Dance With Me

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dreams_x

sarNie Oldmaid
omg thanks.... harit just made a bet... haha.. we will see how far he can go
with it..... ken is so funny,...... ann is cute.... soraya likey him to... yay
 
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Napat01

sarNie Juvenile
Chapter5:

[Nurse] Dr.Napapong you have a patient.
[Soraya] Thanks.
(While in the waiting room.........)
[Ton] Hey Uncle Harit why are we here?
[Harit] (Hits Ton's head) Idiot we are here for
your check up! Remember!
[Ton] But I'm not sick!
[Harit] Act like it then!
[Ton] No you're mean and I don't want to do that
[Soraya] Ton Noralak!
[Ton] Here.
[Harit] Let's go
[Soraya] Oh hey Harit! I didn't know you were a father
[Harit] Oh no! Definatly not my son!
[Ton] And abosolutly not my father!
[Soraya] Aw..you're so cute! How old are you?
[Ton] I'm 7 ma'am
[Soraya] So polite! I have a 7 year old sister too!
[Ton] I bet she's just as beautiful as you are.
[Soraya] So you sweet talk to girls a lot don't you?
[Ton] No I learned them from (Harit covers his mouth)
[Harit] He learns is from my older brother. (Laughs)
[Soraya] Well let's get you checked up.
[Ton] Okay.
[Harit] Let's go.
[Soraya] Actually, Harit you stay out here, I think Ton can handle it.
[Ton] Yeah Uncle Harit stay out here, okay! ;)
[Harit] But....
(Soraya & Ton leaves)
[Harit] MAN! Ton you are no help! Hump!
(Inside)
[Soraya] Okay open your mouth
[Ton] Ah!
[Soraya] Okay let me check your breathing.
[Ton] So am I sick?
[Soraya] No. Not at all. Fine as a bee.
[Ton] And you're as pretty as a flower!
[Soraya] HEY! You know if you keep this up I bet
you can win a lot of girls!
[Ton] Naw..I don't want to be like (remembers what Harit said: "If you
say anything bad about me behind my back I'll make sure you never
see daylight again!")..my other Uncle. (fakes laugh)
[Soraya] Okay well just let me escort you out then.
[Harit] So how is he Soraya?
[Ton] You mean Dr.Napapong.
[Soraya] He seems fine to me, don't know why he came for a check up.
[Ton] Well it's because I heard Uncle Harit say that he came to check you out.
[Harit] HEY TON! (Goes to hit him)
[Soraya] HEY HARIT! This is my working office. Don't abuse kids! Why are
you going to hit this sweet innocent boy here!
[Ton] Auntie early he hit me too. It still hurts right here. (Points to head)
[Soraya] (Kisses Ton's head) Aw..sweetie does your uncle abuse you a lot?
[Ton] Yes ma'am, it's good to have an adult we has sympathy for us kids.
[Soraya] Don't worry Ton, next time if your uncle hits you just tell me okay.
[Ton] Yes ma'am. :D
[Soraya] Harit, you shouldn't abuse kids, they hurt like you do too.
[Harit] But I.......
[Ton] It's okay Auntie, we'll leave now and not burden you anymore.
[Soraya] You are such a thoughtful kid.
[Ton] Good-bye now (Motions for her to bend down & pecks her cheek.)
(Soraya returns kiss) Goodbye now!
[Harit] What about me!
[Soraya] Sure!
(Harit closes eyes waiting and smiles) :D
(Soraya lifts someone's dog up; he licks Harit)
[Harit] Hm...you're kisses are slimmy! (Opens eyes)
AHHHHHHHH!
[Soraya n Ton] (Laughs) :lol:
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sarNie Juvenile
Sorry for not updating for so long. Last week of school and many things to do. Maybe I'll do an update on the weekends!
 
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Napat01

sarNie Juvenile
Chapter 5 Part 2:

(While in Harit's car, he hits Ton's head)

[Ton] HEY! What was that for abusing kids like this!
I am going to report you to my mom!

[Harit] Ton you are no help. Always making me look bad.

[Ton] Who told you to be mean to me and besides you
did that one your own w/o my help.

[Harit] I am not mean, you are just annoying, brat. I told you
to stick to my plans.

[Ton] Well I didn't want to help a terrible person like you.

(Attempts to hit Ton again)

[Ton] EH EH! You touch me again and I'll tell not only my
mom but Dr.Napapong!

[Harit] Like you'll ever see her again.

[Ton] We'll see.

[Harit] Whatever.

[Ton] Sound like a girl.

(Harit hits his head.)

(Back at Soraya's office)

[Nurse 1] Did you see that hottie!

[Nurse 2] The one with the adorable nephew?!

[Nurse 1] He's probably such a caring uncle!

[Nurse 2] I wish I could meet a man like him one day!

[Soraya] Girls what are we gossipping about this time?

[Nurse 1] Nothing Soraya

[Nurse 2] Yes AUNTIE!

[Soraya] Hey you two! (A bit embrassed. :wub: )

[Nurse 2] You are so lucky, his nephew has already claimed
you as his AUNTIE!

[Nurse 1] Auntie Rangsimunt!

[Soraya] HEY! (laughs) Looks are deceiveing so don't
always believe what you see.

[Nurse 1] Whatever, Soraya.

(Soraya walks out annoyed)

(She hears the nurses laughter)

(Hours later)

[Soraya] Oh no! I have to meet my sister at the airport!

[Nurse 2] We'll take care of everything, Auntie.

Soraya rolls her eyes, smiling. :rolleyes:

(Airport)

[Soraya] There she is!

[Voice 2] Hey there my baby sister!

[Soraya] And don't say anything to your older sister!

[Voice 2] Sorry but I love my baby girl more!

[Faye] Hi there my lovely sister!

[Soraya] HEY! You two are being very mean here!

[Voice 2] Sorry!

[Voice 1] I'm sorry indeed I did not get to come in time for your arrival.

[Voice 2] Hello there stranger!

[Voice 1] Stranger! I'm hurt to know that you don't remember me!

[Voice 2] Of course I don't!

[Voice 1] Well I remember you (Two mysterious people revealed!) Rita Napapong.

[Rita] Of course I remember you Rome Rangsimunt

Sorry a short update. Maybe I'll write more tonight or tomorrow.
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sarNie Juvenile
Chapter 6:

Setting: At Club 6

She could spot him easily sitting at the bar.
He saw her approach wearing this: Outfit
[Harit] We meet again Chanel.

[Chanel] Yes we do Harit (sits by him and
places her hands on his knees)

[Harit] How have you been lately?

[Chanel] Good what about you? (Sitting down by him)

[Harit] Martini for the lady please.

[Chanel] You still remember?

[Harit] How can I not. (He hands her the drink)

[Chanel] Thank You, and finishes it in one gulp

[Harit] You have been practicing

[Chanel] Not really just stress

[Harit] (He eyed her carefully, she looked great even
if she is stress very delicious better than her model photos)
She say how he was looking at her and knew what he was thinking.
He didn't waste time, finished his drink and led her to the private room.
People walking by could hear her moaning to his love making.
He couldn't get enough of her.
----------------------While still at the airport--------------------
[Soraya] Rome Rangsimunt?

[Rome] Yes?

[Soraya] I thought your last name was Patchata?

[Rome] (Smiling) Oh no most of the time I just use my
mother's maiden name

[Rita] Yeah so every girl this playboy knocks up
won't be able to find him!

[Rome] Rita, I'm hurt you would say such thing about me.

[Rita] Hm..suits you right

[Soraya] So your brother is Harit?

[Rome] You know my brother?

[Soraya] Yes, he's my brother's friend and took his
nephew, Ton to my office today.

[Rome] That cunning bastard!

[Rita] What was that?

[Rome] Oh nothing, why don't we hit the club?

[Rita] Sure

[Soraya] I should go home

[Rome] Come with us and celebrate Rita's homecoming!

[Rita] Yeah Soraya you always stay home!

[Soraya] Sure let's get going then.

[Rita] I'll drive!
------------------Train Station--------------------
[Faye] There he is!

[Ken] Mark over here!

[Mark] Hey KEN! FAYE! ANN!

[Ann] Hey Mark!

(Everyone gives him a hug)

[Mark] Where's Soraya?

[Ken] She's picking Rita up at the airport (grabs his things)

[Faye] How was school in Chiang Mai?

[Mark] Okay boring without a playing buddy though

[Ken] I hope Aunty and Uncle weren't harsh on you like me

[Mark] No they were the best!

[Ken] NOT FAIR! I never got that good of treatment

[Mark] Because you are not a cute twevle year old boy like me!

[Ann] Yeah you ugly beast! (Ken pinches her) OW!

[Mark] Um...Ken

[Ken] Yes?

[Mark] Are you and Ann going out?

[Both scream] NO!

[Faye] YES!
He covers her mouth and she steps on his foot.

[Ken] OUCH! (Hopping on his right foot) what was that for!

[Faye] Don't cover my mouth (spits) probably didn't wash
his hands! YUCK!

[Mark] What was that Faye?

[Faye] I saw Ken outside Soraya's door listening to her
conversation with Ann confessing her love for him to Soraya
he jumped up and down whispering YES! YES! and cheering,
he looked so happy and said to her door : I LOVE YOU TOO, ANN!

[Ken] FAYE! (While Ann blushes)

[Mark] Aw..Ken just confess your love for her!

[Ann] Why don't we go out to eat!

[Faye] YES!

[Ken] Where to Mark?

[Mark] How about....Dara Thai?

[Ann] Okay let's go!


*Part 2 will take place at Club 6
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sarNie Juvenile
Ladies the truth I haven't been writing in here is because my computer
keeps dying and erasing my things, I got annyoed and quit for a while
but not I'm back on here. :)

Chapter Six Part 2:

When they arrived the line was long probably reached the next street.
Rita couldn't stand these long lines, very impatient. Rita: "You bring us
to a popular place that probably take all night to get into." Soraya: "Stop
complaining Rita.", Rome: "Yeah listen to your older sister, I have connections."
He walked up to the security, showed them something and they let them in.
Rita: "Show off.", Rome: "Only for you.", Soraya: "Okay stop it you two."
The place was huge, no wonder people wanted to come so bad, celebrities
everywhere. They found seats and order drinks. While Harit was done with Chanel,
she gave him her room number and directions to her hotel. As soon as she left
he threw them away, Harit doesn't chase after girls plus he only need women
for pleasure nothing more. He went back to the club, Harit thought he spot
someone familar, no way can't be Soraya, my lucky day. She was with Rome and
someone else, probably his date. Rome saw Harit approach, Rome: "Rita, this is
Harit my baby brother." Rita: "Nice to meet you.", Harit: "Pleasures all mine."
Rome: "I'm sure you already know Soraya.", Harit: "Hello Docter.", Soraya: "Just
Soraya in public.", Harit: "I never thought a docter like you like these place."
Soraya: "Just celebrating with my sister and Rome.", Rome: "Soraya I forgot to
metion, my mom has a dance studio, she's looking for a couple to help her out
maybe you and Harit can do it.", Soraya: "You dance?", Harit: "Well, who taught
Ken?", Soraya: "(Laughs) I'll think about it.", "Soraya." They turn to a handsome man
staring at them. Soraya: "Chen!", Rita: "Chen!", Harit: "Who?", Soraya: "Chen is my
singing partner at Anne's club.", Harit: "So are you two boyfriend and girlfriend?",
Soraya: "No, just partners that's all.", Chen: "I'm hurt Soraya, we're more than that."
Soraya: "Stop joking around Chen, so how come you are here by yourself?", Chen:
"Just looking for some girls to hang around since you don't claim me.", Rita: "You
can be my boyfriend.", Rome: "No you are with me.", Rita: "Says who?", Rome: "Me."
He grabs her on to the dance floor. Harit: "So Soraya, what about the offer?", Chen: "What
offer?", Soraya: "Oh Harit needs a dancing partner.", Chen: "So you are leaving me to
be with him, I'm dying Soraya.", Soraya: "Stop it Chen, I'm not leaving you. But yes to your
offer Harit, I haven't dance in a while." Harit: "Good." Rome and Rita came back, so girls
followed them asking for his name and number but he shooed them awaya saying he
was already with his wife. Rita elbowed him, after a while Chen left. Soraya: "Rita I think
we should go.", Harit: "Actually Rita would you mind driving Rome home?", Rita: "What
about you?", Harit: "I came with a friend, she, he already left." Rita: "So you can just
drive the both of you home.", Rome: "No, I want RITA! ONLY RITA OR I WON'T GO HOME!"
He grabbed onto her. Soraya: "Rita I think you should drive him home, I'll follow." Harit: "I can
keep you company Soraya." Soraya: "It's okay I can go by myself.", Rita: "Actually Harit I think
you should go with her, just to be safe."
 
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Napat01

sarNie Juvenile
Chapter Seven:

They put Rome into his car and Rita drove off. Soraya led the way to her car she got into the driver seat. Harit: "So you aren't going to let me drive huh?" Soraya: "Well this is my car and secondly I don't need others to drive for me." Harit: "So Soraya tell me about you, why do you like singing so much?", Soraya: "Maybe because my mom was a singer, my father was a dancer. They met in a club, but I think it's because of my mom.", Harit: "What about dancing?", Soraya: "People say it's probably our parents that influenced us, for Ken he dances, Rita likes to sing, Mark can sing, and Faye can dance." Harit: "What about you?", Soraya: "I love to sing but dancing, I've never really took interest. My aunt told me once that I was the gifted one, both dancing and singing I got from my parents. Though I'm shy I don't think I dance well." Harit: "How come you accept my offer?", Soraya: "(Smile) Because dancing is always something I've wanted to do my father encourage me but
Ken keeps making fun of me so I stop.", Harit: "I'm sure you're a wonderful dancer."

In Rome's car...... Rita: "ROME! Stop trying to give me a lap dance. I'll crash your car.", Rome: "I want you Rita! You smell so good tonight.", Rita: "Shut up you playboy don't give me that crap.", Rome: "Rita, I'm serious there is only you..forever." Rita: "If you don't stop I'll pull over and beat that mouth of yours." Rome: "Rita why do you have to be so mean to me?" Rita: "Shut up I can't concentrate." She wouldn't accept him, during high school he would go around flirting with girls trying to knock some poor girl up. She wouldn't let that happen to him, how dare he try and lie that she's the one she'll cut off his friend. Soraya arrived first and was waiting for Rita, what were those two doing? Rita pulled up and helped Rome get inside. Rita: "We are going now." Rome held onto her hand, "Rita don't go come wipe me down first please." Rita: "No way I don't want to be with you I'm leaving it's late." Soraya: "Rita just clean him up or we'll never leave." The maid went and got her a towel and water,
Harit carried him upstairs and went back down to keep Soraya company. Rita: "Stupid playboy tries every trick to get me up here." She unbutton his shirt, whoa my lord did he have one yummy chest, a six pack and muscles. Okay Rita, calm down many other girls probably saw this before too. Rome: "Rita, I promise there is only you don't go." He grabbed onto her hands
and pushed her down on the bed he kissed her lips. Rita pushed him off, "YOU PLAYBOY! HOW DARE YOU LIE TO ME I DON'T CARE HOW DRUNK YOU ARE!" She kicked his friend and left the room. Rome held on, "It's okay I know you like me that's why you're so embarrassed."

Soraya: "Rita, what happen? How come your clothes are...." Rita: "It's not what you think that jerk!" She wiped her lips said their goodbyes and left. Harit laughed, he too got a kiss.
 
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