lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
damn... I want to pay Patta to pleasure me too.. lol..
My Enemy
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sarN
sarNie Granny
After that night his mother left him with Lucy, he was never the same again and thrive to make money by becoming a male escort like his mother want him to be. Lucy introduce him to the world of late night affair with rich woman in their late 30s or more by teaches him the art of attraction and teaches him all the ingredient to please a women .Over the years he advance himself by using the money to buy car , house , clothes and his ticket into hi-so function or party where he usually hunt for his prey . All his customer is lonely rich women that seek younger man to satisfy their lust and leave their pocket empty . He dine with them and persuade them for his own financial need. It a fair trade for his affection and youth , his mother always remind him and with that in mind he doesn't feel guilt nor remorse for any of the women he use . His mother would tell him over and over those old rich women are like his father wives , they are bitches who classify human on their birth and wealth. In the last 14 years, he never disobey his mother and believe everything she told him .
Saipoon was please how much Patta changes over the years, he became strong and confidence. He no longer cry silently at night when they first move into the slum . Now they have a huge house, car, money and live in luxury with the money he drain from those hi-so women. Lucy became his best friend and they share a different bond then just old lover. He respects her and doesn't allow her to live a life as a prostitute. She was grateful and live with them.
"where you going Patta"
"a high school graduation"
"don't tell me you dating younger woman now ? " Lucy laugh while reaching for the pepper and shake it on the scramble eggs. They were having breakfast at the table .
"its Madam Worant wishes for me to attend with her"
"must be her kid then"
"perhaps but I have to leave now" he drink the last sip of coffee and left the house in his red BM convertible .
It was around noon when he arrive at the school. There was over a 100 student dress in their graduation grown taking picture with the family and friend . Patta stood beside his car and scan the surrounding . He suddenly had flash back of his own graduation and smile but stop once he remember his father didn't attend this event on his special day. He saw Madam Worant waving at him from the distance and he wave back while approaching her .
"Patta you came on time !! My daughter just left to talk with her friend " Madam Worant reach up and kiss him on the cheek . She is a 46 years old divorce mother of 2 daughter and met Patta a month ago thur a friend that introduce her to him. They been going out on several date and she pay him every time because he charge by the hour. They haven't make love yet, o' how she crave to be in his arm but she wasn't sure when he will be ready but in the mean time she had spend thousand of dollar on him already .
"which one is she ..?"?
"over there !"? Madam Worant pointed to a crowd of teenage that was laughing with each other .
Patta follow her finger and slowly he remove his shade at the sight of a beautiful young girl . She was smiling and laughing with her friend , there was something familiar about her and Patta couldn't put his tongue on it but he was mesmerize by the sound of her voice, as if he heard it somewhere before .
"Aff !! Daddy is here" shouted Mr. Taksorn as he walk past his own son, not aware the man was Patta.
Patta stood there stun, after so many year he finally met up with the beast he call father. He watch the daughter and father scene with disgust. There was angry in his eye as he pierces it at the couple. It surprise him that Mr.Taksorn play the father role so well , perhaps after year of practice? He sneer at the thought and couldn't believe a sec ago he thought his half-sister was..beautiful. Ridiculous. She probable as bad as the rest of the wives in that house she live in.
After Patta met with the daughter of Madam Worant , he was aware of the kid dislike in him and probable because he date her mom . It normal and he get it all the time.
"mom , I want you to meet my friend "? said Linda and hurry off to drag Aff away from her dad , then introduce Aff to her mom
"cute friend"said Madam Worant
"what about me"said Patta smiling at the two girls
"and this is"
"Patta.." he finsh and added "I think your father is waiting for you to return back to him"? he look straight past her and notice Mr.Taksorn in the background pacing himself while waiting for his daughter to finish .
The name sound familiar to her but she couldn't remember where she heard it from --- but for sure she doesn't like this man . She heard so much about him from Linda, saying he a gold digger and a male escort . She felt disgusted and shiver at the thought he slept with woman twice his age.
Saipoon was please how much Patta changes over the years, he became strong and confidence. He no longer cry silently at night when they first move into the slum . Now they have a huge house, car, money and live in luxury with the money he drain from those hi-so women. Lucy became his best friend and they share a different bond then just old lover. He respects her and doesn't allow her to live a life as a prostitute. She was grateful and live with them.
"where you going Patta"
"a high school graduation"
"don't tell me you dating younger woman now ? " Lucy laugh while reaching for the pepper and shake it on the scramble eggs. They were having breakfast at the table .
"its Madam Worant wishes for me to attend with her"
"must be her kid then"
"perhaps but I have to leave now" he drink the last sip of coffee and left the house in his red BM convertible .
It was around noon when he arrive at the school. There was over a 100 student dress in their graduation grown taking picture with the family and friend . Patta stood beside his car and scan the surrounding . He suddenly had flash back of his own graduation and smile but stop once he remember his father didn't attend this event on his special day. He saw Madam Worant waving at him from the distance and he wave back while approaching her .
"Patta you came on time !! My daughter just left to talk with her friend " Madam Worant reach up and kiss him on the cheek . She is a 46 years old divorce mother of 2 daughter and met Patta a month ago thur a friend that introduce her to him. They been going out on several date and she pay him every time because he charge by the hour. They haven't make love yet, o' how she crave to be in his arm but she wasn't sure when he will be ready but in the mean time she had spend thousand of dollar on him already .
"which one is she ..?"?
"over there !"? Madam Worant pointed to a crowd of teenage that was laughing with each other .
Patta follow her finger and slowly he remove his shade at the sight of a beautiful young girl . She was smiling and laughing with her friend , there was something familiar about her and Patta couldn't put his tongue on it but he was mesmerize by the sound of her voice, as if he heard it somewhere before .
"Aff !! Daddy is here" shouted Mr. Taksorn as he walk past his own son, not aware the man was Patta.
Patta stood there stun, after so many year he finally met up with the beast he call father. He watch the daughter and father scene with disgust. There was angry in his eye as he pierces it at the couple. It surprise him that Mr.Taksorn play the father role so well , perhaps after year of practice? He sneer at the thought and couldn't believe a sec ago he thought his half-sister was..beautiful. Ridiculous. She probable as bad as the rest of the wives in that house she live in.
After Patta met with the daughter of Madam Worant , he was aware of the kid dislike in him and probable because he date her mom . It normal and he get it all the time.
"mom , I want you to meet my friend "? said Linda and hurry off to drag Aff away from her dad , then introduce Aff to her mom
"cute friend"said Madam Worant
"what about me"said Patta smiling at the two girls
"and this is"
"Patta.." he finsh and added "I think your father is waiting for you to return back to him"? he look straight past her and notice Mr.Taksorn in the background pacing himself while waiting for his daughter to finish .
The name sound familiar to her but she couldn't remember where she heard it from --- but for sure she doesn't like this man . She heard so much about him from Linda, saying he a gold digger and a male escort . She felt disgusted and shiver at the thought he slept with woman twice his age.
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
...wow.... i wonder how this is going to roll out.. hope Patta doesn't hurt his half-sister to revenge the father.
amikrazie
sarNie Oldmaid
man i didnt even read the four to five updates in the last three pages yet...but i just had to post first...before i forget what i want to say 
*shocked that aff & rome *picturing umm or tik instead lol cant help it! are brother & sister...and hmm...i guess so for revenge...but then now it makes you wonder...will this fic have that sad ending..??!!! will they end up together or will the fact that they are related create a sad ending for one if not both of them???
oh and letting that bastard mr taksorn die off so soon is just doing that man a favor..i want to see his arse suffer alive... witnessing the affair the kids have...gosh..that sounds a bit harsh esp for patta since the father doesnt give a damn bout him..and to make matters worst patta goes and have something with the child he cherished the most?..but then how many other ways can actually get this heartless man to realized that pay back is a biatch!!! and that he doesnt have to die & reincarnate to received this karma that he had created??
i just totally feel bad for saipoon...she must have done something really bad the previous life to receive such a horrible one this present time.
ok i guess i should head back and read the actual info & facts ...some stuff i typed up above may not go as i thought it might lol..but that was just the thought i had while i was on page 3-4ish...just wanted to share thats all...
Poor kids, they will be brainwashed & turned into those cold stone-hearted ppl by their own devil hearted parents.. such a tragic dysfunctional family!
thank you for keeping us on the edge of our seats, SarN... its wonderful!!!! ^_^
*shocked that aff & rome *picturing umm or tik instead lol cant help it! are brother & sister...and hmm...i guess so for revenge...but then now it makes you wonder...will this fic have that sad ending..??!!! will they end up together or will the fact that they are related create a sad ending for one if not both of them???
oh and letting that bastard mr taksorn die off so soon is just doing that man a favor..i want to see his arse suffer alive... witnessing the affair the kids have...gosh..that sounds a bit harsh esp for patta since the father doesnt give a damn bout him..and to make matters worst patta goes and have something with the child he cherished the most?..but then how many other ways can actually get this heartless man to realized that pay back is a biatch!!! and that he doesnt have to die & reincarnate to received this karma that he had created??
i just totally feel bad for saipoon...she must have done something really bad the previous life to receive such a horrible one this present time.
ok i guess i should head back and read the actual info & facts ...some stuff i typed up above may not go as i thought it might lol..but that was just the thought i had while i was on page 3-4ish...just wanted to share thats all...
Poor kids, they will be brainwashed & turned into those cold stone-hearted ppl by their own devil hearted parents.. such a tragic dysfunctional family!
thank you for keeping us on the edge of our seats, SarN... its wonderful!!!! ^_^
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
i love it....patta is a man with experience....i can totally picture rome heehee....they finally meet YAY!!!!
ohitsnoyyy
Mama Noy ♥️
gasp Patta turned into a man whore... where can i get one...?
amikrazie
sarNie Oldmaid
maybe this isnt an incest fic after all..that old cow..i meant mr taksorn..is prolly too busy with this so-called diamond mine business..and sleeping around with his younger and sweeter servants that hes neglecting the old hags at home!!???...that wife that gave birth to aff might not be really having the child with mr taksorn..but with some servant man maybe the gardner, buna????...lonely woman..meet a nice lonely man...wham...slam...stuff happens...months later out came aff and stupid mr taksorn might be raising a kid who he thought was his adorable lil girl!..but was just another child of a bastard!?
what do you all think??? its possible right?...
and now it kinda balanced out...patta contain half a servant girls blood and so will aff if my assumption is true!...they can have a happy ending after all..no heartache bout the incest problem...or they can think its incest but the truth will come out..the one that will be hurt badly is that freaking mr taksorn.. *the thought of that man makes my skins crawl... That is what i am really hoping for...
and as for saipoon...i guess i can understand her side as well..her son is the one and only tool she can used for this revenge...it is also something that he might be hungering inside as well.. prolly not until now that he can bring out that boiling steam that has been set off by the man who claims to be his father.
i am somewhat relief that saipoon has finally step up to the plate!...finally striking back..yea its wrong to use her son..but what other way can she do to get this revenge..if not thru him? she doesnt have the money or power to hire any hitmen...but maybe she can in a few months...oh scratch thate part ..LOL its been 14 yrs WOW...after her son becomes a male escort..hmm i am so anxious to see what SarN has in store for us!
thanked goodness i am finally caught up!!
wow he thought aff was beautiful..and digusted at the sight of the father-daughterly scene..already this will be great i so cant wait to read more!
thank you for such a brilliant fic!!!!! ^_^
what do you all think??? its possible right?...
and now it kinda balanced out...patta contain half a servant girls blood and so will aff if my assumption is true!...they can have a happy ending after all..no heartache bout the incest problem...or they can think its incest but the truth will come out..the one that will be hurt badly is that freaking mr taksorn.. *the thought of that man makes my skins crawl... That is what i am really hoping for...
and as for saipoon...i guess i can understand her side as well..her son is the one and only tool she can used for this revenge...it is also something that he might be hungering inside as well.. prolly not until now that he can bring out that boiling steam that has been set off by the man who claims to be his father.
i am somewhat relief that saipoon has finally step up to the plate!...finally striking back..yea its wrong to use her son..but what other way can she do to get this revenge..if not thru him? she doesnt have the money or power to hire any hitmen...but maybe she can in a few months...oh scratch thate part ..LOL its been 14 yrs WOW...after her son becomes a male escort..hmm i am so anxious to see what SarN has in store for us!
thanked goodness i am finally caught up!!
wow he thought aff was beautiful..and digusted at the sight of the father-daughterly scene..already this will be great i so cant wait to read more!
thank you for such a brilliant fic!!!!! ^_^
sarN
sarNie Granny
Over the years Saipoon had change herself with plastic surgery and the scarf on her right cheek is no longer visible. With the money Patta bring in she transform herself from a servant to a madam but she wanted more by feeding Patta with thought of revenge. Saipoon never lost contact with her aunt that live in Chiang Mai and over the year her aunt monitor the Taksorn's family and report everything that happen in the house to her .
"really? The bitch"? said Saipoon thru the phone line
"she been living in the small house for over 10years...crazy as ever"
"good, it karm"
"over here anyone who seen or know any new about Mr.Taksorn long lost son will get a reward from Rosa . The family never stops searching for young master"
"its about time" Saipoon wickedly smile and hang up .
Patta return back from the graduation and walk into the house with a smile across his face. Then he saw his mother sitting in the living room and decided to report his finding .
"mother, you wouldn't believe who I met today"
"another bait ? How rich is she ?"
"better, I met Mr. Taksorn and his youngest daughter"
"did he recognize you ?"
"no . he walk past me like a breeze"
"it about time you return back to Chiang Mai and claim what is rightfully your"
"will they welcome me in ?"?
"does it matter ? What matter is, Rosa never stop searching for you ..according to Pim. That bitch still thinks you are her son and with that un-expose you will have no problem returning"
"what will be my excuse for running away ?"
"nothing , you father wouldn't even pressure the question because he know the reason why you left the house but if Rosa ask , just tell her because of your father ..she will understand"
"and?"
"i'll goes with you"
"are you sure ?"
"I'll go as your care taker . They won't recognize me. My face isn't the same as before"
"what is your plan ?"
"simple, just do what I say"
It was settle. Patta and his mother will be leaving to Chiang Mai but before he leave Bangkok , there some unfinish busy he have to attend . Later that week he went to Madam Worant's house , requested by her and had dinner under the candle light while soft music play in the background . Her daughter had left to see a movie with friends and won't be coming back till late at night. She seize the opportunity and decided to get her money worth with the young man . They slow dance in the dark room . Then she begin to kiss along his neck and he response by hiking up her skirt ..slowly up her thighs ..until his hand cupped her butt cheek. She moan and was in heat of passion, the young man was stirring up fire in the pit of her stomach! They drank several glass of wine before heading to her room and once insidehe close the door behind them.
Linda came home early and brought Aff to sleep over because its her last day in Bankok. They been friend since freshman and became very close over the years. "the theater is to crowded . we can watch the movie I rent upstairs together"said Linda
"I really want to see the movie" said Aff while removing her shoe before entering the house .
The two girls walk into the dark house and was surprise there no body around . Usually even if nobody is home the light would be turn on in the living room or at least the kitchen . Linda switch the light on and walk up stair while Aff follow close behind . The girls talk about thai lakorn they seem lately and laugh about stars they like . They make their way across the halland immediately stop. They heard a woman moaning and shrieking in pleasure. It was coming from Madam Worant's room and Linda was completely stun by the sound of her mother voice talking with a man! Tear stream down her face as she reach for the door knob --it was unlock.
"mom !"? Linda shouted and flick the light open to find a man in bed with her mother .
Aff came up from behind Linda and saw Patta on top of Madam Worant . Shock and disgusted. She try to yank her friend arm out the room but Linda push it away and continue to question her mother behavior !!
"honey , it...not what you think" Madam Worant manage struggle away from under Patta while grasping the blanket against her nude body . She was embarrass to be caught by her daughter in such a provocative situation . Patta laid back on the bed calmly and use his arm as a pillow , he wasn't a bit stress about the situation but instead smile at the girls . Aff roll her eye at the home wrecker and felt repulsive by the man whore!!! The slut have no shame or any sense of moral in that big head of his!!
Madam Worant move off the bed and rushes toward the door , then she push the girls out the room and close the door behind her .
"really? The bitch"? said Saipoon thru the phone line
"she been living in the small house for over 10years...crazy as ever"
"good, it karm"
"over here anyone who seen or know any new about Mr.Taksorn long lost son will get a reward from Rosa . The family never stops searching for young master"
"its about time" Saipoon wickedly smile and hang up .
Patta return back from the graduation and walk into the house with a smile across his face. Then he saw his mother sitting in the living room and decided to report his finding .
"mother, you wouldn't believe who I met today"
"another bait ? How rich is she ?"
"better, I met Mr. Taksorn and his youngest daughter"
"did he recognize you ?"
"no . he walk past me like a breeze"
"it about time you return back to Chiang Mai and claim what is rightfully your"
"will they welcome me in ?"?
"does it matter ? What matter is, Rosa never stop searching for you ..according to Pim. That bitch still thinks you are her son and with that un-expose you will have no problem returning"
"what will be my excuse for running away ?"
"nothing , you father wouldn't even pressure the question because he know the reason why you left the house but if Rosa ask , just tell her because of your father ..she will understand"
"and?"
"i'll goes with you"
"are you sure ?"
"I'll go as your care taker . They won't recognize me. My face isn't the same as before"
"what is your plan ?"
"simple, just do what I say"
It was settle. Patta and his mother will be leaving to Chiang Mai but before he leave Bangkok , there some unfinish busy he have to attend . Later that week he went to Madam Worant's house , requested by her and had dinner under the candle light while soft music play in the background . Her daughter had left to see a movie with friends and won't be coming back till late at night. She seize the opportunity and decided to get her money worth with the young man . They slow dance in the dark room . Then she begin to kiss along his neck and he response by hiking up her skirt ..slowly up her thighs ..until his hand cupped her butt cheek. She moan and was in heat of passion, the young man was stirring up fire in the pit of her stomach! They drank several glass of wine before heading to her room and once insidehe close the door behind them.
Linda came home early and brought Aff to sleep over because its her last day in Bankok. They been friend since freshman and became very close over the years. "the theater is to crowded . we can watch the movie I rent upstairs together"said Linda
"I really want to see the movie" said Aff while removing her shoe before entering the house .
The two girls walk into the dark house and was surprise there no body around . Usually even if nobody is home the light would be turn on in the living room or at least the kitchen . Linda switch the light on and walk up stair while Aff follow close behind . The girls talk about thai lakorn they seem lately and laugh about stars they like . They make their way across the halland immediately stop. They heard a woman moaning and shrieking in pleasure. It was coming from Madam Worant's room and Linda was completely stun by the sound of her mother voice talking with a man! Tear stream down her face as she reach for the door knob --it was unlock.
"mom !"? Linda shouted and flick the light open to find a man in bed with her mother .
Aff came up from behind Linda and saw Patta on top of Madam Worant . Shock and disgusted. She try to yank her friend arm out the room but Linda push it away and continue to question her mother behavior !!
"honey , it...not what you think" Madam Worant manage struggle away from under Patta while grasping the blanket against her nude body . She was embarrass to be caught by her daughter in such a provocative situation . Patta laid back on the bed calmly and use his arm as a pillow , he wasn't a bit stress about the situation but instead smile at the girls . Aff roll her eye at the home wrecker and felt repulsive by the man whore!!! The slut have no shame or any sense of moral in that big head of his!!
Madam Worant move off the bed and rushes toward the door , then she push the girls out the room and close the door behind her .
sarN
sarNie Granny
....Desperate Housewife ? HAHAHHA
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
OMG OMG OMG.....caught in bed and not even worried whoa.....nice, going back..this is going to be so much fun^^
amikrazie
sarNie Oldmaid
Desperate Housewives!? lol SarN...doesnt it seems like it? yesss more the more hate he shows aff the better he will be at avenging for his mother and himself!!!! more drama please...
i was reading some thai texts...and just wanted to share it..
ทุกคนเกิดมาเพือ ใช้กรรมเก่า
took kon gerd ma peua chai kaam gao!
i was reading some thai texts...and just wanted to share it..
ทุกคนเกิดมาเพือ ใช้กรรมเก่า
took kon gerd ma peua chai kaam gao!
azndramaluver
sarNie Egg
aaa so embarresed
cecilia
Staff member
wow. this is really dramatic and crazy.
i finaly got caught up after printing it out.
i can't believe Saipon got treat that bad from Mr.Taksaorn.
i suppose. her revenge plan is good but why use her own child.
can't she find another way. i mean, using him as an escort is good but a male gigolo. that's madness!
definitely with LADYOFDARKNESS that you paint the picture well.
i'm so disgust by what happen between PATTA and his clients.
at first, i thought Aff and Patta are half sibling, i just wanna puke right away at the thought of taboo.
i went back and re-read your prologue, thank GOD, it's only how ppl see it but there's a hidden truth behind her identity.
Now that Aff witness the scene between Patta and Mrs. Worant. it's gonna be so hard to like him. Curious to know what kind of hidden agenda does Patta have in mind to lure Aff over to gain this so call sister's love once he return home.
i'm in disgust by everything. but i still will contine to read it. just disgust to picture all these scenes ..
i finaly got caught up after printing it out.
i can't believe Saipon got treat that bad from Mr.Taksaorn.
i suppose. her revenge plan is good but why use her own child.
can't she find another way. i mean, using him as an escort is good but a male gigolo. that's madness!
definitely with LADYOFDARKNESS that you paint the picture well.
i'm so disgust by what happen between PATTA and his clients.
at first, i thought Aff and Patta are half sibling, i just wanna puke right away at the thought of taboo.
i went back and re-read your prologue, thank GOD, it's only how ppl see it but there's a hidden truth behind her identity.
Now that Aff witness the scene between Patta and Mrs. Worant. it's gonna be so hard to like him. Curious to know what kind of hidden agenda does Patta have in mind to lure Aff over to gain this so call sister's love once he return home.
i'm in disgust by everything. but i still will contine to read it. just disgust to picture all these scenes ..