okay. so the girls at spicy say .. there are still a few loop holes that didn't get clear up, hoping, in your fic, you can coordinate it somehow and make sense out of the ending.
01. before chanida leave, she have on this face as if she's hiding a secret from chai. maybe, you can make her pregnant like LALA/NATTY think and somehow make Chai's character single at the island - still a player. but later meet chanida along the road and learn the truth that he have a child with her. somehow make them tie into one and make them back together or something.
02. sunsanee need to have more worse stuff happen to her . :loool:
03. the realization from sunsanee's mother why HARITH have to do what he have to do.
04. Nukhun left for school oversea, will he come back with a good relationship, what's in store for him.
05. what about the relationship of soriya's mother and sunsanee's mother.
06. what happen to bontai, send her to mental institution, will she recover - pls don't' let her come back to the island for BAI's sake b/c i dont' want her to be involve with daddy HARITH and mommy SORIYA.
07. maybe have some sort of wedding - even though she have on the ring, maybe say that she's and him are engage but are to be marry a few months from the willing scene :loool:
08. hm - what about the people in the village .. -- just something about them learning that they have a naiying ..
09. a little more sweet scene of HARITH/SORIYA playing prisoner role .. or make HARITH work more than we we saw on last episode.
10. let them have more than ONE ARISOYA --