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Bpom Ruk Roy Adeed [9.1]
Jun: Uhuh, I've seen Wanna at this house before.
Deun: There's only a wreckage of the house left...where did they go Jun?
Jun: Who knows...
John: Oh, have you seen Wanna's daughter?
Jun: Yes, uh what is that again? I think, no... actually, yes!
Deun: So do you know the daughter's name?
Jun: Umm, I can't remember. Oh yes! She has two daughters!
Deun: Two?
Jun: One's like a devil accidentally born, and the other one an angel sent to this world. That's all I remember... I'm hungry. I want to eat roasted chicken with sticky rice.
Deun: It's better than nothing...
John: She'll remember more as time goes by.
Jun: I'm not "she" [as in Maechee; the girl monk]. Never ever...
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Lookchin: You're doing it as if you're a detective!
Tawanchai: Do you want to be the head investigator?
Lookchin: Of course! Do YOU want to be the helper?
Tawanchai: Yep, head investigator.
Lookchin: Good. Helper, what are we going to investigate about?
Tawanchai: Who gave me sleeping pills...
Lookchin: [a thai phrase]
Tawanchai: "Chong", but a very small one. Tell me...
Lookchin: Wanna and Woonsen...
Tawanchai: What for?
Lookchin: So that you'll be asleep and cannot save Torfun from mad-man Ek.
Tawanchai: But why help her when they are...
Lookchin: ...they are stepfather and stepdaughter.
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Ek: You stabbed me till my lungs like this, give me money.
Wanna: I don't have any money left. I'm going to go invest.
Woonsen: I have a fancy car to drive, but not enough money to buy clothes that suit it.
Torfun: I told you that I would give Mom 50,000, and it has to be that. As for you Woonsen, you'll get 10,000. Ek, you don't fit anywhere in the picture. If you want money, then go find money dropped along the path of an evil person.
Ek/Wanna/Woonsen: Fun!
Torfun: I've loosened up a lot already. It's time to stand up and fight!
Wanna: But, you have today because of me, Fun!
Torfun: I want to relive the days before, Mom.
Ek: Don't forget, Fun, if I reveal a few words, you'll all be ruined.
Torfun: I'll be glad if you decide to reveal everything. I want to be ruined. I want to get fired from living here.
Woonsen: Crazy! You've gone totally insane! Now you're not scared of Mom and ready to trash her?
Torfun: When I stop Mom from using her money to do something that's wrong, it’s more positive to Mom than negative. It’s time that everyone lives their life with borders and rules, having limits on spending money. You can choose to accept what I offer, or reveal something, anything, so we’ll all be ruin. I don't care, you know. I don't care at all about all the inheritances that I've received.
Wanna: Fun!
Ek: Wait...! Forgot your ant brain? At this moment, Torfun's "I don't want anything" is getting an upperhand on our "I want everything". We'll just find another way to fulfill our "I want everything" desires! So stupid!
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Lookchin: Helper, now is the time that you go and re-understand with Torfun because of Ek, right?
Tawanchai: Right. Head investigator, you know me well.
Lookchin: And I'll wait! I'll go investigate something else... Do whatever you want, Helper.
Tawanchai: Thanks, head investigator!
Lookchin: Good luck!
Tawanchai: Quiet, or she might hear us!
Torfun: Lookchin, why are you hiding behind the bushes?
Lookchin: Nothing...
Torfun: Then come to me.
Lookchin: I need to go pee so I'll go to the bathroom.
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Nokyoong: That means what I saw is the truth?
Naetae: Yes... I've been suspicious even before, Ek and Wanna were very close together...
Nokyoong: Then why do they have to lie to Tawanchai that Ek is Torfun's lover?
Naetae: This is also what I want to know...
Nokyoong: Or, did they hide something from Tawanchai?
Naetae: I’ll try to investigate...
Nokyoong: Naetae, please help me. Please get together with Torfun ASAP. I beg you... Please, we 3 were friends since childhood.
Naetae: I'd be glad to, ’cause I love Torfun. I want to ask you to stop trying to find things to fight with Torfun.
Nokyoong: Ok, I'll try... But sometimes I cannot stop myself. When Tawanchai shows that his feeling for her is JUST more than what siblings should feel...
Naetae: Believe me, these two will never do something against their beliefs. And we are friends; I want to remind you that if you do not want to let Tawanchai go, don't make him say things that he doesn't want to. As long as you don't do something that he can't stand, he'll never let you go...
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