My Enemy
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lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
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I was smiling the whole time I read it... it's so tragically romantic.
I was smiling the whole time I read it... it's so tragically romantic.
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
they are half brother and sister.
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
hello there sarN.. where's the last chapter? 
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
haha.. yeah.. I need closure...
amikrazie
sarNie Oldmaid
i was supposed to be in bed like an hr ago... but..anyhow..i just had to post..
the updates were fantastic as always...
its sinful but yet its our p'ek and n'ek..we have to cheer them on..whether its incest or not LMAO gosh sound so bad!!!..
anyhow i cant wait to read that last chapter and yet sad at the same time...But if this doesnt end we dont get to read the new ones that SarN had already set her mind to do ... ^_^
the updates were fantastic as always...
its sinful but yet its our p'ek and n'ek..we have to cheer them on..whether its incest or not LMAO gosh sound so bad!!!..
anyhow i cant wait to read that last chapter and yet sad at the same time...But if this doesnt end we dont get to read the new ones that SarN had already set her mind to do ... ^_^
margaretthao4
sarNie Adult
I CAUGHT YOU AGAIN AMI! LMFAO! MMMM HMMM GIRL YOU CAN RUN BUT YOU CAN NEVER HIDE FROM KILLER! hahahaha
amikrazie
sarNie Oldmaid
LMAO @ killer.... didnt you read the msn thingy i wrote back..i was trying to sleep...but i was upling some lakorn ..and it got done..so i didnt wanna wait til morning to post it.. i AM sleepy though lol..
gonna watch a bit more bj..and see how long i can last..i doubt it will be long though..
margaretthao4
sarNie Adult
Oh hahaha no I never read it I told you I logged off. I only logged on cause I saw your post and then right after I commented you I logged off. hahaha ok arnt we/you supposed to watch Pinky and my lover today?
I think I will start reading this soon. I havent started any fics lately...I'm too inpatient to wait for updates. lol
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
yooohoo.... sarN... oh sarN... where art thou.... lol...
*looks out the window and wonders when sarN will post the last chapter, so I can finally have closure.....*
*looks out the window and wonders when sarN will post the last chapter, so I can finally have closure.....*
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
OMG those updates were beautiful.....a wedding and a wedding night.....crying...i hope patta doesn't die...(i love him too)
sarN
sarNie Granny
The next morning was their departure and during the whole ride to Bankok Correction Center , the lover sat close together in the back while Mr.Taksorn in the passenger seat . Patta reach over and held his wife hand , squeezing it and she rest her head on his shoulder . There was tear in their eye as they savor the last moment together, silently in their own world and when the car came to a complete stop , their heart shatter . She lift her head up and turn to stare into his eye , she can see his tear and pain , it was no difference from her but they must accept reality and got out of the car . Still holding her hand they walk into the court house. There was two officer waiting for them at the main entrance , they came forward and ask Patta to follow them .
"just give me a couple second ..please " said Patta and then turn to his wife , smiling at her though this heart is throbbing with pain of departure "before Rosa die she whisper into my ear and said there a diary in her room in the drawer beside her bed . She want you to read it ..alone "
"yes, I'll find it and read it "
" take care of yourself ok "
"P'Patta , we'll wait for you always and forever .." she lean forward to kiss his tremble lip , tasting the tear that salted his mouth , locking her brim against his , for what seen like a life time . He move away and break the kiss, he then outline her lip with his finger and look into her eye . He want to trace every angle of her face and imprint it in his mind ,
"I love you so much" tear flooded his face as he exhale one last time , closing his eye to gather up the strength and walk away from her . The officer handcuff his hand and take him back into the ceil where he belong .
"P'Patta ! We'll wait for you !" she cries out with uncontrollable tear and then turn to embrace her father , for support and comfort .
"Patta" said Saipoon , standing at the background watching her son being escorted by two officer and Patta caught a glance of his mother , he smile happily at her but time was cut short when one of the officer open the door and slightly shove him in . Saipoon was in tear as she stare lifelessly into space, she never thought it will end like this and she regret losing her son because of her revenge . She was afraid to face him and remain hidden for several weeks .Yes. She was a coward.
Mr.Taksorn and Aff turn to leave but their track was stop once they realize Saipoon was standing behind them . Mr.Taksorn was the first to speak "he a good son ..Saipoon . I hope the sacrifice he made today will erase all the hatred in your heart , please forgive everyone that hurt you let everything resolve in peace" with that said , he and his daughter left the building .
Saipoon heard ever single words and remain motionless , only tear of regret stain her face . She was a fool !!Letting vengeance control her mind and soul . Patta and her could had live in peace but yet she strive for karma and end up destroying her own son . He was willing to take the blame for a crime he didn't commit in order to save her . There was no greater love a child could give to his mother ..than what Patta had done . He was innocent and pure but she tarnish his body because of her greed for money . She ruin his future by refusing his desire to continue his education oversea . Everything that she wanted , he was willing to serve her without any complain but this is what she repay him so crudely. What kind of mother would do such a thing to their own child ? She doesn't deserve the title because during the 15 years they live together , all she ever done was being a devil riding on his back and never indulge him like a mother would do . O'god if she can turn back the hand of time , she wish to live in peace with her son in that slum. Though their life was full of hardship but at least they were happy . Saipoon cover her face and cry.
The following week at the court hearing , the jury had came to an decision that Patta Taksorn will be sentence to life in prison ...
Several months later...
"little Aff ..you shouldn't had came " said Patta thru the telephone , they were separated by a glass window at the correction center and the visitation is limited to one hour .
"P'Patta , I want to see you before i give birth and I have something to tell you "
"yes ? "
"we're not blood related "
"wh-what do you mean ?"
"in Rosa's diary "
"what did it say ? "
"my mother had an affair with Rosa's brother and it lasted thru out the summer when my father was away on a business trip . Rosa couldn't tell anyone because her brother beg her not to reveal the secret . My real father name is ..Pong . He was in his 2nd year of college the summer he came over and when he return back to New York , the plane he was on crashed"
"did my father know about this affair ? "
"no , Rosa keep it to herself. In the diary she mention how much I look like him and when ever she saw me ...its like my father is close by her. No wonder I feel so bonded with her . Rosa was my aunt"
"are you going confront your mother ?"
"no. she keep the secret from me for a reason and it doesn't matter if she never tell me about my real father because the father I grown to love is all that matter to me"
"but if the secret remain hidden , then our love is label as ..incest forever "
"does it matter to you what people think about us ?"
"little aff , I don't care what the world think . I love you regardless of who you are. I'm happy ..very happy the secret can die with us , our father doesn't have to know about this neither does your mother . ..
"ouch.." she instantly hug her stomach
"what wrong ?" he panic and rise up to press his head against the glass window to get a better view ,
"nothing ..the baby was kicking me"
"really" tear fill his eye as he sat back down ,
"sometime at night I couldn't sleep at all because it move around so much"
"let me talk to the baby"
"how ?"
"place the phone over your stomach "
Aff does as she was told , "P'Patta ..it moving again " she held the phone still with one hand and the other free hand she rub the round belly.
"hey little one , don't keep your mother up so late at night ok?"
The scene was sweet yet heart breaking that tear begins to flow down their face but time was cut short when one of the officer said "excuse me the visitation is over "
"P'Patta , take care of your self ..ok"
"you do the same"
Their eye was lock in each other as she rise from the chair and stood there to savor the moment , he look down on her huge belly and soften his eye ...o' how his heart ache to embrace her , comfort her and stay by her side on the birth of their child . He touch his lip with his finger and press it against the window , indicating a kiss , a kiss that's no longer forbidden by moral but instead was prevented by a thick glass that separate them . He watch her back turn away and disappear behind the close door"
2 years later
Mr.Taksorn appeal his son case because Saipoon beg him to press charge against her . The case was accepted by the Supreme court and the trial ran for one year . The court rule Saipoon is guilt of all charge due to evidence that was presented by the defenses including where the drug was brought along with a credit card charge under her name. Patta refuse to testify against his mother and pleaded the fifth . After ten hours of careful discussion among the juries , the verdict was deliver that following day "Saipoon Lavadee is sentence to life in prison but since she pleaded guilt by confessing to her crime . The jury feel she had suffer emotionally due to the death of Rosa Taksorn and believe she is remorse for the crime . The sentence is reduce to 25 years and is eligible for parole after severing 10 years with good behavior"
2 week later
A car pull into the drive way of Taksorn's residence , Patta step out and run inside the house . He was excited to hold his son for the first time and nearly miss a step as he rush upstairs into Aff's room . Once he got inside , Aff immediately turn to him and place a finger to her lip "shhhhhh!!!"
"little Aff , I want to hold him" he quickly approach the bed where the baby was sleep, peacefully in the middle of the mattress and he couldn't help but grin like a mask .
"when he wake up " she pull a blanket over the baby and slowly move off the bed , afterward she turn her attention to her husband "sorry for not picking you up at the police station . Little Pat wasn't feeling so good and ---"
He silent her with a kiss , a kiss of a husband to a wife , he press his hard lip with such passion and hungry consuming every inch of her edge . She wrap her arm around his waist , clinging his shirt for support and let him have his way . It been a 2 long years that he parted and O'god he miss her so dearly and kissing her is not enough not enough to satisfy his yearning . He pull back and stare into her eye "i love you so much it hurt just to kiss you because ..I can't get enough of you "
"then does this mean you will grown tire of me if you have enough? " she tease
"no way ! I should be the one that is afraid because im 12 years your senior. I'm an old man " he pouted his lip
"that right , then you should spoil me and pamper me more !! Old cow !"she giggle after seeing his frown and then smile before adding "i never like guys my age anyway , you're the only one for me P'Patta" she snuggle against his chest and tighten her arm around his back
"you making this old man cry .." tear flow down his cheek as he embrace her back , resting his chin on her head .
"you are so fragile ...cry baby"
"this will be the last time you see my tear . our future will be full of happiness . I promise. I will love you and little Pat with all my heart"
"what about your mother ? are you still sad about what she did ?"
"she did it for us and im very grateful. She told me not to be sad because of her decision if I love her "
"we should bring little Pat to see her some day , ok ?" she pull herself back to search his eye
"no"
"why ?"
"when our second child is born then we go visit her" he chuckle
"no way ! one is enough !"
His eye darken with passion and she blushed, the last time they make love was in her room and right now the baby is sleeping on her bed . He lift her up and carry her across the hall , he use his leg to kick the door close "little aff ..you gain some weight "
"u calling me fat ?!! Then take me back to my room !!" she try wiggle herself down but he held her firmly in his arm
"its ok , the last time you were bigger " he tease , enjoying her little anger
"i was pregnant the last time !! put me down !"
He kiss her again and again until her protest die .
The end .
"just give me a couple second ..please " said Patta and then turn to his wife , smiling at her though this heart is throbbing with pain of departure "before Rosa die she whisper into my ear and said there a diary in her room in the drawer beside her bed . She want you to read it ..alone "
"yes, I'll find it and read it "
" take care of yourself ok "
"P'Patta , we'll wait for you always and forever .." she lean forward to kiss his tremble lip , tasting the tear that salted his mouth , locking her brim against his , for what seen like a life time . He move away and break the kiss, he then outline her lip with his finger and look into her eye . He want to trace every angle of her face and imprint it in his mind ,
"I love you so much" tear flooded his face as he exhale one last time , closing his eye to gather up the strength and walk away from her . The officer handcuff his hand and take him back into the ceil where he belong .
"P'Patta ! We'll wait for you !" she cries out with uncontrollable tear and then turn to embrace her father , for support and comfort .
"Patta" said Saipoon , standing at the background watching her son being escorted by two officer and Patta caught a glance of his mother , he smile happily at her but time was cut short when one of the officer open the door and slightly shove him in . Saipoon was in tear as she stare lifelessly into space, she never thought it will end like this and she regret losing her son because of her revenge . She was afraid to face him and remain hidden for several weeks .Yes. She was a coward.
Mr.Taksorn and Aff turn to leave but their track was stop once they realize Saipoon was standing behind them . Mr.Taksorn was the first to speak "he a good son ..Saipoon . I hope the sacrifice he made today will erase all the hatred in your heart , please forgive everyone that hurt you let everything resolve in peace" with that said , he and his daughter left the building .
Saipoon heard ever single words and remain motionless , only tear of regret stain her face . She was a fool !!Letting vengeance control her mind and soul . Patta and her could had live in peace but yet she strive for karma and end up destroying her own son . He was willing to take the blame for a crime he didn't commit in order to save her . There was no greater love a child could give to his mother ..than what Patta had done . He was innocent and pure but she tarnish his body because of her greed for money . She ruin his future by refusing his desire to continue his education oversea . Everything that she wanted , he was willing to serve her without any complain but this is what she repay him so crudely. What kind of mother would do such a thing to their own child ? She doesn't deserve the title because during the 15 years they live together , all she ever done was being a devil riding on his back and never indulge him like a mother would do . O'god if she can turn back the hand of time , she wish to live in peace with her son in that slum. Though their life was full of hardship but at least they were happy . Saipoon cover her face and cry.
The following week at the court hearing , the jury had came to an decision that Patta Taksorn will be sentence to life in prison ...
Several months later...
"little Aff ..you shouldn't had came " said Patta thru the telephone , they were separated by a glass window at the correction center and the visitation is limited to one hour .
"P'Patta , I want to see you before i give birth and I have something to tell you "
"yes ? "
"we're not blood related "
"wh-what do you mean ?"
"in Rosa's diary "
"what did it say ? "
"my mother had an affair with Rosa's brother and it lasted thru out the summer when my father was away on a business trip . Rosa couldn't tell anyone because her brother beg her not to reveal the secret . My real father name is ..Pong . He was in his 2nd year of college the summer he came over and when he return back to New York , the plane he was on crashed"
"did my father know about this affair ? "
"no , Rosa keep it to herself. In the diary she mention how much I look like him and when ever she saw me ...its like my father is close by her. No wonder I feel so bonded with her . Rosa was my aunt"
"are you going confront your mother ?"
"no. she keep the secret from me for a reason and it doesn't matter if she never tell me about my real father because the father I grown to love is all that matter to me"
"but if the secret remain hidden , then our love is label as ..incest forever "
"does it matter to you what people think about us ?"
"little aff , I don't care what the world think . I love you regardless of who you are. I'm happy ..very happy the secret can die with us , our father doesn't have to know about this neither does your mother . ..
"ouch.." she instantly hug her stomach
"what wrong ?" he panic and rise up to press his head against the glass window to get a better view ,
"nothing ..the baby was kicking me"
"really" tear fill his eye as he sat back down ,
"sometime at night I couldn't sleep at all because it move around so much"
"let me talk to the baby"
"how ?"
"place the phone over your stomach "
Aff does as she was told , "P'Patta ..it moving again " she held the phone still with one hand and the other free hand she rub the round belly.
"hey little one , don't keep your mother up so late at night ok?"
The scene was sweet yet heart breaking that tear begins to flow down their face but time was cut short when one of the officer said "excuse me the visitation is over "
"P'Patta , take care of your self ..ok"
"you do the same"
Their eye was lock in each other as she rise from the chair and stood there to savor the moment , he look down on her huge belly and soften his eye ...o' how his heart ache to embrace her , comfort her and stay by her side on the birth of their child . He touch his lip with his finger and press it against the window , indicating a kiss , a kiss that's no longer forbidden by moral but instead was prevented by a thick glass that separate them . He watch her back turn away and disappear behind the close door"
2 years later
Mr.Taksorn appeal his son case because Saipoon beg him to press charge against her . The case was accepted by the Supreme court and the trial ran for one year . The court rule Saipoon is guilt of all charge due to evidence that was presented by the defenses including where the drug was brought along with a credit card charge under her name. Patta refuse to testify against his mother and pleaded the fifth . After ten hours of careful discussion among the juries , the verdict was deliver that following day "Saipoon Lavadee is sentence to life in prison but since she pleaded guilt by confessing to her crime . The jury feel she had suffer emotionally due to the death of Rosa Taksorn and believe she is remorse for the crime . The sentence is reduce to 25 years and is eligible for parole after severing 10 years with good behavior"
2 week later
A car pull into the drive way of Taksorn's residence , Patta step out and run inside the house . He was excited to hold his son for the first time and nearly miss a step as he rush upstairs into Aff's room . Once he got inside , Aff immediately turn to him and place a finger to her lip "shhhhhh!!!"
"little Aff , I want to hold him" he quickly approach the bed where the baby was sleep, peacefully in the middle of the mattress and he couldn't help but grin like a mask .
"when he wake up " she pull a blanket over the baby and slowly move off the bed , afterward she turn her attention to her husband "sorry for not picking you up at the police station . Little Pat wasn't feeling so good and ---"
He silent her with a kiss , a kiss of a husband to a wife , he press his hard lip with such passion and hungry consuming every inch of her edge . She wrap her arm around his waist , clinging his shirt for support and let him have his way . It been a 2 long years that he parted and O'god he miss her so dearly and kissing her is not enough not enough to satisfy his yearning . He pull back and stare into her eye "i love you so much it hurt just to kiss you because ..I can't get enough of you "
"then does this mean you will grown tire of me if you have enough? " she tease
"no way ! I should be the one that is afraid because im 12 years your senior. I'm an old man " he pouted his lip
"that right , then you should spoil me and pamper me more !! Old cow !"she giggle after seeing his frown and then smile before adding "i never like guys my age anyway , you're the only one for me P'Patta" she snuggle against his chest and tighten her arm around his back
"you making this old man cry .." tear flow down his cheek as he embrace her back , resting his chin on her head .
"you are so fragile ...cry baby"
"this will be the last time you see my tear . our future will be full of happiness . I promise. I will love you and little Pat with all my heart"
"what about your mother ? are you still sad about what she did ?"
"she did it for us and im very grateful. She told me not to be sad because of her decision if I love her "
"we should bring little Pat to see her some day , ok ?" she pull herself back to search his eye
"no"
"why ?"
"when our second child is born then we go visit her" he chuckle
"no way ! one is enough !"
His eye darken with passion and she blushed, the last time they make love was in her room and right now the baby is sleeping on her bed . He lift her up and carry her across the hall , he use his leg to kick the door close "little aff ..you gain some weight "
"u calling me fat ?!! Then take me back to my room !!" she try wiggle herself down but he held her firmly in his arm
"its ok , the last time you were bigger " he tease , enjoying her little anger
"i was pregnant the last time !! put me down !"
He kiss her again and again until her protest die .
The end .
sarN
sarNie Granny
thank everyone for reading , this must be a record . It was finish in 1month & 1week ?
Extra: Plot i thought about ...writing but never did
1) Patta & Aff are ...real sibling
2) Aff end up marrying that other guy ( but then i change my mind and came up with another suitation for Patta&Aff to sleep togheter instead hahaa )
3) Patta block a bullet and die in Aff 's arm
4) Saipoon gone crazy
Extra: Plot i thought about ...writing but never did
1) Patta & Aff are ...real sibling
2) Aff end up marrying that other guy ( but then i change my mind and came up with another suitation for Patta&Aff to sleep togheter instead hahaa )
3) Patta block a bullet and die in Aff 's arm
4) Saipoon gone crazy
