Step In the Palace

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sarNie Egg


TITLE: STEP IN(TO)THE PLACE
GENRE: PERIOD,ROMANCE,DRAMA
RELATED ARTICLE/TELEVISION: GONG/BU BU JIN XIN
STARTED FANFIC TOPIC: APRIL 14, 2011/THURSDAY

CAST/STARRING:
RAINIE YANG - WEI FEIYAN/WEI GENJI/WEI HE PING
HU GE - 8TH YIN SI
WU ZUN - 4TH YIN ZHEN
KINGONE - 1ST YIN RENG [CROWN PRINCE]
GUO ZHEN NI - MENG SHENGTONG
WANG JUNG YI - 5TH YIN QI
SHEN REN JIE -13TH YIN XIANG
QIN JIN JIE - 14TH YIN TI
SHI WEN BIN - 9TH YIN TANG
KOU SHEN HAI - EMPEROR KANG XI'S
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PLOT:
IN THE PRESENT TIME, WEI GENJI A REGULAR RICH GIRL HAVE TO WENT TO THE COUNTRYSIDE AND STAY OVER THERE TO STUDY. ONE DAY AFTER SHE FINISHED DANCING SHE GOT CHASE BY A THIEF AND IT LEAD HER TO A SMALL OLD HOUSE. OUT OF NO WHERE, SHE WENT AND LOST IN THERE, EVEN THOUGH IT SEEMS SMALL, LATER SHE GOT COLLAPSE. WHEN SHE WAKE UP, SHE FINALLY REALIZE SHE WAS NOW IN THE PERIOD TIME OF DURING THE QING DYNASTY, 1700s. SHE WAS IN A BATTLEFIELD, LATER SHE ALSO GETS INTO THE PALACE AND MEET THESE KIND OF PRINCES AND SHE CAUGHT THEIR ATTENTION. WILL SHE GET TO COME BACK IN THE PRESENT AGAIN? WHICH PRINCE WILL BE DESTINE TO WIN HER HEART?
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A STORY THAT MADE UP AFTER WATCHING GONG AND SEE BU BU JIN XIN TRAILOR, I NOTICE THAT IT'S FUN AND QUITE EXCITING, SO PLEASE EVERYONE FOLLOW UP THIS OF MY FANFIC TOO...AND I KNOW THAT I HAVEN'T FINISH UNDERCOVER MY LADY, BUT I'LL TRY THE BEST TO FINISH THESE FANFICS!

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123yanis

sarNie Egg
STEP IN(TO) THE PALACE

<THE STORY MIGHT SEEMS A LITTLE DIFFERENT FROM THE PLOT>

PART 1

WEI GENJI WAS PACKING UP HER CLOTHES IN HER ROOM.
HER MOM WALK IN.
“ HAPPY TO GO TO THE COUNTRYSIDE?” HER MOM ASK HER.
SHE PRETEND A SMILE THEN FROWN, “ NO.”
“ DAUGHTER, [WEI GENJI LOOK TO HER MOM] I’M SURE YOU’LL LIKE OVER THERE, BECAUSE IT’S SO MUCH BETTER THAN STAYING HERE AND ALWAYS WENT TO DANCE AS A BACK DANCER FOR THOSE SINGERS.” SAID HER MOM.
“ MOM, BUT I LIKE BEING A DANCER, NOT SOMEONE WHO LOVE HISTORY LIKE SISTER MINGMEI.” SAY WEI GENJI.
“ OK, I KNOW, BUT YOU STILL HAVE TO GO STUDY OVER THERE, SO WHEN YOUR DAD COME, YOU COULD TAKE CARE OF OUR BUSINESS HERE.” REPLY HER MOM.
“ I KNOW…” REPLY WEI GENJI. THEN CONTINUE FOLDING HER CLOTHES.
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COUNTRYSIDE.
“ OH NO.” SAY WEI GENJI.
SHE LOOK TO THE HOUSE THAT SHE’S GOING TO LIVE IN, IT SEEMS LIKE VERY OLD.
GENJI THEN WALK INTO IT, “ HERE? MOM?” SHE ASK HER MOM ON THE PHONE.
“ YES.” HER MOM ANSWER, “ YOU LIKE IT?”
“ NO…BUT[SHE LOOK AT THE WEATHER] SEEMS NICE, BYE MOM.” SHE END THEIR TALK.
GENJI RUN IN AND START CLEANING.
AFTER CLEANING SHE COME AND SIT ON THE PORCH.
“ HAH!..EVEN THOUGH MOM SEND ME TO COME STUDY HISTORY QUIETLY, BUT HERE SEEMS LIKE A GOOD PLACE FOR ME TO PRATICE DANCE.” SAY GENJI.
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AT NIGHT.
“ HELLO.” GENJI ANSWER HER PHONE.
“ WHAT! SO THAT MEAN I’M ONE OF THE CONTESTANT?” ASK GENJI ON THE PHONE WITH HER FRIEND.
“ YES! AND THEY’RE HOLDING IT AT A PLACE NEAR WHERE YOU LIVE RIGHT NOW.” ANSWER HER FRIEND.
“ REALLY, THAT’S GOOD THEN, THANK YOU! BYE, MUAH-MUAH.” REPLY GENJI.
“ YES!” SHE SHOUT.
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AFTER COMPETITION SHE COME OUT, WALKING BACK TO WHERE SHE’S LIVING RIGHT NOW.
“THEIF!THEIF!STOP YOU THEIF!STOP!” SHOUT AN OLD MAN.
A MAN WEARING BLACK THEN PUSH INTO GENJI THEN RUN AWAY.
GENJI STAND UP AND SEE THE OLD MAN YELLING.
“ WHAT HAPPEN UNCLE?” ASK GENJI.
“ THAT THEIF STEAL MY WIFE NECKLACE, PLEASE HELP ME, PLEASE.” ANSWER THE OLD MAN.
GENJI THEN RUN QUICKLY TO CATCH UP THE THEIF AND FINALLY ALMOST GET HIM.
“ STOP! YOU THEIF!” YELL GENJI THEN SHE THROW HER SHOE TO THE THEIF’S HEAD.
“ OUCH!” SHOUT THE THEIF THEN TURN TO HER AND TAKE OUT HIS KNIFE.
“HUH!” BREATHE GENJI, SHE’S SCARE BY HER SIDE THERE’S AN OLD HOUSE, SHE RUN INTO IT.
THE THEIF FOLLOW HER, THEN SHE CLOSE THE DOOR.
“ OPEN!OPEN! YOU LITTLE BRAT!OPEN!” SHOUT THE THEIF.
“ NO!NO!I WON’T NO!” SHOUT GENJI.
WHILE SHE’S STILL HOLDING THE DOOR SO THE THIEF CANNOT COME IN, A CLIFF UP IN THE ROOF FALL DOWN TO HIT HER.
“AHH!” SHOUT GENJI, THEN SHE FAINT.
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WEI GENJI WAKE UP, FEELING WEIRD.
SHE OPEN HER EYES SLOWLY AND SEE AN OLD MAN, DO A SIGNAL FOR HER TO BE QUIET.
“ WHO ARE YOU?” ASK GENJI.
“SHHHHHH!…BE QUIET OR THE PRINCE AND SOLDIERS WILL HERE.” ANSWER THE OLD MAN.
“ BUT WHO ARE YOU?” GENJI WHISPER.
“ I’M A DOCTOR HERE, CALL ME DOCTOR YUAN, AND I SAVE YOUR LIFE SO YOU NEED TO SAVE MINE AND YOURS TOO.” ANSWER THE DOCTOR YUAN.
“ HOW COME I NEED TO SAVE YOUR LIFE AND MY LIFE?” ASK GENJI.
“BECAUSE YOU’RE A WOMAN AND I’M A DOCTOR HERE, NO WOMAN COULD BE ALLOW IN THE BATTLEFIELD RESORT.” ANSWER DOCTOR YUAN.
“HOH!” WHAT YEAR IS THIS THEN?” ASK GENJI, LOOKING REALLY SCARE.
“ 1718, AND NOW OUT THERE NEAR THE WOODS THERE’S A WAR.” REPLY THE DOCTOR.
“HOH, NO, NO, I CAN’T BE HERE, I MUST’VE BEEN DREAMING.” SHE TELL HERSELF THEN BITE HERSELF, “AHH!”
“ WHAT ARE YOU DOING?” ASK THE DOCTOR.
“ DOCTOR SO WHERE DID YOU FOUND ME AT?” ASK GENJI.
“AT THE RIVER OVER THERE, WHERE THE SOLDIERS ALWAYS COME AND BATH.” ANSWER DOCTOR YUAN.
“ PLEASE TAKE ME THERE, PLEASE DOCTOR.” GENJI PLEASE DOCTOR YUAN.
“HUH…..UH..” DOCTOR YUAN DON’T KNOW HOW TO ANSWER, SINCE IT’S HARD TO TAKE HER BACK, THEN A SOLDIER YELL OUT SIDE,“DOCTOR YUAN! HELP! HELP! PRINCE YINSI GOT HURT!”
“HIDE, GO HIDE!” DOCTOR YUAN TELL GENJI.
GENJI THEN WENT TO HIDE AT THE BACK OF THE BED.
THE SOLDIERS THEN TAKE PRINCE YINSI TO THE BED.
“ YOU ALL GO OUT PLEASE.” THE DOCTOR TELL THEM AND THEY ALL GO OUT.
“ 8TH PRINCE, ARE YOU ALRIGHT, CAN YOU STILL HANDLE THE ARROW?” ASK DOCTOR YUAN.
“YES, BUT REALLY HURT.” ANSWER YINSI.
DOCTOR YUAN THEN QUICKLY TAKE THE ARROW OUT, AND 4TH PRINCE FAINT.
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MINUTES LATER, 4TH PRINCE WAKE UP, SEEING A LITTLE MAN THERE.
“ ARE YOU ALRIGHT, 4TH-4TH PRINCE?” ASK GENJI.
4TH PRINCE NOD AS A YES, DOCTOR YUAN THEN COME IN.
“ 4TH PRINCE, YOU WAKE UP, HERE 4TH PRINCE, I ALREADY BOIL SOME MEDICINE FOR YOU, PLEASE DRINK IT SO IT’LL HELP HEAL THE WOUND.” SAY DOCTOR YUAN.
“ WHO’S THIS?” 4TH RPINCE ASK DOCTOR YUAN.
DOCTOR YUAN LOOK TO GENJI AND SHE LOOK AT HIM.
“UH…THIS IS MY GRANDSON THAT JUST COME AND HIS NAME IS WEI HE PING.” ANSWER DOCTOR YUAN.
4TH PRINCE NOD THEN DRINK THE MEDICINE.
GENJI PRETEND A SMILE.
AFTER 4TH PRINCE FINISH DRINKING HE THEN PUT HIS ARM AROUND GENJI SHOULDER, SHE LOOK TO HIM.
HE LOOK AT HER AND LAUGH, “ WHAT HAPPEN TO YOU, SEEMS LIKE YOU’RE VERY SCARE OF ME.”
DOCTOR YUAN TURN TO THEM AND SAY, “4TH PRINCE, PLEASE FORGIVE MY GRANDSON ADITTUDE, BECAUSE HE’S HE’S TICKLISH.”
GENJI THEN PRETEND TO BE TICKLE, “YES, YES, I’M TICKLISH SORRY 4TH PRINCE.”
4TH PRINCE SMILE.
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STEP IN(TO) THE PALACE

PART 2

WEI GENJI THEN COME OUT FROM THE TENT.
SHE BREATHE, “ I REGRET HELPING THAT OLD MAN, NO!, I’VE NEVER REGRET HELPING THAT OLD MAN! I’M A NICE PERSON, I’LL NEVER REGRET ANYTHING I’VE DONE, YES, I’LL NEVER REGRET!YES!” GENJI TELL HERSELF.
“YOU REGRET WHAT?” 8TH PRINCE ASK WEI GENJI.
SHE TURN TO HIM, “UH…..I MEAN I DON’T REGRET HELPING GRANDFATHER CURE YOU.” SHE TELL HIM.
HE LAUGH, “THAT’S ALL?”
GENJI NOD, YES.
“ YOU’RE SUCH A WEIRD BOY, YOU’RE TICKLISH, BUT NOW YOU’VE SAID YOU’VE NEVER REGRET HELPING SAVING MY LIFE, YOU’RE SO REALLY WEIRD.” 8TH PRINCE TELL GENJI.
GENJI DON’T KNOW WHAT TO TALK NEXT.
“UM..THEN I’M GOING, BYE.” SHE TELL HIM, THEN WALK BACK INTO THE TENT.
“THIS LITTLE BOY, HE DON‘T EVEN KNOW HOW TO RESPECT ME.” SAID 8TH PRINCE.
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PALACE, COURT.
“ THE EMPEROR IS HERE!” SHOUT THE EUNUCH.
EMPEROR KANG XI THEN WALK TO SIT ON HIS SEAT.
“LONG LIVE THE EMPEROR!” SAID ALL OF THE COURT OFFICALS WHILE THEY‘RE KNEELING.
“ YOU ALL MAY STAND UP.” SAID THE EMPEROR.
THEN OFFICAL WANG COME OUT, “ EMPEROR, THERE’S NEWS FROM 8TH PRINCE AT THE BATTLEFIELD SAID THAT WE WIN THE WAR AND THEY’LL COME BACK AROUND NEXT WEEK.”
EMPEROR KANG XI LAUGH, “ THEN THAT’S GOOD!”
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CROWN PRINCE PLACE
“CROWN PRINCE, ARE YOU GOING TO TELL YOUR PARENT THAT I’M PREGNANT?” ASK CROWN PRINCE OFFICAL WIFE, MI YU.
“MI YU, WHY DO YOU ALWAYS ASK ME THAT, AND REMEMBER I’VE BEEN ANSWERING YOU MANY TIMES THAT I WILL WHEN I HAVE TIME TO GO TO THE PALACE.” REPLY CROWN PRINCE.
MI YU WAS MAD SO SHE WALK AWAY.
“THIS WIFE, IF I KNEW THAT SHE’S LIKE THIS, I SHOULD’VE NEVER MARRY HER.” SAID CROWN PRINCE.
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BATTLE FIELD RESORT.
“DOCTOR YUAN-” GENJI WAS ABOUT TO ASK DOCTOR YUAN SOMETHING BUT HE CUT HER WORDS.
“CALL ME GRANDFATHER [GENJI NOD HER HEAD, YES] EH…BUT WHAT’S YOUR REAL NAME, DAUGHTER?” DOCTOR YUAN SAID.
“ MY REAL NAME IS WEI GENJI.” ANSWER GENJI.
“ OH, SO YOUR LAST NAME IS WEI [GENJI NOD]…I’M ALSO A WEI TOO, BUT WHERE DID YOU COME FROM?” ASK DOCTOR YUAN.
“UH….I DON’T KNOW HOW TO EXPLAIN, IT MIGHT BE CONFUSE FOR YOU.” ANSWER GENJI.
“OH, THEN DON’T TELL ME.” SAID DOCTOR YUAN.
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PALACE.
AFTER FINISHING COURT.
4TH PRINCE COME OUT THEN WALK TO OFFICAL WANG.
“ UNCLE WANG, WHO PASSED THE NEWS TO YOU?” ASK 4TH PRINCE.
“IT’S YOUR BROTHER, 8TH PRINCE AND 9TH PRINCE.” ANSWER OFFICAL WANG.
“OH.” REPLY 4TH PRINCE.
“ 4TH PRINCE, IF YOU DON’T HAVE ANYTHING ELSE, THEN I’M TAKING MY LEAVE.” SAID OFFICAL WANG.
4TH PRINCE NOD, YES.
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BATTLEFIELD RESORT, NIGHT.
GENJI THEN SNEAK OUT FROM THE TENT TO GO TO THE RIVER TO BATH.
“HUH, WHAT IF SOMEONE CATCH ME BATHING IN THE RIVER AT NIGHT?, NO, THEY’LL NEVER WAKE UP THIS LATE, YES, THEY’LL NEVER WAKE UP.” SAID GENJI TO HERSELF, SHE THEN START WALKING AND BRING HER CLOTHES TO THE RIVER.
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RIVER
“HUH-YA! MY THINKING IS RIGHT, NO ONE WILL APPEAR AT THIS TIME.” SHE TALK TO HERSELF.
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BATTLEFIELD RESORT.
IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT, 8TH PRINCE THEN COME OUT TO PEE, AFTER PEEING, ONE OF THE DRUNK SOLDIER ACCIDENTALLY THROUGH UP ON HIM.
“EWWW!” SHOUT 8TH PRINCE.
“SORRY, SORRY, I DESERVE DEATH, I DESERVE DEATH.” SAID THE DRUNK SOLDIER.
“GO AWAY!” SHOUT 8TH
8TH PRINCE THEN WALK TO THE RIVER.
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RIVER.
GENJI WAS SPLASHING WATER TO HERSELF.
WHILE 8TH PRINCE WAS WALKING NEAR THERE, HE HEAR GIRL VOICE AT THE RIVER.
“HUH? THERE’S GIRL HERE?” 8TH PRINCE ASK HIMSELF, HE THEN GO QUIETLY NEAR THE BUSH AND LOOK TO IT.
THE GIRL HAVE HER BACK TO HIM.
“WHO’S THAT GIRL?” 8TH PRINCE ASK HIMSELF,
A MOMENT LATER WHILE HE’S STILL LOOKING WHO IS IT, THEN GENJI PUT HER HEAD UNDER THE WATER THEN COME OUT AND THE PRINCE SEE HER CLEARLY.
SHE DIDN’T SEE HIM.
“IT’S, IT’S….WEI HE PING?…” SAID 8TH PRINCE, THEN HE WALK BACK TO THE RESORT.
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maichi

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OMG OMG PLease stopp leaving me hanging!!!!!!
PLease update soon! :p :) :thumbsup: :eyetwitch:
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RUK
omgosh!!! i love GONG! xD Do continue please! =)
 
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