Say You Love Me :: Aum/Aff

cecilia

cecilia

Staff member
wow. this is good .. good, good !!! but i'll be darn, her father demand too much ''great wealth and willing to take the family name after him.'' HARITH does not have great wealth. Sorina sound like the lovely SORIYA but my guts is telling me that the one that will steal HARITH'S heart is gonna be the unexpect and crazy SORIPA .. right now. i dont' know who's SORIYA character is .. i'm so curious at where you're heading these two sisters ..

this is what i think
with an altitude like SORIPA, no man will want her, so she's left with a some sort of scar, maybe there's another man out there that might be crushing on her but not our HARITH. so i'm sensing. since she want no man out there and hate our HARITH. she will be the hidden SORIYA character .. but it would so much be better if we get to see the r happen between soripa and harit. i'm leaning toward that way. something about SORIPA attracted my attention ..
again, i'm so lost, can't make out who's who ....
 
cecilia

cecilia

Staff member
okay, me and ami came to an conclusion. . we would like to demand ask for an update soon! :loool: what we got so far is good. we want more .. or more of I WANT MORE :p
 
amikrazie

amikrazie

sarNie Oldmaid
hahah im with you all the way Ceci!!! more more more.....*edits: pls pretty pls with STRAWBERRY :p on top!)

yes it definitely makes more sense that it will be soripa...sorina might like harit back...but i dont see how harit will r her if shes willing too LMAO

unlike soripa...already hate him at first sight!!! that saying the more you hate someone the more likely you'll see them/end up with them!


yes, i am also curious regarding harits situation...does he have some sort of necklace or some precious belonging as to hint us where or what rich family hes from???

ohhh the anticipation is killing me!!...
 
sarN

sarN

sarNie Granny
Soripa told her father about Harit roaming the garden and his behavior is unappropriated. He broken the house rule and should be punish . Sorina defend him by saying it was her that approach him with out notice . Their father listen to both side

“….Harit is an orphan and been living here for many years now . His duty is a gardener and taking care of the horses in the back ranch …Soripa , he no harm my dear . Just let it go ..� said Salapat

“….but father ! He stare at P‘ Rina !..� Soripa protested . She want Harit to be punish . She doesn’t like rule breaker and the way he was looking at P’ Rina is obviously not a servant to a master. She doesn’t trust him .

“…father , Nong’ Ripa is over re acting . It not a big deal .� said Sorina. She doesn’t want her father to think bad of Harit . It nothing serious. Really

Their father settle the problem by telling Soripa to give Harit another chance .
As their master we shouldn’t punish the servant for every little problem . We must have compassion too . Soripa left the room not understanding why everyone is defending Harit . He just a servant boy an orphan.

For the next couple days Sorina was often in the garden . She love flower and enjoy the company of Harit talking about it . He show her how to breed it and how to take care of them . While having conversation he always on alert not to stare at Miss.Srina and always on his knee . His heart was aching to take a glimpse of her enchanting face but he have to restrain him . He just a servant boy …just a servant boy repeating to himself .

Sorina was fond of Harit . He was difference from any of servant she know . He handsome , polite , humble and she enjoy talking to him . He took her to the ranch and teaches her to ride the horse by sitting behind showing her how to pull the rope to make the horse turn . She love his voice talking against her ear as his hand goes around her waist griping the rope. She should stop this relationship …it not right . She is a Arkapon . Their status is difference and sociality wouldn’t accept him ..especially her father . She is the oldest daughter her expectation should be higher than this .

“…Harit ..let goes back ..� her smile drop . Suddenly she feel guilty it like she betraying her father trust and hope .

“…yes Miss. Sorina ..� Harit pull the horse back . He feel her voice was sadden . Something is wrong . She probable realize he is below her status . It wrong . He should know his place better than this . It better to be hurt now than to let his feeling go in any deeper . They left the ranch walking back to the house . Harit didn’t say a word as they walk silently toward the house . It been a fun and wonderful weeks with Miss. Sorina it was more than he can imagine in this life period .. They stop at the stair .

“…you can leave now . I won’t be going to the garden any more ..thank for teaching me how to ride a horse . I enjoy …….every min of it..� her voice was heart breaking and walk in the house slowly not turning to see Harit .

“…good bye ..Miss. Sorina ..� he whisper . Knowing she can’t hear him . His face was sadden as he watch her disappear in the house . Life isn’t fair . Why can’t he born in a rich family and be with Sorina . God must of hate him to punish him like this. His eye was watery as he walk backward refusing to turn his face away from the door where she disappear .

“…watch where you going !!� Soripa shouted from behind him . Harit quickly turn around lower his head and on his knee. He wipe the tear that roll down his cheek .

“…im sorry Miss. Soripa ..�

“…I been watching you . You a servant boy . Don’t aim to high . You can never reach our level . My sister probable realize how degrading it is to sink this low…stay away from my sister if you don’t want to get hurt …I warn you …� she look down at him with disgust . Just a poor orphan looking for a short cut in life . He need to be teach a lesson . He is a dog wanting to eat his master food and later shit on it . She can’t let her sister fall into his clawl . Soripa march toward the house brushing him to the side . Damn orphan .
 
cecilia

cecilia

Staff member
damn! that was even better .. i'm so excite .. i love this part ''Sorina was fond of Harit . He was difference from any of servant she know . He handsome , polite , humble and she enjoy talking to him . He took her to the ranch and teaches her to ride the horse by sitting behind showing her how to pull the rope to make the horse turn . She love his voice talking against her ear as his hand goes around her waist griping the rope. She should stop this relationship'' ALL KIND OF THOUGHTS came to my head .. she should have thought ''AND HE'S HOT'' .. I love it .. i still dont' know who's soriya is .. the two sister are so different from each other .. i'm gad the father have a soft heart .. i thought he was gonna be mean and demanding like his expectation of his daughters' husbands. WOW. i feel bad asking for more but damn. i want more :p
 
amikrazie

amikrazie

sarNie Oldmaid
LOL Ceci...


Go ahead soripa...hate him all you want...he could be your future hubby!! lol

(another saying just pop up in my head ..p'ek humble?? lol except its hard to say it in english...cant even spell it in khmer) <_<
 
sarN

sarN

sarNie Granny
humble meaing lower yourself ..like excepting the position u in ...how u say it hahah
 
Dal

Dal

***LOVE, LOVE YADECH***
I want to read this, Sarn, so I always tag it so I get it in my e-mail. I can't wait!!!!
 
Grudgeprincess

Grudgeprincess

JLR FEVER
sarN darling! hehhe i see u picked one heheh OOOOOOOOOOO have to read ur story lmao today my cousin was like JLR fevered and i told her bout ur One Night a week fanfic and i'm like U HAVE TO READ IT lmao i think she finsihed by now hahahha i love you darling hugs and kisses <3



heheh Salapat i like that it got Sala in it hhahhahahhahahh
 
cecilia

cecilia

Staff member
okay, i dont' want to sound too OUT THERE but this got me , i just wanna bring it up .. gives me thought and it's wrong to think of this way with sorina and harith . i would rather have soripa experience it but damn. this line is hot .. ''
He took her to the ranch and teaches her to ride the horse by sitting behind showing her how to pull the rope to make the horse turn . She love his voice talking against her ear as his hand goes around her waist griping the rope.
< :loool: okay, i think my head is thinking way too hard :ph34r: i just wanna spam more and say I WANT MORE .. making you work overtime .. feel so bad .. but pls update asap when you feel better .. until sb air. it seems like a long way :lmao:
 
amikrazie

amikrazie

sarNie Oldmaid
LOL Ceci..are you leaning towards sorina now?? :p

im still with soripa! she deserves the hate & love later in the fic...(reminds me of samee) :lol:
 
sarN

sarN

sarNie Granny
Harit’s foster parent was worry about their son because he haven’t ate anything in two days and he look so sad as if his heart is broken . They try to ask him what the matter but Harit refuse to say and lock himself in the room. He was trying to get over Miss.Sorina ..though it hard but he must . There no future for him with her and Mr.Arkapon will never take a servant as his son in law.

Harit return to work in the garden at least he can see the house from where he at . That was all he needed .

“…just seeing the roof top is enough eh…� said Soripa standing above him blocking the sun light with her hand on the hip .
“..Miss.soripa ..� Harit stop digging the dirt and goes on his knee .

“…I haven’t seen you for a couple days and I thought u finally realize from that thick face of your …my sister will never consider a servant dog as a pet ..but I guess I was wrong . You came back ..� she kick the pile of dirt he was digging earlier making it plunge into his face and eye . She hate him .

“…my eye !..� Harit instantly washes and rub his faces from the dirt. He ran to the fountain and splash water over his face when it completely wash off he turn around . Soripa was mocking him with her smile and laugh . She walk toward him and he goes down on his knee . “…Miss. Soripa . Why you do that for ??…�

“…because I can . You eat the rice in my house for 15 years and it doesn’t make you smarter ? I warn you . Stay away from my sister . She getting marry soon . ..� she walk away .

Harit rose from the ground . Marry ? Miss. Sorina ? His heart shatter to pieces . It bound to happen sooner or later but hearing it now is like a knife stabbing him in the heart . He want to see Sorina again . He want to know if she feel the same way as him ? He want to sneak up to her room when nobody can see him around the house and ask her . No, he couldn’t do that . If anyone found out Miss. Sorina ‘s reputation will be ruin but his heart is acing . He return back to the horse ranch when Tim came running toward him . Mr . Artkapon and both wife is going out of town for a couple days and need Harit to check the car engine . They will be gone ? Harit thought this was his chance to see Sorina and probable his last time too .

Later that night Harit sneak in the house . He scan the area making sure the coast is clear . He make his way in the house and up the stair. He saw Soripa walking into a room and he can see Sorina was inside from the opening of the door and now closes . He waited. After about 20minute he saw Soripa swing open the door and goes back into her room .Harit make his move toward the room . He knock at the door

“…Miss. Sorina..� he whisper thur the opening crack of the door . “….it me Harit ..Miss. Sorina ..� after a couple min the door open.

“..Harit ? What you doing here at this time ? Leave ! ..� she push him and close the door but Harit block it with his hand . His eye was pleading and sadden

“…please . I just want to talk to you . I promise ill leave ..� his eye was watery and his expression was so heart breaking as if it his last day of life . Sorina was weaken by his softness and let him in.

Harit immediate close the door behind him and turn to Sorina . He can see she was a bit frighten by his action . “…I promise it will be quick ..� he move closer to her and she relax . Harit ask if she was getting marry soon and Sorina nodded her head with tear in her eye . She have too . It her father wishes and it important to him this marriage must goes through . She is the oldest daughter of Artkapon she have a burden to carry . She started to cry . Tear was flooding down her face . Harit was heart broken at the scene and reaches out to hug her as she pour her heart out on his chest .

Suddenly the door swing open . Soripa march in and push Harit away from her sister . She slap him . Harit drop to his knee and beg to explain what happen . It not what she think . Soripa refuse to listen . She seen enough . What he doing here in the middle of the night and her sister was crying in his arm when she walk in ??? It obvious! Soripa command Harit to go wait for her outside the house and he have no option but to leave as he was told

Once he left . Soripa turn to her sister who was pleading for her to lisent . Harit didn’t do anything to her yet .

“…P’ Rina !Im not going let him goes that easily !..He know our parent isn’t home and what he doing here in the middle of the night ? There no explanation he can say to free him from this punishment ..�

“…no no ..he didn’t do anything …let him go na na nong ..� said Sorina as tear wet her face . She know what her sister going do and she fear Harit will be hurt .

“…P’Rina ! Im not goin lisent . Im disappointed in you . If father found out about his affair . How will he feel ? You know father is very strict on men that around us . He breaken the family rule . He should be punish . That dog ! We feed his thick face everyday and he going turn around and bit us …� Soripa was in rage . Her eye was on fire . He will pay .

“…please , let him go . I promise I wont’ see him again ..�

“…no. P’Rina! If you say another words ..I will tell father about his and you know how much he love you . He will be hurt .NOT a word P’Rina !!!� she beam her sister . She was serious . Sorina cover her mouth to hold her cry . There no use . Soripa will not change her mind .

Soripa walk out the room and goes out side where Harit was waiting for her . Harit quickly get down on his knee and lower his head.

“…I have warn you one to many time …I had it with you !!!..You damn orphan. Who you think you are ? A prince or a dog ? What right you have to barge in my house ?..�

“…Miss. Soripa …it not what you think … I don’t mean any harm ..I..I..� he stammer . How can he tell her the reason he come ? It will only make matter worst .

“…enough ! Wait here ..� Soripa walk away . After a couple min she came back with 3 male servant . “…I want you 3 to tie him up and give him 50 whip and lock him in the storage room in the back for 2 days ..� Soripa didn’t even pit him one bit . He deserve every min of this . He broken the house room and must be punish .The 3 servant nodded their head and went to drag Harit away . ..
 
amikrazie

amikrazie

sarNie Oldmaid
dang what era is this again lol ...soripa is so cruel...she really deserves a lesson from harit...not to put ppl down like that..slaves are human too. they have flesh and blood and a heart ~they like to use this in the lakorn :p lol

SarN are you asleep yet LOL...im still wide awake!

love the quick update...thank you.
 
C

chenling

sarNie Adult
whoa Soripa is woow...a little harsh...SARN you rule...MORE.....hooked on this one as well but you knew we would be!!! I really wanna see what happens next!!! I've got so many questions..lol
 
cecilia

cecilia

Staff member
SORIPA is the cruelest girl ever. as bad as the n'rai :loool: .. i hope she learn her lesson well in the future .. she stump on him like he's an object. like CHENADA said. HE'S HUMAN. HE HAVE FEELING .. man, this is addicting .. i wanna know what the future holds for the CRUEL EVIL SORIPA .. this is good real drama ..

do you think SORINA love or admire HARITH? .. at this point, i think she's still confuse about her feeling b/c i dont' see love in there yet. i just see her wanting comfort to ease off the stress .. poor HARITH. one he love. one he hate, but the one he love is marrying someone while the one he hate/dislike hurt him like shit .. *sighed* i so curious to know what HARITH will do in the future as well .. MAN, i'm curious to know if that certain person that will teach SORIPA's the lesson of life/love will be HARITH or not .. I think it would be so hard for her to redeem herself if she happen to SECRETLY like him .. but wait. another thought came up. was she JEALOUS of HARITH/SORIPA public display relationship. I mean, since SORIPA is nice and proper, she thinks HARITH is handsome .. BUT WITH WILD SORINA. she thinks he's HOT .. could it be that she's jealous and doing all the things to make him pay for hurting her hidden aching heart :eek:

KEEP IT UP. I'M ADDICTIVE TO IT .. afraid. we i might pressure you to have this done before SB end :(
 
pze

pze

sarNie Adult
i was informed by ceci that u started this already....since the last time i read u said not until sb was done....but im happy that u started....

this is really good...keep updating ill be in here everyday refreshing the page and reading....hehe

after reading what you have so far.....im leaning towards soripa as soriya.....ceci told me it was a drama and soripa sure is giving us drama....plus her character sticks out more then the other......im also waiting for a marriage n a r like the majority is waiting for....

plus if sorina n harith is already in love it doesnt go with the title......im saying so much....lolz...just had to join in on the inputs....hehe


love u sarn xoxo

keep it coming.....
 
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