The Promise ~ Last Chapter Up .

[duaxiong]

Chapter 9

Dao’s Point of View:

Dao: What?!

Namcheo: Dao, I-I don’t want to marry yet.

Dao: You can’t just do this to me! I don’t agree with you!

Namcheo: I’m sorry.

Namcheo exits the wedding shop and drives home leaving Dao alone.

Dao(full of anger calling her parents): Mom! Come pick me up.

Dao’s mom: What’s wrong?

Dao(crying): Namcheo doesn’t want to marry me..anymore.

Dao’s mom: Don’t cry hunny, I’ll come pick you up alright?

In minutes, she arrives at the wedding place and picks me up. I really don’t understand what made Namcheo change his mind, but I won’t give up at all. I’ll do anything to make him go back on his words and marry me. We arrive home and I ran upstairs crying.




Namcheo’s Point of View:

Even though my decision was to let Sarsa go, I wouldn’t marry someone else right away.. I can’t just do that. I got home and enter the house. Aunt was there and so was Min.

G/N Mom: Namcheo! Come her this instance!

I walked to her.

G/N Mom: Why did you say that to her?

Namcheo: Say what?

G/N mom: that you don’t want to marry her!

Namcheo: Mom, I seriously don’t..i’d rather go study aboard, why don’t you ask Gun to marry her?

G/N Mom: Why are you disobeying me?!

Namcheo: I’ll go upstairs for now.

G/N Mom: You-You! Come back here!

I ignored her and walked upstairs to my room.




Sarsa’s Point of View:

Even though I didn’t want to go with him, I ended up going with him. He sent me home and when I arrive home, Parn was sleeping on my door house. She opens her eyes quickly.

Parn: You’re Finally here.

Sarsa: Yeah, sorry that I made you wait.

Parn: Hurry up and open the door.

I opened the door for her and she grabs her luggage inside.

Parn: this apartment isn’t so bad after all.

That’s when I spot all of those magazines scattered all over my sofa. I quickly pile them up and hide them in the kitchen cabinet and pretended to both of us some water. I started drinking mine and handed hers to her.

Parn: So, where am I sleeping?

Sarsa: the other sofa.

Parn: Oh.. I met gun today..

I coughed out some water.

Parn: what?

Sarsa: How did you-

Parn: I don’t know either. Don’t tell me that you met Namcheo and you didn’t tell me.

Sarsa: Of- Of course Not! Silly.

Parn: You better not lie, because I don’t want you to ever go close to that liar again.

Sarsa: Yeah.. What about you? You better not go close to gun.

Parn: that’s my problem, you don’t need to worry.

Sarsa: Here, your blanket and pillow.

Parn: thanks.

Sarsa: Good night.




The Next Day

Dao’s Point of View:

Dao’s Mom: Hunny, come down to eat.

Dao: I don’t want to eat! I want to die!

Dao’s Mom: Hunny, Don’t ever say that! Open the door right now!

Dao: NO! If I don’t get to marry Namcheo then I would rather die!

Dao’s Mom: Hunny, you haven’t ate since yesterday when you came home.,

Dao: I don’t care, go away!

Dao’s Mom: If you come out to eat now, I promise to fix this problem for you.

Dao: Really?

Dao’s Mom: Absolutely, I won’t let anyone hurt my sweet darling.

I opened the door and hug my mom tightly.
Dao: I love you mom!

Dao’s Mom: Now, go wash up and come eat.

Dao: Okay.

I washed my face and brush my teeth then I go downstairs for breakfast. I sat in my seat.

Dao: Mom, dad..you both have to do something about this..

Dao’s Mom: Alright my darling.

Dao’s Dad: Hunny, don’t always spoil her like this.

Dao’s mom: You shut up before I get mad at you!

Dao’s Dad: Okay.. sorry..

Dao’s Mom: Eat a lot okay? I cooked your favorite today, after this I’ll take you shopping for a beautiful dress and we’ll go to Namcheo’s house together.

Dao: Mhm! I’ll eat a lot mom!

After eating, mom and I went shopping together. I chose a cute hot pink dress and a cute purse. After that, we went to Namcheo’s house. When we arrive there, Namcheo’s mom was there. She was there to greet us, I gave her a tight hug.

Dao: Mom, I came to visit you. I really need to talk to you.

G/N Mom: So do I, let’s go sit over there and talk.

Dao’s Mom: Wait a second. Why are you doing this to my daughter, you already promised to let them engage!

G/N Mom: Yeah, why don’t you go inside to chat with my sister and I’ll talk this out with Dao.

Dao’s Mom: No, I’ll talk to you myself.

Dao: MOM! Go inside right now, I’ll just talk to her myself. Na? Na?

Dao’s Mom: Alright darling.

Dao: thanks.




Gun’s Point of View

I woke up and ate breakfast, we usually eat separately. I took Min to the park.

Min: P’Gun, I’m so happy. Thanks a lot!

Gun: it’s alright, you want to go shopping afterwards?

Min: Sure.




Dao’s Point of View:

Dao: Mom, ever since that one new... assistant came, he started acting weird. He looks irritated every time he sees me.

G/N Mom: Wait a minute..he has a new assistant?

Dao: you didn’t know?

G/N Mom: No, he never told me.. do you know her name?

Dao: I don’t really remember..it’s.. S-S..Sarsa?

G/N Mom: Sarsa?!

Dao: what’s wrong? Do You Know her?

G/N Mom: Namcheo used to date her back when he was still in high school but we moved back here. He usually goes there to visit her, but I didn’t want him to be spending time with a girl like that. She doesn’t even compare to you, she’s so Poor!

Dao: That’s Why! And you didn’t do anything mom?

G/N Mom: I paid everyone as much as they want, I told them to tell Namcheo that they moved and it worked fine.

Dao: Wow..Mom, you’re so smart but I think that it’s because of that slut’s fault! she just wants money mom!

G/N Mom: I’ll go talk to her and give her some money.

Dao: I hate her!

G/N Mom: We’ll just have to postpone your wedding just a bit to next month if you don’t mind.

Dao: Absolutely, I’ll see you later then.

G/N Mom: Okay, tell your mom about this alright?

Dao: Thanks.




Sarsa’s Point of View:

Sarsa: Good thing there’s no work today, I finally get to rest.

*Phone rings.

Sarsa: Hello?

Chalun: Are you busy today?

Sarsa: No, I’m not busy.

Chalun: I have to tell you something.

Sarsa: Oh, sure.

Chalun: I have good news for you.

Sarsa: What is it?

Chalun: You’re going to be my assistant from now on, not Namcheo’s anymore.

Sarsa: Oh..

Chalun: You’re not excited?

Sarsa: Of Course I am but Namcheo is getting married and I still need to help him with his documents..

Chalun: I’ll come help you then, since we’re both cousins.

Sarsa: Uhh..okay.

Chalun: I’ll come pick you up now.

The phone rings again.

Sarsa: Hello?

Parn: Gun has a girlfriend?

Sarsa: I don’t know, why do you like him so much.

Parn: Nevermind!

Sarsa: Where are you?

Parn: None of you’re business!

The doorbell rings so I hang up on Parn. I open the door and this lady smiles at me.

Sarsa: Come inside.

G/N Mom: No Need too, it’s too Filthy, I just came here to tell you to stay away from my son Namcheo.

Sarsa: I am staying away from him.

G/N Mom: the past is the past, forget about it.

Sarsa: I think you should leave now, I don’t welcome people that acts like you.

G/N Mom: Excuse me? I don’t want to stay here any longer but I need to talk to you. Do you know why Namcheo didn’t come to see you? You see, I told everyone in the town to lie that you moved. Even your mother who wanted money, she took it right away and pretended that you guys move. Right, I don’t want my son to be with someone like you. How much money do you want? I’ll give it to you and you can go somewhere far, I don’t want you to cause anything to my son’s marriage.

Sarsa: I don’t want any money.

G/N Mom: You want 5,000? 1,000,000?

Sarsa: I don’t want any of your MONEY! Take it away!

G/N Mom: What, you can’t resist seeing money or you’ll go crazy?

Chalun: Aunt? Why are you here?

G/N Mom: Chalun? Why are you here?

Chalun: I’m here to take Sarsa out to eat.

G/N Mom: Oh..so my son isn’t enough and you’re dating cousin Already?!

Chalun: Aunt! What are you talking about?

G/n Mom: I’ll go for now, but remember to stay away. You’ll never get to be with Namcheo!

She leaves and Chalun hugs me to comfort me.. I don’t know what to say.. but Namcheo.. he breaks my heart all the time..it hurts too much.
Chalun: Sarsa, don’t cry..tell me what’s wrong? Why is aunt here telling you to stay away from Namcheo?

Sarsa: I- I want to quit the job, i.. don’t want to see you or Namcheo anymore.

I close the door behind him. That’s when I received a text from him, the most unbelievable text.

Text: Sarsa, Will you please open your heart for me? I love you and only you. Please don’t be mad at me.. but call me when you’re not so sorrowful anymore.. what does Namcheo has to do with you? That’s my biggest question…

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Sorry for no Previews.thanks for reading​

Life is getting MORE complicated.i don't know what​

i should do...my dad wants to remarry....and guess what?​

from Laos..i don't want a new momLife is too complicated...​

what should i DO?i miss my MOM
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[mainhiathao]

awh, such a sad one, dao needs to understand that namcheo loves sarsa.

off topic----
are you serious? your dad remarrying?! gurl, i know what situation you're in, i feel sorry for you; wish you the best luck with that mother.

 

[tastesweetlove]

OMG G/N's mom paid people off to lie about Sarsa...that's horrible and evil. Poor Chalun & Sarsa, they are thrown this evil mix.


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Sorry to hear that...i hope things work out with you. I don't know what you're going through personally, but my uncle did the same thing, and I know that my cousins weren't too happy about it. Good luck.

 

[duaxiong]

Sorry!I've been absolutely BUSY && LAZY to write my FF
but i was bored and decided to make a trailer/short video
for The Promise and so i hope you enjoy READERS
thanks,i'll try to update as soon as possible<3
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G1_k-4Ctyok[/youtube]

 

[tastesweetlove]

that was such a beautiful trailer. i love the songs & the clip <3

 

[TheOnlyChia]

I like it so far.

 

[huajaikaungtur]

amazing trailer xD

 

[lakorndemon]

lol that's a nice vid awsomedua...XD
story is goin great also

 

[duaxiong]

Chapter 10

Sarsa’s Point of View:

It was true, I can never be with him no matter what.. we’re both from different worlds. I should just focus on work and ignore him for now, I’m just an assistant after all.



Namcheo’s Point of View:

I entered my office but took a glance at Sarsa before I enter, she seems to be in a good mood.



Flashback:

Chalun: Hey, I just wanted to thank you for accepting Sarsa.

Namcheo: Oh, yeah. No problem.

Chalun: so how’s your wedding arrangement coming along?

Namcheo: I told her that I don’t want to marry her.

Chalun: what? why not? I thought you loved her.

Namcheo: I, it’s just that..

Chalun: Nevermind, but I want to tell you that you no longer need to accept Sarsa as your assistance.

Namcheo: What? why?

Chalun: of course, I found an empty space for her.

Namcheo: You-did?

Chalun: Yeah, Why?

Namcheo: Well-uh- my assistance is currently on vacation and I uhh-i..

Chalun: it’s easy for you to get a new assistant of course. Come on, she’s the one that I love you know.

Namcheo: All right.

-Flashback ends.



Namcheo: Why are you still here?

Sarsa: I-I’m sorry. I..wanted to help you out since you’re going to be busy with your marriage.

Namcheo: Aren’t you supposed to be with Chalun?

Sarsa: He also thought that it was a good idea to help you..and-and-he’ll come to help out in a bit too.

Namcheo: You like him don’t you?

Sarsa: Excuse me?

Namcheo: You like Chalun don’t you?

Sarsa: Sir, that’s my personal business.

I was about to enter my office before I do anything else worse than this.

Sarsa: What about you? You like Dao don’t you?

I can’t answer this question for her, she won’t believe me either way...what do I say to her?

Sarsa: You believed what other people say before even looking for me! Just because they said that I moved you thought that I really did! I hate you! You-You-

Namcheo: I looked everywhere for you but you weren’t any where..

Sarsa: I lose hope in you..i can’t believe that you didn’t do as promised! Don’t you know how long I waited? For 5 DAMN years and this is where you are enjoying a happy love life!

Namcheo: I-Sarsa.i’m really sorry, I didn’t mean to hurt you and never intend to.

Sarsa: Sorry? Is that what you want to say to me only? Sorry?

Namcheo: I really-

Sarsa: Let’s go our own ways, I mean me as the assistant is the better way. You shouldn’t be here but preparing for your wedding.

Namcheo: I thought of going my own way too…because of how much I’m hurting you but..i just can’t! I can’t stand marrying someone I don’t love and I can’t stand watching you and Chalun together.

Chalun(Eavesdropping): Sarsa, was that why Namcheo’s mom was at your place yesterday?

Namcheo: my mom came to your house? What did she say to you?

Sarsa: STOP! Stop trying to be fake concerning!

Chalun pushes the door open and enter.

Chalun: Sarsa, calm yourself..i-I’ll talk to Namcheo for awhile.

Chalun pushes me inside my office.

Namcheo: Chalun, do you know what my mom said to Sarsa? I have to know!

Chalun: all I remember was your mom saying something about money and something about you.

Namcheo: I..How can she?! I have to go talk to her now!

Chalun: Wait a second. You forgot something. Why didn’t you tell me about you and her?

Namcheo: I-I tried to..

Chalun: You’re a bad person, now you’re going to marry Dao too.

Namcheo: I don’t love Dao.

Chalun: Then why did you agree to marry her?!

Namcheo: does it seem like I agreed?! My mom agreed with it, not me!

Chalun swings a fist towards my face.

Chalun: that’s what you deserve, you coward!

Chalun storms out.

Chalun’s Point of View:

I can’t believe Namcheo is this kind of person, why didn’t he tell me in the first place but just stood there like and idiot and not telling me that he loves Sarsa. He’s an Idiot!

*sarsa behind him*

Sarsa: Cha-Chalun.. Are you alright?

Chalun(turns back): A little..

Sarsa: I’m sorry about not telling you but I didn’t want to mention it because-

Chalun: it’s okay. I’m fine with it.. but I just want to know.. do you love me or him?

Sarsa: I-

Chalun: You can be honest with me…

Sarsa: I... I have chose my decision, I don’t want to be hurt anymore because of Namcheo.. You’re the one that has always been there for me, you’re the one that I choose.

Chalun: Really?!

Sarsa: Yes.

Narrator’s Point of View

Gun(at Sarsa/Parn’s Place:

*Gun,still debating whether or not if he should ring the doorbell*

Parn opens the door and Gun hides behind the corner.

Parn: Okay, I love you too. Okay, Bye.

Parn was about to go back inside when Gun clears his throat. Parn got freaked out and looked if there was anyone. Gun comes out.

Parn: it’s just you, you scared me!

Gun: I’m- Sorry.

Parn: Why are you here anyway? What a stalker..

Gun: I, I have something to ask you.. I want you to help me.

Parn: with what?

Gun: I don’t know but I’ve seen enough of my own brother suffering and my mom with her bossy things, I want to do something to stop this wedding..

Parn: Why don’t you just let it happen since he loves Dao so much?

Gun: He only loves your sister.

Parn: You crazy or what?

Gun: He started acting all weird again when he found out that Sarsa worked in our company.

Parn: Wait, Sarsa Works in.. you have a company??

Gun: Well, Yeah...

Parn: Whatever, I’ll just help, but explain more clearly.

Namcheo’s Point of View:

I got home and walked upstairs ignoring whatever that was happening in the living room. Dao runs after me.

Dao: What happened? Who did this to you?

Namcheo: it’s really none of your business. Stop annoying me.

Dao: Wait, Wait!

Narrator’s Point of View:

Namcheo pushes her hand away from him and Dao suddenly slips and rolls down the stairs. Namcheo goes after Dao but by the time he reached her, she was already at the end of the staircase. He starts shaking her.

Namcheo: Dao, you’re going to be all right. You’re going to be alright!

He didn’t know what to do so he carries her and immediately drives to the hospital as the others goes to the hospital too. Namcheo carries her into the emergency room.

End of Chapter!

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Yess;I’m finally UPDATING THIS! Anyways, I’m really mad because my dad already remarried to this Girl at Laos, hs’e only 22 years old,ewhhh. But yeahh.anyways, thanks for reading!!

 

[mainhiathao]

noo.. dunt left me hang on to that kind of ending. omg can't wait to read more i want to know what happen to dao, hope she's safe.

 

[huajaikaungtur]

DOODE!
Seriously! Seriously!
you left me at a cliff hanger!
you better update !
LMAO.

 

[lakorndemon]

agh...i hate cliff hangers like this dont' leave me hanging now XD

 

[duaxiong]

The Promise Chapter 11
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At Hospital

Narrator's Point of View:

Chalun and Sarsa hears the news and immediately rush to the hospital, they got there and went to the room Dao was in.

Dao wakes up and found Namcheo lying his head on her hands.

Dao: Where-where am I?

Namcheo hears her and quickly wakes up in a surprised and happy way. He hugs her tightly.

Namcheo: Are you alright? Are You?

Dao: Yes, I'm Fine but why am I here?

Namcheo: This is the hospital, you remember me right?

Sarsa sees Namcheo hugging Dao through the door.

Dao: And.. Who.. Who are you?

Namcheo: what.. what do you mean?

Flashback:

Namcheo: Doctor, is she alright?

Doctor: She was losing a lot of blood coming out from her head.

Namcheo: But is she fine Now?

Doctor: When she fell down, it hit her head quite hard and so we still need to investigate but now she's fine.

Namcheo: Thank You.

Doctor: You're welcome, if there's anything weird about her, you should report to me immediately okay?

Namcheo: Yes.

-End of Flashback

Namcheo: I'm Namcheo! I'm Namcheo, your fiancée!

Dao: I have a fiancée?

Namcheo: Yes, Yes. You have a fiancée.

Chalun lightly knocks on the door and enters the room with Sarsa.

Chalun: Can we come in?

Namcheo: Yes.

Dao takes a glance at Sarsa and starts hitting her head. Dao has a small flashback of Sarsa.

Dao: Who are you?! Get out! Get out! I don't want to see you!

Namcheo grabs Dao's hands to get her to stop. The cloth(I can't think of a word to describe this) around her head had blood all over it. Namcheo then realized that Dao's head was bleeding.

Namcheo: Call the nurse!

Chalun rushes over and pushes the nurse button. In seconds, the nurses come rushing over and notices the blood. They quickly unwind the cloth around her head and made her lie down.

Nurse: Sorry, everyone has to go out.

Namcheo: May I stay in here? I am her husband.

Nurse: I'm Sorry.

Namcheo: Please.

Nurse: Alright.

Nurse 2: the doctor is here, hurry before she loses more blood.

Sarsa and Chalun exits.

Sarsa: I feel so bad, I think she really hates me..

Chalun: I don't think that was your fault Sarsa.

Sarsa: Namcheo really loves her..

Chalun: of course he has to be responsible for that, it was his fault for that to happen.

Sarsa: I hope Dao will be fine.

Chalun: Yeah, let's go get something for both of them to eat, they must be really hungry.

Sarsa: Okay.

Namcheo's Mom: One moment! Don't think of going any where yet! You created a mess, I knew that you were going to bring bad luck like this! Don't come back again, I don't ever want to see your face!

Chalun: Auntie, why are you saying this? It wasn't her fault that this happened to Dao.

Namcheo's Mom: How dare you defend Her?! Oh ho, so you're blinded by her love now? Have lots of sweet romantic moments with this slut until disaster comes then!

Chalun's Mom: Why are you with her?

Chalun: Mae, you don't understand!

Sarsa: Please excuse me.

Chalun: Wait! Wait!

Sarsa enters the elevator with tears. Chalun was too late and didn't catch up with her. She gets into the taxi and orders for him to take her home.

Sarsa's point of view:

Is it really my fault? Am I really a bad luck person? Am I really a slut? This is what I get...all because of the promise.. I hate myself for promising him, I hate his fake love, his fake everything! I'm too tired of everything here, I'll just leave today without telling anyone.

Narrator's Point of View:

Sarsa packs her belongings and was ready to go, she was going to catch the last bus for the day. As she exits her house, Chalun comes running towards her. She turned away when she saw him, tears quickly filled her eyes again.

Chalun: You're just here. I was looking everywhere for you!

Sarsa didn't speak a word and continued her way.

Chalun: Why are you mad at me? I Haven't done anything wrong to you…

Sarsa: You haven't done anything- but- but.. I'm not staying here anymore, I'll go to a place that is more welcoming and better than this place.

Chalun: I'm really sorry for letting them say those words to you.

Sarsa: I don't care but right here, it hurts right here(she puts her hand onto her chest and tries to hold back her tears). Don't come any closer than this and please give this to Namcheo, tell him that it's my gift for his wedding and I'm sorry for not attending.

Chalun takes the envelope and watches Sarsa get in the taxi. He didn't even get to speak a word to her.

Chalun(puts a hand to his chest): This hurts too...

Sarsa(in taxi): To the bus station please.

(Parn getting to Sarsa's Place):

Parn: wah, today was so fun but I didn't know that it would be this hot!

"Good thing I have a key." she thought. Parn opens the door and finds the house very empty. She starts calling out Sarsa's name and found a letter on the desk. She picks it up and reads it.


I'm sorry, I just got fired from my job. I'll be leaving first, please enjoy your stay and don't be angry at me. Spend time with Gun and don't be mad;]
- Sarsa Chanida<3

Parn: what the hell is this? Have fun with Gun??

(Namcheo at Hospital):

Namcheo(holding onto Dao's hands): Dao, Dao.. Please be alright.. please be alright..

Dao slowly opens her eyes and looks around.

Namcheo: I'm so glad you're awake again Dao!

Dao: Namcheo?

Namcheo: Yes, You remember me now?

Dao: Why wouldn't I remember you?

Namcheo: I'm sorry, it was my fault for making this happen to you. I'll absolutely take responsibility. Will you marry me?

Dao: Yes, I'll marry you.

Namcheo: thank you for giving me an opportunity to take care of you.

Dao: You're welcome.. how long will I stay in the hospital?

Namcheo: As soon as you're fully recovered.

Dao: I'm fully recovered, I remember you, I remember mom, I remember Auntie. I remember everything.

Namcheo: We'll have to wait until the Doctor checks you out okay?

Dao(smiling): Okay

Chalun enters the room once again.

Chalun: How are you feeling Dao?

Dao: Hey Chalun. I'm doing alright. Are you here to visit me?

Chalun: No, I'm here to send something to Namcheo.

Dao: Oh.

Chalun walks over to Namcheo and hands him the letter.

Chalun: From Sarsa, before she was going to leave.

Chalun walks out, Namcheo stands up to go ask him where Sarsa was.

Namcheo: Wait, Chalun! Where is Sar-

Dao(holding her head): Owh! My head! It's hurting so much!

Namcheo went back and quickly hugs Dao.

Namcheo: Are you alright?

Dao: My head really hurts!

Namcheo: I'll call the nurse right now.

Dao: No, Don't. My..My head doesn't hurt that much anymore now.

Namcheo: Are you sure?

Dao: Yes, Don't leave me again.

Namcheo: Okay, I'm sorry.

Dao(smiles wickedly): Thank You.

Namcheo glances at the Envelope.

(Sarsa Arriving Home, 8 P.M.):

Sarsa: Mom, mom, dad! I'm home!

There was no sound.

Sarsa(worried): Mom?

S Mom: Sarsa? Is that you?

Sarsa: Yes, what are you guys doing in the dark?

S Mom: The electricity went off, your father and I are having trouble with fixing it.

Sarsa: Don't worry, I'll go check it out alright?

S Mom: Yes Please.

Sarsa goes out and checks on the electricity system behind the house. She found the moon really pretty tonight, she doesn't know why but she is picturing Namcheo right now. On the other hand, Namcheo is also looking at the Full Moon, he pictures Sarsa too.

End of Chapter.

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Sorry for leaving you guys in a cliff hanger last chapter!i know it does sucks.
So,so.Things are getting worse here,i'm not sure about the ending now,tehe.i'm thinking about a miserable ending;];]
Thanks for reading and for the comments<3
-duaxiong//awesomedua

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[huajaikaungtur]

Aww, they're picturing each other.
Although, i pity Namcheo since Dao lost her memory.
i kinda pity Dao, too.
Awwwww :/

 

[WtfAdora]

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[duaxiong]

Chapter 12

Sarsa's Point of View:

The Next Day

Sarsa:Mom, I need to go somewhere, i'll be back soon.

S. Mom: Wait!Have some breakfast first!

I left before mom said more things. I've decided what to do for the day already. Should I go there or not? No, I shouldn't...but..the past is the past, just let it go.

*Phone Ringing

Sarsa:Hello?

Parn:I have to ask you a quick questin.

Sarsa: what?

Parn: Do you still have feelings for Namcheo?

Sarsa: ..Psh-of course not!

Parn: Oh..Okay..

Sarsa: are you and Gun together?

Parn: He's right here but we're not “together.”

Sarsa: Okay, if you're so sure.

Parn: Just to let you know, be at your so called “Secret Place” because i'll see you there in a bit.

*Parn hangs up on Sarsa.

Sarsa: Geez, why is Parn acting so odd?

Namcheo's Point of View:

Dao: I'm so glad to be out of the hospital!

Namcheo: So am I, Dao..I'll send you home,i have to rest for the day.

Dao: Okay, I dont want you to have a headache because of me.

Namcheo: Thanks for understanding.

Narrator's Point of View:

All this time, Namcheo hasn't open the letter yet although he couldn't resist to not open it. After he drops off Dao, he smiles as he thinks of how smooth the plan was going to go. Sarsa finally got to the “Secret Place,” it was autumn and the leaves were slowly flowing down beautifully. She sat on the bench relaxing and waiting patiently for Parn. It's been awhile since she's been here again. She closed her eyes and breathe the air in and out around her. She loved it here,it's just too perfect, the scenery is so perfect too. She was growing impatient on waiting for Parn so she stood up, ready to take off. She slowly walk and kept looking back wondering when she'll come again, just then she bumps onto somebody's shoulder. She looked up ready to apologize but when she saw that it was Namcheo, she walks away from him. He grabs her hand.

Namcheo: Sorry, did you wait long for me?

Sarsa: I wasn't waiting for you.

Namcheo: Sarsa, i'm sorry for all my dumb mistakes. I'm sorry for not keeping my promise for you..

Sarsa: What Promise? Oh- that? It's just a past memory of childhood, it's worthless, who would actually believe that?

Namcheo: So you're telling me that you forgot about-

Sarsa: Yes,i forgot everything that happened, it's the truth. Why would a person like me care about a stupid promise?

Namcheo didn't believe what he just heard.

Namcheo: I understand, i'll accept your final decision..I'm just dumb enough to come here expecting to hear you say,”I love you.”I just wanted to be beside you again and I just want you to know that I still love you.

Sarsa: You think it's going to be that easy? You think that I will just easily believe your lies?

Sarsa couldn't take it anymore, she wasn't going to let her tears flow for him again, she wasn't going to let herself get hurt because of him. She walks away going further and further.

*Days Passed by quickly and the wedding day was coming closer. Namcheo decided to let go of Sarsa in order to respect her decision. He kept telling himslef that she wasn't real.

Chalun: Is Sarsa there?

Parn: Yeah.

Chalun: I need to talk to her.

Parn: One Moment.

It took Parn awhile for her to return with Sarsa.

Sarsa: Is something wrong?

Chalun: I just need a talk.

Sarsa: Sure.

As they started walking, Chalun starts the conversation.

Chalun: Do you still love Namcheo:

Sarsa: Why is everyone asking me this?

Chalun: I just want the truth please..if you love him just say it straight out, I dont want you to be hurt.

Sarsa: I...Yes..i love him..But I can't be with him..I'd do anything to be with him..

Chalun: I'll give you a chance to be with him and love him again then..

Sarsa: What are you saying?

Namcheo comes from behind her, wrapping his arms around her waist. Sarsa turns around to see Namcheo and pushes him away.

Sarsa: Why? Why are you here?

Namcheo: Listen. Sarsa, I love you. I do a lot and I really cant accept the fact of us not being together..i'm selfish..and it's because of love..it's because of my promise that I planted here.

Sarsa: But you never did what you promised so how does Love exist?

Namcheo: I'll do anything to make-up for it Sarsa..

Sarsa: And how will I believe you this time?

Namcheo: Just trust me, trust me..

Sarsa: Both of you set me up, this is all your plan!

Namcheo: because I really need to confess to you! The person that I want to marry tomorrow is you, not Dao!

Sarsa: I..i really don't know what to say..

Namcheo: I'll give you a chance...if you really love me, you will do anything to stop my wedding with Dao tomorrow. I believe that you will...I'll leave now..

Namcheo leaves with Chalun.

End of Chapter^^

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*Author's Note:​

Yes,i understand..it's getting really boring,please endure with me until the end.​

im currently having a hard time with this story..In the beginning,it's so easy and it gets so complicated!​

So,i will do my best and this FF is coming to an end in the next 2 chapters?So be readyy.​

thanks for reading^^
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[huajaikaungtur]

Awww, poor Sarsa, she's hurt.
I pity Namcheo, he really loves her !
It was so sad when Sarsa just walked away.
YES ! Sarsa ! Stop the wedding ! Be a wedding crasher !!
Take your time, Dua. This isn't boring, it's an understanding part between the two, I like that.

 

[duaxiong]

Chapter 13​

Narrator's Point of View:
The day of the wedding came, Sarsa decided not to go even if it was her last chance. She's showed,admit,and proved to him enough that she loves him, she will not ruin anyone's life. He will prove to her that he loves her, today is the day. Knowing that everything was his stupid fault, everything would be figured out by today. Namcheo puts on his suit while everyone is busy.

*Ring,Ring,Ring,Ring.
Sarsa: Yeah?
Chalun: Are you coming to his wedding?
Sarsa: No,for what?
Chalun: What, why? Oh,you dont have to do anything,just stand around.
Sarsa:tsh,come so i can get my heart broken into pieces?
Chalun:No..I-
Sarsa: okay, whatever- i'll come.
*She quickly hangs up.
Everytime someone brings up his wedding,her heart always beats faster,what will happen after this?
Sarsaarn, do you want to come along?
Parn: No thank you.
Sarsa: It's too far and i dont want to be alone.
Parn: Too bad,i dont wanna see Gun.
Sarsa: Why are you avoiding him?
Parn: Im not,i just..feel awkward around him.
*doorbell rings,Sarsa opens it.
Chalun: Hi,,
Sarsa: Why are you here?
Chalun: I'm going to be your Fairy Godfather.
Sarsa: What? Me?
Chalun grabs her hands and drives straight to the mall.He orders the stylists to makeover Sarsa. Sarsa didn't even know what was happening but she did as obstructed. After finishing up with a touch of lip-gloss on her lips,she stands up.
Sarsa: This make-up is too heavy and..the dress is too showing.
She had on a white dress,short to a little above her knees. The sparkly and beautiful designs made her even more shiny.Her eyes were shimmering with beautiful white eye shadows.
Chalun:You look perfect.
Sarsa:Are you sure?
Chalun:Yes,let's leave before we're late.
They both arrive at Namcheo's House. Namcheo's parents were greeting guests.
Mrs Paisarn: Good Afternoon,Thanks for attending my son's wedding.
Chalun and Sarsa enters together, she had her elbows wrapped with Chalun's.
Mrs.Paisarn:Hello Chalun.Hopefuly,someone won't make trouble here today.
She glances at Sarsa.
Chalun: Aunt, We'll go in first.
Mrs.Paisarn: As you please.
Chalun calls Namcheo.
Namcheo:Yea,what's up dude?
Chalun: Where are you at?
Namcheo: Up Here,
Namcheo puts his hands up as Sarsa and Chalun looks up where the bedroom window is.
Chalun: Why aren't you down here but up there?
Namcheo: Coming right now,dont move anywhere.
Chalun: Okay.
They hang up and Namcheo hurries downstairs.
Namcheo: This is all going to end now....
He sees Sarsa with Chalun, he walks over to them but his eyes were only looking at Sarsa.
Namcheo: Sarsa, you look beautiful.
Sarsa backs up from him.
Sarsa: I'm only here to attend, i won't do anything that will-
Namcheo grabs her in for a kiss,a forceful kiss to say,he hasn't felt this way for a long time,he'll just be selfish and stubborn because of this woman. Cameras clicked and clicked but Namcheo doesn't care,all he cares is that on his wedding,he's kissing the right one.Dao stands upstairs staring at them,tears trickles down her face. Everyone gasps in shock seeing what Namcheo was doing. Namcheo finally draws away from Sarsa but he held onto her hand.
Namcheo: Everyone, to say the truth, the woman i want to spend my life forever is Sarsa. Sorry for wasting your time but everything ends here, thank you for coming.
Namcheo drags Sarsa into his car and pushes her inside the passenger side, Sarsa opens the door to get out but Namcheo holds it.
Namcheo: I'm telling you this now, if you get out right now, you'll surely regret.
Sarsa: I dont care, i dont want to be with you alone.
Namcheo: Too Bad.
He closes the car door and rushes to the driver's seat. He autmatically locks the door so even the inside's lock won't open but only he can unlock it.
Sarsa: Where are you taking me?!
Namcheo: Oh, We just married,so i'm taking us on a honeymoon.
Sarsa: What,what do you mean?
Sarsa looks at her hand and a ring was inserted on her finger already.
Sarsa: Wait..when..when did you put this on already?
Namcheo: When we were making out.You were probably too into it so you didn't realize that i inserted it in your fingers.
Sarsa: What,What?!
Namcheo: Please have a good sleep my princess, it's going to be a long ride until we reach our destination.
Sarsa: It's more like kidnapping to me.
Namcheo smiles.
End of Chapter;];]

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Thanks for reading^^Anyhow,,i'm sorry if it's still boring.
I just worte whatever popped up in my head so please enjoy reading<3<3
-duaxiong​

 

[adoraxFTW]

The kiss/kidnapping scene was SO cute!
Lol, thanks for the update! Love it so far.

 

[huajaikaungtur]

I love Chalun He's so niceee x)
Oh, hot kiss scene. Forceful, ehh? I love the word choice there, aha. I can imagine it happening xDDDD
"When we were making out" LMAO. I gotta say, I LOOOVR Namcheo. Sarsa's so confused about how the ring got on her finger, ahaha.
Can't waittttt. Kidnapping = Honeymoon, LOl.
Love it, Dua. Keep more coming ^^