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kulyia

RUK
Chapter 10: Slowly Revealing

“Tola, Virote already left? ”

“Not yet.”

“What??? He’s still here??”

“Yes, It’s raining too hard. Khun Loob told virote to sleep over. Or else Khun Loob will not be able to ease letting virote drive in the rain.”

“Then where is he?”

“Family room.”

Vanida peeks in only to see Ahdit and Mali chattering away. (In her low tone) “Maybe I should go join them.”

“I think you should.” Vanida turns around only to see Virote grinning, again.

“You go first.”

(Joyfully) “I’ll go when you go miss vanida.”

“How come your so happy?”

“Because . . . I get to spend the night here.”

“Only?” Vanida pauses, and looks at virotes eyes. “Do you know when you smile, your eyes smile too?”

“What?”

Before vanida can answer, Mali approaches the two. “I wonder what you two are talking about . . . Forget that I ask that question, dinner is ready.”






“I want to thank you for letting me stay here kiet. Even though your mother don’t approve.” Adirake looks at kiets mum, she walks away.

“It’s fine with me. As long as you can adjust to my mother.”

“Everything is fine.”

“Adirake. What are your plans for the future huh?”

Adirake puts his elbows onto his legs leaning over. He looks to kiet and answers him sounding confident. “I’m thinking about working for vanida. If not, I will force her.”

Kiets eyebrow rises. “You’re going to rely on it?”

“Of course . . . She is my woman. Every woman should obey her husband. Isn’t that right?”

Kiet answers adirake by raising his eyebrows and looking away.




Suttikul Mansion

“Virote, it’s been a while since you’ve been here at Dome Torng. What change your mind?”

“Mali, You still don’t know?” He looks to Vanida. Innocently, she looks up seeing virotes smiling image. She rolls her eyes as she looks away.

Ahdit coughs purposely. “Virote, feel free around Dome Torng.”

“Don’t worry, I will.” Virote looks at Kulap who sat left to him. “Kulap, It’s been a while since I’ve seen you. You’ve aged wonderfully.”

Kulap giggles shyly. “Ohwy, P’Vee.” She smacks virote on his shoulder pushing him away. His smile disappears. “Woah. She is strong.” He thought to himself.

Khun Ahdit couldn’t take it anymore. He walks away with an empty stomach.

“Did I say something wrong?” Ask Virote trying to sound innocent.

“No it’s not that. Don’t worry, He’s been like that.” Vanida answers. “I will be back.” She stands from the table to follow him.


Balcony

“That was very rude of you Khun Ahdit! A old friend of yours is here and yet you left without saying any . . .”

He turns around and interrupts her. “You are going to tell me what to do??? This is my home and my rules and my decisions!!!”

She takes a step closer. “Like you’ve said . . . Whatever bothers your guest, bothers you too. Or is it that you forgot???!”

“I don’t need you to remind me Vanida!”

“But it is not me reminding you! It should Already be in your head Khun Ahdit!”

“Ohhhh. Is it that you love to argue? You always turn an conversation into an argument!” She was left speechless as he goes on defending himself not letting her talk at all. “Every single time I see someone talking to you, it always turns nasty. Is this one of your plans when you came here?”

(Confuse and Angrily) “What????”

“Don’t try to act like you don’t know, Vanida! I bet when you came here, you’ve already decided on what to do and how you are going to do it!”

“I did Not!!!! Khun Ahdit!!! You can’t blame me for something you are doing!”

He stops and walks over to her. “I have plans up my sleeves??” He asks her.

“You don’t need to ask me that, Ask yourself! Ever since I came here, yes life’s been much better. But back at home I never had to argue with anyone at all! But since I came here all I have to do is argue with you!! There is never a day where there are no arguments!!!”

(His normal tone) “You are an aggressive lady.” Her angry face went blank. “It is late, go to sleep.” Ahdit walks into the hallway.

She yells back. “We are not Finish!!!”





Chapordaporns Residents

Ratana holds vanida in her arm and cradle her like a baby. “Vanida, I will be going to Dome Torng soon. Hopefully I don’t have to baby-sit you, do I?”

“Maae . . . If Aroon is here, I wont have any issues. And . . . I want a couple new servants.”

“Why is that? Aroon is not enough?”

“It’s not that. I’ve been having bad dreams lately and since you won’t be home, I thought maybe with more servants I will feel safer.”

“Ohh. That is fine. Whatever makes you happy.”

“Then I want him dead.” She thought to herself. “Maae, hopefully you don’t mind.”



Suttikul Mansion
“This is your room Khun Vee. If there is anything on your mind, please tell me.”

“Everything is good. Thank you Tola. You can leave . . . Wait! Umm, Where is miss vanida sleeping?”

“Sorry, but Khun Ahdit told me not to tell you.” Tola walks towards the stairs.

“Ahdit . . . Your smarter than I thought you were.” Virote takes a deep breathe before entering his room.




Vanidas beroom
“Ohy!! I’m hungry. Damn you Ahdit. Because of you I didn’t get to eat.” Vanida reach to pick up the clock on her desk. “12:27 . . . Is it too late?? Oh forget it, I’m going to get something to eat.” By now, vanida is used to the dark hallways. She crept through the stairs into the kitchen. She turns on the light and sees someone sneaking in the fridge. (Demandingly) “Who are you!?? Turn around so I can see your face!” She positions the flashlight like a knife preparing to stab someone.

Ahdit turns around with a bowl in his hand. “What?”

“Khun Ahdit! It is late, why are you still up?”

“I should be asking you that question.” He turns back into the fridge.

Vanida walks behind him. She smiles. “Are you hungry?”

Slowly he turns his face. “What do you think?” He pauses. “A woman like you walking alone, aren’t you afraid?”

“Like I’ve said before, there’s nothing to be afraid of in this house.” She folds her arms leaning onto the side of the fridge.

“Oh right, all you need to be afraid of is me.”

She giggles. “But you’re in here Khun Ahdit.”

He straightens himself. “But we’re in the same room now.”

Vanida changes the subject. “I am hungry. Have you found something to eat yet?”

He smiles. “Here.”

“Give it to me, I will go warm it up.”

“I already did.”

“Then I will go get the plates.”

They both sat across from one another. Khun Ahdit thought of what he should say next. But before he did, vanida was already finished. “You are full?” He asks.

“Yes. I don’t eat slow like you.” She smiles. “But don’t worry, I will wait here until you are finish and wash your plate for you.”

“I don’t want your help.”

“Ohw! As you wish.” Vanida reenters the kitchen with a grin. “Since you don’t need my help, you can clean up your own mess. Good night.”



On her way to her room she heard light footsteps following her. She wanted to turn back and see, but was reminded that it was probably Khun Ahdit going to his room. Instead, she kept walking. The more she walks the faster her steps became. Finally she reaches her room. She closes her eyes while closing the door. “His room is that way; why did he come over here?? phyco.”


It was daytime, from a far view, vanida walks down the stairs and saw a women getting beaten up by Phueng. Vanida ran to stop the incident but nothing happen. “Phueng! Can’t you hear me I said STOP!” Vanida yanks onto phuengs hand only to go through it. Vanida looks at her hands in disbelief. She tried to pull Phueng off the other girl but still had no luck. “Phueng!! ARE YOU DEATH??!?!” Her eyes start to water. “What happened??? Why is this happening??” Tears stream down her cheeks. “No this can’t be, I can’t be dead . . . NOOO!” Vanida falls to the ground like broken glasses weeping and begging God for it not to be true. The name Sumalee was heard, instantly making vanida stop. She looks at the conflict. She notices that Phueng looks much younger. Vanida quickly stand onto her feet and look around. Decorations in the house were different and more outdated. Finally she took a look at the girl who was getting beaten by phueng. She looks familiar. Vanidas mouth drop open, she took a step closer and got on her knees. “Maae.”

-Tomorrow
 

fun

Expired Sarnie
Vanida died :eek:

Anyways Kulyia, I just finished Dome Tong... lol I didn't remember Ahdit to be such an ass... but secretively he is an angel. But still I just wished it wasn't Tua. I have nothing against him tho.
 

kulyia

RUK
Chapter 11: As Planned
Writer Speaks:
Wow i apologize for not updating. Ive been lagging since school is behind the corner. YIKES. i totally forgot how to do math. TY youtube!!!
-Kulyia

Vanida watch in horror as Phueng beats her mum up. “GET OUT! These are words from your father! If you consider Dome Torng as high class, you will leave and never show you face again! All your belongings will be burnt and toss away. Leave before I have you thrown out." Four maids walk into the room and stood next to phueng. Vanida notice a little girl hiding behind the sofa in the family room. Vanida decides to stand still and watch.

Sumalee swallows hard before defending herself. “PHUENG! You’re a slave my mother help raise, and yet you dare raise your voice at me?” Sumalee was able to stand on her own and challenge Phueng. “Don’t think, that just because you are working for my step mum, she will protect you forever! Pure evil people like the two of you will ROT TO HELL!!” Her voice echoes through the house scaring the five maids.

“You dare curse me???!” Phueng points her shaking fingers to sumalee and looks at the maids. “Throw her out!”


From aside Vanida watches her mother being carried out to the front. She screams on the top of her lungs for them to stop. All of sudden she felt someone touch her shoulders and awoken. She took a big gasp of air as she opens her eyes.

“Vanida!” yelled virote. Virote took vanida into his arms and held her tight. “It’s okay, it’s just a bad dream.”

Ahdit runs through her door and saw them on her bed. He thinks wrong and approaches the two. He pulls Vee by his collar and punches him knocking him down.

(Confused) “What are you doing??!” Vee wipes his mouth with his sleeve.

“Ahdit!” He turns around when he heard his name.

He laughs out loud and places his hands onto his hip. He sighs. “I should have known. I should have known YOU PLANNED ALL THIS!” Ahdit points his finger to her.

Vanida looks down to the floor. “Please don’t point at me. I am really tire, I want to go back to sleep.”

“Why? OHHH… Is it that you want me to leave the two of you alone? I apologize that I burst in interrupting the two of you. Next time, remember to close the door.” He walks away.

“Ahdit!” Everything stood still. Her voice trembles as she begs for sympathy. “I am begging you . . . Please don’t ever accuse me of doing such things ever again! If my company here is not welcome, then I will take my leave!”

Mali enters the room shock to see the guys in her room. She fixes her robe before walking in. “What in the world are you two doing here???” She notices vanida and walks over to her. “I think its better for the two of you to leave . . . Now!” Both the guys walk out. Ahdit watches Vee walk back to his room.


“Can you sleep with me tonight?”

“Sure. Do you want to tell me something?”

“When I am ready, Mali you’ll be the first to know.”







Waiting outside patiently of the Chapordaporns gate was Adirake. He sees a car coming and looks at the back seat. He smiles. “Vanida.” Aroon stops the car, vanida walks out.

“What do you want?” He stares at Aroon. Vanida almost forgot. “Aroon, drive the car in.”

“Smart.”

“If you don’t have anything important to say, I will go inside.” She takes a step.

“Wait! I over heard your maids earlier saying you are looking for a new servant?” He smiles. “There’s one standing right here.”

“No way! I don’t want you to work for me!”

“Then do you want me to tell them who your husband is?”

She sighs. “You bastard!!” She thinks for a moment before saying what he wants to hear. “Only until my mother gets back.” He smiles and follows vanida inside.




Aroon spoke in a serious tone as he asks for answers. “Are you sure you want him to work for you?? Is it that you were forced to???”

“Aroon I would appreciate it, if you could understand my needs.”

“Your needs?”

She looks away in embarrassment. “Yes,” said vanida finally. “I want you to take a vacation Aroon. When my mother comes back, you will continue your work as usual.”

Aroon groan. “As you wish.”

“You can leave now.”

Before aroon walk out of the room, he studies Adirake for a moment then left. Adirake jumps onto the sofa his shoulder leaning onto vanidas. “My love, I want something only you can give me. Would you give it to me?”

She gives a dirty face. “What?”

“You know . . . I want it now.” She rolls her eyes before standing. Vanida walk towards her bedroom followed by Adirake, smiling.




Suttikul Mansion

“Khoon Dtaa . . . Probably I will go back home.”

“Why? Why are you leaving so soon? Did a year already pass by?? Correct me if im wrong, but you've only been for a month!”

“No. I . . . I miss my mother.”

Mali smiles. “Well you don’t have to worry anymore vanida. Because, your mother will arrive here later today.”

“What??”

“I also reacted just like you when I found out. It was sudden she said. She said she misses you a lot, and wants to spend time with you.”

“Really?”

“Yup. When your mother arrives, the two of you will talk it out.” Vanida was left speechless.

“I will go get some fresh air . . . Please excuse me” Vanida walks out to the open window and looks at the horses. Her chin rested on her hands. Slowly she leans on the rail. “How long will it be until I return back home?”

“You really want to go back home?” Vanida turns around to see Ahdit. She rolls her eyes.

“I apologize if my words were a bit harsh.”

“Khun Ahdit. Next time, think before you act.” She looks at ahdit suspiciously. “Why aren’t you talking?”

“I’m thinking.”

“You are up for it?”

“I figure if I don’t change the way I speak, I will drive all my guest out of Dome Torng.”

Vanida smiles. “That’s a good change.” Vanida thought for a moment.

“Virote already left if that’s what is in your mind.” Ahdit looks out the window. “How about now?”

“What?”

“How about I teach you horse riding?”

“But I don’t have the appropriate clothes.”

Mali walks up behind her. “You can wear mine. Its been a while since I’ve gone horse riding. If the two of you go, be careful. Because it is easily to find and get lost out there.” Mali grabs vanidas hand. “Lets go before your mother arrives.”



Malis Room

“Just as I thought. It fits you perfectly vanida.”

“Yes it does.” She looks in the mirror smiling. “I’ve never thought it would be this comfortable.”

Mali frowns. “You’ve never gone horse riding?”

Vanida smiles. “Nope.” Her smile disappears. “Oh it was . . . I have but we don’t have it in town.”

“Oh. That’s true. Just remember not to get carried away and go off on your own.”

A knock came at the door; vanida walks over to open it. Ahdit stood at the doorway. “Are you ready to go?”

“Certainly.”

“Then follow me.” Ahdit walks away. Vanida looks back to Mali. “Go on, have fun.” Mali reassures her. Vanida walks out of the room and follow ahdit to the back.

-Update tomorrow
 

fun

Expired Sarnie
really???? why?? lol.. oh well. we all have different opinions. did you atleast like it though?
When I was younger, I didn't like it. But after reading your fan fiction, I just went out to rent it since I can't seem to find it on YT. I did like the lakorn, just wished they showed more of Nampeung's feelings towards him. It was more coming from Tua. And I cried when they finally discovered the second grandmother's body. To be locked up there until death is just so sad...

I guess a lot of the inspiration to write this fanfiction comes from Dome Tong. When Ahdit and Vanida are together it brings back flash back on Dome Tong.
 

kulyia

RUK
Chapter 12: Part 1: The past may be just the past

“P’Loob?” Kulap walks over quickly and wrap her arm around his. “Are you going to go horse riding?” She said excitedly.

“Yes. Stay home, I will be back later.”

Ahdit tries to get away but kulap wouldn’t budge. “Can I go too?? Can I P’Loob??”

“Uhh . . .” He looks up the stairs and sees vanida walking down. Kulap looks and sees what her brother was looking at. She pulls him backing distracting him.

“P’Loobbbb. Let me go too. Okay?” She did her puppy eyes. He couldn’t resist her begging him. He nods his head.

“Kulap.” Vanida smiles. “Are you coming with us?”

“Yes I am!” She turns to Ahdit and lowers her voice. “You guys wait here for me, so I can go change. Don’t leave without me okay?” Kulap ran up the stairs.

“Don’t mind her. She likes to act like a kid. You’ll get use to it the longer you stay. Oh, I hear your mother will arrive later today. Is that right?”

“Yes it is.”

“What’s the matter? You don’t want to leave yet?” She ignores his questions and acts as if they were never asked. “Suit yourself.”




Kiets Home

“When did Vanida move?”

“What?” His mum hands an envelope to him.

“But it says her name on the envelope, it also stat that it came out of town.” Her finger points to the address.

“Oh . . . That’s Tasanee, living as vanida over at her khoon dtas place.”

“Sneaky woman. By the way, where did Adirake go? Did he go to cause more trouble? You should have never brought him home son.”

He sighs. “He is staying at Vanidas place.”

“Don’t tell me you guys are sharing her. It’s what I just said wasn’t it? See I told you so, the Sirakits are nothing but a total disgrace!” Kiet rolls his eyes. His mums sees then smirk. “Is it that you are tired of my company? Do you want me to be gone like their mother? If I leave I know you will be a happy camper! What a waste to raise you up! If I’ve known you would be this evil I would have never raised you!”

“If I’ve known you were this rude and demanding I would have left with phaw!

“I am your mother, you dare look down on me??!”

“You leave me no choice.”

“Good. Let me die like vanidas mother and we’ll see how painful it is without me! How painful it is to be an orphan!” His mother rose from her chair.

Kiets voice trembles as he expresses his heart out towards his mother. “You’ve always seen yourself first before others.” Sunlight passes through the open window casting dark shadows under her eyes. Her eyes were fill with angry tears. “Even if phaw, you left him because you thought you can do better. In this world nobody can ever be good enough for you maae, not even me. When will you see that I too have feelings and desires? If you don’t change now, in your life you will regret.” While he spoke he blinks back the tears. His mum walks into her room quietly but loud enough so he can hear. Kiet closes his eyes, pushing out his tears leaving big shinny trials behind. “You will never change.”

His mum slowly sat on the edge of her bed weeping quietly so her precious son wouldn’t hear in the other room. She knows she did wrong, and knew every word that he had spoke was true.



Kiet bent down to pick the envelope and stick it in his jacket pocket. He wipes away his tears with his sleeve before putting on his leather cap. He looks out the window then hurried into his car.


Chapordaporn Residents

“You have a letter.”

(Excitedly) “My sister wrote it correct?”

Kiet smiles. “Who else?”

Adirake rip open the side and carefully open it.

P’Adi. I am doing great. Everyone here has been treating me with respect. I miss home every once in a while including you. Hopefully you are doing well yourself. At the moment where are you staying? If you’re out of money, please write to tell me. Talking about money, I will try to send some whenever I write to you. Please try to stay out of trouble Adi. My friends here are Mali and Tola. They keep me company, which is probably why I don’t miss home much. Vanida, how is she? Does she still come and visit? There was a party here recently; where I met a lot of educated people. Most are cocky, but thanks to Mali and Virote, I now know not all are. While my time here, I’ve been getting some really weird dreams. Well, more like flashback of mum. But, it’s probably because I miss home only. Right now I miss you a lot. My trip here will last one full year, though I doubt I will stay that long. After one full year, everything will go back to normal. Vanida will no more bother us P’Adi. Everything has its reasons of why it occurs, sooner or later, it will reveal it self. Hopefully I will find out what is the cause of those dreams before I come back. Until next time, take care of yourself.

-Vanida Chapordaporn




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kulyia

RUK
Chapter 12: Part 2: But it doesn't mean you cant do something about it


“Welcome back Ratana.” Phueng bows as her boss walks out of the car. Bow looks over and wonders why the heck did she do that for.

“I miss Dome Torng dearly. I will stay until there is enough memory to memorize at home.” Ratane smiles evilly to Phueng. Ratana stops smiling and turns on her fierce side. “Pick up my bag! Do you know it is from France? Staying on the floor too long will surely damage the fabric!” She made her way into the family room where she saw her younger sister Mali knitting. “Mali . . . You haven’t changed one bit. Where is my father?”

With no face reaction, Mali slowly set down her stick. “Up in his room like always. Welcome back, Ratana.” Phueng and Bow got down on their knees next to Ratana who was standing with her arms folded. Mali looks at phueng and notice she has turn on her bitchy side once again. Mali looks away already being annoyed.

“I will go pay him a visit. Phueng, go and set my stuff in my daughters room. No need to find me another room, I will share beds with my daughter while my time here.”
Phueng was interested in what her boss had just said. “Sharing rooms with her fake low class daughter. This I’ve got to see.” Phueng said to herself. “Bow! You heard her, go!” She startles Bow forcing her to carry the entire luggage up to vanidas room. Bow mumbles as she walks up the stairs.




The back of Suttikul Mansion

“Vanida, you did good for your first time. Maybe tomorrow, we can go again?” Ahdit takes off his leather gloves.

Vanida spoke as she takes off her helmet. “That sounds nice. I would like that too.” Kulap hears their conversation and runs over.

She grabs her brothers’ arm and held on tight. “P’Loob, it is getting late. Lets go inside before it gets darker.”

“Sure.” Ahdit and kulap leads the way in. Follow by vanida.

She studies their gestures. “These two siblings are so weird compare to others. Don’t worry kulap, I don’t have any intention to steal your brother at all.”




Mali walks over to vanida as she enters the family room. “You mum is here. But she is in khoon dtaas room. Go on and welcome her arrival.”

“You look tire. Are you okay?”

“You shouldn’t worry about me. Go and worry about your mother. Go on.” Mali walks towards the kitchen.

Vanida lifts her feet up as she went up the stairs. She walks pass khoon yaays room; she felt the chills and hurried in.



“Precious! Oh how I longer to hold you in my arms again!” Ratana ran up to hold vanida. She felt awkward but went along.

“Maae . . .” She forces a smile.

Ratana pats a kiss on vanidas forehead. “My beautiful child! Come, Lets go see your grandfather.” Ratana squeezes vanidas hand as she walks towards dtaa.

“Phaaw. Are you proud of your grand-daughter?”

“Of course. I’m proud of all my children.”

Ratana let out a giggle facing vanida. Vanida forces another smile. “Yes. It’s amazing how vanida looks exactly like Sumalee.”

(Curously) “What?”

“Vanida, you don’t know anything. Don’t interrupt the elders!” Ratana turns to Dtaa giving him a friendly smile. “Phaaw, how is your condition?”

“It’s been better since vanida arrive. I was actually expecting a rude, spoil little girl. But I thought wrong.” (Smiles)

Ratana throws vanidas hand onto the floor and clenches her fist back and fourth. Ratana knew he was describing her real daughter who was back at home. She tries to hide her anger. “Phaaw, it is dinner time already, why they haven’t brought your food up yet. Let me and get them. Stay with khoon dtaa, I will send a servant then you can come down. Okay?”

“Yes.” Ratana closes the door. Vanida quickly moves closer to khoon dtaa. “Khoon dtaa! You must tell me who this Sumalee is. Why do I always hear her name? Who is she??”

“Probably your mum hasn’t told you yet since it’s old news. It’s so old news, I’m not even sure if I should mention it.”

“But I want to hear it. It doesn’t matter how long ago it was, as long as it is in my family khoon dtaa.”

He gives a weak smile. “For you, I will . . . I was a terrible father to every one of my children. Especially to Sumalee and her mother. After they left, I finally got my act straight and became a better father for Mali. At least, that is what I think.” He smiles to vanida. “But I will talk a lot sweetie. Are you sure you want to continue on?”

“It doesn’t matter. As long as it is the truth.”

Khoon Dtaa clears his throat before continuing on. “I was married to Mali and Sumalees mother for 44 years. The first time I saw her, I actually felt a heart beat skip.” Khoon Dtaa smiles while reminiscing of the past, as if, it was that very moment. “After 16 years of marriage, I’ve gotten bored and wanted to try something new though I still love their mum dearly. So I marry Khoon yaay from the countryside, thinking life would be better if I had two of each. She came from a low background, while Sumalees mother came from a rich background. After your grandmothers’ arrival, everything started to turn upside down. After a couple of years after your grandmothers’ arrival, I’ve found out that Sumalee, who was the eldest, had a relationship with an impecunious man. I warned her not to date that man; I guess I over did it to the point of driving them out. Over the years, your grandmothers’ true self reveals slowly. I regretted so much of losing their maae and Sumalee. It’s been over twenty years since I’ve seen her. Until you arrived, all the pain reappears again.”

“Then what happened to Sumalees mother?”

“She feel ill after sumalee left but quickly recovered for the sake of Mali. Ten years ago, Phueng found out that Sumalee had died. Their mum slowly gave up in life. She had nothing else to worry of since Mali is an adult now and sumalee in a better place.”

“The history of Dome Torng, I wouldn’t expect it to be this horrific.”

“The past is the past my child. There is simply nothing we can do now.”

Vanida spoke to herself. “But revenge can always be done khoon dtaa. Now that I know my mothers past, simply no way I will let others ruin my life the way they did to maae. Now on, I won’t be soft hearted anymore. Because maae was, it gave others full advantage of her. I won’t let it happen to me.”

“What are you thinking vanida?”

She smiles to cover her thoughts. “Nothing. By the way . . . How did Phueng find out about . . . . .” Phueng interrupts their conversation. She hears her name being mention, she gets suspicious and purposely gets in between.

“Miss vanida, Dinner is ready, you may go down stairs now.” Vanida rolls her eyes at Phueng as she walks by. Both make eye contact so Dtaa doesn’t see. “Your mother will be sharing rooms with you, miss vanida!”

She stops walking and thought ahead. “What is that women up to now? She has not had enough from maae yet? Just wait Ratana, once I know the full story, I will get my revenge for suffering such hard life! For maae . . . Me, Phaaw, and P’Adi!”



-Tomorrow more like Sunday, lots of stuff to do.. OMG noy! now i want green mangos and peper fish sauce. :drool: :drool:
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
wow so Vanida learns more about her mother....going to take revenge OooOOo
 

kulyia

RUK
Chapter 13: Stronger


While vanida walks down stairs, she plans what to do next. “I can’t let them know that I’m Sumalees daughter. If they know, they will do anything in their power to bring me down. I have to be careful and not act dumb anymore. My letters, I shall not give it to Tola anymore. I can’t trust anyone as of now. Everyone is an enemy. Especially the ones here in Dome Torng.”



Chapordaporn Residents

“What are you doing? Get off my bed!”

“I am sleeping with my wife tonight. Is that such a crime?” Adirake lies on his side staring at vanida. He was topless.

“No you cant! You have to go sleep with the servants at the back, Not in here with me!” Vanida picks up his shirt and threw it at him. That made him mad.

“You do know, when you get me mad, I want something in return.” She stares at him blanking constantly. “I’m not in the mood right now. Don’t force me to be.”
Vanida loses. She lets him sleep with her on the bed.




Suttikul Mansion

Dinner was over. Everyone was in the family room. Ratana and Ahdit sat alone. While Mali, Kulap, and Vanida share.

“My father, he is getting old. I want to take him, to go live with me, when I go back.”

Vanida interrupts Ratana. “No, that cant be. I want him to stay here with me.”

Everyone gave an ear to their conversation but kept still. Vanidas response made Ratana furious. “What? Vanida, you know khoon Dtaa is very sick. Doctors over here are not as skill, as the ones in town.”

“But maae. Khoon Dtaa grew old in here and so did everyone else. So much memory was store in here. To take him away from it all, is just pure evil.”

Ratana hid her fist behind her leg. She wanted so badly to sock vanida and quiet her. “You are a kid and should not argue with me young lady!”

“As far as I know maae, I am not a little girl anymore. Of all people, you should know that.” Mali was impressed by vanida for sticking up against Ratana, her own mother. Kulap wants them to stop arguing while Ahdit was super interested.

By now Ratana was yelling at vanida, while she spoke in her regular tone. “Close your mouth! You have no right to speak like that to me.”

“Ratana. We are a family, you shouldn’t be acting so harsh like that to your daughter.”

“Shut your mouth Mali! Vanida, don’t make maae mad!”

“I guess I am too late for that then.” Ratana was about to stand but was interrupted by Ahdit.

Ahdit rises from his chair. “I think it is getting late. Lets call it a night, shall we?”

Mali gives a real smile. “Yes, I think so too.”

Everyone look at Ratana as she stands. “Phueng, take me to my daughters room. I am really tire, I want to go sleep this instant.”

Mali waits till they were far enough to whisper to vanida. “Aren’t you afraid of your mother?”

Vanida shakes her head while smiling. “Afraid of her?” She pauses. “I was, but now I face to face my fears, in order, for it to go away.”

“Miss vanida. Do you want your own room?”

Vanida smiles. “Khun Ahdit, I appreciate it but. I think I will survive. After all, she is my mother.”





Mali walks vanida to her room. She censor vanida to stop. As soon as she laid her hands onto vanida, a flashback went through her head.

“What’s wrong?

Mali shook it off. “Nothing . . . If something happens, come tell me before doing anything.”

“I know. Don’t worry.”

“I didn’t expect your mother to act so harsh on you. I guess even if you, she doesn’t care.”

“Mali. That lady is an evil person. No matter how you try to please her, she is never satisfied.” Mali was confused. “I will go inside. Go to bed and sleep.”

“Good luck.”


Tasanee closes the door and turns around. She sees Ratana standing with her arms crossed. Tasanee ignores her and walk over to the other side of the bed.

“What do you think your doing?”

“Going to sleep.”

“Not on the bed. Low classes like you shouldn’t even come up here.”

Tasanee fixes her side of the bed as she talks. “I want to go sleep. If you’re in the mood to argue, then go elsewhere.”

Ratana reaches over to snatch the pillow and fails. Tasanee was faster than her. “You dare!!?”

“Yes. Don’t think that I am afraid of you! Just that your daughter can boss me around, doesn’t mean you can too!” Ratana threatens to throw the pillow. Tasanee smirks. “Is that all you can do? Someone high class like you, don’t you have any other ideas?”

“You have to sleep on the floor! Do you hear me!?”

“I hear you, but I wont do as you say.”

Ratana stumps her feet like a kid making Tasanee laugh. “Why are you laughing you dumb whore?”

She stops smiling and leans over. “Because a old aging woman is acting like a kid to get her way.”

Ratana walks around the bed to stand next to her. “You think your tough huh? Do you want me to wake up the whole mansion, and tell them who you really are!!?”

Tasanee knew if she succeed, then her plan would not be possible. She set the pillow onto the bed, and looks away.

Ratana smiles. “Don’t think you will win me that easily.” Ratana got on the bed and made herself comfy. She looks at tasanee who was still standing. “Poor beggars like you don’t need pillows or blanket. You’re probably used without it anyways. Oh, by the way, remember to turn off the light and close the windows.”

Tasanee did as she was told. She sat on the hardwood floor next to the bed for warmth. She positions herself like that throughout the whole night.


-Later. :wacko: Normally i dont get up this early. i will beback after nap =]
 

kulyia

RUK
sorry, but i will continue this Friday. Super busy and tired due to school and walking home. SOO hot. school got me lazy. lol.. well def continue once i get use to this rush hour thingy.
 

kulyia

RUK
Chapter 14: Unravels

Narrator Speaks:
A lot of nonsense is used in this chapter. But it'll make sense later.

The sun hadn’t even risen yet. Tasanee purposely open the windows to freeze the evil lady. “Hopefully, a wealthy snob like you will know how to use that blanket.”

She carefully closes the door and went to wash her face. She knew nobody had awakened yet. She turns on the lights as she walks pass one. She peeks into the family room and sees no one was there. She sat on the bigger sofa feeling relieved. In no time, vanida feel asleep.




Chapordaporn Residents

“What are you doing?”

“Cant you see I am writing?”

Vanida looks over. “You still have friends?”

Adirake looks up. “Whoever I am writing to, it is none your business.”

“Fine. I’m not forcing you to.” She quickly turns around only to snatch his letter. She ran across the room and held the letter out. “Tasanee?? You are writing to Tasanee?”

Adi stands up; He took a few steps towards her. “So what? I’m writing to my . . . Oh no wait.” Adirake spoke with a smile. “Our little sister. Is that a crime?

“A poor hobo like that - I don’t wish!”

“What about me? So . . . Your claiming me as your husband, correct?”

“I never said that!”

“Either way. She is my sister. If you don’t treat her well, I will do the same to you!”

“You have no right!”

“You want to bet on that?” Vanida doesn’t answers. “Either way, you will never win me.”

Adirake walk over to vanida to get his letter. She held on tightly, making him snatching the letter back. As adi walk out, she thought to herself. “Bitch. Don’t think you will get away with this.” Little did she know, a maid in the other room overheard everything.






Suttikul Mansion

Virote was upstairs looking at the pictures on the wall. He walks by, only to see vanida leaning on the balcony. “Are you tired?”

Vanida turns around. She smiles. “Virote . . . Somewhat.” She turns back to the view. He walks to the back of her.

“You know, I haven’t seen you for a few weeks now. To hear your voice, and see your smile, it already made me satisfied.”

She looks at him. She tried not to sound harsh. “Virote . . . I don’t like it when you speak like that.”

(Confused) “Why is that? Am I not good enough? Is that why you won’t like me?”

“No it’s not that.” She looks away feeling guilty. “It’s, I am not who I am.”

He smiles. “You’re vanida chapordaporn. You are P’Loobs sister.”

(Anxiously) “Whatever I say. You wont get it.” Vanida looks to the floor disappointedly. Virote held her chin up.

He smiles, and stare into her eyes. “You are a very weird lady.” His priceless smile disappears. “But you’re different, Different from other girls. Because you’re capable of one thing they aren’t.”

(Confused) “What do you mean?”

“Do you want me to spell it out?” Vanida was going to answer but Kulap came in between.

“P’Vee.” Kulap giggles. “Why did you come and not tell me?” She looks at vanida; who was blushing. Her eyebrow rises instead of asking a question.

“You guys go on and catch up.” Vanida sneaks back into the house. Kulap stares at virote.

“P’Vee, You are dumb. You like her, why don’t you tell her?”

“It’s not easy. If I just break it out, she will think wrong.”

“Miss vanida, does not think like that. Aren’t you a little bit worried at all P’Vee??”

“What do you mean?”

“A gorgeous woman like her, what type of man will not fall for her? You have to think carefully P’Vee. This is a big world; you are not alone in this. Someone else out there, is competing for her heart also.” DING! It finally click. His face goes blank.

“If you need any help, feel free.” Kulap purposely walk away leaving him hungry for more ideas. Her plan was definitely working indeed.





A knock came at the door. “Come in.” Vanida enters his office and left the door open. He notice fresh white daisies in a white and pink vase, was held in her hand.

“Khun Ahdit . . . Mali told me to bring these to you.” He pretends to look busy. “Am I bothering you?”

He looks up. “No. Why would I want daisies in my room?”

“I am not sure. But . . . I think Mali is right. Your office is very dark. Hopefully, with these colors, it’ll brighten your room up a little.” She took a step closer. “It’s good to try something new.”

(Serious Tone) “But I don’t like to change. And I don’t want your personal opinion.”

“If you don’t try something new, how would you know you won’t like it? Not just that, your room describes what type of person you are.”

“So I am a dark person?”

“I didn’t say that.”

“I don’t want to say this incase it hurts your feeling. But, please try to act your title more please.”

(Confused) “Act my title????”

“Yes. You do know, you and everyone else, here in Dome Torng has high reputations. Please treat it with respect.” He looks back at his paper works.

“What about you? You must be so proud of yourself then. I know I have to act rich, spoiled, self-centered. But I was not raised like that! My mother taught me to respect others the way you would want in return! I am sorry if I bothered you.” She marched to his desk and slam the vase down. Mali hid as vanida walk out.

“How come you treat her so awful?”

“She likes it like that.”

“But when I see her with virote. It’s a different story.” Ahdit gets distracted. Mali smiles. “Ahdit, ever since Jatanee left. You’ve been treating every girl who gets near you horribly. Aren’t you afraid this time, you might make her run off and never come back? What if she is the last chance you’ve got? Ahdit . . . As the day goes by, we age more. The young image of what was once us, will never reappear once again. Take my words, and reconsider it.”





Vanida walks out to the shore. She turns around when she heard her name.

“Vanida. I know the way I express my heart is cheesy. But I normally don’t do this. It’s usually them doing it to me.” He smiles. He catches himself being distracted and got a hold of his reaction. “Vanida. I don’t know the reason, of why you wont accept me. But I will keep on trying until you do. I’ve never met a woman that drove me so crazy like this. My love for you is real. If you can open your heart to me, I promise, to never make you feel resent ever again.”

Slowly, vanida look up to his eyes. “I am not sure I can trust another mans love.”

-Update this week =]
 
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