Dance With Me

Napat01

sarNie Juvenile
Okay this is my first story. Hope you like it!​

Prologue: "Okay I need to buy something for Faye, then stop by Anne's hotel, and then go home." Soraya thinks to herself not paying much attention to the stranger driveing next to her. Well, how could he see, Harit's windows were black. Harit not really paying attention finds his eyes lingering onto a beautiful lady next to his car. "Wow, gorgeous." HONK! He quickly snap back and follows her. She goes into the Macy's parking lot, Harit waits for her to go in first, then follows.


Characters:

Soraya Napapong:
Age:25
Occupation: Docter
Hobbies: Reading, Working Out, Singing, and Playing Piano
Description: A hard working girl, who has many hobbies and loves her family. She is the second oldest of five and respects others. Though many people think she lives a perfect life, there is one thing that is missing, someone to love. Everyone around her seems to have all the luck. She is conservative of her body never showing too much. She has an older brother, two younger sisters, and another younger brother. At times when she is stressed out, Soraya likes to go sing at her friend Anne's hotel/club.

Harit Rangsimunt
Age:26
Occupation: CEO
Hobbies: Flirting and flattering others
Description: Self-centered play boy, growing up as the youngest of the family Harit gets whatever he wants. All the girls fall for him, but he ignores it only playing around with a few of the prettier ones. He likes to go out clubbing and is rude to others even though he is wrong most of the time. There are three older siblings and he sometimes takes advice from his nephew. Sometimes when Harit gets mad, drink 'til he sleeps.



Chapter One:

"Who is she?" Not once in Harit's life had this question pop in his mind, never had he wonder about a girl. For some reason he decided to follow her. She parked into the Macy's parking lot. He waited enough time for her to go in and followed.

"Dr. Soraya Napapong! Over here!", her friend Anne yelled.​
"Hm...Soraya, and a doctor too...interesting..." (pretends to look at jewelry)
"You didn't have to shout so loud, now everyone knows who I am."​
"Is that so bad that I want my friend to find someone?", Anne teased. :D
"Haha...very funny but I want a man, not some weirdo from Macy's."​
"Hey, look at that hottie over there checking out the jewelry."​
"Stop looking at him, Anne. (Secretly admiring him herself)"​
"Oh what harm will it do? It's good to see a decent guy."​
"Checking me out aren't you ladies? Hm...Wonder what Miss Napapong is thinking?"
"Stop your kidding and let's go I need to go pick up Faye."​
"Could that be a daughter or sister?"

Anne and Soraya pay their things and leave.
Harit is already outside waiting for them to leave.
He follows Soraya to Faye's school.​

"Hey sweetie, how was school today?"
"Okay."
"Soraya, can we go out to eat somewhere, I'm hungry."
"Sure. Where do you want to go to?"
"How about that really good restaurant in Auntie Anne's hotel."​
"So she isn't a mother. Good to know fresh meat."

Poster Credit: Aikoden
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
.. wrong section... post it in the fanfiction area... or move the topic..

hehe but SWEET.. another harit n soriya fic xp...
 

Napat01

sarNie Juvenile
Chapter 2:

He follows Soraya to Anne's hotel and goes into the club hoping to find her. Harit decides to enjoy himself by drinking and suddenly sees someone he knows. It was Nat, his old girlfriend. He had proposed to her before, but she rejcted and married someone else. Broke his heart in two and started his play boy career. He wanted to go over but remembered that her husband was an alcoholic no good father and didn't want to embrass her. So long ago since they met, four yours have gone by fast. Harit just admired her from far away.​
"Now take your food and we'll go up to where your Auntie is."​
"There is my favorite niece! How have you been?​
"School was boring. But I did see a handsome man staring at my beautiful sister!"​
"Stop lying Faye, there was no man around to look at me."​
"I don't know, you are beautiful like Faye said. Maybe you have a stalker!"​
"Whatever you two."​
"Why don't you go sing us a song Kay! (Soraya's stage name)"​
"Auntie why does Soraya have a stage name?"​
"So all the perverts who wants a piece of her doesn't know who she is!" teased Anne.​
"Well then maybe Kay will go sing a song for you two!"​


"Ladies and gentlemen we have a guest singer here. She's here to blow your minds away for those who have not heard her before! So let's welcome Kay!"

"Kay? Hm...how American but doesn't matter still gorgeous in that light."

Soraya sings Nat Myria's Ruk Mai Chuay Arai. If anyone wants to hear it here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ne0TtoZ_L5A...feature=related

"Wow she's excellent." Harit thinks.
"Hey lady that was great, just shake some more next time!"
"Yeah and show some more too, don't need to conserve that body of yours!"
Suddenly Soraya feels a hand grabbing her wrist.
"Hey let go of me you pervert."
"Now, you don't need to be afraid sweet thing, just want to talk to you."
"I don't want to speak to you."
"Come one don't act like that doll face, I know you like me too."
"That's enough!" someone shouts from the corner.
Harit stands up and protects Soraya like a shield.
"The lady said let go. Now leave."
"Who are you to order us around like this, like your the owner."
"He's not, but I am now leave."
 

Napat01

sarNie Juvenile
Chapter 3:

[Guy 1] Fine we'll leave
[Guy 2] No need for security sweet thang!
[Ann] (Talks to security guy) Make sure to not let them in again.
"Yes ma'am."
[Ken:] Hello Harit.
[All] Ken.
[Faye] Big brother!
[Ken] Hey sweetheart! What is everyone standing around here for? Let's get to the restaurant, I'm starving.
[Ann] You're always starving, you pig.
[Ken] What was the Ann?
[Ann] Nothing Ken!

At the restaurant......

[Ann] When did you get back?
[Ken] Just today. I saw Harit at the airport and I think he saw me too because he followed me everywhere. At Macy's and to here. Man dude you are good! You stalker! Who would have thought we would have come back on the same day.
[Soraya] Sorry Ken, you have not introduced us to your friend yet.
[Ken] Sorry I was caught up in the moment. Harit, these are my sisters Faye and Soraya. And over there is the big mouth boss who thinks she's all that, my girl.
[Ann] (Pinches Ken) Who here is your girl and big mouth bossy huh?
[Ken] OW! I was just kidding man scratch the bossy, I mean abusive.
[Ann] (Punches him)
[Ken] Man you've been working out!
[Soraya] So how do you two know each other?
[Harit] Ken and I went to high school and study abroad together. Also he took dancing lessons from my mom's studio.
[Ken] HARIT! I thought we were going to keep that a secret!
[Harit] OOPS! Sorry! Forgot.
[Ann] Oh so that's how all of a sudden this idiot knows how to dance.
[Ken] Hey! I'm no idiot here!

Soraya thinks to herself: " Hm... he's somewhat handsome and a nice guy. I wonder if he has anyone yet?"
Harit is thinking: " Man this is one beautiful fine woman. I wonder if a if she has a lover yet?"

[Ken] What are you two staring at each other for? Look at me too Harit! I'm just as beautiful as Soraya, only better!
[Ann] Yeah and your mouth too.
[Ken] What was that!
[Ann] Nothing...you idiot.

Ken thinks: "Why is he being such a gentlemen, dude if you like just say one of your stupid cheesy lines you always you, what's wrong with you, playboy?"
Ann thinks: " Maybe he isn't a stalker after all what a small world."
Watching from far away an old lover Cindy, replayed what happend.
"...the lady said let go...."
He never used that tone especially with a beautiful woman. Harit why the sudden change? If I married you then what would my life have been today? Maybe it's best if you meet a wonderful lady like Soraya to help you.
In the restaurant corner someone is thinking to themselves devilishly "Wow, I don't need to do anything my plan is going by fine."

[Harit] Thanks everyone for a wonderful dinner but I must leave now. Nice meeting you all.
[Bye handsome!
[Soraya]Faye.
[Harit]It's alright. Bye (looks at Soraya)...beautiful.
[Ken] Goodye Sweetheart! I'll miss you!
[Ann] Ken you are so gay!
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
Ken is hilarious. What a cliffhanger and suspenseful with the person in corner.
 

Napat01

sarNie Juvenile
Chapter 4:

[A voice] Harit wait up!
[Harit] Oh hey there!
[Voice] All I get is a HEY THERE!
[Harit] Sorry bro!
[Voice] It's okay. So you just got back today?
[Harit] About late noon or so.
[Voice] So you decide the club and girls not your family? That's cold bro.
At least visit me first man, the girls are for later.
[Harit] What do you want?
[Voice] Nothing man, I just want to see what my little brother has been up to.
[Harit] First of all you always cared about girls before us, also you never mind
it if I always went to the club. What's the matter?
[Voice] Well, you see I saw you back there earlier. Dude that girl was HOT! Man why
didn't you make your move, acting like a gentlemen back there!
[Harit] .....I....don't know
[Voice] What! Dude! Soraya is HOT! How can you not make a single move?
[Harit] Wait you know her?
[Voice] Yeah, her sister is one fine lady! Man she burns me up!
[Harit] Get to your point here.
[Voice] Chill bro. I have a bet.
[Harit] Okay.
[Voice] Do you think you can get that girl to fall in love with you?
[Harit] What? Why that sounds dumb.
[Voice] I guess you are chicken! I know why, because when you are around here
there is just something that won't let you unleash those playboys skill! (Laughs)
[Harit] Shut up, I can do it, and you know what I bet that I can get her to marry me too.
[Voice] Whoa bro! Hold up there no one said anything about marriage, but it does make
this bet more interesting. Okay let's shack on it, but if you lose then I get a shot with her.
[Harit] Whatever she's just some girl.
[Voice] I don't know, I mean she is beautiful and you may just fall in love with her.
[Harit] Yeah right.

With that the brothers shook hands. Harit hates it when he makes fun of him, like he can't get some
dumb girl to "fall in love". I have all the skills I need. You will never be able to resit my charms Soraya.


Sorry Chapter 4 is somewhat short. I'll add part 2 later. :D
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
gasp they are going to bet on Soraya :( sad...but I hope Harit realize that it's a mistake to do that, but at least they will fall in love
 

swirlblue

sarNie Adult
Can't wait for more. It sad he thinks he can play with her emotions and get her to fall in love with him though.
 

Napat01

sarNie Juvenile
Chapter 4 Part 2:

While back at the Napapong home.....

[Ann] Soraya can I come in?
[Soraya] Yes
(Ann enters)
[Ann] What are you thinking about?
[Soraya] Nothing much.
[Ann] Oh..I know it's Harit huh?
[Soraya] NO!
[Ann] EH! Soraya has finally got a crush on someone!
[Soraya] Stop kidding around Ann. (blushes)
[Ann]I see blushes and I can feel you are embrassed!
[Soraya] (yells) Ann LOVES Ken! Ann LOVES Ken!
(Ann covers Soraya's mouth)
[Ann] Be quiet you big mouth! If your brother hears I will kill you.
[Soraya] How will he? He's so deaf!
[Ann] Soraya.
[Soraya] Fine, fine I'm sorry, na Ann?
[Ann] Good.

While outside the bedroom Ken hears everything; "...Ann LOVES Ken....Ann LOVES Ken..."
I wonder for how long now?

---------------------------------------------------------While at the Rangsimunt home---------------------------------------------------------

[A child voice] Uncle HARIT! Wake up, wake up! (Hits Harit w/pillow)
[Harit] TON! Stop it now. I'm sleeping.
[Ton] (Counts his fingers as he is listing)
My mom said for you to wake up, take a shower, go downstairs, and eat.
[Harit] Tell your mom later and get off me you fatty!
[Ton] I'm not FAT! My mom says that if you keep up with your habits you will....
(whispers in his face) DIE!
[Harit] (Gets up quickly) HEY! Who told you that?!
[Ton] MY MOM! She said that if all you do is eat and sleep late and go to parties then you will DIE!
[Harit] (Grabs Ton and scratches his head) DIE HUH?
[Vicky] HARIT! Stop that now! (Grabs Ton)
[Harit] Hey what have you been telling your kid about me huh?!
[Vicky] Oh nothing, just to prepare for his Uncle Harit's funeral in the next 2 weeks!
[Harit] HEY! Who told you I'm going to die huh!
[Vicky] Oh all you die is lie around here and go partying sooner or later, you're going to get
someone's wife pregnant then the husbands going to come after you!
[Harit] Whatever!
[Vicky] (Mocks) WHATEVER!
[Ton] Mom let's go Uncle Harit needs to prepare for his funeral.
[Vicky] Laughs.
[Harit] Yeah get out.
----------------------------------------------------------------Flashback--------------------------------------------------------------------------

"Mom I'm here."
"Sit here sweetheart."
"Where's dad?"
"He's in a meeting now."
"What did you need me for today?"
"I want you to do a task for me."
"Anything."
"Are you sure you are up to it?"
"Of course, anything for my mom."
"I want you to change your brother. Get him to marry someone. I don't
like his playboy attitude and rudeness. I can't tolerate w/it anymore."
"How?"
"If you do, your father and I will give you the company."
"But mom, why me?"
"Because I know you can manipulate him into doing anything."
"Any girl?"
"Not just any woman. I want you to find someone decent for him. Someone
who can really change his ways. She must be have good qualities."
"Okay."
"Good."
"Hm...everything is falling correctly in line I didn't even need to find anyone,
soon I will be the owner of Rangsimunt CO. You don't know what you are
up against little brother."
 
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