sajenna
sarNie Oldmaid
if bpee is not the n'ek in this fiction, my heart will break :lmao: i hope she is and tina add a r'scene for us, ok, i confess, for me :loool:
Ruk Nai Roy Glied (Love In The Shadow of Hate)
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KhoOnxNouxWanxJai
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:loool:
KhoOnxNouxWanxJai
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Bpee amnesiac? LoL
From chapter 2
but who knows we'll see
From chapter 2
kind of explain why Bpee would pretend to forget Monthai :loool: and remember she is now Viyada's sister and Viyada was once with Monthai ... so of course Bpee would not want to know Monthai lol
but who knows we'll see
KhoOnxNouxWanxJai
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^o^ lol how do you know it's Maenward? working on the next chapters
working on the next chapters 
ohitsnoyyy
Mama Noy ♥️
whew... all caught up now! ekkkk... monthai & maenwad??! wow & Viyada is nice?!?! can't be! lmao. Tina update sooon!!! ^_^
wow & Viyada is nice?!?! can't be! lmao. Tina update sooon!!! ^_^
KhoOnxNouxWanxJai
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*Chapter may not be as good lmao I wrote it while my head hurts; I haven't updated for days yikes.. for some reason I write better on weekends lols; so I will definitely be writing up more chapters this weekend and will make it spicy ;p
Wiparwarn sat in bedroom nervous and annoyed. She really didn't want this party, but her parents insisted that she must. She already had someone in her heart, but her parents couldn't come to accept him. What was she to do? She looked to her older sister Viyada for help.
"P' Vi, what should I do? I don' t want this party."
"Par, don't worry ok? I'm sure Nucha will be present at this party. I've already made my point to pass the message to Lukkana Mahatada."
"But what if father doesn't approve him being here?"
"Par calm down ok? Everything will be fine. Don't you trust me?"
"Of course I trust you P' Vi, but.."
"But nothing little sister, now hurry and finish getting dressed. The guests are starting to arrive." Viyada said walking out of her sister's bedroom. Pah stood up and looked at herself in the mirror. She had pretty much already finish getting dressed. She spent the next few minutes pacing back and forth in her bedroom thinking of a way to escape this expectation of society. She concluded that the only way is to quickly move through the night so she wouldn't be embarrassing her family and tainting their name. She only hoped that the person whom her father chooses is Anucha.
"Nucha; Par Ruk Noot Na (I love you Noot)" Pah mumbled under her breath as she walked out of her bedroom. As she was about to make her way down the steps she was stopped by Bpeeyachat.
"P' Par; done getting dressed already?"
"Ja," responded Par.
"Ok, I'll walk down with you." Bpeeyachat said walking along side Par. As they were walking down the steps the commotion in the ballroom suddenly muted. Par noticed that everyone had their attention up at her. Bpeeyachat was also nervous as she was standing beside her elder sister. Nucha, Lukkana, and Monthai had just arrived. They noticed everyone's head turned towards the step so they mimic the crowed and noticed Par and Bpeeyachat coming down the steps. Nucha couldn't be more taken back by Par. She was beautiful. Her hair was tied up in a bun, her dress was a baby pink evening gown with a small split at the chest, a white ribbon wrapped her waist. She was no longer "Dek Par (Kid Par)" The young girl he use to tease and make fun of she was "Wiparwarn" a beautiful swan. He let his eyes fix themselves on her just as everyone else did. As Everyone fixed their attention on Par, Monthai's gaze fixed itself on Bpeeyachat the woman that he once loved so dearly. The woman that his heart had a hard time letting go, a memory that cannot for the life of him be erased. She was standing right there; his mind told him that she was just a woman... but his heart told him that it was his chance to confront her and find out why. Why it was that she had broken his heart so dearly. She was wearing a navy blue evening gown with a simple locket her hair was just the way that it was when he first saw her at the train station a ponytail of curls laying on her left shoulder.
"Bpeeyachat." he mumbled under his breath. As he starred at her he felt himself nearly fly out the door when a force struck him against the chest. He looked down and noticed a young woman had fallen against him. He turned to help her up
"I'm so sorry." the young woman apologized. Both were already standing by the door where Monthai had lost his dear sister and brother.
"It's ok, are you alright?" Monthai asked helping her up.
"Yes thank you I'm fine." She said looking up. Monthai couldn't have been more shocked to see Viyada standing before him. His mind completely went blank and erased Bpeeyachat; as he looked down into Viyada's eyes. She was in his arms from her near fall. Viyada fixed her gaze into his eyes. She couldn't believe that Monthai Mahatada was standing before her eyes. She quickly regain her balance and stand up tall.
"..Viyada." Monthai said in a low tone. He was stunned by her beauty. She was so different the last time they had seen each other over a decade ago. She appeared so elegant.
"Khun Monthai...." Viyada responded.
"... h... h..how are you?" he manage to let out
"I've been great and yourself?"
"I... I've been good."
"I heard that you just got back not to long ago."
"A few days actually."
"How has it been being back home?"
"It..s been interesting."
"How so?"
"I'm standing before you is what makes my return home interesting."
"pardon me?"
".. Viyada.. .. I didn't expect to come face to face with you so suddenly.."
"So suddenly? You speak as though something has happened from the time you left."
".. you mean you don't consider it suddenly to see me before you?"
"No not in the least bit; It's been a decade since we last saw each other; I only remember when we were in grade school together." Viyada said hesitantly. She knew that there was a hidden reality to her remark, but she couldn't bare bring it out. Her confession of love to him. She remembered the day that he left she was on her way to the train station to confess her love for him, but she was stopped by family obligations. Now she was standing before him she was literally speechless.
".... Viyada.. h.. how can you .. "
"Mon Ka? Is that you?" The two heard a voice ask. Monthai turned to see Maenward standing behind him.
"Ward..."
"... I thought I spotted you from the steps; who are you talking to?" Ward asked with a smile.
"I was talking to Khun V.." Monthai stopped as he turned to see that Viyada was no longer standing right there. "Nevermind." He said abruptly.
"Ok, let's go inside." Maenward said grabbing onto Monthai's arms.
Chapter 7: Wiparwarn
Wiparwarn sat in bedroom nervous and annoyed. She really didn't want this party, but her parents insisted that she must. She already had someone in her heart, but her parents couldn't come to accept him. What was she to do? She looked to her older sister Viyada for help.
"P' Vi, what should I do? I don' t want this party."
"Par, don't worry ok? I'm sure Nucha will be present at this party. I've already made my point to pass the message to Lukkana Mahatada."
"But what if father doesn't approve him being here?"
"Par calm down ok? Everything will be fine. Don't you trust me?"
"Of course I trust you P' Vi, but.."
"But nothing little sister, now hurry and finish getting dressed. The guests are starting to arrive." Viyada said walking out of her sister's bedroom. Pah stood up and looked at herself in the mirror. She had pretty much already finish getting dressed. She spent the next few minutes pacing back and forth in her bedroom thinking of a way to escape this expectation of society. She concluded that the only way is to quickly move through the night so she wouldn't be embarrassing her family and tainting their name. She only hoped that the person whom her father chooses is Anucha.
"Nucha; Par Ruk Noot Na (I love you Noot)" Pah mumbled under her breath as she walked out of her bedroom. As she was about to make her way down the steps she was stopped by Bpeeyachat.
"P' Par; done getting dressed already?"
"Ja," responded Par.
"Ok, I'll walk down with you." Bpeeyachat said walking along side Par. As they were walking down the steps the commotion in the ballroom suddenly muted. Par noticed that everyone had their attention up at her. Bpeeyachat was also nervous as she was standing beside her elder sister. Nucha, Lukkana, and Monthai had just arrived. They noticed everyone's head turned towards the step so they mimic the crowed and noticed Par and Bpeeyachat coming down the steps. Nucha couldn't be more taken back by Par. She was beautiful. Her hair was tied up in a bun, her dress was a baby pink evening gown with a small split at the chest, a white ribbon wrapped her waist. She was no longer "Dek Par (Kid Par)" The young girl he use to tease and make fun of she was "Wiparwarn" a beautiful swan. He let his eyes fix themselves on her just as everyone else did. As Everyone fixed their attention on Par, Monthai's gaze fixed itself on Bpeeyachat the woman that he once loved so dearly. The woman that his heart had a hard time letting go, a memory that cannot for the life of him be erased. She was standing right there; his mind told him that she was just a woman... but his heart told him that it was his chance to confront her and find out why. Why it was that she had broken his heart so dearly. She was wearing a navy blue evening gown with a simple locket her hair was just the way that it was when he first saw her at the train station a ponytail of curls laying on her left shoulder.
"Bpeeyachat." he mumbled under his breath. As he starred at her he felt himself nearly fly out the door when a force struck him against the chest. He looked down and noticed a young woman had fallen against him. He turned to help her up
"I'm so sorry." the young woman apologized. Both were already standing by the door where Monthai had lost his dear sister and brother.
"It's ok, are you alright?" Monthai asked helping her up.
"Yes thank you I'm fine." She said looking up. Monthai couldn't have been more shocked to see Viyada standing before him. His mind completely went blank and erased Bpeeyachat; as he looked down into Viyada's eyes. She was in his arms from her near fall. Viyada fixed her gaze into his eyes. She couldn't believe that Monthai Mahatada was standing before her eyes. She quickly regain her balance and stand up tall.
"..Viyada." Monthai said in a low tone. He was stunned by her beauty. She was so different the last time they had seen each other over a decade ago. She appeared so elegant.
"Khun Monthai...." Viyada responded.
"... h... h..how are you?" he manage to let out
"I've been great and yourself?"
"I... I've been good."
"I heard that you just got back not to long ago."
"A few days actually."
"How has it been being back home?"
"It..s been interesting."
"How so?"
"I'm standing before you is what makes my return home interesting."
"pardon me?"
".. Viyada.. .. I didn't expect to come face to face with you so suddenly.."
"So suddenly? You speak as though something has happened from the time you left."
".. you mean you don't consider it suddenly to see me before you?"
"No not in the least bit; It's been a decade since we last saw each other; I only remember when we were in grade school together." Viyada said hesitantly. She knew that there was a hidden reality to her remark, but she couldn't bare bring it out. Her confession of love to him. She remembered the day that he left she was on her way to the train station to confess her love for him, but she was stopped by family obligations. Now she was standing before him she was literally speechless.
".... Viyada.. h.. how can you .. "
"Mon Ka? Is that you?" The two heard a voice ask. Monthai turned to see Maenward standing behind him.
"Ward..."
"... I thought I spotted you from the steps; who are you talking to?" Ward asked with a smile.
"I was talking to Khun V.." Monthai stopped as he turned to see that Viyada was no longer standing right there. "Nevermind." He said abruptly.
"Ok, let's go inside." Maenward said grabbing onto Monthai's arms.
KhoOnxNouxWanxJai
Staff member
it seems like everyone is forgetting their relationship with Monthai :loool:
tastesweetlove
sarNie Granny
wow..you updated a lot...i'm going to read them after i go to sleep....but i'm happy^^
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
lol...monthai is stunned by every women's beauty!
KhoOnxNouxWanxJai
Staff member
Chapter 8: Casualties of Love
The crowd disperse amongst each other once Wiparwarn and Bpeeyachat make it to the bottom of the steps. Pah anxiously looks around hoping to see Anucha there. Weit observing his daughter's behaviour quickly went to pull Bpeeyachat aside.
"Look Bpee."
"Ka Khun Por? (Yes father)"
"I want you to make sure if Anucha is here that he goes no where near your sister."
"... why father?"
"don't ask any questions Bpeeyachat, you must follow my order."
"Yes father." she said as she turned to walk back towards her sister. Weit quickly smiled and turned to a guest that was approaching with his wife.
"What did father want Bpee?"
"nothing P' Pah he just wants me to take good care of you."
"Are you sure."
"Absolutely."
"Bpee ja, help me look and see if you can spot Anucha."
"... k..ka?"
"I know Anucha is here. I want to speak to him."
"P.. P' Pah.. ka, are you hungry? maybe we can get something to eat."
"No thank you. I rather find Nucha." Wiparwarn said persistently. Bpeeyachat grew worried and felt awkward. She had always adored Anucha. He was a great friend and nothing stopped Bpee from believing that Nucha was a great match for her dear sister, but what can she do when her father disapproves. Bpeeyachat spotted Nucha and quickly made sure that she was in her sisters view. She couldn't let Pah see Nucha or else there would definitely be a big scene.
"Bpeeyachat... so? Do you see Nucha?" Pah asked continously.
"No, not at all Ka, P'Pah." Bpeeyachat answered back everytime Pah asked.
Meanwhile In Another part of the ballroom[/color]
"Mon Ka, are you hungry?" Maenward asked concerned.
"Not at all..." Monthai said in uneasiness. Across the ballroom he see's Bpeeyachat standing right before his eyes. He had the chance to approach her and ask her why she did what she did to him, but he couldn't let Maenward see that his feelings were still affected by Bpeeyachat. This will hurt her. He was definite in his decision to cherish Maenward and not allow her to feel the heartbreak that he felt.
"Khun Mom Ka, .. Is something wrong? You look a bit dazed.." Maenward asked again. Monthai looked down at her and gave her a slim smile.
"Not at all my dear, now let's dance shall we? We've been here for quite sometime now and have yet to dance."
"I would be pleased." Maenward said handing Monthai her hand. Viyada watch the pair step onto the dance floor and her heart shattered. She was hurt that the man she loved had found love in someone that was not her. What hurt her even more is the fact that out of all the women in the world it had to be Maenward. Viyada closed her eyes and turned to leave the ballroom. Just as she was about to leave she was stopped by a voice she had just became familiar with not to long ago.
"Khun Viyada Krup." said the voice from behind her. Viyada turned and smiled to see Tardsapong there. "Going somewhere?"
"No, not at all. I was just going to see if things were organized and going fine."
"A big job for a woman your size."
"Surely you don't really believe so. In this day and age women have been known to possess more power than men."
"Not in the slightest. I believe very much in a woman's mind and her ability to skillfully play games with a man's heart."
"It's hardly believable that a woman would manipulate a man the way that men are known to manipulate women."
"That is because Ms. Viyada you are a subtle and naive young woman."
"You believe so?"
"Yes in a matter of fact I do believe so." Tardsapong said with a grim smirk. "Ms. Viyada ... how would you feel if I invited you out of the ballroom for a little bit to get some air."
"I would be delighted." Viyada said leaving the ballroom with Tardsapong. Viyada was slowly starting to adore Tardsapong and his witty remarks. Tardsapong himself was beginning to like Viyada, but not enough to take her serious. To Tardsapong all women were a game. A game that he was ready to play and conquer.
Monthai watched as Viyada left the ballroom with another man. His heart ached painfully as he saw Viyada leaving the ballroom with someone that wasn't him. He started to question himself in his head what is it that he really wanted and what is it that he really felt. He was pining over Bpeeyachat, but being hurt by Viyada's action. The woman in front of him wasn't enough to stop him from thinking of other women?
Outside the ballroom On The Gazebo
Bpeeyachat stood there starring at the moon there was something about it that made her unable to let go of the attached stare she had. As she starred at the moon her lips began to unearth a small smile. She liked being outside where the air was fresh and peaceful more than being in the ballroom where wealthy people competed with one another in their estates and fortune.
"Nong P' Bee.." She heard a voice say from behind. She turned around to see Pong In.
"P' Pong In." She said a bit shocked.
".. What are you doing out here all alone?"
"I just needed some fresh air." Bpeeyachat said walking to go back into the ballroom. Before she could love the gazebo she was standing in she felt Pong In's arms wrap around her. Bpeeyachat was stunned and couldn't move.
"... P' Pong In what are you doing.. let go.. please before someone comes and see." Bpeeyachat said as she tried to pull Pong In arm's off her.
"Nong Bpee.. why can't we be together? I love you, I love you, I love you." he said holding her tighter. Bpeeyachat had no choice but to slap him.
"P' Pong In...Get over me.. we're through. We can never be together our families are enemies. You and I are from two different worlds. We will never be able to be together. Let me go." Bpeeyachat said backing out of the gazebo.As she nearly made her way off the gazebo Pong In grabbed her again and began kissing her and hugging her. Bpeeyachat struggled to her hearts content and managed to push him off her and land another painful yet awakening slap across his face.
"... Nong Bpee.. P' Kor.."
"Don't say anything P' Pong In. Remember we're over... we can never be together .. never .. never.. never.. we will never match in status or social class.. You need to move on... Get out of my life.. " Bpeeyachat screamed lightly. She took one final look at him and ran off the gazebo. Pong In fell to his knees in tears. Bpeeyachat had changed. She no longer loved him nor cared anything for him. As Pong In cried Monthai who had stepped out of the ballroom to get some fresh air and hoped to find Viyada stood watching. Monthai had seen and heard everything that had happened. He boiled up inside. Now he knew why Bpeeyachat let him go. She had a relationship with someone else. She was with someone else, and never bothered to tell him instead she went silent and left him with not even a goodbye letter. He boiled up inside seeing her hurt Pong In over something like social class. A part of him began to resent and hate her. The many men that he has seen her with. The one man he saw her with at the train station hugging as he got home, and now Pong In. How many more hearts will she break before she is happy.
Inside The Hotel
Viyada and Tardsapong found themselves walking along the hotel hallway instead of outside getting fresh air. Viyada had followed Tardsapong up to the hotel room insistingly. She knew what Tardsapong was thinking yet she let herself get involved emotionally.
KhoOnxNouxWanxJai
Staff member
Writing more -.O Lol thought I had to post that to make some curious ^__^ LOL
lady0fdarkness
Professional Lakorn Watcher
Hmmmmmmmmmm........... who is Monthai after? He flips flops a lot this guy...
update more please.. I want to see what's this leading to.
update more please.. I want to see what's this leading to.