Forever Yours

pangiaxiong

sarNie Adult
Hi. This fanfic will actually be my first. So there is likely to have mistake in my story - like bad grammar, spelling, punctuation and etc. So if you do find it, forgive me, I am only human and not very good at english. LOL. :rolleyes:

Anyway, I love to hear from people, on what they think on my story. Since it's my first, the story is actually very simple. Since I'm a fan of Ateam, I thought it'll be nice to start off with this couple.




Setting of the story:
-The story start off in the 50's, somewhere in country side and Bangkok and the latter part in 2010.

Characters:
-Aum as Aroon(past) and Darin Wongsawat(present)
-Aff as Sumalee(past) and Pradtana Sintawichai(present)
-Benz as Kaew (past) and Isra Praphasirirat(present)
-Not as Chanarong (past) and som Wattana(present)

Synopsis:

Lovely Sumalee never known love, but the moment her eyes held Aroon, her heart start pounding and she become speechless. It was love at first sight, at least, for her. She promise herself to love and cherish her husband forever, but will he do the same back?

Handsome devil, Aroon, a man of the world, thought he known it all. But one look at his bride to be and he is a goner. Pretty or not, he had learned long ago never to truth any woman, they would only cause heartbreak. But can he bridle the surge of passion that captured his soul or the kindness shown by sweet Sumalee.

Not known to them, an evil rival have set her eyes on destroying the loving couple and forbid them to ever love each other for eternity.

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That is how far I can go with the synopsis, sort of stupid, I know. But I don't want to give out too much. -_-

Here is the story, enjoy people, and also , like I said, it's a rough start so please be kind. Thanks

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(remember, this take place somewhere in the 50's)

Chapter One - The Beginning of a New Found Love

“Sumalee!” Lawan, Sumalee nanny race down the back porch of the two story high house, desperate to find her before the guests arrive. Lawan told her many times, not to wonder off before guests are coming, otherwise her parent will punishment her for disobeying. But this is not just any guest, it is her sweet Sumalee 's fiancé, who was rumor to be a scoundrel and womanizer. Rumor is that he is also a handsome devil, spoiled and rich. A fantasy of every women dream, except her Sumalee, of course. Her Sumalee is a sweet, unspoil girl, who treat everyone with kindness. Everyone who know her, loved her. How will her Sumalee ever tame that beast of a man, Lawan have no idea.

“Oh, just wait til I catch up to you missy, you're in big trouble” said Lawan, throwing both of her hand up into the air.

A Wife! She was going to be a wife soon. Sumalee could not believed it. The marriage was arranged by her parent and their friend just three month ago. It came as a shock to her at first, since she have been nowhere and still wishes to have the feeling of being court. She has not met the man, but heard from her mother that he is twenty-seven. Eight years her senior, at least he is not old, she thought, most of her friends were married to men who were twice their age. Thanks goodness, her parent have the heart not to marry her off to some old man. She will miss Nanny Lawan, who is like a second mother to her, and all her little friends at the orphanage house. Those poor little children who was abandoned by their biological parent at a young age, what would think if she is leaving them.

“Sumalee! Where are you?”. Nanny Lawan, oh no, she forgot that they were expecting guests today. Oh, how Nanny will be angry.
“Here Nanny! I'm by the pond” she yelled. Upon hearing her voice, nanny Lawan appear in second from behind the brushes.

“Young lady, please you must hurry, we don't got all day” said Nanny Lawan, marching like a mother hen toward it chick. Sumalee look at Nanny Lawan and thought about how much she is going to miss her nagging, her warm mothering smile and her wisdom.

“Don't you dare look at me like that, otherwise how am I going to let you go girl?” she said, tears forming already in her eyes.

“Oh Nanny, I don't want to marry at all. I wish I could just be here with you, my parent, and the children” sniffed Sumalee. Nanny Lawan put her arms around Sumalee and hugged her, wishing she could save her sweet girl from this fate.

“Hush up now, it'll be alright my sweet, you'll be just fine. Now we better hurry up or else who know what that fiance of yours will think about you” she said.

Just when they reached the front gate to the porch, Sumalee mother came running out, shouting and whinning how awful her daughter look. Her mother is a woman who can be sweet at times, but if someone get her angry, there is hell to pay. Her father is the only one who can tolerance her mother. Her mother always have something new to show her peers and relatives. Especially for today occasion she wore one of her best dress. It was a bright yellow silk dress, and attached to her shoulder was a white rose. Her mother never looked better.

“Sumalee, go upstairs right now and change! Nanny please hurry, the guests will be here any minute now”. Sumalee hastily did as her mother told, and ran quickly upstairs, followed by Nanny Lawan.

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“Oh goodness gracious! My Sumalee, you look as beauitful as a diamond gem” said Nanny Lawan.
“Thanks Nanny, but you exaggerate too much”
“Me! No! Look at you”. She turned Sumalee toward the mirror. Sumalee couldn't believe her eyes. In front of her was a woman not a girl anymore. Her hair was pulled up, curled to her shoulder and on top of her hair was small white flowers. Her pink dress brings out the womanly figure in her, hugging her curve to perfection. Her face was all clean, with pink blushes and rosy lip. All and all, Sumalee couldn't recognize the girl-woman standing in front of her. At the corner of her eyes, she sees her mother coming in, with surprise in her eyes.
“My love, you are simply gorgeous. Come, we must go meet your fiance”.

Her heart start pounding fast as they near the end of the stairway. What will he think of me, she thought, will he like me? Just around the corner now, and her fiance will be there. With a deep breath, hoping get rid of the butterfly in her stomach, she took the final step. Seated on the left was two elderly couple, who she believed is her in-laws. Next to them, must be her fiance, but she could not see him clearly, since his head is turned toward her father.

“Ah, there is my lovely daughter. Aroon, please this is my daughter, Sumalee. Sumalee, say hi to your fiance and your soon to be in-laws.”.

Aroon turned his head toward her, looking at her mid-section up and resting on her face. It seems like time have stop and nothing exits but the two of them. Sumalee could not believed how handsome her fiancé is. He got the most beautiful black hair, with some of them falling to the right of his eye, making him seem dangerous like a dark angel. His brown eyes looking sharp at her, making him mysterious and like he could see through her soul. Sumalee never felt like this before, like someone shot an arrow through her. Speechless, she stood mute there for who know how long. Then she felt someone pinching her arm, and that got her wit together at last. How embarrassing, her first time meeting her fiance and she already acting like a wet behind the ear green girl.

“Nice to meet your Aroon. I'm Sumalee”. She bowed her head and greet him, hoping not to catch his eyes again, otherwise she'll embarrass herself.
“Very please to meet your acquaintance, madam” he said.

Goodness, even his voice almost brought her to her knees. He got to have the voice of the devil, smooth and husky. Out of nowhere, he brought his hand and lifted her chin. As his warm hand contact with her skin, her body feel like it's no longer her own. He had the power to make her forget things and she doesn't know if that is a good thing or not. Slowly Aroon lifted Sumalee head and took a good and long look at his bride-to-be. She got a lovely mouth, sweet and kissable. Her eyes were big, big enough to loose oneself in there if one is not careful, her cheek a flush of pink, and she got a fresh smell to her. A fresh scent that every man crave, every man except him.

He consider himself a man of experience, who had gained many knowledgeable through painful history. A man of the world, who would jump from one woman to another without looking back. A dangerous man who no one would want to cross. But one look into Sumalee eyes, and he was almost speechless. This is a dangerous woman. He really got no time for a goody-two shoe wife and a bunch of brat to carry his name. Not yet, at least. He consider twenty-seven way too young to be setting with marriage. If not for his parent, whom he loved with all his heart, he wouldn't gotten himself into this situation.

“Ahem...! Dinner is ready. Please if you two youngster are ready? You'll get your chance to chit chat latter” said her father, with a bit of a humor to it.

During dinner, Sumalee didn't have any appetite since Aroon was sitting across her, and not only that but he was staring at her the whole time. Goodness, didn't the man have any brain at all!

Aroon couldn't stop staring at Sumalee mouth. He wonder how she would react if he was to steal a kiss from her? Now that wouldn't be a bad idea!

None of the parents were paying attention to Aroon and Sumalee but Nanny Lawan who serving foods, notices that Sumalee hasn't even touch her food, and same goes to the handsome devil, Aroon. That Aroon, look like a hungry wolf who is eying his prey. Poor my sweet Sumalee, she thought.

Dinner was over at last, now she could hide from Aroon preying eyes. Sumalee excused herself from the table, telling everyone she needs to get some fresh air. Quietly, walking toward the back door to the porch, she thought about Aroon. There is something about him that makes her wants to get closer to him, and some part of him that makes her want to run away. Just when she is about to open the door, someone grabbed her arm and shoved her into the dark hallway. She was about to scream when she found herself in a warm embrace and a hot mouth suddenly slam against her in a powerful kiss. It was her first kiss, and it was the first time, ever, in her life that she fainted.

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I will make a trailer/preview for this story latter and if people think it's good.
 

cecilia

Staff member
wow. that was off on a good start -- i always have a thing or two for reincarnations story -- so happy you've decide to make this an ATEAM fiction because earlier, I was wondering about your avatar on your youtube, didn't know it's actually the fic you're setting your eyes too.

I really like the way you describe Aum's character -- so mysterious and sexy .. it's no wonder Aff's knee is weakling .. Great starts. can't wait for more update.
 

LimeGrass

sarNie Adult
Wow. That must have been some kiss to make her faint.:blush: It's only their first meeting and he already can't restrain himself. Who knows what will happen when they're alone in their wedding room. (lol)
I'll be looking forward to that trailer.
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
i love ateam...and i love the beginning. i can't wait for the trailer ^^
I wish I could trade places with Sumalee as she got that kiss lol
 

pangiaxiong

sarNie Adult
Hey. Thanks for all of your guys who read my weird storyline and comment your thought on it. I so happy. So as I promise, here is the opening/preview to my Fanfic. ENJOY. Also for every chapter, I will try to make a clip for it.
 

LimeGrass

sarNie Adult
Beautiful preview and love the song--you're so talented. :)
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
I just LOVE the trailer. Love the song, the clips...everything. Great job!!! I agree with LimeGrass, you are super talented!

OooOo you're going to make a clip for every chapter...I'm so excited. LOVE ATEAM <3
 

jeeja

Miss SMILES :D
when i saw the t-ser i just knew i gotta check out this fic.
great starting n damn that some kiss she got there :p
can't wait for more :D
 

pangiaxiong

sarNie Adult
I just LOVE the trailer. Love the song, the clips...everything. Great job!!! I agree with LimeGrass, you are super talented!

OooOo you're going to make a clip for every chapter...I'm so excited. LOVE ATEAM <3
Thanks. :D
Yes, I am planning to, just to get people a visual of my FanFic. And I like making them so, why not. ;) I'm actually done with chapter 2, chapter one clip, but still working on chapter two clip, so hopefully by the end of today, I'll post it.
 

duaxiong

sarNie Adult
Omigeee!What a Great chapter!
I Love it:)Such nice teasers you made too!
gosh,chapter 1 is cute!!
 

Cupid Candy

sarNie Coma
A kiss already, such a beautiful description of P'Aff I could picture her prettyness already. I wonder what happens next.
 

pangiaxiong

sarNie Adult
Chapter 2 The Marriage is Set

A figure of a man appeared in her dream. As his image become clear, Sumalee notice he have sharp looking eyes, smooth glossy hair, and a devil like smile. She know him somehow. There something about that smile, that lip, it seen like she kissed that lip before. Suddenly, the image disappeared, leaving her in darkness and wonder.

Sumalee woke up to the noise beside her bed. Nanny Lawan was sitting next to the edge of her bed, a worried look on her face.
“Goodness, you're awake. You give us a fright there”
“What happen Nanny, I thought I was downstairs”
“Yes, but you fainted. Don't you remember? Aroon got there just in time to catch you. He said that it must have been the weather, that's why you fainted”
“Really? That strange”. No, it couldn't be the weather. She remember excusing herself from the dinner table, walking toward the porch door, and then.....? And then....? It was suddenly dark. Wait a minute. Something is coming back. There was also warm cozy arms around her, and hot firm lip on her lip. Sumalee jumped off the bed, as if a lighting bolt had zapped her.

“Goodness gracious!” Nanny yelped, holding her hand to her chest.
Kiss! The scroundrl! She lost her first kiss to him. Oh what the heck, it's not like she'll get to kiss anybody anyway, she's getting marry to him. He had the nerve to stole her kiss and then lied to everyone that it was the weather. Everyone must of thought how weak she is, how is she ever going to show her face to her in-law again. The devil! Although, he did have nice lip. She slapped her cheeks, trying to get herself not to think about the kiss, but it didn't work. No matter how much she despite him for doing that, a part of her was flatter to have been kissed by him. A smiled slowly formed on Sumalee face, followed by two pinkish blush.

“Now I don't know what you're smiling about girl, but your parent would like an audience with you when you wake up”

“Yes Nanny”. Sumalee hurried toward her changing room, in case Nanny Lawan decide to ask her more question regard her smiling.


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“So...​?what was she like?” asked Niran. Aroon scowled at his best friend. “None of your damn business.”
“Ha...ha...ha. Well if you would pay more attention to the chessboard, my friend, and not staring into spaces!.” Aroon ground his teeth. That bastard got a point. Ever since returning back from the Supitayaporn's house, he been thinking a lot about one particular person. One with a soft smooth lip that could absorb a man soul. One particular person whom innocent scent is slowly tugging at his heart, making him loose all his self control. No women, even Kaew, the woman he used to loved with all his soul, who abandoned him for another, would affect him the way Sumalee did. Ha, and no women whom known him have ever fainted after kissing him. That little baggage actually fainted with just one kiss. Aroon, all of a sudden, started laughing like a fool in front of his friend.

“Ok. That was werid.” Niran never seen his friend laughed like this in a long time. Not since, that whore Kaew betrayed him with another man. Since than, Aroon was a changed man. He no longer laughed or joke around with any of his peers. Niran swears if he ever get the chance to see Kaew again, he would make the little witch pay for his friend pains.
“Ha...ha...whooh! Sorry...I...ha...was just..hmm..thinking about something that happen earlier today”.

“Well, what it is?” Niran asked. Eager to know what is so funny.
“You know the little baggage I was meeting today? Well after dinner I've decide to follow her, just to talk with her, get to know her more” Niran give him a hard look. “If you're thinking that I'm trying to seduce her, trust me, I'm wasn't. Maybe not at first. Well to make a long story short, I kissed her OK. Just a peak to scare the chit but what do you know, she fainted.” Niran gave Aroon a dumb look and howled with laughter.
“Ha...ha...maybe it's your stinky rotten mouth, that's why she fainted.” Aroon got up and was about to hit his friend. Niran quickly dodged his hit and moved away as far as possible from Aroon, all the time, laughing like a maniac. “Ok ok ok! I was just kidding. Just that most of the women who've been with you took it the other way, not like she did. She sound like a baggage full of surprise, my friend.” Aroon stared at his friend, a hard look creep across his face.
“You have no idea”

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Her parent were sitting on the living room sofa, when Sumalee came in. Her mother gave her a deep scowled as she enter the room. Her father stood up and walked toward her, with a warm smile on his face.

“So my dear, what do you think?”
“Think about what?”
“About your future husband. Your mother and I want to make sure that you agree to this reunion.” For the first time Sumalee took a closer look at her father . His worried face full of wrinkles and his once strong body was not so strong anymore. Her father was getting old, and since her parent only have her, a single child, she know must do the right thing. She must carry on the family name. She smiled at her father, and cupped his hands.

“Yes, father, I am sure. I want to make you and mother proud.” Her father held her in his arms and cried. He know that one day his precious daughter will have to marry, but it seem like just yesterday when he held her tiny form in his arms. He know he is making the right choice, giving his daughter to his best friend's son. She'll be happy, he know.

“Alright then. We've talked to my friend, and we all think it's best to have the wedding as soon as possible. It'll be a month from today, how does that sound”
“That fine with me father.” With that, her destiny is sealed. Sumalee hope she is making the right choice by listening to her heart and right now her heart is telling her, Aroon is her fated soul mate.

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Aroon paced the floor of his balcony. He could not sleep, because his emotion not intact with his body. Just moment ago, he received words from his parent that the marriage is finalized. That little baggage agreed to the reunion, even after he stolen a kiss from her and lied. Some part of him hope that she'll hate him and tell everyone she does not want to marry him. What make him think she'll be any different from the other women, they're all the same. Outside they may seem sweet and innocent, but inside, they're like a snake with poisonous venom. One bite is all it take to torn a man heart apart, and he'll never be the same again. He vowed, she can have his name in marriage but she'll never have his heart. That's one part of himself he'll never again intrusted to another living soul, especially for a sweet innocent like Sumalee.

With that thought locked inside his heart, Aroon went inside, switched off the light and make his way to his bed. The room was shadowed with darkness except the light shinning from the moon. He looked outside thought somehow the moon look very different tonight, almost like it was looking at him, and trying to sent him a message with its bright light. Why is it looking at the moon making his chest filled with pain, he have no ideas.

What Aroon doesn't know is that, the moon is looking onto the fates of two star-crossed lovers. Its sending its light to guide them in their path of misery and tears. The moon can see what they can not. In this lifetime, they're fated to meet and find love but never to be together. For that is the fate heaven have written for them since the beginning of time.

As I promise. A clip for every chapters.
Chapter two clip. I did try to make look as described in my FanFic, but the picture will always be a little off :wacko: , but endure with me. Thanks :D
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
LOL I would be on top of the world if Aroon (Aum) kissed me. She said yes! OooOoo
awww your last paragraph is so sad, foretelling us what's going to happen.
LOVE the clip!
 

pangiaxiong

sarNie Adult
I love it so much, the clips match your story so well. Hope you write more soon.
Thanks. I'm on my way right now! :D

LOL I would be on top of the world if Aroon (Aum) kissed me. She said yes! OooOoo
awww your last paragraph is so sad, foretelling us what's going to happen.
LOVE the clip!
Hahah...You're so funny. I would do the same thing. :p
 
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