pangiaxiong
sarNie Adult
Hi. This fanfic will actually be my first. So there is likely to have mistake in my story - like bad grammar, spelling, punctuation and etc. So if you do find it, forgive me, I am only human and not very good at english. LOL. 
Anyway, I love to hear from people, on what they think on my story. Since it's my first, the story is actually very simple. Since I'm a fan of Ateam, I thought it'll be nice to start off with this couple.
Setting of the story:
-The story start off in the 50's, somewhere in country side and Bangkok and the latter part in 2010.
Characters:
-Aum as Aroon(past) and Darin Wongsawat(present)
-Aff as Sumalee(past) and Pradtana Sintawichai(present)
-Benz as Kaew (past) and Isra Praphasirirat(present)
-Not as Chanarong (past) and som Wattana(present)
Synopsis:
Lovely Sumalee never known love, but the moment her eyes held Aroon, her heart start pounding and she become speechless. It was love at first sight, at least, for her. She promise herself to love and cherish her husband forever, but will he do the same back?
Handsome devil, Aroon, a man of the world, thought he known it all. But one look at his bride to be and he is a goner. Pretty or not, he had learned long ago never to truth any woman, they would only cause heartbreak. But can he bridle the surge of passion that captured his soul or the kindness shown by sweet Sumalee.
Not known to them, an evil rival have set her eyes on destroying the loving couple and forbid them to ever love each other for eternity.
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That is how far I can go with the synopsis, sort of stupid, I know. But I don't want to give out too much. -_-
Here is the story, enjoy people, and also , like I said, it's a rough start so please be kind. Thanks
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(remember, this take place somewhere in the 50's)
Chapter One - The Beginning of a New Found Love
“Sumalee!” Lawan, Sumalee nanny race down the back porch of the two story high house, desperate to find her before the guests arrive. Lawan told her many times, not to wonder off before guests are coming, otherwise her parent will punishment her for disobeying. But this is not just any guest, it is her sweet Sumalee 's fiancé, who was rumor to be a scoundrel and womanizer. Rumor is that he is also a handsome devil, spoiled and rich. A fantasy of every women dream, except her Sumalee, of course. Her Sumalee is a sweet, unspoil girl, who treat everyone with kindness. Everyone who know her, loved her. How will her Sumalee ever tame that beast of a man, Lawan have no idea.
“Oh, just wait til I catch up to you missy, you're in big trouble” said Lawan, throwing both of her hand up into the air.
A Wife! She was going to be a wife soon. Sumalee could not believed it. The marriage was arranged by her parent and their friend just three month ago. It came as a shock to her at first, since she have been nowhere and still wishes to have the feeling of being court. She has not met the man, but heard from her mother that he is twenty-seven. Eight years her senior, at least he is not old, she thought, most of her friends were married to men who were twice their age. Thanks goodness, her parent have the heart not to marry her off to some old man. She will miss Nanny Lawan, who is like a second mother to her, and all her little friends at the orphanage house. Those poor little children who was abandoned by their biological parent at a young age, what would think if she is leaving them.
“Sumalee! Where are you?”. Nanny Lawan, oh no, she forgot that they were expecting guests today. Oh, how Nanny will be angry.
“Here Nanny! I'm by the pond” she yelled. Upon hearing her voice, nanny Lawan appear in second from behind the brushes.
“Young lady, please you must hurry, we don't got all day” said Nanny Lawan, marching like a mother hen toward it chick. Sumalee look at Nanny Lawan and thought about how much she is going to miss her nagging, her warm mothering smile and her wisdom.
“Don't you dare look at me like that, otherwise how am I going to let you go girl?” she said, tears forming already in her eyes.
“Oh Nanny, I don't want to marry at all. I wish I could just be here with you, my parent, and the children” sniffed Sumalee. Nanny Lawan put her arms around Sumalee and hugged her, wishing she could save her sweet girl from this fate.
“Hush up now, it'll be alright my sweet, you'll be just fine. Now we better hurry up or else who know what that fiance of yours will think about you” she said.
Just when they reached the front gate to the porch, Sumalee mother came running out, shouting and whinning how awful her daughter look. Her mother is a woman who can be sweet at times, but if someone get her angry, there is hell to pay. Her father is the only one who can tolerance her mother. Her mother always have something new to show her peers and relatives. Especially for today occasion she wore one of her best dress. It was a bright yellow silk dress, and attached to her shoulder was a white rose. Her mother never looked better.
“Sumalee, go upstairs right now and change! Nanny please hurry, the guests will be here any minute now”. Sumalee hastily did as her mother told, and ran quickly upstairs, followed by Nanny Lawan.
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“Oh goodness gracious! My Sumalee, you look as beauitful as a diamond gem” said Nanny Lawan.
“Thanks Nanny, but you exaggerate too much”
“Me! No! Look at you”. She turned Sumalee toward the mirror. Sumalee couldn't believe her eyes. In front of her was a woman not a girl anymore. Her hair was pulled up, curled to her shoulder and on top of her hair was small white flowers. Her pink dress brings out the womanly figure in her, hugging her curve to perfection. Her face was all clean, with pink blushes and rosy lip. All and all, Sumalee couldn't recognize the girl-woman standing in front of her. At the corner of her eyes, she sees her mother coming in, with surprise in her eyes.
“My love, you are simply gorgeous. Come, we must go meet your fiance”.
Her heart start pounding fast as they near the end of the stairway. What will he think of me, she thought, will he like me? Just around the corner now, and her fiance will be there. With a deep breath, hoping get rid of the butterfly in her stomach, she took the final step. Seated on the left was two elderly couple, who she believed is her in-laws. Next to them, must be her fiance, but she could not see him clearly, since his head is turned toward her father.
“Ah, there is my lovely daughter. Aroon, please this is my daughter, Sumalee. Sumalee, say hi to your fiance and your soon to be in-laws.”.
Aroon turned his head toward her, looking at her mid-section up and resting on her face. It seems like time have stop and nothing exits but the two of them. Sumalee could not believed how handsome her fiancé is. He got the most beautiful black hair, with some of them falling to the right of his eye, making him seem dangerous like a dark angel. His brown eyes looking sharp at her, making him mysterious and like he could see through her soul. Sumalee never felt like this before, like someone shot an arrow through her. Speechless, she stood mute there for who know how long. Then she felt someone pinching her arm, and that got her wit together at last. How embarrassing, her first time meeting her fiance and she already acting like a wet behind the ear green girl.
“Nice to meet your Aroon. I'm Sumalee”. She bowed her head and greet him, hoping not to catch his eyes again, otherwise she'll embarrass herself.
“Very please to meet your acquaintance, madam” he said.
Goodness, even his voice almost brought her to her knees. He got to have the voice of the devil, smooth and husky. Out of nowhere, he brought his hand and lifted her chin. As his warm hand contact with her skin, her body feel like it's no longer her own. He had the power to make her forget things and she doesn't know if that is a good thing or not. Slowly Aroon lifted Sumalee head and took a good and long look at his bride-to-be. She got a lovely mouth, sweet and kissable. Her eyes were big, big enough to loose oneself in there if one is not careful, her cheek a flush of pink, and she got a fresh smell to her. A fresh scent that every man crave, every man except him.
He consider himself a man of experience, who had gained many knowledgeable through painful history. A man of the world, who would jump from one woman to another without looking back. A dangerous man who no one would want to cross. But one look into Sumalee eyes, and he was almost speechless. This is a dangerous woman. He really got no time for a goody-two shoe wife and a bunch of brat to carry his name. Not yet, at least. He consider twenty-seven way too young to be setting with marriage. If not for his parent, whom he loved with all his heart, he wouldn't gotten himself into this situation.
“Ahem...! Dinner is ready. Please if you two youngster are ready? You'll get your chance to chit chat latter” said her father, with a bit of a humor to it.
During dinner, Sumalee didn't have any appetite since Aroon was sitting across her, and not only that but he was staring at her the whole time. Goodness, didn't the man have any brain at all!
Aroon couldn't stop staring at Sumalee mouth. He wonder how she would react if he was to steal a kiss from her? Now that wouldn't be a bad idea!
None of the parents were paying attention to Aroon and Sumalee but Nanny Lawan who serving foods, notices that Sumalee hasn't even touch her food, and same goes to the handsome devil, Aroon. That Aroon, look like a hungry wolf who is eying his prey. Poor my sweet Sumalee, she thought.
Dinner was over at last, now she could hide from Aroon preying eyes. Sumalee excused herself from the table, telling everyone she needs to get some fresh air. Quietly, walking toward the back door to the porch, she thought about Aroon. There is something about him that makes her wants to get closer to him, and some part of him that makes her want to run away. Just when she is about to open the door, someone grabbed her arm and shoved her into the dark hallway. She was about to scream when she found herself in a warm embrace and a hot mouth suddenly slam against her in a powerful kiss. It was her first kiss, and it was the first time, ever, in her life that she fainted.
****************NOTE*********************
I will make a trailer/preview for this story latter and if people think it's good.
Anyway, I love to hear from people, on what they think on my story. Since it's my first, the story is actually very simple. Since I'm a fan of Ateam, I thought it'll be nice to start off with this couple.
Setting of the story:
-The story start off in the 50's, somewhere in country side and Bangkok and the latter part in 2010.
Characters:
-Aum as Aroon(past) and Darin Wongsawat(present)
-Aff as Sumalee(past) and Pradtana Sintawichai(present)
-Benz as Kaew (past) and Isra Praphasirirat(present)
-Not as Chanarong (past) and som Wattana(present)
Synopsis:
Lovely Sumalee never known love, but the moment her eyes held Aroon, her heart start pounding and she become speechless. It was love at first sight, at least, for her. She promise herself to love and cherish her husband forever, but will he do the same back?
Handsome devil, Aroon, a man of the world, thought he known it all. But one look at his bride to be and he is a goner. Pretty or not, he had learned long ago never to truth any woman, they would only cause heartbreak. But can he bridle the surge of passion that captured his soul or the kindness shown by sweet Sumalee.
Not known to them, an evil rival have set her eyes on destroying the loving couple and forbid them to ever love each other for eternity.
********************************
That is how far I can go with the synopsis, sort of stupid, I know. But I don't want to give out too much. -_-
Here is the story, enjoy people, and also , like I said, it's a rough start so please be kind. Thanks
*********************************
(remember, this take place somewhere in the 50's)
Chapter One - The Beginning of a New Found Love
“Sumalee!” Lawan, Sumalee nanny race down the back porch of the two story high house, desperate to find her before the guests arrive. Lawan told her many times, not to wonder off before guests are coming, otherwise her parent will punishment her for disobeying. But this is not just any guest, it is her sweet Sumalee 's fiancé, who was rumor to be a scoundrel and womanizer. Rumor is that he is also a handsome devil, spoiled and rich. A fantasy of every women dream, except her Sumalee, of course. Her Sumalee is a sweet, unspoil girl, who treat everyone with kindness. Everyone who know her, loved her. How will her Sumalee ever tame that beast of a man, Lawan have no idea.
“Oh, just wait til I catch up to you missy, you're in big trouble” said Lawan, throwing both of her hand up into the air.
A Wife! She was going to be a wife soon. Sumalee could not believed it. The marriage was arranged by her parent and their friend just three month ago. It came as a shock to her at first, since she have been nowhere and still wishes to have the feeling of being court. She has not met the man, but heard from her mother that he is twenty-seven. Eight years her senior, at least he is not old, she thought, most of her friends were married to men who were twice their age. Thanks goodness, her parent have the heart not to marry her off to some old man. She will miss Nanny Lawan, who is like a second mother to her, and all her little friends at the orphanage house. Those poor little children who was abandoned by their biological parent at a young age, what would think if she is leaving them.
“Sumalee! Where are you?”. Nanny Lawan, oh no, she forgot that they were expecting guests today. Oh, how Nanny will be angry.
“Here Nanny! I'm by the pond” she yelled. Upon hearing her voice, nanny Lawan appear in second from behind the brushes.
“Young lady, please you must hurry, we don't got all day” said Nanny Lawan, marching like a mother hen toward it chick. Sumalee look at Nanny Lawan and thought about how much she is going to miss her nagging, her warm mothering smile and her wisdom.
“Don't you dare look at me like that, otherwise how am I going to let you go girl?” she said, tears forming already in her eyes.
“Oh Nanny, I don't want to marry at all. I wish I could just be here with you, my parent, and the children” sniffed Sumalee. Nanny Lawan put her arms around Sumalee and hugged her, wishing she could save her sweet girl from this fate.
“Hush up now, it'll be alright my sweet, you'll be just fine. Now we better hurry up or else who know what that fiance of yours will think about you” she said.
Just when they reached the front gate to the porch, Sumalee mother came running out, shouting and whinning how awful her daughter look. Her mother is a woman who can be sweet at times, but if someone get her angry, there is hell to pay. Her father is the only one who can tolerance her mother. Her mother always have something new to show her peers and relatives. Especially for today occasion she wore one of her best dress. It was a bright yellow silk dress, and attached to her shoulder was a white rose. Her mother never looked better.
“Sumalee, go upstairs right now and change! Nanny please hurry, the guests will be here any minute now”. Sumalee hastily did as her mother told, and ran quickly upstairs, followed by Nanny Lawan.
--------------------------
“Oh goodness gracious! My Sumalee, you look as beauitful as a diamond gem” said Nanny Lawan.
“Thanks Nanny, but you exaggerate too much”
“Me! No! Look at you”. She turned Sumalee toward the mirror. Sumalee couldn't believe her eyes. In front of her was a woman not a girl anymore. Her hair was pulled up, curled to her shoulder and on top of her hair was small white flowers. Her pink dress brings out the womanly figure in her, hugging her curve to perfection. Her face was all clean, with pink blushes and rosy lip. All and all, Sumalee couldn't recognize the girl-woman standing in front of her. At the corner of her eyes, she sees her mother coming in, with surprise in her eyes.
“My love, you are simply gorgeous. Come, we must go meet your fiance”.
Her heart start pounding fast as they near the end of the stairway. What will he think of me, she thought, will he like me? Just around the corner now, and her fiance will be there. With a deep breath, hoping get rid of the butterfly in her stomach, she took the final step. Seated on the left was two elderly couple, who she believed is her in-laws. Next to them, must be her fiance, but she could not see him clearly, since his head is turned toward her father.
“Ah, there is my lovely daughter. Aroon, please this is my daughter, Sumalee. Sumalee, say hi to your fiance and your soon to be in-laws.”.
Aroon turned his head toward her, looking at her mid-section up and resting on her face. It seems like time have stop and nothing exits but the two of them. Sumalee could not believed how handsome her fiancé is. He got the most beautiful black hair, with some of them falling to the right of his eye, making him seem dangerous like a dark angel. His brown eyes looking sharp at her, making him mysterious and like he could see through her soul. Sumalee never felt like this before, like someone shot an arrow through her. Speechless, she stood mute there for who know how long. Then she felt someone pinching her arm, and that got her wit together at last. How embarrassing, her first time meeting her fiance and she already acting like a wet behind the ear green girl.
“Nice to meet your Aroon. I'm Sumalee”. She bowed her head and greet him, hoping not to catch his eyes again, otherwise she'll embarrass herself.
“Very please to meet your acquaintance, madam” he said.
Goodness, even his voice almost brought her to her knees. He got to have the voice of the devil, smooth and husky. Out of nowhere, he brought his hand and lifted her chin. As his warm hand contact with her skin, her body feel like it's no longer her own. He had the power to make her forget things and she doesn't know if that is a good thing or not. Slowly Aroon lifted Sumalee head and took a good and long look at his bride-to-be. She got a lovely mouth, sweet and kissable. Her eyes were big, big enough to loose oneself in there if one is not careful, her cheek a flush of pink, and she got a fresh smell to her. A fresh scent that every man crave, every man except him.
He consider himself a man of experience, who had gained many knowledgeable through painful history. A man of the world, who would jump from one woman to another without looking back. A dangerous man who no one would want to cross. But one look into Sumalee eyes, and he was almost speechless. This is a dangerous woman. He really got no time for a goody-two shoe wife and a bunch of brat to carry his name. Not yet, at least. He consider twenty-seven way too young to be setting with marriage. If not for his parent, whom he loved with all his heart, he wouldn't gotten himself into this situation.
“Ahem...! Dinner is ready. Please if you two youngster are ready? You'll get your chance to chit chat latter” said her father, with a bit of a humor to it.
During dinner, Sumalee didn't have any appetite since Aroon was sitting across her, and not only that but he was staring at her the whole time. Goodness, didn't the man have any brain at all!
Aroon couldn't stop staring at Sumalee mouth. He wonder how she would react if he was to steal a kiss from her? Now that wouldn't be a bad idea!
None of the parents were paying attention to Aroon and Sumalee but Nanny Lawan who serving foods, notices that Sumalee hasn't even touch her food, and same goes to the handsome devil, Aroon. That Aroon, look like a hungry wolf who is eying his prey. Poor my sweet Sumalee, she thought.
Dinner was over at last, now she could hide from Aroon preying eyes. Sumalee excused herself from the table, telling everyone she needs to get some fresh air. Quietly, walking toward the back door to the porch, she thought about Aroon. There is something about him that makes her wants to get closer to him, and some part of him that makes her want to run away. Just when she is about to open the door, someone grabbed her arm and shoved her into the dark hallway. She was about to scream when she found herself in a warm embrace and a hot mouth suddenly slam against her in a powerful kiss. It was her first kiss, and it was the first time, ever, in her life that she fainted.
****************NOTE*********************
I will make a trailer/preview for this story latter and if people think it's good.
