The Promise ~ Last Chapter Up .

duaxiong

duaxiong

sarNie Adult
My Third Fanficion , it's really newbie. I wish i can go back and re-fix everything . I'm sorry , but i hope you girls enjoy it. Thanks for reading!
the posters and banners! created by Leemyis and Jeeja:

created by Leemyis:






i lovee the posters/wallpapers/banners. they are soooooooooooo CREATIVE.so beautiful:))
tehehe,my brother's..he was bored, so made this for me:))


Prologue
After 6 years that he moved, i couldn't keep him out of my head. he never came back to this town again, but there were 3 things that kept me determined to wait for him, the necklace, the secret place, and the promise.​

authors note:
i know that i barely started LiLaG, but then this one is stuck on my head and i keep wanting to update it so yeah.anyways.thanks for reading it.i'll update it soon,maybe when i get halfway to LiLaG or...yeah...but then i already got chapter 1:) thankss for reading:)
 
duaxiong

duaxiong

sarNie Adult
Yay!i posted it up:)

Son Yook Songapaisarn as Namcheo Paisarn
Peung Kunya as Sarsa Chanida
Mos Patiparn as Gun Paisarn
Best Aticha as Parn Chanida
Toey Jariporn as Dao Janiparn

Introducing the characters.
Namcheo and Gun are brothers. Namcheo's fiancée is named Dao.
Sarsa and Parn are sisters. Sarsa is one year older than Parn. They live in a small town named Fersaos. Not much people know about that town.


Chapter 1: How it all started

Sarsa's Point of View:

Namcheo and I met 5 years ago. It started when our town had a rumor going on. The rumor was about some rich people that worked in the famous company “Nextstar”, they were moving in to our town. I don't understand it though, if they were rich then, why would they move into our town? A few days later, while I was on my way to school, a car entered our town. “Wow, it's like the first car that enters this town.” I thought to myself. Then the car past me and I looked back. Everyone stared as the car also past them. I didn't care much and continue walking to school. It was the second semester of my 2nd year at high school. I just turned 16. After school, I walked home.
Pat:i'm home!
No one answered.
Pat: mom?dad?Parn?
Still, no one answered. I looked inside the rooms and no one was in there. I was about to run out, but I saw a note lying on the bed, I grabbed it and opened it quickly.
It reads:
Sarsa, your father and I are on our way
to visit your Aunt Pim. We just got a phone
call saying that she is sick. Bus tickets are
really expensive, so I don't think we can
come home soon. Take care of Parn for us.
We both love you a lot.
-Mom and Dad

I threw the paper on my bed. How am I supposed to take care of Parn? Then there was a knock on the door.
Sarsa: coming!
I opened the door.
???: I come here to collect the house bills for the month.
Sarsa: you're the.....tax collector?
Tax collector: yes.
Sarsa: how much?
Tax Collector: this month is $400.00
Sarsa:what?! Why is it so much?
Tax Collector: if it's too much then get out of this house now!
Sarsa: I was just...joking. Of course i'll pay you. Next week, i'll have it ready!
Tax Collector: you better not be lying like the other people or else you're getting kicked out of this town.
Sarsa: don't worry.
He leaves. I just hesitated on my way to sit. Taking care of Parn was already hard enough and now, the house bills? I went back to sitting and Parn gets home.
Parn: where's mom and dad?
I was tired of explaining and handed her the letter. After she read it, I asked her a question.
Sarsa: how are we going to pay the house bills?
Parn: what?! Don't tell me mom and dad forgot to.
Sarsa: they did.
Parn: what are we going to do now?
Sarsa: I don't know.
Parn: what about.......your EXAM MONEY!
Sarsa: no, I worked hard for them!
Parn: just use your exam money.
Sarsa: until next week. I'll try to find a job.
Parn: like you'll get the job and pay the Tax Collector off easily.
Sarsa: I don't know! Would you stop that already? I'm getting annoyed.
Parn: okay okay!
I am so confused, I don't know what to do at all. Tomorrow is February 13, I kept thinking. Oh yeah, it was going to be Valentine's Day and every year at school, they raffle all students' name and draws a guy and a girls' name. The lucky winner gets.......if I remember, they get 1,000 dollars for the blind date and no school on February 14th.
Who cares. I need to go to sleep. I went to bed and walked to school the next day. Parn was already at school like any other days. Then, I saw the same car from yesterday. It was going towards the school. I heard the short bell rang and I walked faster. I finally got into the school campus and the bell rang. There were so many people on their way to their classes. While walking to my class, I slipped on a mud.
Sarsa: Damn!
I had mud all over me, then someone tapped on me, so I looked back.
???: do you know where room 27 is?
Sarsa: yeah, keep going straight through this hall and turn on the second aisle.
???: thanks.
He turns away and turns back again.
???: do you need any help?
Sarsa: oh, no...i'm fine.
I tried getting up, but I slipped again. That person turned back and helped me up.
Sarsa: thanks.
I got out of the mud and was so embarrassed that I didn't want to look at him.
???: you're welcome.
I just remembered.
Sarsa: you have room number 27?
???: yeah.
Sarsa: I do too!
???: oh....really?
I started walking to my class again. When I got there, everyone was laughing. Great, another bad luck day for me.
Teacher: ENOUGH! Sarsa, go take your seat and start doing your warm up.
Sarsa: okay.
I kept looking on the ground, still embarrassed. I took my seat. That guy that helped me handed a note to the teacher. I wonder who he is..... then the teacher claps his hands to get our attention.
Teacher: everyone, this is the new student. His name is Namcheo.
Everyone was whispering, especially the girls. Yay......a “new” prince charming in the campus...
teacher: take a seat in any empty seat.
Girl: sit in this empty seat.
Thank god she asked him that. If he was to sit next to me, all the girls would start hating me. Then.....
Namcheo: it's okay, i'll sit in the back..
he comes and sits right next to my desk. Today is seriously my BAD LUCK DAY. It was the most boring class ever, I couldn't wait for the day to end. I forgot all about the blind date thing until there was an announcement.

Announcement:
good afternoon students, we'll now announce the lucky winners. And they are.......Gun Paisarn and Parn Chanida!Congratulations!Please come to the office.

OMG! Parn won! She is so lucky, just got here this year and won that. Anyway, I don't have to use my exam money anymore. YES!

Parn's point of view:

I walked to the office. I couldn't believe that I won, but what did I won? I got to the office and walked inside. I saw a guy that i've never seen before.
Lupe(office lady): Are you both Parn and Gun?
“Yes,” we both answered at the same time.
Lupe: here's the money for the blind date tomorrow.
Parn:wait, what blind date?
Lupe: this is a school activity that we do each year on Valentine's Day. You both are going on a blind date tomorrow and don't have to come to school.
She hands me $500.000 and that dude $500.000.
Lupe: you both may go back to class and are excused for not coming to school tomorrow.
We both walked out. I wanted to ask what his name was since he is pretty cute, but I was too shy. When I was about to ask him, he asked me a question.
Gun: you're a....freshman here?
Parn: yeah...and you?
Gun: oh...me? I just transferred here with my brother. I'm a Sophmore.
Parn: oh....
I didn't know what to do or say.
Gun: so, you're name is Parn?
Parn: yeah..and your name is....
Gun: Gun. Wait, what's your room number?
Parn: 36..
Gun:we just passed it.
Parn: really?
I looked back, and we did past it.
Parn: thanks. Well, I gotta go. So bye.
I walked back.
Gun: wait! What's your.....phone number, because I want to call for the date tomorrow.
Parn: 660-8231
Gun: thanks... and bye!
I waved bye to him and continued walking back to calls. He's cute, I thought to myself....

tehehe,end of chapter..that's all
i wrote for now.so yeahh.i'll
come up with more.thanks:)
hope you gals read chapter 2!
 
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huajaikaungtur

- Marina ♥
tehee...,
i like how you made it from different point of views.
tehee.., cant wait to read.
im loving it already.
blind date? omggg, this is gonna be cute.
 
lakorndemon

lakorndemon

sarNie Hatchling
lol...nice fanfic...
and a blind date...i gatta see this...lol...
 
duaxiong

duaxiong

sarNie Adult
Chapter 2
still Parn's point of View:

I got in class and everyone stared at me. I got in my seat and continued with my class works. I'm so glad that the day was going to be over. Finally the bell rings, I rushed out to look for my friends, then.....i saw Sarsa, a guy handed her a notebook and a sweater...Okay...I'm CONFUSED...Sarsa never told me she had a boyfriend, so I purposely walked past them to get their attentions, but they just ignored me. I was eavesdropping the conversation.
Sarsa: thanks Namcheo.
Namcheo: you're welcome.
Pat walked away, still ignoring me. How can she just do that to me?! I'm going home early today. I catch up with Sarsa and start questioning her.
Parn: you have a....BOYFRIEND?
Sarsa: he isn't my boyfriend.
Parn: I saw that and you still don't admit?
She took of the sweater and I saw dry mud all over her.
Sarsa: if you understand, then stop questioning me.
Parn: what about the notebook?
Sarsa: why do you want to meddle into my business?
Parn: tell me or..i'll...i'll tell mom and dad.
Sarsa: I really don't care what you do, but I just forgot my notebook in the classroom.
Parn: but....i've never seen....him before.
Sarsa: exactly, he just moved here.
Parn: okay...i'll stop questioning, but I WON!
Sarsa: yeah, I heard.
Parn: he just moved here too.
Sarsa: I don't care.
Then I heard my name from behind me. I looked back and saw Gun. Pat ignored me and continued walking. Then I saw the guy that gave the notebook and sweater to Sarsa. I stood in the same position until he got to me. He finally catched up to me.
Parn: so...both of you are brothers?
Gun: yeah, he's Namcheo. Namcheo, she's Parn.
Parn: Nice to meet you.
I bow down to him and he just walks off. What a rude guy, I don't even want to meet you too.
Gun: sorry about my brother, he's a serious person. You don't want to joke around with him.
Parn: it's okay. Your family just moved here?
Gun: yeah. Where do you live? I'll walk you there?
Parn: really?
Gun: yeah.
This guy is attractive, any girl would fall for both of them. He walked me to my house and we did our good-byes. I went inside the house and Sarsa was waiting for me.
Sarsa: how many guys have you try to get?
Parn: not much. Maybe around 5?
Sarsa: maybe around 20 I say.
Parn: whatever.. anyway, why don't you date anyone at all?
Sarsa: I don't like any of the guys at our school. They're just....not my type.
Parn: I guess..
Sarsa: so, you're going to go out with him tomorrow?
Parn: of course.
Sarsa: remember to save money for the house bills.
Parn: of course.
Sasrsa: hey, let's go walk around. I'm so bored.
Parn: don't you have homework?
Sarsa: no. do you?
Parn: yeah. Sorry, I can't go with you. Just go by yourself.
Sarsa: how mean. Fine, i'll go by myself.
Parn: yeah.
Sarsa exits the house. I started with my homework.

Sarsa's Point of View:
I am bored.. this town seriously is boring. What's with the new guy? Why is he......so nice.......and...such a..”prince charming.” Okay! I gotta step out of it. I slapped myself to go back to reality. Then I saw him.
Sarsa: Namcheo?
Maybe i'm just thinking too much. I rubbed
my eyes and looked forward again, he was still there.
Namcheo: what's wrong with you? Are you alright?
I stuttered not knowing what to answer.
Sarsa: I....yea..i'm alright.
Namcheo: where are you headed to?
Sarsa: I don't know, i'm just bored...so i'm out for a walk. Wanna come along?
Namcheo: sure, i'd love to.
We started walking down the streets and followed into a road.
Sarsa: thanks for your sweater, it was..nice of you.
Namcheo: no problem.
Sarsa: it was really embarrassing. I'm so thankful of you.
Namcheo: don't worry, it was nothing.
Sarsa: wait..so you and your family work in “NextStar”?
Namcheo: oh, yeah. How did you know?
Sarsa: “rumors”
Namcheo: wow...it sure did spread around fast.
Sarsa: sorry, but....may I ask you a question?
Namcheo: yeah.
Sarsa: if your family works in Nextstar, then why did you guys move into a town like this?
Namcheo: my family's rank went down, so we were bankrupt....and my parents wants to come live peacefully here for a while, until we find a job.
Sarsa: ohhh. that makes sense now.
Namcheo: yeah.
Sarsa: let's go have a seat under that tree.
He was walking too slow, so I pulled his hands and ran together with him to hide under the tree. It was a hot day and we have been walking for a while now. Actually, I don't even know where this place is since I don't usually go out for walks.
Namcheo: so, you've been here before?
Sarsa: oh, no. I don't know where this is.
Namcheo: you don't? Isn't this your hometown?
Sarsa: yeah, but i'm an indoor person.
Namcheo: oh..haha.
I looked around and saw a bench behind the tree.
Sarsa: look, there's a bench behind the tree.
He looked and saw the bench.
Namcheo: looks like someone's been here before. Wait, how long have we walked?
He checks the time.
Namcheo: wow, it's already 5 PM?
Sarsa: that's quick.
Namcheo: yeah. Is this far?
Sarsa: lets' just follow that road back.
Namcheo: yeah. how did we find this place? It looks like a secret place cause all the trees are surrounding it.
Sarsa: but...WOW...it has such a beautiful view!
I stood up to go sit on the bench and He followed after me.
Sarsa: let's meet here again tomorrow after school.
Namcheo: okay...
Sarsa: let's go now or it'll start getting dark.
Both of us started walking out and I tripped over a rock. Damn, i'm clumsy! Namcheo starts laughing. OMG...he looks so......HANDSOME SMILING...
Namcheo: are you alright? Why are you so clumsy?
He helds his hands out to help me up and I grabbed it. I looked down and it looked like someone digged a hole here.
Sarsa: Namcheo, what's this that I tripped on?
I started to dig the dirt with my hands and he helped me.
Namcheo: you're really nosy.
Sarsa: you can say.
Then I saw it... there was a letter. I quickly grabbed it to read.
It reads:
when you read this letter, I am no longer alive. I'm in
heaven already my love. I know that you'll
find a way to meet me here again, but... i'm sorry.. I..
love you a lot....i..i just can't bear to marry that guy at
all..please forgive me. I love you.
Love,
your most dearest Rachavadee

Sarsa: he....he...never came back? It doesn't even look like the dirt has been touched for years.
Namcheo: come on let's go.
I just couldn't help it but start crying.. I don't know why, but...it's just...too sad. Namcheo hugged me as I was crying. The next thing I know, I was on his back. You can say, i was sleeping.
Namcheo: Sarsa..Sarsa..
am I dreaming?? I opened my eyes. We were already in front of my home.
Sarsa: how did you find the way back?
Namcheo: just followed the road and used common sense, it was pretty hard to find my way back alone.
Sarsa: sorry, I was..tired.
He laughs.
Namcheo: it's alright. Anyway, good night.
I got off of his back.
Sarsa: good night.
He leaves and I enter the house. I would’ve been in trouble if my parents were here. Parn was waiting for me.
Parn: where did you go?
Sarsa: out for a walk.
Parn: I don’t think you did. How come that guy took you back then?
Sarsa: would you please shut up! I even asked you to go with me but you refused to and now you’re asking me a lot of questions AGAIN?!
Parn: such a short-tempered person.
Sarsa: it’s because you’ve asked way too much questions in a day.
Parn: well, you've been doing acting so weird lately, that's WHY.
Sarsa: no i'm not. I'm just acting the same, so stop trying to make up excuses.
Parn: I'm not making any excuses. Are you sure that you're not going out with Namcheo dude?
Sarsa: how did you know his name?
Parn: I just have a good connection.
Sarsa(whispering): yeah right.
Parn stretches and goes off to bed. I followed after her to go to bed. The next day, I woke up early so I won't go to school late. I got dressed and exited the house. Namcheo was waiting for me in the front. Maybe I have to stop being close to him OR ELSE the “fan club” will kill me. I decide to not talk to him anymore. I walk with him to not let him notice my decision, but I stayed as far as I could from him. It was really quiet.
Namcheo: why are you so quiet today?
Sarsa: what do you mean?
Namcheo: well, you usually talk a lot.
Sarsa: i'm not in the mood for that today.
Namcheo: okay, if that's what you want, but....do you still want to meet at that tree place?
Sarsa: what tree place?
OMG. I forgot about that! I hid my face from him. I'm such an embarrassment, I cried and I..SLEPT ON HIS BACK. It wouldn't be right to just start ignoring him like this...
Namcheo: are you listening?
Sarsa: huh? oh...yeah, i'll meet you there after school.
Namcheo: okay.
This is going to be the last last time. Then we both arrived at school and a whole bunch of girls were in a BIG group. I KNEW that there was going to be a “Fan Club”.
Sarsa: have fun dealing with your “Fan Club”.
We got closer to that group and I walked away from him. The girls starts cheering when they saw him and they chased after him BUT he came running my way and he grabbed my hands making me run with him. I am going to DIE.... but I had to help him so I ran with him. I had to lead since he didn't know much about the campus. I finally found a spot for both of us to hide in and I pulled him into it. The walls were kind of squished that we both almost didn't fit. We both were out of breath, but it was...FUN. I haven't run like this for a long time, but at that moment...he was so.. CLOSE TO ME. Gosh! Why does this wall have to be squished together like this?! Then he just pauses there and looks at me. Is it going to be a KISS? At that moment I was excited and scared. To be kissed by a handsome guy... So DREAMY! But, it's going to be my first kiss and...NOOOOOOO. I turned away from him to change the subject.
Sarsa: maybe they're already somewhere else.
Namcheo: yeah.
I sighed.. it got me scared for a second, but we were still holding hands. I move my hands out of his and lead the way again.
Sarsa: this way Namcheo.
He follows me. We were just whispering since the bell already rang.
Sarsa: what if we're late for class?
Namcheo: who cares? Let's ditch for today, there's nothing to do anyway.
Sarsa: okay, but I never ditched before.
Namcheo: what a nerd.
I stared at him and He laughs, then he grabs my hands again. I kept trying to pull my hands out, but he held on too tight. We were sneaking out of that place and luckily the gate was open, so we both ran out. A teacher sees us and starts blowing the whistle.
Teacher: two kids are ditching class!
He tugged me, even running faster. Anyway, what's with the holding hands?

Parn's point of View:
I woke up and there was a knock on the door. I opened my eyes wide with shock. What if it was...GUN?! I quickly combed my hair and the person starts knocking louder. I threw the comb in the restroom and ran to the door. I smile wide, but it was...the tax collector?
Tax collector: have you got the money yet?
Parn: oh yeah. How much again?
Tax Collector: $450.000
Parn: okay.
I handed him $450.00 and he walks off happily. I continued getting dressed up. When I finished I opened the door to get my shoes and Gun was there.
Parn: when did you get here?!
Gun: just now.
Parn: right timing too. So where are we going to today?
Gun: I don't know since i've never been here before.
Parn: i'll show you around then.
I showed him around the town. We talked and had lots of fun. We sneaked into the secret garden to take pictures. He found a rare flower and gave it to me. I grabbed it and he smiles at me.
Parn: wow...IT's beautiful..
gun: you're as beautiful as that flower Parn...
I hesitated, not knowing what to say. Then I stood up.
Parn: let's get out before anyone sees us.
We both sneaked out and walked around again, I guess that's the only thing we could do now. I was hungry and my stomach started growling.
Gun: let's go eat at Tilaika.
Parn: how do you know that we have that restaurant here?
Gun: I toured this place a bit.
Parn: okay.
Gun: it's just right there anyway.
We both got there and we ordered our foods. Both of us got our orders and started eating. Then there was a flash. I looked up and he was holding the camera.
Parn: what are you doing? Taking a picture?
Gun: yeah.
Parn: give it to me. It's embarrassing!
Gun: no, it's cute.
He shows it to me.
Parn: I LOOK hideous. Give it to me!
Gun: continue eating.
Parn: I don't trust you.
Gun: fine.
He handed me the camera and I grabbed it. I continued eating and secretly took pictures of him. It's actually fun, but he doesn't even notice.
Gun: why do you keep smiling to yourself?
Parn: nothing.
Gun: it's obvious. Just tell me.
Parn: nothing. Oh, i'm full.
Gun: okay. Let's go then.
He payed for us and we crossed this one bridge to go across. These places haven't been visited for awhile since it's far from the town. We followed a path until we saw a waterfall.
Parn: it's beautiful. Wanna go?
Gun: what?
I got closer to the water and wet him. I ran under the waterfall to play with it. He followed me there, but coincidentally, we both slipped together on this stupid slimy green thing and fell into the water. He was holding my hands tightly and we didn't lose each other. He helped me out of the water worried.
Gun: parn? Are you alright?
Parn: yeah.
Gun: let's go home.
Parn: already?
Gun: you're going to get sick.
Parn: I won't.
Gun: let's just go.
He helped me up and we both followed the path back. We finally got to my house after the long walk.
Parn: thanks for today Gun.
Gun: it would've been more fun if we went somewhere else, sorry for getting you wet.
Parn: its alright. Look, i'm fine.
Gun: okay. Then....bye.
Parn: bye.
I watched him leave and I looked at the time. It was already 3 PM. How come Sarsa isn't back yet?

Sarsa's point of view:
we were here for such a long time just relaxing.
Sarsa: next time, don't pull me into your business again.
Namcheo: seriously, what's wrong with you today? Seems like a whole different person.
I grabbed my bag and left that place. I didn't care if he ran after me or not. Wait. How do I go back? Gosh. I walked back to the Tree place again and he was still there. He heard me.
Namcheo: I knew you were going to come back.
Sarsa: how...do we go back?
Namcheo: help me up first.
Sarsa: okay.
I helped him up and he lead me this time.
Namcheo's point of view:
I don't know why, but this girl makes me have a weird feeling. I can't stand seeing her mad at me or anything. It just...bothers me. I have to know the reason why she is acting like this.
Namcheo: can you please just tell me one reason why you're mad?
Sarsa: you don't need to know.
Namcheo: sorry, if it was the Fan Club thing. I didn't mean to drag you in there.
Sarsa: it wasn't because of that.
Namcheo: then why did you start getting mad?
Sarsa: it's nothing.
Namcheo: if you're sure then let's become close friends.
Sarsa: why?
Namcheo: are you going to agree or not?
Sarsa: I guess... then how about we meet at that tree place everyday too?
Namcheo: yeah.
We clapped our hands and made the deal of becoming close friends.

End of Chapter. I know that it's
too quick and boring but please
endure with it. The beginning is
going to be a bit boring. I'm sorry.

PREVIEW
She kissed me on my cheeks for the first time.
Sarsa: Let go of my sister!
The phone rings and I answered it. It was mom.
Namcheo: I don't need to tell you that I like you!
 
H

huajaikaungtur

- Marina ♥
the preview, omgg.
can't wait. that was such a cute chapter.
i think that Namcheo likes Sarsa && Gun likes Parn.
lovee the different points of view.
they found a letter.
hmm..., i wonder whats going to happen next.
too cute.
 
duaxiong

duaxiong

sarNie Adult
Chapter 3
Still Sarsa's point of view:
he dropped me off to my house. I waved bye and went inside.
Parn: where did you go all day?
Sarsa: i'm supposed to be saying that to you since i'm older.
Parn: it doesn't even matter.
Sarsa: i'm going to go sleep.
Parn: You're such a lazy bum.
Sarsa: you're not tired at all?
Parn: no.
sarsa: actually, I'm just hungry.
Parn: i'm going to go nap.
Sarsa: yeah.
Parn went inside the room and I went into the kitchen to cook something for me to eat.

Namcheo's Point of View:
I got home and I enter the house.
Namcheo's mother: where did you go all day?
Namcheo: I..
Namcheo's mother: you don't usually come home this late and you usually drop your backpack off at home before going anywhere.
Namcheo: it doesn't matter.
Namcheo's mother: You can't be going out when you're this young!
Namcheo: what are you talking about?
Namcheo's mother: you're just a sophmore and you're already going out to hang around with friends.
Namcheo: then why do you let Gun go?
Namcheo's mother: he listens to me and you don't!
Namcheo: maybe we're just step brothers and I never got the chance to know.
Namcheo's mother: I don't care what you think, because you both are real brothers!
Namcheo: whatever.
I left to go to my room.
Namcheo's mother: FINE, you can go ahead and go hang out anywhere from now on. I know that i've been too rigid, but you have to be good like Gun.
I didn't care and continued walking to my room, Gun was sitting on the floor when I got in there.
Gun: are you alright?
Namcheo: yeah, nothing's wrong. You know i've been through these “lectures” a bunch of times.
Gun: yeah I do understand.
Namcheo: if you don't mind, i'm going to go take a shower now.
Gun: yeah, go ahead.
I left to take a shower.

Back to Sarsa.
Sarsa's point of view:
I finished eating and sat down in the living room watching t.v. The phone rings and I answered it.
Sarsa: Hello?
Sarsa/Parn's mom: Hi Sarsa, how are you and Parn?
Sarsa: oh hey mom
Sarsa/Parn's mom: I called to tell you both to be careful because the debt collectors are looking for us
Sarsa: What?
Sarsa/Parn's mom: We helped pay for your aunt's debts but not all of them and We won't be coming home soon, so you both take care and tell Parn to not be scared.
Sarsa: Ok mom, I will tell her and you and dad be careful too
Sarsa/Parn's mom: Ok I know that. I have to go. Talk to you later Sarsa
Sarsa: Ok bye mom
I hung up the phone and walked to Parn's room. I knocked on the door but she doesn't open it. I open the door and see her sleeping. I didn't want to disturb her so I closed the door and went to bed.

The Next Day.
Parn's point of view:
I woke up and saw Sarsa sitting down in the living room. I went to her.
Parn: Hey Sarsa!
Sarsa: what?
Parn: Did you get any phone calls from mom and dad? I'm worried
Sarsa: Don't worry, mom called yesterday when you were asleep
Parn: Really? How come you didn't tell me?
Sarsa: I didn't want to wake you up
Parn: What did mom say?
Sarsa: Mom told us to be careful about the debt collectors
Parn: What? There are debt collectors? That's so scary
Sarsa: Mom also told me to tell you to not be scared
Parn: Why are there debt collectors?
Sarsa: Well mom and dad helped auntie pay her bills but not all of them
Parn: When will these crazy debts end?!
Sarsa: I know.
I got up and the phone rang. Sarsa went to go get it. She gave me the phone.
Sarsa: Here for you
Parn: Huh?
I took the phone.
Parn: Hello?
It was Gun.
Gun: Hello Parn?
Parn: Yes?
Gun: I want to ask you if you want to go to a place
Parn: Now?
Gun: yea.
Sarsa: oh,yeah.. where?
Gun: A place that you have never seen before
Parn: Ok where do we meet?
Gun: Can I come pick you up?
Parn: …............
Gun: Also my brother Namcheo wants to ask if your sister Sarsa wants to go with him to the park to watch the kites
Parn: Wait, let me ask Sarsa
I went to Sarsa.
Parn: Hey Sarsa, Namcheo asked if you want to go with him to the park to watch the kites fly?
Sarsa: ….......ok
I got the phone and continued talking.
Parn: Gun,tell Namcheo that Sarsa is going to go.
Gun: Oh ok. But what about you?
Parn: i'll go with you.
Gun: Where should we meet then?
Gun:.......................
Namcheo at the background: Meet under the tree
Gun: what tree are you talking about?
Namcheo still in background: just ask Sarsa.
Parn: Which tree?
Gun: Namcheo says that Sarsa should know
Parn: Ok then, see you there
Gun: Ok bye
I hang up and went to Sarsa.
Parn: Come on Sarsa, they want us to get to the tree by 1:00 p.m.
Sarsa: What time is it now?
Parn: it's now 12:24
sarsa: Ok then I'll get ready
Parn: OK then
I went to go get ready and came out wearing my usual clothes. Sarsa was ready too. We both left the house and walk to the tree together. I saw Gun and his brother Namcheo. I don't know why but I was feeling awkward. This just seem like another date with Gun. No it can't be, maybe he doesn't have feelings for me.

Gun's point of view:
I see Parn and her sister walking towards me and Namcheo. Parn looked really cute.
Gun: You look cute Parn!
Parn blushes.
Parn:....THank you Gun
Gun: So shall we go now?
Parn: …..ok
Gun: OK Namcheo and Sarsa we all meet here again ok?
Namcheo: Alright then, let's go Sarsa
Sarsa: ok
we all entered the car and I dropped Namcheo and Sarsa off at the Park. Then I drove Parn to the mountains so we can see the Sun set.
Parn: where are we going?
Gun: to the mountains.
Parn: why are we going there?
Gun: because it's pretty and it's also one of my favorite place to go
Parn: Oh...
Gun: Why? Scared?
Parn: ...Scared of what?
I smiled at her.
Gun: nevermind
Parn: Gun! Are you trying to scare me?
Gun: I was just kidding
Parn: When will we get there?
Gun: We are there now
Parn: Really?already?
Gun: Yeah
I stopped my car and got out. Parn also got out. We were on top of the mountain. The air felt so fresh. Parn stayed away from the cliff.
Gun: Parn! Why are you so far? If you are far, How can you feel the fresh air?
Parn: I'm.....Scared
Gun: Don't be and I promise you that if you fall I will catch you!
Parn: Gun! Why do you keep scaring me?
Gun: ok oK Just kidding, but come over here
Parn kept shaking her head.
Gun: Come on Parn, please?
She still didn't move. I went to grab her and took her close to the cliff of the mountain.
Parn: I'm...SCARED!!
She was shaking.
Gun: Parn....Relax....
Parn: I'm scared......
Gun: Don't be, come on put out your hands
Parn: no....
Gun: Come on Parn
Parn: NO I can't..I'm scared!
I took her hands and rise it. Then I went to the back of her holding her.
Gun: I told you to don't be scared.
Parn: Gun......
Gun: Shhh..Close your eyes and feel the air
I hold her tightly. She closes her eyes and smiles. I slowly let go of her and walked to my car to let her feel the air. Parn opens her eyes and looks back. She sees me smiling and waving at her.
Parn: Gun! You! Ahhhhh
Parn slipped and I ran to grab her in time.
Parn: AHHH!! I'm scared!
Gun: Don't panic! Just stay calm
I pulled her up and she was crying. I felt bad.
Gun: Sorry Parn

Back to Namcheo and Sarsa.
Namcheo's point of view:
Namcheo: DO you want to fly a kite?
Sarsa: I....How?
I was hiding a kite at the back of me the whole time. I took the kite out.
Namcheo: Here
Sarsa: How..How did you get that?
Namcheo: Let's fly this kite together
Sarsa: Ok
In a couple of minutes our kite was flying in the sky too. Sarsa looked really happy and she smiled the whole time. She was sitting down. I lied down and I felt her coming close to me. I opened my eyes and she was next to me. I got up and her lips touched my cheeks. She kissed me on my cheeks for the first time. I was happy. Sarsa quickly moves and looks at the kite again. I got up and stared at her.
Namcheo: Is there something on my face?
Sarsa: No....Sorry
Namcheo: It's ok.
The kite came down since the wind started to stop. She looks at the kite and sees my name and her name written in permanent marker on it.
Sarsa: Why is my name on there?
Namcheo: WHY don't you thinK?
She grabs my hand and gives the kite to me then she walks away. I chased after her not caring about the kite.
Namcheo: Sarsa!
She keeps on walking.
Namcheo: Why are you mad?
Sarsa: Sorry I want to go home
Namcheo: Why do you want to go home already?
Sarsa: I want to go HOME!
Namcheo: Or you don't like my name and your name on it?
Sarsa: We are just friends and we don't have any feelings for each other! Why do you make me feel like we are dating?!
She walks faster.
I stopped and yelled.
Namcheo: Why can't I? Can't I show how I feel?
Sarsa stopped walking and looked back at me.
Sarsa: I don't understand you!
I ran to her and kissed her on the lips. I didn't care anymore. I wanted to tell her the truth how I felt inside of me.
Namcheo: I don't need to tell you that I like you...

Back to Gun and Parn.
Parn's point of view:
I was really scared and mad at Gun at the same time. How can he do this? What if I really fell down the scary cliff? How am I going to see Sarsa?He told me that he will be there for me. But I know he didn't do it on purpose. I also don't want him to feel bad.
Gun: I'm really sorry Parn
Parn: ...I'm ok
Gun: Let's see what time it is, It's now 2:00 p.m.
Parn: Oh so when are we leaving?
Gun: Maybe at 9
Parn: What?! No! I can't!
Gun: HAH! I was just kidding Parn. Why are you so shock?
Parn: GUN! Stop playing around!
I hit him on the shoulder.
Parn: This is what you get for being so mean
Gun: Why did you hit me?
Parn: So what time are we really leaving?
Gun: Maybe at 3
Parn: Ok
Gun: But I want to see the sun set
Parn: Let's just leave at 3 ok?
Gun: Ok then

Gun's point of view:
I didn't want her to hate me or be scared of me. So we just sat on my car looking at the view of the mountains.
Parn: What makes you like this place Gun?
Gun: hmm I'll have to say the fresh air and the deep look of the trees
Parn: Oh does someone remind you of this place?
Gun: Yeah...Yo
Just then my phone rings and I answered it. It was Namcheo.
Namcheo: Gun, we're walking to the tree, so see you in a bit.
Gun: Ok
I hang up and got off my car.
Gun: Come on Parn, let's go back to the tree
Parn: OK
I drove back to the tree. Namcheo and Sarsa wasn't there yet. Parn and I got out. I didn't know what to say to Parn. Stupid Namcheo has to call at the time when I was going to tell Parn that she reminds me of the mountains.Erggg!! Parn sat down on the bench and I sat down next to her.
Parn: Hey Gun, if I did fall down the cliff what will you do?
Gun: Why do you ask me that?
Parn: I'm just asking
Gun: If you did fall down the cliff I would jump after you and try to catch you!
Parn: Really?
She gets up and walks.
Gun: Where are you going Parn?
Then there was a rock and she tripped. I went to go catch her again. We looked at each other. At that moment, Namcheo and Sarsa arrived.

Sarsa's point of view:
Gun was holding Parn when I got there. I ran to them.
Sarsa: Let go of my sister!
Gun quickly lets go of Parn.
Parn: Sarsa! Don't yell at Gun! I tripped and he catch me
Sarsa: Really?
Parn: Yeah and I won't lie to you
Sarsa: so troublesome. Hurry, let's go home.
Parn: Bye Gun
Gun: Bye
I didn't want to say anything so I left with Parn without saying bye to Namcheo. I don't know if it's right or not, but I continued walking without looking back. We both got home and Parn was curious like always.
Parn: What did you do Sarsa?
Sarsa: Oh fly kites, you?
Parn: I......
Sarsa: What did you DO?
Parn: If I tell you, you might be mad!
Sarsa: just tell me!
Parn: erggg.
Sarsa: PARN.
Parn: Ok ok we went to the mountains and I almost fell off the cliff
Sarsa: WHAT?!!
Parn: Oops!
Sarsa: how did you almost fell off?
Parn: Nothing! I'm going to my room!
She runs to her room and I run after her, But she locked the door.
Sarsa: PARN! Open nOW! How did you almost fell off?
Parn: Nothing and I'm sleeping!
Sarsa: PARN!
I angrily walk to my room. I'm really curious that Parn almost fell off the cliff. What did that Gun do to my sister? His name already sound so scary! Gun! Omg! I sat down on the bed and thought of Namcheo. Was what he told me true? He likes me? I don't know what I should do. Should I tell him that I like him too?

End of Chapter!
PREVIEW
Sarsa: tell me how that happened to her!
I looked at Sarsa and she looks away from me.
Parn: i'm sorry Sarsa.
Counselor: Congratulations to all Graduates!
Sarsa: why are you leaving?

tehe.thanks READERS:)
i'm so HAPPY that i
at least updated something.
LiLaG is WAYYYY Better than
the promise.lmao.
thanks for reading.yepp,
finally years starts to pass.
 
mainhiathao

mainhiathao

sarNie Granny
i love the poster...i'm starting to read this fanfic...its interesting...
 
duaxiong

duaxiong

sarNie Adult
The cpu wont work so im using ps3 internet.you'll think why i write so many replies and not just write a chapter all together in one reply.that is the max that i can write.SORRY for some mistakes!enjoy reading!
CHAPTER 4
namcheo's point of view:
Im thinking if Sarsa believe what i told her,she seems like she don't want to talk to me after i confessed to her.
Gun:are you ready?
Namcheo:yea,lets go.
we both walked to school together.i was thinking about Sarsa and wanted to see her again. We got to school and i started to look for Sarsa. Gun found Parn and walked off.i followed after him to ask for Sarsa.
Gun:hi Parn
Parn:hi Gun....and hi Namcheo
i didnt see Sarsa anywhere.
Namcheo:hi,do you know where Sarsa is?
Parn:i think she's in the class room.
i walk to rm 36,trying to avoid all the girls.when i got to the room,the bell ring right in time.I enter the room and saw Sarsa sitting in her desk,i walk to my seat and sat next to Sarsa.
Namcheo:Sawatdee Sarsa.
Sarsa:Sawtdee.
She moved further from me.
---unfinish
 
duaxiong

duaxiong

sarNie Adult
Namcheo:are you scared because i told you..that yesterday?im sorry for surprising you.
Sarsa:its alright.
Namcheo:i'll go sit somewhere else.
i thought that she was going to stop me,but she did nothing.i walked to an empty seat.
teacher:Nee Khun Namcheo,what are you doing?
Namcheo:i want to sit here for today.
teacher:you are to sit in your assigned seat.
Namcheo:But i
i looked at Sarsa and she looks away from me.
teacher:hurry up and go back to your assigned seat and NO buts.
I stood up and walked back to my original seat.The teacher passed out some textbooks to everyone EXCEPT me.I raised my hand.
teacher:Yes Namcheo?
Namcheo:i don't have a textbook.
teacher:why don't you share with Sarsa?
Namcheo:...........
teacher:Sarsa,will you share with Mr.Paisarn?He is extremely shy today.
Sarsa:Kap.
The teacher explained the assignment,but i was looking at her the whole time,not paying attention at all.She took out a piece of paper and started working on the assignment.Ok,i'm lost...i don't know what to do-unfinish
 
duaxiong

duaxiong

sarNie Adult
Should i ask her for help?
Namcheo:Sarsa,can you help me?
Sarsa:the teacher just explained to us earlier.
Namcheo:but...im having problems understanding.
Sarsa:eek:k,i'll help you,but you have to pay attention this time.
Namcheo:alright..
I smiled and continued to stare at her.i don't really care what she is saying,but all i know is that she is pretty.She seems to notice me staring at her and waves her hand at me.
Sarsa:Namcheo??
Namcheo:......OH...thats how we do it.
Sarsa:were you listening?
Namcheo:eek:f course.i'm going to work on it now.
I immediately took out a piece of paper and started working,i didnt understand it,but i pretended like i understood it.Then different assignments went ON and on....Until the class finally ends.Ssrsa rushes out when class was over.i walked after her,but she walked even faster.i catched up to her.
Namcheo:Why are you avoiding me?
Sarsa's point of view:
i tried avoiding Namcheo,i didn't want to see him or i'll start to like him even more.---unfinish
 
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huajaikaungtur

- Marina ♥
you're making me want to see son or peung movies.
totally wished they were in a movie together.
wouldn't that be great?
anyways, lovee your fanfics :]
especially this one :]
 
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