This human being!
Nit rolled her eyes at San and started smart talking
to San.
N: Don’y you dare strip!
San slowly unbutton his shirt half way, showing his
shoulder.
N: What the heck are you doing?
S: Do women get excited when a men is willing to
strip in front of her?
Nit grabbed the pillow and started biting on the
corner of the pillow.
San went to his other shoulder and slowly lift down
his shirt.
Nit could handle it nomore and threw the pillow at
San.
N: Eww, you pervert!!!!
Nit lay down and close her eyes.
San seduced face turn into a laughing face. It’s
like he is enjoying it. He feel something melting in his chest.
The next morning Boy was walking to his office. He
open the door and sees Rin sitting in his office waiting for him already.
B: Why are you here so early?
R: Sir, I think I found out where Nit is?
B: Where?
Rin open his case and grab a picture out. He shows it to Boy.
B: This is Nit? And that waterfall? I recognize it?
R: Yes, that the waterfall near the cabin. I got
this picture from the tourist. They thought at first it was two couple fighting
but when they got closer to the couple they was only kissing. The tourist didn’t
think of anything because many couples that go out there does a lot of romantic
things there also.
B: But that guy? Who
is the guy? All I see is his back?
R: I can’t tell you that at the moment but I’m for
sure Nit is still around that area.
B: Ok, please go find out who this man is? Ask those
tourist to him us draw a picture of him.
R: Yes, yes.
The sun was shining in front of San face. He open
his eyes and realize Nit wasn’t there anymore. He got up quick to put on his
shirt. When he grab his shirt a posted note fell off to the ground. He step on
it.
He can feel the stiff of the posted note on his
foot. He sit back down on his bed and read the note.
N: Ay MEANYY!! Your mother asked for help in the
fruit garden. So I went ahead and help her. I made you some apple pies. I heard
it’s your favorite pie. J
San smiled.
S: This girl is really crazy. I kidnap her and
torture her and still she is willing to help my mother garden the fruits?
San put the noted to the table and smiled again.
Then he thought.
S: San, keep calm. Why are you smiling to this women?
Then Jouy came rushing in to his room.
S: Khun San ka, there is something wrong with the
wires around the fruits garden. It’s not working.
S: What???
Nit was holding the basket for San’s mother. She was
picking the ripe grapes.
SM: You know I would love a daughter in law like
you?
Nit blushed.
N: Oh, it’s fine.
SM: Why is that?
San’s mother laughed.
Nit thinks I her head.
N: Ugh, that man is terrible! He stink like alcohol
and it feel like he never..
SM: Is everything ok, Nit?
N: Yea.
Nit smiled while holding on the bag.
One of his workers came upon San.
W: Khun Printhip, We try putting the botts together
and making them connect. It won’t spark.
San went down to his knees and look inside the big machines.
S: Give me that botts there.
W: Krup.
San’s Mother was cutting down so much grapes that
the basket Nit was holding was getting very heavy.
N: San’s mother, it’s getting really heavy, Don’t
you think this is enough?
SM: Nit, It’s never enough.
Nit smiled with a urging face to drop the basket. It
was getting so heavy on Nit that when she walks she feels like tripping. Then
San’s mother stands up and looks at Nit.
SM: Haha, its ok if you let it down. I don’t want
you to hold it all day ling. That would be so tiring. San’s mother gave Nit a
hand slowly letting down the big basket.
San asked the worker to check if the wire work. So
the worker grabs a stick and threw it to the wire. The wires shock the stick
and gave the stick some smokes.
W: Yes, it work!\
N: Madame, be careful cause I don’t want to push you
to those wire over there.
SM: It’s ok, Jouy told me they were dead.
Right when San’s mother was giving Nit a hand with
the basket of grapes Nit slips on her shoes causing San’ mother to fall back ,
making her hand touch the wire behide her. San’s mother hand was shocked by the
wire that made San’s mother shaking. Nit quickly drops the basket to the
ground. All the grapes were roling down to San’s mother. Nit grabs San’s mother hand which making the electricity
shock go through her also. But she manage to pull San’s mother out of the wire.
N: Madame! Madame are you ok? Madame!!!!
Then Jouy came back to the garden with another big
basket. Jouy sees that Madame had fainted.
N: Jouy! Go get help!! Please!!!
J: Ka, Ka!
Jouy rush toward San way.
S: Ok, next time don’t stick these two botts together,
they do not match ok!
W: Ok. Sorry ,boss.
Then San sees Jouy running towards him with the worst
face ever.
Jouy stop trying to catch her breath.
S: Is there something wrong?
J: Madame, she..
S: She what?
J: Madame, she been shock with the wires.
San heart drop, he pushes Jouy to the side and ran
toward a scream.
He stop and listen.
S: That Nit voice?
N: Anybody please! Help me! Please!!!
San rush toward Nit. He sees Nit holding on to his
mother. San drop tears. Nit look scare because the image San is seeing was not
what he was thinking.
S: GET OF MY MOTHER YOU MURDER!!
San grab both of Nit’s arms and push her near the
fruit trunk, making her hit her head on a rock.
N: Ouch!
Nit touches her head again. It was at the same exact
place when she ran over Pa.
She turns around and sees that San went to carry her
mother away. San turn his back and sees that Nit was also hurt. He stop and
walked a bit close to her but then his mother made a movement. San stop once
more and turn the other way, looking at Nit with the evil face.
Nit watches San and the other people walk away from
her, giving her the death glare.
Nit still sits by the fruit trunk crying to herself.
N: Why is he giving me that look again? Does he hate
me that much? Now everyone going to think I’m a killer! But I’m not! I’m not!!!
YinGgyTASTIC
sarNie Adult
Just a little update.
That night everyone was away, leaving Nit all to herself. In
the bathroom she looks for the bandage and some ointment to put on her scar.
After what had happen today she feels uncomfortable. She went outside and grab
the apples she was picking today with San’s mother and started making Apple
Crust. Then Nit starts having flashback of how San’s treat her and the
situation with his mother.
Nits cried in tears, dripping those tears in the Apple
Crust. She stops what she was doing and
touched her forehead.
N: What am I’m doing? This is the perfect time for me to run
from him. But I’m here sitting here.
Nit wipes her tears and stood up. Her hands tripped over
some apples down. The apples were rolling around the kitchen. She was able to pick
up all the apples. But she notice one apple rolling to a door near San’s room.
She walks toward it, pick up the apples and then the door
slowly opens. She put the apples to the side table and walk into the room. She
look around and sees alcohols everywhere. At the corner of her eyes she sees a bright
white picture. It was brighter than the room. She turns to her side and walk
towards the picture. She grab it and wipe her fingers across the picture.
N: You must be Pa? You were so pretty. No matter no one can
be like you. You and San match each other so will.
Then the light turns on. Nit turns around and sees that the person
that was standing in front of her was San. She jumped to see San and without
thinking, dropped the picture of Pa to the ground, all shatter.
San quicky run toward Nit to kneel down to pick up the
shatter pieces of glass. Nit went down to pick it up too but San pushes Nit.
S: GO AWAY!!
When Nit was pushed, she cuts herself from the glass.
San sees the cut on Nit finger. He drop the picture and the
glass and went straight to her bleeding finger.
S: Are you ok?
N: I’m..
San grab a napkin and twisted around her finger.
Nit pull her finger away from San.
N: Why are you pretending to be nice to me? If you hate me
then hate me? I don’t want to misunderstand you!
S: I..
Nit walks away from San and went into San’s room.
San put his hands on his hips .
Flashback :
S: Please doctor help my mother!
The doctor took his mother to the ER! Hours later and the
doctor came out.
San rush to the doctor.
S: Doc, how my mother? Is she going to be ok?
D: She will be fine. She was but now she is stable. Lucky
there wasn’t enough electric shocks that went into her because if there were,
she would of never made it.
S: How is that possible?
D: If I’m right someone was there to save her in time.
San look at Jouy. Jouy shook her head no.
Then the Doctor left the scene.
San yelled at Jouy.
S: Why didn’t you tell her to stay away from the wire!!!!
J: Khun, Printhip ka, remember the, uhm, the wire didn’t
work this morning? So she went with Nit.
San freeze for a bit. He thinks to himself.
S: Could it be possible it happen right when he turn the
wire back on?
Then San starts running back .
S: Jouy watch over my mother tonight.
J: Ka!
Back from flashback)
San run to the room and knock.. will almost knocked on the
door. He pull himself to not knock on the door and walked away from his room
where Nit was locking herself in.
Then he whisper: I’m sorry…
Then he walk to the kitchen to sees the apple crust Nit was
making. He have never have apple crust before. He took a bite and smiled a
little.
S: That woman sure knows how to bake.
Nit change to her sleeping clothes and look into the mirror.
N: Tomorrow! Tomorrow for sure I’m going to find a phone and
call my brother. But where could I find a phone in this place?
That night everyone was away, leaving Nit all to herself. In
the bathroom she looks for the bandage and some ointment to put on her scar.
After what had happen today she feels uncomfortable. She went outside and grab
the apples she was picking today with San’s mother and started making Apple
Crust. Then Nit starts having flashback of how San’s treat her and the
situation with his mother.
Nits cried in tears, dripping those tears in the Apple
Crust. She stops what she was doing and
touched her forehead.
N: What am I’m doing? This is the perfect time for me to run
from him. But I’m here sitting here.
Nit wipes her tears and stood up. Her hands tripped over
some apples down. The apples were rolling around the kitchen. She was able to pick
up all the apples. But she notice one apple rolling to a door near San’s room.
She walks toward it, pick up the apples and then the door
slowly opens. She put the apples to the side table and walk into the room. She
look around and sees alcohols everywhere. At the corner of her eyes she sees a bright
white picture. It was brighter than the room. She turns to her side and walk
towards the picture. She grab it and wipe her fingers across the picture.
N: You must be Pa? You were so pretty. No matter no one can
be like you. You and San match each other so will.
Then the light turns on. Nit turns around and sees that the person
that was standing in front of her was San. She jumped to see San and without
thinking, dropped the picture of Pa to the ground, all shatter.
San quicky run toward Nit to kneel down to pick up the
shatter pieces of glass. Nit went down to pick it up too but San pushes Nit.
S: GO AWAY!!
When Nit was pushed, she cuts herself from the glass.
San sees the cut on Nit finger. He drop the picture and the
glass and went straight to her bleeding finger.
S: Are you ok?
N: I’m..
San grab a napkin and twisted around her finger.
Nit pull her finger away from San.
N: Why are you pretending to be nice to me? If you hate me
then hate me? I don’t want to misunderstand you!
S: I..
Nit walks away from San and went into San’s room.
San put his hands on his hips .
Flashback :
S: Please doctor help my mother!
The doctor took his mother to the ER! Hours later and the
doctor came out.
San rush to the doctor.
S: Doc, how my mother? Is she going to be ok?
D: She will be fine. She was but now she is stable. Lucky
there wasn’t enough electric shocks that went into her because if there were,
she would of never made it.
S: How is that possible?
D: If I’m right someone was there to save her in time.
San look at Jouy. Jouy shook her head no.
Then the Doctor left the scene.
San yelled at Jouy.
S: Why didn’t you tell her to stay away from the wire!!!!
J: Khun, Printhip ka, remember the, uhm, the wire didn’t
work this morning? So she went with Nit.
San freeze for a bit. He thinks to himself.
S: Could it be possible it happen right when he turn the
wire back on?
Then San starts running back .
S: Jouy watch over my mother tonight.
J: Ka!
Back from flashback)
San run to the room and knock.. will almost knocked on the
door. He pull himself to not knock on the door and walked away from his room
where Nit was locking herself in.
Then he whisper: I’m sorry…
Then he walk to the kitchen to sees the apple crust Nit was
making. He have never have apple crust before. He took a bite and smiled a
little.
S: That woman sure knows how to bake.
Nit change to her sleeping clothes and look into the mirror.
N: Tomorrow! Tomorrow for sure I’m going to find a phone and
call my brother. But where could I find a phone in this place?
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sarNie Adult
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sarNie Adult
Might be cheesy but oh will. lol
The next day Nit slowly get off bed to find a phone. It was still too early since she knew San will never wake up this early. She has be capture for many weeks now and have been studying San’s habits. She went into the hallway. In her head she keep thinking why didn’t she do this long time ago? She not handcuff? She not tied in bed? Why hasn't she try running away before? She looked every where for a phone. Lastly she went upon the bar.
N: Please! Please! Don’t let him be in this room!
Nit open the door to find a phone. She walked faster to the phone and started dialing her brother number .
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Ring!Ring!Ring!
B: Hello?
N: P’ BOY!
Boy stood up.
B: Nit? Nit?
N: I know. It;s my fault for not escaping.
B: Escaping? Where are you! I’ll come get you now!
N: I don’t know where I am at! But all I know is that I am at a fruits farm.
B: Fruit farm?
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Then the phone got disconnected as if someone cut the cord.
N: Hello! Hello!
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B: Hello! NIT! NIT!
Boy look at his phone and called Ran.
B: Hurry! Come over my place!
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N: Hello? Hello?
Nit put the phone back and look around her. It was very quiet. She slowly walk out and turn her back to close the door. When she turn back around THERE!! was San standing 2 inches away from her. San walk closer to her putting both of his hands between her. Nit can smell alcohol coming from San.
N: What are you doing?
San look up and down on her.
S: I should be asking you? What are you doing?
Nit look down. San grab her arm and pull her into the bar.
San look around the room to see if something weird was going on. Nit’s eyes following San movements.
San look at Nit. Nit turn her eyes to the phone. San following her eye movements.
San went to grab the phone. He grab the phone and smashed it right in front of Nit. He grab Nit’s chin.
S: Who did you call?
N: I didn’t call no body!!!
S: LIER!!!
Nit spit on San face.
San feel his face and looked at Nit. She can tell that San was getting mad. She quickly make a run for it. San grab her legs and push her down to the ground.
N: Let me GO!!
S: NO!
Nit kick San in the stomach. She was break free. She ran out the door. San quickly stood up and ran after her. Nit look behide her. He was stronger than her. He carry her into the room and locked the door. He drop her down on the bed and took off his shirt.
N: What are you doing?
S: SOmething I should of done a long time now.
San smirk at Nit.
N: Don’t touch me!
San quickly grab her feet pulling her to him. He got on top of Nit.
N: Stop it! Stop it! Don;t do anything to me!
San didn’t stop for her begs and started kissing her neck.
Nit cries of terrors.
N: STOP!!!! STOP!!!!!!
San lift his head up and looked at Nit one more time.
He smiled.
S: Pa, I miss you.
San was so happy that the women he was on top was his beloved wife. He teared a little but yet excited.
Nit still crying, trying to get by San but no matter how much she tried she couldn't.
Then San shook his head to make sure it was Pa. Then Nit face starting appearing in front of his face. But that didn’t stop his hormones.
S: Nit.
Then after that it went dark.................
The afternoon Nit was covering herself th some towels. San woke up from a headache. He reached the other side of the bed. But feel no body. He open his eyes and sees that Nit was just looking out the window. He put on his boxer and walk slowly to Nit.
Nit can hear him coming towards her.
N: Don’t even apologize!
S: But... i..
N: It’s my fault.
Nit turn around to face San. San can see the tears in her eyes.
N: It’s my fault for not running away from you! I didn’t leave you when I had the chance. I put my self in this hell house!
S: Nit.. I
N: Let me tell you something. Don;t ypu ever wonder why all this time I didn’t run away from believe that if I show you how good a person I really am you would forgive me! But at the end I realize that I didn’t want to leave you.
S: Nit .. I
N: I didn’t want to leave you because I know I deserve your torture and your evilness. I gave up finding a way back home to stay here.It’s all my fault!!!!!
San look at Nit with his uneasy face. Then he notices something red coming down.
S: NIT!
Nit slowly fainted whiling San grab her to his arms. San grab her hands. There was cuts on both hands.
S: Nit, I’m sorry!
The next day Nit slowly get off bed to find a phone. It was still too early since she knew San will never wake up this early. She has be capture for many weeks now and have been studying San’s habits. She went into the hallway. In her head she keep thinking why didn’t she do this long time ago? She not handcuff? She not tied in bed? Why hasn't she try running away before? She looked every where for a phone. Lastly she went upon the bar.
N: Please! Please! Don’t let him be in this room!
Nit open the door to find a phone. She walked faster to the phone and started dialing her brother number .
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Ring!Ring!Ring!
B: Hello?
N: P’ BOY!
Boy stood up.
B: Nit? Nit?
N: I know. It;s my fault for not escaping.
B: Escaping? Where are you! I’ll come get you now!
N: I don’t know where I am at! But all I know is that I am at a fruits farm.
B: Fruit farm?
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Then the phone got disconnected as if someone cut the cord.
N: Hello! Hello!
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B: Hello! NIT! NIT!
Boy look at his phone and called Ran.
B: Hurry! Come over my place!
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N: Hello? Hello?
Nit put the phone back and look around her. It was very quiet. She slowly walk out and turn her back to close the door. When she turn back around THERE!! was San standing 2 inches away from her. San walk closer to her putting both of his hands between her. Nit can smell alcohol coming from San.
N: What are you doing?
San look up and down on her.
S: I should be asking you? What are you doing?
Nit look down. San grab her arm and pull her into the bar.
San look around the room to see if something weird was going on. Nit’s eyes following San movements.
San look at Nit. Nit turn her eyes to the phone. San following her eye movements.
San went to grab the phone. He grab the phone and smashed it right in front of Nit. He grab Nit’s chin.
S: Who did you call?
N: I didn’t call no body!!!
S: LIER!!!
Nit spit on San face.
San feel his face and looked at Nit. She can tell that San was getting mad. She quickly make a run for it. San grab her legs and push her down to the ground.
N: Let me GO!!
S: NO!
Nit kick San in the stomach. She was break free. She ran out the door. San quickly stood up and ran after her. Nit look behide her. He was stronger than her. He carry her into the room and locked the door. He drop her down on the bed and took off his shirt.
N: What are you doing?
S: SOmething I should of done a long time now.
San smirk at Nit.
N: Don’t touch me!
San quickly grab her feet pulling her to him. He got on top of Nit.
N: Stop it! Stop it! Don;t do anything to me!
San didn’t stop for her begs and started kissing her neck.
Nit cries of terrors.
N: STOP!!!! STOP!!!!!!
San lift his head up and looked at Nit one more time.
He smiled.
S: Pa, I miss you.
San was so happy that the women he was on top was his beloved wife. He teared a little but yet excited.
Nit still crying, trying to get by San but no matter how much she tried she couldn't.
Then San shook his head to make sure it was Pa. Then Nit face starting appearing in front of his face. But that didn’t stop his hormones.
S: Nit.
Then after that it went dark.................
The afternoon Nit was covering herself th some towels. San woke up from a headache. He reached the other side of the bed. But feel no body. He open his eyes and sees that Nit was just looking out the window. He put on his boxer and walk slowly to Nit.
Nit can hear him coming towards her.
N: Don’t even apologize!
S: But... i..
N: It’s my fault.
Nit turn around to face San. San can see the tears in her eyes.
N: It’s my fault for not running away from you! I didn’t leave you when I had the chance. I put my self in this hell house!
S: Nit.. I
N: Let me tell you something. Don;t ypu ever wonder why all this time I didn’t run away from believe that if I show you how good a person I really am you would forgive me! But at the end I realize that I didn’t want to leave you.
S: Nit .. I
N: I didn’t want to leave you because I know I deserve your torture and your evilness. I gave up finding a way back home to stay here.It’s all my fault!!!!!
San look at Nit with his uneasy face. Then he notices something red coming down.
S: NIT!
Nit slowly fainted whiling San grab her to his arms. San grab her hands. There was cuts on both hands.
S: Nit, I’m sorry!
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B: This morning Nit call me from an house phone? Here is the number! Can you retrace it?
Boy gave his cell phone to Ran.
R: Ok, I’ll do what I can. At least we know she is still alive.
Both of them looking at each other. But slowly outsid ethe door, they didn’t know that Uncle was listening to them.
U: Nit is alive....
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Nit woke up from the nightmare of San raping her. Her body was sweating and aching. She can feel something burning from her wrists. Then she remembered she had cut herself after the rape. All of the sudden the door open. The first thing in Nit head was SAN!
San came inside the room with porridge and apple pies. Nit thought to herself how odd San was acting upon her.
Nit death glare at San. San put the foods on the side. He went to sit right next to her. Nit quickly try to get out of bed but she was too weak and San pull her closer to him.
N: Don’t touch me!
S: If I don’t touch you then how am I going to feed you?
N: Feed me?
San gave the porridge to Nit.
N: That not how you feed me!
S: Then.. how should I feed you?
Nit look at the spoon. For some reason she was very comfortable beside San. Even after the rape she feel a little amuse by how Nice San was.
San grab the spoon and blow on the porridge.
S: AHHH!
Nit threw the spoon to the ground.
S: Why did you do that? How am I’m going to feed you now?
N: I didn’t ask you to feed me. Now let me get off my bed.
S: Not until you feel better.
N: How am I going to feel better after what you have done?
San put down the porridge and grab Nit hands.
S: Luckly it wasn’t that big of a cut.
Nit study San ways of kindness. It was to the point where it was really weird.
Then out of nowhere Jouy came running in on them.
J: Jao Nai ka, your mother is home.
S: Ok, I’ll be there.
Jouy walked out of the room feeling so entertain.
San grab Nit hand.
S: Come on let go see my mother.
Nit push away San hand and try to stand up.
San quickly carry her.
N: What are you doing?
S: Will, you can’t walk right? SO I’m going to carry you all the way to my mother.
N: No, let me go.
San carry Nit out of the room and out the door to the porch.
San’s mother walking out of the car from the hosptial
San smile , SAn’s mother smiled.
San mother was surprise at how San was carrying Nit. NIt looked embarrass.
S: Mom, Nit kind of sick so I am carry her. Plus I have something to tell you!
Jouy help San’s mother walk into the living room where SAn carry Nit to the living room.
San put down Nit on the sofa where San went to crawl down to his mother.
S: Mother, you were right. I will marry Nit.
B: This morning Nit call me from an house phone? Here is the number! Can you retrace it?
Boy gave his cell phone to Ran.
R: Ok, I’ll do what I can. At least we know she is still alive.
Both of them looking at each other. But slowly outsid ethe door, they didn’t know that Uncle was listening to them.
U: Nit is alive....
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Nit woke up from the nightmare of San raping her. Her body was sweating and aching. She can feel something burning from her wrists. Then she remembered she had cut herself after the rape. All of the sudden the door open. The first thing in Nit head was SAN!
San came inside the room with porridge and apple pies. Nit thought to herself how odd San was acting upon her.
Nit death glare at San. San put the foods on the side. He went to sit right next to her. Nit quickly try to get out of bed but she was too weak and San pull her closer to him.
N: Don’t touch me!
S: If I don’t touch you then how am I going to feed you?
N: Feed me?
San gave the porridge to Nit.
N: That not how you feed me!
S: Then.. how should I feed you?
Nit look at the spoon. For some reason she was very comfortable beside San. Even after the rape she feel a little amuse by how Nice San was.
San grab the spoon and blow on the porridge.
S: AHHH!
Nit threw the spoon to the ground.
S: Why did you do that? How am I’m going to feed you now?
N: I didn’t ask you to feed me. Now let me get off my bed.
S: Not until you feel better.
N: How am I going to feel better after what you have done?
San put down the porridge and grab Nit hands.
S: Luckly it wasn’t that big of a cut.
Nit study San ways of kindness. It was to the point where it was really weird.
Then out of nowhere Jouy came running in on them.
J: Jao Nai ka, your mother is home.
S: Ok, I’ll be there.
Jouy walked out of the room feeling so entertain.
San grab Nit hand.
S: Come on let go see my mother.
Nit push away San hand and try to stand up.
San quickly carry her.
N: What are you doing?
S: Will, you can’t walk right? SO I’m going to carry you all the way to my mother.
N: No, let me go.
San carry Nit out of the room and out the door to the porch.
San’s mother walking out of the car from the hosptial
San smile , SAn’s mother smiled.
San mother was surprise at how San was carrying Nit. NIt looked embarrass.
S: Mom, Nit kind of sick so I am carry her. Plus I have something to tell you!
Jouy help San’s mother walk into the living room where SAn carry Nit to the living room.
San put down Nit on the sofa where San went to crawl down to his mother.
S: Mother, you were right. I will marry Nit.