Five Roses- FINAL CHAPTER *COMPLETE*

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
good update...

Okay brainstorm time....

So I assume that Alak got a case of mistaken identity and mistakenly mixed up Ann and Rita. Rita is the sister, not Ann!! Whoohoo.. I have a feeling that Ken will fall in love with his "sister," but it turns out that she's really not.

And I wonder how Chakrit and Ploy will hook up?? Chakrit is a flirt!!

Can't wait for more. Update soon, my dear.

lol...by the way.. your sig made me want some SUSHI!
 

nikki1786

LizQuen
this is not final yet.... i have to choose which will i use for Ken's character here... if you have read his description... mmm... i cant remember what chapter was that... but anyway, im waiting for my friend to finish his editing on Ken.

for now, this is my version Ken... i told you his hair is messy and long until shoulder.


dont worry guys... he'll definitely have makeover in this story... :)
 

redrose3192

sarNie Egg
Five Rose is so great, I can't wait for the next chapter. Ken is so mysterious and intense. When he played the piano then after hinted to Aff about his unrequitted love, I was in tears. The piano music with the story is just pure genius. Please keep up the good work!
 

nikki1786

LizQuen
good update...

Okay brainstorm time....

So I assume that Alak got a case of mistaken identity and mistakenly mixed up Ann and Rita. Rita is the sister, not Ann!! Whoohoo.. I have a feeling that Ken will fall in love with his "sister," but it turns out that she's really not.

And I wonder how Chakrit and Ploy will hook up?? Chakrit is a flirt!!

Can't wait for more. Update soon, my dear.

lol...by the way.. your sig made me want some SUSHI!
i change my siggy now... i cant take it anymore... lol :lol:

i'm so hook on this, please update soon...keep really interesting..
i will.. .thanks for reading it... :) more upcoming scenes... and so much for getting to know the characters as well... :)

Five Rose is so great, I can't wait for the next chapter. Ken is so mysterious and intense. When he played the piano then after hinted to Aff about his unrequitted love, I was in tears. The piano music with the story is just pure genius. Please keep up the good work!
i was thinking about that a long time ago... i want Ken being mysterious... a thought of being a mad boss....

omg that how ken looks like hehe lol.. xp .. muahaha.. i wanna see his make over xp..
its still not final... i just posted only for no reason... i have to choose... i wanna see my friend's manipulation... :)
 

nikki1786

LizQuen
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it was already dark when Ann was brought to the remote island, at that moment when she was brought and lock to the dark room... she woke up. "where am i???", she said... feeling dizzy as she was holding her head. she then remember what happened awhile ago, she was grabbed by two unknown men. she get her bag to get her cellphone, but it was already drained... she doesnt have any charger. then a voice came out of nowhere "even if you call... there's no signal", she was wondering where that voice came from. she look at the big window, lightning strikes as she saw a reflection of man standing near at the window, she cant see him so clearly because the lights were off and only the lightning outside is enough to understand that there was man in this room.

she got frighten and didnt know exactly what to do "who...who... who are you!?! where am i!?! why did you ki...ki-kidnap me!?!", she started to move back... she knows that she's in danger right now and the man was getting closer and closer to her. "dont come any closer!", she threatened him but actually she's the one who has to be threaten... the man stop when she said so. "Ann Thabchumpon...", he said her name with sadness in his tone, but for Ann it just makes her scare more.

Ann: what do you want from me!?! why did you kidnap me!?! (moving back, until she felt that she's already against the wall.)

Ann fainted all of a sudden, fear overcome her... she easily get nervous and lose consciousness in the middle of the situation.

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she wonder if where was Ken, she's been waiting for how many hours.... lunch has pass by and now its already dark. the smokey clouds turned in dark and the dancing lights at night suddenly alive. Aff suppose to meet Ken today for their plan, when she woke up... she went straight to the place where they have to meet. she's already pissed off, she wanted to get away and stay in a far away place. when her phone rang, she hurriedly get into her bag, she knew it was Ken.

Aff: where are you!?! i've been waiting for you here for how many hours.
Ken: im not going anymore....
Aff: but-
Ken: let's just say... that i fulfill your wish.
Aff: what??? i dont understand you...
Ken: but you still owe me...
Aff: how am i gonna suppose to pay that??? you didnt even show up today. do you think i will really pay-
Ken: my brother is going to meet you tomorrow. i have to be away for now. goodbye. (he turned off the phone right away.)
Aff: he-hello??? hello?

she was really pissed, she waited for hours and in the end... he didnt came. oh, well... she just might think that it'll be good if Ken will not come back for now, she must find Joy before Ken comes back and get what he wants. how could a 'bestfriend' like Joy treated her like this... she's not even a gambler or fascinated to go to that place.

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at Thabchumpon's mansion....

Rita was called by her father to go to his study room. she wonder what will she and her father will talk about, it says 9 o'clock to their antique wall clock, but her father is still awake. she knock three times to the door and she heard her father said "its open", so she entered the study room.

Rita: you wanted to talk to me?
Ratsami: yes... please... (he offered a seat to Rita.) there's something i wanted to discuss about.
Rita: what is that?
Ratsami: i will not force you but im asking for your sister's sake... (he pause for a moment.) i still wanted you to offer the project that our family's planning to. i want you to be interior designer of the resort.
Rita: dad-
Ratsami: im not gonna force you... im just asking you for your sister's sake. the day she got accident, she's suppose to meet our architect. i met the architect awhile ago... i told him that i have to talk to my daughter first if she'll accept my offer and if not, well, then.... i will not force her.

for awhile, Rita was thinking about her sister Ploy in the hospital. if this project is for the sake of her sister, then she has to do it, she wanted course to have in good terms with her sisters... especially to Ploy.

Rita: ok, dad... i'll accept your proposal this time.
Ratsami: (he smiled to his daughter) that's my girl...

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"dude, that is what you call 'KARMA'....", Rome said while sitting at the couch, watching Chakrit walking back and forth. he cant forget their scene awhile ago in the hospital, especially when Rita's father saw him with someone... he doesnt really actually wanna break up with Rita, his words came out in a wrong way. "why did you do that to her anyway if you really didnt want to break up with her???", his cousin ask with amusement on his face. all the time Rome always his playboy cousin if he mess around.

Chakrit: its because her father saw me flirting with that nurse... actually, it wasnt my fault at all... the nurse always flirting at-
Rome: oh, c'mon dude... you can always avoid it, if you want to... actually, you should kick them out in your hospital. its not-
Chakrit: hey... that's enough. now, i just dont know what to do. i guess the only thing that could solve my problem is to go back in US. if i finally made up my mind, that's the time i'll talk to her.
Rome: i bet "Sugar's" father... will be your biggest problem.
Chakrit: Sugar???
Rome: i mean "Sugar's" father will be your greatest challenge...
Chakrit: wa-wait... who's "Sugar"?
Rome: dude, are you joking around? your FuBu lover's name is Sugar... she told me about it.


he just sigh to his cousin, he was still thinking about Rita and his scene awhile ago. she loved her, but he doesnt know if he love her. he was never sure to his relationships.... he wonders when he'll get serious with his relationship. he doesnt believe in commitments, he knew that his relationship with Rita will come to this.

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[while reading this scene only, please hear the piano piece "First Love" CLICK ME ]

Aff decided to went home after a long talk with Ken. she got home late and her whole family is already sleeping. since she was tired already, she decided to go get some sleep and tomorrow she'll meet with Por for another work. laying on the bed, she took out her phone in her bag and was looking at Aum's photos. their photos, when they were still hanging out. she doesnt know if she'll delete the photos with him.

Men can be wild sometimes, but they still have time to look for a right woman to them. she's not the right woman for him, she realize that Aum likes some silent type and modest type.... that's her sister's character. Ann Thabchumpon. she's different from her sister, she's serious in some ways and modest... but she wanted to get wild sometimes.

she end up still saving the photos. she doesnt know when she ends her hope, she knows that she's losing it already... but something inside her is still growing. hope.


[imagine the scene, while Aff was laying on her bed thinking about Aum... Aum was holding Ann's picture.... Ann was still unconscious and beside her is Ken, taking care of her. Rome get back to his work in his office and was holding on Rita's sketch... Rita was crying inside her room thinking about Chakrit... Chakrit being confuse and Ploy did have realization with her sister Rita and Chakrit's good deed. but it turned out that her father transfer her into other hospital and she wonder why.]
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the next day, everyone is in the dining room... except for Ploy and Ann. Ploy has been transferred into other hospital immediately when Ratsami wanted to after what happened, only Pat and Rita witness of what happened yesterday between Chakrit and their father. they cant start eating their breakfast if Ann hasnt come down yet, so Ratsami told the servant to go to Ann's room.

when the servant is back, she said that Ann was not inside of her room.

Ratsami: what???
Anchali: i thought Aum and Ann went home yesterday.
Pat: mom... maybe she stayed at Aum's. (Aff widen her eyes when Pat said those words, she doesnt know what she's thinking once they know if Ann is really staying at Aum.)

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meanwhile, Ann woke up laying on a king size bed... the room was big with the color that simply identifies the word purity. she, herself cant describe how the room was filled with silence. the white bed sheet covers, the white curtains, the white side tables of both sides of the bed. at left corner of the room, was a hanging white clock, with the roman numerals in it. she knew it was expensive. she get up on her bed and walk through the right corner, where it leads to the bathroom. amazement in her eyes when the bathroom was specially designed in romanesque style, she check out the bathtub and has white petals in it.

yes, the room is fully white. but how come last night was like a nightmare to her? she could actually remember the silhouette of a man getting closer to her, then she suddenly remember again that she was kidnap.... and brought to this place? she must be mistaken.

she heard knock three times, it came from the door. someone's attempted to enter her room, she hurriedly get back to the bed and pretended that she was still sleeping. it was just maid who enter her room, who brought her some breakfast.

Maid: Ms. Ann... (she softly spoken her name and ring the bell.)
Ann: (Ann opened her eyes and a maid was infront of her ringing the bell.) w-who are you??? whe-where am i? why i am here? (stuttering.)
Maid: the breakfast is serve already, Ms. Ann. once your done, the 'Young Master' wanted to see you.
Ann: Young Master???? (she get up in the bed and suddenly hold the maid's shoulder, shaking it.) te-tell me first where am i??? why am i here!??! how did you-! (before she could finish, a man standing at the doorway interrupt her.)
???: that's not how you talk to my maid...

she looked at the man who's standing at the doorway. she could exactly remember who was he. the flashback came through her...

"i... i... im sorry...", he said and was trying to help her. but it was already late when her man helped her. he apologize to the man. just looking at them, he realize that they're a couple. "its alright... im sorry too... because i wasnt looking at my way", she said. yes, she remembered, he was the one she got bumped that time. but why? why did he kidnapped her, is there something he wants from her?

Ann: who are you?..... (she cleared her throat and let go of the maid.)
???: (he was getting closer to her...) you've been asking me that since last night... i was about-
Ann: dont come any closer... i am asking your name only... i didnt say you'll come closer...
???: my name is Ken... Ken Wongrutiyan.
Ann: Wongrutiyan??? are you Aff's business partner right? the owner of the hotel?
Ken: you're right...
Ann: but... but how did you...
Ken: Aff ask me to kidnap you...
Ann: what!?! i... i dont believe you. Aff wont do that, i know your lying and there's something you wanted to do in my family...
Ken: Dok... leave us first... (he's referring the maid's name. then Dok leave them. she close the door as she leave.) as i was saying... Ms. Ann Thabchumpon... the eldest daughter of the "Five Roses", the future wife of Mr. Aum Atichart... am i right, Ms. Ann Thab-
Ann: what do you want from me.... why did you kidnap me??? answer me first. as far as im concern... i dont remember doing anything bad to you and i dont even know you!
Ken: you're right... you didnt do anything wrong... i decided to take you away from your family... simply because i wanted to get to know you more... dont you think it sounds so shallow?
Ann: yes... because why do you have to kidnap me??? i dont even know you at all... i dont believe in you... tell me, what did my family do to you? why do you have to take risk???
Ken: everybody has reasons, Ms. Ann. soon you'll know it. for now, i dont wanna have bad image once you get to know me.
Ann: well, you're right now. im not even interested to get to know you...
Ken: (he opened the door.) you're going to eat your words someday Ms. Ann. i hope to see you downstairs someday Ms. Ann... i dont want you to lock yourself here.

he winked at her before he closes the door as he leave. she get back to the bed and started think about her family... she was thinking if her dad did something to this man, right now, she knows that her family is worried now. her stomach is growling, she stare at the breakfast that the maid brought her.

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"no... we got separated yesterday. she said she'll pass by at the music store and then about to go home after.... w-wait? where is she?", Aum got confuse already and started to get worry about Ann's disappearance all of a sudden. yesterday, they were still fine. he was talking to Ann's mom over the phone.

Anchali: that's why im asking... she's not in her room. im started to get worry about her.
Aum: let's just wait for a day... mom... if she hasnt back yet... we'll call the police as soon as possible. i'll be coming over there later.
Anchali: thanks Aum... (then she put the phone already... Pat came to her and was caressing her mom.)
Pat: mom... dont worry so much. maybe Ann just went somewhere and forgot to call you...

since Aum started to get worry after the phone call from Ann's mother, he didnt even hesitate to hire some people to find Ann. he called some people to find Ann right away. then his mother notice that he cant seemly stop worrying now.

Adung: are you alright, son?
Aum: h-huh? ... i... im fine mom...
Chiangsai: was that Ann over the phone?
Aum: uh... mmm... yeah...
Adung: i see... (she smiled.) it seems like you two get along well...

he just smiled to his mom and dad. he dont wanna tell about what's happening right now because its still not final. he was hoping that Ann will go home later... if she doesnt, he'll probably not only hire but he'll look for her too. this couldnt be happening, they're suppose to get marry after Ploy's recover.

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everybody was already gone, except for Pat and Anchali. Pat has also an appointment to meet her friends but she decided to accompany her mom, they're also planning to visit Ploy in the hospital. meanwhile, Aff already went to the hotel to meet Por. she wanted to discuss about Por's brother.

on the other side, Ratsami wanted Rita to come with him to meet the architect. but Rita has no idea if who's the architect that his father choose... since its been a long time that she didnt work with her father. now she back on track to do other projects that her father offers. "Rita... im sure you'll be glad to work with him. i've seen his designs before and my friends highly recommend him to me if i have future projects... and this is it...", he opened the door of the conference room... where the board members are waiting for them to discuss about "Resort" project. as Ratsami greeted the board members and sit at the executive chair, Rita then greeted the board members and seated right next to Ratsami.

Ratsami: shall we start now?
Board Member 1: Mr. Pachata hasnt arrive yet...
Ratsami: i see... well, let's just discuss about the project first... since my daughter here, Rita Thabchumpon will be the interior designer of this project. (the board members look at Rita and smiled at her.)

she just smiled at them back, but something's strange right now.... since "Pachata" sounds familiar to her. when she cant hardly remember where she heard that name, a man just entered the conference room.... he was wearing a business suit just like the board members, everyone stared at the man who just entered "im sorry im late...", he said. what a small world, Rita widen her eyes when she finally remember as she was looking at him. Chakrit's cousin, indeed. Rome Pachata.

Ratsami: (he stood up from his chair and introduce who just came.) everyone, i'd like you to meet Arch't Rome Pachata. have seat Arch't Pachata. (he offered him a seat.)

when Rome Pachata was about to sit, he notice a girl seated beside right next to President Thabchumpon, but he cant seemly notice the girl's face because she's reading something. Rita was covering her face and pretended like she was reading.

for more further discussion, as Ratsami was discussing the project... his speech ended up introducing his own daughter to be the interior designer of the project and Rita was force to stand up and showed herself. "Everyone... i'd like you to introduce one of my precious daughters.... Rita Thabchumpon...", when Rita stood up form her chair to stand up, the board members clap their hands, but Rome was the only who's not clapping. but rather he cant take off his eyes of her, he still cant believe that his cousin's lover... is one of Thabchumpon's daughters. and this woman trick him and said about her name which is not actually 'Sugar'.

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she's really bored now, after she ate her breakfast... she cant seemly dont know what do and she's worrying so much thinking about her parents and then she was thinking about her sisters, wondering if what they were doing right now. she just notice that the reflection of a lightning last night through the window gives her more nightmare, she stood up again and walking around back and forth inside the room. then she wanted to look outside, because she was think that she might could escape here.

the view of the blue sea at afar, the light house of this island and the white sand at seashore.... was she living in Greece right now?
she saw him outside the house, unwinding at the hammock. she tried to looked at him closely, she cant seemly understand him. his appearance makes her more alarm and dont want to be close to him, but for some reason maybe he's not really bad at all. but she still couldn't take the fact that this guy kidnap her. she decided to go downstairs and try if she could talk to him, but as she got out of the room... she just notice that not only her room is white... but the whole interior of the house was painted in white. the house feels weird but somehow she felt the loneliness and the silence that has been here for how long.

Ann didnt want to approach the man named 'Ken', she wanted to explore the whole house first... the white house, that she's staying at. the maid saw her walking around as she keeps staring at the blue crystal accessories, she thought that interior design was all in white.... but actually there's these little accessories that was display at the living room. only the accessories that gives color of the whole house. white and blue. when she looked at the maid who was watching her, the maid frown at her and snob her. maybe because of what she did to her awhile ago.

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"traffic jam again?", Por said when he entered to Aff's office. he's in the mood after he and his brother Ken finally reconciled with each other, plus he has to help his brother to look for their lost sister.

Aff: dont you know how to knock???
Por: oh, sorry about that... i thought you're use to it. im always like this. (he still smiling...)
Aff: so you're in the mood today...
Por: if you think so. i just cant wait 'til my brother comes back and havethe results...
Aff: results??? i... i... i jsut talked to him yesterday over the phone.
Por: really? what did he say?
Aff: n-nothing.... (she wanna tell that, she and Ken has a plans on kidnapping. actually kidnapping her, but it turns out that she still doesnt know about what's going on right now with her sister.)
Por: oh, well... (he sigh.) hey, how does it feel to have a sister?
Aff: why do you ask?
Por: nothing...
Aff: do you have a sister?
Por: let's just put it that way...
Aff: but i thought, you... and Ken are-
Por: ok, let me tell you a secret... this is just between you and me... my brother and i are looking for our lost sister....
Aff: lost sister????
Por: i still dont know the truth about it... but my brother open up to me that before our father died, he said to look for our sister.
Aff: i see... by the way... mmm... i forgot about some documents in my house, i need you to summary all over again the papers again...
Por: huh? but i thought the summary was okay...
Aff: no... definitely not. come by to my house tonight and i'll show the documents.
Por: i've got things to do tonight.
Aff: what things?
Por: its personal...
Aff: come with me later and i'll give you the documents...

having a vice president of this hotel and being demanding, Por sometimes dont wanna work anymore... but he's doing this because of his brother. he wonders if where he's right now.

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the meeting was adjourned, the board members went back to their designated departments. only Ratsami, Rita and Rome left in the conference room. she cant seem look at him straight, being disbelief and because she didnt that her father hire him as the architect of this project.

Ratsami: Arch't Pachata... you wouldn't mind if i want my daughter to interior decorate the whole project? (he was holding on Rita's palm, being proud to have daughter like her.)
Rome: (he's been staring at her the whole meeting, he didnt get the chance to listen to Ratsami's speech. he still cant believe that SHE's Thabchumpon's daughter.) i dont mind work with your daughter... (he gazed at her, while she was trying to avoid his gaze.) in fact, im really interested to see her designs...
Ratsami: that's good to know. so what about you dear?... Arch't Pachata here wants to see your designs... (her father looked at her, but she just bluntly smile.)
Rome: i heard about her before... you're daughter is good in furniture designing. ("liar", herself was telling her that this man is a big fat liar. he didnt even appreciate her work and even criticize it...)
Ratsami: that's why i call my daughters as "five roses", they are lovely in every way...
Rome: i see... (he smiled at her, like as his smile has a meaning that he wants her to know.)

Rita admit to herself that she was captivated by his stunning looks and just like when she first met him at Chakrit's pad... anytime, she's knows that she'll melt right away. but her heart still shouts for Chakrit's name. such a small world to meet someone that has a connection with Chakrit, right now, she's thinking about Chakrit. but right then in the middle of their conversation, Rome's phone was ringing over and over.

Rome: excuse me for a moment Mr. Thabchumpon... (he stand and walking two meters away from them. then he answered the phone call.) yes?... you're going now? wa-wait... there's still something i wanna talk about... (he looked at his wristwatch.) you're flight schedule will be 30 minutes from now... its still early. i need to meet you. its real-

it suddenly hang up, it was Chakrit over the phone. he wanted to tell his cousin that he'll work with Rita. he went back to his seat and proceed to their discussion.

Rome: im sorry about that... it's my cousin over the phone, i think he's waiting for me at the airport...
Rita: what!?! (she knew it was Chakrit over the phone, but why he's in the airport? her father and Rome looked at her because of her sudden reaction.) i... i... im sorry.
Ratsami: if that's the case you're in a hurry Arch't Pachata???
Rome: yes... if you dont mind. let's discuss about this tomorrow Mr. Thabchumpon.
Ratsami: ok, then...

minutes later, after their conversation ended. suppose to be Rita will be heading to her new office in the company, but she cant resist herself but to run and got out of the building all of a sudden. she even pass by at Rome who's about to got out of the building, but she didnt notice him... but rather, she called a taxi and commanding the driver to go to the airport. she wanted to know why Chakrit was in the airport... she wanted to see him desperately. yes, she's still not over him.

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"How are you feeling dear?", Anchali asked Ploy, as Ploy was still laying on the bed. Ploy was already bored to be in the hospital for days, she knows that she's already fine and she can work in the office while having her wheelchair. though her wound located at her head was already healed, she still dont know if how long she'll be crippled... the doctors says that she needs physical therapist for that. if she's determined to walk again, in a few months... she can finally walk again.

Ploy: mom... i told you... i dont need to be in the hospital anymore. i should working now.
Pat: sis... with you're situation right now, i dont believe you can work with wheelchair?
Ploy: why do you say so? i'll have my physical therapist and at the same time i'll go work in my office. father needs me to be there.
Anchali: Ploy, dear... everybody is suggesting that you'll have to recover first.
Pat: plus... you dont have to worry about your work anymore, Rita is there to help dad.
Ploy: Ri-Rita... (then she frown, she started to feel useless right now. with all her sisters, Rita's the one who switch her place to work.)
Anchali: what's wrong, dear? arent you happy that Rita is helping you around? she insisted that she'll work in the company from now on, while you're still recovering.
Pat: by the way, did Ann pass by here?
Ploy: Ann? no... i was alone since last night. why?
Anchali: i see...
Pat: Ann didnt got home last night... and until now. but i dont know if she's at home right now.
Ploy: did already called Aum?
Anchali: yes, he'll be coming over later... (she tapped on Pat's back.) dear, we're going now....
Ploy: ok, mom...
Pat: you sure you're going to be alright here sis?
Ploy: yeah...
Anchali: goodbye, dear (she gave Ploy a kiss on the forehead.) we'll just visit you tomorrow then.
Ploy: ok, mom... tell dad that i'll be fine.

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Por come with Aff as they both went to her house, she notice that there are police cars everywhere parking infront of Thabchumpon's mansion. they both wonder what's happening so Aff got inside the mansion as she saw the whole family in the living room talking to the police officers, she saw Aum was sitting right next to her father... listening to what the police officer says. but she interrupt and wonder if what's going on.

Aff: what's going on??? (everyone looked when she just came in, meanwhile Por was waiting outside wandering.)
Anchali: Aff, dear.... your sister Ann... she hasnt back yet since yesterday... she didnt even call or message us nor Aum. he's starting to get worry too... (she looked at Aum, she caught him staring at her but he look away as she looked at him.)
Ratsami: Anchali... the police said that they're going to find her. besides we need to wait for three days... if she hasnt come back in three days, the police will search for.
Anchali: but why after three days??? why cant they look it for now!
Ratsami: hon, relax... (Ratsami caress his wife, while their children and the police can see Anchali that she cant stop worrying. something feeling bad happen to her.)

the police just gave some information and then after that they all leave. Aff then was still standing, watching her family worrying about their sister. she was about to introduce Por in the family, but then she suddenly realize something... it just pop into her mind the answer and it might be possible that....

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"arent you going to eat your dinner?", Ken said when he was about to approach her at the living room. she looked away at him and cross her arms. she was still looking around the house, disbelieving that this was the man who lives in this big house. she doesnt know if he's just being nice with her or there's something else, maybe he's planning something.

Ann: what are you really planning to do with me??? (changing her tone, while looking at him.)
Ken: i just want to get to know you...
Ann: isnt that enough, you kidnap me... because you have all your information with me.
Ken: you're lucky if im the one who kidnap you... usually kidnappers left them in the dark basement. but sorry to tell you, im not like that. (he just smile at her.)
Ann: even if im living this kind of place..... its still the same that you kidnapped me... (she's starting to hate him.)

she went back to her room, she was really pissed because she wanted to know. she still cant get him, he's so mysterious... she doesnt know if he was trying to be moody awhile ago.

Ken's phone vibrating, he silent his phone and tried not to show up with her while he's having phone calls in Bangkok. he looked at his phone and it was Aff.

Ken: hello...
Aff: what's the meaning of this... what did you do to my sister?
Ken: so you finally know about it...
Aff: this was not our plan!
Ken: i know... but im just fulfilling your wish...
Aff: m-my wish???
Ken: didnt you told me that if i kidnap your sister, their wedding will be postponed for awhile?
Aff: what!?! i didnt say that..
Ken: yes you are... its already to late, Aff... anyway, you still owe me something though. if you pay me, i'll give back your sister. from this end, i wont take any calls now. on the 2nd week... will be the deadline of the money... (then he turned off the phone right away, he looked up to the 2nd floor of the white house...)
Aff: he-hello??? hello? shit! (she was outside of their house while stomping her feet. she cant believe what was just happening, Ken was on the moved to do everything. she hasnt done anything yet, she didnt even found Joy yet... the one who really owes Ken.)
Por: is there anything wrong? (he come closer to her.)
Aff: where is you damn brother!?!
Por: huh? i... i... i dont know. why? what happened? did my brother did something?
Aff: yes~! he ki- (before she could finish, Pat came out of the house because Ratsami and Anchali was looking for her.)


Por was realize when a young woman just came out of the mansion was calling Aff and surprisingly, it was the girl whom he always encounter recently. why in the world they always meet in wrong way?

Pat and Por: You Again~! (pointing at each other, while was only looking at them.) why in the-!
Aff: wait... you know each other...
Por: Aff, she's the one whom im telling you about trespassing in the hotel. the one i was looking around the hotel! dont you ever dare to get closer to this girl! because she's a devil~!
Aff: wait... Por... you're cursing my sister too much... why? what's wrong? (she was still confuse.)
Por: s-sister???? (being disbelief, this girl is one of the "Five Sisters" of Thabchumpon. Pat was smiling silly and was crossing her arms while looking at him.)
Pat: yes! Pat Thabchumpon, nice meeting you.... (she offered a handshake and when Por accept her handshake, after that she stepped on his foot, then she went back inside.)

Aff helped him, she was calling out Pat at the same time but Pat ignored her. then Anchali and Ratsami went to see what's happening. they saw Aff and Por together, Aff was still helping Por to get up after what her sister have just done. she still dont know why her sister did that.

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sorry for the late post. i've been busy lately...
i havent got some sleep though, i got eye infected tissue and i have eat that much T_T
for more anticipation in this story. buzz me if you want me to spoil you for next couple of episodes. ^_^
i've decided to put Aum's ignore scene with Aff on the next chapter.
bttw, i got no time to correct everything, araso??? ^_^
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Next Chapter Scenes:

* Aff and Por's scene infront of the parents, Aff introduce Por as her boyfriend while Aum and Pat was watching them.
* Discovering a secret room at the white house, Ann was simply amaze... but she didnt know that the room was forbidden.
* Rita tries to visit Ploy, but she was ignored. Rita didnt understand why her sister act this way.
* Aff wanted to talk to Aum because she sees her everyday in their mansion, worrying about Ann's disappearance.
* Ratsami and Anchali decided to take Ploy in the US for recovery.
* Chakrit cant seem to forget Rita but he wanted to be a better man for her.
* Rita and Rome was given an office where they have to work together and discuss things more.
* Pat got her 2nd revenge on Por the next day.
 

nikki1786

LizQuen
ok... this is not final... ^_^

this is Ken in this fan fic... i dont want the first one... i want him to be like this one, rugged and still handsome..... ^_^​


how do you like it?

the first pic, i dont know... i cant even imagine him with that looks in this fic.​

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i'll be posting another manipulated pic of Ken... of course the manipulated pictures is courtesy by my friend Jayce aka PUNXTYLE. he's still editing pictures though. :)

i think im gonna poll the pics of Ken here... of having a long hair.
 

nikki1786

LizQuen
another one...

mmm... ^_^ looking mob right??? edited by PUNXTYLE again... :wub:​


anyways, i will POLL the two pictures... so that i'll know which of the two that the readers prefer the mysterious KEN... ^_^​
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
yayyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've been waiting for this update for 3 days!!! I voted 2nd pic.. I like guys who are "a little bit" handsome, so it gives room for errors. I don't like so handsome where they look like pretty boys.

I shall return to read your fic! I need to get things out of the way.. like feeding the baby.. making phone calls and such. And for this fic, I need a nice glass of cold soda and some kind of food, cause it's like watching a whole episode of lakorn. :D

be right back.
 

nikki1786

LizQuen
yayyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've been waiting for this update for 3 days!!! I voted 2nd pic.. I like guys who are "a little bit" handsome, so it gives room for errors. I don't like so handsome where they look like pretty boys.

I shall return to read your fic! I need to get things out of the way.. like feeding the baby.. making phone calls and such. And for this fic, I need a nice glass of cold soda and some kind of food, cause it's like watching a whole episode of lakorn. :D

be right back.

ooooppps~! sorry about that Lome... hehehe XD im currently watching "we got married". just recently, not only busy but i got eye infected tissue... so i gotta stay in my bed for a couple of hours and dont have to stay up late on the pc. but anyways, the next scene will be more like "closer than you think scenes" ^_^ i dont know if you got what i mean but i must say... im excited to go and jump at the jealousy scenes now... lol

the photos of Ken are his present look in this chapters... but he'll have make over and so i must return his looks in the right way. by the way, dont you know that the pic you just select was johnny depp's? ^_^ manipulated my friend Jayce aka punxtyle... :)
 

tastesweetlove

sarNie Granny
OMG......white house...i love the color white....i like pic #1 of ken.....but both are really good.......ploy is going to US for treatment.....i see......heeheee rome finally knows that rita is sugar......i want spoilers (PM me or tell me on MSN :D ) great update
 

nikki1786

LizQuen
OMG......white house...i love the color white....i like pic #1 of ken.....but both are really good.......ploy is going to US for treatment.....i see......heeheee rome finally knows that rita is sugar......i want spoilers (PM me or tell me on MSN :D ) great update
lol... MSN??? mmm... usual time i woke up here... ok then... i'll try to tell you, but you gotta choose which couple you wanted to know. ^^ its limited spoiler :loool: jk~!

oops double post...but.....i wonder what pat has in store for por heehee

secret... PM me for more spoiler scenes
 

lady0fdarkness

Professional Lakorn Watcher
wheww.. girl.. it took me 30 minutes to finish this chapter.. lol.. don't worry though, it was a good 30 minutes. But here's my brainstorm....

I see Ploy is going to recover in the US huh? hehe...... that's where Charit is going.
I am so in love with the white house.... believe it or not, that's my dream house. I want everything white and airy...
And.... I'm so enjoying Rita and Rome's encounter....
Ken and Ann's scenes remind me of beauty and the beast... where Ken is the beast. :drool:

I still hate Aff!!!! I don't know why, but I can't stand her.. it's like she doesn't really care about her sisters. And when you're drunk, you tend to say things that are on your mind.. so when Aff was drunk, she she said wanted Ann kidnapped!! And now her wish is granted... and also she's pretending like Por is her man?? She better get her claws off him cause that's going to Pat's man!

But anyway.. very good chapter, my dear. Thanks for the update.

P.S

I hope your eye feels better!
 

aikoden

♥DREAMER♥
Staff member
whoooooo i finish reading hehe .. ahhhhhhh i cant wait.. ehehe.. thanks for the spoilers earlier hehe.. n rr it is unlimited lol.. hehe aum aff anne n ken scenes .. she wont tell lol.. hehehe xp. . lol.. im lucky to get spoiled lol.. hehhee.. i cant wait nikki.. lalalalala...

and get better nikki...
 
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