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*Everyone this is not my first ff, but it is my first ff that I wrote and will post it online; so I guess it my first ff???. I sense there must be a lot of critiques, but it's fine because it help me improve. So feel free to jot down any comment/s on what you like and not like, and if anyone have any advice/ideas on how I should continue the story please comment as well. And writing this should be a great way to advance my grammars; plus I didn't really edited it yet. Thank you! ^^
..........I'M QUITE NERVOUSSSSS.
P.S. Maybe the story line is somewhat very common, but bare with it; I'm new, so I don't have a lot of ideas.
Bieluvr, why are you sooooo creative?!
Stubbornness Love
Starring ; Mteam
Mark Prin as Mark
Mint Chalida as Mint
Mai Davika as Mai ( Marks Sister )
Dome Pakorn as Dome ( Mints Cousin )
Eye Kamolned (Engaged with Great)
Great Warintorn (Engaged with Eye)
Mark Suparat ; Mark is like any typical billionaire rich guy. He drives sports car, Uses money as if it's not important, and play with women's heart; playboy. He had never receive any love from his parent ; his mother died when he was three. And his father is very much towards business, giving his children very little attention, though he does love and care for them very much. He tends to act/be annoying towards people he love, but is very stubborn to accept things that other people assume it's right. he Even though hes a playboy and is mean and harsh, but sometime he can be very emotional if he saw someone getting embraced from their parents; jealous. Mark have never taken care of anyone before, but when he forced himself into it, he didn't know that it will change his future.
Mint Vijiwong ; Mint grew up strong, diligent, tomboyish, and bold cause shes closer to her father more than her mother. Besides her dad loving her, she also had an aunt and maid that love her. She views them as mothers. Because of them she don't usually think about her real mother. And she have a childish attitude towards her family and the one she loves. Mints mother left to America when Mints nearly five because her mother hated the life of business, so she abandoned Mint with her dad; her mom wanted to achieve her dream, but when she failed to, she came back to Thailand and apologized to her husband and her only daughter. Mint knows how to fight and is always the one started problem; when necessary, but deep inside she is very soft and lovable and kind-hearted; she would help the poor with Dome. She is the type that doesn't give up and is also stubborn like Mark. Mint's father is business partner with Marks father. Mint is much protected over herself, body, and even her first kiss, but when that incident happens, it brings her to an unknown future and revenge.
Mai Suparat ; Mai is the only girl in her family, but she received love from her grandma when her dad is stuck in business. Shes very girly, but can protect herself due to having a brother that teaches her fighting lessons. Since, Mark never cared about their dad's business, Mai strongly took care of the business herself when their dad is busy elsewhere. She has never loose to anyone before, and cant stand when she looses, until one day a person came into her life teaching her all sorts of things that would change the way she view things. Oh and she acted all hi-so.well, because she is from a rich family.
Dome Pakorn ; Dome is the type of guy that dont like high people acting up on poor people. Hes very generous, but can be very teasy at times 'cause he's friend with nosy and loud people. Though, he is rich, but denied, and used money to help the poor. He met Mai when theres a contest at school to see who has the best idea to use a free land. Because of Mais attitude he wanted to teach her a lesson and change the way she think.
Great and Eye ; Great and Eye are engaged, and they are going to marry soon. They are also Mark best friends. They understand Mark everything, and are willing to help him 'cause they're his loving friends since grade school. Though they're friend with Mark, they know their manner. They work as photographer and have their own studio.
Taew; Mais best friend; Sorry Taews fan. I made her a minor character. I dont really have parts for her because I decided not to book her as one of the main character, but if I get chance in the future, I will definitely have her as the main. ^^
Scene 1
DING!!!! DING!!! DONG! DONG!!!!!
Mint; Oh! Stop that noise somebody?! Its not even morning yet.
As the maid, Palee, came inside and shut down the alarm, she opened the big and silky window curtain bringing the light shining to Mints eyes.
Palee; NMint open your eyes to see the shining light from the sun, so you will know it is morning already. And didn't you promised to Dome you will go help him today for the charity?
Mint; (Tired, she covered her body from head to toe with a big and furry blanket) for what reason Palee? I didn't promise him anything.
Palee; Really? Yesterday I remembered you gave your words to him that you will go.
Lost in memory she tries to think back and.
Mint; Jing jing aw! I totally forgot!
As Mint rushed to the bathroom and cleaned her body and combed her hair as fast as she could. She went into her gigantic closet.
Mint; Lets see what should I wear to the giveaway. Something comfortable? Ahh! There.
As she took out a long plain white sleeves, dungarees, plain black converse
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After she dressed up she went downstairs and saw her aunt.
M'aunt; Oh ho! Mint this is the giveaway charity to the poor, I think you should wear something suitable for your gender?
Mint; Pa, I know it's for the poor that's why I'm wearing something that would match them, so they don't feel that I'm there to show off my rich clothes
M'aunt; Nang na see. You're so young, but thoughtful. As worthy as being my daughter.
As Mint wrapped her arm around her aunt to give her her thankfulness, and her aunt answered with a soft smile.
Mint; Chai ka. I have to be thoughtful, since you're always there advising me.
The phone rang and Palee answered.
Palee; N'Mint K'Dome told you to go there by yourself, since you're late and he is hurrying too.
Mint; Where is the Som (the driver)? Tell him to take me there?
Palee; Som took with your dad to the conference, and it will be late night till they come home.
Mint; Ow, then who will take me? I just got my permit and I don't know how to drive! What should I do Palee?
Palee&M'aunt; Go find a taxi.
Mint; NO!, P'Dome would just prank me for having a permit, but don't know anything at all! It would be embarrassing if he exposed me to his friends, since they all know how to drive, even if they only got their permit!
M'aunt; Then what should you do? Give up?
Mint; I can't give up. I will have to try my new car anyway, right?
Palee; Chai, but it is too dangerous N'Mint.
Mint; It may be dangerous, but better than P'Dome's friends laughing at me.
Flashback;
At Mint's highschool; Super Athlete High School
Mint; P'Dome I got a bike! But there's a problem.
Dome; What could be the problem for such a diligent and feisty girl like you?
Mint; I don't....
As Dome's friends came over to them laughing and chatting.
Dome; Hey be quiet my sister have something to tell me.
Mint; Well.....well......tell your friends to go away first? ( She wanted to tell them, but the thing is that they can't keep a secret and are always so loud )
D'friends; What's the matter Mint? Afraid to tell us? Haha
Mint; No, it's just that I got a new bike, but..........
As she squeezed her eyes and whisper
Mint; I don't know how to ride a bike.
Dome and his friends; WHAT!
Dome's friends started laughing and saying "You're sixteen years old and don't know how to ride a bike! Hahaha, You're such a kid" Dome joined them.
Dome; Jing law Mint! You don't know how to ride a bike?! ( As he let out a loud laugh )
Mint; Ni, stop laughing it's embarrassing. Look, everyone in the cafeteria is staring at ME and...us!
They laughed so loud that Mint started to yelled at them, and they finally calmed down. Angry and frustrated Mint ran to the bathroom. When she returned everyone was laughing and looking at her . The worst thing is that her school is an athletic school. And biking is a common thing people know how to do. To Mint this is the most embarrassing moment that happened to her at her school.
End of flashback
Mint; Ugh!!! I will never forgive them. But now I will show them, that I'm not a kid!
M'aunt; Raw?
Mint; They will see. ( As Mint gave a "You-will-see" expression )
*I know the first scene contains no MTEAM's scene, but I HOPE HOPE HOPE you at least enjoy it, if not a lot, but a little will be fine ^^
*This will be a perfect poster because there will be M&M scene/s that takes place in the ocean/beach! AND IT'S BLUE!!!!!
..........I'M QUITE NERVOUSSSSS.
P.S. Maybe the story line is somewhat very common, but bare with it; I'm new, so I don't have a lot of ideas.
Bieluvr, why are you sooooo creative?!
Stubbornness Love
Starring ; Mteam
Mark Prin as Mark
Mint Chalida as Mint
Mai Davika as Mai ( Marks Sister )
Dome Pakorn as Dome ( Mints Cousin )
Eye Kamolned (Engaged with Great)
Great Warintorn (Engaged with Eye)
Mark Suparat ; Mark is like any typical billionaire rich guy. He drives sports car, Uses money as if it's not important, and play with women's heart; playboy. He had never receive any love from his parent ; his mother died when he was three. And his father is very much towards business, giving his children very little attention, though he does love and care for them very much. He tends to act/be annoying towards people he love, but is very stubborn to accept things that other people assume it's right. he Even though hes a playboy and is mean and harsh, but sometime he can be very emotional if he saw someone getting embraced from their parents; jealous. Mark have never taken care of anyone before, but when he forced himself into it, he didn't know that it will change his future.
Mint Vijiwong ; Mint grew up strong, diligent, tomboyish, and bold cause shes closer to her father more than her mother. Besides her dad loving her, she also had an aunt and maid that love her. She views them as mothers. Because of them she don't usually think about her real mother. And she have a childish attitude towards her family and the one she loves. Mints mother left to America when Mints nearly five because her mother hated the life of business, so she abandoned Mint with her dad; her mom wanted to achieve her dream, but when she failed to, she came back to Thailand and apologized to her husband and her only daughter. Mint knows how to fight and is always the one started problem; when necessary, but deep inside she is very soft and lovable and kind-hearted; she would help the poor with Dome. She is the type that doesn't give up and is also stubborn like Mark. Mint's father is business partner with Marks father. Mint is much protected over herself, body, and even her first kiss, but when that incident happens, it brings her to an unknown future and revenge.
Mai Suparat ; Mai is the only girl in her family, but she received love from her grandma when her dad is stuck in business. Shes very girly, but can protect herself due to having a brother that teaches her fighting lessons. Since, Mark never cared about their dad's business, Mai strongly took care of the business herself when their dad is busy elsewhere. She has never loose to anyone before, and cant stand when she looses, until one day a person came into her life teaching her all sorts of things that would change the way she view things. Oh and she acted all hi-so.well, because she is from a rich family.
Dome Pakorn ; Dome is the type of guy that dont like high people acting up on poor people. Hes very generous, but can be very teasy at times 'cause he's friend with nosy and loud people. Though, he is rich, but denied, and used money to help the poor. He met Mai when theres a contest at school to see who has the best idea to use a free land. Because of Mais attitude he wanted to teach her a lesson and change the way she think.
Great and Eye ; Great and Eye are engaged, and they are going to marry soon. They are also Mark best friends. They understand Mark everything, and are willing to help him 'cause they're his loving friends since grade school. Though they're friend with Mark, they know their manner. They work as photographer and have their own studio.
Taew; Mais best friend; Sorry Taews fan. I made her a minor character. I dont really have parts for her because I decided not to book her as one of the main character, but if I get chance in the future, I will definitely have her as the main. ^^
Scene 1
DING!!!! DING!!! DONG! DONG!!!!!
Mint; Oh! Stop that noise somebody?! Its not even morning yet.
As the maid, Palee, came inside and shut down the alarm, she opened the big and silky window curtain bringing the light shining to Mints eyes.
Palee; NMint open your eyes to see the shining light from the sun, so you will know it is morning already. And didn't you promised to Dome you will go help him today for the charity?
Mint; (Tired, she covered her body from head to toe with a big and furry blanket) for what reason Palee? I didn't promise him anything.
Palee; Really? Yesterday I remembered you gave your words to him that you will go.
Lost in memory she tries to think back and.
Mint; Jing jing aw! I totally forgot!
As Mint rushed to the bathroom and cleaned her body and combed her hair as fast as she could. She went into her gigantic closet.
Mint; Lets see what should I wear to the giveaway. Something comfortable? Ahh! There.
As she took out a long plain white sleeves, dungarees, plain black converse
---------------------------------------------
After she dressed up she went downstairs and saw her aunt.
M'aunt; Oh ho! Mint this is the giveaway charity to the poor, I think you should wear something suitable for your gender?
Mint; Pa, I know it's for the poor that's why I'm wearing something that would match them, so they don't feel that I'm there to show off my rich clothes
M'aunt; Nang na see. You're so young, but thoughtful. As worthy as being my daughter.
As Mint wrapped her arm around her aunt to give her her thankfulness, and her aunt answered with a soft smile.
Mint; Chai ka. I have to be thoughtful, since you're always there advising me.
The phone rang and Palee answered.
Palee; N'Mint K'Dome told you to go there by yourself, since you're late and he is hurrying too.
Mint; Where is the Som (the driver)? Tell him to take me there?
Palee; Som took with your dad to the conference, and it will be late night till they come home.
Mint; Ow, then who will take me? I just got my permit and I don't know how to drive! What should I do Palee?
Palee&M'aunt; Go find a taxi.
Mint; NO!, P'Dome would just prank me for having a permit, but don't know anything at all! It would be embarrassing if he exposed me to his friends, since they all know how to drive, even if they only got their permit!
M'aunt; Then what should you do? Give up?
Mint; I can't give up. I will have to try my new car anyway, right?
Palee; Chai, but it is too dangerous N'Mint.
Mint; It may be dangerous, but better than P'Dome's friends laughing at me.
Flashback;
At Mint's highschool; Super Athlete High School
Mint; P'Dome I got a bike! But there's a problem.
Dome; What could be the problem for such a diligent and feisty girl like you?
Mint; I don't....
As Dome's friends came over to them laughing and chatting.
Dome; Hey be quiet my sister have something to tell me.
Mint; Well.....well......tell your friends to go away first? ( She wanted to tell them, but the thing is that they can't keep a secret and are always so loud )
D'friends; What's the matter Mint? Afraid to tell us? Haha
Mint; No, it's just that I got a new bike, but..........
As she squeezed her eyes and whisper
Mint; I don't know how to ride a bike.
Dome and his friends; WHAT!
Dome's friends started laughing and saying "You're sixteen years old and don't know how to ride a bike! Hahaha, You're such a kid" Dome joined them.
Dome; Jing law Mint! You don't know how to ride a bike?! ( As he let out a loud laugh )
Mint; Ni, stop laughing it's embarrassing. Look, everyone in the cafeteria is staring at ME and...us!
They laughed so loud that Mint started to yelled at them, and they finally calmed down. Angry and frustrated Mint ran to the bathroom. When she returned everyone was laughing and looking at her . The worst thing is that her school is an athletic school. And biking is a common thing people know how to do. To Mint this is the most embarrassing moment that happened to her at her school.
End of flashback
Mint; Ugh!!! I will never forgive them. But now I will show them, that I'm not a kid!
M'aunt; Raw?
Mint; They will see. ( As Mint gave a "You-will-see" expression )
*I know the first scene contains no MTEAM's scene, but I HOPE HOPE HOPE you at least enjoy it, if not a lot, but a little will be fine ^^
*This will be a perfect poster because there will be M&M scene/s that takes place in the ocean/beach! AND IT'S BLUE!!!!!
you're doing great! Can't wait to read more!!
