Bothersome Bride [Aum|Ken]

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stardust_magic

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I know, I know. I never finish things :rolleyes: Honestly, I'm going to finish this one (if I have enough motivation). Anyways, I don't know the cast for this fanfict, but I do have the story outline (for my other fanficts, I lost their outlines while reformatting my laptop [because of a virus] so everything was lost). Well, I'm not going to give you the WHOLE storyline, 'cause that like beats the whole purpose of a fanfict :lol:

Bothersome Bride
"Jao Sao Sud Bpuan"
Patcharapa Chaicheur | Teeradeth Wongpuapan


credits to p'cecilia <3

"Sometimes, life throws you a curve ball.
You accept it, and move on.
But when things start to get personal, there is nowhere to hide.
When you grow to love someone, you would do anything to save them.
And then you do, out of all the love you have.
But you find out something about them, that makes you want to turn back.
Simply to forget...the desire.
But in truth, you just can't."​

Genre:
Romance | Drama | Comedy | Adventure

Cast:
Aum as Rattanarin
Ken as Athit
Bee as Janesuda

Storyline:
  • Came to p'eak because forced to by parents
  • She doesn't agree that her parents forced her because they and say she come on her own
  • P'eak know the truth but his parents like her
  • N'eak went to be p'eak as PA because she wants to annoy p'eak
  • P'eak's parents wants n'eak to marry their son
  • N'eak tries to act like it, but she's too naive to be believable
  • On the night of their marriage, n'eak gets "taken"
  • P'eak feels for her and tries to find her
  • When he finds her, they reunite
  • She thanks him, and the sleep together
  • The bad guys capture n'eak again...
I'm not telling you anymore, cause that's just like giving you the whole story...
 
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stardust_magic

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^^ LOL, where does it say beach house? :lol:

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Scene 1*
This scene starts off at the Aritrangkuls' house.

“No, Mom! I’m not going to that house!” Rattanarin screamed, tears running down her eyes.

“Why not, Thip? I tell you to go, YOU GO!” Daodara reminded.

Janesuda snickered. “Ya, P'Thip. Go. Get us money. And don’t come back.”

Rattanarin stared at her stepsister. “Why, N’Khem? You want me to go THAT bad?”

“Yes, I do. You’re annoying, useless, and so naive.” Janesuda replied, smiling at Daodara.

“Go, now. Now!” Daodara ordered, pushing Rattanarin away. “You’ll be happy there. They’re rich.”

Rattanarin shook her head. “I don’t even know who they are. Why should I go with them?”

Daodara sighed. “Thip, why are you so stupid? I’ll bring you there, and you’ll do as I say. Done.”

“But-”

“No buts, Thip! The Taechapanits aren’t picky. They’ll take in everyone. If you’re good enough, you might even get to be their daughter-in-law. Athit, their only son, is about the same age as you. How convenient!”

Rattanarin’s eyes were wide. “So you’re sending me to go after a guy? Mom!”

“Oh, come on.”

“Mom, if I go, will you miss me?”

“Of course, now shut up and get us some money ok?” Daodara replied.

Rattanarin turned to Janesuda. “Khem, be a good girl, ok? I’ll be back.”

Janesuda sighed. “Shut up. Just go already.”

“Khem-”

Daodara pushed Rattanarin out of the cottage and into the awaiting Taxi. “Go, Sah.”

Rattanarin looked down to her toes. “Yes, Mom.”
 
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stardust_magic

P.I.N.K.Y
Oh, LOL :lol:

You have any idea for who the n'eak, p'eak, n'rai, and p'rai should be? Cause I'm out of clues. But I don't want the ATeam, so many people are writing that already. And no Ann + Ken either, it's getting boring to see. Something fresh, new. I donno, can't think.
 
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stardust_magic

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You know the weird thing about this?

I don't know who Pong and Ae really are. I mean, I've seen them on TV, heard of them, but never really done any research about any of them. As for Tangmoe, I don't think she'll fit. Who knows, I might just leave the slots blank and let people choose whoever they want. Let them use their imagination.

Or, I could always get back to Pinky and Win :lol:
 
lady0fdarkness

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
that's a good idea... I'm reading it right now.. let's see who I can imagine.

EDIT:

hmm...... I see Noon as Rattanarin.

and AumP as the step sister. lol
 
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stardust_magic

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Oooh, this next one is pretty long...

Scene 2*
Rattanarin has arrived and is now in front of the Taechapanit estate.

A maid comes running down at the sound of a ringing bell. She sighs, and looks through the hole. "Who is it?" She hollers.

Rattanarin takes a step back, frightened by the loud noise. "My name is Rattanarin Aritrangkul. Khun Petchsee is expecting me ka." Rattanarin waits for an answer.

The maid introduces herself, thinking back to this morning...

"Yes, Khun Petchsee?" Karin asks, confused.

Petchsee turns. "I found this girl, and I opted to kind of adopt her. But she'll help with everything around the house."

"What? What will Khun Athit say?" Karin asks again, her head spinning. "And when will she arrive?"

Petchsee replies, "I don't know what he'll say. Anyways, she'll arrive sometime in the afternoon."

"Name?"

"I think it was something like Rattanarin. I forgot the last name."

"Oh, ok..."

"Umm, is there something wrong?" Rattanarin asks Karin, her heart beating.

Karin snaps back to the present. "Uhh, nothing. Please do come in."

Rattanarin nods, smiling. She extended an arm. "You can call me Thip."

Karin smiles back, leading Rattanarin into the house.

Before they get there, they are stopped by a man. "Who is she, Karin?"

Rattanarin darts her eyes to the floor. This must be Khun Athit, the guy Mom was talking about...

Karin nervously answers, "She's Khun Petchsee's new something."

Athit's eyes were wide. "Huh, what? Why?"

Karin shakes her head. "I don't know. Anyways, I've got to be going. I need to call Khun Petchsee down."

Athit nods. "You go do work. I'll take this girl up to Mom..."

Rattanarin smiles at Athit. "Thanks." She squeaks.

"Whatever. Who are you again?"

"My name is Rattanarin Aritrangkul. Friends call me Thip."

"Oh ya, I'm Athit. KHUN Athit."

Rattanarin rolls her eyes. "Yes, of course Khun Athit." And Mom thought I liked these type of guys? Puh-lease...

Athit turns. "I saw that. If you want to SURVIVE here, don't do that again."

Rattanarin nods bitterly.

Athit walks up the flight of stairs, constantly looking to see if Rattanarin was following him. When they got to the master bedroom, he knocks on his mother's doors. "Mom, the Thip girl is here."

Rattanarin purposely steps on Athit's foot.

"Ow! What was that for?"

"I might not be all mighty, but I have the right to dislike people referring to me as 'the Thip girl', ok?"

"Jeez, ok." Athit turns back to the door. "Mom, Rattanarin something has arrived."

Rattanarin tries stepping on Athit's foot again, but misses. She elbows him instead.

"Ow! Fine, fine." Athit once again turns to the door. "Mom, RATTANARIN ARITRANGKUL is here."

A second later, Petchsee opens the door. "Yes, Dan?"

"This gi-, I mean Rattanarin has arrived."

Petchsee eyes Rattanarin carefully.

Rattanarin clasps her hands together into a 'wai'. "Hello, Khun Petchsee."

"Sawasdee ja, Rattanarin."

Rattanarin blushes. "Please, call me Thip."

"Ja, noo Thip. I see you've met my son?"

Rattanarin smiles sweetly, snickering at Athit. "Of course, Khun Petchsee."

"Oh, good." She turns to Athit. "Bring her to the spare guest room, Dan."

Athit's eyes were wide. "GUEST ROOM?"

"Yes, guest room. Got a problem with that, Dan?"

Athit looks down to the floor. "Of course not, Mom."

"Good. Get going now, ok?"
 
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stardust_magic

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Umm, something different aa. Maybe CH7 n'eak and CH3 p'eak. LOL and CH5 n'rai. And like a mysterious p'rai. :lol:
 
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stardust_magic

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LOL hmmn maybe keke!!!

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So, I've come to a random conclusion. Aum's the n'eak (don't ask me why), and the p'eak is Ken (haha, see it's different). As for the n'rai, it's Bee (I got hooked to Kwam Lup Kaung Superstar), and the p'rai...is mysterious!
 
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stardust_magic

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Scene 3*
Athit is taking Rattanarin to the guest room.

Rattanarin turns and faces Athit. "You heard your mom, Khun Athit. Take me to my room!"

Athit turns away, sighing. "Thip, will you shut up?"

"I was talking to you nicely..."

"No, you weren't." Athit pauses. "I bet you're like all the other people, forced to come here to get money."

Rattanarin bites her tongue. She shakes her head. "I came here willingly!"

"I saw the look on your face. If you don't want to be here, don't."

"But I do. Just because YOU don't like me doesn't mean that I have to want to go back home. I like it here; big house, and lots of room."

Athit shakes his head. "So this is what you want? Oh, great. Perfect." They reach the guest room. Athit takes out a bunch of keys and tries all of them.

"What are you doing?" Rattanarin asks, confused.

Athit turns his head. "What do you THINK I am doing, Thip? Playing?"

Rattanarin shakes it off as if nothing happened. "Nevermind."

The door clicks and Athit opens the door. He leads Rattanarin inside, and shows her around. "This, is the bathroom."

"I know, I know. I'm not blind."

"I'M SHOWING YOU AROUND. STOP BEING SO RUDE."

Rattanarin grins. "I'm not rude. I'm just curious. Anyways, you can go already. I am capable of taking care of myself."

"Take care? I don't think so..."

Rattanarin steps on Athit's foot once more. Rethorically, she asks in return: "You think so now?"

Athit grunts and walks out the room, slamming the door.

Rattanarin smiles at herself. She unpacks all her things and heads outside to the balcony. She went to check the bathroom once more, satisfied with her new-found life. Even though she missed her home and family terribly, at least this wasn't prison. She would get her mom some money, but she was not marrying Athit, for whatever reason. He was just...weird. No. Not weird. There was just a personality that was not in the dictionary; no one knew how to describe it, but Athit had it.
 
cecilia

cecilia

Staff member
Stardust said:
LOL hmmn maybe keke!!!

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So, I've come to a random conclusion. Aum's the n'eak (don't ask me why), and the p'eak is Ken (haha, see it's different). As for the n'rai, it's Bee (I got hooked to Kwam Lup Kaung Superstar), and the p'rai...is mysterious!
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muahah. i was thinking of bee as n'rai b/c of klksuperstar too but i'm like, hm. n'grace probably pick some short p'ek and bee will tower over them. so nope. Lol ..

i didn't expect aum with ken. so random but good pair .. nice pair to make fanfiction cover .. i'll make one for you ja.
 
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